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Post by admin on Apr 19, 2018 2:51:15 GMT
‘Bout that time, eh, chaps? Right-o. /memes that will never die i’m so sorry Nice to see the plot starting to pick up! I suppose one of the hardest parts of writing a Nuzlocke is dealing with the early parts of the game where the stage is getting set. Pretty much. I mean, it’s possible to skirt around them (by which I mean write a story extremely loosely based on the games’ events) and just kinda use the battles and deaths as your guideposts through the plot instead of simply retelling the game, buuuuut … I admit I didn’t know that when I started writing this, lmao. (I knew about Nuzlockes, sure, but the only ones I’d ever read before this point were straight retellings.) Also, even if I did, I have to also admit that a game retelling just sort of fits what this fic needs. I don’t think I could tell this story without having Door go through the same motions as in canon, you know? Downside is, of course, the whole “gotta go through the filler stuff” bits, but hey! Thank ya! And indeed that subject will come up later on. ;D Especially as we get to know a certain character a little more. (I mean, y’all already know which one, but still.) Also! Hooo ikr, re, the “free all pokémon” message? It’s probably the part that fascinates me the most about BW, and it’s the one that I could write essays about. Because, like, I wish I could go into more detail about human-pokémon interactions and how canon treats that relationship. It’s not even just the sentience, either; it’s more like, there’s that whole bit about why pokémon allow themselves to be caught and trained in the first place and all. Like, this is one of the few times when the question of why pokémon seem to be completely okay with being thrown into rings and made to battle and all crops up, yet it’s not really adequately answered. And then— and then!—there’s that whole thing about how separation would actually work. That’s one thing I tried to address with Companions through constructing that whole cult and the whole idea that once they’re given actual free will, they’ll behave like people and just sort of go off to form their own society, humanity be damned, but with pokémon, it’s very clear that even if we don’t look at how humans and pokémon live symbiotically, they’re still this huge honkin’ niche of the ecosystem that kinda needs to interact with humans in order to make the planet work. Not to mention you try telling a six-foot, fire-breathing dragon that thinks it’s a dog that it no longer has to be friends with the being that feeds it. Buuuuut idk. I just. Had a few questions about Team Plasma’s plan, is all. *cracks knuckles* They’ll come in frequently. 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) Luckily, we have creepypasta to answer that. Nah, but forreal, pretty much. I mean, don’t get me wrong. I’m a little leery of the whole “pokémon training is inherently evil” argument and the entire “pokémon turn against humans” genre, but it’s still a valid question, especially since the actual canon of the games really pushes the whole “make friends with your pokémon and travel together” concept. Like, on the one hand, they’re literally just lines of code, less valuable to us than something like a Furby or a Tamagotchi because we’re not investing that level of care into them. We’re even encouraged to breed boxes of them thanks to things like IVs and the whole competitive battling aspect. But on the other … the happiness system. Just … the happiness system. And all those times, like the footprint guy in Gen IV and the girl who reads pokémon memories in Gen VI, when it’s clearly established that at least some of them should resonate with us emotionally. Uh … in short, imo, Pokémon the franchise puts about as much thought into what pokémon are supposed to be to us as it does its character development, lbr. Speaking of! Addressing this point and this one simultaneously! As for Blair, I have to agree with Firebrand on this one, it's hard to get a full read of her. I wasn't expecting Door to just call off the battle without a true resolution--it's not surprising given her feelings towards actual pokemon, but it's battle-battle-ba--wait stop, we're done, you're coming with us now to the city let's go ENDIt is a bit jarring. And Blair just kinda shuts down and goes with it. I’d say that’s intentional because of where Blair’s character goes after this point, but tbqh, it’s definitely not, haha. You both are absolutely correct in your reading of her, and that is one of the many, many things I could never quite fix up in earlier chapters of this fic. Truth of the matter is I actually wasn’t sure where I wanted to take her character. I mean, I knew that she would eventually be an ally to Door because she’s essentially the Bianca stand-in, and in any case, I’m a sucker for that apparent trope in Nuzlocke game retellings wherein Professor Oak’s grandson turns out to be not half bad. But! Because of that, I definitely feel like she’s a little wooden at first, which is why later chapters … well, take her in a completely different direction, mildly put. Still, the point is that I definitely see where you’re both coming from here: the whole battle does seem a little weird and abrupt and more than a little wooden, and it’s hopefully just a symbol of how uncertain I was about my footing early on here and not, yanno, a constant problem in the rest of the chapters. (Haha?) Ooooorrrrrr in other words, excellent eye to the both of you, and feel free to smack me if this issue crops up again. D: On that note…! Haha, no worries! ;D heck yeah Ngl, this run made me really like the oshawott line. I still have a soft spot for the tepig line because tepig is adorable imo, but, like, heck yeah oshawott. And lol I’m right there with you, re, snivy.I am so tempted to go into another rant about Team Plasma you don’t even knooooow. 8) Like. PRETTY MUCH, re, the whole hell-bent thing. And on the one hand, yeah, that struck a nerve for me too. On the other, that almost made them great. Oh man, if the revelation at the end of the game hadn’t happened and if canon had actually explored their philosophies in ways that weren’t kinda stupid (why is the cult-like team that advocates freeing pokémon from human control engaging in battles and abusing pokémon? ), then Plasma would probably be my faves. As it stands, my heart goes out to Aqua and Magma because at least they practiced what they preached. And did it in intentionally ridiculous ways to boot! *tents fingers* 8) There will be so many shenanigans. 8) And here comes the other half of the lesson. There's not so much difference between Team Matrix's hectoring kinda teaching style and Geist's, in a sense; both are very sharply in your face, both are reactionary responses to what is seen to be an intolerable situation. I think the nuances are explored more fully in later chapters, if I remember right. I actually don't really remember much about them at this point, so I'm looking forward to the refresher. It's been a while! You have a wonderful point concerning Geist and Team Matrix having suspiciously similar methods. *sips tea to punctuate this thought* (No, but really, they are indeed, especially around the Nimbasa arc. Here’s hoping the refresher’s enjoyable, tho~) Aww, on the other hand, there are certainly far, far worse ways to go about expressing your inner editor. I am all for lengthy discussions about techniques. 8) Why … why is politics like this. Door changes her opinions about people as frequently as she changes her team. 8)But of course! Incidentally, I read that bit about your upcoming android story on your Tumblr, and I just want to say I am 100% INVESTED IN THIS. Like … first off, this entire paragraph is an A+ summary of the hilarity of what technology now means to us as opposed to what it meant, say, back in the 60s/70s/80s, so jumping off from that and knowing how you handle sci-fi/apocalyptic lit (see: Time and Tide), I’m really interested in seeing what kind of world you build from there. Second, given the fact that it’s really damned hard to talk about androids without dipping your toes into the whole “let’s talk about the nature of humanity” discussion, it’ll be fantastically amazing to see what you do with those themes. Or if you dodge them entirely like the subversive glory that you are. But, uh, yes. Yes, to androids being hotspots. Among other things. (It slices! It dices! It talks back at you whenever you do something exceedingly stupid!) They’re just like Disney, only slightly more insidious! (Because they totally exist as a game company in game canon, so I’ll leave y’all to think about the path they must have taken to go from that to global dominance of communications. Spoilers: Amazon doesn’t exist in this universe!) Well, in your defense, fifteen-year-olds are pretty much like fourteen-year-olds, only with more of a tendency to insist that they’re not fourteen and less of a tendency to become magical girls. On that note! Today, folks, you get a two-fer. The first update is the first in a series of extras, or side chapters that give the limelight to a character other than Door for a moment. The second is the sixth chapter, otherwise known as the first in a series of infodumps I wasn’t able to fix … ever. I’d apologize, but, like…Admittedly, this is a lot, so there’s a good chance I’ll ease up and, like, hold off on updating until a solid week from now. Idk. In any case!
[EXTRA #1: ACCUMULA OUTSKIRTS] Besides the common, Accumula City didn’t have much in the way of parks. It was like most of Unova in that regard. While, certainly, the region was trending towards giving more and more of its concrete jungle back to nature, that was only a recent development, and thus, it was far more normal to live one’s whole life within the confines of a Unovan city without even conceptualizing the idea that there could be more than one park. N thought that was unfortunate. After all, he remembered the way things had been fifty years ago. The region hadn’t been young then, but it was greener. There were forests and fields and real pokémon in the vast spaces from one city to the next, but now there were gardens at most. Emptiness at least. Yet … it wasn’t nearly as bad as he thought it would be. He had heard the rumors of the life that was trickling back into this region—of the hopes that the Unovan people had that their efforts would bring pokémon back. And sure enough, although the Unovans themselves didn’t seem to realize that their efforts were already bearing fruits, N could hear the truth. The voices were whispers now, but they were there, just barely audible on the wind. They were there, too, in the tenacious, green scrub that lined the edges of the safe zones, and they were there in the meow and warmth of the pokémon he had found there, at the edge of Route 2 a week prior to his arrival in Accumula. And now? Now he was waiting, seated on a bench just outside of a playground. His fingers trailed along Purrloin’s back as the cat slept in his lap, and his eyes remained fixed on the children just beyond the wrought-iron fence. He wondered how many of them would live and die in that sprawling desert of concrete and steel or how many of them would never meet a real pokémon. He wondered if any of them knew how significant that was. “You know, people in this region tend to be leery of old guys hanging out at playgrounds.” N shifted his head to see a woman sit down beside him. She tossed her wavy, gray hair over a shoulder and gave him a dazzling smile. “Do they?” he asked. “It was a joke,” she replied. Then, she hesitated. “But … actually, yeah, probably. Anyway.” She nodded to the napping cat. “Is that one of them?” N trailed his fingers down Purrloin’s back again in thought. “Yes. His voice was so clear to me. I was drawn right to him.” The woman leaned forward, a frown stretching across her weathered face. “Yeah, but … is he the only one?” “Here? Yes. At all?” N closed his eyes and leaned his head back, as if to take in the whispers on the wind again. “No. There are others, and there will be others. I can feel it. This region is stirring, like it’s been asleep for many years.” “It practically has,” the woman sighed. “By the way, I asked around. That tip you heard from our Kalosean friend? Well. Given that Rosa saw you at the rally today, I guess I don’t need to tell you that Mr. Delacroix’s tip checked out. The splinter group migrated here after all.” N opened his eyes and scowled. “What could they want?” “Who knows? Team Plasma said they wanted something similar, but they—oh. Crap.” The woman slapped a hand over her mouth. “This is coming out wrong. N, I’m—” At that, N cut her off. “No. I agree. This is … odd.” He lowered his chin, bringing his gaze back onto the cat in his lap. “What do we do?” She shook her head. “I don’t know. Sure, it was eerily similar, but … that had to be a coincidence, right?” “Perhaps.” N scratched the pokémon behind a pointed ear. Its eyes slid open, and it picked its head up to gaze at its partner. Then, with a stretch and a yawn, it leapt up, mounting N’s shoulder and winding its way beneath his ponytail, around the back of his neck, and to his other side. It purred as it draped itself dramatically over its partner and gazed at his human friend with wide, green eyes. The woman smirked and scratched it beneath its chin. Eying her, N took a breath. “We’ll know for certain if it wasn’t a coincidence once we get to Striaton City.” The woman stopped. “Striaton City?” “Of course,” he said. “You remember what happened back then, don’t you?” Slowly, the woman pulled her hand away and leaned back. “So that’s what you were doing at the rally.” N remained silent. He gave his friend another pointed stare as he stood and shoved his hands into his pockets. Following with her eyes, the woman leaned back against the bench. “So who’s the lucky trainer?” she asked. “I don’t know what her name is yet,” N replied. “You didn’t tell me at first either.” The woman smiled. “And look at how far we’ve come. Still, I can’t help but feel sorry for the girl. Saving the world’s a tough job. Not that I regret doing it myself, of course.” “So let’s do it for her,” N said. “Good to see we’ve been around each other for far too long,” she said. “You’re starting to sound just like me.” “But you’ll do it?” His friend chuckled and rose to her feet. The chuckle turned into a slight groan as she went, and her movements were far slower than N’s. At the end of it, she dusted herself off and stretched her legs. “Well, the old bones aren’t what they used to be, but what the heck?” She gave him another broad grin. “Come on, then! To Striaton!”
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Post by admin on Apr 19, 2018 2:51:58 GMT
[CHAPTER SIX: STRIATON] Sometimes, things change slowly. Although it had been fifty years since Hilda King had traveled through that very same city, Striaton was still by and large untouched by time. Squat brick buildings lined pin-straight streets with the same dingy window displays for the old, dust-filled delis and bodegas that had been in place for the past half a century. Parks occasionally interrupted the long avenues, and these still had the same rusted equipment and overgrown trees and shrubs that had always been there. Striaton was not a place of change, and for that, Door almost felt comfortable. This was the perfect place to begin one’s trainer’s journey. This, she thought, was what Hilda must have seen all those decades ago. Or she would have thought that if, for the first part of her journey through Striaton, she wasn’t in a rush. As such, she, Geist, Opal, and Blair breezed right past the delis, past the bodegas, past every half-rotten mural or remotely interesting sight the neighborhood had to offer. The four of them were quiet, save for Opal’s intermittent, cheerful directions. But they were focused, and within the half-hour, they found the brightly lit facade of the nearest pokémon center. Blair went in first, rushing to the desk without a second thought or a thank you. Opal followed suit, chattering about trainer’s licenses and procedures for interacting with a Nurse Joy. That left Geist and Door to wander in awkward silence towards the waiting areas, where they claimed a table for themselves. Door sat down and let Scout drop to the floor, and it— he—stood, staring up at her with wide red-and-yellow eyes. She shifted uncomfortably on her feet as she stared back at him. It was odd to think of the thing standing in front of her as a pokémon—or as anything other than a toy, really—but now he had a name and a gender. Jack jumped down to stand next to the patrat and sniff at him cautiously. Other than the obvious differences of species and personality, Door realized she couldn’t tell which was real and which was fake. They both looked perfectly, completely, 100% living and breathing. And that unsettled her, even if she had named the patrat. She slid out of her chair and squatted down, struggling to make herself as small as possible to avoid startling her pokémon. Jack, who was locked in a one-sided conversation with Scout, stopped chattering to swivel his head towards his trainer. “Uh. Hey, guys,” Door said with an awkward wave. “What’s up?” Jack reeled back with a smile, his arms opening wide as he barked at Door. Scout, meanwhile, blinked at her lazily. Rubbing the back of her neck, Door said, “Wow, okay. So … great battle, I guess. Jack … we’ll get you trained up, but that was a great Tackle you did there.” The oshawott, apparently unaware that this was a backhanded compliment from his trainer, whined and leaned forward. Door reached down and stroked his head, feeling the warmth and roughness of his fur, but as she did so, her eyes fell on Scout, who made no effort to move closer. Rather than approach his trainer, he yawned and curled up right on the floor where he had stood. “Nice effort too, Scout,” Door muttered. “But maybe we should work on teaching you how to know your own strength.” Scout growled and half-closed his eyes, and Door squinted, as if trying to determine whether or not that was a good thing by studying the patrat. She slowly reached out with her other hand, inch by inch, until her fingertips grazed his pelt. It felt real—coarse and warm and slick—and Scout reacted to it by lifting his head and blinking again at his trainer. His movements were fluid and almost real, but it was the glint of his gaze, the glassiness of his eyes, that reminded her she wasn’t looking at a flesh-and-blood pokémon. Yet that was the thing about the fake ones: they weren’t supposed to be distinguishable from real pokémon until one got up close, whereas Companions, as far as she knew, were always something else. An other. And that was the thing, really. Maybe it was because of the Uncanny Valley—that weird notion that the more human a non-human thing was, the more obvious and thus unsettling it became to an actual human being—or maybe it was just something that was only obvious to Door, who knew exactly what to look for, but in her opinion, there was always something off about them. Something in their movements and in their glassy-eyed expressions that would always separate them from real, live humans. Fauxkémon, meanwhile, were different. They were designed to be as close to the real deal as possible, to fill that void real pokémon created when they vanished from Unova. And so, everything about them, from the way they looked to their mannerisms, were meant to be identical to their real counterparts. At first glance, anyway. Get closer—get on one’s hands and knees and study the fauxkémon—and one would see their glass eyes and the mechanical smoothness of their every movement. With that thought in mind, Door looked up, towards Blair. The girl stood at the front desk, keeping her back to Door and Geist. Nurse Joy had disappeared into the clinic by that point, so Blair had no one to talk to about Wilbur or the battle or anything. No one but Opal. The Companion smiled at Blair and kept her hands on the trainer’s shoulders with what might have been a reassuring grasp—Door couldn’t know for certain—but Blair wasn’t responding to her. Opal needed empathy, not just the ability to give someone sympathy, but how could a machine understand what went on in a human’s head? Door didn’t know, but she did know that if there was a Companion out there who could understand what it was like to be human, Opal was most certainly not it, even if her father had given her a personality. Something pressed against her, and she looked down in time to see Jack nuzzle her side with big, begging eyes. With a snort, she scratched him behind the ears, and in response, the oshawott trilled and pressed himself into her touch. Real. Not real. No matter how close people got to designing pokémon and androids that blurred the line, that line would always be there. This Door was certain of. And now, looking down at an affectionate oshawott and an indifferent patrat, she never felt more certain of that fact. “It’d be a good idea to talk to her, you know.” Door jumped and twisted on her knees until she looked up at Geist. He sat with his chin propped up on a hand, his eyebrows raised, and his eyes trained on Door in acute interest. Empathy. No glint. No light behind the eyes. Real. Geist was a far fling from Opal, and for that, Door was relieved. Yet she also remembered how he reacted when she tried to get Scout hurt to prove a point. Empathy. Real.Door looked away, back to her pokémon. When she spoke, her voice was quiet. “Sorry.” “Hmm? For what?” She stopped petting Jack, and with a whine, the oshawott pushed against her hand with his head. “For being stupid,” she said. “I … I got carried away. When I was about to have Scout battle that wild patrat, I mean. You were right, and I’m sorry for making you angry. And … I’m sorry for arguing with Blair, and I’m sorry about hurting Wilbur in the first place. I was just…” She stood and laced her hands through her orange bangs. “God, you must think I’m a jerk.” Geist knitted his eyebrows. “Not really. I think you’re a teenager.” She moved her arm to glare at him. That prompted him to hold up his hands. “Sorry. That came out wrong,” he said. “What I mean is you’re passionate. You might not always be … well, you might make mistakes. And that’s okay because you’re still learning.” “You make it sound like you never make mistakes,” she replied. Then, she stopped. “Sorry. I’m not trying to start an argument.” “No, it’s okay,” Geist said. “I understand what you’re saying. And … that’s not it, really. I can make mistakes too, just like anyone else. But I admire your passion.” She smirked. “Now you’re making it sound like you’re not passionate.” “Well! Sometimes.” He tilted his head as a grin broke across his own face. “I’m passionate about my work.” “Ha! Just when I thought you couldn’t get any more straight-edge.” Geist chuckled but then looked away. Another awkward silence lapsed in their conversation until he frowned and moved his gaze to the table in front of him. “Door,” he said. “May I ask you a question?” “Sure. Why not?” He studied her with a quizzical look. “Are you actually that concerned about what I think of you?” “Huh?” “Well.” He lifted a hand and motioned to her. “You apologized to me. Profusely. But many of the things you’re apologizing for would be better said to Blair, wouldn’t they?” “Oh.” Door edged back into her seat, much to Jack’s protests. She didn’t say anything more. Geist crossed his arms on the table and looked at Blair’s back. “Seeing as you’re not going to apologize to her—” “It’s just not the right time for it,” she said quickly. Then, a little softer, she added, “I mean, I’m the reason why she’s here. It … it doesn’t seem right to start a conversation. She’s probably pissed at me, especially since she’s waited so long for that tepig that she started training with her pet instead.” “I doubt it,” Geist replied. “You’d be surprised how someone would feel in situations like these.” “No. Believe me, this would be the exact wrong time for me to go over there.” Geist looked back at her. Gave her a careful, sympathetic look. And then, he shrugged. “Suit yourself,” he said. “Just promise me you’ll do it eventually, okay?” “Of course I will.” Door pressed a hand to her head, worming her fingers between locks of her hair again. “Just … not now.” “All right.” Geist pushed his hands into the table and stood. Arching his back to stretch, he yawned and began walking away. Startled by this abrupt shift in their conversation, Door jumped to her feet and strode quickly to catch up with him. She could hear Jack chatter, and as soon as she felt him jump onto her pant leg and climb up to her shoulder, she used a hand to steady him. Scout, meanwhile, remained at her heels, his tiny feet slapping against the polished floor. “Hey!” Door called to Geist. “Where’re you going?” Geist cast a nonchalant glance over his shoulder. “Back to Dr. Fennel’s laboratory, of course.” Door slowed her pace a little, but Geist didn’t. He strode with confidence to the center’s automatic doors, pausing only to let them whir open before him. “W-wait!” Door said. “Hold up! I’m supposed to escort you, remember?!” She pressed her cheek into her oshawott. “I’ve got the pokémon you need for protection, remember?” Geist led her outside and onto the street. There were crowds there, clumps of people intermingled with glow-eyed Companions meandering both ways down the sidewalk, but none of them meant anything to Door. All that mattered was that Geist was trying to walk away. Truth be told, Door couldn’t even figure out why this was so important. Just a day ago, she was looking forward to getting rid of Geist and going back to Nuvema. After all, he was just someone who, through a series of unfortunate events, became the reason why Door was stuck traveling with a fake pokémon and a Companion. But ever since that morning—ever since he snapped at her—she felt as if she had to make it up somehow, as if she had to prove that she wasn’t as bad as he must have thought she was. Perhaps it was just pride; Door did feel she had a reputation to maintain. Or maybe it was a curiosity born from this stranger—this level-headed, posh, clearly-a-respectable-aide stranger—that made her want to follow him. Or maybe it was just his own charisma. Whatever it was, Door needed to keep him in sight. She needed to finish this mission. “Hey!” she shouted. He finally stopped. Turning halfway towards her, he raised his eyebrows at her once more. “You know … Dr. Fennel’s laboratory is just a few blocks from here.” Trotting up to him, Door gasped a few times to catch her breath. “O-oh?” Geist nodded. “That’s right. Just down this street. I highly doubt that I’ll run into any interference. You don’t have to accompany me.” She shook her head. “Nope. Gotta.” “Very well, then.” Geist continued down the road, but this time, it was at a slower pace, as if he was deliberately lingering to let Door keep up. Shaking her head for a second time, Door fell into step beside him. It was another block before either of them spoke. “Are you still pissed at me?” Door asked. “Why would I be … ah, ‘pissed’?” With one hand glued to her oshawott, Door lowered herself to pick up Scout. The patrat didn’t resist; in fact, he didn’t seem to notice at all. With a few quick steps, Door caught up with Geist and held up her pokémon. “Y’know. About the whole ‘tried to make my patrat fight so it can be injured’ thing,” she said. “Did you learn from that experience?” “Well, yeah.” “I hope you did. That’s all,” Geist said. A flicker of anger rushed through Door, but she bit her tongue—physically bit it to avoid speaking thoughtlessly. As she took a deep breath through her nose, Door did her best to suppress how insulted she felt, and by some miracle, she managed to find her words once more. “Y-yeah. I did. Don’t worry,” she said. “In that case,” Geist continued, “I’m curious.” Door looked up to find Geist staring at her again. This time, his eyes were narrow, and his head was angled slightly. It was an expression of both curiosity and condescension, and for that, Door bit her tongue again. “W-what?” she asked after a moment of silence. “You never answered my question,” Geist said. “You seem very keen on making sure I don’t think badly of you. Why? A few minutes from now, we’ll be parting ways.” Door frowned and looked away, at the ground. “It’s … it’s nothing.” “Please. I’d like to know.” Door shifted Scout from one arm to another, just enough to free one of her hands. With this hand, she played with her bangs. “No, I mean it. I don’t know why. I guess I just think you’re cool. I mean, you’re an aide—” “And you’re not?” She snorted. “I’m the aide’s aide. I just do the mindless tasks Professor Ironwood or her assistant don’t have time for, like running errands and stuff like that.” Geist grinned. “That’s pretty important work.” At that, Door sighed. “If you’re trying to make fun of me, I’d hate to tell you this, but it’s not going to work on someone who agrees that her job sucks.” Without a word at first, Geist reached for Scout. Door let Geist scoop the patrat out of her grasp, and she watched him nestle Scout in the crook of his arm and pet the meerkat with his other hand. It was odd to see Geist treat the creature like a real pokémon, and much to Door’s surprise, Scout responded like one, with his eyes closing slightly as his paws stretched and batted at the air above Geist’s hand. Then Geist turned away from her, blocking the patrat from view. “Oh, don’t get me wrong. I’m not trying to make fun of you,” he said. “I’m saying, quite simply, that your job is just as important as any other in the laboratory. Even doing the most menial of tasks allows the rest of the team to function. For example, how well do you think Professor Ironwood would work if she didn’t have her morning coffee?” Door guffawed in response, but Geist raised his eyebrows at her. “I’m serious,” he said lightly. “I don’t know about Professor Ironwood, but Dr. Fennel is positively scatterbrained in the morning without at least one cup in her.” “Really?” Door asked with a snort. “Oh yes.” He grinned knowingly at her. “Don’t tell her I said that, of course, but you should see her after she stays up all night.” “Wow. Okay, I’m going to take your word for it.” Then, letting her smirk fade, she said, “But you get why I’m a little envious, right?” Geist pursed his lips and continued down the street. “Not really, no.” Wrapping her hand back around Jack’s middle, Door jogged forward to catch up with him. Once she did, she sighed heavily and replied, “I want to be a researcher someday. A real one. Someone who goes to different regions and studies real pokémon.” “The process to become a researcher like that tends to take years.” “I know. But I just don’t feel like I’ll get anywhere if all I’m doing is making coffee and doing little things.” Geist smirked. “You underestimate the value of the little things.” Door tipped her cheek against Jack to hold him steady as she threw her free hand in the air. Her otter squeaked in protest, seemingly indifferent to his owner’s exasperation. “C’mon, Geist,” Door said. “Don’t drag me into some kind of circular argument. All I’m saying is I want some time with pokémon, you know? Real ones, not fake ones. I want to see what they’re like.” “Good thing you’re keeping Jack, then,” he said. At once, Door paused. After a moment, she twisted her head awkwardly to look at the oshawott, to which he responded by butting his nose against the bridge of hers. Wincing, she frowned at Geist. “Whoa. Wait,” she said. “You were serious about that?” “Of course. As Professor Ironwood said, Jack is attached to you. It wouldn’t be good to separate a young pokémon from a trainer he’s already bonded with.” As if to punctuate this, Jack barked and nuzzled his trainer’s cheek. Door petted him carefully, still keeping her eyes on his tiny frame as best as she could. This was her pokémon. Hers. And it was real. The weight of that information had not fully sunken in by that time, but it was starting to. Hers. Her pokémon. Her real pokémon. She turned those words over and over again in her head as she walked forward again. “Hey,” she said. “Thanks.” “Don’t mention it,” he replied. “You’ll be spending a lot of time with Jack and Scout. I hope you’ll get to know them both very well.” Carefully, he set Scout on Door’s other shoulder, then gently took her hand and rested it on the back of the patrat. Scout seemed to mimic Jack, rubbing against Door’s other cheek. She shuddered and swallowed but said nothing as she stared into Geist’s grin. Yet no matter how much she resisted feeling any level of horror, the thought crept back into her head. This wasn’t a real pokémon, yet it felt so much like one. Geist did not stride forward, as Door had expected, but instead stepped to the side. Looking up, Door realized why. They had stopped in front of a set of wrought-iron gates, behind which sat a four-story, red-brick building looming over a small garden. The building looked nearly unremarkable to Door, had it not been for the courtyard. She had even mistaken it for an ordinary apartment high-rise until that moment, but now, as Geist approached the call box set in the iron fence, Door could see a host of tiny, green heads poking out of the flowers in the garden beyond the gates. Pokémon. Lots of them. Mostly grass-types like petilil and sewaddle, but there were others too, such as venipede and purrloin. Door stared through the bars at the plethora of pokémon, watching them run through the flowers or splash in the concrete pool that took up the center of the courtyard. At first, she thought these might be real, but with a shake of her head, she reminded herself that none of these pokémon existed anymore in Unova. They were fake. They had to be. “Dr. Fennel?” Geist said. Door looked back to see him stooping down, placing his face as close to the intercom as possible. “Sorry it took me so long. I’m here with the escort from Professor Ironwood.” The speaker crackled, and an older, female voice floated from it. “Ah! Geist! I was beginning to worry you were attacked again! Please, come in!” As soon as the intercom fell silent, the gates whirred and creaked open slowly, and Geist motioned for Door to follow him, which she did without question. Her eyes remained on the pokémon, even as the gates closed shut with a loud clang behind her. She squinted, staring first at the petilil darting around the flower beds and then at the pidove flitting into the fountain. Eventually, she shifted her attention back to Geist. Something wasn’t right about this place or those pokémon, but she just couldn’t put her finger on what. “Geist?” she said. “Yes, Door?” “You never told me what Dr. Fennel studied.” “Ah.” Geist stopped at the door, whirling around as he placed one hand on it. The other gestured dramatically in the air. All of this was in preparation for a perfect recitation, as if he had been waiting for Door to ask for quite some time. “Dr. Amanita Fennel, younger sister of retired poké-oneirologist Dr. Plutea Fennel,” he said. “The current Dr. Fennel is best known as both the regional administrator for the pokémon storage system and one of the most talented minds in the field of pokémon-related technology, but she has also made a name for herself in select circles for continuing her sister’s work. In short, among other things, my employer is engaged in the scientific study of pokémon dreams.” Door put her hands on her hips. “Must be a tough field. Robots don’t dream.” “I was told they dream of electric sheep.” “What?” Geist snickered and winked. “A joke. In all seriousness, the Doctors Fennel have always had plenty of subjects.” Door raised her eyebrows, her eyes widening slowly. “Really? She’s got real pokémon?” “Of course.” Geist opened his eyes fully and flicked them to the garden. With only a nod, he said everything he needed to say, but it took a second for his message to sink into Door’s mind. When it did, she gradually looked over her shoulder. Right at the frolicking pokémon. “No way,” she breathed. Geist opened the door and replied, “Way. Why do you think we had a spare set of starters to give to Professor Ironwood?” Door’s heart leapt. Spare set of starters. She could feel her heart pounding, her blood rushing to her head and fingers as she turned towards the open lab. There had to be more inside. There had to be a plethora of pokémon she had never seen in the flesh, right beyond that door. So with an excited smile, she looked up at Geist. “Are there…?” Her voice trailed off. Suddenly, she couldn’t find the words to form her question. But somehow, Geist knew. He stood aside and swept his arm towards the doorway. “See for yourself.” Door didn’t need to be told twice. Without a second thought, without another word to Geist, she rushed past him, to the inside of the laboratory. She took only two steps into the brightly lit interior before a purple blur shot at her. Instinctively, she yelped and stumbled backwards, flinging her arm out. “Scout!” she shouted. The patrat leapt off her shoulder and rammed into the purple blur, and as they tumbled to the ground, Door realized the blur was another purrloin. She could see it—hissing and digging its claws into the floor as Scout lifted himself off its back. Door swallowed hard and stared at it, watching it bare its teeth at her patrat, and the sight of its expression made Door freeze. If the pokémon outside of the laboratory were real, then this one had to be too. And as Door’s mind flitted back to Blair’s tepig, she realized one important thing: she had to be careful this time around. Hold back. Avoid hurting her target. “Okay, Scout,” she said. “Tackle!” Scout leapt the moment Door said that word. He threw his body at the cat, rushing it just as it lashed out with its front paws. Although the purrloin’s claws raked Scout’s shoulder, the purrloin’s Scratch didn’t stop the patrat from slamming into the cat’s stomach, and with that, it tumbled head-over-tail into a metal cabinet nearby. Scout shuffled to a stop and snorted with triumph until a green blur smashed into him and pinned him to the ground. Suddenly, Door’s breath caught in her throat, and she could feel her heart thunder against her ribs. There, standing on top of her patrat, just a few feet away from her, was a snivy. A snivy that glared down at its prey, twitching every so often to counter Scout’s struggling. A snivy whose eyes were wet and glistened in a way that seemed too lifelike to be glass. A snivy that Door knew had to be real. “H-ho man.” She breathed in. “Okay. You can do this. Scout! Break out and tackle!” The patrat rolled, pushing the snivy off of him, but the reptile mimicked his movements and shoved back. For a few seconds, the two tumbled in opposite directions until they stood, claws out and low growls rumbling from their throats. Then, the snivy launched itself at Scout, and before Scout could react, the patrat was ripped off his feet and sent flying backwards into a desk on the opposite side of the room. The desk shook the moment he struck its edge, and as he fell to the tiled floor, tools and a handful of screws rolled off its surface and rained down on him. He chattered as his paws grabbed at his tiny head, his orders completely forgotten. “Don’t let it out-muscle you!” she shouted. “Try again! Tackle!” Grinding his back paws into the floor, Scout shot at the snivy in a mirror of its last assault. In response, the lizard hissed and dodged, sidestepping the patrat just seconds before impact. Scout slammed into the floor before rising again and dashing after its target, but the snivy leapt out of the way and landed a foot from where it started, forcing its opponent to tumble into the legs of a table instead. Door’s hands tightened into fists at the sight of her pokémon’s second failed attempt. She knew the snivy was too quick for Scout, and because of that, she realized she had to slow it down. But how? As she watched her pokémon dash after the snivy again and again, she saw no option, no opening that the snivy left behind, and once she realized this, Door gritted her teeth and struggled to come up with a solution. That was when a pair of hands rested on her shoulders. She jumped and half-turned away from the battle just as Geist leaned over her. “Relax,” he said. “A pokémon is only as good as its trainer—a faux one especially. Watch the battle. Take note of your opponent’s every move.” Door looked back. Without further orders, Scout continued to execute Tackle after Tackle, only to strike the floor as the snivy danced out of his reach. But then, Door transferred her focus to the snivy, watching it land, shift its feet, and turn to observe Scout. The moment she was looking for was quick, but pause was there. All she needed to figure out now was how to take advantage of this. Door frowned, letting that thought sink in. “You saw it, right?” Geist asked. “Snivy is keeping its distance. It knows Scout is fake. It can’t wear him down or put itself in range of its attacks, so it’s waiting for Scout to damage himself.” “So what do I do?” Door asked. “You remember that clever trainers use what they have. Including what’s on the battlefield.” Geist nodded to the desk. Door followed his gaze to see the scattered tools and parts on the floor, then the ones still on the top of the desk, then the toolbox sitting in the exact center of the mess. Oh.“Scout!” she called. “Rush Snivy from the side!” The patrat’s ears perked, and his eyes flashed once. Door looked back to the pokémon in time to see Scout dash in an arc towards the snivy. As it watched him, the grass-type hissed again and leapt back to dodge yet another Tackle. It came close to where Door needed it, but it wasn’t close enough. “Again! But come at its front!” Door ordered. Scout drove itself towards the snivy, forcing it to dodge backwards one more time. Its back struck the desk, and the toolbox lurched closer to the edge. “Again!” Door shouted. “From the front!” Without a second thought, Scout dove at the snivy, and the lizard dove out of the way. Door wondered if the snivy underwent an epiphany right then and there. She had never handled real pokémon, and as such, she didn’t know how advanced their intellects actually were. Maybe they did comprehend tactics or danger the way humans did. Maybe they didn’t. Either way, she knew the snivy understood something, as the second Scout plowed into the desk and sent the toolbox crashing onto the floor between him, the lizard’s eyes widened, and it froze with an expression Door was almost certain wasn’t just shock from the loud noise and sudden movement. “Now!” Door cried. Bursting from the wreckage of the toolbox, Scout rushed at the snivy. Its eyes snapped to him, but the distraction shook it just enough to keep it rooted to the spot for a second too long. Scout threw all his body weight right into the snivy before it could even flinch. And then, it exploded in a puff of pink smoke. For a long while, no one said anything. Door simply stood, stunned, as she locked her eyes on her patrat. The patrat looked back at her and blinked lazily, both eyelids lowering and rising again in a slow glide. And then, Geist finally broke the silence with a heavy sigh and a light pat on Door’s shoulders. “Almost but not quite, Dr. Fennel,” he said. With that, he strolled forward, hands folding behind his back and eyes on the open staircase on the other side of the room, and at long last, Door realized they weren’t alone. A short, stocky woman idled halfway up the stairs with one hand on the banister and the other in the pocket of her lab coat. Her blue eyes sparkled behind a pair of oval glasses in a way that reminded Door of Professor Ironwood’s smile, and in response to Geist’s comment, she tipped her head towards the pink, blob-like creature floating beside her. This gave the purrloin—the same battered one that Scout had knocked down a moment ago—enough room to leap onto the woman’s shoulder and nestle itself under the graying, chestnut bob of her hair. “It was a good try anyway,” she said. She pulled her hand out of her coat pocket and placed it on the purrloin’s back. “One of them seems stable, at least. You’ll be pleased to know your hypothesis about using a psychic gem to boost the tangibility was correct, but I’d like to do an experiment involving a fragment of a mind plate eventually. No doubt the pokémon that come out of that will be even better!” “I can put out a call to Bebe Larson if you’d like,” Geist replied. “The plates manifest most frequently in the Sinnoh Underground. She would know if anyone had unearthed a mind plate recently.” The woman smiled. “Armed with good ideas as usual. That’s my assistant.” She beckoned Door forward with her free hand. “But it’ll have to wait. We have guests, Geist! You must be Doreen, Professor Ironwood’s assistant.” “It’s … it’s Door,” Door stammered with a blink. “Door it is, assuming you’ll call me Amanita,” she replied. “I’d imagine that Geist has been referring to me as ‘Dr. Fennel’ this and ‘my employer’ that. He has an unfortunate habit of being too formal around company he’s not used to, I’m afraid.” At that, Geist turned his head and coughed into one of his fists, keeping the other hand behind his back. Door ignored him, stepped forward, and gestured towards the empty space where the snivy had been. “Um,” she said. “Don’t worry about the mess,” Amanita responded. “I’ll clean it up later. That was a great battle, by the way! A bit basic, but for a new trainer, it’s clear you have a lot of potential.” Door swallowed. “ Um.” “Dr. Fennel, I believe Door is trying to ask for an explanation,” Geist said lightly. Amanita raised her eyebrows. “Oh! Of course!” She motioned towards the blob, which eased its red eyes open and stared directly at Door. “Door, this pokémon is called a munna. You do know about munna, don’t you?” Door furrowed her eyebrows. “Sure. Psychic-types. Distant cousins of the drowzee line. They eat dreams.” “Right,” Amanita replied. “But they also expel—” “Dream mist. I know.” Amanita lowered her hand as a surprised smile played across her face. “Do you?” “Yeah,” Door said with an uncomfortable shrug. “Professor Ironwood told me all about munna.” “Good old Bianca,” Amanita said. “But yes. Dream mist. You do know, then, what dream mist can do, right?” “It can—” Door stopped, then threw a glance to the space where the snivy had been. “Oh. You’re not telling me that…” Amanita’s smile grew broader. “That’s exactly what I’m telling you.” At that, Door couldn’t help but relax. Her shoulders fell, and her posture slouched as she exhaled. “Oh. So it wasn’t real.” “Oh, it was real.” Door shot Amanita a look. Her eyebrows furrowed, her mouth scrunched up, and her every muscle dedicated themselves to conveying how deep her confusion was. “What?” she asked. Amanita chuckled and reached out to pet her munna. It huffed and rubbed against her, bobbing a little closer to its master. At the same time, Amanita’s other hand shifted to the purrloin’s head, and the cat purred and batted its tail back and forth. “You see,” Amanita said, “it’s true that dream mist possesses certain hallucinogenic properties, and typically, it creates illusions, not tangible objects. However, I’ve been experimenting with boosting Munna’s telekinetic and somnokinetic abilities to the point where, if she wills it, she can compress the dream mist she exudes and convert it into portals.” Door took another step forward. “Portals? What … what do you mean by portals?” At that moment, Geist cleared his throat, and Door looked up to see him sweeping up the area around the desk with a broom and long-handled dustpan. The tools Door had scattered were already sitting neatly beside the toolbox on the desk. “How much do you know about the Entralink?” Geist asked. “Not much,” Door admitted. “But then again, there’s not much to know about it. It’s a wasteland, isn’t it? Absolutely no one permitted inside?” He looked up with a smirk. “And why do you think that is?” Door considered this. It was common knowledge, sure, but why? She struggled to recall all the things she learned about it—all the lessons in school that had centered around Unovan geography. She remembered her school books, her teachers’ lectures, her entire education, and in her memories, all of the information she could recall about the Entralink could be condensed into a single paragraph. It was a vibrant place once upon a time: a vast forest full of life and pokémon smack in the heart of Unova. And then, when the pokémon disappeared, so did the forest, which left the Entralink little more than a desert. This wasn’t some government cover-up either; the photographs of the Entralink’s shrinking green expanses were used in environmental protests for decades until the pokémon population finally collapsed. So Door couldn’t help but stare at Geist blankly instead of answering his question. She literally couldn’t tell him why it was off-limits. It just was, even if there was literally nothing there. Luckily, he seemed to know, so after resting the broom and the dustpan against the desk, he clapped his hands together and said, “Because it’s unstable now that there are no pokémon.” “Un … unstable? What do you mean?” Door asked. “Perhaps we should just give you a straight answer here,” Amanita replied. “Even back when real pokémon existed in this region, the Entralink wasn’t fully understood. That’s what my sister’s research set out to uncover: the exact nature of that very spot. Somewhere along the line, she discovered something interesting, and that something was the fact that whoever named the Entralink knew how to pick ‘em.” “Huh?” “I mean,” Amanita continued, “that the Entralink is an entry and a link to a different place: the Dream World.” The ensuing silence was palpable. Door stood, staring up at Amanita blankly, and Amanita smirked back at her. Then, after a minute passed, the researcher sighed and draped her wrists over the banister. “Well? Aren’t you going to ask me what the Dream World is?” she asked. “Oh-kay,” Door said, drawing each syllable out over one long exhale. “What’s the Dream World?” Amanita slapped the banister. “Glad you asked! The Dream World is exactly what you think it is: the world constructed from pokémon dreams.” Pausing, Amanita pushed herself up, placing one hand on the banister and the other on her hip. “Don’t look at me like that! You’ve already seen a tangible part of this dream world in the form of dream mist. It’s just that the Dream World is something bigger, something that can be shared between pokémon. It is, in other words, another dimension formed from the collective dream energy of every pokémon in existence. While there are different entry points to this other dimension, the biggest weak point in the barrier between reality and the Dream World was once located at the heart of the Entralink. To push through it, all a trainer needed was a sleeping pokémon and a handy little device my sister and I created with the help of dream mist we collected.” “The C-Gear,” Geist finished. “We would give you one, but it’s unfortunately rather useless at this point. What Dr. Fennel forgot to mention is that without pokémon, there isn’t enough dream energy in Unova to support the bridge between the Dream World and reality. Thus, with the disappearance of the last wild pokémon in the region, the Entralink collapsed. This isn’t to say that there’s nothing but desert there, of course. Although the dreaming pokémon are gone, their dream energy lingered, congealing into what’s known as dream bubbles. Thus, whereas long ago, pokémon could direct dream energy within the Entralink to become things their trainers may desire, the undirected dream bubbles are left to become something far more dangerous.” “What, monsters?” Door asked. “No, actually, bombs.” She gave him a long, steady look. “Seriously?” “Seriously,” Geist replied. “Without pokémon to shape them into stable forms, dream bubbles have an unfortunate habit of converting themselves back into energy of the ordinary, non-dream variety in the most violent ways possible. It’s not pleasant, and the government understood that. So the Entralink became off-limits until the last of the dream bubbles clear off.” “Okay, so I got all that,” Door said, “but what does this have to do with that snivy being real?” “Well, therein lies the interesting part,” Amanita told her. “You see, the reason why we know the Dream World was a dimension and not merely electrical pulses in a pokémon’s brain is because it was possible to pull things from the Dream World into our own.” “So … what? Snivy was a dream pokémon?” Door asked. “Oh yes,” Amanita answered. “From Munna’s dream. You see, Geist and I have been researching ways to use dream mist to create portals to the Dream World anywhere, not just the Entralink. It ties in with a theory we have about the sudden reappearance of real pokémon.” “Whoa.” Door held up her hands and moved forward a little more. “Whoa, wait. Are you saying there are real pokémon in this region?” “Why, yes.” “Not just in your front yard.” Amanita’s smile returned. “Of course.” And at that, Door’s eyes widened. “But … where? How?” “We don’t entirely know,” Geist said. “That’s what we’re trying to find out. But we do know that that munna up there was among the first.” He nodded to the munna bobbing beside Dr. Fennel. As Door looked at her, she closed her eyes and sang, thrilled to be the center of attention for once. The munna didn’t look particularly out-of-the-ordinary to Door—no distinguishing marks or special color or aura of power or anything else she would have expected from something so powerful it apparently blinked to life out of nowhere. If anything, it looked exactly like the faux munna Door had seen on televised gym battles and tournaments. Then again, there were always other possibilities. “Are you sure it’s native? Maybe it was abandoned,” Door reasoned. “Or maybe its parents were. There’re munna habitats in Kalos and Hoenn, right?” “All very good theories,” Amanita answered. “Professor Ironwood taught you well. But no, this one was born here; after all, we found her egg in the Dreamyard. No parents in sight.” She hesitated. “Of course, this isn’t to say that we’re ruling out the idea of a parent munna or musharna somewhere in the Dreamyard, especially given the strange bit of activity that happened after we found the egg.” “Activity?” “Sure.” Amanita nodded to Jack, still perched on Door’s shoulder after all this time. “All of the pokémon in this lab, your oshawott included, suddenly appeared there too. Fully formed, no less, not as eggs. This all began happening less than a month ago, and we’ve been working to figure out what we’re dealing with since. So, yes, we think there’s a parent munna or musharna somewhere in the Dreamyard and that the Dreamyard itself has become an alternate entry point to the Dream World in lieu of the Entralink, but we haven’t been able to find the pokémon or a portal yet. In the meantime, we’re testing the stability of pokémon pulled from there, which is why Professor Ironwood agreed to give away three Dreamyard-born starters to trainers. It’s to test whether or not they’re stable, as you might’ve guessed with the fate of the snivy you’ve battled just a moment ago.” Amanita dropped her hand. “Unfortunately, our munna’s not quite as strong as whatever’s in the Dreamyard. Whatever she pulls out of the Dream World is sent back there if they take too much damage in reality. Bit of a pesky problem, but it’s not her fault.” Munna hummed and bowed her head before nuzzling against Amanita again. In response, Amanita petted the psychic gently. Meanwhile, Door shifted her head to look at Jack, who had been quiet since the moment they had walked in. It was odd to Door that he would be, considering he seemed so friendly and chattery every other time she looked at him, but now, perhaps after seeing the snivy get banished back to the Dream World—or whatever really happened—he seemed distant. Silent. Even as Door reached up to stroke the side of his head, he didn’t respond. And then, she realized why. He had watched something just like him vanish in a puff of smoke, and she didn’t even think twice about how he felt on the matter. Biting her lip, Door thought about the weight of what she had just learned and what she had just done. Everything came to her so quickly that she had forgotten completely about Jack and how he had to have felt. To be fair, all the things Amanita and Geist had just told her was too much, so it was hard not to be distracted. There were real pokémon. An entire alternate dimension. Some kind of weird magic energy that sprouted from pokémon dreams. And all of this came to her on what was just the second day of her journey—a journey she didn’t want to take in the first place. Yet despite the fact that this might have been her reason for not noticing Jack’s silence, it still didn’t excuse what she had done. “Hey,” she said quietly. “The snivy. Is it … is it okay?” The scientist stopped petting her munna and smiled. “Oh yes. Of course it is. Like I said, the Dream World is an entire alternate dimension. It’s possible to pull things from it, and it’s possible to send things back. Your patrat did a number on that snivy, but I’m sure it’s recovering back in the Dream World where it belongs.” Amanita began petting Munna again. “It’s a nice place actually. The Dream World, I mean. I haven’t seen it since the Entralink collapsed, of course, but how could I forget what that kind of place looked like?” At that, finally, Jack stirred under Door’s touch. He chattered softly, nuzzling against Door’s chin. Door breathed a sigh of relief but then thought about Jack—about figuring out a way to apologize to him properly. And then, it hit her. “The Dreamyard,” she said. “It’s close to here, right?” “That’s right,” Amanita replied. “Could I … do you think I could bring Jack to see it?” “Any particular reason why?” Door leaned her head into her otter’s shoulder. “I just think it’d be nice to let him see where he came from.” Amanita moved her hand, using it to prop her chin up as she rested her elbow on the banister. “Well, I don’t suppose I could deny that. Of course you can. Under one condition.” “Condition?” “Yes. Just one condition.” Amanita inclined her head towards her assistant. “Geist, you’ll have to take her to Striaton Gym. She’ll need to earn her way into the Dreamyard.” Door recoiled. “I … what? You want me to earn a badge, just to enter the Dreamyard?” “Unfortunately, yes,” Amanita said. “No one can enter the Dreamyard unless they’ve gotten express permission from the local gym leaders, and the local gym leaders only hand out permission to trainers who’ve proven themselves capable of handling pokémon in a humane manner. And anyone who’s working for me, of course.” “Seriously?” Amanita shrugged. “Leader’s rules. And to be fair, it’s also always been the gym leader’s duty to protect the Dreamyard since the laboratory was abandoned. It’s dangerous there too, you know. Granted, that’s more because there’s a collapsing, abandoned building in there than because of all the reasons why you can’t get to the Entralink anymore.” “Oh.” Door shifted on her feet. “That … actually makes sense.” “‘Course it does. Now, Geist, if you don’t mind, why don’t you come upstairs and help me make the arrangements? I’ll need to speak with you privately about what happened in Nuvema anyway.” “Yes, of course.” As soon as he said those words, Geist stepped forward until his feet mounted the stairs. Then, with one last glance to Door, he told her, “This should only take a moment. Please wait right there.” With that, Amanita, Geist, and the two pokémon disappeared through the entrance to the second floor, but Door stood back a short distance from the staircase. Her hand rested on Jack, but her eyes fell on Scout, who ambled up to stand at her feet. After some time, she exhaled. “Well, guys,” she said, “you up for a gym match?” Scout inclined his head in quiet incomprehension, but Jack whined on her shoulder and pushed his face into her neck. At those responses, Door frowned and glanced back towards the laboratory’s front door. “Me too,” she muttered.
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Post by bay on Apr 20, 2018 6:50:38 GMT
For fourth chapter, I'm in the same boat concerning Blair there. I think it's because she was coming off as Blue but perhaps a sharper tongue, so Blair and Door's first interaction did feel force there. I still look forward how she'll develop further on, though. With that out of the way, aw Door is warming up to Scout too and I like that she's begining to learn to hold back.
The extra I don't have much to say but oh is that Hilda? If so, wonder if she'll play a role here too.
Fifth chapter, another nice Geist and Door interaction there. Even college graduates will start from the bottom too Door, but hey you have Jack so have him with fun for as long as you can. And oh, interesting take on the Dream World there. I think I prefer the real Pokemon be taken to the Dream World after they get injured instead of horrible gory death heh. I want to do an "android dream of sheep" joke but Geist already beat me to it. = P Door's having her first gym then, should be exciting.
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Post by FifthQuin on Apr 23, 2018 4:56:01 GMT
I completely forgot mention this, but Fauxkémon is far too good of a name. Visually, the 'x' and 'k' kinda hurt to see next to each other, but the pronunciation is clever enough to be criminal.
Speaking of criminal, I see what you're doing. All that technobabble, it's just an elaborate, convenient in-universe explanation on the nintendo servers being down--you can't fool me!
Seriously though, as technobabble goes, it's not horrible. I feel some of the denser paragraphs can be broken and spaced apart, but after a complete rug-pull of the end of the Snivy fight, I think such an extended explanation is warranted. I do agree that even if broken up, it is a dense chunk of information to swallow. But it is interesting, and with Door's reactions are genuine enough to help the reader through it one piece.
The extra is a nice little topping to have as well (though presentation-wise it may have been better to attach it to the previous chapter than this one but... /shrug ). The banter between Hilda and N, however short, shows the rapport the two have gained, and just how far N has changed in his ideals.
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Post by admin on Apr 26, 2018 1:20:59 GMT
*cracks knuckles* Welp! Breaktime’s over! For fourth chapter, I'm in the same boat concerning Blair there. I think it's because she was coming off as Blue but perhaps a sharper tongue, so Blair and Door's first interaction did feel force there. Hilariously, “Blue with a sharper tongue” was what I was going for, but then I realized I wanted her to be something else, lmao. As for what she ends up being instead, well, luckily, you’ll get a glimpse of that by the end of the Striaton arc. Oh yes. 8) As for what her role is, let’s just say Door’s gonna need allllllll the help she can get. Thank ya! And ikr? I mean, I used to be able to write these huge, gory, ultra-violent scenes, but idk, the older I get, the more I’m like, “That sounds really tedious to write,” haha. So instead, you get pink smoke and instatransport back to an alternate dimension. (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ I completely forgot mention this, but Fauxkémon is far too good of a name. Visually, the 'x' and 'k' kinda hurt to see next to each other, but the pronunciation is clever enough to be criminal. A term that’s both painful and satisfying to the reader. I HAVE SUCCEEDED. 8) 8) 8) crap they’re on to meHuh, the bit about breaking it up into multiple paragraphs is a fair point, actually. At the very least, it’d make it easier for folks to keep track of where they are in that explanation, lbr. That aside, actually, thank you! This part always worries me because one of the biggest crits I’ve received about it otherwise is the fact that it’s a little infodumpy, but I’ve never been able to figure out how to better word it or what to do about it because, word, the explanation has to happen (not only because of the snivy but also because everything Door has just learned is hella incredibly important to the plot to the point where there may or may not be a pop quiz later), but on the other hand, this is probably the best way I’ve come up with to get that across. I just kinda resigned myself to saying, “This is 100% true to Amanita’s and Geist’s characters,” but it doesn’t stop me from worrying whenever folks say they’ve gotten to this chapter. D: Same with chapter 9, actually, but we’ll get to that. Fair point about attaching it to the previous chapter! I had considered it, but one of the reasons why the extras are, well, extras is because folks thought it felt weird to be following Door’s POV for so long, only to jump into someone else’s for half a chapter. orz So the extras, while somewhat important to the plot (because Sideplot A will eventually be relevant, I swear), are designed to stand essentially alone so it feels less jarring when you jump from Door to a gym leader or N or what-have-you. Or I hope, anyway. But! On the other hand, I hear you about this because, well, it takes place on the same night as N’s battle with Door, so this is a fair point. D: All in all, tho, thank you, and thanks to bay as well! So, as a heads up, heading out of town for the weekend, meaning for the second week in a row, you just get this update and a delayed roundup and whatnot. Sorry! But! On the positive side, it’s a gym chapter, so at least I’m leaving you with something interesting to look at?
[CHAPTER SEVEN: STRIATON GYM] Door was a little miffed. To be fair, she felt a little miffed because she also felt underdressed and highly confused, but this was secondary to the fact that she was mostly miffed, highly confused, and underdressed all at once because Geist had led her to a fine dining restaurant instead of a pokémon gym. At three in the afternoon, no less. Not that she particularly minded getting free food. Sure, she would have preferred something a little less pretentious than anything off a menu that happened to be largely in French, but the point was she didn’t have to pay for it. It was just that she couldn’t figure out why Geist chose to bring her here. She squinted at the menu, struggling to make sense of not only the French names but also the International Common descriptions for each dish (what the hell was foie gras?), and when she gave up on that, she sighed heavily, set it aside, and glared at her partner. He sat across a white-covered table from her, one hand on his water glass and the other resting nonchalantly on his closed menu. His eyes stared across the room, and as Door followed his gaze—passing over a massive, elegant dining area stocked full of empty tables, a cleanly uniformed waitstaff of Companions, and the occasional well-dressed patron—she came to a stage on the far end. Or, it might have been a stage. Door wasn’t entirely positive what it was, truth be told. It simply looked like a wide space extending into the dining area but blocked off by a thick, red curtain. Was it a stage? Perhaps a ballroom floor for functions? A place for a live band at nights? Did upscale French restaurants have bands? Door reached for her glass to take a long, nervous drink. “You’re wondering why we’re here,” Geist said without taking his eyes off the curtain. Door sputtered into her glass and came up gasping. “Th-that thought crossed my mind.” Turning his head to her, he lifted his hand off his drink and signaled for a waiter. As if by magic, a young man with wild, red hair swept across the room, pulling a pad and pencil out of the pocket of his apron. This man, Door noticed, was not a Companion. The slightly apathetic expression on his face gave him away; actual service Companions were eternally perky, regardless of how many plates of foie gras with pickled wepear berries they had to serve. “Have we decided?” he asked, his voice low and smoky. “We have indeed,” Geist replied. He held up his menu, offering it to the waiter. “One bottle of fresh water each, please. My friend would like the chef’s special.” “Chef’s special?” the waiter asked, hovering his pencil over the pad. “We called ahead,” Geist explained. The waiter grinned and pocketed both the pad and his writing utensil. “Of course. Just one moment.” He walked quickly away from the table. Door followed him with her gaze until he disappeared through a set of double-doors to the side of the dining room—doors that, judging from the glimpse of the room beyond it, led to the kitchen. As soon as he was gone, Door turned back to Geist. “Okay, I’ll bite.” She paused, then shook her head. “No pun intended. What’s going on?” Geist smiled innocently, laced his fingers together, and placed his hands on the table. “Door, I’m surprised. Even considering your lack of interest in pokémon training, I would have thought someone who worked for our region’s foremost pokémon professor would have recognized what this place is by now.” “We’re in a French restaurant.” “Beyond that.” “We’re in a very pretentious French restaurant.” Geist guffawed but covered his mouth with the back of a hand. “All right. I can’t disagree there. This isn’t my favorite place to eat either. Nor is it Dr. Fennel’s, for that matter. I think the two of us have only ever come here on the very rare occasion that a graduate from the Trainers’ School seemed particularly interesting.” Door put an elbow on the table and rested her cheek on her hand. “What, do you throw a wild party here, or is this the pokémon gym?” “As a matter of fact, the latter.” Geist picked up his glass and examined the water inside. “Sometimes the former too. It depends on whether or not Bebe Larson is also in town.” In response, Door contracted her lips into a pucker as she stared at Geist for a second. Then, she finally furrowed her eyebrows and said, “I was kidding, but okay.” Geist placed his glass back down and tilted his head at Door. “My apologies. Allow me to go into a bit more detail. Door, this is—” “Le Jardin Potager,” another voice chimed in, “the foremost establishment of French cuisine in all of Unova … and, as your friend says, the Striaton Gym.” Door jumped in her seat and twisted around to see a blue-haired man in a sharp, black suit standing behind her. She stopped, taking in his sparkling smile and the depth of his ocean-blue eyes. Everything about him seemed smooth—slicked back, sprayed with cologne, pressed, and polished. He bowed and extended a pale hand to her, and she swallowed. “Welcome,” he said. “You must be Doreen Hornbeam. Dr. Fennel has reserved a bit of our time, it seems, and I do apologize that I failed to meet you at the door. My name is Sumac. I am part owner and full general manager of Le Jardin Potager, as well as one of its three possible gym leaders. The water specialist, to be exact.” “Oh,” Door said. “I gotcha. Striaton Gym’s the one that does the whole three gym leader thing, right?” “A tradition passed down to us by our respective fathers, yes. Speaking of which…” Sumac drew back and motioned to the red-haired waiter, who had seemingly materialized out of nowhere with a tray balanced on his shoulder. “Allow me to introduce you to my cousin, Savory, the fire specialist.” “Pleasure to meet you,” he said with a bow. His hand moved fluidly from the tray to the table, depositing a pair of water bottles at its center. “I look forward to your battle.” As he drew himself back up, he slid the tray into his hands at his front and cast a glance to his cousin. “Sage will be meeting us behind the curtain. We’re ready when you are, Sumac.” “Ah, such a shame I don’t have more time for theatrics,” Sumac responded with a grin. “Very well. I’ll escort Miss Hornbeam to the stage in a moment. Go ahead and take your place.” “Of course.” With another sweeping bow, Savory lifted his eyes to Door and winked. “Good luck, Miss Hornbeam.” Then, he turned and walked quickly towards the curtain. Reaching up to play with the bottle of water, Door shifted in her seat. “It’s … I prefer Door,” she said. “Just … just Door, if you don’t mind.” “Ah! Of course. My apologies again, Door,” Sumac responded. He rested his hand against his chest as if to punctuate this thought, and Door couldn’t help but find the gesture to be a little overdramatic. “Tell me, though. Do you know why there are three leaders at this gym?” Door shrugged. “Sure. Because back in the day, whoever had a type advantage against a trainer’s starter would be the one to battle. It was supposed to make things even more challenging for beginners.” “A fantastic way to set the stage for the rest of the Unova League, wouldn’t you say?” he asked. She couldn’t help but grin—genuinely this time, but also with a hint of confidence. “I’ll say. Please tell me that’s exactly what you’re doing now.” “That is, in fact, exactly what we’re doing now,” Sumac answered with a flashy grin of his own. “So tell me, Door. If I sent a grass-type out to battle you, what type would be best to meet it?” “Easy.” Door leaned back in her chair, slinging an arm over its back. “Fire. Like the ones Savory trains.” “And if I sent a fire-type?” “Water. Like your pokémon.” “And a water-type?” “Grass. Which I’m guessing your other cousin trains.” “You would be correct,” Sumac replied. He placed a hand on the table and spread his manicured fingers across the crisp, white cloth. “So, Door. What type is your starter, then?” Door stood up, shoving one hand in her pocket to feel Jack’s poké ball. As she did, her smirk grew. “Water. My starter’s an oshawott.” Sumac clapped his hands together and smiled. “Then allow me to introduce you to my other cousin.” He threw an arm towards the curtain with a wide, sweeping gesture. “The challenger, Door Hornbeam of Nuvema City, wishes to battle Sage, gym leader of Striaton Gym!” His voice lowered back to its normal volume as he threw a look at Door over his shoulder. “And, if I may add, one hell of a head cook. Win, and perhaps dinner will be on her.” Before them, the curtains parted dramatically, swinging back to reveal a wide-open hardwood floor painted with the lines of a battlefield. A young woman with a bright, green ponytail stood in its center, her hands pressed against the waist of her chef’s jacket. Beside her stood Savory, who gestured to the woman. “Presenting the head chef of Le Jardin Potager and the grass-type gym leader of Striaton City, Sage Escoffier!” he announced. Sage smirked and locked her green eyes on Door. “Ah, challenger! Welcome to Striaton Gym! I look forward to sampling the flavor of your techniques! Please approach the battlefield!” Door took a deep breath and strode forward. This was it. Her very first gym battle. She had dreamed of this moment since she was a girl and hoped that one day, she would do it with real pokémon. But as she snaked her hand back into her pocket, she felt Jack’s poké ball. Was he ready? Gym battles were more intense than ordinary fights against wild pokémon or other trainers, and Jack hadn’t done much battling since he had joined Door’s team. Not only that, but also, Door thought back to Jack’s battle against N—how afraid he seemed. How easily he was beaten aside. And then there was the snivy in Amanita’s lab, the one that vanished in a puff of pink smoke after only a handful of attacks. With another deep breath, Door dug a little deeper into her pocket and felt Scout’s ball. No, Jack wasn’t ready. But Scout was. Or so she hoped. She took her place on one end of the battlefield as Sage walked to the other. Not once did the gym leader take her eyes off her challenger, and Door wondered how frequently the chef left the kitchen for a good battle. Clearly, given how confident Sage seemed to be, it must have been often. Door swallowed for a second time and silently prayed that she was ready. “So,” Sage said. “How long have you been a trainer?” “I guess two days,” Door replied. Sage chuckled. “You move quickly. All right! I’m honored to be your first gym experience, then! Allow me to tell you how this is going to go. It’s a two-on-two match. Only the challenger may switch pokémon. No time limit, and fauxkémon are allowed. Out-of-bounds counts as a knock-out. Got it?” With that, Door pulled Scout’s poké ball from her pocket. Pressing the button, she felt it expand in her hand until it clicked. The movement felt fluid, natural—more so than any other time Door held it. And because of that, she smirked. “Oh yeah,” she said. “Standard rules, then. Don’t hold back just because I’m new. I’ve been studying under Professor Ironwood for years.” “Spirited,” Sage commented. She tilted her head and reached into her own pocket. “I like that. All right, then! I won’t hold back, and neither should you! Brioche, go!” Sage tossed her poké ball to the center of the field, and Door followed suit. With a pair of flashes, two pokémon materialized on the battlefield: Scout and a puppy that looked exactly like Toto in every way. Door stiffened, remembering Blair for a second. She balled her hands into fists and hoped, at least, that this battle would end far, far differently. “Whenever you’re ready, challenger,” Sage said. “I’ll let you have the first move.” “Hold on! Door!” She broke her gaze away from the battle to glance towards the tables. Geist rose to his feet, his eyes locked on Scout. “I forgot to mention!” he called. “You’ve been using Scout for a lot of battles lately! That means he’s probably learned new moves by now. If Professor Ironwood taught you anything about the pokémon common to this region, think back on everything you know about patrat!” Sage chuckled, drawing her challenger’s attention back to the battle. “Your friend’s observant.” “He’s also got a point,” Door replied. Then, throwing her hand forward, she commanded, “Scout! Try Sand Attack!” Without even questioning the order, the patrat spun, swiping his paw down into the floor. The motion was clear to Door: Geist was right. Scout did know more moves. And that realization lifted her spirits, even though Scout’s paw did nothing more than grind against the floor. She didn’t entirely expect Scout to turn the floorboards into the dirt and sand needed for the technique she had ordered; in fact, she was convinced that nothing would happen at all. But now that she could see she hadn’t entirely wasted her turn, a new plan was quickly forming in her mind. “Not a strong start,” Sage quipped. “Brioche! Let’s show her how to really prepare for a battle! Work Up!” The puppy dropped itself low to the floor and emitted a steady growl. Red light swirled around its body as it visibly tensed, and its growl grew louder and louder. Then, at the last second, Brioche snapped back to its full height, threw its head back, and howled, and the light around it burst into a brilliant, red aura. To Door, the creature looked like it was on fire, and with that thought in mind, she ground her teeth together and took a step back. She knew what Work Up did. She had even seen pokémon in televised tournaments use it now and then. But now, faced with a pokémon that was using it to prepare for a strike against her, she had to shake off her nervousness before even thinking about fighting back. And then, she poured all her hope into a guess. “Scout, you’ve got to take that lillipup out quickly!” she shouted. “Use Crunch!” She didn’t expect anything to happen. She really didn’t. But then, to her shock, Scout opened his mouth wide, and a white light burst from his fangs. Before anyone could move, he barreled right for the lillipup, closing the short distance between them until he smashed his teeth into its shoulder. The puppy emitted a mechanical squeal as Scout’s jaws crunched straight through its fake fur and into its metal exoskeleton, and Brioche’s front legs flailed desperately against Scout’s tiny body. Then, with strength Door didn’t even know he had, Scout lashed once and released, sending the lillipup flying into the wall behind Sage. It slammed hard into it, leaving behind a dent as it crashed to the floor. When it struck the ground, it struggled back to its feet and blinked a few times, but before it could move back into the ring, Savory threw an arm into the air. “Stop!” Savory announced. “Brioche is out-of-bounds! Match goes to the challenger’s patrat!” Sage chuckled again and drew Brioche’s poké ball into the open. The puppy vanished with a flash of red light, and its trainer paused, grinning at her challenger. “My, my,” she said. “You’re a lot stronger than I would have thought for someone who’s only been a trainer for two days.” Door thought back to N and Blair and Amanita’s snivy again, and she shrugged at Sage’s comment. “It’s been a really long two days.” “So I see.” Sage pocketed Brioche’s ball and drew out a second one. “Well, Mademoiselle Hornbeam, I made the mistake of underestimating you once, but I’m not doing it again! Pomme, go!” She tossed the next ball into the ring. Door steeled herself, taking another deep breath as she waited. This was it. The grass-type. The gym-trained grass-type, no less. She couldn’t possibly risk sending out Jack at this point; given how little he had battled compared to Scout, Door knew he wouldn’t be able to stand his ground. So silently, she prayed that Scout’s victory against Sage’s lillipup wasn’t just a fluke. The light streaming from Sage’s next poké ball burst and faded away, and Door found herself staring at a green monkey. As the pansage glared at Scout with large, dark eyes, a confident smirk played across its cream-colored muzzle, and it lifted one mitten-shaped hand to send a challenging gesture towards Scout. And in that moment, Door decided that this match had to end quickly too. “Okay, Scout!” she shouted. “Open up with Crunch again!” Scout launched forward, white light swirling around his buck teeth once more. Yet despite the threat Scout posed and the short distance between them, the pansage didn’t move, not even to let its smirk fade. It was only at the last second that the pokémon shifted, holding up its left arm to block Scout’s attack, and when the rodent’s teeth clamped down on the monkey’s arm, it didn’t even squeal. It simply stood there, legs braced against the floor, as it held Scout at bay using just one arm. “Pomme, throw it use and Work Up!” Sage commanded. In what looked like a mockery of Scout’s move against its teammate, Pomme swung its arm down, threw the patrat off his feet, and tossed him across the field. Door tensed as she watched Scout tumble, her breath catching in her throat until he came to a stop just an inch from the very edge of the field. Then, she exhaled slowly and watched as, across the way, the pansage engulfed itself in a familiar red aura. Its eyes glinted, and its smirk grew more vicious as the monkey let out a low growl of its own. Pomme was certainly more of a challenge than Brioche, and because of that, Door hesitated, thinking hard about how to tackle this opponent without getting Scout knocked out. Tackle this opponent. Tackle.Door’s eyes fell on the pansage’s arm. Even through the red light surrounding it, she could see the faint sparking emitting from the break in its “flesh.” That alone gave her an idea. “Scout!” she said. “Tackle! Approach it from the right!” “Pomme, don’t let it get close!” Sage countered. “Vine Whip!” The two pokémon moved almost simultaneously. Scout bounded forward on all fours, rushing towards Pomme in an arc. At the same time, Pomme twirled to swing its tail in an arc around itself. A green light flashed from the tip of the pansage’s tail, and the leaves adorning it twisted and lashed outward into a lithe, green vine. Grabbing it with one hand, Pomme smashed its new whip into the floor just inches from Scout’s face, splintering the boards instantly. Scout leapt over the whip and continued bounding toward Pomme, but the pansage swung its tail again to lash it at the rodent. Despite how close he was, Scout was still far too quick for the monkey, and once more, the tail slammed into the floorboards. Grinning, Door cupped her hands around her mouth and shouted, “Keep it up, Scout! When you’re close enough, Crunch Pomme’s weak point!” Scout leapt over Pomme’s last Vine Whip and shot directly at the monkey’s broken arm. His glowing teeth clamped down on it, and he jerked his head, tearing it clean out of its socket with a loud snap. Sparks flew from the pansage’s damaged side as it reeled back and screamed. And then, it swung around, slamming its tail into Scout’s side. Scout was thrown off his feet, and seemingly on instinct, he released Pomme’s broken arm just before he crashed back down onto the battlefield. The arm clattered away, coming to a rest just outside of the ring, while Scout struggled to stand. His side had been torn open by Pomme’s Vine Whip, just enough to expose his slick exoskeleton, and Door hesitated at the sight of it. “Pomme, let’s return the favor!” Sage said with a grin. “Vine Whip the patrat’s weak point!” Door shook off her shock and threw a hand forward. “Counter with Crunch!” With its good hand, Pomme snatched its tail and lashed out, swinging it once again at Scout. This time, Scout was ready. He opened his mouth and crouched down, and as the vine slammed into his face, he twisted and clamped onto it with his glowing fangs. At the sight of this, Door grinned and balled her hands into fists. She could feel her confidence pouring back into her. “All right, Scout!” she said. “Toss it!” Scout spun, jerking Pomme with him until the monkey was ripped off its feet. Then, with a snap, Scout threw his opponent into the air as hard as he could, and Pomme shot like a bullet to the ceiling and smashed into a light fixture. Its body burst into a brilliant, white light as sparks rained down on the battlefield. Scout chirruped and dashed back to Door’s feet, narrowly missing the rain of electricity … as well as Pomme’s charred and broken body. The pansage slammed hard into the floor, and although its eyes flickered, it otherwise fell still. “Pomme is unable to battle!” Savory announced. “Match goes to the patrat, and with two victories against the gym leader, the challenger wins!” Door couldn’t help herself. She shouted once with joy, then swooped down to scoop Scout into her arms. Without thinking, she held him close, ignoring his squirming protests. “Oh man, that was awesome!” she shouted. “Indeed it was,” Sage replied. She strode forward, recalling her pokémon as she approached Door. “My goodness, that battle did a number on my pansage.” At once, Door froze, her smile fading quickly. “Oh. I … sorry. I-I didn’t mean to—” Sage chuckled and held up a hand calmly. “It’s all right. I’ve had Pomme’s core reinforced specifically because of how intense gym battles can get. The rest of him can be easily replaced.” She pocketed the ball and turned her sheepish grin towards Door. “I can’t tell you how many times Pomme has been overwhelmed like that. But he doesn’t seem to mind. He just wants to do his best for me.” Sage sighed. “I know it sounds barbaric, but it’s a comfort, really. No matter what happens, your best friend will always be okay.” Door gave her an uncertain look. That did sound barbaric to her. Why would anyone want to let their friends battle in the first place if they were just going to get injured that badly? Back in the days of Hilda King’s first journey, there were regulations and rules and restrictions put in place to prevent real pokémon from getting injured. In Door’s opinion, ever since fake pokémon became the norm, people forgot how to have a proper battle. Sure, the rules and restrictions were never lifted—and they were observed whenever a foreigner brought a real pokémon into a match—but no one cared if battles between fake pokémon got extreme. So now, battles didn’t have the same spirit that they used to. And Door thought that was a shame. Still, she said nothing as Sage stood before her and shrugged. “In any case, that was a great battle, young lady,” she said. “What you did with Pomme’s arm was particularly clever, and tossing Brioche out of the ring was a fantastic idea. My only criticism is don’t be afraid to use a variety of techniques. You were relying on Crunch quite a bit throughout your second match. A great trainer knows how to hold back their power and rely on a variety of moves to outwit their opponent.” Door took a deep breath. She remained silent, even as the temptation to point out the fact that she won nagged at her mind. Instead, she watched as Savory and Sumac joined their cousin on the battlefield. Sumac drew out of his pocket a small, velvet cube the size and shape of a ring box, and cracking it open, he presented its contents to Door. She glanced down and took in the sight of the object: a small piece of gold in the shape of three diamonds in a chain. Each diamond was inlaid with a different jewel—sapphire, ruby, emerald—and as Sumac held it up, it glittered in the remaining light of the dining room. With a sharp inhale, Door mentally put a name to this object. Of course she knew what it was. She had seen it in so many pictures, and she secretly envied the people who had the opportunity to hold it. So, as she placed Scout on her shoulder and reached for the trinket, her hand began to shake … and continued to shake even after she grasped its warm surface between her fingers. “Nonetheless,” Sage continued, “you battled well, and in recognition of your victory against the Striaton Gym, we, the gym leaders, present you with the Trio Badge. Congratulations, Door Hornbeam.” Door swallowed hard. “I … I can’t believe it. I finally…” She looked up and couldn’t help but crack a grin. “Thank you. It was an honor battling you.” She held out a hand for Sage to shake, and as the woman grasped it and pumped it once, she smiled broadly. “Now, if I recall correctly, my cousin always offers the challenger a second, bigger reward,” she said. “A meal on the house, perhaps? I’m sure we could—” “Excuse me! Terribly sorry!” Door and the three gym leaders turned their heads to Geist, who stood at the edge of the battlefield. In his hand was a communication device. Its screen was still glowing from recent use. Glancing at his face, Door noticed that he was looking at her with not an expression of elation over her victory but instead a solemn glare. “Door, we need to go. Now that you have the Trio Badge, that should get us into the Dreamyard,” he said. “What’s going on?” she asked. “I mean … I won. That’s a good thing, right?” “Oh, it is,” Geist replied, “but I just got a call from Dr. Fennel. Something’s going on over there. It’s covered in a fog of dream smoke.” “Dream smoke?” Door whispered. She looked back at the gym leaders to find them exchanging glances. “I can’t go,” Sage said. “Not with my pokémon out of commission.” “And I’d better stay here to man the restaurant,” Sumac added. Savory didn’t even need a cue. He was already taking off his apron, and the moment Sumac finished, he tossed it at him. “I’ll go. Don’t worry about it.” “Wait, what?” Door said. “I mean … isn’t it important for you to stay at the gym?” “On the contrary. As gym leaders, it’s our responsibility to lend a hand whenever something unusual is happening in our city, especially if it’s not yet clear whether or not the police should be involved.” Savory walked forward and put his hands on his hips. “Are your pokémon ready for another battle?” “Sure,” Door said with a blink. “I’ve got one other pokémon, and Scout seems tough enough.” The patrat punctuated this thought with a slow blink and a rumbling bark, and Savory responded with a smirk and a gentle pat on the rodent’s head. “All right,” he said. “Then let’s go.”
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Post by bay on Apr 27, 2018 3:47:27 GMT
I like how you did Door's first battle there. How Door and Sage went all out shows how battling with fauxpokemon is treated differently than if they were to battle with real Pokemon. It was also sweet to see Door warming up to Scout more. One of the things I liked about the Black/White games is the majority of the gym leaders doing other stuff besides watching over the gym, and nice to see you'll have them do the same here. Looking forward to the Dreamyard!
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Post by girl-like-substance on May 1, 2018 19:37:38 GMT
Well, it's good to know that at least the people who were actually there haven't forgotten about Plasma yet, even if everyone else has. I guess forty years is long enough for even pretty major events to fade. Sometimes I think there's no force on earth as powerful as the bored disinterest of people trying to live through major historical events. It's also nice that there are people looking out for Door. She's liable to get herself – or, y'know, 80% of her team – killed, without guidance, and she could really use some old hands at saving Unova in her corner alongside her robot butler. Though it is good to see her learning from Geist, too. She's got a knack for this, you can tell – but it's really undeveloped, at this point; when confronted with a new kind of opponent that renders her previous strategy moot, she doesn't quite have the experience to know how to come up with a new idea. So Geist steps in, and surprisingly enough Door actually listens, and what d'you know, it works out and she banishes a rare pokémon to another plane of existence. Which, uh, Amanita is surprisingly cool with, but okay, I guess she can always summon another. Actually, rereading that chapter, it is a hell of a solution to the ethical issue of battling a pokémon till it dies, which I've always thought of as the main problem with nuzlocke fics. Either the pokémon aren't 'real' so it doesn't matter (and even then, the fic itself pushes us to consider that maybe it does matter after all, with the way it makes a clear distinction between the two binaries of natural/artificial and real/false) or if they are real, they're simply sent back to the Dream World. From my admittedly very limited experience, I don't think most nuzlocke fics really consider the ethical issues their rulesets raise, which has always put me off; Electric Sheep is the one that made me think actually, wait, this is a genre with legs. That said, I think eighteen hundred-odd words is a lot of worldbuildy exposition to take all in one go, even leavened as it is with dialogue and snark – though it's difficult to see how you'd break it up any more than you have done. Maybe the Entralink stuff could be left till later? I'm not sure; the format you've chosen, where one chapter equals one location and there's a very strict mapping of Door's journey onto the games, is probably working against you a little bit there, because I'm finding it hard to see where else you could move this information to in terms of the story's general arc. Onto a much more pressing issue: Striation Gym, and its Leaders' hair. I've never been sure if people in the pokémon world just have a naturally wide variety of hair colours or whether everyone really does go to the hassle of constantly dyeing it in zany colours that match their themes; the fact that Sumac and company are direct descendants of Chili and company makes this question weigh heavier on me than usual. They could have inherited their hair from their respective fathers, I guess, or they could just be dyeing it for the sake of the show. Your Unova really is the society of the spectacle, after all. Anyway, it's certainly interesting that they've inherited the Gym. It's a thing that does seem to happen in the pokémon world – Janine inherits Koga's Gym, Falkner inherits his dad's – but it always feels weird to me, especially when it's three separate people who've all inherited the roles their fathers played. That seems like a thing that shouldn't happen to me. Possibly the Unova League has issues with nepotism, or possibly I'm just too suspicious of people who hold public (or semi-public in this case, I guess) office. Also there was a battle in that chapter, I should totally actually comment on that. It's a pretty good one, especially given the material you had to work with; Striaton Gym is not desperately interesting, honestly, but you get the lillipup out of the way quickly and spend most of your time on the pansage, which is definitely a good idea. The elemental monkeys have a lot of fictional potential, I think, being monkeys and therefore highly mobile and devious, and the image of Pomme (redacted: tangent about what a dork Sage is when it comes to naming her pokémon and how much I love it, Brioche, oh my god) creating a vine whip and using it as a hand-to-hand weapon rather than simply whacking Scout with its tail is a nice way of showing moves adapting to the unique physiology of individual pokémon. A creature with hands is instinctively going to manifest vine whip differently to one without, for instance. It seems a bit odd that Sage has such a small stable of pokémon that having just two weak ones put out of commission prevents her from doing her duty as Leader, though. Like, even if everyone does the Unova Gym circuit in the same order as in the games (which I can't imagine they do, since that would be a logistical nightmare for Pokémon Centre staff, Gym Leaders and the people who manage the safe routes alike, to say nothing of how difficult it would be for the actual kids involved) and so she has no stronger pokémon for tougher challengers, surely she has backup pokémon for consecutive challengers, or strong partners of her own to help her in her leaderly duties? Especially given that those duties might involve dealing with opponents tougher than the usual Gym challengers. Also, I love how quick Sumac is to say “nope, not going, I'll man the restaurant”. Like there is zero hesitation there. Sage is like “can't do it, no pokémon”, to which the proper response is “don't worry, I'll go”, and yet Sumac's first instinct is to keep the restaurant going rather than to investigate the giant cloud of dream smoke. Nice, dude. Striaton's finest, right there. One minor correction: “Use” and “and” have got transposed here. A reply to a reply that technically isn't related to any of this: Thanks for the encouragement! I mean, I'm always writing about the boundaries of what's human, I guess, since I'm so interested in abjection; this story is pretty definitively about people who aren't human by any definition of the word, people who are either literally or discursively constructed by humans to do specific things for them – but of course, it's hard to talk about what isn't human without talking about what is. So that will probably come up after all. And wow, that was a super pretentious paragraph I just wrote. I'm … going to hit the post button before I have a chance to regret it.
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Post by DynaDratina on May 4, 2018 0:45:12 GMT
When I first saw the title of this story some years ago, I thought it had something to do with Mareep and Flaafy. xP But now that I've caught up with the chapters, and especially after reading the scene that reveals the Companions are working towards attaining equality with humans, "electric sheep" gets a deep and interesting meaning. Though it seems I didn't miss the mark completely, given the information that fauxkemon dream of electric sheep, hehe.
I regret not having read this earlier, as it's a well-developed world and emotionally engaging. What I probably like most is how your Unova isn't radically dystopian (at least, it doesn't seem that way... *gaze shifts*), though you still manage to get across the tragedy of real pokemon being all but exterminated from the wild and the government trying to patch everything up with shiny fake roadways and lush planned-development parks. I usually find stories and movies that take environmental disaster to the extreme to be too depressing to get through, but yours steers clear of that and focuses more on the characters, which I appreciate.
I've also never read a Nuzlocke fic, but this world seems like the perfect setup for one, as it's slowly becoming clear to Door how dangerous battles with the fauxkemon can be. (Pomme getting its arm ripped off and getting electrocuted?! o.O) I hope she'll continue to be able to spare Jack from them, but something tells me she won't have that luxury for long.
My favorite character so far is Geist. I can understand Door's interest in him (and for a moment you got me worried that he was a Companion too, haha). He struck me early on as very complex and layered, but what intrigues me most about him is how he urges her to treat the robot pokemon and Companions with respect just as she would a living being. Though ultimately I'm more of Door's opinion when it comes to AI and robots (I can hardly talk to telephone operators due to how immensely weirded-out I feel), I still agree with Geist on some level. At any rate, I definitely prefer his attitude to Sage's, who just shrugs off Pomme's injuries and comes off as somewhat creepy because of it. What with the fauxemon getting dismembered and electrocuted and Sage just saying that the rest of him is "easily replaced"... o.O
Anyways, I'm definitely hooked on this. It seems like it does a good job of incorporating themes and characters from Black/White, from what I know of the games, and there's a great tension being built up with Team Matrix. I'm also excited to see how the Nuzlocke element of this story plays out, though I'm also slightly dreading it at the same time. (Poor little Jack...) I'll be looking forward to more!
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Post by Firebrand on May 8, 2018 1:13:44 GMT
So, our first glimpse at a gym battle in future Unova. I know I've seen you mention in passing that the gym leaders have been changed out to account for the passing of time, but in the pains I have taken not to spoil myself, that's about all I know. Still, glad to see that the Striaton Gym stayed in the family, but I have to wonder if the gym leaders and their anime protagonist hair are genetics or dye.
The battle itself moves along at a good clip, and I'm realizing what an early-game powerhouse Patrat can be. It never appealed to me aesthetically, so I never trained one, but to learn a move like Crunch early on is actually pretty awesome. After the battle, in Door's little debrief with Sage, it was a little strange how she was referring to her mangled Pansage both as a friend and companion, but clearly saw it as nothing more than a tool to fight with. I'm sure it's deliberate, and it's also a pretty interesting look at how humans will anthropomorphize everything, even if we know full well it's just a very lifelike simulacrum. Door's discomfort with this speaks to her growth over the last few days traveling with Geist, and now that she's getting over her instinctive distaste of fauxkemon and starting to see Scout as a partner, it's pretty jarring to see Sage get right back into the mindset of only seeing the fauxkemon as unfeeling tools.
Because Door is definitely not the kid who set out in Chapter 2. Sure, she's still recognizably herself, but even now, I can see the seeds of her further character arc, as she grapples with the idea of fauxkemon and what it means to battle with something that she's been told can't feel pain, and to travel with something that can only go through the motions of companionship.
You've also started sowing the seeds (subtly in other chapters, but I think more overtly here) that there's something more to the disappearance of pokemon in Unova, more than just overhunting and overdevelopment. I should certainly hope this isn't a blank in the proverbial Chekhov's Gun, especially not with the interesting Dream World incorporation you dropped on us with Amanita, so definitely looking forward to see how you totally blindside me with something out of left field there.
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Post by admin on May 16, 2018 4:23:35 GMT
I LIVE. But first, replies! I like how you did Door's first battle there. How Door and Sage went all out shows how battling with fauxpokemon is treated differently than if they were to battle with real Pokemon. Thank ya! I hope to really hammer that point home with future battles. Like, while it’s true that this is a Nuzlocke (so of course the battles would always be brutal), at the same time, I wanted to do something a little different from the standard Nuzlockes (that do gruesome battles for the sake of gruesome battles, generally). So this is a fun way to experiment and all. Ikr? I definitely love the Unovan gym leaders for that. Kalos kinda sorta tried to do that, what with things like Viola being a photographer and Valerie being a fashion designer and Clemont being an inventor and all, but I also feel like the Kalosean gym leaders weren’t too fleshed out in the long run. I’m hoping to change that with my take on them in book 2.Thank ya! Here’s hoping it was worth the wait~ Well, it's good to know that at least the people who were actually there haven't forgotten about Plasma yet, even if everyone else has. Hilda and N are definitely the curmudgeonly grandparents who will never let you forget they lived through the war, you whippersnappers. Pretty much, tbqh. I mean, in a sense, we are right now, and while there are absolutely those of us who are out being a part of the Revolution and all, many more of us are extremely tired and sort of dragging ourselves through another workday as if the rise of fascism is just another Tuesday to us. Sadly, it is.Man, when I wrote these chapters, I wasn’t expecting it to be as accidentally politically insightful as it is. On that note, I miss 2014. *insert the “it’s true but you shouldn’t say it” meme* Also, I see what you did there.Eeeeexactly regarding Door’s inexperience. I don’t even know where she gets it from, to be honest. Brigette and Lanette could hold their own in battle, sure, and Virginia’s decently capable, but it’s not like any of them are naturals at battling (and Linus certainly isn’t). Probably from her grandfather, to be honest. The dude was an ex-Aqua and a sailor after that. I’d like to think he and Door were actually fairly close, likely because he considered her a chip off the ol’ block. (Then he died when she was nine, but hey.) Stuff that has no relevance to the story aside, pretty much with Amanita. If anything, she’s probably excited that she’s discovered something new about dream smoke pokémon (that they don’t stay on this plane of existence for very long if tossed into battle … which certainly won’t come up again, no, of course not). Boxdevs are kinda … weird like that, tbqh. The Hamilton sisters are probably the only sensible ones out of them, while the others are all solidly mad scientists. Okay, maybe Molayne’s sensible too, but that’s because he’s too busy playing Pokémon World of Warcraft to care. Thank you! Honestly, having spent over a year officially in the Nuz communities … pretty much. I think it’s just kinda taken for granted that the rule is a thing for the most part. There are a few fics that address it, but it’s either: A) the protagonist’s situation is so unique that death only actually happens to them and not anyone else, which is why it’s never really brought up otherwise, or B) the setting itself is a gritty dystopia (either of the sci-fi or fantasy varieties) in which death is just a given thing for everyone. B tends to be more common than A, from what I can tell, and both are less common than the straight trainer fic that doesn’t discuss it at all (or discusses it in brief/factors it into the culture of their world in a way that doesn’t straight-up paint the society the writer is creating as being a dystopia … which is, yeah, kiiiiinda uncomfortable). But honestly, that’s the most interesting question you could ask in a Nuzlocke fic: why is training still a thing if death is a possibility? How can we just go right ahead and toss maybe sentient beings at deathmatches and not really talk about what that means or how it changes a trainer’s relationship with their pokémon? …’course, then I just made fake pokémon and wrote about how that’s hella problematic anyway, but hey. (Tl;dr, I could ramble on and on about death in nuzlockes, ngl.) Pretty much word about the exact problem there. D: This is more or less why the Striaton arc is such a pain in the ass to edit (to the point where I haven’t bothered yet, lmao). This is only the first of the infodumps meant for storybuilding, and while they contain information Door absolutely needs to know (even though she doesn’t realize it until much, much later) … well. You’ve hit the nail on the head there. It’s possible that I might be able to pick out bits here and there and thread them in earlier (from the point where Door finds out Jack is real onwards, as that’s basically where the whole point about real pokémon becomes especially important), but that’d probably require a pretty hefty revision. Maybe after everything’s said and done, I’ll go back and see what I can do. Ngl, I kinda lol’d. Not at you, of course, but instead because oh my god I never thought of the idea that they could just be dyeing their hair to match their themes. On the other hand, this is a world where gym leaders have themed names, so part of me just thinks it’s completely natural. For the most part. Like, absolutely, hair dye exists, but no doubt the trio’s hair is just inherited from their fathers. Hilariously, I have an answer to this, and it’s that Unova is absolutely run on Nepotism™. A little on Capitalism™ too, but. In all seriousness, for the most part, the other leagues have entirely different rotations because they’re staffed in completely sensible manners. Not that many gyms have changed type, unfortunately, partly because this fic will follow Door into Kalos, and I’m not nearly creative enough to replace every team, and partly to follow tradition. In a handful of cases, you might have people inheriting gyms (Violet’s will always be passed down Falkner’s family tree because, hey, it’s already started like that—same with Lavaridge’s gym, for that matter) or gym leaders who have survived since the canon timeline (because Misty will let you pry Cerulean’s gym from her cold, dead hands), but other than that, no one’s nearly as … convenient as Unova, to put it nicely. Thank you! And word on the comment concerning how interesting Striaton’s gym is. I’m mostly mentioning this because I am salty af about the difficulty curve between this and Nacrene’s. I’m just sayin’. Sage’s names are definitely the cutest, which I can say because of course I would have useless background details I don’t plan on ever actually using in-story about the other two gym leaders’ teams. And true to form, Sumac’s names are fancy and a little pretentious (read: they’re named after wines), and Savory’s… Let’s just say that if Antares were a real pokémon, he would be eternally grateful that Geist renamed him. Fair point! And it’s especially glaring of a plot hole in this case because battles are scheduled, which means that, yeah, there would be back-to-back battles normally (which is relevant only because it takes time to do repairs unless you have backup bodies for your pokémon … which, yeah, the Striaton trio absolutely does, but that kinda makes things worse because it doesn’t really take that long to take out a pokémon’s main core and transfer it to a new body, seeing as it’s literally about as easy as transferring a SIM card). When it comes to strength, meantimes, there’s a bit of an explanation in there that I 100% want to bring in and explore at some point, but the short of it is gym fauxkémon are customizable and can be modified to match a challenger’s skill level. This isn’t a thing most trainers can do for obvious reasons (although, yes, abso-effing-lutely hacking is a thing because I am a terrible person who should be ashamed of herself for stooping to puns), but it’s handy for gym leaders and the Pokémon Association to minimize the cost of running a gym. But yes, that still doesn’t explain why Sage decides to stay behind, for which I have nothing. Ikr? I love Sumac. I should’ve done more with him because he is. Just the greatest. That. That is a magical error right there. I have no idea how that happened, but given the fact that I hadn’t rewritten this part and thus not only transposed those words but failed to notice on the multiple edit sprees, I’d imagine that involved a lot of sleep deprivation and raw talent for making incredible mistakes. (In other words, thank you!) On the other hand, I also still find all of this hella fascinating, although now that it’s been a couple of weeks and you’ve come up with the PMD/Dark Souls fic, I almost want to ask if you’re juggling this and the other projects you’ve got on your plate or if it’s on the backburner. Because if you’re doing the former, I would like to ask you kindly for some of your motivation, plzkthnx. When I first saw the title of this story some years ago, I thought it had something to do with Mareep and Flaafy. xP First off, welcome to the forum! Excited to see you here~ Please post Roots.Second, man, true story: I really want to do a Nuzlocke where I get to train a mareep because they are cute af. SOMEDAY. (Also, third off, you are in good company there. XD I don’t regret the title at all, but hoo, poor folks waiting for those mareep.) *fingerguns at the strikeout* ;D Also, thank ya for the comment about the Companions’ goals and the title meaning! I’m just gonna keep building layers up from here, so…! Aww, no worries! It’s been moving around a lot (haha), not to mention, hey, you’ve been away for a while. Thanks for this as well! Also, yeah, no, you’re spot-on about this not being really a dystopia. I mean, absolutely, the government is a little on the shady side (in that it didn’t care about the imminent collapse of its ecosystem until it happened, and then it thought the best way to fix that is to seize control of where people go when while creating a slightly creepy artificial version of a trainer’s journey to keep them placated), but I feel like it’s not really a dystopia until you focus on not only the society you’ve created but also the negative aspects therein. Aside from moments where you’re going to be shown the more run-down parts of Unova, you’re absolutely correct in the fact that the focus isn’t on that. If anything, the conflict comes from people acting within this blissfully unaware government, rather than the government itself. It’s probably best described as a dystopia in aesthetic only, ngl. And even then, to be fair, it’s at least cleaner and less shady than the actual New York City. *shot!* *tents fingers* 8) 8) 8) 8) Nah, but forreal, I’m super jazzed to hear that I’m introducing the genre to you. It’s a lot of fun, both to read and write, so! Thank you all around! To be honest, I kinda have the easiest time writing Geist, and I’m not surprised that it shows. ;D Granted, there’s a reason for that, lmao. In all seriousness, I just enjoy writing out his philosophies because they’re such an extreme contrast to Door’s, so it’s very easy to balance the two out and come up with exactly how they would react. It’s definitely a matter of, “What would this character do? Okay, so do the opposite.” In all seriousness, I’m also excited that these philosophies stuck out to you on top of that because, yep, these are 100% tiny little blips where the two of them are just straight-up discussing the main theme of the fic before the plot even gets started, haha. That and it was just so much fun laying down the groundwork for exactly how Door is going to grow over time. 8) IT’S GONNA TURN OUT GREAT, ESPECIALLY FOR JACK. 8) Nah, but forreal, thank you! So, our first glimpse at a gym battle in future Unova. I know I've seen you mention in passing that the gym leaders have been changed out to account for the passing of time, but in the pains I have taken not to spoil myself, that's about all I know. Still, glad to see that the Striaton Gym stayed in the family, but I have to wonder if the gym leaders and their anime protagonist hair are genetics or dye. Lmao, definitely, definitely genetics. The Pokémon universe is weird. (And now I’m tempted to write up a headcanon post somewhere on this subject, tbqh.) I mean, that’s fair. The whole line’s literally just crossing guard meerkats, and that fits hopefully no one’s aesthetic. On the other hand, I can tell you right now that watchog are boss af. Like, my heart still goes out to rattata when it comes to early-game rodent pokémon (and I will always simultaneously feel sorry for and adore bidoof), but Unova was not messing around. No, forreal, let me explain. It’s not just Crunch. After evolution (which happens only a few short levels after patrat learns Crunch and automatically becomes your go-to pokémon for training anyway), it learns Confuse Ray, not to mention Super Fang shortly after that, which means you have something that will absolutely murder everything in the early game. Literally the only thing that can stop watchog is another watchog. It will come for you and your family. It’s that ridiculous. Eeeeeexactly. Like, it’s a bit of an interesting in-universe point (imo, anyway), but basically, fauxkémon were created so people have something to latch onto while the environment is basically reset. So they’re designed to be these things humans can embrace and anthropomorphize (or at least see as being pet-like), but it also kinda backfires because I don’t care what Tamagotchi taught us; we don’t all see inanimate objects the exact same way as we do living things. So Sage, for example. Absolutely, she thinks Pomme is a friend and wants to take care of him, but on the other, the fact that she could just transfer his cores like they’re SIM cards to be put in a new phone (and the fact that, as an early-circuit gym leader, she’s probably done that a lot) colors her opinions greatly. On that note, people kinda see Companions the same way. They’re designed to look human for … reasons, but even if people developed feelings for theirs (and because this is Pokémon Chobits Edition, they absolutely do), there’s still the nearly unconscious thought that, you know, if you lopped off an arm or something, it’d be okay because the body is disposable (whereas the cores are not). It’s kiiiiiiiinda a fun universe, ngl. But! That’s all only relevant because yes to your analysis of Door. 8) Luckily, this is not yet something I’ve revealed in-story yet, so I’ll be delighted to blindside you and everyone else. All I can say is rest assured that it’s not exactly a blank, but it explains a lot about a certain someone’s plans for totally-not-world-domination. Also, let’s also say there are a lot of accidental assholes in this story. 8)
[CHAPTER EIGHT: DREAMYARD] A thick, pink cloud hung over the Dreamyard. Literally, a thick, pink cloud, like a vicious cross between cotton candy and fog. Door hesitated for a moment as she stood outside the gates to the abandoned laboratory, and she did so entirely because she needed a moment to take in the fact that she was staring at a cloud of bubblegum barely confined within the boundaries of a dilapidated, brick wall guarded by a single, willowy tree. And then, Savory tapped her on the shoulder. “Miss Hornbeam?” “Apologies, Savory,” Geist said. “Miss Hornbeam is unused to the kinds of anomalies you would find around Striaton. Nuvema City is comparatively quiet, so I’ve heard.” Door jabbed a thumb towards the cloud and sent Geist an incredulous look. “This happens often?!” she squeaked. He sent her a sideways glance and replied, “Well. Not here, it doesn’t. Tuesdays at Dr. Fennel’s, however—” “If the both of you are done,” Savory said, rubbing the bridge of his nose, “the longer we spend messing around out here, the longer it’ll take to clean this up.” “Ah! Of course.” Geist motioned to Savory. “Lead the way, then.” With a huff, Savory reached into one of his pants pockets and drew out a poké ball. Tossing it into the air, he announced, “Cut!” The ball cracked open, and a flash of white light shot at the tree. The pokémon Savory had released moved too quickly for Door to watch. One moment, she was staring at the ball, and in the next, the top half of the tree slid off its trunk and crashed onto the ground at their feet. Door jumped, glancing from the tree to Savory, just in time to see a pansear land on his shoulder. Savory stopped, studying the tree with a frown. “That was a new spindle tree,” he said. “Someone’s been through here recently.” Spindle tree. That’s right. Door had heard of them but for whatever reason, Nuvema never really grew them. They were thin trees, genetically modified to resemble old berry bushes from the old days, back when Unova was far greener than it was then. Most towns had spindle trees to create more of a challenge, something a little extra that the kids with fake pokémon and equally fake trainer’s licenses could chew on, but others—like the gym leaders of Striaton, Door guessed—used them to guard places. And they were exceptional at that job: thorny, hardy, fire-resistant, and liable to snap a sharp, scraggly branch off on one’s arm. Not at all easy to clear, in other words … unless one had pokémon that knew a very specific move designed to cut straight through their well-guarded but spindly trunks, anyway. But even then, that only allowed passage for a good fifteen minutes before the tree grew back, and sure enough, even as Savory, Door, and Geist stared at the tree, a sprout was beginning to form on its severed trunk. Savory shrugged his pansear off his shoulder, and without waiting for another command, the monkey shrieked, flung itself at the trunk, and sheared off the sprout before it could shoot back up into a fully grown tree. “How can you tell?” Door finally asked. “Trunk was green,” Savory responded as he helped his pokémon back onto his shoulder. “It didn’t have enough time to turn white again.” “You can tell in this fog?” Door scoffed. “I’m guessing that’s why we’re waiting,” Geist said, cutting Savory off before he could acknowledge Door. Savory didn’t seem to notice Geist’s interruption; he only nodded to his comment. “Taking inventory. Door’s got a patrat that’s already been through a rough battle, and given the fact that she’s faced Sage, I assume her other pokémon is a water-type that she hasn’t used.” “Right. An oshawott,” Door said. “I’ve got a pansear and a lillipup that are ready to battle, but I don’t have any healing units,” Savory continued. “Why not?” Door asked. “Rushed out the door and forgot.” “That’s very…” He leered at her. “Stereotypical for a fire trainer?” Door held up her hands. “Inconvenient! I was gonna say inconvenient!” Savory relaxed, but his frown didn’t waver. “Yeah, well, besides, I figured you had at least one. Your Companion did order two bottles of fresh water right before the match, after all.” “Okay, what does that have to—” Door jolted. Her mind took a second to process what Savory had said, and then, swiveling around to glare at Geist, she snapped, “And now you’re being open about it?!” “Being open about what?” he asked. “That you’re a Companion!” Geist gave her a sheepish smile and held up his hands, and Door leaned a little closer to see what he was showing her. They were subtle, but they were there: the edges of the panels hiding the transmitter pads in his palms. He even tapped a spot on one of his wrists to open them up, and her eyes narrowed as she stared at the round, white screens beneath them. “What the hell was all that about back in Accumula, then?!” she demanded. “When I asked you the first time if you were a Companion, why did you pretend you weren’t?!” He frowned. “I do apologize, Door, but I didn’t outright tell you whether or not I was because you had just finished explaining why Companions made you deeply uncomfortable. So instead, I asked you why you thought I was a Companion. That wasn’t technically a denial.” She had to admit, he had a point. Except she wasn’t about to say that out loud, so instead, she merely continued to glare at him. It took a few more moments for Savory to ask, “How in God’s name did you not know that was a Companion?” “If I recall correctly, which I have been designed to do, you didn’t either the first time we met,” Geist replied. “Incidentally, the tree grew back.” Savory growled and shrugged his pansear off his shoulder. For a second time, the monkey screeched, launched itself at the tree, and sliced it in half. This time, however, the banging of the tree against the ground was accompanied by a whimper from the other side. At that, Savory held up a hand, as if to stop Door and Geist from advancing. “I was right,” he muttered. “There is someone there. You! Come out with your hands where we can see them! If you have pokémon with you, make them lead!” And then, the last voice Door had expected to hear squeaked from the other side. “I-I can’t! My Companion…” “What— crap,” Door hissed. She pushed past Savory and launched herself at the hole. “Blair?! Blair! Hold on!” “Door?!” Blair squeaked. Before either of her partners could stop her, Door vaulted over the stump of the spindle tree and rounded the corner of the wall. On the other side was Blair, who in turn was just barely holding up Opal. As she approached, Door felt a cold, sick feeling well up in her stomach. Opal wasn’t active, and Door could see why right away. Any Companion would have a difficult time operating with a gaping hole in their stomach, right where their power cells should have been. “Blair … crap,” Door whispered. She slowed to a stop, and her eyes flicked to the trainer. Blair stood shakily beneath the weight of her Companion, with one of the android’s arms wrapped around her thin shoulders. Tears streamed down her face as she stared helplessly at Door. “What happened?” Door asked quietly. Blair shook her head. “I … I saw the cloud. I-I went in to see what was going on … and then … and then…” She swallowed hard. Door reached out to grab Opal and help Blair set her on the ground. As soon as the Companion’s weight was off the trainer’s shoulders, Door reached out to pat Blair’s arm awkwardly. “Hey. Everything’s gonna be fine. I’ve got the gym leader with me. We’ll figure out what’s up, okay?” she said. Then, throwing a glance over her shoulder, she shouted, “Yo! Little help here?!” The fog swirled behind her and parted to let Savory and Geist through. Geist stood back, freezing as soon as he saw Opal’s condition. Savory, meanwhile, took a few more steps forward and knelt beside her. “Jesus,” he muttered, resting a hand on the edge of the gaping hole in Opal’s chest. “Did you see who did this?” Blair forced herself to nod. Then, she pointed to the right, deeper into the Dreamyard, and bit her lip. Door narrowed her eyes and rose to her feet, and then, without a word, she turned and dashed in the direction Blair was pointing. “Door!” Geist shouted. “Wait! You don’t know what’s in there! Savory—” She didn’t stop. Rather, Door dashed forward, into the pink cloud, even if she could barely see anything in front of her. Tall grass whipped at her legs, and rocks and broken tiles felt like they were reaching up and grabbing her feet. But still she ran, deep into the Dreamyard on the hunt for something—anything—that could have done what it did to Blair. And then, without warning, a red blur shot at her from the side. She stumbled, reeling back just in time to see the blur pass her and disappear into the pink. A chattering growl rushed around her, one she could recognize immediately: a patrat. Her heart beat furiously as she listened to it, desperately keeping track of where she thought it was. How strong was it? Could the thing use Crunch? Door slipped her hand into her pocket, fumbling for Scout’s poké ball, but even when her fingers closed on it, she hesitated. Scout had just been through an intense battle, one that left him battered and torn. Could he stand another one? Before she could answer, the chattering stopped right behind her, and her stomach felt like its bottom dropped out. Swallowing hard, she turned, her foot scuffing against the ground. And the moment she faced the way she had come, a patrat shot at her face, mouth open and screaming. Door flinched, stumbling backwards as her arms flew up to shield herself, but the attack she had been expecting never connected. Instead, she heard a thump and felt a warm object squirm at her feet, and when she opened her eyes, she saw Savory’s pansear pinning the patrat to the ground. Door took another few steps backwards and scanned the pink fog for any sign of Savory or Geist. Her eyes fell on a tall, shadowy figure just to her right, and part of her relaxed … until she heard Geist’s voice coming from her left. “Door! Get out of the way!” She jumped, stumbling backwards just in time to see the man in black—the Companion who had helped steal Geist’s snivy—appear out of the pink cloud to reach for her. Another set of arms circled her waist, and before she could protest, she was lifted into the air and carried several feet back in one smooth leap. Then, whoever held her kept going, bounding in a wide circle around the man and the two pokémon until coming to a stop deeper in the Dreamyard. As soon as she was brought back down to the earth, Door twisted in her captor’s grasp to see Geist glaring into the cloud. “Shh. Starr, that Companion … he’s scanning for us. If he can’t pick up on our voices, it should take him a few more moments to locate us,” he said. Then, lowering himself a little more, he added, “Listen. I know you don’t trust Companions, but right now, you’re going to need me. Companions are designed for situations like these; I can detect them just by their heat and electrical signatures, rather than by visuals.” “Them?” Door whispered. Geist nodded. “Starr hasn’t moved. His partner, Belle? She’s on the roof.” He paused to point upwards, at a spot just above where he and Door had started. “Savory’s pansear is pinning Patrat to the ground. I’ve given him the order to keep it busy until you’re ready to battle. Savory himself is protecting Blair with his lillipup behind us.” Door flashed an incredulous look at Geist. “You gave Savory’s pansear an—” “Yes. No time to explain that,” he said quickly. “I’m detecting that Belle’s purrloin is right beside her, and that’s not all, either. I think I know what’s causing this flood of dream smoke.” “A munna?” Door asked. Geist nodded. “Held down by the purrloin.” He flicked her eyes to her. “Door, Scout isn’t in any condition to battle two pokémon. I could lend you Savory’s pansear or … we can go with an alternative I’m not sure you’ll like.” “What’s the alternative?” “Jack.” “I can’t—” Door hissed. Geist snapped his hand over her mouth and sucked in a breath through his teeth. By the way he was staring at the fog ahead of him, Door guessed he was scanning the area for Starr again. Then, when he was satisfied, he relaxed, albeit just slightly. “I thought you wouldn’t like that,” he whispered, “but listen. Jack can keep his distance. He knows Water Gun now. Hold onto him, and I’ll carry you and tell you where to shoot. We can keep Jack safe and fight off Belle and Starr at the same time. Sound like a plan?” Door slumped her shoulders and stared at Geist for a second. She glanced toward the spot where he said the munna was, and for a second, she thought about her situation. That munna had to be real. This was the Dreamyard, the new cradle for real, flesh-and-blood pokémon. There was no way she could let those two thieves ruin the future of Unova, just like that. But before she could say anything, Geist gasped, wrapped his arms around her, and jumped. She felt the wind of something pass beneath her, heard the slamming of a hard object into dirt, and watched as Starr’s black-clad back vanished into the fog. Geist landed on what felt like a crumbling walkway, far above where the two had started. Door felt its rotting concrete beneath her toes and was just slightly grateful that Geist refused to set her down. “Ugh, I’m getting so bored!” Belle shouted from somewhere in the pink. “Hurry up and fight, or are you and your Companion friend too spineless to be interesting?” “What do you even want?!” Door shouted. Her hand slid into her pocket, shoving aside Scout’s poké ball to grasp Jack’s. With a quick glance over her shoulder, she nodded to Geist. “What do we even want?!” Belle repeated. “Why, just a little bit of fun … and chaos!” “Great. A drama queen who can’t even come up with something creative,” Door replied as loudly as she could. “I heard that!” “That’s the point!” Door’s voice masked the sound of Jack’s ball expanding and opening in her hand, but it did nothing to smother the excited barking of the otter as soon as he materialized. Quickly shoving the ball back into her pocket, Door frantically covered Jack’s mouth as Geist shot them both a terrified look. Seconds later, he was leaping into the air, narrowly dodging a punch from Starr. He landed on the ground and dashed forward, still carrying Door in his arms, much to her surprise. “Patrat straight ahead!” he shouted. “Pansear, get ready!” With a nod, Door snapped her hand off Jack’s snout and wrapped it around his stomach. “Okay, Jack! Whenever I shout your name, shoot Water Gun, got it?!” Geist slid to a stop right over the monkey and the meerkat. Savory’s pansear looked up, a determined glint in his eye as he waited. At the same time, in response to her command, Jack gave her a confused trill but nonetheless saluted with a stubby arm. “Good,” she said. Then, pointing at the rodent at her feet, she continued, “Jack! Now!” “Pansear, jump!” Geist ordered. The patrat screamed as Savory’s pansear launched itself off its body and into the fog. As soon as the monkey was clear, Jack inhaled deeply and blasted a jet of water out of his mouth. In the confusion, the patrat had no chance. It squirmed in a frantic attempt to dodge, but before it could get to its feet, the jet of water slammed into its chest. To Door’s surprise, the rodent’s torso caved in under the pressure of Jack’s Water Gun, and before long, Door found herself staring down at a battered, unmoving faux patrat. “Whoa,” she breathed. “Strong little guy, isn’t he?” Geist asked. “That’s why we thought Jack would be ready for life outside the laboratory.” With a proud snort, Jack smirked at Door and thumped his chest with a stubby paw. She stared down at her pokémon and blinked. Were real ones actually that strong? Or did Geist’s orders to Savory’s pansear actually entail something more than “keep that patrat busy"? She had no time to think about this, as in the next instant, Geist was dodging Starr once more, and Door heard Starr’s fist crash into solid concrete. Geist landed on a platform above the sound and bolted forward, keeping his head turned as if he was watching something. Then, he leapt again, shooting to the side as he twisted Door around. “Incoming! Straight ahead!” he shouted. In response, Door clutched her pokémon tightly and screamed, “Jack!” The otter barked, drew in another breath, and shot a second jet of water out of his mouth. This time, the jet cut through the pink and connected to something with a smack, and a purrloin howled somewhere very close by. Once he landed, Geist set Door down and leaned over her, squinting at the fog ahead of them. Then, he pulled her back a few steps and pointed forward. “Door! There!” he shouted. With a short nod, she hoisted her oshawott up and aimed his head in the direction Geist was pointing. “Jack!” Jack complied, shooting one more Water Gun at the unseen purrloin. This time, there was no howl of pain. “Keep going!” Geist said. “You heard him, Jack!” Door responded. She held onto her pokémon tightly as Geist picked her up and swung her around. The stream of water shooting out of Jack drew an arc around them, cutting through the fog until it finally struck something just a few feet from where they were. A piercing screech sounded out of the mists this time, and through the thinning cloud, Door could see the dark form of Belle’s purrloin shoot away from them. “Hold it!” Door ordered. Jack cut off his stream, and the Dreamyard fell into silence, save for the distant growls of the cat. The sounds moved around the trio, continuing in a semicircle until it stopped just to their left. Door wrenched herself free from Geist and pointed Jack directly at the spot where the growls stopped. “Now!” “Door, no!” Geist grabbed her and twisted her a little more to the left just as Jack exhaled another stream of water. The blast curved, spraying the ground until it shot up … just in time to catch the purrloin squarely in the face. At once, the cat pinwheeled in the air and slammed into concrete somewhere in the fog, but Geist didn’t stop there. With one more twist, he narrowed his eyes at a point towards the sky and turned Door to face it. “Aim high!” he said. “Jack!” Door snapped, her voice straining. The oshawott pressed himself against his trainer’s chest, inhaled as deeply as he could, and shot out the strongest jet of water he could muster. This time, as it sliced through the air, the fog swirled away from it, peeling back just enough to let Door see Belle standing just a few yards from her. All at once, the thief’s eyes widened, and she reeled back, half-stepping away from the attack. Except she wasn’t quick enough. The jet struck her in the stomach and knocked her off her feet, sending her flying off the walkway. Geist’s arms circled Door’s waist again, and he leapt into the air, bounced off a crumbling wall, and bounded onto the platform Belle had stood on a moment ago. He set Door down and pushed past her, darting into the thinning fog until he knelt down by the fallen munna. It squeaked and shifted on the wall, crawling a little closer to the Companion as Door watched. The trainer held Jack close, her eyes on the psychic-type as her oshawott squirmed in her arms. As the tapir moved, its round body rocked into and out of Door’s view, and in the brief glimpses she could get of it, she saw the purple-blue bruises blossoming across its back. “Is it okay?” she asked. Geist shook his head and held a hand over the pokémon. His palm opened with a click, and the pad set inside it took on a white glow that washed over the munna. The creature squealed and leaned away from the light and into Door’s view, but the longer she watched, the more she saw the bruises shrink and fade. “One fresh water left,” Geist said as his palm closed. “Be careful.” “Be careful?” Door asked. “For what? The battle’s—” “Just beginning, you little twerp!” Belle snapped. Starr landed with a bang onto the platform, just in front of Geist and the munna, and Belle perched on his shoulders. The Companion’s stoic expression refused to break, but Belle, leaning over her partner’s head, clutched his scalp with one hand and reached for her belt with the other. “I’ve been going easy on you,” she growled. Then, she flipped off Starr’s back, landed behind him, and twirled ahead to place herself between him and munna. The stolen snivy’s poké ball appeared in her hand, and she brandished it with a flourish and a vicious smile. “We’re not going down without a fight,” she said. “You see, we want that little cutie pie to positively spew dream smoke. It’s gonna be necessary for our little plan.” Door scoffed. “Little plan? What little plan?” “One neither you nor your precious little Companion there will interfere with,” she replied. “Now, why don’t you two be good little pissants and back away from the munna?” Geist stood. His back was turned to Door, so she had no idea what his expression might have been, but judging from the way he tightened his fists, she knew he was ready to fight. And, glancing down at the very real pokémon at his feet, at the way it crawled—with effort—until it cowered behind him, she knew she had to side with him. Even if he was a Companion. So she stepped forward. Belle’s grin wavered at the corners, and her fingers tightened around the ball in her hand. “Oh, cocky, are we? Don’t make me laugh!” Just then, the fog thinned, as if a wind was blowing it away, into the interior of the Dreamyard. Starr turned his head slowly and narrowed his eyes at the ground. “It is coming,” he said. Belle lowered her arm and turned her grin to the ruined interior of the laboratory. “Finally. I thought I’d have to kick that little pig around more to get that stupid thing to appear.” “Geist, what is she talking about?” Door whispered. He held out an arm and watched Belle jump off the wall and into the lab’s interior. The fog swirled, compressing into a ball at the center of the yard as she approached step by step. Yet Starr didn’t move, didn’t bother following her. He merely raised a hand to his temple and let his eyes flash over the field. “Belle, that is not the musharna,” he said. “Step away from it immediately.” She didn’t. She stepped forward, walking slowly towards the cloud. It coalesced before her, shaping itself into a thin pillar before dispersing completely. At its center was not, as Starr had said, a musharna. At its center stood the man from Accumula. Belle froze, and even though her back was turned, Door could see her skin blanching. Starr leapt off the platform and started for his partner, while the silver-haired man glared down at Belle. “My dear Belle,” he drawled. His body dissolved into pink smoke and trailed away from her. The smoke split into thirds, and with a pink flash, the man reappeared—in three different spots surrounding her all at once. Starr reached out for his partner and circled his arms around her waist. “Repeat: That is not the musharna,” he repeated. “Warning: Illusion detected. Please be advised that—” The three men frowned. “You have failed. How very sad.” “Mr. Oppenheimer, sir! I can explain!” Belle called out. Starr’s arms tightened around her. “Repeat: Illusion dete—” All three figures tilted their heads and gave Belle a saddened frown. “I counted on you to fulfill a very specific mission, my dear. How could you disappoint me so?” Belle shook her head and tried to push forward, towards the figure directly in front of her, but Starr held her fast. “N-no!” she cried. “Mr. Oppenheimer, I swear, we didn’t fail! The musharna is here! It’s right here! I swear it is!” “How sad,” Oppenheimer sighed. “I suppose I have no choice but—” “Wait! No!” Belle yelled. She started forward, her hands reaching out for Oppenheimer’s robes, but before she could touch him, Starr swept her off her feet and slung her over a shoulder. “Belle deemed incapable of completing her mission,” he droned. “Mission incomplete. Aborting.” Starr leapt onto the crumbling wall of the laboratory and bounded away, and over the next few seconds, Belle’s shouts grew more distant and harder for Door to hear. Shortly after Belle and Starr vanished, the remaining pink fog faded away, and all three images of Oppenheimer flickered into nothingness. For a few moments, all was still and silent. Door stood, Jack squirming in her arms, as she listened closely to the wind for any sign of Belle. Then, the munna cried out, its song twisting into the air until a deeper voice answered it. Looking down at the interior of the Dreamyard, Door saw a large, purple-and-pink blob float out of the grass and hover in the exact spot where Belle had stood a moment ago. The munna squirmed off the platform and dropped towards the ground until a blue aura lit up around its tiny body and suspended it in thin air. It bounced once and glided towards the larger creature until, at last, it came to a rest on its back. Nuzzling it, the munna cooed and relaxed. “Musharna,” Geist recited. “The drowsing pokémon. With the mist from its forehead, it can create shapes of things from dreams it has eaten.” “I know what a musharna is,” Door snapped. Geist shrugged and stepped towards her. “Just trying to help.” “Yes, well, you can—hey! Don’t!” Before she could squirm out of Geist’s grasp, he grabbed her by the waist again, jumped off the platform, and landed within the dilapidated laboratory, just feet from the two pokémon. Door twisted herself out of his grasp and hugged Jack close, but Geist didn’t seem to notice. He only walked forward, approaching the musharna slowly as he extended a hand. “Munna should be fine,” he said as he reached down to pet the musharna. “I gave her a little medicine, but she’s a tenacious one. I wouldn’t be surprised if she’s back to being a handful within the hour.” The musharna shifted, tilting its body upwards as if to look at him. Door couldn’t quite tell whether or not it actually was; the creature’s eyes remained shut, even as it angled its face to the Companion. But then, the musharna’s eyes slid open and took on a faint, blue glow as it glanced from Geist to Door and back again. It huffed, heaving as a puff of pink smoke burst from the spot on its snout. As the puff drifted towards the tall, dark grass at the edges of the ruins, the musharna hummed a few notes and floated away from Door and Geist. On its back, the munna looked back and blinked at Door and Geist, then lifted a tiny, stubby paw to wave at them before it and its parent disappeared into the grass. “There they go,” Geist said. Then, he smiled at Door and added, “Nice work, by the way. You too, Jack.” Jack saluted at him and barked, but Door turned her head away. After a few seconds, she swiveled around and started back towards the Dreamyard gate. She was acutely aware that Geist was jogging after her, but she didn’t bother looking at him. “Door,” he began. Before he could go any further, Door quickened her step until she passed the crumbling wall of the abandoned lab, and on the other side, she found Savory and his pansear. The monkey perched on its trainer’s shoulder and stared at Door with a level of concern she didn’t know a fauxkémon could express, but as soon as Geist emerged, it broke eye contact with her and leapt from its trainer to the Companion. “Geez, he seems excited to see you,” Savory muttered. “So I take it you had a quite a battle in there?” “Pansear was great,” Geist replied. “He did everything I needed him to do. You’ve trained him well if he’s willing to listen to a Companion like that.” Savory shrugged. “Keep him, then. I’ve got another one, and he seems like he’s already fond of you.” “Me?” Geist gave the gym leader a small smile and reached up to pet the fire-type. “Oh no. I can’t. You know the rules. But if you don’t mind, perhaps … Door? Would you like a pansear?” Truth be told, Door had already tuned the conversation out. She wandered towards the grass, looking out over the sea of green. Real pokémon were starting to appear in the Dreamyard—that was what Amanita and Geist had said. If that was true, then that had to mean that somewhere in those grasses… “Door?” Geist asked. “Keep it yourself,” she told him. “Door, you should know the rules too. I can’t register pokémon in my name. Companions can’t carry pokémon of their own because they can’t legally obtain the licenses to do so. They can only carry pokémon on behalf of their trainers.” “Why? It’s just a toy.” Geist sighed. “Not this again.” Several feet in front of her, the grass began to rustle. She narrowed her eyes and tried to discern what was in it. “Not what again?” she growled. “That whole business about fake pokémon and real ones,” Geist replied. “It doesn’t matter whether or not this pansear is real, Door. What matters is—” “Do you have a poké ball?” she asked. He stopped. “What?” She held out her hand. “Mind if I borrow a poké ball? There’s a pokémon in here.” “Door, I don’t think—” “Look,” she said. “I don’t care if you keep that pansear for yourself. Savory seems to think it likes you, okay? And you’re not my Companion, so do whatever you want or ask Amanita if you can keep it. I literally can’t even care less. Now do you mind? I’ll pay Amanita back for it.” There was a beat of hesitation before she felt Geist place an object in her palm. “Door, I would highly recommend that you—” She expanded the ball and threw it at the rustling grass. It hit its target with a whack, eliciting a sharp cry from the hidden pokémon. She saw a bright red light, the silhouette of a stocky pokémon, reach up towards the sky before vanishing. As she waded into the field, she listened, straining her ears as the ball clicked and shifted the grass around it. Then, at last, she found the ball the moment it fell still. Whatever was in that grass, it was hers now, and her heart pounded in her chest at that thought. Smiling, she plopped Jack onto her shoulder and bent down to scoop the ball up. Then, wading back into the open, Door displayed the ball to Jack and let him lean down to sniff at it. As she stepped back onto the pavement, she couldn’t help but feel a sense of pride well within her. Her oshawott—her real, living and breathing oshawott—sat fascinated by the ball in her hand, the one that contained her second very real pokémon. This was it. This was the part where she was really, truly on her way to becoming a real trainer. And it was so very easy. “Thanks,” she said, although she meant it more for Jack’s rapt attention than Geist’s generosity. “Whatever’s in here, I know it’s going to be an amazing addition to my team. From here on out, you and me, Jack. You, me, and whatever’s in here will be absolutely unstoppable, right?” “I’m sure you will be,” Geist replied. Door snorted and glanced at him. He stared back with a small smile and a quirked eyebrow, as if she had done something thoroughly embarrassing. But she wasn’t going to let that bother her. She was a real trainer, after all, and what did he, the fake human being, know about anything? “Damn right,” she said as she held up the ball between them. “This pokémon went down without even the slightest fight. Clearly, that’s a sign I’m going to be an awesome tamer of real pokémon one day.” “Or it could mean that pokémon wasn’t going to put up a fight in the first place,” Geist replied as he tilted his head at her. “As I was trying to warn you, the pokémon that had captured your attention was…” “Something awesome, right?” Door asked. “Something that can be trained into a super-strong, intimidating beast of a pokémon, yeah?” “It was an audino.” The color drained from Door’s face, but her smile didn’t falter. After a few seconds, Geist put his hand on his hip and sighed again. “Audino. The hearing pokémon,” Geist recited. “Their auditory sense is astounding. They have a radar-like ability to understand their surroundings through slight sounds. This ability, combined with the species’ gentle nature and healing techniques, make audino ideal nurses. However, it also makes them difficult to train due to their aversion to loud noises, including those typical of a battle. Conclusion: not a good choice for a beginning trainer.” He turned away from her and began walking towards the Dreamyard gate, just as Door had moments before. Savory was already well ahead of them, leading the way back to Blair and Opal and the spindle tree. Door, meanwhile, stood where she was in stunned silence. “Come along, Door,” Geist said. “Dr. Fennel is surely waiting for us.” At that, Door’s expression faltered, and she bowed her head. Jack, breaking his focus on the ball, gave her an inquisitive whine as he patted her on the back, but Door only emitted a long, low groan of her own. “Why me?” she said.
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Post by bay on May 18, 2018 6:32:55 GMT
I admit to chuckling at that.
Jack just gets cuter each time. Also,"were real ones actually that strong" hmmm interesting point...
Nice confrontation with Team Matrix here. I'm guessing the Musharna was the one that made Oppenheimer there. Speaking of illusions, curious if the Dreamworld stuff plays a more important more than in the original games.
And we get Door having an Audino! I've heard some fun stuff concerning Audino, so it should be fun seeing how she handles it. Look forward to more!
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Post by Firebrand on May 19, 2018 15:27:21 GMT
Not sure if it's your intention, but the whole encounter with Belle and Starr to me read a lot like an encounter with the TRio, albiet a slightly more competent TRio. You also give us that they're associated with Team Matrix, which I'll admit I'm surprised by. To be fair, we haven't seen a lot of Starr, but it seems to me that he's basically marching Belle's tune like a normal companion would, with the exception of that little bit at the end there where he whisks her away, and to me it seems like that doesn't exactly mesh with Team Matrix's professed goal of Companion liberation (unless Team Matrix is exactly as hypocritical as Team Plasma, in which case I guess it meshes pretty well). But all in all, I can definitely see Jessie and Belle cut from the same mold, and that's not a bad thing. I've always thought that when Jessie was written well and in focus, she was one of the better characters in the anime, so I think even if Belle is only superficially like her, it gives her a lot of potential for further explanation.
The action in this chapter is really good, and it definitely feels like you're becoming comfortable with the rules of action you've imposed on yourself for this setting. It seems to mostly follow anime-style physics, and I think it was interesting that Geist was able to spring around like he was, which I guess is an advantage of being a robot. Still, I sort of guess that this isn't in the standard Companion specs. We also get to see a little more of Jack, which I like. He's obviously got more character than Scout, but I definitely understand Door's reluctance to use him, so any chance he gets to shine is welcome.
And at the end there, I guess that's Knives? I've been pretty good at avoiding spoilers but I've gleaned enough to know that Door and Geist's conversation about how Audino isn't really going to catapult Door to victory is... a little far from the mark.
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Post by admin on May 20, 2018 20:51:08 GMT
Replies! I admit to chuckling at that. ;D ;D ;D Doesn’t he just? ;D ;D ;D (Realtalk, tho, writing this fic actually made me like oshawott. I was kinda ambivalent to them beforehand.) Yep and yep. 8) To elaborate on the second point, let’s just say that the Dream World physics Amanita explained in previous chapters is more or less the biggest plot point of the whole shebang. Well. Besides the stuff discussed in today’s chapter. She handles it well. 8) 8) 8) Thank ya! Here’s hoping the next leg doesn’t disappoint~ ;D Not sure if it's your intention, but the whole encounter with Belle and Starr to me read a lot like an encounter with the TRio, albiet a slightly more competent TRio. No, yeah, you are 100% correct here. Belle and Starr are essentially the (far more competent) Jessie and James of Team Matrix: special agents tasked with very important fieldwork. Which meeeeeeans that now the plot’s starting to gain traction, you can expect to see those two a lot. Without getting into too many spoilers, Team Matrix is … complicated. Many of its members believe in their mission of Companion liberation and treat their Companion partners as equals. Belle is not one of them. For reasons that I’ll get into later. Thank ya! And word to Jessie, although I’ve always had more of a soft spot for James and his utterly ridiculous and cheesy backstory (combined with his clear “I’m only evil because it’s fun, but actually, I have a heart of gold” stuff going on). Jessie has a lot more consistency, though, so it’s a lot more fun to see her in action. So I will take it as a high compliment that Belle is a bit like her only, you know, not in a kids’ cartoon. 8) Yeah, battles here are pretty much 100% anime physics with slightly more violence. Admittedly, part of that is due to sheer cheating: if I’m ever unsure about how a move works, I just watch anime clips of it, haha. This in turn means that moves and whatnot end up being slightly more cartoonish, but hey. As for Geist, actually, weirdly enough, those are within Companion specs. Companions, even the ones with flimsier skeletons, are designed to be sturdy af, which in turn allows them to carry quite a bit. Being that agile, meanwhile … that might be a different story, ngl. THAT IS INDEED. 8) Ha. Haha. Hahahahahahaha. 8) 8) 8) And now, the meatiest chapter yet. 8) In all seriousness, given the length of this chapter, I'mma gonna take a short break to avoid overwhelming y'all. The next update will come a week from now, right ... smack in the middle of Memorial Day weekend for you American folk. Uh, excellent time to start a new arc? Ah well.
[CHAPTER NINE: AMANITA’S LABORATORY] To call the ensuing hour in Amanita Fennel’s laboratory awkward would have been an understatement. Savory had parted ways with them at the gate, with the excuse that he had a thing or few to discuss with his fellow gym leaders about the Dreamyard, and Geist had carried Opal upstairs to be repaired and to “upload her memory of the events that transpired this afternoon for analysis.” That left Blair and Door standing awkwardly next to each other against a set of desks—the same ones Scout and Amanita’s snivy had used for battle. For the past half an hour, Blair had stared at her feet as if her shoes had become the most fascinating objects in the room, and Door, meanwhile, had kept herself busy by turning her new audino’s poké ball over in her hand as a thousand conversations filled her head. Every so often, Door would look at the other girl and open her mouth to say something, but just as quickly, she would shut it again and stare at her ball once more. Finally, she took a deep breath. “Hey, um, just wanna say I’m sorry,” she said quickly. She swallowed hard and reached up with her free hand to rub the back of her neck. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Blair look up. “I … what?” the girl replied. “Sorry,” Door repeated. “Just, um. About Wilbur.” “What about Wilbur?” “You know…” Still, Door refused to look at her. She even turned her head away from Blair as she twirled her empty hand in the air. “Scout biting him on the leg. Making him bleed. That kind of thing?” “Wilbur’s fine.” Door shifted her head and caught the other girl’s eye. Blair looked bewildered, eyebrows knitted and eyes wide and uncertain. Yet despite that expression, Door relaxed. “O-oh?” she said. Blair nodded slowly. “He’s at the pokémon center. The wound wasn’t deep. It’s okay … all right?” Door relaxed a little more. “Kinda surprised you’re not pissed off at me.” Looking at her shoes again, Blair shrugged. “Why would I be?” “I don’t know.” Door rubbed the back of her neck again. “I feel like we got off on the wrong foot.” Blair didn’t respond. She scuffed her toes against the floor and refused to look up. In that silence, Door stopped, searching her mind for a way to keep talking. “So … why were you at the Dreamyard anyway?” “I told you,” Blair responded. “I noticed there was dream smoke coming out of there, so I snuck in with Opal.” “Yeah, but if Wilbur was in the pokémon cen—” Door stopped as a part of Blair’s statement sunk into her head. For the second time that day, her mind immediately switched gears, and she gave her conversational partner a wary glance. “Wait. What do you mean you snuck in?” Blair looked up at Door with wide eyes, but this time, her eyebrows were raised. It was clear she had meant to say something else, but the moment to correct herself had long passed. “I mean I went in before anyone like the police or something got in,” Blair replied quickly. Door narrowed her eyes at that. “Come to think of it … only those who’d earned the Trio Badge or who’re working for Amanita have permission to be in the Dreamyard. If you’re a fresh graduate from Trainers’ School, then that means…” Blair bit her lip and cringed, leaning away from Door. At that, Door frowned and slumped her shoulders. “Blair. Did you earn the Trio Badge?” For a second, Blair didn’t react—didn’t say anything and didn’t move to indicate an answer one way or another. Then, slowly, she shook her head. Door pulled her hand from the back of her neck to the front of her bangs. Worming her fingers through her hair, she realized then that she was going to have to say something mature. Responsible. Sisterly. “Well, look,” she said. “Not everyone can be, y’know. Perfect. We all do things that aren’t exactly by-the—” “I didn’t graduate from Trainers’ School.” Door stopped. Narrowed her eyes again. Quirked an eyebrow at Blair. “What?” Blair tightened her shoulders and pulled them close to her head. “I … I didn’t graduate.” Then, when she spoke next, her voice dropped into what was barely above a mumble. “I wasn’t failing, but my grades weren’t good enough for me to graduate with a trainer’s license.” “So … what? You’re just getting a starter and going back to school, or…?” Blair cringed a little more. “I’m dropping out. I-I got a trainer’s license at the pokémon center instead.” Door’s expression shifted immediately. Her features softened, eyebrows moving from a confused knit to a concerned furrow, and her body leaned towards Blair in an effort to see the girl’s face. “Blair,” she said. The new trainer sniffed and wiped her eyes with a sleeve. “Sorry. Please don’t tell my aunt. I won’t tell her about the stuff you said to me. But she was only gonna give me a starter on the condition that I’d graduate, but if I didn’t, then…” Door held up her hands, palms towards the other girl. “Blair, hold on. I don’t get it.” “What’s there to get?” Blair asked. “I suck! I screw up all the time on my tests, I can’t even win a single battle except against a stupid patrat, and you know what that girl said to me when she beat me in the Dreamyard? She just tossed Toto aside like she was nothing, and she called me pathetic, and…” With a sigh, Door slung an arm around Blair and pulled her into an awkward half-hug. Door rolled her eyes and groaned, filling the silence Blair left behind the moment she stopped speaking. Then, with a dramatic dip, Door brought her face close to Blair’s. “Okay, look,” she said. “Sure, you suck at tests. Everyone sucks at tests. Tests suck, period. If you ask me, the whole concept of a school where you learn things before you go out and become a trainer’s kinda stupid. Training isn’t something you train for. It’s a thing where you do stupid things on the road because the journey itself is supposed to be the thing that teaches you about how much life does whatever it does. I don’t know. I’ve had a long day, so I can’t even tell you whether or not this makes sense, but my point is, just because you suck at school doesn’t mean you suck at everything, got it?” Blair sniffled and looked at Door from over her arm. “But what about that girl?” “What girl? You mean the inbred punk rock chick who hasn’t seen a shower in God even knows how long?” Door asked. When Blair cracked a smile at that, Door couldn’t help but grin herself as she said, “She’s a complete jerk. Not to mention she doesn’t know what she’s talking about. Jack, my oshawott? Took out her patrat in one hit. Took her out too in another.” Using the hand slung around Blair’s shoulders, Door mimed shooting a gun. “Boom. Just like that.” Slowly, Blair lowered her arms and widened her grin. “Really?” “Really.” Door patted her shoulder. “Anyway, point is, don’t listen to her. Everyone sucks at first, but that’s the whole thing about a journey. You don’t actually know what you’re good at until you kinda figure it out by accident along the way.” “So … you think I should still drop out and go on a journey?” Door snorted. “Hell, kid. I’ll walk you out of town.” “Don’t call me ‘kid.’ I’m fourteen.” Pocketing her audino’s poké ball, Door held up a hand. “Okay. Blair it is.” Blair’s grin softened. “Thanks, Door. Not … not for the name thing. For everything.” Door crossed her arms and shrugged again. “Don’t mention it. But … you did mean the thing about not telling Professor Ironwood about the … other thing, right?” “Were you serious about not telling her I dropped out of Trainers’ School?” “Yeah.” “Then we’ve got a deal.” With a smirk, Blair offered a hand for Door to shake. Door snaked one of hers under her arm and took it, and the two trainers pumped their hands once. And then, Geist cleared his throat. “Well,” he said from his spot on the stairwell, “I suppose this would be a good time to tell you Opal’s ready.” On cue, Blair’s Companion trotted down the steps and waltzed across the laboratory floor to approach her trainer. Her hands were out to her sides, palms parallel to the floor to allow her to show off the polished, new panel that covered her stomach. All the while, her eyes were glowing bright blue, as they always had when she was active. “Opal!” Blair cried. She pushed off the desk and practically ran to her Companion. Reaching out for her, Blair took Opal’s wrists and looked into her face. “Opal, are you okay?! How’re your power cells?!” “Fully functional and charged, Blair! Better than new, even!” Opal replied cheerfully. “It helps when the person repairing you has the right parts on-hand, and Dr. Fennel has plenty!” Then, she hesitated, pulling one of her hands out of Blair’s to touch her fingertips to her lips. “But what did I miss? My memory core seems to have a blank between the Dreamyard and now.” “It’s … it’s a long story,” Blair replied. “We should head to the pokémon center now. I want to see how Wilbur’s doing.” Opal pulled one of her hands away from Blair’s to salute her partner. “Okay! Destination set! Ready when you are, Blair!” With a soft grin, Blair whirled around, keeping her hand on Opal’s other wrist. As the trainer stepped towards the entrance to the lab, Door pushed off the desk. “Hey, Blair?” she asked. Blair flashed Door a surprised glance. “Yeah?” “When I said I’d walk you out of town, I was serious,” she told her. “If you’re going to be hanging around the pokémon center for a while, I’ll swing by later on, and we can talk about that. Okay?” A relieved smile broke across Blair’s face, and with a nod, she replied, “Okay.” And then, she and her Companion walked out of the lab. The moment the door shut behind them, the stairs creaked. Door looked up to see Geist standing straight in the stairwell—straighter than he had a second ago. “Dr. Fennel will see you now,” he said. Door tightened her arms and walked towards the stairs. As she reached for the banister, she hesitated and looked directly at Geist. “I didn’t do anything wrong, did I?” she asked. He smiled at her. “No. Why would you think that?” “I mean…” She flicked her eyes towards the door. “The whole ‘Dr. Fennel will see you now’ thing. Kinda sounds like meeting the principal if you messed up in school.” “Oh. I can assure you, you did absolutely nothing wrong.” Then, after a pause, Geist added, “But you did make up with Blair, did you not?” “Guess you walked in after that,” Door muttered. “Yeah. We talked things over. She’s apparently gone through a lot.” “Ah.” “Poor kid. Kinda feel sorry for her now.” Geist frowned for a moment, then reached out to motion towards the top of the steps. “You’d better go upstairs. Dr. Fennel is waiting.” Without even a nod to him, Door climbed the stairs and brushed past him. She emerged into the living quarters a moment later—or, more specifically, what was apparently a living room. Two couches were arranged around a glass-topped coffee table in the center of the space, and the wall closest to Door was lined with framed pictures and low bookshelves filled with books. Straight ahead, she saw a set of three doors, one of which opened into what appeared to be a small repair shop; Door could see the types of chairs Companions would sit in when being serviced through the doorway. To her left was a simple, open kitchen, in which Amanita stood with one hand on a tablet computer and another on a coffee pot. “Dr. Fennel?” Door called. “Geist said you were waiting for me.” Amanita looked over her shoulder. “Hmm? Ah! Yes, of course! Close the door, dear, and come on over. I don’t want Geist to hear our conversation.” That request struck Door as a little odd, but nonetheless, she shrugged and did as she was told. Closing the door quietly, she stalked across the living room, hands jammed into her pockets, until she stood behind a set of stools at the divider separating the kitchenette from the living room. From that angle, Door could see the pair of coffee mugs sitting on the kitchenette counter in front of Amanita. The scientist finished pouring one cup, then shifted the pot to the other, all while keeping her eyes on a tablet computer. “Interesting turn of events in the Dreamyard there,” Amanita said. “Never pegged Belle and Starr as someone else’s hired hands when I met them. They always seemed like a standup pair of potential scientists.” Door snorted. Maybe Starr would have been—one could program a Companion to be anything they wanted it to be, after all—but Belle was an entirely different matter. “You really think so?” Door said. Amanita cracked a grin. “Sure. And before you ask, Cassius Cassine was a lot worse off before he got his training. You could rehabilitate a lot of folks, so long as they’re willing to listen to you. That’s what Bill always taught us, anyway.” “Um … right.” Door rubbed the back of her neck. “So … what did you need to talk about? Reward for delivering Geist or something?” With a click, Amanita slid the coffeepot back into place. She was quiet for a second as she picked up one of the mugs of coffee and placed her tablet on the divider’s counter, in front of Door. Tapping something on its face, she let the tablet’s holographic projector flicker to life. Above the screen, a small image of Door appeared, standing with one fist clenched at her side and the other hand waving wildly in front of her. “And now you're being open about it?!” the image demanded. Geist’s voice, from a source unseen, responded, “Being open about what?” “That you're a Companion!” Amanita reached over to tap the tablet’s face, and the image of Door dissipated. “Coffee?” Amanita asked as she extended one of the cups to Door. Door could feel her face burn with an embarrassed blush, and she shook her head. Amanita frowned and dumped the coffee back into the pot. “Suit yourself,” Amanita said. “I, um … thanks, but…” Swallowing hard, she glanced at the tablet again and chuckled nervously. “S-so, uh, you grabbed all the video from Geist’s memory core?” Amanita grasped the other cup. Her free hand reached for a small sugar bowl in the shape of a munna, just next to the coffeemaker. “Mmhmm,” she replied. Door stared at the counter. She could practically feel a part of her curl up and die in her chest. “So I guess you saw all the things I said to him already.” “Not all of it. Just the Dreamyard so far. Geist told me I’d be most interested in what happened there.” Amanita removed the lid of the sugar bowl and started spooning sugar into her coffee, and Door watched the spoon dip into and out of the container. Instantly, she felt relief. Amanita hadn’t seen much, then. Not the time Door tried to hurt Scout, not all the things she said about Companions … nothing except the Dreamyard. Relaxing, Door sat back and thought about what Amanita had just shown her—about the clip in particular. “So … so was it interesting?” Door asked at last. “Oh yes.” Amanita replied with a chuckle. “I got a kick out of that part in particular.” All at once, Door’s face burned again, and she turned her head away from her host. “To be fair, Geist looks just like a human at first glance.” Amanita’s spoon clinked against her mug a few times—slowly, as if she was choosing her next moves carefully. And then, at last, she tapped the spoon on the edge of her cup and placed it in the mug that she had offered Door. “Oh, I know,” Amanita said. “Geist was specifically designed to be as close to human as possible. Even newer models aren’t as close to human as he is.” Door furrowed her eyebrows. “Then what was so funny about that clip? Why show me that clip if you knew I wouldn’t have been able to recognize what Geist was?” “Well, two reasons,” Amanita said as she lifted her eyes to the ceiling. “First, I’d like to apologize to you because it is rather rude to lead you on like that. Second…” Amanita’s voice trailed off briefly as her eyes fell onto Door. The trainer shifted uncomfortably on her feet as she brought her cup back to her lips. “Second?” she asked. “Second, truth is…” She exhaled pressed her mug against her chin. “After seeing that clip, I thought it’d be best to have Geist send you up for a chat. I’m sure you’ve got plenty of questions that need answers.” At that, Door held up her hands to stop the older woman in her tracks. “Whoa. Look. I’m sure this all is fascinating, but I don’t need answers. I delivered Geist as promised. I’m good with not knowing what’s up.” Peering over the counter, Amanita raised her eyebrows at Door. “A granddaughter of Brigette who isn’t curious? Now that’s something.” She stopped to sip her coffee. Door watched her tilt her head back and smack her lips afterwards in thought. “Well, dear,” Amanita said, “I can’t very well make you stay and chat, so if you really don’t want to ask, you don’t have to. Feel free to go back downstairs. Geist has been instructed to give you an appropriate reward before you leave.” Huh. That was easy. Door shifted from one foot to the other as she mulled over Amanita’s words. Was this too easy? “Thanks,” she said cautiously. Then, as an afterthought, she added, “And, um. Sorry. For, y’know. Seeming rude here.” “Not at all! Take care, Door.” And that was that. Amanita turned her back on the living room and brought her mug to her lips, and Door was left standing awkwardly in the middle of a stranger’s living room. Frowning, Door tilted her head and waited for a beat, as if expecting something else, but when Amanita only continued to sip her coffee in silence, Door nodded and moved to the stairs. Without a word of goodbye, she reached out, her fingertips brushing the doorknob… ...before stopping altogether. Door sighed and cursed internally and profusely. She whirled around, walked back to the divider, and took a seat on one of the stools. Once again, an adult played her like a fiddle. “Okay,” she said, her voice dripping with exasperation. “First question. Is he a Companion or isn’t he?” Amanita shifted to face Door with a wide, friendly grin. “I thought you’d ask. Yes, Geist is a Companion, through and through. One hundred percent artificial human.” Door arched an eyebrow and nodded slowly. “Uh huh. So does he … I mean, that’s a stupid question because he said he knew in the Dreamyard, but—” “Yes, Geist knows he’s a Companion.” At once, Door’s curiosity burned away into a spike of frustration. “So why’d he pretend he wasn’t?! Why’d he talk about himself like he was just some garden-variety amnesiac?!” “Can’t say for certain, dear,” Amanita replied with a shrug. “Sometimes, Geist just likes to be coy.” She hesitated, her eyes drifting to the ceiling again. “Although come to think of it, he did say something about how you didn’t care for Companions. Maybe he was just trying to avoid making you feel uncomfortable. He’s designed to be sympathetic, you know.” Door cringed. Of course he had to tell Amanita that part. As if she needed to look even worse in front of another human being. Sure, her reason for hating Companions was, in her mind anyway, completely understandable and her own personal opinion that no one in their right mind would judge her for, but she knew that Geist, with his soft sighs and posh accent, would find a way to make it seem like hating his entire kind was a bad thing. And then, there was the part where Amanita thought he might have simply been coy, which to Door sounded as if he had deliberately— Wait a second. “What do you mean you can’t say for certain why he was pretending? He’s a Companion! It’s not like anything’s actually going through his head! Wouldn’t you have, you know, known that he was acting on the protocols for a mischievous Companion or something? Like … doesn’t he have set characteristics like every other Companion?” Using one of her hands, Amanita rubbed the back of her head. “Well … that’s true, but Geist is a bit … special.” Door did not like the sound of that. “What do you mean?” Amanita gave her a long, serious look. “You’ve noticed it, haven’t you? How Geist sometimes seems … human, as it were?” Of course she had. That was the first thing she noticed. Door felt her frustration bubble up and fill every part of her body. Her throat constricted, and it felt as if something large and cold was welling up in her throat. All she wanted was a straight answer, but… Taking a deep breath, Door tried to calm herself. Maybe she wasn’t asking the right question. Maybe … maybe it wasn’t so much what Geist was but instead why he was. And maybe Door had to dig in a different direction to figure that part out. So she began. “Dr. Fennel—” “Amanita.” “Right. Amanita.” Door hesitated. The first question was the most important. That much she knew. “Who made Geist?” The scientist smirked. Apparently, the first question was the right one. “Your great aunt,” Amanita replied. Door paused again, but this time, it was for a short moment. She punctuated it by slapping her forehead. “Oh my God. I’ll dismantle him,” she groaned. Then, peering at Amanita, she added, “He’s from Kanto. If he’s with you now, then he meant he lived with my great aunt, didn’t he?” “Technically yes, although Kanto does have its own administrator he could’ve been with.” Amanita brought her cup to her lips. “Still, you’re not wrong.” Door winced at her response. Geist had another owner. Things were starting to click into place. “So … when he said he doesn’t remember anything before he came to you,” Door said slowly, “that meant…” “That he was wiped, just like any other used Companion before they end up with new owners?” Amanita took a sip, then pulled her cup away from her lips only just enough to let her speak. “Yep.” Door rubbed her face, trailing her hand slowly downwards until she reached her chin. Then, she shoved her elbow against the counter and leaned in, squinting once more at Amanita. “Chrissake,” she said. “Why couldn’t he just say that?” With a grin, Amanita swirled her cup, splashing lukewarm coffee over the rim and onto her hand. “Already went over that, dear. But … wouldn’t you like to know why he’s so special—or why your friends with Team Matrix are after him?” And there, Door paused. Before that point, Door didn’t think she could narrow her eyes at a person any more than what she was already doing as she stared at Amanita. But that statement—not only the way it was delivered with the woman’s coy smile and teasing tone but also the actual content of it—allowed Door to transcend to a completely different plane of fed up with literally everything. So, she found a way to narrow her eyes even more without closing them completely. “What.” Her reaction was not a question. It was a statement. Amanita’s grin softened a little, easing from coy to sheepish as she brought her cup to her lips again. “Team Matrix is after Geist. Or at least, I think that’s one of the things they’re doing. Who’s to say about organizations like these? But in any case, they are. Don’t ask me why; I just know. And I know because … well, that’s why your grandmother had me hold onto him for a few years.” So that was it. Door relaxed, exhaling through her nose. Granted, she didn’t know whether or not Amanita was telling the truth, but if she was, then it would have made sense. After all, Door knew her grandmother. Or, rather, she didn’t know her grandmother, and that was the problem and point all in one. Brigette Hamilton-Hornbeam—former administrator of Pokémon Bank, former CEO of Halcyon Labs, former a lot of other things related to innovative tech Door could barely comprehend—had not spoken to her own son and granddaughter for over ten years. Linus had tried, of course. There was always a voicemail message on Brigette’s birthday, cards on holidays, anything to stay connected, but Brigette never bothered visiting them and certainly showed the minimum amount of warmth towards Door. But if there was one thing Door knew about Brigette—other than the fact that she was practically an ice queen as far as she was concerned—it was that Door was poised to inherit this great big family history full of things like a massive tech empire and the words “revolutionized the face of” … and the only reason why she knew about any of it was because she was taught about it in school. She wasn’t told any of it by her grandmother or her often scatterbrained father. It was fed to her by some musty textbook in the back of a classroom, through lectures peppered with kids swiveling around to look at her, through secondhand stories flavored with the excitement of people who apparently knew her family more than she did. So yes. She understood that Amanita had no idea why an evil organization was after a Companion Brigette had dumped on her. Dumping important things onto the heads of innocent bystanders with as minimal an explanation as possible was just something Door’s grandmother did. And so, Door felt a little bit of sympathy for Amanita as she finally responded. “I’m listening,” Door said. Amanita sighed, and Door couldn’t help but notice the slightly relieved note it carried. “You see,” Amanita began, “Geist is a lot older than he looks, and … well. Your aunt died—what, ten years ago?” Door shrugged. She knew she should have felt a little somber at the mention of her great aunt’s death, but the truth was she didn’t feel anything at all. “Yeah.” Amanita flicked her fingers across her tablet, and its holographic screen flickered to life once more. “Well, Geist has only been with me for the past three years.” Shifting her eyes to the ceiling, Door did the math and nodded slowly. “Okay. So…” “So where was he for the past seven years? Bouncing between all of us.” Amanita’s fingers struck the glass surface of her tablet once more, and a photograph popped up on the screen above it. Door sat in silence, her eyes scanning across the row of people before her. Eight people stood frozen in time, gathered on the stone steps of a brick building Door couldn’t recognize. All of them looked happy and excited to be there. It was strange for Door to see her grandmother smiling, yet there she was, right in the center, proud and happy and young beside Geist. Lanette stood on his other side, just as young and happy, with her arm looped in his as she smiled shyly to the camera. And next to Lanette must have been Amanita, a literal child perched on the concrete banister. Door couldn’t recognize the others—not the perky blonde woman next to Amanita, the tall punk on the rightmost edge, or either of the two bespectacled human walking sticks taking up most of the left side. And even when Amanita named them, she still didn’t. “Let’s see,” Amanita said. “Well, for the first few years, he was with Rachel McKenzie in Johto, who isn’t pictured here because this was taken before all that. After then, he spent a couple years with your grandmother in Hoenn.” She prodded at the photograph, at Brigette’s smiling face. The image distorted beneath her touch, rippling like water until it resolved. Somehow, Brigette’s smile looked wrong when it did. Fake somehow. So did the others as Amanita shifted her finger from face to face. “Then it was a couple years in Sinnoh with Bebe Larson,” Amanita continued. “Then, so I’ve heard, a very brief time in Kalos with Cassius Cassine, followed by, finally, yours truly.” Her finger lingered on the image of her childhood self, and her voice dropped in volume. “Right around Johto, Team Matrix suddenly popped up, and apparently, the messages they sent Ray scared her enough to force her to send him off to another region. But … well. You can probably figure it out from there.” Door didn’t need to think about it. She barely needed to say it, but it spilled out of her mouth all the same. “They all got messages.” Amanita pulled her finger away and rested her hand on the counter. “Got it in one. All of them demanded that we hand Geist over.” She flicked the tablet again, and the photo shifted to the side, just enough for another window to appear. Door leveled her eyes on it, staring hard at the email client with a single message open and glaring back at her. Zero-One is a mistake that must be fixed. You have one chance to do the right thing. Our agents will be in touch shortly.Door furrowed her eyebrows at those words. Something didn’t make sense. Or, well, none of it made sense, but there was something about Amanita’s story that seemed … odd. It nagged at the back of her mind, even as Amanita continued. “Dummy email from a server in Kalos, of course. Perfectly untraceable,” Amanita said. “So, figuring I couldn’t put up a fight myself, I hoped that by sending Geist to your father, I could at least hide him until all of this blew over—or until your father could get him to your company’s headquarters in Castelia.” Door reeled back at that statement. “Wait. Geist was delivering starters, not coming for help … wasn’t he?” Amanita gave her guest a wry smile. “Door, I still don’t know how Team Matrix found him. I had to be cautious, so I told all three of my assistants at the time that that’s what he was doing and sent them off. I figured that Professor Ironwood would know what to do, and hey, it couldn’t hurt. Her niece had been asking for a starter for months anyway, and if Geist ran into trouble, well. Then he and my other assistants were all armed. Win-win for everyone.” She hesitated for a beat. “Except for the part where Belle and Starr turned out to be the agents in question, anyway. Shame, too. They were with me for a year, and they came highly recommended. Girl has a head on her shoulders, really.” How Belle could pass off as anything remotely legit was beyond Door, but she didn’t think to ask. In truth, it didn’t seem quite as important as a lot of other oddities about Amanita’s story, and a thousand more questions spun through Door’s mind. Why was Belle at the Dreamyard? Why did she try to steal the starters? What was Team Matrix, really? If they were after Companion liberation, then what could they have wanted with a real snivy and a real musharna? And most importantly… “So … why does Team Matrix want him?” she asked. Amanita brought her coffee cup to her lips and stopped. “Hmm? Swallowing, Door pressed on. “I mean, when you wipe a Companion, then they’re completely reset. Stealing Geist would be just like stealing a fresh-out-of-the-box Companion. If Team Matrix is all about Companions, you’d think they’d know that.” “Oh, no doubt, dear, but Geist is a little different. You see, it doesn’t matter whether or not he’s wiped. The point is…” Amanita hesitated, glancing at the ceiling as if the right words were painted above her. “Well, he’s the prototype.” The ensuing silence was short, but it was thick and heavy as Door processed that thought. “I’m sorry,” she said. “What?” Amanita motioned to her with her mug. “I told you he was older than he looks.” “But…” Door screwed up her face and shook her head vigorously. “The prototype as in … the first Companion?” “That would be what ‘prototype’ means, yes.” Door’s eyebrows rose. “But that would make him, what? Forty years old?” “Probably closer to forty-five,” her host replied. Door splayed her hands out in front of her, palms up. “But … how?! Companions start experiencing massive slowdown when they’re half that age!” Amanita gestured to the ceiling with a finger. “Ah, and therein lies the interesting part. While I don’t rightly know for certain what in Geist causes that, I do know that he was not only the prototype but also your great aunt’s personal Companion.” “Yeah. We already—” “Which means that whenever she had a new feature to test out, she most likely tried it on Geist first.” As Amanita downed the rest of her coffee, Door opened her mouth again to speak, but then, after a moment of silence, she closed it again. A realization descended on her in that time, settling into her brain gradually, as if it was a liquid filling the crevices of her cerebral cortex. “So,” she said, “you’re saying…” “That when I say Geist is the prototype, I mean for literally everything?” Amanita nodded. “Yes. It also means that there’s a possibility that he’s got cutting edge, experimental tech inside of him. Not just tech that’s been keeping him running all these decades either. I’m talking about tech that your aunt never had the chance to release before she … well.” Another silence descended on the room, this time cold and empty, not thick and expectant. Amanita didn’t need to finish that sentence, but frankly, Door wouldn’t have minded if she had. Because the first and last time Door had ever seen Lanette Hamilton was at the woman’s funeral … which was funny to Door, given that Lanette was apparently the reason why her family was famous at all. But Door didn’t want to say that. Amanita was a stranger, after all. What kind of guest would she be if she dumped old family drama on her? So, swallowing her frustration, Door nodded and said, “Yeah. I get it.” Amanita must have noticed how awkward and quiet Door had become, because at that point, she coughed lightly into her hand. “Sorry.” “Don’t be. Barely knew her.” “Of course.” Amanita turned away and set her mug on the kitchen counter. Door’s eyes settled on the coffeepot as the scientist pulled it free and began making another steaming cup of coffee. There was something soothing about the motion, the way Amanita swept the carafe out of the machine and the way the coffee hit the mug with a splash. Door inhaled deeply, taking in the scent of freshly brewed coffee, and already, she was regretting the decision to turn down a cup. The conversation and onslaught of revelations already left her feeling drained, and she had the feeling she was only partway through the story. And given the fact that she hadn’t had a decent cup of coffee in almost two days, Door wasn’t looking forward to hearing the rest of the story without a hefty dose of caffeine. But then, Amanita shoved the carafe back in place, and Door’s mind was forced to refocus on the woman, sans coffee. “Anyway,” Amanita continued, “point is, that’s the long and short of it. Team Matrix wants Geist because he could be carrying around tech to make whatever it is they want to do possible.” Door grimaced again. “And I’m leaving that hunk of junk with you.” She reached up and placed a finger on the hologram still projected in front of her. Pressing her fingertip into her grandmother’s face, Door twitched the picture back and forth as she digested everything Amanita had just told her. Then, she stopped and gazed through the picture at Amanita, who was busy pouring milk into her coffee. “Wait,” she said. “Why are you okay with me going back to Nuvema City if Team Matrix is desperate to get their hands on your Companion?” “Because after looking at Geist’s video memories, I called in a favor from the Striaton gym leaders, and if absolutely no one else is available, then Sage will take him to Halcyon Labs,” Amanita replied casually. “Oh.” “Oh.” Amanita added sugar and stirred, clinking the spoon against her mug as if to punctuate her words. “So you probably shouldn’t worry about it, dear. We’ll be fine. I have no doubt Savory’s gathering the troops to make sure we’re safe through the night too.” “I dunno. Maybe,” Door mumbled. Amanita tapped her spoon against the rim of her mug and took the first sip of her new cup of coffee. As she pulled it away, she sighed in exaggerated contentment and let her shoulders sag. Door smiled a little. For an old woman, Amanita was a character, and if everything she had shared was true, then Door felt a little bit guilty. Even with the reassurance that the Striaton gym leaders were going to do everything they could to protect her and get Geist out of her life, the fact of the matter was that anything that would happen to her—and, in truth, all of the things that had already happened—would clearly be Brigette Hamilton’s fault. What else could Door do but feel for the woman? Probably feel a little guilty by extension, but it wasn’t as if Door was about to do the noble thing and claim responsibility for it. And she knew that made her a slightly terrible person, but did she really want to get involved with an evil organization and a generations-old dose of family drama when she could just go home and forget all of this? No. No, she did not. Her eyes settled back on the picture of her grandmother. This was where she came from. This was who her grandmother was. But this was all in the past, and it technically didn’t have anything to do with Door, so could she really be blamed if— A pop-up appeared under her finger, snapping her out of her daze. At first, her mind waved it off as a perfectly ordinary part of the system—just a tiny box that listed off all the basic information about the image—but then she looked at it. Really looked at it. And then she did the math. “Hey … Amanita?” The woman didn’t turn around. It was as if she knew what the question was before Door had asked it. “Yes, dear?” “You … you said that Geist is about forty, right?” “Forty-five at the oldest, yes. Why?” Slowly, Door pulled her finger away from the image, but the pop-up remained. “This photo was taken over fifty years ago,” she said quietly. “Oh. Yes, I suppose it has.” Amanita whirled back around and eyed the photograph. She prodded it with a finger, minimizing the email client and forcing the photograph to take up the entire holographic screen again. Then, she flicked the pop-up itself to flip it around. “This was a picture of all of us—the original set of core administrators for the storage system, I mean,” Amanita explained. “Last Pokécon we attended together, in … maybe 2005? Ah. Guess it would be, if the date created’s right.” Door raised her eyebrows and nodded. “Yeah, that’s great and all, but if that was five to ten years before Geist existed…” She jammed her finger into the image of the man at the center of the photograph. “Then what the hell is this?” Amanita’s face blanked. Just blanked, all of a sudden. Door froze, finger still poking halfway through the projection, as she watched Amanita’s expression shift and darken until it was almost … sad? Bewildered? As if she had just realized Door lacked a vital piece of the puzzle, and this was the worst possible thing in the world. All of a sudden, any suspicion Door had that the woman was hiding anything from her vanished. “Is … is that why you didn’t know Geist was a Companion?” Amanita asked softly. Door blinked. “What?” Amanita covered her mouth with a hand and turned away. When she spoke, her voice was low and hurried, as if she was talking more to herself than to Door. “Oh. That makes so much sense now. I mean … it’d be a little odd that you would assume he was human if you knew who—Lanette went to great lengths to make him look identical, and there’s no way a human being could look that close.” She had missed something. But what? Door screwed up her face and drew her shoulders in defensively. “ What?” “Then again, how could you have not known what he looks like?” Amanita continued, as if she hadn’t heard Door either time. “Or … maybe you kids don’t know anymore. Kids in my day didn’t know what Steve Wozniak looked like, never mind Paul Allen, so maybe … nah, that still doesn’t explain…” Right about then was when Door had had enough. She threw her hand out of the projection and slapped the counter in front of her, drawing the woman’s attention back to her. “Amanita!” she barked. Then, she pointed to the image. “ What?!” The scientist set her coffee cup down. One of her hands curled by her face, and the other rested its fingertips on the rim of her mug. “Door,” she said, “did your grandmother ever tell you anything about … I mean … don’t you have pictures of…?” She motioned to the man in the center of the projection. “No?” Door squeaked. For the third time in their conversation, there was a long pause, and this time, it was once again cold and awkward and stifling. And then, Amanita huffed and shook her head. “I’m gonna have to have a word with your grandmother,” she sighed. Door winced. “Why?” “Because, Door, this”—she pointed to the man, as if to emphasize her thought—“is not Geist, as you’ve already realized. Instead, I’d like for you to meet the reason why all of us are where we are today: the original inventor of the storage system, Dr. Bill McKenzie.” Door stared at her with complete incomprehension. “Really? Nothing?” Amanita groaned and rolled her eyes. “Geez, what do they teach you kids in school these days? Fifty years ago, Bill was a household name!” “Uh … we might’ve covered him in history class? I dunno. I kinda … wasn’t paying attention.” Door cringed. “ Dear.” Door splayed her hands out in front of her. “Well, come on! If I wasn’t gonna hear it from my grandma—” With one hand held up to Door, Amanita used the other to pick her mug up again. “All right. I get it. Really, I’m a little disappointed in Brigette myself. We all swore we wouldn’t let Bill be forgotten, and here we are, fifty years later…” She trailed off with another shake of her head. Door’s eyes settled on the photograph again, on the figure at its center. She knew she had been traveling with what was apparently his robot double for the past two days, but to her, Geist’s human predecessor was … somehow less impressive. She couldn’t quite put her finger on why, although it may have had to do with how casual he looked. How very … ordinary, for someone her grandmother and Amanita swore should never be forgotten. “So … what? He was a big deal?” she asked. Amanita snorted. “Was he a big deal? Oh, goodness.” She motioned to Door again with the hand that held her mug, splashing coffee onto the counter next to the tablet. “Like I said, he’s the reason why any of us are here—including trainers like you. Imagine what life would be like without the storage system. A lot of things about pokémon had been complete mysteries to us. Trainers never bothered catching a lot of pokémon, researchers couldn’t catch or keep samples … heck, even the regional leagues couldn’t sprawl as far as they do now. Then Bill came along with his system, and boom! Training as you knew it completely changed.” Door furrowed her eyebrows in confusion. “But … my aunt invented the storage system.” Placing a hand on her hip, Amanita grinned and held up her coffee cup. “Is that what they say nowadays? Ha! I’m sure Bill woulda gotten a kick out of hearing that. Honey, no, the original idea was his.” She stopped for a second to take a sip. As she drank, she glanced at the ceiling in thought. Then, slowly, she pulled her mug away. “Granted, your great aunt was brilliant in her own right,” Amanita continued. “The original storage system was a text-based interface. Nearly unnavigable to anyone who wasn’t fluent in line code. Your great aunt gave it a GUI and even bashed the entire concept of user accessibility into Bill’s head until he stopped cooking up stuff only code monkeys like us can use.” She chuckled. “Those two were a pair, dear. Bill was brilliant. Lanette was creative. And the two of them just had a way of bouncing ideas off each other unlike anything else the rest of us could’ve achieved. And that’s why…” Her voice trailed off, and Door stared at her for a beat until she realized the woman wasn’t going to continue. “That’s … why what?” Door asked. Amanita set her mug on the counter and arched her fingers over its mouth again. Her expression gained a frown and a faraway look, and her mouth twitched. “That’s why Lanette was closer to him than any of us,” she said at last. Her voice was low, quiet, and just barely audible, and because of that, Door waited again, letting the woman gather her thoughts. Then, after a deep breath, Amanita continued. “All of us looked up to Bill,” she explained. “He … he had this way of looking at things. Everything had a purpose. Everything had a reason for being. So no matter who you were or where you came from, he’d look at you and just know how to push you to do your best. So when I say everyone looked up to him, I mean it. But Lanette? Lanette was his best friend. She didn’t see him the way we did. She was … well, she was his equal—his partner. Those two went together like a left hand and a right hand. Whenever you saw those two working … it was something magical, dear.” It didn’t take a genius to know where this was going. The distant, soft tone. The past tense. The way Amanita was carefully choosing her words. Door knew she wasn’t being tactful because Lanette was dead and gone; she wasn’t stupid. But the story had to be finished. She could see that in Amanita’s face, in the way she was pausing to think of a way to press onward. So when Door spoke next, it was out of obligation: out of her own need to hear Amanita’s words and out of Amanita’s need to speak. “So … what happened?” she asked. Amanita looked almost relieved to hear Door ask. She shrugged, and as she brought her shoulders down, her body visibly relaxed. “Well, Bill died. Went pretty young, too. Probably … oh, fifty years ago, I guess. Not long after this picture was taken. It doesn’t matter. The point is, all of a sudden, we were this fledgling group of people whose lives had been irrevocably changed by this one person, and that person was dead and gone. You’d better believe it hit us all hard, but it hit some of us harder than others. Your great aunt, for example.” Door shifted uncomfortably in her seat. The metaphorical pieces were coming together, and the picture was starting to get uglier in her mind. She thought briefly about what she knew of her great aunt. Lanette Hamilton, the former administrator of the Hoenn network, the founder of Halcyon Labs, the supposed inventor of the storage system. Only she wasn’t one of those things apparently, and that was bad enough, but to Door, there was more. This was the woman who shut herself up in a remote corner of Kanto, the woman who cut all ties to her family and the rest of the outside world, the eccentric inventor who supposedly went the way of Nikola Tesla and Howard Hughes and all the other brilliant crazies before her. And now, Door knew her as something else: as the woman who made a robot butler that looked exactly like a dead man. “So … you’re saying that she made Geist look like her best friend because he died?” she asked. “That’s my theory, yep,” Amanita replied. “No one’s really confirmed that. Not to me anyway, but your grandma might be able to shed some light on that.” She pushed her coffee cup a little further away from her. “Which brings us to the point of the matter! Door, I’d hate to do this, but I have another job for you.” “Huh?” Door shook her head vigorously. “Uh … sure. I guess. What’s up?” “I need you to deliver Geist to Halcyon Labs HQ,” Amanita replied. Door jolted. If her mind was calm and methodical before, it was running at the speed of light now, and every muscle in her body was just as electrified as her brain was. She sat bolt upright, back straight and stiff, hands balled into fists on the counter in front of her, eyes wide and fixed completely on Amanita. “What?!” she exclaimed. “But that’s all the way in Castelia City! And didn’t you just say Sage was gonna do it?!” In response, Amanita gave her a shamefaced smile. “I know. But if you’ve made it to here from Nuvema, you should have no problem getting across Nacrene and the Skyarrow. There’s even a gym in Nacrene, if you liked Striaton’s.” “But…” Door gazed at Amanita helplessly. “Why me?!” “Well, dear, if Team Matrix is after Geist, then there’s no safer place for him than Halcyon’s HQ,” Amanita said. “Unfortunately, poor Geist can’t go there himself, being a Companion and all, and while Sage could be the one to take him, she’s got gym duties to attend to. It’d be much easier for all of us if you went, sorry to say. And besides, wouldn’t you like to ask your grandma a few questions? Like, for example, why she never told you about Bill?” Door settled into her seat and narrowed her eyes at her host. She grumbled a few words under her breath about not knowing about Bill because she didn’t care, about how secretive her grandmother was, and about how stupid Geist was, but she didn’t string together a sentence coherent or audible enough for Amanita to catch. She made sure of that. Part of that was because she didn’t want the attached argument, and part of it was because she knew that somewhere, deep down, she was just a little bit curious. Nonetheless, Amanita held up a hand again to calm her. “I know. You’d rather just go back to Nuvema and forget about all this Companion business, wouldn’t you? Or at least, that’s the impression a certain little birdie told me while I was downloading his memories and fixing up the other girl’s Companion. And you know what he also told me? That another certain someone wants to be a researcher someday. So why don’t I make you an offer? Do this for me, find out what your grandma knows, and I might just be able to work something out with Professor Ironwood. Transfer your internship over here. Let you work with real pokémon. What do you say?” She moved her hand, extending it for Door to shake. Door hesitated in response, and her expression—and, for that matter, her entire body—relaxed. Her eyes flicked from Amanita’s hand to her face. “Seriously?” she asked cautiously. Amanita grinned. “Seriously.” For a moment, Door merely sat where she was, considering the offer. It wasn’t because she wasn’t sure whether or not she should take it; she knew this could be her dream job. But the problem was she wasn’t sure whether or not she should believe Amanita. Sure, she had believed her about the story—she had seen the photograph, and she knew her grandmother would lie to the woman, after all—but this wouldn’t be the first time someone had duped her into a job. What if the reward wasn’t real? And what if, beyond that, Amanita had told her what she thought was the truth, but in actuality, Brigette had lied to her about everything? What if Door was walking into one big mess, far bigger than she had ever dreamed of? But on the other hand, what if everything was real, and in a week, she would be working with real pokémon? Real pokémon. Was the risk of a mess worth that? Door bobbed her head back and forth and then finally decided that, yes, it was. “All right,” she said, shaking Amanita’s hand. “But I’m holding you to that.” Amanita smiled as if she knew Door would say that. “Naturally, dear! Now, I know it’s gonna be a long walk to Nacrene, so if you’d like, I’ve got a couch and a blanket you’re welcome to use for the night.” “Huh? Oh, um. N-no,” Door quickly said, her mind flashing back to Blair. “I have … I promised someone I’d meet them at the pokémon center.” Amanita’s grin gained a warm, knowing shade as she broke away from Door. Flicking her pad, she dispelled the photograph and brought up a folder in its place. “Ah, the Whitleigh girl, is it?” she asked. Door felt her face burn with a blush. “It-it’s not what you think!” Amanita waved a hand in the air. “Don’t worry, Door. It’s good to have a healthy rivalry on journeys like this! Now, you’d better run along. Blair’s not the only one waiting for you.” For a second, Door hesitated, staring at Amanita blankly until it dawned on her that the scientist had meant the very person she was supposed to be escorting. Shaking her head, Door jolted herself alert. “R-right,” she said. “And, um … thanks. For the offer, I mean.” Amanita tapped a file within the folder, bringing up a window with plain text sprawled across it. “Don’t mention it, Door. Just be careful out there and stay in touch as much as possible, okay?” Door nodded, then started for the staircase. As she opened the door one more time, she glanced over her shoulder at Amanita, who was already busy scrolling through the file. With one last grin, Door slipped into the stairwell and shut the door behind her. For that reason, she didn’t read the words filling Amanita’s screen. — > README.TXT> Author: Cassius CassineFirst of all, if you’ve found this file on your own, congratulations. You’re one of the rare people who’re capable of bypassing the security measures of not one but three of the original members of the Pokémon Storage System’s core development team. In plain Common, that either means technology has advanced to the point where what we do is child’s play, or it means you’re a straight-up computer genius. Either way, take pride in getting this far.Now, I don’t like beating around the bush, and I know you probably have better things to do than read a readme file—if you’re reading this at all. So let me just lay it out for you straight.Enclosed in this folder is a whole stack of documentation which was cobbled together by me, Bebe Larson, and Lanette Hamilton herself. All of them detail the inner workings of this very specific Companion you have in your possession, as well as some history behind why I needed to write this. Read these files carefully and think about them.Once you’ve done that much, you’ll probably be a little weirded out. That’s okay. I was too when I found all this stuff. But unlike you, I was a dumbass and a coward. I didn’t have the guts to fix things myself, and I own up to that. And between you and me, that’s why I wrote this file: so maybe, just maybe, someone like you will come along and do the right thing.What I mean to say, reader, is my name is Cassius Cassine, and in the following files, I’m going to walk you through everything you need to know to fix Bill McKenzie’s biggest mistake.
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Post by Firebrand on May 26, 2018 15:48:38 GMT
Seems fitting that as Door moves out into the wider world that we as the readers are given a little more information on just what this brave new world entails. I know I've mentioned several times I've been pretty vigilant about avoiding Electric Sheep spoilers, but the big reveal in this chapter is kind of hard to avoid, knowing... well, you. Still, if I went into this fic not knowing "Jax is the biggest Bill fan in the entire world, probably," Amanita's reveal would probably have come as a pretty earth-shattering revelation, and I think Door's reaction to it is pretty believable, all things considered. I was sort of wondering how long you would tease out Geist's real identity, but it's probably a good idea to lay those cards out on the table now, especially since its clear that there are still plenty of others you've got up your sleeve. Part of me is wishing Door can just hurry up and get to Castelia already so I can get some more answers, but I doubt that's going to reveal too much more anyway, just because like, Castelia is only 1/4 of the way through BW's plot and this cyberpunk dystopia train has a lot of steam to carry it through. (I mean, a train in a cyberpunk dystopia probably wouldn't run on steam, but electricity or magnets or the embryonic souls of cyborgs would have made the metaphor clunky)
I think you did a really good job here of balancing the necessary info-dump nature of this chapter with Door's internal thoughts and her responses to Amanita's bombshells. It definitely feels like this is the chapter where you as the writer slam your hands down on the desk and said "All right, listen up. This ain't your parents' Unova, so buckle up and get ready for the rollercoaster, kids." And yeah, I think at this point, with the tutorial arc out of the way, it's time for that.
I'm also feeling like you had gotten a better sense of where you wanted Blair to go by this chapter, her character seems a little more settled in that scene with Door at the beginning, and Door's interactions with her seem a little less out of nowhere and grounded in what we already know about her, unlike their first encounter when they were just kind of woodenly reading their lines at each other. I'm also starting to see how Blair is going to fill out Bianca's role in BW in this fic. I still don't really see Belle stepping into Cheren's role yet, but I think that's really more a product of us not seeing a lot of Belle yet, and when we have, the action takes center stage, rather than the interactions that Door and Blair have had thus far. I'm sure there will be plenty of opportunities to the three girls to grow as foils to each other in due time.
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girl-like-substance
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Post by girl-like-substance on May 26, 2018 20:57:15 GMT
One of the most endearing things about Door is that she just can't stay aloof, no matter how she tries. She hears Blair call out? Boom, she is there, no hint of her earlier superiority. And of course once she's done that, once she's seen Blair holding her disembowelled robot butler in her arms, with her pig all beaten up, she has to back down completely and actually reach out, in that awkward, adorable teenagery sort of way. The gap between cool exterior and squishy meat heart is such a teenage thing, and you represent it really well here – understated, but unmistakeable. The Dreamyard fight is pretty cool, too; I like that it's this disorienting series of shifts in perspective, as Door is yanked from place to place within the giant cloud, desperately looking around for things lurching menacingly out of the mist. It's almost a little bit horror movie, honestly. She's so out of her depth! And yet, with her, Jack and Geist working together (validating the “trainer, pokémon, android” style of trainer journey that she despises so much, although of course she doesn't have the analytical chops to realise it), they just about manage to pull through. I actually forgot how that event ends in-game till I read it here, and when I did I found it kind of weird; maybe the illusion fools Belle despite the fact that it's obviously fake (see: splitting in three at one point) because it's drawn from her subconscious, and therefore she's less able to see it for what it is? I thought that was strange in the games, too, honestly, and when you translate it into fiction it makes it more obviously odd. And then Knives makes her grand entrance! Or kind of, anyway, since she doesn't actually appear here. Audino, saviour of nuzlockes, refusing to die and doing decent damage in return. As a kid I never liked any pokémon that wasn't just some combination of high speed and high attacking stats, but then, I also had pokémon with movesets like “cut, rock smash, frenzy plant, body slam”, so what did I know. Anyway, I've come to appreciate pokémon with more survivability, especially as the games have got longer and left you fighting opponents in the high 60s as part of the plot. What was I saying? Right, audino are cool, was I think all it was. I feel like I didn't need a whole paragraph to say that but okay. As for chapter nine … well, you know what the issue with it is, I think; it's a giant wall of information, and while it is delivered pretty much as effectively as it possibly could be, in this long, interesting conversation where we get to see everyone's reactions and comments and stuff as the information is shovelled out, it kind of is still a chapter in which a huge amount of information gets shovelled out. Also, while Bill sounds like a wonderfully kind sort of guy to hold the opinion that almost anyone can be rehabilitated if they're willing to listen to you, it seems remarkably optimistic of him to assume that anyone's willing to listen. Possibly that made more sense as an opinion before reasonable debate became nothing more than a pleasant memory. I've never seen that hyphenated before; I'm not sure it should be.
Nah, I'm not doing all my projects at once; that would be kind of impossible unless I had literally nothing else going on in my life, and even then I don't know if I could manage it. Two at once is my limit. Right now, I'm focusing on Ghost Town and the android novel; after that, it's either going to be the PMD/Dark Souls fic or that Y nuzlocke I keep threatening to write. I have the first two and a half chapters of that one done already, so probably it will end up coming first, but I already put it off once to write Ghost Town because I really wanted to write about love and murder in the 1970s, so who knows?
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Post by admin on May 27, 2018 20:49:11 GMT
Replies! Seems fitting that as Door moves out into the wider world that we as the readers are given a little more information on just what this brave new world entails. I know I've mentioned several times I've been pretty vigilant about avoiding Electric Sheep spoilers, but the big reveal in this chapter is kind of hard to avoid, knowing... well, you. Still, if I went into this fic not knowing "Jax is the biggest Bill fan in the entire world, probably," Amanita's reveal would probably have come as a pretty earth-shattering revelation, and I think Door's reaction to it is pretty believable, all things considered. Lmao, and going into it knowing “Jax is the biggest Bill fan in the entire world, probably” makes it 100% exactly something I would do, amirite? Nah, I’m kidding. It’s excellent that it comes off as possibly earth-shattering, even in light of, you know, my usual writing habits. Because hoo, I’m hoping that’s a twist for someone who doesn’t know me. :’) Forever. Nah, but yeah, pretty much to getting everything up and on the table. As I’ve said to Oyster below (because I skip around in my review replies all the time /secret), Striaton’s pretty much an exercise in getting as much out of the way so we can get to the things that sound more like plot. *nod* Because I have fun throughout this plot, ngl. 8) It’s definitely embryonic souls of cyborgs.Also, pretty much, lmao. But I won’t say too much because spoilers. Thank ya! \o/ And lmao, yeah, that’s pretty much an A+ accurate representation of how this chapter came about, ngl. Pretty much, yeah! I don’t even remember how the transition happened; I just realized that I didn’t want to write a rival who was basically like Kanto Series Gary (you know, egotistical, annoying, extremely competitive) only not. That and I realized I just really liked Johto Series Gary (reserved, competent, actually interested in having a decent relationship with Ash even though they might not always see eye to eye) more than The Obnoxious Rival trope. Long story short, after I realized that, it just sort of got easier to write her character as, well, an actual character, haha. Meaning hopefully, the woodenness is one-off (and somewhat handwaved retroactively by her “I just wanted to impress you” excuse, lmao). Well, that and Belle’s a bit of an odd character. While Blair is 100% supposed to be the Bianca of this BW journey, Belle is more of a mix of Cheren and every Team Plasma grunt from here to the Pokémon League, partly because it’s easier for me to balance three characters instead of four and partly because any concept I came up with for a Cheren stand-in kinda sucked on their own. Mostly because Cheren is a tool. (He exists in this universe, and he’s still alive, but I’m grateful BW2 let me jettison him off into a part of Unova Door would never have to visit.) One of the most endearing things about Door is that she just can't stay aloof, no matter how she tries. She hears Blair call out? Boom, she is there, no hint of her earlier superiority. And of course once she's done that, once she's seen Blair holding her disembowelled robot butler in her arms, with her pig all beaten up, she has to back down completely and actually reach out, in that awkward, adorable teenagery sort of way. The gap between cool exterior and squishy meat heart is such a teenage thing, and you represent it really well here – understated, but unmistakeable. Haha, preeeeetty much concerning Door’s inability to be a badass, aloof kind of person. She tries. She tries so hard. (Luckily, everyone outgrows this right around the time they leave high school and learn how to be somewhat functioning adults, amirite?) Admittedly, yeah, and I think this is one of those parts of the story where it was super obvious I hadn’t yet found my footing. Like, at this point, I was still under the impression that you had to basically copy the games step-for-step in a trainer fic like these, and it’s not really until Skyarrow Bridge that I started to understand that, no, you can absolutely take liberties. (I mean, Nacrene Gym got a little creative too, but that’s mostly because I didn’t really want to drag everyone back to the Nacrene Museum, and although I could’ve gone there first, the truth is I’d made a catch before then and was still under the impression that I had to do everything in order, according to my outline. Icirrus City is when I stop doing that, and that’s because, as I’m writing this—literally as at the time of this writing—the whole arc there is kinda a mess in general due to grinding for reasons you’ll find out about much, much later if your name is Firebrand.) Lmao, I mean, to be fair, I hear you on all counts, including the whole bit about Cut, Rock Smash, Frenzy Plant, and Body Slam. (The only difference is that I never liked moves with recharge periods like Hyper Beam and Frenzy Plant because even though they did a ton of damage, what’s the point of the enemy can hit you right after, right? But then again, I thought Fly was an excellent move and not essentially Wing Attack but worse, so … yeah.) Anyway, yes, audino are cool.Pretty much. *nod* I kinda wish there was a better way to mete out all the information (not just here but in the Striaton arc in general because also the first time we meet Amanita…), but doing so would involve a lot of editing of the entire first half of the story to spread it out a bit. The story of Bill and Lanette alone is already spread across the entire story (not so much because it’s me but more because Electric Sheep is the second half of that story, with the Kalos book simultaneously being the first half and the second half of the second half in a way that I s2g will make sense later), so long story short, spreading that out might be a bit tricky. Like, swamping the rest of the story with it tricky. Most of the Striaton arc is an exercise in getting all the exposition over with so we can get other bits of exposition done properly later move on with things that look more plot relevant. Aaaaand I’m rambling because hoo, this has been The Problem of this arc forever. (And then the Nacrene arc is just kinda … build-up until Castelia, ngl.) In general, I kinda feel like this arc was more or less me finding my footing? Because then you have the Dreamyard shenanigans, and … yeah. There are two possible clever responses to this, and I couldn’t decide which to use, so have them both! \o/ 1. Either that, or it’s remarkably egotistical of him to assume that anyone’s willing to listen. 2. To be fair, he’s also the exact kind of person who took a look at a punk dude who probably has a criminal record or something and in at least one canon definitely lives with a full-on punk band and immediately went, “Yes. Yes, this is exactly the kind of person who needs to be in charge of the storage system for the entire region of Kalos. Not the gym leader inventor, no. This man.” Bill is delightfully weird, is what I’m saying. Huh. You are absolutely correct here: it shouldn’t be. D: Thank you! Lmao, first off, I love how you said you keep threatening to write something. Because my first instinct is to sort of spread my arms out in front of you and go, “HIT ME.” On a serious note, okay, that makes more sense. And to be honest, no one can blame you, re, wanting to write something about love and murder in the 1970s. (And that’s a thing I’ve been meaning to review because hoo it’s so good, and I need to tell you this, by the way.) But in any case, I still applaud you for juggling two full-on projects at once, and I look forward to the android novel too. And with that (and another thank you to the both of you!) said, today's upload contains another double update. The first part is the Striaton arc's side story/extra, and the second is another chapter of the main plot. Because that's a lot of shenanigans in one day (I mean, I could just upload the extra and leave the chapter for Wednesday, but w/e), this means that yet again, the next update will be Sunday. Thanks for your patience~!
[EXTRA #2: DOWNTOWN STRIATON] When Savory shut Amanita’s front gate and hurried along the road back to the Striaton Gym, he had a number of things to worry about. For one, he was worried that he had just made a fool of himself by bidding the girls farewell so quickly. (He did.) For another, he was worried that Sumac would bite his head off for taking so long and for coming back so close to the dinner rush. (Sumac would.) For a third, he was worried that the things he had seen at the Dreamyard meant he and his cousins would have to get involved with the police, and he was worried because this was always the worst part of his job as a gym leader for reasons that had nothing whatsoever to do with the time he broke up with Officer Jenny’s daughter and proceeded to “relieve his frustration” on a mailbox or two. (Those were most definitely the reasons.) And for a fourth, he was worried that the veteran trainer and the homeless-looking guy who had been waiting outside of Amanita’s gate were now following him. (They were.) Savory tried his hardest not to think about that last one. Instead, he tried to ground himself by shoving his hands into the pockets of his slacks and keeping his eyes on the sidewalk. His fingers played with the last poké ball in his pocket as he tried to come up with a plan. Why did he give the Companion his pansear again? Oh. Right. Because the pansear liked him, and Savory had so many other ways of keeping a mugger at bay. Like the lillipup he was supposed to use on beginning trainers. Or the pocket knife that he had most definitely left in the office of Le Jardin Potager. Or the martial arts moves he absolutely, without-a-doubt did not learn from old Brycen movies. Savory was not a very smart man, no. Sage was the smart one. Sumac was the dumb-but-you-forgave-him-because-he-was-pretty one. And Savory? Well. Savory was the impulsive one. “Sautée! Bite!” He whipped around, snapping his lillipup’s ball into the air behind him. No sooner had the puppy burst from it than a massive set of claws smacked it out of the air and pinned it to the concrete. An emboar towered over the dog, leaning in with a grunt as Sautée squirmed and whined under its massive hand. Beside this scene, the veteran smiled and patted one of the emboar’s toned arms. “Now, now, Curly,” she said. “Don’t want to break the gym leader’s lillipup.” The emboar snorted again, and tiny plumes of fire flashed from its nostrils. But nonetheless, following its trainer’s word, it pulled its arm up, easing its hand off the puppy’s back just enough to take pressure off the fauxkémon. This did not comfort Savory in the slightest, and as his eyes flicked from the emboar to the veteran, he struggled to form another plan of escape. Rush her? No. The emboar had two arms, and although Savory wasn’t the sharpest tool in Striaton Gym’s shed, he knew better than to pick a fight with 330 pounds of muscle, fire, and rage. Run the other way? But what about Sautée? A third option, then? As if sensing his panic, the woman pushed one of her palms towards him. “Relax, son,” she said. “My friend and I just want to talk.” All of a sudden, Savory was aware of someone behind him. He cursed, mentally kicking himself for forgetting all about the woman’s human partner. On instinct, Savory shifted his feet and lowered himself into a fighting stance. In response, the woman’s face fell, and her hand stopped mid-push. “I said relax. We’re not gonna hurt you. Not even Curly.” She patted her pig on the shoulder again, then snorted herself. “You know, though, it’s kinda funny. Your dad would’ve given his left arm to be punched in the face by Curly here. He was always a little sore that I fought your uncle instead. Or he was after I swept through the League.” Savory shifted his weight again. His muscles relaxed a little, and his eyes darted from the woman to the emboar and back. A realization was slowly coming to him. “You’re…” His voice trailed off before he could finish. “That’s right,” she said. “And the man behind you … you might’ve heard of him from your dad too. But don’t worry. He’s a friend of mine now.” At this point, she lowered her chin, and her expression darkened. “Now. Question. What did you see at the Dreamyard?” Savory inhaled deeply through his nose. His eyes wandered away from both the woman and the emboar in front of him as he mulled over the question. The truth was, he didn’t see much. The fog was far too thick. But there were voices and noises—strange ones that he wasn’t quite sure he could describe. And in any case, why would he say a word to these people? There was a chance the woman in front of him was who she said she was, but anyone could string together some vague references to the original Striaton gym leaders, get an emboar fauxkémon, and pretend to be the champion. Sure, he knew what the champion looked like, but he had never actually met her in person. He wasn’t nearly lucky enough to represent the three gym leaders at League meetings and whatnot, and in any case, that wasn’t the point. The point was, everyone knew what the champion looked like. Anyone could make themselves up to look just like her. And anyone could walk up to a guy on the street for reasons that could very well be crazy to ask him about things he may or may not have seen. Why should he tell those people anything at all? Because, he realized after a moment of thought, Savory believed her. He couldn’t explain why, but somehow, he just knew she really was the champion. Savory was not a very smart man, no. But he knew he was in deep. “Not much,” he said quietly. “Lots of pink. There was … I guess another woman in there? With a Companion? She attacked one of these girls, but I didn’t see her.” He hesitated. “And there was this other voice. It was coming from everywhere, and it was—” “What did it say?” the man asked. Savory jumped but quickly regained his composure. Clearing his throat, he straightened up. “I don’t know. Look, it didn’t make sense to me, okay? Something about … disappointing him, I guess? The voice, I mean. It was a guy. Older guy.” The champion and the homeless man exchanged glances. Then, the woman clicked her tongue and recalled her emboar. “We should tell Rosa,” the man said. Sighing, the champion walked forward and rested an elbow on Savory’s shoulder. “Sure,” she said. “But first, let’s escort this young man back to the Striaton Gym.” Her partner raised his eyebrows. “Are you thinking of recruiting all three?” “Recruiting?” Savory repeated, quirking an eyebrow at the champion. She smiled and patted his back with the hand that was resting on his shoulder. “Well, that and I’ve heard you all got the best chocolate mousse in the region. If this is gonna be a long few days for me, I might as well start it off right.”
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Post by admin on May 27, 2018 20:49:58 GMT
[CHAPTER TEN: WELLSPRING CAVE] “So you accidentally caught a real audino?” Blair asked. Door shrugged. Since departing from Striaton early that morning, she had led the way out of the city, marching along the lit, tiled path of Route 3. By her side was the audino in question, who had seemed all-too eager to leave the Dreamyard. At every noise and every new sight, the rabbit-like creature would hum and crane her neck and twist around to look at the grass, the trees, and the humans around her. Blair had called her adorable and even “squishy,” words which, in Door’s opinion, fit the pokémon and her abundance of pink and curls and puffy fur a little too well. For this reason, Door had decided to give her the most appropriate name she could think of at the time: a name that not only fit the pokémon’s apparent softness but also felt like one Door wouldn’t mind calling out in the heat of a battle. Knives. “Yep,” she said presently. “Not that I mind. Knives looks tough … even if she’s pink and all.” “Uh … I guess,” Blair replied. “But I thought that audino were supposed to be gentle.” Door slipped her hands behind her head and cast a smirk back at the other trainer. “I’m sure I can teach her how to be a vicious killer.” Blair grinned right back and snorted. “Ha. Good luck. Anyway, it’s cool that you caught a pokémon at all.” At that, Door’s smile fell, and she furrowed her eyebrows. “What do you mean?” “Well…” Blair crossed her arms. Her shoulders rose, tensing around her face as she frowned. “I’ve been in Striaton for years. There’re lots of pokémon that live around town, and not once have I ever come close to catching one myself.” Door blinked and raised her eyebrows. “But when we met, you caught that patrat, right?” “Correction!” Opal exclaimed. She trotted forward, one finger raised to the sky, until she fell into step beside Blair. “That patrat was defeated, not caught. According to my sensors, the patrat was dispatched with utmost efficiency with a single Tackle!” Blair cringed. She turned her head away from her friends as she bit her lip. At the same time, Door stopped and stared at Blair, forcing the rest of the group to halt in their tracks. “You … you took it out?” she asked. “Y-yeah,” Blair mumbled. “Completely.” Door groaned, faced Blair, and put her hands on her hips. “Don’t they teach you how to catch pokémon at that trainer’s school you went to?” Blair fidgeted as she forced herself to speak. “Y-yeah. They … they do. It’s just that I … I … um.” “You were never good at it, were you?” She lowered her head. “No.” With a heavy sigh, Door ran her fingers through her hair and looked out towards the sea of grass. This route, like the ones bordering Accumula and Nuvema, was maintained. Perfect. It looked like a sea of tall grass, but all of the grass was at uniform height. All of the trees were evenly spaced. The route cut through everything too cleanly, as if the grass simply stopped at a perfect line across the prairie to make way for the road. And as if that wasn’t enough, Door realized that the whole thing looked like a carbon copy of Routes 1 and 2. The only difference was that Route 3 was far more populated. There were several trainers out there, each creeping along the manicured fields or battling one another, but no one was on the road itself. But beyond their welcomed absence on the road, none of the trainers interested Door. They wouldn’t be able to teach Blair how to catch a pokémon, after all. But something else caught her eye, something completely relevant to Blair’s predicament: movement in the grass. Every so often, waves would form, with grass shaking against the wind as something passed through it. Some trainers chased after the trails formed by these waves, but other trails were left to weave across the field and disappear. Door let her eyes linger on each trail as she contemplated her next actions. The presence of trainers here would make what Door had in mind a bit of a challenge, but she knew she had to do it. For a friend. “Yo, so those dumb-sounding pokémon capture courses. How did they teach you to catch pokémon?” Door asked. Blair visibly relaxed before answering. Her shoulders lowered, her hands laced together, and when she spoke, her voice was a little louder, a little firmer, a little more like the Blair Door had first met on Route 2. “Kinda stupidly, like you said,” Blair said. “They explained how you need to weaken a pokémon and taught us how to use a poké ball, and then they had us practice on fauxkémon owned by the school.” “But you never actually went after wild pokémon, did you?” Blair scratched her arm nervously. “Well … no. Students aren’t technically allowed out on the fields without an escort and a Companion, and even then, they have to stick to the roads only. Not the fields. It’s too dangerous.” On the last two words, Blair mimed quotation marks around her head. Door snorted this time and held up a hand, palm up. “There’s your problem. All talking, no hands-on learning. Really dumb way to figure things out, I think. Hey, Geist. Gimme a poké ball. I gotta teach Blair how it’s done.” Seconds later, she felt Geist’s hand press into hers to place a poké ball in her palm. It took all her willpower not to shudder at the suddenness of it all. She couldn’t even hear the Companion approach, and the time between her request and his reaction was practically negligible. Yet his hand—the warmth, the softness of his skin, even the particular smoothness of his fingernails—felt too real. She had to take a moment to remind herself of what he was, and that was one moment too long for her tastes. With a cough and a shudder, she yanked her hand away from Geist’s and curled her fingers around the poké ball at the same time. Then, inhaling deeply, Door started into the field. “Door,” Geist said, “I’m detecting a—” “I’m fine,” she snapped. “Did you not want—” “I said I’m fine.” She glanced over her shoulder, first to send a cold glare to Geist, then to offer a soft look to Blair. “Catching pokémon is the most basic thing a trainer can do. At least, until you start getting into the harder routes, anyway. But regardless of where you are, you should be able to do it without a Companion.” Geist crossed his arms and gave Door a worried frown. “Well, yes, but a Companion’s assistance is—” “Completely, 100% optional,” Door growled as she turned back to the field. He sighed behind her. “Very well. Good luck, Door.” “Right,” she said. “So step one is finding a suitable pokémon.” Door didn’t expect step one to take long at all. Even with the route crawling with trainers, there were more spots of waving grass than there were humans. All she had to do was pick one, and conveniently enough for her, there was one directly ahead of her. She pressed her lips together and crouched, watching it dart back and forth mere feet from where she stood. “Step two: battle it!” she announced. “Knives! Pound whatever’s making this grass wave!” The fact that the rabbit bounded past Door without question came as a pleasant surprise to her. She didn’t even think that the creature was paying attention. Yet there she went, the fluffy audino, cooing eagerly as she dove into the rustling grass. “Why’re you using Knives?” Blair asked. “Isn’t she too new to fight?” “Ha! That’s the point,” Door replied, flashing a grin at Blair. “See, part of step two is doing everything you can to avoid making it faint. Sometimes, it’s better to go with a weaker pokémon than a stronger one because that way, you’re sure to avoid knocking it out accidentally.” She held up a finger. “In fact, I’m willing to bet that’s what happened with the patrat. Toto’s a fake pokémon, right? They’re stronger than real ones, and sometimes, they don’t even know their own strength. Sure, the patrat had to’ve been fake too, but—” And then, a lillipup flew past Door and crashed onto the pathway right beside Blair. Both trainers jumped and screamed, with Blair leaning into Opal and away from the downed lillipup. Door took a few more seconds to let her heart rate stabilize, and then, she looked down to find Knives at her side, grinning up at her with a broad, almost stupid smile. The audino tilted her head and chirped, her lips bubbling open and shut in as cute a manner as she could muster. Upon seeing that smile, Door shifted her gaze back to the lillipup, just in time to see it rise shakily to its feet. Geist, meanwhile, stood a short distance away from Opal and Blair. Up until this point, he had been watching patiently, but as soon as the trainers screamed, he reached up to massage the bridge of his nose with another sigh. “Health is at 21%,” he intoned. “Door, I realize you would rather not take my advice, but perhaps now would be a good time to use that poké ball.” “Uh … r-right,” she said. Flicking her wrist, Door tossed the poké ball at the lillipup and watched it smack the puppy in the forehead and suck it inside with barely a struggle. Once the ball snapped shut, it fell onto the pathway and rocked back and forth for a few seconds. Door didn’t even have to hold her breath; she knew the moment the ball struck the lillipup that it was as good as hers. And sure enough, after those few seconds, her poké ball went still with a final ping, and Door was left to gape at the pokémon standing next to her. “Jesus,” she muttered. “Where’d you learn to do that?” Knives giggled, drawing her paws to her mouth as she squinted her sky-blue eyes. Then, she reached out to tug at Door’s pant leg, leading her back to the path like a small child leading her parent through a toy store. “I … did you know about this?” Door asked, her voice high-pitched as she threw a glare towards Geist. In the time that it took for Door to reach the road again, Geist had moved to the poké ball and picked it up. His eyes were glowing faintly as he stared at its surface. “Yes,” he said. “Knives is a young pokémon, and audino themselves don’t possess much in the way of offensive talents. However, it’s rather clear to me that your audino is eager to please.” Door furrowed her eyebrows. “A-and?” “And sometimes, when a pokémon is eager to please, they go to great lengths to make their masters happy. Including attack repeatedly without being ordered to do so.” Geist turned his hand, dangling the ball from his fingertips. “Lillipup. Female. Moderate experience level. Serious natured but prone to playful outbursts.” His trainer took the ball from him and stared at it as if it was an alien artifact. A question was forming in her mind, specifically about how Geist could tell what the lillipup’s personality was, but she couldn’t find her voice. So in her silence, Geist turned away from her and folded his hands behind his back. “As you can see, Miss Blair,” he said, “capturing pokémon requires a level of skill and attention, but Door is right in saying both of those traits are easily acquired with practice. Weaken a pokémon first to disable it, then throw a poké ball at it once you’ve determined whether or not it’s weak enough to be captured. Be sure not to go overboard on your attacks, else you’ll encounter the same problem you did when you tried to capture that patrat. When in doubt, rely on your Companion. We have the ability to calculate a pokémon’s health from a distance and advise you on the best time to attempt a capture. Understand?” Blair nodded, her eyes wide and on Geist. “Y-yeah. I think so.” Geist’s hand snaked into the pocket of his coat to draw out another poké ball. “Then would you like to give it a try? There was another lillipup not far from the one Door battled. Opal will be able to tell you where it is now.” With a deep breath, Blair steadied herself and straightened her back. She balled her hands at her sides and lifted her chin to look deep into Geist’s face. Her hand quivered as she reached up, slowly, for the ball in the Companion’s palm. And then, a scream rose from the field behind them and stopped her. “ Somebody stop them! They took my pokémon!” Blair and Opal whirled around as Geist and Door looked up, all in time to see two figures leap onto the road and dash away. Two very familiar figures. “Belle!” Door shouted. She shoved Geist out of the way and dashed forward, but before she could take more than a few steps beyond him, he reached out and snatched her arm. Pain shot up to her shoulder as she twisted around, her hand clawing at his. “Geist! Let me go!” she screamed. “Now hold on!” he snapped. “You can’t just run after two criminals, just like that!” “Watch me!” “Hold on!” Blair said. She flicked her arm out, as if to bar Door’s progress with her own body. Door stopped, took a calming breath, and followed Blair’s glance to see what had caught her attention. A boy stumbled out of the tall grasses, crying and gasping for breath. He snapped his gaze towards the retreating backs of Belle and Starr, whimpered, and turned his head towards Door and her traveling party. His eyes shone with tears as he limped towards them. “Please,” he cried. “Please! They took my patrat!” It was Opal of all people who trotted forward. She reached out for the child and grabbed him by the arms, then held him up. Her eyes flashed as they trailed down the boy’s leg and stopped at his ankle. “I’m detecting a sprain,” she said. “It’s pretty bad. You have no business running around, I’m afraid.” He shook his head and looked up at her. “But I have to! Patrat’s all I’ve got! If they get away with Patrat…” “Where’s your Companion?” Blair asked. The boy sniffed and shook his head again. “They broke her. The girl has this really strong snivy, and she snuck up behind us—” Door shoved Geist away from her and bolted down the road, heading quickly in the direction Belle and Starr ran. It didn’t take long for Geist to catch up to her, and he skidded to a halt directly in front of her. By the time Door realized he was in front of her, it was a second too late. She barrelled into him, and the moment she did, she shoved her hands into his chest and stumbled backwards for a few steps. He remained where he stood, calmly, with his feet planted on the road and his arms extended at his sides. “Get out of the way!” Door shouted. “I thought I told you we shouldn’t be rushing off like this!” Geist snapped. “The longer we stand here talking, the more likely Belle and Starr are gonna get away!” She waved her arm wildly to the side. “I’m not playing around, Geist! Get out of the way and let me go after them!” “We need a plan,” he growled. “This time, we don’t have the advantage of being covered by dream smoke, and we’ve just found out that Belle has no problem with using pokémon to attack people and Companions. If you run after them, who knows what they’ll do?” “How’s this for a plan?” Door hissed, jabbing a finger at Geist’s face. “Go find that kid’s Companion and get her back online. You were Amanita’s assistant. You should have some tech knowledge or whatever under your belt. In the meantime, I’m going after Belle and Starr, whether you like it or not. I’ll figure it out when I get there.” “Door—” “Knives! Get him out of my way!” Geist widened his eyes as he opened his mouth in protest, but before he could say a word, a blur of pink and cream shot at him and slammed into his chest. He fell onto his back with a bang, and Door dashed past him without even looking back. All she was aware of was her audino bounding beside her on the left and, a few moments later, a second presence joining her on the right. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Blair catching up with her, and with that, she smirked. Two human trainers. Multiple real pokémon. Two thieves to capture. This was going to be easy. — It didn’t surprise Door in the least that their chase would lead them off the roadway and beyond the manicured fields. The geography of Unova had barely changed since Hilda King’s day; everything was still there. It was just that most people stuck to the neatly trimmed fields and steel-and-glass pathways. But all it took to access the wild parts was to climb over a small fence and cross into even taller, denser grass—places where the fauxkémon grew obscenely strong and where the rougher sorts of characters went. And Knives, of course, had no concept of fences. She had grown up within the boundary of one large wall, sure, but what did a short, wood-and-wire barrier even mean to her? So for that reason, she led the way, ears twitching as she guided Blair and Door right to that wild place, deep into the overgrown fields, and right to a forgotten cave. Stopping at the mouth, Door peered in, then looked back at her audino. “In here?” she asked. The audino’s ears twitched once, and then she smiled and nodded with a soft coo. With a deep breath, Door turned back to the opening. “Pretty cool, isn’t it, Blair?” she said. “Got any idea what this is?” Blair took a step forward until she joined Door at the mouth. Peering down into the darkness, she said, “I dunno. But the only major cave system in the area is Wellspring Cave. That’s probably where we are, but…” Door looked at her. “But?” “But Wellspring Cave’s off-limits.” “What do you mean ‘off-limits’?” Blair turned her eyes to Door. “I mean we shouldn’t be here.” “You didn’t seem to have a problem with climbing over that fence back there.” Door motioned to a vague point behind her. “Which, by the way, was a really crappy fence. Seriously, how’s that supposed to keep anyone out of this place?” A nervous smile crossed Blair’s face. “I-I know. But I’m starting to have second thoughts.” Door chuckled and laid a hand on Blair’s shoulder. “C’mon, Blair. Where’s that self-confident jerk I’d met back on Route 2?” Blair crinkled her nose at that. “First of all, shut up. Second, you didn’t look that dangerous.” She turned her head towards the cave, and her smile fell. “Not compared to this, anyway.” “I was seconds away from taking that the wrong way,” Door said. Shaking her head, Blair said, “Sorry. It’s just … maybe Geist was right.” She looked at Door. “I mean, these are criminals, and that’s a dark cave. Who knows where they are, and who knows what’s in here? We could be ambushed by them or whatever’s living in the cave. I-I mean … they say strong pokémon are in there, you know.” “Who says?” Door snorted. Then, rolling her eyes, she drew her hand away from her friend and stepped into the darkness. “Anyway, we can’t go back. There’s a patrat in trouble. And besides, I’ve faced Belle and Starr before. They’re no big deal. Just stay close and be ready to fight, and you’ll be fine.” “But I’ve faced them too,” Blair replied quietly. Door stopped. Her eyes widened as she thought for a few seconds about what Blair had just said. That was right; she had faced Belle and Starr before then. Back in the Dreamyard. Back when they took out Blair’s team and her Companion. Back when Door had Geist’s help to fight back. “Look,” Door said, flashing an awkward smile at her partner, “no big deal. Like I said. Just stay close. We’ll double-team ‘em, okay?” She extended a hand to Blair. For a long while, Blair merely stared at it, unmoving and uncertain. Then, slowly, she reached out and grabbed it. Door grinned and pulled her in, leading her into the cave. Thus, they descended, down a rocky, dirt-covered path winding into the darkness. Knives passed them and trotted forward, and for a long time, all that Door and Blair could hear was the soft humming from the audino. Door squinted in the darkness, desperate to make out any semblance of shadows, but in the meager light still filtering in from the gaping cave entrance, she could see no sign of Belle or Starr. Blair drew close to her until Door could sense the girl’s body heat against her back. She could feel Blair trembling, feel Blair’s hand tighten around her wrist, and she was just about to tell Blair to calm herself when she ran into Knives’s back. “Knives?” Door hissed. “Everything okay?” The audino’s paw curled around her free hand, and in the dimness of the cave, she could make out Knives pointing straight ahead and slightly upwards. “You know what sucks about these caves?” Belle announced. “You can’t see jack in them. So if, for example, two gullible sacks of crap waltzed in to get all kissy-faced with each other, you miss out on all the good parts!” “Belle, we have a mission.” “Oh, Starr. You’re such an absolute killjoy. Monkshood, go say hello!” Door’s reaction was immediate. Without thinking twice, she plunged her hand into her pocket and threw the first ball she grasped ahead of her. “Huntress, Bite!” she shouted. “Huntress?” Blair asked. Before Door could answer, the ball cracked open, and a brilliant, white light shot out of its heart and slammed into a dark shape several feet in front of her. As the light burst, Door could see a snivy— the snivy—held within the jaws of a small lillipup. Then, the light faded completely, and the cave plunged into what seemed like a thicker darkness than it had before. “Where’s your adorable Companion, kid?” Belle called out. “Not with him today? That’s a shame. He was a real help in the Dreamyard, wasn’t he? Bet he could see just as well in the dark as he could in dream smoke!” “You talk too much!” Door snapped. “Huntress! Bite harder and drag that snivy back here!” “Aww, girl, I was just pointing out that only one of us can see!” Belle replied. “Monkshood, Vine Whip!” Somewhere in the darkness, Door could hear a snap, followed by a dog’s high-pitched whine. She flinched and squinted, desperately seeking out her pokémon. “Huntress!” she called. “C’mon, girl! Bite it and get back here!” “Ha! You’re hilarious! Monkshood, Vine Whip again!” More snaps. More yelps. Door cringed again, gritting her teeth as she struggled to think of what to do. The answer, consequently, was more or less an accident. “Huntress, throw it off!” Door called. “Monkshood, Vine Whip again!” Door sucked in a breath. She heard the snap, but this time, there was no yelp. There was only a muffled growl, and something inside Door’s chest tightened. Was this it? Was Huntress as fast as Door prayed she was? The growl was joined by soft scuffling, then a snivy’s scream, and finally, silence. Punctuated with a splash and a curse from Belle. “Monkshood, return!” she cried. For a brief second, the darkness was lanced by the red beam of a poké ball. It was too faint for Door to make Belle out, but it was just enough to tell her exactly where the thief stood. Grinning, she tugged at Blair’s hand to pull her close. “You saw that, right?” she whispered. “Yeah,” Blair said. “And I have a plan. Can you keep her busy?” “No sweat.” Door released Blair’s hand and shoved at the girl’s shoulder. “But be careful.” Without another word, Blair slipped away. Door could hear her retreating, and because of that, she prayed Starr couldn’t. But just to be sure, she had to keep Belle talking and battling. “You got lucky,” Belle snapped. “But trust me, your luck ends here! Pride! Scratch its eyes out!” Another burst of white light flooded the cave, and Door breathed a sigh of relief when she realized she couldn’t see Blair out the corner of her eye. The girl was hiding, which no doubt meant Starr couldn’t see her. So with that in mind, Door edged towards Knives, scanning darkening cave for any sign of her lillipup. “Huntress, keep an ear out, and Tackle if that purrloin gets close!” she ordered. Then, after what felt like a suitable pause, she added, “Hey, Belle! Mind if I ask you something?” “Oh? The baby knows my name? Did you hear that, Starr? I’m famous!” Door snorted. “Hardly. My Companion used to work with you, genius. He told me who you were, but what he didn’t tell me is why you’re going around kidnapping pokémon.” Huntress’s growl filled the cavern, followed shortly by a bark and the sounds of a scuffle. Belle’s purrloin hissed and yowled, and then both pokémon’s cries were cut off by a dull thump. “Scratch again!” Belle ordered. “Keep it up!” Door responded. “See, I understand why you tried to take that munna. Dream smoke’s got hundreds of different uses, especially as clean energy. Totally valuable. But why’d you take some kid’s patrat? Those’re literally one of the most common species in the region.” “If you don’t get why, then you don’t get what Team Matrix is after!” Belle responded. Door smirked. “Ah. So you do work for Team Matrix.” “Duh! And for your information, I might be a lot of things, but a hypocrite isn’t one of them,” Belle continued. “If we set the Companions free, we have to set the fauxkémon free. It’s just how things work!” More growling. More scuffling. Door’s eyes darted to the source of the sound as she scrambled to come up with a way to keep the conversation going. “So, what? Are you pretending to be good guys now?” she asked. “We are the good guys, dumbface!” A rip, a whine, a thump. Two attacks landed. Door squinted again into the darkness, and slowly, her eyesight began to adjust. She could just barely make out the small lumps that had to have been Purrloin and Huntress. The taller of the two—the purrloin—darted away from the short, squat lump beside it but then fell into a slow creep as it circled its prey. At the same time, the shorter lump crouched and began to growl again. But where in the world was Blair? “Don’t give me that crap,” Door said. “You jumped Geist in that alley! You stole a snivy from him, and you tried to steal a tepig and my oshawott! How’s that supposed to be what a good guy does?” Belle screeched with laughter. Looking straight ahead, Door could just make them out: the slender form of Belle rocking back and forth on her feet and the looming, taller form of Starr, staring straight back at her. Both stood on top of a rocky outcrop overlooking what Door realized was the finger of an underground lake. How she didn’t notice the latter up until now, she couldn’t say. In the dim light, the lake undulated, its waters lapping softly against rock. And there, on its shore, just below the outcropping, was something else: Blair’s silhouette. She paused at the sound of Belle’s laughter, then crept up the side of the rock until she disappeared behind Starr. “Look, kid, if you’re gonna get stuck on your own moralities and whatever, I’m not gonna explain a thing to you,” Belle said, her voice squeaking with the remnants of her laughing fit. “Y’know, it’s gonna get real annoying to refer to you by anything other than your name if I don’t know what your name is. What’s your name, kiddo, so I can blatantly ignore it later?” “Wow, no. How about I don’t tell you?” Door asked. “Rude.” Belle flicked a hand into the air. “Well, fine. I’ll find out eventually. You did challenge the Striaton Gym, after all. All I have to do is ask Starr to look up the gym’s records and find out who the last challenger was.” “What? How did you know I challenged the Striaton Gym?” “Um, hi? We’re following you?” Belle put her hands on her hips and leaned forward. “Why do you think Starr and I lured you out to some cave where no one would ever think to look for a lost, dumb trainer? Speaking of, Pride, finish off that mutt with Scratch! And Starr? Reach behind you, sweetie.” Belle’s purrloin lunged for Huntress as Starr twisted around. Door’s eyes flicked back and forth frantically as she scrambled to decide which one to pay attention to, but in the next moment, that decision was made for her. Blair shot up, throwing her entire body into the Companion’s. Her feet slammed into his back as she hooked one of her arms over his face. Starr wrenched around, stumbling erratically on the outcropping as his partner shouted and scrambled away. “Door! Your lillipup!” Blair cried. The second Door snapped her eyes back to the battle, the purrloin latched itself onto Huntress, its paws snapping over her eyes. Huntress howled and scrambled, bucking wildly as the cat dug its claws into her face. At the sight of the struggle, Door sucked in a breath and forced herself to calm just enough to see what else was there on the battlefield—what else was mere steps from where Huntress stood. It didn’t take long for a plan to hit her. “Huntress, bash that purrloin into the ground with Tackle!” she called out. “Then whip your head up and forward!” With a low growl, Huntress acted immediately. She threw herself forward, slamming her entire body onto the cat clinging to her head. Belle’s purrloin yowled, its paws flailing, but the lillipup pinned her down. Then, Huntress jerked, lifting the cat onto her head, and with a snap of her tiny frame, she flung the creature away from her … and directly into the lake. For a second time, one of Belle’s pokémon plunged into the waters with a splash and sank at once. “Pride, return!” Belle snapped. “Starr, don’t let that twerp get away!” Looking up, Door saw Blair leap off the outcropping and bolt towards her. Under one of Blair’s arms was a small bundle, and her other hand snaked to her waist. She plucked something from her belt, and twisting around, she snapped her arm forward. “Wilbur! Ember!” she called out. “Oh no you don’t!” Belle screamed. Both of her hands snapped to her own waist, and as quickly as she could, she threw a pair of balls forward. “Watcher! Stalker! Double Tackle!” Two. Belle had somehow picked up a second patrat, and now she was planning on a two-on-one match. Door scoffed, thinking back to Belle’s insistence that she was one of the good guys, but she knew this wasn’t the time to dwell on it. Instead, she recalled her lillipup and motioned forward with her other hand. “Knives! Quickly! Help Wilbur out with Pound!” she called. In a flash, Blair’s tepig and a pair of patrat materialized onto the cave floor, and Knives scrambled forward to meet them. Rushing past the pig, Knives shrieked and raised a muscular paw. At the same time, Wilbur inhaled, rearing back on his hind legs before exhaling a jet of flame. Light danced off the cavern walls as one of the oncoming patrat was engulfed in fire. The second slammed face-first into Knives’s paw, only to be thrown into the flames. In the time that it took for the battle to begin, Blair caught up with Door and grabbed her by the arm. “Run!” she shouted. “Wilbur, keep attacking! Make sure they don’t follow us!” Stumbling into her first steps, Door followed Blair but pivoted at the same time to face her audino. “You too, Knives! Keep it up with Pound!” “Don’t you run away from us!” Belle shouted. “Watcher! Stalker! Tackle! Don’t let them get away!” Neither Door nor Blair looked back. Both trainers only knew their pokémon were following them from the pounding of their running feet, the cries of Knives, and the heat and light of Wilbur’s fire. They didn’t look back until they emerged into the brilliant afternoon light, squinting against the pain. And then, they only afforded the battle behind them a cursory glance as they ran through the tall grass and back to and over the fence. Eventually, their pokémon’s attacks cut off, and Belle’s screaming grew fainter with distance. And then, at last, all Door could hear were her footsteps, and the footsteps of Blair, Wilbur, and Knives. Nothing more.
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They found Geist and Opal exactly where they left them: on the road, kneeling next to the boy. This time, they were joined by a young-looking female Companion who sat beside her trainer with a weary look on her face. Geist’s hands were at her back, threading wires over and under a gap in her internal machinery, and as Blair and Door walked towards them, Door realized what had once been in that space: a crushed battery pack that was now sitting on the road beside the Companion. When they finally approached, Geist shut the panel and pressed his hands into the Companion’s back. “That should do it,” he said. “I’ve rerouted your power completely to your auxiliary battery. What’s your time on it?” The kneeling Companion tilted her head. “Three hours and counting.” “Good. That should be enough to get you back to Striaton City.” He glanced up at Door and Blair. “How did you two do?” Blair stepped forward and pulled the bundle out from under her arm. Door noticed then that Blair had wrapped her jacket around it, and as she pulled it in front of her, it wriggled in her arms. Opening it, Blair revealed a battered patrat, which she carefully pulled free and cradled in one arm. The boy jumped to his feet, winced, and—against his sprained ankle—scrambled forward to reach for his pokémon. “My patrat! Is he okay?!” he cried. Opal was at his elbow immediately, steadying him as she helped him to her partner. “Careful! Remember, your leg is injured. You shouldn’t jump up so suddenly like that!” The boy looked down at the road. “I’ll … I’ll be fine. But … is my patrat…?” Smiling, Blair took the boy’s free arm, bent it, and transferred the patrat to his trainer. “A little beat up, but he’ll be all right,” she said. “I don’t think they were trying to hurt him that much, but get him to a pokémon center so they can check him out, okay?” With a sniff, the boy held his patrat close. “I-I don’t know how to thank you, but—” “I do.” The boy’s Companion rise shakily to her feet. Geist shot to his own, helping her just like Opal helped her partner. Soon, she wobbled forward with her hands extended towards Blair and Door. Both of her palms began to glow white, just as Geist’s did when he healed the Dreamyard munna, but this time, six small, pink spheres appeared in the beams of light—three for each hand. When the light faded, the orbs fell into her palms and rested there, and Door could see what they were: poké balls in their retracted states. Not just any, either. Actual heal balls, high-class poké balls that were hard to find in Nuvema. “Please take these,” the Companion said. “It’s the least we could do to thank you for all your help.” Blair shook her head. “No, it’s okay. It was really nothing. Just the right thing to do, you know?” “We must insist,” the Companion responded. “You have done much more for us than we can describe. So please.” With his signature soft smile, Geist collected three of the spheres. Opal followed suit, and the two of them slipped the balls into their pockets. “Thank you,” Geist said. “Now hurry back to Striaton and be careful from here on out.” He turned his head slightly and gave the boy a stern glance—the kind a parent would give his child. “And remember. Stay within the safe zone.” “I will,” the boy replied. “Thank you.” With one last smile, the boy’s Companion scooped her partner into her arms and began hurrying away, back towards Striaton. Watching the Companion race away with the boy in her arms was almost a comical sight to Door, something that nearly ruined the otherwise nearly heartwarming moment. So at first, Door didn’t notice Blair slink up to her side and stand there with her arms wrapped around her frame. She didn’t notice, that is, until she shoved her hands into her pockets and bumped Blair’s arm, and as soon as she did, she gave Blair a side-glance. “Hey,” she said. “Good battling. You’re a pretty tough girl, and man, Wilbur’s Ember was—” “Door,” Blair interrupted, her voice quiet and low. “There’s something you need to know about that boy’s patrat.” She blinked. “Oh? What’s that?” Blair turned to face Door, and in that second, Door could see her uncomfortable expression. Eyebrows furrowed. Eyes worried. Frown deep and tight. Something was wrong. And then, she said three words that made Door stop. “He was breathing.” — > File1.txt> Author: Lanette Hamilton> Notes: From the personal audio research notes of Lanette Hamilton. Transcript only; sound file has been lost. Transcriber unknown.Companion: noun, an advanced humanoid computer capable of socialization and service.Note to self: Terrible definition. Edit later.I wish I could just define things simply. It’s already getting to be more complicated than it should be, but to be honest, this whole thing’s a mess. I blame myself a little. I thought this would fix things—maybe make things a little easier. But to be honest, I’m not half as good at lying as Cassius or half as confident as Bebe or Brigette, and I’m certainly not half as clever as Bill. I don’t even know why I lied about … well. You know.Right. Right. Sorry. The point of this message.I don’t know why I lied. I just did. And now I need to figure out how to make more of these things when that’s completely impossible! How am I supposed to emulate—Right. I can do this. It’s just a balance, right? Perfectly logical. With modern technology as it is, we’re already almost there. It’s just a matter of changing a few settings, finding the right configuration of hardware—simple!Besides, I have Zero-One to help me. This won’t be so bad.Maybe?
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Post by bay on May 31, 2018 5:15:46 GMT
Yeah I agree that you have Blair in Ch 9 stand out more there. Her unable graduate Training School is something many of us can relate to in some way. Door comforting Blair there was sweet.
I expect Bill to have some kind of role in this story with the way you established Door's family in the beginning, but I admit Lanette resorting to building an android that looks like him makes me feel bad for her. I like how the creation of Geist leads to something more sinister. and I look forward to how that unfolds.
Onto the second extra, first off I'm curious how Savory's relationship with Officer Jenny's daughter went. = P Second off, cool another appearance with Hilda and N. Recrutiment, huh? Wonder what kind...
Now onto Chapter Ten. Well, Knives is already showing some personality there. Gotta love a killer bunny haha. Also nice of Door to teach Blair how to catch Pokemon and reassuring her going against Belle and Starr won't be too bad.
Some of Belle and Door's exchanges during the battle were amusing, and the battle itself is nicely done. So that patrat is real, huh? Hm, maybe Team Matrix has some sort of agenda for real Pokemon too.
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Post by Firebrand on May 31, 2018 23:37:58 GMT
All I really have to say about the extra is that Savory is pretty much the consummate stereotypical fire type specialist, which means he is my favorite. I also hope we see more of this coalition of trainers Hilda and N are putting together behind the scenes, because I can sort of see it building up to a really cool scene towards the end where, in the game at least, all of the gym leaders show up as big damn heroes to hold off the sages of Team Plasma. In the game, it's really cool, if a bit out of the blue, so if this is building to that (and I have a good feeling it is), I hope the scene becomes that much cooler because we see the planning that went into it.
And onto Wellspring Cave!
So right off the bat, we see why Knives is, well, a murder bunny. I think you're definitely laying the ground work for a really interesting take on Audino here, and it's going to be fun to see where it goes. After reading this chapter, I checked out Audino's stats, and it's definitely a powerhouse for an early game pokemon, and its high HP gives it good staying power.
I mentioned last chapter that it seemed like you'd found your groove with Blair, but I also think that by this point you've also gotten a good handle on Door too (not that you hadn't before, but in this chapter I was starting to solidify what it was about her that I really liked). I think what works best about Door is that you've really captured her as a fifteen year old. She's at this point in her life where she's too old to be a naive kid, but she's also not old enough to be worldly. She's trying to be this tough aloof cynic, but she's also still at heart an inquisitive and altruistic kid, and that internal combination is just so completely fifteen that it really works for this fic. Like, this would have to be a fundamentally very different story, tonally, if Door was even a year or two older, I think, and it definitely wouldn't work if she were younger. You have to be in that trying-to-be-a-grownup-but-still-a-kid place to make this fic, as it is, work, and really the thing that keeps me so interested in this is Door and her perspective on events.
And I think here we also get our first good look at Belle. Our previous interactions with her have all been really hurried or chaotic, and even in the Dreamyard there was just a lot of other stuff going on at the time. I think I had pictured her as older than you did, i.e. someone around 19-21, mostly because the image I had in my head was of someone who was assisting a professor in their research, like a college intern sort of thing. But I guess I was off my mark, and honestly Door was a professor's assistant ('s assistant, but the point stands) so the age isn't really material. But now I'm picturing her as someone much closer to Door's age, and I think what really did it for me was this line:
Like, that there I think told me everything I needed to know to revise my opinion, because Belle both a) sees the world in black and white, good guys and bad guys, and b) used "dumbface" as an insult, whereas I think someone even a little older would have gone with something with a bit more bite. And granted, Door is the one who first brings up the good guys/bad guys thing, but in a more sarcastic way. Going by how she acted in this chapter, it seems to me like Belle is just as much of a kid as Door is, if not moreso.
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Post by admin on Jun 4, 2018 2:09:35 GMT
Replies~! Yeah I agree that you have Blair in Ch 9 stand out more there. Her unable graduate Training School is something many of us can relate to in some way. Door comforting Blair there was sweet. Aww, thank you! Yeah, here’s about where I started realizing Blair might be fun to write, especially when I stuck her with that whole “not Arceus’s gift to pokémon training” backstory. Or when my name was attached to it, amirite? :V BADLY. Nah, but forreal, yeah, there was a lot of drama going on with Lanette way back when, and she did a lot of things that were kinda messed up. But to be fair, she was kinda also caught between one thing that was technically right but also horrendous and another thing that was technically even more right but also horrific. Her life sucked, is what I’m saying. Geist made it marginally better. ALSO BADLY. No, but forreal, those two dated for, like, three months before Savory broke her heart by being a hot-headed dick and saying the wrong thing at the wrong time. So now he’s more or less not welcome back in an entire precinct of Striaton City. The best kind. The kind that plays homage to canon but actually goes somewhere. Heck yes, she’s the best.Thank ya! And as for real pokémon, well, they certainly have some sort of agenda for how they’re created that might involve a little experimentation here and there… All I really have to say about the extra is that Savory is pretty much the consummate stereotypical fire type specialist, which means he is my favorite. I also hope we see more of this coalition of trainers Hilda and N are putting together behind the scenes, because I can sort of see it building up to a really cool scene towards the end where, in the game at least, all of the gym leaders show up as big damn heroes to hold off the sages of Team Plasma. In the game, it's really cool, if a bit out of the blue, so if this is building to that (and I have a good feeling it is), I hope the scene becomes that much cooler because we see the planning that went into it. Oh yes. I can’t say too much because, well, we’re talking about spoilers and shenanigans, but rest assured that I’m fixing ONE OF THE TWO THINGS ABOUT BW THAT HAS BOTHERED ME FOR AGES, OH MY GOD. Like. I love the idea that the gym leaders actually did something in those games. Not so much a fan of the fact that they only kinda sorta did something… Also, yes, Savory is literally the best. ;D Or he is next to maybe the Driftveil gym leader, but I won’t say spoilers directly at you. Oh, without a doubt. Realtalk, I highly recommend anyone doing a BW Nuzlocke to get yourself an audino. They’re super easy to get too—all you have to do is wait until you see some rustling grass, and boom! Best friend for life.This is definitely the run that made me love them, ngl. For the most part, re, altruism (I mean, she’s still a pretty terrible person when it comes to her biases), but otherwise, pretty much! And thank you on the compliment concerning capturing the essence of being fifteen. Oh! Yeah, haha, Belle is only a couple years older than Door. (If anyone remembers that one post I made on my Tumblr, my explanation is that none of it is canon anymore, lmao. She’s specifically 17.) Sort of edging on that line you were talking about earlier, but to be fair, Belle didn’t really have the kind of upbringing or environment that would harbor someone with, you know, a lot more maturity. But! Point is, yeah, she’s definitely very much a kid in mindset. She just happens to have her driver’s license on top of that. (Or she would, if she ever applied for it.) All in all, thanks to you and Bay!
[CHAPTER ELEVEN: ROUTE 3] Door sat cross-legged on the edge of a trainer’s path with Geist standing calmly behind her. The two had barely spoken to each other since the boy and his Companion left for Striaton, but frankly, Door didn’t care. She wasn’t about to apologize to a Companion, as Blair had suggested; after all, he wasn’t alive. He wasn’t really hurt, and frankly, the patrat seemed more important. So, Door focused her attention on training, and Geist remained quiet, especially now that Blair had taken Opal to battle trainers nearby. And for that, Door was thankful. It meant she could think. Presently, she nibbled at a hardened granola bar and kept her eyes trained on her lillipup. Huntress, meanwhile, was locked in battle, dashing through the dark grass with her teeth bared. The blades whipped at the dog’s cheeks, but as far as Door could tell, Huntress didn’t care. All of her lillipup’s attention was locked on the purrloin in front of her. It led her along, throwing a glance back at her every so often as it wove this way and that, but no matter where it went, Huntress followed just a hair behind. The dog leaned forward, her scrawny legs reaching, her paws flexing, her claws digging into the earth to throw herself forward, but no matter what she did, the purrloin slipped out of her reach, time and again. There were a thousand tactics Door could have used to stop the purrloin, and she knew this. She could, for example, order Huntress to use Growl. With the thickness of the grass, Growl could startle the cat just enough to make it stumble, and that single misstep would buy Huntress enough time to catch up. Or Door could have Huntress come in at an arc, cutting through the field via a path the purrloin would never be able to see from its vantage point. Or maybe Door could even switch out Huntress for Jack, whose Water Gun could strike the purrloin from a distance. But she didn’t. She merely sat quietly on the path, front teeth biting into the rock-hard granola bar. It was because of that patrat. Door had intended to spend her time training and battling, but her mind kept wandering back to the boy’s patrat. She was bothered by what Blair had said, even long after the two had decided it wouldn’t help to chase down the boy and ask him where he had gotten a real pokémon. And it distracted her long after Geist had suggested training, long after Blair had mentioned and explained the dark grass, long after they took up opposite sides of the field. And all of this was because it bothered Door to know that there were so many possible answers to that lingering question. First, there was the most obvious. The patrat wasn’t native. There were patrat nests all over the world, and even then, lots of breeders had raised patrat and other supposedly “Unovan” pokémon from tamed specimens because of their desirability after the Unovan population collapse. The boy could have gotten that patrat from any number of places. Second, there was the possibility that Blair had simply mistaken exhaust from a faux patrat’s ventilation system for breathing. Third, the patrat was real and Unova-bred. And this possibility even had sub options. The boy could have known Amanita, or Amanita might have given out pokémon to new trainers herself. Maybe he went to the Dreamyard and found a real pokémon produced by a munna. Maybe a pair of domesticated patrat got loose and bred. She bit clean through the granola bar and chewed thoughtfully. Her eyes refocused on the battle in front of her, and in that moment, she took inventory of what her pokémon were doing. On the field, something jumped in front the wild purrloin and smashed a shoulder into its chest. The cat stumbled backwards and crashed down onto the ground, and seconds later, Huntress slammed her entire body on top of it. Noting that her pokémon were still handling the battle, Door frowned and let her mind wander back to the question at hand. There were problems with the three possible answers that had occurred to her. First, the trainer looked too new to be foreign, and he wouldn’t make a big deal about the theft of his patrat if he was. He would simply go after Belle and Starr himself with whatever backup pokémon he had if he wasn’t new. Sure, maybe he was starting fresh, but what kind of trainer would go to a new region with none of the pokémon he had in his previous journeys? And if this was his first journey, why go through a region like Unova, with its high crime rates and swarms of fauxkémon, with a real pokémon he’s taken with him from another region? There were plenty of safer regions out there for a newbie, including wherever the kid might have been from. And the possibility that the patrat came from a breeder was just as preposterous. Those were highly prized pets; Door couldn’t imagine someone wanting to sic something like that on a fauxkémon. Second, Blair was too smart to mistake a fauxkémon’s cooling emissions for actual breathing. Even small children knew the difference, and Blair went to a school that specialized in the study of pokémon. So if she said it was real, it had to be real. Third, Geist was just as surprised as they were that the patrat was real. Granted, he hadn’t said anything when Blair had told him, but to Door, that was just additional proof. If he knew and wanted to cover it up, he would have, just as he had when he led Door to believe he wasn’t a Companion. Besides, she couldn’t imagine why Amanita would give away her own research subjects to just anyone—the starters notwithstanding. So as far as Door was concerned, the patrat was real. But if it was real, then where did it come from? Letting her mind wander back to the present, Door noticed that Huntress’s barks grew muffled against her Bites. The trainer looked out across the field again, just in time to see Huntress tear chunks from the fauxkémon’s frame. For a second, Scout watched from his position behind her, standing exactly where he had emerged when he knocked the purrloin off its feet, but before he could even blink in his usual, slow way, another purrloin shot at his face and dragged its claws across his eyes. At last, Door snapped out of her thoughts completely. Biting off another chunk of her granola bar, she shot to her feet and glared at the battle in front of her. “Huntress! Scout needs help! Bite!” she shouted. The second purrloin bent down and curled its lips back into a snarl, and its green eyes flashed at Scout with their own, internal light. Scout blinked back, steadily, slowly, almost uncomprehendingly, until the purrloin raised its claws for one more attack. With a smooth twist, he turned his head, and the purrloin hesitated, glancing from Scout to a Huntress diving straight for it. She slammed into its side and rolled off Scout into the tall grass, taking the purrloin with her. Scout picked himself up and tilted his head as the grass rustled violently in front of him. Barks and yowls rose from somewhere deeper in the field, but as the seconds ticked by, the yowls grew more and more mechanical until they stopped abruptly. Shortly afterwards, the barking stopped too. Door relaxed. “Not bad, guys. Come back.” Huntress burst from the grass with her tail wagging vigorously behind her. A grin crossed the dog’s face, and her tongue lolled out of her open jaws as she trotted forward. Scout scrambled to his feet and followed, and soon, the two pokémon stood before their trainer. Part of Door lingered for just another second on the boy and his patrat. The myriad of questions Door had about the two still bothered her, but she knew those nagging, uneasy thoughts weren’t about to get answers. So with a deep breath, she pushed them out of her mind and smiled at her pokémon. And then another thorn in her side spoke up. “Not bad at all,” Geist agreed. “But if I may ask, why are you only battling wild pokémon? We’ve passed no fewer than twenty trainers so far, and—” “And I didn’t ask for your opinion,” Door said with an exasperated huff. “But if you’re gonna be nosy about it, I don’t want to battle some rando who’s just getting advice from their Companion. Kids this early in the Unovan circuit always have to ask their Companions about every little thing, and battles just take forever. Believe me. I see them around Nuvema all the time.” “Door,” Geist sighed, “you can’t fault a trainer for being new. Trainers who don’t have Companions are seasoned veterans from other regions. Not only would they already know everything our standard trainer’s manuals cover, but they’re also far, far too powerful for you. There’s nothing wrong with battling someone—” “ Don’t you dare say ‘at your skill level.’” Geist’s shoulders sagged. “There is nothing wrong with battling a new trainer. It’s a great way to make connections and learn more about training and pokémon than you would have by yourself. Blair understands that.” “Well, Blair’s not me,” Door snapped. “Why do you care anyway?” “Because I’m your Companion.” She looked at him. “And when did that happen?!” Geist shrugged. “Did you really think Amanita simply downloaded data from me yesterday? She had a feeling you would agree to escorting me to Castelia, so she took the liberty of registering you as a secondary user.” He closed his eyes and lowered his head, as if he was just as irritated with the situation as she was. “Thus, until we reach Castelia City, it’s my duty to provide you with as much guidance as possible.” Door fell silent for a long moment. She narrowed her eyes at Geist and weighed all possible responses to this revelation. Being stuck delivering her dead aunt’s robot butler was one thing; being forced to partner up with the thing, though? An entirely different story. It meant she was connected to a Companion, that her reputation for having never touched a Companion in her life—helping her father to repair them notwithstanding—would forever be tarnished. And besides, why didn’t anyone ask her if she wanted a Companion? Why did Amanita just hoist one onto her without her consent? Breathing deep, Door tried to swallow all of that frustration. No, if she reacted, that would just give Geist the satisfaction of seeing her snap. She knew, of course, that he technically couldn’t actually feel satisfaction—true emotions were beyond a Companion’s capability, after all—but she wasn’t especially in the mood to take Geist’s pre-programmed smugness. So, with a soft glance towards her pokémon, she opted for ignoring him. “ Anyway, I think we’re doing just fine. Right, guys? Huntress, you had, what, twenty victories in a row? And Scout’s got ten, plus Jack and Knives got in a few … in all, nice training session.” She shoved the last corner of the granola bar into her mouth, chewed it, and swallowed. As she shoved the wrapper into her pocket, she added, “Only downside is you beat everything I could’ve caught, but hey.” Although Scout didn’t even seem to hear her, Huntress whimpered and took a step back at the note of criticism. In response to her lillipup’s shift, Door held up her hands. “Whoa, wait!” she said. “I’m not saying that’s a bad thing! I’m just saying it means I’ve gotta change my game plan. I mean, a handful of really strong pokémon’s just as good as an army, right? Like … what’s the point of catching a ton of pokémon if none of them can fight?” She stood and dusted off her pants. “So relax! You’re doing great!” By that point in time, Huntress was practically vibrating. “What?” Door asked. “I mean … I didn’t think I put it that badly.” As quickly as he could, Geist stepped forward and placed a hand on his partner’s shoulder. When she looked up, she noticed that his eyes were glowing bright blue. “Door,” he said, “I think—” The brilliant, white light that burst from Huntress’s body silenced Geist. Door stumbled backwards, into his hands, as her pokémon hummed and twisted at her feet. She could see and hear the processes happening: the mechanical whirring, the elongating, the unfurling, the reshaping—all of the hallmarks of evolution, taking place in a matter of seconds. And when it was over, the light fizzled into a dazzle of sparkles, leaving behind not a lillipup but a herdier. “Whoa,” Door breathed. Shaking off the last of the light, Huntress craned her neck to examine her back. Her short, dark tail wagged, and her bushy whiskers quivered as she panted and barked. Door pushed off her Companion and knelt down, reaching out in wonder. Fauxkémon or not, evolution was a marvel, a thing of beauty, and Door couldn’t deny this. Still, she stopped just short of touching Huntress to think. The dog sniffed at her hand and licked her fingers, but Door ignored this to reach into her pocket with her other hand. Behind her, before she could grab her holo caster to check on what she was seeing, Geist cleared his throat. “Herdier,” he recited. “The loyal dog pokémon. It loyally follows its trainer’s orders. For ages, they have helped trainers raise pokémon.” He gave Door a sideways glance. “Notice the key word there. Loyal. Given your typical impulsive behavior, it would be a good idea to be careful with this one. Evolution shifts a pokémon’s programming. Now that Huntress is a herdier, she will act on innate directives programmed for the herdier species first and foremost, then apply the personality core she’s established since activation. Do you understand?” After a beat, he lowered his shoulders, sighed, and rubbed the bridge of his nose. “‘Are you even listening to a word I say’ might be a better question.” “Yeah, sure,” she mumbled. Then, drawing out Jack’s poké ball, she said, “Hey, Jack! Come on out and see this!” With his own flash of white light, Jack emerged, barking and brandishing his scallop shell. The moment he landed on the road and realized there was no one to battle, however, he stopped, popped his shell onto his stomach, and leaned toward Huntress to sniff her. And then, despite her attempts to lean away from the oshawott, Jack reached out to grab Huntress’s whiskers and examine them. She began to emit a low growl before Door threw a hand between them and forced them to separate. “Personal space, Jack!” she snapped. Then, drawing him close, she draped her arms around Jack but used one hand to point to Huntress. “So, remember that lillipup you were fighting alongside earlier? This is her now! Think you can do that?” Jack stared up at her, blinked, and tilted his head with an inquisitive whine. In response, Door pumped both arms in the air. “C’mon!” she said. “Really concentrate!” With a confident smile and nod, Jack bore down, folding himself over as he brought his curling front paws together in front of his chest. Door watched her oshawott intently, waiting for something—anything—to happen. Behind her, Geist leaned down and tapped her on the shoulder. “Uh, Door?” he said. “Evolution doesn’t quite work like that.” A dazzling flash of light caught the trainer, the oshawott, and the Companion off-guard, and they looked to the side, just in time to see the last few seconds of Scout’s own evolution into a watchog. Even in its sleeker, more alert form, Scout blinked at them, tilting his now lithe head and licking his longer, shinier buck teeth. “Or maybe it does for some pokémon,” Geist said as he turned back to Door, “but not to real ones.” Scooping Jack into her arms, she whirled around, stood, and faced her Companion. “Okay. Fine. So how does evolution work?” She wasn’t actually interested; she knew on a general, vague level how evolution worked. It was one of the training basics, something everyone knew happened to some pokémon at certain points of their lives. But she had a feeling that asking Geist would get that smug look off his face, so she did. “Well, it’s complicated,” Geist replied. Sure enough, his infuriatingly sympathetic grin faded, and he motioned to Huntress. “Most pokémon evolve the way Huntress did: automatically after gaining enough battling experience to do so. Think of it like hitting puberty, only instantaneous and directly tied to your actions. The principle is the same: you change based on the amount of time you’ve spent living. Only … I suppose for humans, it’s more of a metaphorical concept, but—” “Bored,” Door drawled as she narrowed her eyes at Geist. He waved a hand in the air. “Right. Get on with it. Now, there are exceptions to the general rule. As I’ve said, most pokémon that can evolve do so the way Huntress does, and I’m afraid to say that the oshawott species is in this category. Therefore, Jack will need to gain more exposure to battling in order to trigger his own evolution. However, other pokémon, such as the eevee species, the kadabra species, and more have their own specific requirements: evolution stones, evolution items, and heightened bond with a trainer, to name a few. Why, in the region of Kalos, there’s a species of squid-like pokémon called inkay that requires you to—” “ Bored,” Door sighed in exasperation. She tilted her chin up, a position mimicked by Jack. “So when’s Jack due to evolve, then?” Geist heaved a sigh of his own and examined the oshawott. “Mm. Well, it looks like it should be any—” “Door? Hey! Oh wow!” At the sound of Blair’s voice, Geist stood straight, and Door twisted around to see Blair running towards them with Opal trailing behind her. Blair came to a skidding halt right behind Door, where she planted her hands on her knees and bent down to look at Huntress and Scout, while Opal came to a stop beside Blair and clasped her hands under her chin. “Wow, is this Huntress and Scout?” Blair breathed. She reached out to pet Huntress, and the dog responded with a yip, a wag of her tail, and an excited leap in the air to meet Blair’s palm. Bringing her hand down, Blair knelt on the road and began working her fingers through Huntress’s rough coat. “She’s amazing!” Blair said. “Wish Toto would evolve already. Or Wilbur.” “Aww, I’m sure they will,” Door replied. “These two just did, and you saw how much battling they got in. If you’ve been fighting as many pokémon as I have, Toto and Wilbur can’t be that far away from evolving. And incidentally, speaking of, you were right about training in dark grass.” Blair flashed her a confident smile. “See? Trainers’ School teaches you something now and then.” “Ha. Remind me to never doubt you,” Door said. “Yeah.” Blair’s hands began to slow. “Pretty soon, you’ll be able to take on Nacrene Gym.” “So will you.” “Sure, but…” Blair’s voice trailed off, and Door set her jaw at the abrupt silence. She had always thought that the concept of a sinking feeling was cliché, but that was exactly what she felt right then: a cold, tightening, painful feeling, like her heart was slowly drifting into her stomach. “Uh, so … how was battling against all those trainers?” Door asked. “Great!” Blair replied. “I-I’ve been learning a lot from them. It’s a great way to pick up tips. You should try it sometime.” Door knew she meant it, but there was something about her voice—a distant twang to it that only deepened her feeling of dread. Inhaling through her nose, Door squatted next to Blair and nudged her with an elbow. “Something wrong?” she asked. Blair shrugged. “Well, um…” “Yeah?” She frowned. “Um. I lost a few battles too.” “How many?” Door asked. She tried her best to make her voice sound soft yet comforting—strong yet not forceful. But even then, Blair cringed, and her own voice grew quiet. “A-about half of them.” “Oh.” Door smiled broadly and gave Blair’s shoulder a firm nudge. “Well, that’s not bad! Better than all of them!” “I-I know. But I was also watching you battle for a bit too. Your pokémon are so strong,” Blair replied. “Hey, if you’re comparing yourself to me—” Blair cut her off with a brisk shake of her head. “N-no! It’s not that! I, um.” She took a deep breath and said, “I’m going back to Striaton City to get the Trio Badge.” At that, Door’s heart sprang back into place, and the cold sensation left her, as if she was abruptly filled with warm air. She even breathed an audible sigh of relief. Here, she thought Blair was about to quit training or descend into verbal self-flagellation or something. But deciding to go back and earn a badge? That was nothing in comparison. “Oh,” she said. “Here I thought you were gonna say something worse. You shouldn’t be phrasing stuff so ominously like that.” “Well, actually…” Blair’s hands stopped altogether. “Door, this is the bad news: I don’t want you to come with me.” And just as quickly as her relief came, Door descended back into a mild panic. She felt her blood drain, and she blinked and swallowed hard. “W-what?” she asked. “Why? I mean, with how strong you’re getting, going up against the Striaton Gym should be a breeze.” “Yeah, but it’ll just hold you back,” Blair said. “And think about every gym after that. If we travel together, we’d have to wait for each other to fight the gym leader. And the gym leader would need to recover between the both of us too, so we’d have to wait longer before leaving every city. And … that’s not all, either.” Door’s shoulders slumped. “What else is there?” “It’s that boy’s patrat,” Blair said. “I was thinking about it and how it was breathing. Don’t you think it’s weird?” “Yeah, sure, but it could’ve been a lot of things. It could’ve just been some dumb kid sending a bred patrat out to battle fake pokémon for all we know.” Blair frowned. “I guess. But I don’t know. Somehow, I don’t think that was the case. And even if it was … what that girl said’s been bothering me.” “What, Belle?” Door snorted. “She’s crazy. Who even knows what she was talking about?” “She said she was following you.” “And what? You’re afraid of being jumped by her?” “No.” Blair rose to her feet. “I’m afraid something really weird’s going on, and I want to be ready for it. You get what I mean?” At first, Door stared into Blair’s eyes. Then, after a moment of thought, she shifted uncomfortably on her feet and tore her gaze away. “Y-yeah. I get what you mean. But … that wouldn’t matter, right? If we traveled together, then we can both prepare ourselves for whatever Belle’s doing at the same time, and we’d have fun traveling together. I mean, I’m supposed to be helping you out and everything, right?” “And you are.” Blair reached out to put a hand on Door’s shoulder. “Door, you’re a really strong trainer compared to me. I mean, you’ve gotten two of your pokémon to evolve while I haven’t even gotten one. It wouldn’t be fair for me to hold you back and constantly force myself to catch up to you just so I can earn badges at the same rate you would. But if I train at my own pace, maybe I’ll get as strong as you are, and maybe I can be ready to fight in my own way. Trust me. It’ll be better if we went our separate ways from here on out. I’ll catch up with you eventually, and when that happens, let’s battle. I’ll show you how strong I’ve gotten.” As soon as those last words left her mouth, Door snorted and rubbed her nose. “Spoken like a true rival.” Blair smirked. “You’re not the only one who thought the old days were really cool.” Door chuckled, then bucked her head towards the road. “So. You heading back to Striaton?” “Yeah. Toto and Wilbur might not have evolved yet, but I know they’ll be able to kick Sumac’s butt anyway.” At that, Door raised her eyebrows. “You already know who you’re fighting?” “Of course I do,” Blair said with a laugh. “Sumac likes to make it this huge secret, but the other two think he’s a prat. In Striaton City, it’s pretty much common knowledge.” Door stared at her for a few beats before replying, “Kick his ass.” Blair’s smirk broadened as she took several steps to the north, away from Door, Geist, and the pokémon. With a final half-turn, she fired a finger-gun at Door and gave her a wink. “You got it,” she said. Then, she started walking away. Opal trotted behind her, raising an arm to wave at Door and her Companion. “Bye now!” Opal called. And with that, the pair left, walking on until they disappeared around a bend yards ahead. Long afterwards, Door could still feel a smirk playing across her own face. Without letting her expression falter, she pushed Jack onto her shoulder and recalled Huntress and Scout. “Those two are something else,” she muttered. Then, more to Jack than to Geist, she added, “Anyway, you ready?” “When you are,” Geist responded. “Nacrene City isn’t that far ahead. If we follow this path, we should get there by sunset, and the nearest pokémon center is six city blocks from the city’s entrance.” Door, as always, wasn’t listening. By the time Geist was done speaking, she was already marching ahead. Thoughts and fantasies of herself as a real trainer in the old days filled her mind. That was because things were different now. She had a rival. — > Galatea7.txt> Author: Lanette Hamilton> Notes: From the audio research notes of Lanette Hamilton. Transcript only; sound file has been lost. File transcribed by Bebe Larson.(Cassius’s Note: Original voice file damaged by exposure to LFA. Spoken date and time lost; file date marked two years, three months prior to File One, placing this as the earliest surviving recording of LH’s notes on Project Galatea.)LANETTE: —14:53, follow-up on Project Galatea, recording 7, dated [REDACTED]. After several attempts at forming a lightweight but highly durable endoskeleton, it was determined that the titanium alloy sample sent in by a certain contact at Devon Corp would be perfect for our needs. I haven’t yet settled on a suitable compound for synthetic skin, but my contact assures me his industrial synthetics division has a thing or few in mind. I trust them. They did the AM Suit, after all.On a personal note, keeping Project Galatea secret has been quite a challenge, given recent events. He’s already started to ask questions, and I don’t know how long I can dodge them. Just in case, I’ve moved my notes to a closed, encrypted server for maximum security. I only hope he doesn’t get creative. I don’t think he can access something like that, but then again, he’s done stranger things.I just need six more months, and then I’ll be able to tell him everything. Just six more months.[end recording]
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