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Post by Firebrand on Mar 26, 2019 13:45:40 GMT
I don't actually know a lot about MLP, so I'm only tangentially interested in this in the sense that it's a Manic run. All I really know about it are that Twilight and Rainbow exist, along with the pink one, and those only through pop culture and memes, so I can't really comment on the run as a crossover.
But as far as territory I'm familiar with, we're back in Emerald! At first I was thinking maybe we'd see some references to Manic's previous run through Hoenn, a cameo appearance by Gustav or whatever, but after the first couple chapters, that didn't seem likely. Looks like Manic reset to a novice trainer, but maybe that will change as the run goes on. Then Penelope showed up this time and made a few cryptic comments, and I'm wondering if she's a reincarnated friend from a past run. Doubtful she's one of the human souls from Infernal Red, so I was thinking maybe Calima or Hope. She kind of talks like Calima did, but maybe that's just because she's a stock cryptic type. I can't tell if that last line is a reference to the original Nuzlocke (which I only know about in broad strokes) or a straight-up LOST reference, since it sounds like it could go either way.
The conceit of having the ponies as eeveelutions is nice, keeps them recognizable even for someone like me who has next to no knowledge of the source material. But the rules make it sound like there's going to be 6 of them, and as of Gen III there's only five eeveelutions, so is one going to be trapped as an Eevee? Hopefully they get a sweet power to compensate for it.
From a narrative standpoint, I'm trying not to form too strong opinions on Manic's party, since as more and more "main characters" get introduced, the current team will increasingly become box fodder (even if we likely won't have the full team of six ponies until much later), and even moreso because of the sacrifice rule. No sense getting attached to Reggie or Penelope or whoever if they're just going to vanish as soon as one of the main cast bites it.
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Post by Manic on Mar 27, 2019 6:16:14 GMT
Firebrand : You'll see. There will be reasons to be invested in the others as time goes on; while we WILL get the main six in time, it's not a very fast process. That said, they are the focus of the run, so there will eventually be a time when they are the team...with an exception that will come later. ...spoiler spoiler spoiler. I can't say too much without ruining it, but stay tuned.
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Post by Manic on Mar 27, 2019 6:27:02 GMT
Update #8: Speak Up
I think we might be ready for the gym. Come on, let's take 'em down! Hang on, ladies. Huh? Why? You're not locals. You don't know. Wattson runs a clean ship, but he fights dirty. He's part of what we locally call the 'Grinder'. The 'Grinder'? What's a grinder? A series of gyms in the middle of the league challenge meant to thin out the competition. A trio of gym leaders with reasonably-leveled - but deceptively strong - pokémon. Wattson is the first. Electricity is only one of his best weapons. Flannery goes for sheer power. Even water types get overwhelmed. And the last one is a recent replacement. My father. Ridiculously powerful, with only one weakness...for which he accounts very capably. We keep training, for now.
A modest upgrade over Confusion. You're confusing enough as it is, pal. How do you mean? A clean freak Dustox? Don't sweat it, Reggie. You're fine as you are. Part of having friends is about accepting them for who they are. We accept you, Reggie. I...well...thanks, Twilight.
Hey, that's right. This thing finally sees some use! Interesting. I'll see what I can do for you. You don't already know? Not all things are known to me, Twilight Sparkle, and details are blurry at times. So you are a sham! No, Rainbow Dash. As I have said, I am here to learn, observe, and guide...but finer details may be too small to see.
I have tried not to question your decisions, Manic...but this one eludes me. The accuracy on that attack is terrible! Two eggheads? Hey! Watch it, stinkbomb. Ohhhh, I get it! A good attack isn't so good if it doesn't land. And with only 85% accuracy, it could miss at a crucial moment! At least I know you're paying attention. Yeah, um...about that. Hey, Penelope? Yes, Manic?
Sorry about this. Quite all right. Really? Well, you did just give her a good attack. Better you than me! Yeah, or me!
Now we're ready. Let's kick butt and take names! No, Rainbow. I know you're tough, but Wattson is the first of the Grinder Trio, and he's electric-themed. I will stand back as well. So, what are we doing? Twilight. It'll be all right, Manic. I won't let you down. If you need to switch out, I need you to say so, okay? Whatever happens, you've been a good friend. You too. You all have. Now come on, let's face him.
*deep breath* Wattson of the Mauville Gym, I challenge you to a match. Kid, you're shaking in your shorts! This doesn't look good. Maybe we oughtta grind some more. I can't watch! Come on, Manic. You can take him! Right? You're right, Rainbow. Yeah. I can handle this. HA! You'd be stupid not to be scared, but standing up to it takes courage! I like you. Wait...you're Norman's kid, huh? Yeah...but don't go easy on me, okay? Are you kidding? I'm gonna be even tougher on you! Need to see if you can measure up to your old man. Now let's go!
Let's start this one off with a bang! TWILIGHT! MANIC!
Huh? That...but he...and you... Your confidence is simultaneously one of your greatest strengths and greatest weaknesses, Manic. Learn to trust in your friends. I...words fail me. You don't even resist that! That wasn't so bad. What's next? I...buh...you...how... Never underestimate the power of forethought and planning!
(The rest of the gym was pretty much just Twilight sweeping.)
(Except when Gordon stepped in.)
Kid, you are scary-strong! Not just me, Wattson. My friends here are the real reason we won. You mean your pokémon? Same thing. Credit where credit is due. I like it. Yea-hah! Way to go! Woo! We actually beat Wattson, and nobody fainted! Yay... Did you hear that? I know that yay!
FLUTTERSHY! Oh...Twilight...is that you? I'm so happy to see you! Hah! Nice 'do! ...Rainbow...? Does that mean the others are here too? No, we haven't found them yet. What are you doing here?
I'm...sort of electrical now...Mr. Wattson needed my help with his New Mauville project... Hey, Wattson. Would it be all right if Go ahead, go ahead! I can see they know each other. Thank you for all your help, Fluttershy. Oh, um...you're very welcome...Mr. Wattson...you're sure it's all right? Yes, yes. Go find the rest of your friends! I'll be fine. Hello there. EEP! It's all right! This is Manic, he's helping us find everyone else. Yeah, he's good! You should've seen him whup Brawly! I, I, um, I... It's all right. I promise I'll keep you and your friends safe, and help you find the others, okay? Don't be afraid. Oh...well, I...okay...it's very nice to meet you. I feel the same. Now, shall we go? I think I'm seeing a pattern, and I bet I know where to find your next friend.
N-not in here...I hope? No, but we're going to need to keep progressing, and part of that means getting through here. Gordon? I got it. Oh, right. Hey, cute stuff. I'm Chester, and that's Gordon. The creepy girl is Penelope, and I guess Reggie headed back to the box for some R&R. Oh, it's...it's very nice to meet you all...
Very nice indeed. Strength. 80 power. No additional effects. May be used to move boulders. EEP! W-what was that? Oh yeah! I forgot. Everybody got something cool when they came through. Twilight somehow knows stuff about this world. I grow stronger faster than everybody else. What about you, what's your power? Oh, um...I don't...think I have one. Perhaps the opportunity simply hasn't presented itself yet. Sure, whatever. Pass me that disc, willya? Yeah, here you go.
GorGot it....don. That looks kinda fun. Between you and me? It really is. Maybe I oughtta try it out. I don't think so...as an attack, it's sort of weak. Meh, spoilsport. Hmm, fork in the road. Let's go east. The desert sands say otherwise. Okay, west then. Nothing, hmm? Say what? Oh, hey!
Sahara, huh? Nice name. Yeah, it's pretty hot! HAHAHAHA... Ever think about doing comedy full-time? You think I'm that good, huh? No. Mmmmaybe keep working on it? Admit it. You secretly hate us. Well, I thought it was funny...
Ugh. Why are we going through this thing again? Because Fallarbor is through this way. I'm going back in the pokéball. It's cool, I'll get us through here, easy as pie. Ohhh, you just had to say pie, didn't you. Apple pie...
Manic, wasn't there someone back in Slateport who wanted to see us when we got this? He'll wait. But he said... Back through the tunnel, past the rocks, through Mauville, down the bicycling road, practically halfway across Hoenn. Just to see what one guy says. I see your point. Let's just find him later! Penelope? What do you think? I think that you can save yourself a trip by continuing onward. How do you do that? Keep saying things without ever actually saying anything? A natural gift, I suppose.
Oh, thank goodness. At last! Goodnight! Wow, she's out like a light. Most of them are. I'm glad, though. This gives us the chance to talk. Huh? C'mon outside, let's chat. Penelope is meditating anyway.
Chester. I need you to lay off the girls. Why? You jealous? Listen...Twilight and Rainbow can handle it, but Fluttershy is delicate. She's scared, and you're making it worse. Fine, whatever. Look, I have to ask. Why do you keep doing that? ...promise not to tell the others. I promise. I never really had a mom. She dumped me on my dad after I was born. The old man kept trying to find someone else, but they never went for it. He kicked me out as soon as I could find my own food. Wow. I...I don't know what to say, Chester. That's terrible. I dunno. Maybe I just wanna find someone who likes me, y'know? Well, mission accomplished. Haven't you noticed? Even when the others tease you, it's all in good fun. If they didn't like you, they wouldn't talk to you. You think so? Really? No doubt in my mind. C'mon, let's go get some sleep.
Pssst. PSSSSST. Wha...Rainbow, we're all trying to get some sleep! Hmm...wha? Hey. We're already halfway done, why don't we take off and find everyone else? We can't do that! We don't even know this world. C'mon, you've seen how powerful we are. Nobody would stand a chance! And how did we get this way? Pffft. We've always been fine without a trainer before. Really! So, what move will you learn next? I dunno, but I bet it's awesome. *sigh What do you think, Fluttershy? I think...I think we should stay. They need us. And...that Penelope girl... I think she knows something, too. So, it's settled. We stay. Fine. For now.
Wow, I think everyone needed that. Well-rested and ready to move on? Sure looks like it. Girls? S-sure... Ready and waiting! Yeah, okay. Certainly. Guys? Yeah, arright. Fully rejuvenated. Well then, we're out!
Fascinating! The proximity of the volcano is creating a near-constant fall of ash! *ptui* It's getting on everything...! Come on, everyone. Fallarbor is just on the other side of this dust field. We can get cleaned up there. Doesn't bother me a bit. Yeah, well, we're not all made of metal, y'know. Sucks to be you.
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Post by Manic on Mar 28, 2019 6:31:14 GMT
And so, there's Fluttershy the Jolteon.
Yes, her text is supposed to be smaller than others'. She's very soft-spoken.
And we come to learn a little more about Chester's past! Gotta wonder how that'll come into play later...
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Post by Manic on Mar 28, 2019 6:42:00 GMT
Update #9: Equal and Opposite
We should really head back after we get healed and see what we can catch. Any opportunity to improve our arsenal seems like a solid plan. Sure, what the hell.
These things are everywhere! Ah, yes. Spinda. They're amazingly populous, and amazingly unpopular. They kinda creep me out. I have to admit, something about them seems...off. I think I'll pass. No catch for this route. Why not catch a different one? Oh, he can't. Something about overcatching. We'll be fine, right girls? Oh, but...I'm sure it would be all right...
Oh, my. Is...is that a problem? You can catch this one, it's okay... No! I mean yes! Er... I think what Manic is trying to say is, we found your ability, and it's fantastic! Well, there's no guarantee, but still...UMPH! Quit raining on her parade. Let's just take another crack at this. It's true, we could get another dupe. Let's find out.
HUMMA... Whoooooah. COOL! It's a marvel of engineering! A Skarmory! Delightful. Fluttershy, I adore you.
Oh...I, um...well...you're welcome...? Chester. Do me a favor and help me catch it. Uh, y'know my attacks won't do so well. Exactly the point. Take it nice and easy, heal when you need to. *click* Nice, I got a Skarmory! That should prove very useful later on.
And that's how things went for a little while.
We found a nice man to make some useful items for us...
...learned some very useful new abilities...
...and met the lady who invented the box system! I wonder if she might have some advice on how to get home.
Still writing those boring letters, huh? Of course! Princess Celestia will want a full report when I get back. Hey, look. Twilight. Have ya ever considered, uh... Hmmm? What if you can't get home? Subtle like a Vig...oh. Right. Hey, no way I'm getting stuck like this forever! We have to find a way. Equestria needs us! There is always a way back. Manic has learned this, though he can not remember. What, me? It will come, in time.
Oh! Uh...thank you. Don't you want it, though? I've got dozens. I keep changing my mind on whether or not to join my brother. Right, but why give one to me? You're the first person to talk to me in weeks. I can relate, brother. What do you mean? We talk to you all the time. Let it go, Gordon. Yeah, you practically never shut up. Rainbow. Let it go. Hmph. What's got your flank in a twist? Hey, uh...thanks, man. Don't worry about it.
I didn't actually expect you to come! Why not? You told me to. Right, but most of the people in Fallarbor...well, nevermind them. Here, let me show you this ancient computer I managed to pick up at a sale! Isn't it retro? Sounds familiar, huh, Twilight? I don't understand. This doesn't...wait...it couldn't be! It's neat, but I really just wanted to drop in to say hello and thanks. Oh, you can't leave yet! You haven't seen my collection of old modems! Check this out, 2400 BPS! Nah, nevermind. She's not nearly that nerdy. She'd probably have fashion models too, not computers. Ever feel like they're speaking a different language? Only all the time.
I wonder how Meteor Falls got its name? I don't see waterfalls anywhere. I think meteors fall here with some regularity. But that doesn't make sense! Even allowing for a particularly dense pattern of showers, on a global scale, no particular location should experience an increased likelihood of activity. Unless...is this area over a pole? I'm sorry, I haven't a clue. It's weird how you know all sorts of stuff about US, but not about other things. I don't know about astronomy for the same reason you don't know about basket weaving, Rainbow Dash; it simply isn't relevant to my interests. It must be some other phenomenon. Now I'm really anxious to get there! There are tests to run, there's science to do!
...be revived and help keep this land prosperous, if my calculations are correct...oh? Who are you? Oh! Um, sorry. I didn't mean to eavesdrop. I'm Manic. Pleasure to meet you. I'm a member of Team Magma. Perhaps you've heard of us? I, uh...Chester? Gordon? Help me out, here? Sorry. These guys don't come around where I lived. Island, remember? Sorry, I don't really... It's all right. We're a scientific group committed to preserving the land's well-being. Hoenn's strange geography is a cause of some concern. You mean the desert next to the forest, or the volcano sandwiched between two towns? Your Umbreon seems to understand. At any rate, we're hoping that this Meteorite's energy will help to repair some of the damage inadvertently caused by Groudon. What's a 'Groudon'?
There you are! And there you are! Looks like there's gonna be a rumble! How has your research progressed? Well enough. Sorry Maxie isn't here to greet you himself. We've found a Meteorite. And how is yours? I'm afraid we're making little progress with water purification so far. Well, don't give up. We may be on opposing teams, but I wish you well. Oh, of course! And the same goes for you. We'll reach our goal first, of course. Hah! That's the spirit. At any rate, we need to report back to Maxie. Be well. And you...
Yeah, and you tried to take the parts from us! Everyone get ready. I don't know what he's going to do... I know, and I'm sorry. Slate's submarine puts off far too much water pollution for us to allow him to finish it. Unfortunately, I didn't realize how strong you were. ...but I sure didn't expect that! I'm confused. Aren't these the bad guys? I dunno. They're protecting the water, and that's good, right? What about the other team? I'm so confused...! I'm sorry, but I really do need to go. It was nice seeing you on better terms. Um, right...see you? I...don't know what to make of this. Let's just find our catch for this cave.
Chester! Oh, the poor thing! I'm sorry! That's my weakest attack! Next time, put me in. Hey, yeah! That Rock Smash thing you do! I can't believe I didn't think of that before! Unfortunate, but the loss of one Zubat is unlikely to hinder you greatly. I guess, but...ah, skip it.
I don't really know. I mean, they're a scientific group, right? How is this getting us any closer to finding the others? Rainbow, don't be impatient! Well, yes, but...the things they were talking about went right over my head. So, maybe they're very advanced. If you only do one thing, I bet you do it very well. I suppose so. I guess I should be going... So should we. I have a promise to keep. About time.
Thank Mew. Fresh air! I thought it was a nice cave... Yeah, but a cave is still a cave. Not huge on being cooped up. I don't have a problem with it. Well, of course you don't. Enough chatter, let's get a move on! Wait, doesn't this area seem familiar to anyone else? No, I'm pretty sure we've never been here before. Manic, wait! Don't jump off that le...
...I tried to warn you. What?! It's a big circle! If we have to go all that way again...! Don't underestimate your trainer. What's the deal? You don't remember Rusturf Tunnel? Rus...oh yeah! That's right! We have a path to cut right through the middle, thanks to Gordon. Just doing my job. Hmmm. Check out the side path, though.
Sure, I guess. Everybody spread out and look for some glasses, okay? Found them! Yay... Huh? Those aren't them. Nice, though. They kinda work for you, Twilight. Why not keep them? Sure, I guess so. They make you look cool! Wait...oh, man. Really? Look at his hair. Wow. Um, mister? I think they're on top of your head. Oh? Hah! I do that sometimes. Thanks. Well, that was a waste of time. Let's go. Agreed.
No matter how many times I do this, it's always fun! You do this a lot? In a way. Penelope, can't you please be clearer? I'm sorry, Twilight Sparkle. I truly wish I could, but I risk doing real damage if I'm too clear. Damage to what? I'm sorry. Just please trust that I have your best interests at heart. It is more important than you know that this mission succeed. Fair enough, I guess.
Wow, look at all of them! They're huddled in little groups...chatting? I think some of them are battling! Science nerds get kinda worked up sometimes. Hey! He's got your number, Twilight! They certainly seem...enthusiastic...
I'm terribly sorry, but I'm a bit busy doing some delicate scientific work. Are you Maxie? Why, yes. You've heard of me? One of your colleagues mentioned you when Archie showed up. I'm Manic. Ah, it's a pleasure to meet you. You've heard of our work, I trust? Sure, but what's this about using a Meteorite's energy? It's really quite fascinating. It's our hope to utilize an energy retrieval unit to harvest the meteorite's energy in order to revive Groudon, whose inherent geological prowess should enable Hoenn to stabilize its landmass. Are you here to help? Oh, this stuff is all far over my head, I'm afraid. Even I'm having trouble keeping up! A battle, then? Sure! That, I know.
You fight with a striking level of skill, Manic. You're not half-bad, yourself. For now, I'm afraid I've done all I can here. We need to retire to our headquarters if we're going to make more progress. Sorry, I didn't mean to hold you up. Not at all. Farewell for now.
Uh oh. Absent-minded scientists. That wasn't very professional of them. Yeah, because I don't know anybody who leaves their stuff lying around their treehouse... You have a treehouse? Cool! Oh, it's really more of a house inside a tree. But yes, Spike and I live there. Boyfriend? Assistant. Young dragon. Sweet, a little bumbling.
Whoah. Treacherous. Race you down it! N-no thank you...that looks very dangerous! Take it nice and easy, everyone. We don't want to get hurt! Gordon, would you like some assistance? I'd appreciate that, yes.
So that's what's on the other side of those ledges we saw. Wait, is that...?
It is! And a gym! D-do you think...one of the others is here...? Based on the pattern, I'd say there's a good chance. Well, two really isn't a pattern, but I see what you mean. What're we waiting for? Yeah, let's get in there and kick butt! We need more training. Grinder Trio, remember? Time to get to work, then.
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Post by Manic on Mar 28, 2019 6:44:34 GMT
Well, how do you like THOSE apples?
Fluttershy's power makes itself known, and it literally lets us break a rule of Nuzlocke. Occasionally.
Also, we encounter the villainous teams...sort of? Villainous? And...civil?
Also also, mind the foreshadowing...
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Post by Manic on Mar 30, 2019 12:54:18 GMT
Update #10: Funeral Pyre
Interesting. It seems vaguely dinosauric in shape. Uhm...Rainbow? *sigh* Yeah, yeah, I know. Fighting type. C'mere, you! I'm sorry...I wish I was more help. Fluttershy, you and Rainbow are the only ones in the group not weak to fighting attacks, and your defense is lower. Rainbow is perfectly suited to this. Do not fret, Fluttershy. You will be very useful in the coming fights.
Well, ain't that a slice! A slice of what? You know...Kimbo? Slice? Chester, what are you babbling about now? Man, we've gotta get you guys some culture, pronto. Uh, right. Let's just see how we do in the gym, okay? We've been grinding for a while.
What is it with this pla...OW! Rainbow! Are you okay? I can hardly see anything! Reminds me of Rusturf Tunnel, except for all the passages. How will you defeat this challenge? Um...I guess we try them all...? Actually, that sounds like a good idea. It does? Sure. We get more training in that way, and a taste of what the gym has to offer.
I...what? Ummmm... Hey, works for me! Okay, okay, enough with the weirdo. Let's keep going! I feel funny. Right, so, time to get moving!
Aren't you Manic? You know about me? You kidding? You've beaten three gym leaders already! Including Wattson! Word's getting around. Oh. Well, um, it was mostly thanks to my pokémon. Don't sell yourself short. I used to do the same, until some other kid came along and taught me to trust myself a little more. Other kid? Yeah, some girl named May. So she's already been here... Anyway, c'mon, let's get to it! Just one question, first. What's with all the steam? I have pores big enough for you to move in. Oh, uh...right.
I hope you trained harder than that! Hey, there was nothing wrong with that hit! Your Vigoroth looks irritated. Trust me, the Numel was just my lead-off!
Gordon, you've got HOLY... Rrrrgh...backup, I need backup! Don't worry, Gordon! I've got this one. A little carefully applied force should shut this thing down! Jeez, Gordon... Yeah, I thought I'd be okay too. I think I'd better sit out the rest of this match. Agreed! Chester, you're up!
OW!! Feeling the burn, are we? Somebody tag me out! Twilight, I hate to ask... Hey, that's what friends are for! So, you think your Umbreon can take hits forever? Nope! And she doesn't have to. You're not going to sacrifice one of them, are you? What? Ew! No! I've been saving my secret weapon. You have a secret weapon?
Hi there. Oh, poop.
Hah! Once Manic brought me out, it was inevitable. I don't get it, though. Why didn't you just start with her? What, and refuse others the chance? You did it, Rainbow! Good work! Like there was ever any doubt! You certainly are strong... Just keep working on it, and you can be like me someday! O-okay... Y'all done pattin' yerselves on th' back?
Applejack! AJ! EEEEEEE! Awww, I missed y'all too! They sure look happy to see each other. I think they're all friends from another place. It's really a long story. And here I thought there were only four. Four? Yes, we found four of them in the field to the east, dazed. Brawly took the Vaporeon to surf with, Wattson took the Jolteon to help with his work, I took the Flareon because she seemed like a hard worker, and your dad... So Norman has one too, huh? You're surprised? Not very. Norman took one to cheer him up. I didn't know he needed cheering up...thanks, Flannery! We'd better go. Good luck!
Oh, hi, May...oomph! What's this? Let me guess. You've been having trouble with the desert, right? Well, uh...I don't know if I'd say 'trouble'... It's okay, don't worry about it. I already went through there. I even left you some trainers to fight. Here, use those! Ain't gotta be a genius to see what's happenin' here! I think she's sweet on you, Manic. What? No she's not. Anyway, um, thanks! No problem! I'll say hi to your dad for you. Okay, seeya! Seriously, how could you not see this? Look, let's...let's just go grind. Be strong, Manic. Fate awaits us. I don't believe in-
...fate... PENELOPE, NO! How...how could this happen? Calm down! I can heal her! No, Twilight Sparkle. You do not have your magic right now. But...this can't be the end...
Manic...you must listen to me...my time is short. Go ahead, Penelope. You have my full attention. One has passed Four remain For Manic to Unite again All regions cast Their sirens' call Unite and win Or all shall fall. Unite...I don't understand. Unite with what? She's delirious! No, Applejack. I am sharing...all I can...while I can... Penelope. Unite with what? What do you mean? It was my privilege...to travel with...Manic, the Innocent...you needed me...the...most... Innocent, what? No...Penelope...this can't be happening...somebody do something! Oh, Manic...
This is crazy. What if that happens to one of us?! I c-can't...*snf* believe she's gone... We should go too, before we're next! Now, hang on, y'all. Don't go runnin' off with yer heads all messed up! I...this is...this is a lot to process. How does this even need processing?! We just need to find Pinkie and Rarity and get out of this place. Twilight. Yes? If you want to go...you have my blessing. Take anything you need. Well, I'm staying. Seems like you need me more than ever. Thanks, guys. I'm going to go do what needs to be done. I'll get your answer when I come back, Twilight.
Penelope...you deserved better. Remember, she knew it was coming. It's true, remember? She told you to be strong, that fate awaited us. If anyone would know, she would. What she said still gets me, though. Who're you supposed to reunite with? I have no idea. Maybe the girls will leave, and we'll bring the others out of the box? Whatever it is, we're here. I took this job and I'm not leaving till it's done. ...thanks. Come on, let's go back outside.
Manic...we've reached a decision. Y-yes? We've gone through about half of this region, gained four of the eight badges, knocked out countless opponents, and this is our first loss. Statistically speaking, you're still in the top percentile. Yup. 'Sides, I just met ya! Wouldn't be real fair to just skeedaddle. You're v-very kind...and try very hard... Yeah...okay. I guess you're pretty tough. But watch it! I have my eye on you. Thanks, girls. I'll try to justify your faith in me. Besides, we can't abandon someone so...innocent. XD I still need to puzzle out what she meant by that. Let's work it out on the way.
Whoah, whoah! What's wrong? You ain't just gonna leave good land like that, are ya? Oh, that stuff. None of us are farmers. Let's continue. Correction!
None of YOU are farmers. *facepaw* How did I not see this coming? Wow, that...you made that look easy! Y'all just ain't had any earth ponies with ya b'fore now, 'sall. Oh...she's right! Unicorn, pegasus, pegasus! What's that mean? Real simple, sugar-britches. Unicorns use magic. Pegasi do weather. Earth ponies work the land. So you're gardeners? Farmers, an' don't you forget it. Honest work, I can appreciate. Thanks kindly, pardner. Shall we give these goggles a whirl? Sounds fun!
Whoah... Ruins! Cool! I d-don't like it here... Now, it'll be awright. Let's just keep movin'. I HATE THIS BIKE! UMPH! Well, you know what they say. If you fall off your bike... Give up and get a grappling hook? I can do this...I know I can...!
Oh, hey. There are pokémon in here! Not an awful lot, though. Well, it is a sorta spooky tower. Hey, Twilight. What can you tell me about this? Name, type, evolution? Sandshrew. Ground type. Evolves into Sandslash. Whoah. Everyone has a p-power...that's hers. Ground type means I sit this one out. Fluttershy, too. Hey, Twilight. A few Quick Attacks? Sure, that should be pretty easy. Aaaand... *click* bingo!
Finally! Oh, my...look at these... We came all this way for fossils? Remember the guy back in Rustboro who said he was working on a way to revive them? Oh yeah! So, which do we take? This one looks sort of plant like...and this one is a...bug? Very nice, Fluttershy! Well...I do know my animals... Let's just take this bug one. What's the worst that could happen?
Manic. ...yeah? Why would you ever say something like that?! 'Cause I'm not too bright. Okay, I can't argue with that.
(Who says Flareon has no moves?)
Okay, why are we in here again? Because Chester can move boulders now. Ohhh yeah. And hey, free loot! Umph...you're welcome. Sorry. I'd help if I could, but I ain't *that* strong. It's all right. Chester likes the work. Don't you? Remind me to drop one of these on you later.
(also...)
Whoah, cool! Much better. And you have another coming up later, don't you? Both of us do. I c-can hardly wait to see...! Me too. For now...it's time to have words with my dad.
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Post by Manic on Mar 30, 2019 12:57:22 GMT
Such is Nuzlocke. Let your guard down for even a moment, and tragedy strikes.
Manic seems to take it all in stride, though. At least that's how it looks...and Flannery is down, meaning Norman is next.
Regarding the loss of Penelope, and her riddle? Hello, very important moment in the story arc.
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Post by Manic on Mar 31, 2019 17:41:29 GMT
Update #11: Interlude
Huh? Oh, hey, Gordo. Heh. Hello, Chaz. Eugh. Okay, let's just agree now. I don't call you Gordo, you don't call me Chaz. Arright? Works for me. So...why're you out here? Just looking up at the stars. You can really see them well tonight. Sure can.
You musta noticed by now. Noticed what? The team, man. The...ponies. There's less room for us. There certainly is. I understand we'll find a fifth pony in the care of Manic's father. Look, Gordon. I don't wanna seem like a shirker, but could you go instead of me? Certainly. Mind if I ask why? It's my dad.
What about your father? He's in there. He's one of Norman's elite. I don't wanna face him. Any particular reason? One of us is gonna have to knock the other out. He's big, Gordon. Hits like a freakin' speedboat. I ain't afraid of him, but I don't wanna hurt him either. Ain't? You sound like the new girl. Heh, yeah, sorry. She's arright, when you get to know her.
Listen. Chester. I've been giving this some thought, myself. I believe I know why I was brought to Manic. Go on. I know enough about this region to know that the next two gyms are Normal and Flying. I have double-resistance to both. After that point, I'm almost exclusively a liability. Hey, c'mon, don't talk like that. It's true, and we both know it. When Manic goes into that gym, I want you to stay in the box for the duration. I can handle it with the others. From then on, we'll switch off until we face...I think Winona is her name. After I'm done with her...I'm done. Then you want me to take that sixth spot? I insist. I think Manic needs you more than he needs me, especially by then. Well, if you're sure. Hey, man. Brofist? Hah, certainly. Brofist. Bros for life, man. Bros for life.
Pssst! Hey. Huh? What's all th' ruckus? Oh...is it morning already...? Nah, nothing like that. I just can't sleep, is all. Yeah, me neither, now. Sorry! I just can't stop thinking about...stuff. What kind of stuff? I was poking around through Manic's pokédex. You were goin' through his stuff without his permission?! Shhh! Keep it down. I didn't take anything! I was looking us up. Still ain't right. So...what'd ya learn? All right, so, we're what's called 'eeveelutions'. Apparently there's this dog...fox...rabbit thing that can evolve a bunch of different ways depending on what happens to it. That makes sense...evolution is environmental... Give an Eevee a Fire Stone, and it becomes a Flareon. That's you, AJ. Flareon, huh? Makes sense. Water Stone, you get a Vaporeon. That's me! Thunder Stone, you get a Jolteon. That's you, Fluttershy. Jolteon...okay. That's not a bad name... Okay, here's where I get worried. If you level it when it's happy enough at night, it becomes an Umbreon. That's Twilight. Do it during the day, it becomes an Espeon.
What's wrong with that? That was it, Applejack! There were only five entries! Oh dear... I ain't followin' ya. I'm pretty sure Pinkie's the Espeon of this crew. For one thing, that means Pinkie with psychic powers. What's wrong with that? You know how much she likes to make you smile? Now, hold yer horses. Pinkie's still our friend. She ain't that kinda pony. Maybe not, but that's not what worries me. Where's Rarity? WHAT'S Rarity? Oh, no...! Settle down. She's gotta be somewhere. We'll keep lookin' till we find her, that's all.
It gets worse. How...? Who do you think pulled us here? I gotta admit, it looks like th' kinda thing Discord would do. Bingo. So, how do we defeat Discord? We use the Eleme...oh. OH. But...they must be somewhere... Think about it. This is the best way to separate us from them, and each other! While we sit around, who knows what Discord is doing to Equestria! Now, y'all quit yer panickin'. We sealed him away, remember? It's true...it was hard, but we did... Okay then, who do you think did this? I...I don't rightly know. See? But that don't mean it was Discord! Could be some feller we ain't met yet. Why, then? Sugar, this ain't like you. What's really chafin' yer hide? I don't think Penelope would want this... It's not Penelope! ...okay, maybe it's Penelope a little. But that's not it. C'mon, let's hear it.
Nevermind. It's stupid. Let's just go to sleep. Uh-uh. Nope. Something's gnawin' at ya, I aim ta find out what. *sigh* I saw something in a book at Lanette's place. Yeah, I took a quick peek, big deal! It said, 'The worst thing about hell is that you can see heaven.' I know what they mean. I ain't sure what ya mean, but it don't sound good. ...they took the sky from me, Applejack. I can see it, but I can't fly in it. All that clear blue space and I can't even reach it. Oh, Rainbow... Everyone else gets what they want. There are books here. Things to grow, animals - well, okay, pokémon - to tend to. But me...all I get to do is look at the sky and remember. Thought you liked swimmin'? I do! It's a lot of fun. But...it's not flying, Applejack. Swimming needs water. The sky is forever. I guess yer right. Don't worry yerself none, all right? Try ta get some shut-eye. We're gonna fix this an' get home. All right...sorry, Applejack. Sorry, Fluttershy. It's okay, Rainbow...sleep tight. G'night.
Pssst. Fluttershy. Mmmh...wha...? ...good, she's still out. We gotta do somethin'. Like what? I dunno, but Rainbow ain't doin' so good. I know...flying was her life... We oughtta figure out some way ta make this bearable for her, or she'll go plum loco. I agree...I want to make her feel better, but how? Let's talk to Manic come sun-up. Maybe he'll have an idea. You think so...? I sure hope so. G'night, Fluttershy. Goodnight, Applejack.
Hi, Manic. Huh? Oh, hey, Twilight. Why are you out here? Chester and Gordon have the spot with the good view, but I can still see the sky from here. Oh. ...I wish I recognized these constellations. Oh? Well, look up there. See those stars, and the ones next to them? There's Ursaring Major and Ursaring Minor, and there's Orion the Trainer over there. Things sure are different here than back in Equestria. You've said that before. How are things different?
Well, for one thing, nobody fights for fun! Really? Then how...I mean... It's just not done. No one feels the need to hurt each other to prove their worth. How do you get stronger, then? We train in our own way. We exercise, we socialize...earth ponies farm, pegasi fly, unicorns work on their magic. People work on what they're good at. That seems odd. Why not work on what you're not good at? Oh, each of us gets a cutie mark on our flank once we figure out what our calling is. You don't...hmm. You don't get them here, do you? How do you know what you're meant to do? I don't really know. You just feel it. You don't know? Oh, right. I keep forgetting, you're just a colt. Well, in human terms, I'm a 'child'. Sorry. Could that be what Penelope meant?
What do you mean? I committed to memory what she said before she...before she... I know. I'm so sorry for that... I understand. The point I'm trying to make is that, while she always spoke in riddles, she always seemed to be holding back as if something she could tell us would harm us in some way. Even at the end, I think she spoke as much as she possibly could. I noticed, but it still doesn't make any sense. 'One has passed, four remain for Manic to unite again.' Unite what? I assumed it meant us, but that doesn't make any sense. There are six of us, and even if one had 'passed' somehow, there would still be five left. Wait, there are six of you? But there are only five Eeveelutions. I thought so too, but it looks like my power can pick up on things that your pokédex doesn't know. There are actually seven eeveelutions currently known. There's an ice one and a grass one, too. Glaceon and Leafeon. Twilight, if you're joking with me... I'm telling you, it's true! Anyway, there's more. 'All regions cast their sirens' call, unite and win or all shall fall.' What does that mean? Well, only five regions have joined the Master League system so far. Maybe that's what they meant. Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, Sinnoh, and Unova. But what would 'one has passed' mean? I have no idea. And how would you unite the regions? Unite in what? Auuuugh, the more I ask, the less things make sense! I can't think under these conditions. Darn it, Penelope, why couldn't you have been clearer?
I'm really confused by all of this. I don't think I'm ready for whatever she was talking about. And how would she even know? There was one more thing. She called you 'Manic, the Innocent'. As if it was some sort of title. I don't think I'm really that innocent. I have blood on my hands. What? Ew! No, I mean, I'm responsible for Penelope's death! I know how you feel. I miss her too. I just...I feel like there's something deeper going on here. I don't think I'm ready for it either. I don't understand it, and I'm kinda scared. Yeah. Me too. I know this much, though: if our friends are with the gym leaders, then rescuing them helps both of us, right? I guess. Right! And if there's one thing I've learned, it's that together? My friends and I can do anything. We reformed a thousand-year-old villainess, we put down a primal force of chaos, and we overcame our shortcomings to do it. What? You've really done all that? I told you, when my friends and I are together, we can really rock the house! So, maybe we can help you too? It sounds like you're in the middle of something really big. You're helping us, let us help you. We each represent an element of harmony, after all! A what?
Applejack is honesty. If she tells you that something is true, you know for a fact that she believes it is. Yeah, I sorta get that vibe from her. Fluttershy is kindness. I actually feel sorry for her, in a way; I know she doesn't want to fight, but I know she understands that we have to in order to find our friends. I noticed that, too. I bet you did. You've been keeping her out of combat a little more than the others, haven't you? Well, maybe a little. She's just so fragile. Hah, just wait until you see her angry! Anyway, I'm magic, for obvious reasons. Rainbow is loyalty. If she accepts you as a friend, she'll stand by you no matter what. ...okay, now you're just messing with me. I'm serious! Look, I know she's had her reservations about you, and I know she's tried to talk us into leaving twice. Twice? Oh, uh...I meant...okay, so it was twice. My point is, once she finally comes to accept you - and I think she's getting closer to doing that - you've got a friend till the end. And the others? Pinkie Pie is laughter. If she can't lighten the mood around here, nobody can. My dad took one of you to cheer him up. I'd bet two bits that's her. And that just leaves Rarity! Her element is generosity. If she sees you in need, she'll do anything she can to help. And it seems to me that we're all in need.
Okay. Look, Twilight, I, uh... What's the matter? Look, I want to thank you. I don't think I would've gotten half this far without you and the others. I seem to get all the credit, and you six do all the work. Maybe, but we wouldn't get anywhere on our own. None of us speak your human language. Though why we can understand it but not speak it is a mystery...anyway, don't you remember how this all began? What do you mean? Don't forget, you volunteered to help me. And Birch, too! You could've just walked away, but you didn't. You stopped to help. I think you and Rarity will get along great when you meet. Well, um, okay. I guess that's true, yeah. I know it is! Just watch out. She's liable to want to give you a makeover. Ohhhh no. None of that! Hee hee! Just tell her you're trying to start a new trend in fashion, and she'll understand. That's a relief. I don't want to be one of those trainers who always tries to look cool. Well, if you ask me, you're great just like you are. Thanks, Twilight. You're pretty amazing too. I guess we should get some rest...tomorrow's a big day. I'll say. Goodnight, Manic! Goodnight, Twilight.
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Post by Manic on Mar 31, 2019 17:45:24 GMT
Why an interlude? Why a break in the action here, of all places?
One, for exposition.
And two, because insight can be gained by what happens when the team isn't all in one spot.
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Post by Manic on Apr 1, 2019 16:36:08 GMT
Update #12: Father Figure
Hang on, before we go in there, I want to be prepared. Sounds good to me. What's the plan? First, soda pop. I like this plan! Hey, Chester, want...some...hey, where's Chester? Chester will be staying in the box for the moment. He awright? He has his reasons for not wanting to be involved in this challenge. Well, as long as he's all right... Since it's on the way, why not stop off at the berry shop? Sure, sounds good!
Holy smokes! What? It's just a berry. It ain't 'just a berry'. This here's a Leppa! Restores power fer a move we know! So? So, we plant one and get two, then we plant two and get four...we can make a whole crop of 'em! Heh-heh. Infinite power, huh? Sounds cool! We can plant it after the gym battle, okay? Yeah, it oughtta be fine fer now.
Which door is the right one? Both of them. Wanna run that by me again? My father was always a big believer in letting people choose their path. We fight three trainers to get to him, but which three is up to us. I understand. The paths branch, but they all end in the same place. So, which one's first? Lemme at 'em! Gordon will be taking point. First up is Accuracy. Then we'll be going with Defense, then One-Hit KO. How do you already know what's coming? My father is a good man, but he's a little predictable sometimes. I actually plan to use that against him.
Hi, Dad! Hello, challenger. Dad? (Manic, you're here as a challenger, right? This has to be done properly.) Oh, uh...right! Sorry. Ahem. Norman! I challenge you to an equivalency match! An equivalency match, you say. Very interesting, challenger. You are aware that trainers aren't allowed to ask for a boon in exchange after they get their fourth badge, correct? Yes, I am. Very well, then. I have four pokémon. How many will each of us use? Just one. One? Manic, are you sure this is a good idea? He's gone loco! Manic...I'm not really supposed to do this, but I need to warn you, that's not a very good idea! Gym Leader Norman. Do you accept my challenge?
Thanks, Dad. Whatever happens, I hope I've made you proud. You don't even have to ask.
Gordon. Lead off with six uses of Mud-Slap. Attack when he's recovering. What? Why not just lay into him? What's the only weakness Normal type has? Fighting. Why? I'd bet anything his Slaking still has Counter. Counter. Fighting type. Deals to the opponent twice the amount of damage dealt by the last physical attack this turn. Why, that sneaky snake! Oh, no...all Gordon knows is physical attacks...! Right. The first step is ruining his accuracy. Then, we lower his defense with Rock Smash. Heal, attack, debuff, refrain. Fascinating. It's a delicate dance...do you think it'll work?
I'm pretty sure, yeah.
A stunningly effective use of strategy, son. I'm very happy. Way to go, Gordon! Y'all led that fella like a sheepdog with a flock! I don't deserve all the credit. It's true! That was a strategy worthy of a fencer or chess player, Manic. How did you figure it out? I don't know, it just...it's like it was standing right there, waiting for me to see it. I have something for you, as well. Oh?
How do you mean? I've been missing you and your mother terribly. I was in a real slump until she came along. She? Wait, you mean...mom will be furious! What? No, no, not like that! Here, perhaps you should meet her yourself. She helped me smile, I bet she could do the same for you.
Hi, girls! Pinkie! You're all right! Well, duh. Why wouldn't I be all right! I've had Norman here to protect me! Aw, I knew she'd be fine. She's Pinkie! I'm very happy to see you againOOF! Group hug! Mercy, girl, y'ain't lost yer strength! Nope! But I've picked these weeeeeird brain powers! Watch! Rainbow, you're thinking how cool you are. Applejack, you're wondering where Rarity is! Fluttershy, you're trying to stay out of the way. Well, it's true! Hon, that ain't real polite. Well, yes... And Twilight...hello? HellooooOOOOoooo? Anybody home? Twilight, did you leave your brain behind? *gasp* Did it get eaten by zombies?! *snicker* No, Pinkie. My brain didn't get eaten by zombies. Your powers just don't work on Dark types.
Ladies, I think we're being called away. Okay! Bye, Norman! Just remember, stay cheerful! I'll try. For now, help my son, won't you? Sure thing! I'll protect him from the zombies! Zombies...?
Oh, wow. It's been a while since I thought about Wally. Isn't that the spoiled kid from before? Yeah! He's such a twerp! Well, he's really gained a lot of confidence since he got his first pokémon. Now, Rainbow. I'm sure he's just...awkward! Probably because of his poor health. No, I'm with Rainbow on this one. Maybe he just needs to be taught right from wrong...? Oh! Well, that's...good? No, it's not. It's not? No. Ever since then, he's been prattling on about how he deserves to be champion, and the system is stacked against him, and so on. He's absolutely insufferable. See? Could you help us with this issue?
Uh, sure. What do you want me to do? Take him down. What?! No, no, that's not the answer...! Whoah, hey, c'mon. Even I don't think he deserves THAT. Excuse me? You know. In a match. Defeat all of his pokémon so convincingly that he comes home. Phew! I thought he'd flipped his noodle! You know, I think I can do that for you. Thank you, I appreciate it. I think that maybe letting him have pokémon wasn't such a good idea. Yeah, but...who knew? Anyway, we should get going. Hey, Manic. Catch! Huh? Oh, hey, an Escape Rope. Where'd you get this?
I found it! Where'd ya dredge that up? On the ground! :3 Hey, don't look a gift pony in the mouth! Is there something wrong with her mouth...? Well, she's certainly animated. She certainly is. Useful, too! Anyway, hey, Rainbow? I have something for you. Oh yeah? Go on, let's have it!
This...is...AWESOME! All right, Rainbow! I ain't much fer surfin'... I'm with Applejack on this one. I think I'll stay in the ball while you do this. Don't be a stick in the mud, it'll be fun! We've got a lot to do. Rainbow's new ability opens up a lot of possibilities for us!
And it did! We went all throughout Hoenn, going and picking up neat items that we couldn't reach before, both hidden and otherwise. Better yet, Rainbow seems happier than ever; she loves surfing! Now, if we can just get her to stop doing barrel rolls while we're coming with...
Are you sure this is a good idea? Sure I'm sure. There are people aboard, it's safe. Floor seems stable enough. Manic, why are we here? If the waterways aren't safe for some reason, we need to know. Hmmm, I suppose that makes sense. Fluttershy, will you be in front? Your electric attacks will work wonderfully on any water types we meet. I g-guess I can lead the way...
Have you seen a scanner around? Great, another egghead. Rainbow! Be nice, he's trying to help. No, but I can keep my eyes open for one. What's it look like? Looks like a little black box. If you promise to find it, you can take something I've tucked away in storage. Well...sure, okay! Wonderful! Here's the key. Manic, we've explored this entire ship. The only place it could be is underwater! Yeah, and I don't swim well enough for that! I said we'd find it, and we will. I didn't say we'd do it right now. I guess that makes sense! But we are gonna find it. Right? Naturally! I said it and I meant it. Well, awright then.
Whoah, nice! Lemme see, lemme see! Ice Beam. Power: 95. Element: Ice. 10% chance to freeze an opponent. That'll ring yer bell! Fantastic power, and an element we haven't covered. Who gets it? N-not me...that's a bit chilly for me. Let's decide later. Sure! We can plan it out once we find Rarity. Uh, sugar? We were talkin' last night. Ain't but five Eeveelutions. Whatcha think Rarity is? Seven. Come again? There are seven Eeveelutions. Only five are native to Hoenn, but there are seven. My guess is that she's a Glaceon, but I guess we'll find out! For now, back to Mauville and on to...
...or not. Oh! H-hello, Mr. Wattson. Hello there, Fluttershy! I see you've gotten stronger. Oh, um, yes...Manic's been taking care of us... Y'all know this feller? It turns out that you four wound up somewhere different from me. The gym leaders found you, and each took one to take care of you. Wattson here brought Fluttershy back. Right! Anyway, I need you to go turn the generator off before this entire town explodes. Explodes?! Yeah, you know. Big badda-boom? Anyway, I bet you can handle it. Here's the key, better hurry!
Manic. You realize how insane this is. Of course I do, but we can't just let Mauville go up in smoke. Why not? Uh, 'cause folks live there? They can live somewhere else! This place is really high-tech! I wonder if they have any robots here that shoot lasers from their eyes? Pew-pew! Uh, right. Hey, Gordon. Will you take front? Sure. Worried about more explosions? Bingo.
(And then, no explosions. But Gordon did level!)
That was it? That's what he needed us for? To step on a switch on the ground? It was fun! All the switches were like a game. I see why he didn't go... I'm glad I'm not the only one. Oh, I get it! His electric pokémon wouldn't have done much to the wild ones in there, but they would've been devastated by an explosion! So, knowing that Gordon and I were here, he sent us instead. Hah! Sharp as ever, Fluttershy. Here, I've been saving this for someone like you!
Thunderbolt. Power: 95. Element: Electric. Has a 10% chance to paralyze the opponent. F-for me? Oh, I couldn't... Nonsense! Use it in good health. Thank you thank you thank you! Now, you lot get going. You passed with flying colors! Passed...well, anyway, he's right. There's still a lot to do!
And so we did. I think that old human may have been testing us to see if we were ready. If so, I'm glad we passed! We're on the other side of this region now, and we've already met a few new people, and even run into an old friend. I don't know what to expect from here on in, but I know this: the team is almost back together again.
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Post by Manic on Apr 1, 2019 16:50:28 GMT
Pickup instead of Synchronize as a power? Sure, why not?
Rainbow gets some badly needed fun, Manic makes a promise for the future, and Gordon's tough shell is put to good use!
Next time, all points north!
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Post by Manic on Apr 2, 2019 18:47:07 GMT
Update #13: Goodbyes Stink
Okay, let's head east first. Any particular reason? Well, south is blocked off, and west is the way we came. Apart from that... Somethin' smells dee-licious! What she said.
Berry Master, huh? Can't say much fer his modesty, but somethin' in there smells great! My mouth is already watering! It smells almost as good as mom's cupcakes, and those are fantastically super amazing! Girls, one at a time! Heh...sorry for their manners. Ehhh...to be fair, it does smell good.
And help yourself to the berries outside! Just remember to re-plant, okay? Oh, thanks! How many can I take? If you re-plant? All of them! All...humma...Manic, d'you know what that means? That's an impressive amount of capital with which to start our own crop! Heh, your pokémon seem to understand the gravity of the offer. Go for it! Wow. Where to start? Plant a full crop o' Pomegs, round it off with some Qualots. [bgcolor=#000]M-maybe we shouldn't take them all?[/bgcolor] It's okay, Fluttershy. They'll grow right back, see? Sugar, back home, I do this all th' time. Don't get yer fur in a ruffle.
Fuh...wha...? Jeez, talk about a hike! Hey, when'd you get here? Manic swapped me out at the last PC. Didn't you notice? Nope! Chester! All right, my main man! Nobody noticed, huh? Guess I'll just have to be more up-front! Looking to take point? I guess, but man, it looks like somebody stapled three routes together! Well, if you're not up to the challenge... Not up to...eat my dust, fish-girl!
It's such a relief to find someone who's as interested in learning as I am! It's just a pity that we can't really do anything with this information...and none of us can learn Fly.
You could get injured in there. We're temporarily blocking this part of the road so that no one wanders in. That didn't seem to do much to stop me. Yeah, I know. The other guys are supposed to be here by now. Who're these guys? Beats me! Oh yeah, you haven't met yet. These guys are science nerds. Team Aqua. Not bad in a fight - I guess - but kinda eggheads. I happen to think that what they're doing is very admirable! Clean water benefits everyone. Anyway, we really need to rest. It's a long hike! Well...all right. There's a bed just inside. Just don't go digging around too much, okay?
All right, girls. Let's take five. *zzzzzzz...* Wait. What? How is that even possible? What's wrong? Manic, Chester's ability is Insomniac. He shouldn't be able to sleep at all! *snf* Do you girls smell something? Smells like one'a th' compost heaps back home! [bgcolor=#000]Oh! It's...it's certainly, um...oh dear...[/bgcolor] Uh oh. Twilight, you recognize this? Oh, no...Manic, hit B! B? B what? What do you mean? Just hurry, before-*
Yep! That's right, ladies. I'm back in full effect. Augh...more than full! Way more! That's three or four fulls at least! You smell like you've been rolling in something foul! He's makin' the trees wilt...an' they're plastic! Heh heh. You don't hafta be coy. I know you've missed my masculine smell! C'mon, Chester! You smell like an explosion at a stinkbomb factory! Ggggh. Let's just go. Quickly now! Stay upwind!
And what in the name of Arceus is that smell?! Uh, yeah. About that. My Vigoroth evolved while we rested and, uh... Just...just go see the admin, and be quick! Maybe she'll know what to do! [bgcolor=#000]M-my eyes are tearing up...I can't see...![/bgcolor] Manic, do something! Chester. Silk Scarf. Sure thing, buddy. Hey! You're ripping it! I sure am. Five equal parts. One for each of you. Just let me tie these... We look like robbers now! Bang-bang! Put 'em up! Don't gimme any funny business, see? More importantly, we ain't chokin' anymore. Thanks! But what about you? I can tough it out. Let's just keep going.
Is that a compliment? Ugh, sorry. It's been a bad day. First these scientists are being difficult, and now there's some kind of smell coming from OH ARCEUS YOU HAVE A SLAKING. Uh, yeah. Look, how do you do something about this? Let me see if my pokémon can hose him down. And lose my majestic stench? No way!
(one embarassingly easy beatdown later)
Look, I'm sorry, I just don't know how to make it stop! Manic, we should just go. I'm sure everything will be fine! If nothin' else, ain't no wild pokémon comin' near this! Seriously, Chester. We're pals, but you've gotta shake this stink. It's making us unpopular! Any suggestions? Whaddaya mean, 'suggestions'? Just stop stinking! Right, right. None of you have ever known a Slaking before.
And what in the world is that funk? Oh, uh, Chester. He's a Slaking now. Sorry about that. Wow, really? Cool. So, you already have him on berries? ...come again? You're lucky I found you, Manic. Slaking all give off a natural oil to keep their fur clean. It smells absolutely foul, but the smell can be changed with the right berries. Here, Chester. Have a Tamato! Hey, not bad! Oh, wow. He doesn't stink as much! [bgcolor=#000]Actually, that makes sense...if you change an animal's diet, you can help it overcome all sorts of obstacles![/bgcolor] Now that that's taken care of...it's time to see how your team is coming along!
Hey, it's a water plant thing! Are you like Swamp Thing or whatever? Were you the result of some hiiiiideous accident that left you scarred for life, so now you slog through the muck searching for your lost love? Pinkie Pie used Confusion. It's super-effective. And here I was worried that you might have been falling behind!
Here, a gift from me to you! I bet you can put this to good use. Er, actually... Oh, right. Five eeveelutions and a Slaking. Well, I bet you have something that can use it! Hey, uh, May? Hmm? You can't use Surf until you have the badge from my dad, right? Right. Why do you ask? Look, uh, don't take this the wrong way, but...how did you beat him? With skill, you creep! Hmph. See if I help you again! Wait, May!
Yeah, thanks a lot, jerkface. Stay back, everyone! Oh, man. That was classic! Like you shoved your entire leg in your mouth. Whoah, check her out! Pinkie, what's wrong? This guy is evil to the core! E-V-I-L, with a capital Evil! Watch out, Manic!
I see you've already collected five of the ponies. Thank you. Come again? I wasn't sure how I was going to get them all, but you're being courteous enough to collect them for me. Much obliged! Now, go get the last one from Winona, and we'll see what's what...hey, what's your Slaking doing? Twilight. Help translate. Uh, sure, okay. Scott, right? Let me make this clear. You lay one hand on my friends, and I'll chuck you clear to Orre. You got me? Say what you want, you lummox. I have no interest in you, only them. No way I'm going anywhere with you, bucko. Hmph. You always were a nuisance, Pinkie Pie. Now, get going. I don't have all day.
Okay, huddle. Uh... Right. Here, Tamato. [bgcolor=#000]I'm scared...[/bgcolor] Me too, Fluttershy. This guy isn't just chaotic like Discord, or misunderstood like Nightmare Moon. He's malevolent, and it's obvious he had something to do with how we got here! I wish we had the elements of harmony. Then we'd show him a thing or two! I'm ready to spec for pew-pew! Uh, right. Well, we don't...and even if we did, we have to rescue Rarity first. At least now we know where she is! Aren't we playing right into his hands, though? I ain't gonna let some snake-in-the-grass keep me from savin' Rarity! I'm with you, Chester. If he tries anything, pow! Uh, actually...once we get to town, box me. What? Why? So I smell more like Tamato now. Big deal. Folks will still smell me coming a mile away, and you need to lay low. Besides, you need room for this Rarity lady. There'll always be room for you, Chester... Heh. That's real sweet, Fluttershy, but we both know it's not true.
It's time, Manic. You knew this was gonna happen. I guess, but...you've been with me practically from the start! I'm going to miss you, Chester. Even when you smelled bad, your heart was good. This stinks! Who am I gonna compete with now? Seems to me like you've got no shortage of targets, Rainbow. Somebody's got it in for you ponies. Give 'em a punch for me! You know it, big guy.
And that was Fortree. It was a nice little town, but it would've been nicer if Chester had come with us on the way out, too. It's hard saying goodbye to old friends, but we have a task to do, and it just can't wait. We still need to figure out what's stopping us from reaching that gym, though. Maybe the answer is ahead instead of behind? I sure hope so...if we can't get in, I bet no one can get out, either!
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Post by crimsondoom on Apr 2, 2019 20:35:05 GMT
Fluttershy's formatting seems to have conked out on you.
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Post by Manic on Apr 3, 2019 10:19:11 GMT
That it did. It is now fixed.
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Post by Manic on Apr 3, 2019 10:36:38 GMT
Update #14: Chilling Revelation
Oooh oooh, me me me! I wanna be on TV! Helloooooo, I'm Pinkie! Wha...but...how did...? Am I insane, or were they behind us? I'm...pretty sure they were? They must be very fast... Ain't y'all guessed? Guessed what, Applejack? It's not like they have magic here. They may not have magic here, but sure as shootin' they got a shortcut! That makes sense. In the meantime...I'm guessing you want a battle? Could we? The last time was so embarrassing, I need something to get our ratings back up!
(and then we ruined them)
We...how...? Aheh! Whoops, gotta run! But I wanna be on TV! I got personality, I got chaaaaaarm.... :3 Not now, girl! Let's skeedaddle!
Steven? What're you doing here? Oh, I heard you were having some difficulty with Winona! I also heard you were having some odor problems, but those seem to have dwindled. I miss Chester. Me too...he smelled bad, but he was a good, um...Slaking. We all do. But...we have to be strong and move on. Rarity needs us! I know, I know. Doesn't mean I have to like it.
Oh, he wants to fight, huh? That don't seem like his style. He's plannin' somethin'. Fight who? You? What? No, no, of course not. That would be an incredibly lopsided match! You're that strong? Well, I don't like to brag. Let's just say you'd have real trouble. Anyway, try this out, it's the latest invention from Devon.
(and then a Kecleon died)
What, seriously? I think it's broken. Everything looks normal! Pinkie! That doesn't belong to you, you should return it to Manic. Uh, thanks, Twilight. Anyway, you really want me to have it? Sure! We like to reward our beta testers with free product. Beta tester? I think he's saying it had never been field tested before! Sure! You help us refine it, and we help you have it. Anyway, I need to get going. You go give Winona what for! Um, right! Will do!
Ugh...these things are everywhere, and they keep turning resistant to our attacks! Man, that's annoying! Stay down! And they hit so hard...! Stay back, y'all. I gotta plan! Wait, let me guess! You're going to use magical powers to harness their essence and inject it into yourself, becoming InvisiMare! And with your sidekick, Camoufilly, you're going to fight crime under the cover of night! ... Uh...no. Okay! What, then?
An' a'one... So it's fire-typed now. So what?
...an' a'two! Ingenious! By utilizing your abilities in the correct order, you managed to strategically use their inherent type-changing ability against them! I'm very impressed! Aw, shucks. T'weren't nothin'... No, really, that was pretty good! Now we can reach that cave and see what's hidden so well!
Oh...well, um, it's free, right? Yeah, so is stuff out of a trash can! I'll take it if you don't want it! What, really? Sure, silly! There's nothing I love more than a sunny day, and I can make my own if I use this! Why not leave weather-making to the experts, huh? Awww. Well, okay then! But next time you're having a picnic, you'll be sorry!
Yeah, you better run! Simmer down, everyone. We're here. Great! So, what's the plan? What, me? Sure. You're our trainer, right? Well, yeah... And your last plan worked pretty well, right? Okay, sure, I guess. Even I've gotta admit, you're doing an okay job of keeping us safe. But don't get lazy! Well, I guess if you really want me to...Fluttershy, I'd like you up front. Rainbow, you take second. Before we get started...
That should help out a lot. Woo-wee! I feel sorry fer Winona! What about the rest of us, Manic? Well, I'm hoping Pinkie and Applejack learn Psychic and Flamethrower naturally. Do they? Espeon learns Psychic at level 47. Flareon learns Flamethrower at level 52. Hey, I'm getting pretty good at this! That's awful late. Yeah...I'll see about picking some TMs up before that. For now, though, let's focus on what's ahead of us.
And I've heard you made it past the grinder. Impressive. Thank you, miss. Polite, too! Very nice. I heard about the stunt you pulled on your father. I told him that Slaking would be a liability. What's she talking about? Rainbow, you remember that 'move only once every two turns' thing Chester used to do? Yeah, so? Slakings sort of...regain that. Muscles out the wazoo but slow as mud, huh? Don't underestimate Slakings, miss. I'll take that under advisement! Now, will you be challenging me to an equivalency match as well? No. Your five, my two. Living dangerously, I see. Well, have it your way!
And wow, he really did! It was like, no matter what Winona had in store, Manic had an answer for it. Winona later admitted that her Altaria knew Earthquake, which would have really hurt Fluttershy...if Manic had given her the chance! Almost everything went down in one hit. I think I heard her mutter 'overleveled', but what happened next was even more amazing!
(This happened on the very first try. Oh, Rarity. Why couldn't you have a Modest personality?)
Don't let it get to you, darling. You still fought elegantly, as a lady should. Win or lose, I'm proud of you. Rarity! No surprise you're hanging out with the 'elegant' leader. Twilight?! Rainbow?! Then that must mean...Fluttershy, Applejack, Pinkie? Uh huh. Sure 'nuff! Yupperooni!
Oh! You simply must tell me everything that's happened. I see you all got extreme makeovers as well. Striking look, Rainbow! Thanks! You look pretty sharp yourself. Oh, ha ha. An ice joke. How droll. Now, who is this gentleman accompanying you? Winona has been preparing for him for days, but he brushed her aside like she was nothing! This is Manic! He's been helping gather everybody up! He's weeeeeird. Oh, right. Uh, nice to meet you, Rarity. He's been a big help. He agreed to help me round everyone up quite some time ago, and it seems like there's some sort of mystery surrounding him, too. Feller's pretty reliable, I reckon. He's kind, as well...he won't let us come to any real harm... A mysterious, reliable, kind man? Be still my heart! But I'LL be the judge of whether or not you have what it takes to lead us. Rarity... No, she's right. Let her judge for herself. Seems fair. If you say so. Just remember, Rarity has some pretty high standards.
You. How did you get this number? Oh dear. Quite the reversal of demeanor! This guy Scott is bad news, Rarity. He knows we're ponies. He wants to round us all up! He's evil! Eeeeeeeeee-vil! Rotten to the core, like an old banana! But bananas don't have cores... Fine, watermelon then! What I'm trying to say is that he's a super-nasty bad guy, and you should never ever trust him, ever! So, you've finally gathered them all, have you? Yeah, I have. And you're not getting your hands on any of them. And what's it to you, the fate of these ridiculous aliens? These aren't just aliens! These...these are my friends, and I won't let you have them!
I wasn't entirely certain until this very moment. Wait. I thought you were looking for the ponies. Oh, I was! I was looking for you too. What do you want with me, though? Why, to beat you at your best. To know that, even with your ridiculous friends, you couldn't stand up to me. I want revenge. So, you see...
I'm going to kill them. And then, I'm going to kill you. *click*
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Post by crimsondoom on Apr 3, 2019 16:21:24 GMT
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Man, the formatting here really doesn't like you, huh?
EDIT: Or me, for that matter.
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Post by Manic on Apr 4, 2019 7:02:36 GMT
I guess it doesn't.
So, do you have anything to say about the story, or the characters, or the overarcing plot, or...?
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Post by crimsondoom on Apr 4, 2019 7:14:32 GMT
I mean, again, I'm trying not to talk too much because I don't want to spoil things for the newcomers. I know myself well enough to know that commenting on the story too frequently will either lead to me accidentally saying too much or to me tying myself into anxious knots trying to ensure that nothing I say can possibly hint at what is to come, neither of which is a desirable outcome.
I will say this much, though: I appreciate Scott being evil here. It's not something I see very often, and I appreciate unconventional takes on things.
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Post by Manic on Apr 4, 2019 7:38:34 GMT
Update #15: Confrontation
All right, girls. Let's start putting the pieces together. How? All we know about this Scott guy is that he's a looney! Actually...we know more than that... Fluttershy is right. Come on, let's talk while we walk. He know he ain't a Manic fan. Right. We also know that he knows us, somehow...but we've been here long enough that anyone in this world or ours could know about us. Maybe he's just lonely? Hmph. Well, if you ask me, he's a brute. Of course he is, but let's look at the facts.
Oh, hi, guys! Oh, hey, it's that Manic kid. You stay safe, now! C'mon, guys, we'd better get moving. Archie's waiting. Fact number one. He knows Manic somehow, but Manic either never knew or doesn't remember him. That's true. How does that work? We affect the lives of people around us in ways we never even know about, Pinkie. It's not only possible, it's likely! I'm sure Pinkie understands, Twilight. Please, keep talkinEEP! Rarity, watch it, Mightyena can be pretty powerful when they get older!
Excuse me, I'm trying to have a conversation with my friends. Hmph. Whoah. Look at it run! Just riff-raff, dear. A lady never has to fight if she doesn't want to. Now, where were we?
Safari zone? Neat! I'd love to see more different pokemon in their natural habitats. Sure, but if we're not swapping any of you out... It wouldn't be very nice to catch them, just to leave them in the box. I suppose you have a point. Now, fact number two. Somehow, this person knows us by name. Or at least, he knows Pinkie Pie by name. Manic, if he calls again, see if he can name the rest of us. Why's it matter? I get it. If he can only name Pinkie Pie, maybe he's local to the Petalburg area! Right! We need to narrow down the search parameters if we're ever going to figure out what's going on.
Oh, hey, Lilycove! This place has the biggest department store in the region! That's wonderful! We could certainly use more supplies. Now, point number three, he wanted all six of us in one place before he confronted you, but he was willing to try to buy me off of you in the beginning. He wants us all for some reason, but why? Uh, Twilight? Hmm? Everybody else went to shop. And Manic went to keep an eye on them. Darn it...we'd better go catch up.
May! Hello, Manic. It's time for our final face-off. Are you ready? Manic! This is a person you can tell about all the things that have happened! Right! May, listen. Win or lose, you need to hear this. This 'Scott' person has been making death threats against me. That must be a different Scott than I know. Uh oh. Maybe he's Scott's good twin or something? Portly guy? Sunglasses? Follows me around? Sure, we've spoken plenty of times. He seems friendly enough. In fact, he said he'd wait for you...somewhere in...town! Uh oh. May, I don't know what to do about this! Calm down. Let's have our final face-off, and I'll go home and tell my father. We'll get the word out. All right. Would you be okay with a one-on-one? Given the circumstances, I know which one to use. Me too.
Hello, Kipper. I see you remember me. I remember you too. You've gotten a lot stronger; so have all of us. What's most important is that you and May look happy together. Even while we fight, I can see you smiling. Let's get this over with quickly, so that you can go home.
As commanding an advantage as ever. I don't think I need to worry about you, at least in normal fights. Sure, but what about Scott? I'll head home and contact the authorities. You keep going. Something strange is going on here, and the answers must be in front of you if they aren't behind you. Besides...you still have two more badges to get. All right. Just be safe, okay, May? I will, don't worry. You be safe too.
I don't know yet. I think I might visit Mt. Pyre first, see what's going on there. Maybe Team Aqua can help me. Don't worry. I won't tell a soul except my father. Thanks, May. I don't know what I'd do without you.
Oh, hey. I thought you guys were headed to Mt. Pyre? Most of us, yes, but we need to caution people away from the cave. The cave in the cove? The cove cave, yes. So you won't give up on that? We won't cave on the cove cave, no. I guess you have it covered. Yes, not caving on the cove cave is covered. What if I covet the cove cave? Even coveting the cove cave won't make us cave on covering it. Pfffft... BWA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!! HEE-HEE-HEE! Oh, man, that was great. Seriously though, don't go in. Do it again! Do it again! Wow. Just...wow. Okay, okay. Rest time. Hey, here's a nice hotel.
Everybody get behind me right now. Manic, no! I said now, Twilight. Don't make me use the pokeballs. Oh, calm down. Sorry. Death threats have a way of putting me on edge. Oh, it warms my heart to see you trembling...but as it turns out, I can't kill you yet. ...no fooling. Oh, Manic. Of all the things I've done to you, of all the things I'm going to do to you, lying isn't one of them. Let me zap him! I'll mess his brain up so bad, he'll make Derpy look like she graduated from Wassamatta U.! Pinkie brings up a valid point. Why shouldn't we take care of you here and now? Because you have better things to do. Your rescue mission isn't over.
One, two, three, four, five, six...no, that's everyone. You look confused, Twilight. Did you really think your journey would be over so easily? S-so he does know us...! Oh, it's not hard to figure out. Twilight, Rainbow, Fluttershy, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, and Rarity. Well, that answers that question, but not the first. Suffice to say, Steven should really check his pokeballs more often. I don't follow. He's saying he has Steven's pokeballs! Is that bad? His weakest pokemon is level 75. That's bad. That's very, very bad! Why, even one of them could destroy all six of us! Now, run along. You still have more work to do. Before I go, I just want to know one thing. What did I ever do to you? Hmm. You really, truly don't remember, do you? That'll make this a bit less fulfilling, but I suppose that's the price I pay. Now GO, before I bring out one of Steven's little friends for you to play with.
Applejack. I was saving this for Chester, but now, I think you should have it. Are you sure about this? Ain't powerful attacks good? Hyper Beam. 150 base power. Ain't that a kick in the flank! 90% accuracy. User must forego its next turn to recharge. Oh. It's a last-resort move. Something to use if you're sure one shot will win. Awright, I'll give 'er a try!
So, with Rainbow's help, we surfed south to Mt. Pyre. We even found out that the southern terminus of this watery path hooks up with the place where the Berry Master lives, so we can go check up on them easily after this. I just hope we're ready! A place where fallen pokemon rest doesn't sound very cheerful, and the place is enormous...
...but we're a team, all six...all seven of us. We stand together, or we fall together.
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