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Post by Firebrand on Feb 10, 2018 1:18:44 GMT
A/N: This fic was all Minty's fault Rated PG-13
Chapter Listing: Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 1The tolling of the cloister bell made Wulfric look up from the manuscript he was illuminating. Surely it was not vespers already? The light from the candle on his desk flickered as he rose and crossed to the tiny window of the cell, but the clouded gray sky outside gave no indication of the time. On his perch, Dismas shifted, fluttering his blue and white wings. Wulfric was about to open the door when the sounds of commotion a voices shouting words he did not recognize in the hall outside made him draw back. Definitely not vespers. Someone shouted something, and Wulfric thought it was “Stop!” Then there was the sound of metal striking metal, metal striking stone, and then a dull thud. This was followed by a sharp pounding at the door, and Wulfric backed up against the wall. He picked up the stool he had been sitting on and lifted it. When the door to his cell flew open, Wulfric threw the stool at the man who walked through. The man caught it and tossed it down. Dismas squawked and flew at the man, but the stranger swatted him away with a casual motion of his hand. “Stay down, Dismas,” Wulfric commanded. The strange man turned to face Wulfric, and the monk was paralyzed before the warrior’s intense blue gaze. His long blonde hair was braided down his back, and the sword in his hand and the leather armor he wore were spotted with fresh blood. The warrior held a finger to his lips before stalking around the cell. He went first to the racks of scrolls and unrolled several of them. He puzzled over the markings before tossing them to the ground. Then he turned his attention to the illuminated manuscript on the desk. As he flipped through the pages, Wulfric thought he saw a flicker of admiration in the warrior’s eyes as he peered down at the delicate inking details. The man closed the book and smiled when he saw the gold embossed in the leather on the cover. He opened the book again and seized the pages. “No!”Wulfric cried. He had spent two months on that manuscript. The warrior turned to him with a flash of irritation. He considered the book for a moment and the collection of inks and brushes now scattered across Wulfric’s desk. Then very slowly and with great care, he slid his knife into the manuscript’s spine to separate the glue from the pages. He set the pages that Wulfric had slaved over on the desk and stuck the cover in his belt. Then, he pointed at Wulfric and motioned towards the door. Wulfric took his meaning and stood up to leave, gathering up Dismas as he did. When the warrior glared at him again, Wulfric tried to seem adamant. “Please, you must let me take him. He’s all I have.” Even if the warrior could not understand Wulfric’s words, he understood the tone. The man nodded and shoved Wulfric out the door. They left the scriptorium, and Wulfric saw that the other cells had likewise been sacked. The corpses of two of the town guardsmen were slumped by the door outside. Wulfric almost vomited and cradled Dismas closer to his breast. He felt the Chatot stir and hoped the bird would remain silent. When they emerged into the monastery courtyard, another man was waiting for Wulfric’s captor. This one was smaller, with a more wiry build, but covered in far more blood. He quipped something in the hard, staccato words Wulfric had heard in the corridor earlier and laughed. The slim man took a bite of an apple and sauntered over to Wulfric, looking him up and down. He scoffed and look up at Wulfric’s captor. The larger warrior just narrowed his eyes and shoved Wulfric forward before turning to a Gogoat placidly grazing nearby. “Steinarr!” he barked. It seemed to be a name. The Gogoat glanced up, took another bite of grass and walked to its master’s side. The warrior led Wulfric towards the chapel. As they passed by the open gates of the monastery, Wulfric looked down and saw the village at the bottom of the hill. Coumarina was burning. He was shoved through the doors of the chapel where more of the invaders were lounging on the benches. Several other monks and many of the townsfolk were huddled on their knees before the altar, cowering before the raiders. When Wulfric was pushed into their mass, he felt a hand seize his arm and pull him down. “Brother Wulfric!” “Shepherd Aelffred!” Wulfric whispered. “Thank Arceus you still live.” “Would that I could say the same of Brother Godric and Brother Wilbur,” the priest replied. “You and Dismas are both well?” “Well enough. What happened?” “The northmen came quickly. We couldn’t stop them. They swept into Coumarina’s harbor and stormed through before the town guards knew what was happening. Then they broke our gates down and… oh, it’s terrible. Arceus have mercy on us all.” “What about Saewin? Or the Absol?” The priest’s Alakazam and the local Absol had always defended the monastery in the past, and their combined might had always been enough to drive away any who might disturb the tranquility of the consecrated ground. Shepherd Aelffred nodded to one of the northmen currently counting out the monastery’s coffers from its small wooden box that was kept under the altar. He looked enough like Wulfric’s original captor to be related. A brother or cousin, perhaps? A Doublade hovered by his head and a Talonflame perched near him, eyeing Dismas. “That one killed Saewin,” Aelffred growled, “and two of the others got some of the Absol. The rest of them fled after that.” The prisoners lapsed into silence, but the northmen continued to chatter among themselves. The more he listened, the more Wulfric started to remember hearing the language before. When he had been a child living in the northern reaches, his father had traded with men from still farther north, and his father had known their tongue. Wulfric furrowed his brow and tried to remember what his father had taught him. The slim warrior from before walked into the chapel accompanied by a Breloom and strode up to the altar. The man with the Doublade glanced up at him and went back to counting out the coins. The slim northman smirked and went to the shrine behind the altar where the golden four-pronged disc was displayed. The raider removed it from the wall and set it atop his like a crown. He called out to his comrades, and several of them laughed. Shepherd Aelffred gritted his teeth, but he had been cowed into silence and let the sacrilege pass unremarked. When the slim warrior began to prance around, Wulfric could take it no longer. He jumped to his feet. “Stop that now!” he said in the language of the northmen. “Put it back.” “You can talk?” the slim man said, the smile dying on his lips. “A shame you sound so stupid.” He drew the axe from his belt and prepared to strike Wulfric down. Dismas jumped into the air with a cry that knocked the warrior back. The Talonflame on the altar spread its wings as the slim warrior prepared to strike again. “Skaldi!” Wulfric’s captor stood at the door of the chapel, his arms crossed. “Put it down.” Wulfric was thankful they were using such simple words. His captor walked forward, and the group of prisoners moved aside so he could walk to Wulfric unhindered. “You speak our tongue?” Wulfric nodded. “A little. From when I was small.” The warrior raised an eyebrow. “And you could teach me to speak your tongue? And make the marks?” “I… yes, I… what? Marks?” “From before. The marks.” He held up the cover of the book. “In here. I would like to learn your marks and your words.” “I know the… marks.” “Then you will come with me.” “I… what?” The man with the coffer box looked up. “I thought we weren’t taking thralls today, Halvard.” “This is a special thrall, Torvald. He is a gift from the gods. I would be a fool if I did not take him.” Torvald rolled his eyes and put the coins back into the coffer box. “As you say, brother. We’re done here. Skerast, Branna.” The Doublade shifted and seemed to wake up, though with some of the spirit aligned, it was difficult to tell. The Talonflame fluttered onto his shoulder. Halvard pursed his lips. “Bring what you can carry. I’ll tell Ragnhildr to be ready to sail. Ivarr and Ulfi will bring up the back.” He turned on his heel and walked outside, jumped up on his Gogoat’s back and cantered out through the gates. Torvald wrapped his hand around Wulfric’s arm dragged him out of the chapel. “Welcome aboard, priest,” Torvald barked with a laugh. He, Skaldi and the other northmen filed out of the chapel. Once they reached the monastery gates, Torvald snapped his fingers. His Talonflame flew off his shoulder. One of the other northmen nodded to his companion pokemon, a Flareon. The two fire aligned both unleashed a column of flame at the chapel, and in an instant, the entire building was in flames. “You’ll kill them!” Wulfric cried. Torvald held out his arm to give his Talonflame a perch. “Perhaps. If they’re quick, they’ll live. If they aren’t, they’ll die.” He smiled. “We didn’t even lock the doors this time.” “You’re monsters.” Wulfric hissed. Torvald only shrugged, and Skaldi laughed. Wulfric was marched down the hill to Coumarina’s harbor. Many houses in the village were burning too. When he saw Wulfric staring, Torvald rolled his eyes. “We only burn the ones who try and fight. We may be monsters, but we’re not savages.” At the harbor, a knot of northern warriors waited before four sleek longships pushed halfway up the beach. Wulfric was surprised to see several women standing there, armed and bloodied like the men. “Your women fight too?” Skaldi made an expansive gesture with his hands. “If they want to. I’m not standing between a woman and a fight she wants to be in.” Halvard smiled when he saw Wulfric being led to one of the ships, but there was no mirth in it. The monk was forced down between two barrels taken from Coumarina and watched mutely while Halvard exchanged words with a striking woman with two small scars running parallel on her face. She too resembled Halvard, so perhaps a sister? Their conference finished, and she swung up into the furthest boat, one that had a Noivern clinging to the stern. Several other warriors and their pokemon mounted the ramp and took their places at the oars while the warriors did the same on the other three ships. Halvard stood at the end of the ramp and turned to take one last look at Coumarina before he put two fingers in his mouth and whistled. The water in the middle of the harbor began to seethe as something massive stirred beneath the surface. With a deep rumbling that shook Wulfric's teeth, a massive blue creature rose from the waves of the bay and roared as the water sluiced off its back. Even in the flat light, its sapphire and gold scales glittered. It undulated its serpentine body as the northmen began to row. Wulfric turned to Halvard and struggled to keep his voice level. “Y-You have a Gyarados?” Halvard was running his hand through his Gogoat’s leafy ruff and whispering into the grass aligned’s ear. He turned and smiled at Wulfric, and this time Wulfric saw the pride etched into every part of his face. “That’s Uthald. My pride and joy.” When Steinarr snorted, Halvard cringed. “My other pride and joy.” “No one has ever tamed a Gyarados,” he said. Halvard laughed. “No one but me!” He leaned against the rail of the ship. “Rest while you can, priest. As soon as one of my men gets tired, you’re taking your turn at the oar.” Wulfric paled as he watched the northmen pulling at the oars of the longship, their muscles straining. He curled up tighter and held Dismas close as he looked out for the last time on Coumarina, the smoke from the chapel rising up towards the clouds and Arceus’s hallowed halls. He fumbled for the four-pronged ring he wore on a leather cord around his neck and clutched it in his fist, muttering a litany of prayers to Arceus. After all, it was time for vespers.
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girl-like-substance
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Post by girl-like-substance on Feb 18, 2018 14:45:05 GMT
And so we begin again. I've said before that I really like the Halvarsaga, and this seems like a great time to revisit it and go through properly, which is an opportunity I missed with the early chapters the first time around. And it's a pleasure to reread, it really is; the characters and the intense action don't really get going in this chapter, but the setting is so striking. I love the old town names you choose, like Coumarina for Coumarine, and the vivid sense of clashing cultures between the monks and the northmen – gods, language, distribution of labour. It's so good.
What character drama there is in this first chapter is excellent, too – Halvard 's introduction, where he notes Wulfric's reaction and cuts the pages from the book, is such a brilliant character moment; the viking raid has begun, but it doesn't pan out how you think, and it throws you off before the revelation that Halvard has more specific reasons for targeting a monastery than mere looting. That's the standout moment, I think; Wulfric is at this point in the story not too interesting, but iirc that changes in the next few chapters, as the culture clash thing gets more pronounced.
So! As you already know, this is a superb start. I'm looking forward to rereading this as you repost it here, and seeing Wulfric and Halvard's adventures afresh.
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Post by admin on Feb 19, 2018 22:01:07 GMT
*cracks knuckles* Welp. Time to review the fic I'm to blame for!
Like Oyster, I've always liked Halvarsaga. There's a definite attention to detail in the way you've crafted its world, plus that definite flavor of high fantasy without being actual high fantasy. This fic definitely feels like an epic, although it's difficult to say why other than to motion vaguely to the swords-and-monsters setting rich with its culture steeped in medieval aesthetic. As in, this wouldn't feel out of place in a collection of stories about King Arthur and his knights other than, you know, the fact that Halvard would likely burn Camelot to the ground and let his vassals dance around wearing the crucifix on their heads (as he practically literally does here).
But honestly, the best part about rereading this chapter (and, yanno, finally sitting down to review it) is just coming back to Wulfric's character. I'd almost forgotten how far he'd come, but here he is, literally cloistered up in walls of stone, spending all his time and energy on prayers and illuminating manuscripts instead of fighting alongside Halvard in epic battles. This isn't the man who slaughtered to protect Halvard; it's the man who couldn't bear to leave behind his chatot and who nearly vomited at the sight of two dead priests. It's the man who was shaken to the core at the sight of his home burning to the ground yet didn't think twice about calling his captors monsters.
In other words, it's a man who's yet to be hardened by life outside safe, stone walls, and it'll be fun watching that happen all over again.
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Post by Firebrand on Feb 24, 2018 2:49:39 GMT
Chapter 2
Everything ached. It seemed like just when Wulfric had managed to massage the soreness out of his muscles, he was forced back to the bench to row again. The northmen had sailed up the Kalosian coast for three days, even rowing by moonlight. When clouds obscured the heavens, the ships turned out to deeper waters far out of sight of the shore and Skaldi called on his Ampharos to light their way. Halvard kept the ships on course through a strange shard of fogged glass he would hold up to the sky, judging the sun and moon’s position through the reflection of the glass. Uthald swam alongside the ship, breaching occasionally with bloodstained fangs. While Wulfric rowed, Halvard sat with Dismas held gently in his hands, stroking the Chatot’s feathers and staring at the horizon in contemplative silence. The first time Halvard had taken Dismas from him, Wulfric had panicked, but once his turn at the oar was up, Halvard handed the pokemon back without a word.
Finally, the ships turned into a long inlet nestled between the northern mountains, and Wulfric could make out a collection of huts and longhouses lining the shore. Halvard walked with an easy rolling gait to where Wulfric crouched by the rail of the ship. “Rovngalad,” Halvard said, gesturing with a tilt of his head that he meant the town. “It is my home. And now it is yours, too.”
The longships docked at the harbor and the northmen began unloading. When Wulfric was pushed out of the boat, he reeled on the dock as he tried to find his balance. Skaldi barked out a laugh as he walked by with his Breloom. “Look, the priest’s knees have gone weak!”
Wulfric blushed and hid his face as Halvard took his arm and led him up to the shore. The woman with two scars from the other ship stood at the end of the dock. She surveyed Wulfric and raised an eyebrow. “This is the priest? He doesn’t look like much.”
“It is not the strength of his arms or back that I care about,” Halvard replied. “It is his tongue I want.”
The woman rolled her eyes. “We have just enough to go around to feed ourselves. If you insist on keeping the thrall, he’ll be fed from your plate.”
Halvard laughed. “An empty stomach is a small price to pay to read the southerner’s marks, Ragnhildr!”
“If you say so, brother.” She turned to Wulfric. “Come with me, priest. It’s late in the day, so I suppose we’ll let you rest. Tomorrow you get to work.” She smiled the way all the northmen did, like a predator showing its teeth to terrify its prey. She whistled, and the Noivern perched on the stern of her longboat lifted off into the air and flew out over the village. A Houndoom with wickedly sharp horns trotted to her side and sniffed at the hem of Wulfric’s robe. Dismas puffed himself up, but the canine seemed content to ignore the Chatot. “Geirr,” Ragnhildr snapped. “Down.” The Houndoom obediently went to her side.
She and Wulfric walked through the winding streets of the town to one of the larger halls. Ragnhildr drew aside the fur that served as a door and walked into the space. Two children sat by a hearth with a Kirlia. The younger one, a girl, jumped to her feet. “Mother! You’re home!”
Ragnhildr scooped up her daughter and spun her around. “I am. Did you and Svein behave for Valdis?”
The girl nodded. “And we brought the Mareep in from pasture, and we didn’t even have Geirr to help us. We did it all by ourselves.”
Ragnhildr set her down and patted the Kirlia’s head. “Thank you for keeping my children safe.” The psychic aligned tilted its head and gave a brief nod. Wulfric grasped his four-pronged ring. Saewin had done the same thing when Shepherd Aelffred had thanked him, and that was an uncomfortable reminder of home. Geirr walked past the family and lay down in front of the hearth, showing his fangs in a wide yawn.
Ragnhildr’s son stared at Wulfric with eyes that were the same piercing blue as Halvard’s. “Who is that?”
Ragnhildr sighed. “Your uncle decided to bring a thrall home. This man is a southern priest. Your uncle wants to learn the southern tongue, and I need more help on the farm.” She turned to Wulfric. “You are not completely stupid? You do know how to farm?” Wulfric nodded. It was one of the many tasks the monks had undertaken in Coumarina. Ragnhildr pursed her lips and pointed at a corner by the hearth. “You will sleep there.”
Something thudded to the ground outside. “Sigrund!” the girl cried and rushed out of the hall.
“Runa, be careful!” Ragnhildr shouted after her. The woman turned to Wulfric. “Come, Svein and I will show you the fields.” They took him out of the longhouse by a second entryway in the back that opened on a large fertile plain. It was divided up at intervals by low wooden fences and stone walls. In the closest field, Runa was prancing around the same Noivern that had perched on Ragnhildr’s ship, and the dragon twitched its head to follow the girl’s movements. A flock of Mareep huddled around a large boulder further out in the pasture.
“This is all your land?” Wulfric asked.
“The whole village is our land,” Ragnhildr replied and then scowled. “You will speak only when spoken to, priest.”
Later that night, Halvard and Torvald had returned to the hall after carousing with several other northmen. Ragnhildr and Runa were asleep in a curtained room while Torvald and Halvard conversed softly over drinks. Wulfric sat in his assigned corner, trying to appear as inconspicuous as possible. He clutched his four-pronged ring in his right hand, fervently muttering a litany of prayers. Svein sat on the other side of the hearth, running his hands through Geirr’s fur. When Wulfric looked up after reciting the seventh psalm, he saw the boy staring intently at him. “What is that? In your hand?”
Wulfric held up the ring. “It is the symbol of God. If I hold it when I pray, I feel closer to Him.”
“Which god?”
“What do you mean? There is only one God.”
Svein laughed. “Then your god must be very busy. Ours know to split up the work.”
“The only god is Arceus.”
The boy shrugged. “If you say so. Maybe you southerners only have time for one god. Sometimes it gets tedious praying to all of them.”
“How many do you have?” Many stories were told of the more primitive religions of the eastern regions. When he had the time, Wulfric had perused the illuminated Tojoh and Hoennian manuscripts where missionaries had chronicled the ancient beliefs in many other gods those lands had honored before they had accepted the Arcean faith. He knew there were some holdouts who clung to old folk religions in Hoenn, but Tojoh had been entirely converted for many years, though they did pay respects to the Tower Guardians as well. He knew that there had been pagan beliefs in Kalosia centuries before, but they were barbaric and he was never terribly interested in those stories.
Svein began ticking off on his hands. “Well, there is the Blue Spirit, and the One Who Watches. We’ve got the Protector of the Wild Places, and the Storm Bringer, and the Herald of Spring. Mother saw the Herald once, when she was a girl. And of course, there’s,” and here Svein made a gesture with his left hand, pressing his fingers into a Y shape, “the Bringer of Death. I’ve seen it myself, over the mountains, red and black and big as a tree.”
Wulfric inclined his head. “We use those same names in the south, more or less. Those aren’t gods. They are very powerful, but they aren’t gods. The Blue Spirit is Articuno, and the Protector is Xerneas. The Storm Bringer is Zapdos, and yes, I’ve seen him from Coumarina once or twice. The Herald, I think, is Moltres, it fits with some folk beliefs. These are just very powerful pokemon, all created by Arceus.”
“And what about the Watcher?” Svein scoffed. “And the Bringer of Death? How can your god create death itself?”
“The Watcher, I think, is what we call Zygarde, but we Arceans are fairly sure Zygarde is just a myth. It doesn’t exist. Zygarde was made up to scare hunters into not leaving their carcasses out to rot, or to keep woodsmen from cutting too many trees. Has anyone ever seen it?”
“Well, no, at least not for hundreds of years. But what about the Bringer of Death? I’ve seen it. How is your god strong enough to create death itself?”
“Arceus can do anything,” Wulfric said, a little defensively. “And Yvetal is not death itself. It’s just a very strong pokemon that we don’t fully understand.”
“How do we know Arceus isn’t just a strong pokemon we don’t understand?”
“Because Arceus emerged from Chaos and created the world. No pokemon is strong enough to do that.”
“How do you know?”
Wulfric opened his mouth and then closed it again. Of course Arceus was the one true god. How could the child not see it? He formed the world with His thousand hands and set creation off on its expanding coil, shaping everything as He saw fit in His grand design. To be the perfect being, Arceus had to first exist, and so because a perfect being like Arceus could be conceived of, He therefore had to exist. But Wulfric lacked the language to explain this to the precocious northerner. Fortunately, the child spared him the need to elaborate.
“I’ve never seen a pokemon like that bird before. What is his name?”
Wulfric looked down at where Dismas slept in his lap. “This is my Chatot. I call him Dismas, after Saint Dismas, one of the first easterners to embrace the grace of Arceus and renounce the godhood of the Tower Birds.”
“To be a saint, all you have to do is say a god isn’t real?” Svein laughed. “Does that mean we’re both saints now?”
“There’s more to it than just—”
“Is he strong?”
“Dismas, you mean?” Wulfric shook his head. “I wouldn’t say so. Neither Dismas or I are fighters. But he is very clever.”
At that moment, Torvald came over and ruffled his nephew’s hair. “Is the priest filling your head with ideas, Svein? There’s time enough to talk to him tomorrow. Time to get to bed.”
Halvard stood as well. “You should sleep too, priest. You’ll be out in the fields early in the morning.” The two warriors led Svein away to a room opposite Ragnhildr and Runa’s while Wulfric curled up on the hard packed earth and began his litany of prayers again.
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The repetitive motions of plowing a field left Wulfric sore and tired, but after rowing up from Coumarina to Rovngalad, he was already numb to exertion. He fell into the rhythmic rise and fall of the plow the same way he had fallen into the rowing, though he knew he would be waking up sore and stiff for days. Because Svein had taken an interest in Dismas, Wulfric had let the Chatot join the boy while he herded the Mareep in the pasture. The Chatot’s mimicry had amused Svein, and he had been using it to trick Runa all morning. And besides, he didn’t like Dismas to see him like this.
Halvard had hitched Steinarr to a larger plow and was turning a different part of the field. Other villagers, some of them thralls, worked in the other sections of the fields and always hailed Wulfric’s captor as “Jarl Halvard”. They had begun work at sunrise, and when Halvard told Wulfric to stop it was nearly noon. “If I work you any harder, you’ll probably die on me. Can’t let that happen, for all the trouble it would put me through.” The northman walked to a well and pulled up a pail, drinking deeply from it. He let it fall again and motioned for Wulfric to do the same. “There’s a big rock under the new field, can’t do anything more until we do something about it. I’ll need to send for Torvald. Jarn only listens to him.” He waved Svein over. Dismas followed and alighted on Wulfric’s shoulder. “Boy, go fetch your uncle in town.”
Svein glanced over his shoulder at where Runa and Geirr were trying to marshal the Mareep flock. “I will, but a few of the Mareep wandered off into the woods. I don’t trust Runa going there alone.” He looked over at Dismas. “Perhaps the bird could go? He can mimic voices.”
Halvard turned to Wulfric. “And he could find Torvald?”
Wulfric shrugged. “Dismas is clever. I should think so.”
The northman tilted his head. “Show me the trick.” After a few minutes of practice, Dismas had managed to get the message right and Wulfric was fairly confident that Dismas had been given enough of a description to recognize Torvald. “What’s stopping the bird from flying away?” Halvard asked as they watched Dismas fly over the field and into the village.
“Would Steinarr abandon you?” Wulfric replied.
“Fair enough.” Halvard sat down on the ground and patted the earth next to him. “Nothing can be done until my brother gets back. Teach me some words. Field. Rock. Plow.” Wulfric did as he asked, and though Halvard butchered the pronunciation, he could see the northman turning the words over. Finally, Halvard smirked. “There’s a question that has been eating you. I can see it. Ask, then.”
Wulfric lowered his eyes. “The people here call you jarl. That makes you their lord, yes? But if you’re the lord, then why are you working the fields with me?”
Halvard dug his hand into the soil and pulled up a handful. “Because this, priest, is my land. It belongs to me, but I belong to it. It is only right that I work it alongside my subjects and my thralls. Did not your lord in the south do the same?”
“No. The king would never work his own fields.”
Halvard let the dirt trickle through his fingers. “Then he does not deserve to be king.”
“The king sits on the Illuminated Throne by the grace of Arceus Himself!”
Halvard threw back his head and roared with laughter. “I ought to strike you for that insolence, priest, but you’re too damn funny!” He got his laughter under control. “Do you mean to tell me that your god came down and personally put the crown on your king’s head?”
“Well, of course not. But the High Shepherd conferred his blessing and…”
Halvard laughed again. “Men who claim to speak for the gods only ever say what they wish. It is just that they hide behind their gods to give their words weight. Skaldi says he speaks for the Bringer of Death, but do I believe him? Of course not. Yvetal is a force of nature, what time does it have to speak through the runes? Perhaps Skaldi can feel its power and be in awe of its majesty. His sacrifices may even reach the Bringer of Death somehow. But whenever he claims to speak with Yvetal’s voice, I know that is my signal to watch Runa play one of her little games or to finally get a bramble out to Steinarr’s leaves.”
“You do not honor the gods? Any gods?”
“You ask too many questions, priest.” Halvard shrugged. “But put that way, no. I don’t.”
“So when you told Torvald and Skaldi that I was a gift from your gods…?”
“I was just trying to shut them up. If I told them I just wanted someone to teach me your southern language, they would have tried to dissuade me.”
“I see. So you would turn the name of god to your own ends, for selfish gain?”
“The gods don’t care about us. Why should I care about them?”
“Arceus cares about all living things.”
Halvard laughed again. “Then your god has too much time on his hands.” The jarl jumped to his feet and waved at an approaching figure. “Torvald! The bird found you?”
Torvald walked up to the well and drew up some water. Dismas fluttered around his head until Wulfric waved him off to go back to Svein and Runa. After taking a drink, Torvald grunted. “That bird wouldn’t leave me alone. What’s so important you needed to drag me all the way back here?”
Halvard took his brother and Wulfric out into the new field he and Steinarr had been plowing. “There’s a large rock right about here,” Halvard said, pointing at the ground. “We need Jarn to move it.”
Torvald muttered something under his breath before sticking two fingers in his mouth and whistling. The large rock foundation at the edge of the forest began to move and shift. The squeal of metal grinding against metal filled the air as the rock pile stood upright, revealing a glittering metal carapace. An Aggron half again as large as any that Wulfric had seen any of the Kalosian knights use rose up and growled. Torvald snapped his fingers and beckoned the monstrous beast over. With plodding steps, the Aggron ambled through the herd of Mareep. The electric aligned seemed undisturbed by this and just parted around its feet.
“Jarn, there’s a rock just here,” Torvald said. “We need you to dig it up.”
The steel aligned made a long, deep rumbling sound, and it felt to Wulfric like all of his bones were shaking. Jarn began to dig, its heavy tail lashing back and forth. “Will that be all?” Torvald said, and before waiting for an answer he turned on his heel and strode off back towards Rovngalad.
Halvard shook his head and hitched his plow behind Steinarr again. “Back to work, priest.”
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Post by girl-like-substance on Feb 25, 2018 14:07:11 GMT
Wulfric does pretty well at the oars for a man who's spent his life to date illuminating manuscripts, I have to say! This is the chapter where you start contrasting the cultures properly, with Wulfric among the northmen, and it's really something – not least for the similarities between the people, as well as the differences. Like, this is sort of early to mid middle ages, and ninety per cent of everyone is just doing subsistence farming, monks as well as northerners. Sure, some northerners go out as vikings, but back at home, despite the different gods (the discussion about which I love, by the way; none of the three perspectives offered win the debate at all and it's great), they're still just ploughing the fields.
I've mentioned before – twice, actually, in different reviews – that I like the early versions of the placenames that you've come up with, but I have to single out 'Kalosia' as particularly good, given how France started off as West Francia. Also the adaptation of St Dismas from the biblical penitent thief to an eastern convert. The action is what really stands out about this fic, but these little things are really cool too, and it's them that add up to form the setting that supports that action and makes the story so engaging even when people aren't doing death-defying things with dragons and spears.
Minor thing, but Tohjo has the H in the middle rather than at the end. Which is weird, given that I guess it's meant to be a fusion of 'Kanto' and 'Johto', but it's how it is.
I don't know if that's an intentional meta joke or not, given the Sinnoh myth about Arceus building the universe with one thousand hands, but it made me smile anyway.
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Post by Firebrand on Mar 10, 2018 18:20:51 GMT
After the evening meal that night, Wulfric huddled in his corner, trying to massage the aches from his shoulder. Dismas squawked and fluttered up to the edge of the hearth as Halvard dropped a short stool in front of him. The northman held out a small cup to the monk and indicated he take it. Wulfric took a small sip and nearly gagged. It was vaguely related to the ale he had drank at the monastery, but far, far stronger. Halvard laughed and took a long draught from his own larger tankard. He waited until Wulfric gathered his wits before setting his cup on the ground and folding his arms. “You will now teach me how to read your marks.”
Wulfric’s mind raced. “I can try. But I think it might be best to teach you a few more words first.” When Halvard scowled, Wulfric hurried to explain himself. “You see, that way, you can recognize the shapes of more letters and know the sounds. If you already know the words, they’ll be easier to write and spell.”
Halvard thought about this for a moment. “Teach me the words you see fit, and then at the end of the lesson, show me their marks.”
Wulfric started by reviewing the words he had taught Halvard in the field earlier that day, writing them out in the dirt with a stick as he did. He then moved on to simple greetings and phrases, though Halvard started to seem overwhelmed and grow frustrated when he wrote out longer things. By the end of the session, Wulfric was mentally exhausted, but Halvard could introduce himself in Kalosian and could name a few household items and farming tools. Halvard looked between Wulfric’s writing and his own more shaky script and nodded slowly, trying to commit the words to memory.
“One last thing, priest. Show me how to write my name. I know southerners conduct their business by signing contracts. I do not wish to seem a savage by not knowing my own name.”
Wulfric muttered a silent prayer hoping that Halvard spelled phonetically, and scrawled it in the dirt. Halvard practiced this several times before looking up at Wulfric again. “Now do yours.” When the monk complied, Halvard took his stick and gestured between the names. “These two marks, they are the same.”
“Yes, we both have an ‘L’ and an ‘R’ in our names.” He quickly wrote Dismas’s name as well. “See, Dismas and I both have the ‘I’ sound, and you both have the ‘D’ sound.”
Halvard scowled down at Wulfric’s name. “But how do I read your name?”
Wulfric realized that over the past four days, Halvard had not only never referred to him by name, but he had also never asked for it. “It says Wulfric.”
“Wulfric the priest, then?”
“Well, technically,” Wulfric replied, “I’m not a priest. I’m a monk.” He had to say it in Kalosian.
“What is this word, monk?”
“Arcean priests are called Shepherds. They lead the congregation,” Wulfric cringed as he used the Kalosian term again. “Sorry, the people, in the mass. They administer the sacraments, I mean the rites, and lead the prayers to Arceus. I’m just a monk, which means I can’t administer rites but I study Arcean scripture and copy manuscripts, like you saw in Coumarina. I offer my life in service and devotion to Arceus in the hope that I can better understand His great majesty.”
Halvard nodded slowly and then shook his head. “I don’t get it. If you could be a monk, why not a priest? That sounds like a better deal.”
“That was not what I was called to do.”
“You’re a monk… because your god told you?”
“Yes, I suppose so.”
“So Arceus came down and said ‘Wulfric, I want you to—’”
“Oh, not this again. No, I just felt it.” Wulfric put a hand on his chest. “I heard his words in my heart.”
“Now what is Arceus doing in there?” He could tell Halvard was just teasing him now. The northman took a long drink from his tankard, and some of the foam clung to his beard and moustache. Ragnhildr’s Kirlia came up behind him with another cup and he took it with a smile, patting her between the rounded pink antennae on her head. “Thank you, Valdis.” Halvard stared into the fire. “You know, Ragnhildr was telling me earlier that I am much too easy on you. If I’m kind to you, I will make you soft. I think she saw our little chat in the field today. Skaldi says I should beat you. I think he would enjoy that.”
“Maybe don’t listen to Skaldi?”
Halvard chuckled. “No, for now I won’t listen to Skaldi.” He took a drink. “But you know, I never really had the knack for talking to thralls. I never needed to. I’m Halvard Sigurdsson! The jarl’s son, the prince! Everyone just did what I asked them to anyway!” The northman’s shoulders slumped. “There are days when I wish I was not the jarl. I wish I had been born a farmer.”
“Because the burden of leadership is heavy?”
“No, I like to be the leader. I like to command my men and for my name to echo like the Storm Bringer’s wrath. I just wish I felt like I’d earned it myself.” Halvard took another long drink, and Wulfric could tell that the ale was beginning to affect him. “Everything I’ve ever done was always just brushed off because of who I was born to. If I win glory, it’s because I’m the jarl, because I’m Sigurd’s son, because I am Harald’s nephew. When I was a boy, it was because I was the prince. Of course I did great things. That’s what princes do.”
“You were a prince?” Wulfric asked. “Am I understanding that rightly? In Kalosian, prince means the son of the king, the heir to the throne of the realm. Is it different in the north?”
“No, no,” Halvard drank again and waved Valdis over for another tankard. “You have it. I was not the king’s son, but my father was his brother. King Harald ruled the northlands, but when his wife and son were killed, he vowed never to marry again. He was my uncle, and because I was my father’s firstborn son, he named me as his heir. I was to be the king.” He broke off and twisted his lip, brooding in silence for a time before slamming his fist down on his knee. “And then the usurper Ingmar killed my uncle and my father and made himself king. He told me that I could keep Rovngalad if I only swore fealty to him, and now everyone knows I’m the prince who lost his kingdom just to save a tiny village.” Halvard gritted his teeth. “No one understands that if I hadn’t made a bargain to save Rovngalad, he would have killed me and burned the whole village to the ground. My village! I wish I had been a farmer. Farmers don’t have to choose between pride and their subjects.”
“Some men are born to be more.”
“Maybe I was born to be king. Maybe I was born to be a farmer. But I wasn’t born to be jarl. That was always Torvald’s calling. He’s the warrior, the one who knows how best to lead a raid, what to demand in trade. I’d just strike out into the mountains or across the sea and leave the title to him, but he doesn’t care for the people like I do. He doesn’t love Rovngalad, he lusts after it. If I was king, the title would fall to him, and all this would be resolved.” Halvard threw back another drink. Wulfric had lost count of how many the northman had, but he was certain it was more than he had ever seen anyone drink in one sitting. Temperance was, of course, one of the cardinal Arcean virtues, but none of those seemed to apply in the north. “So there’s only one thing that can be done, Wulfric. Do you know what that is?” The monk shook his head. Halvard smiled the northmen’s predatory smile. “We have to take my title back. We have to make me king again.”
“You could do that?” Wulfric cried.
“Maybe. I have the fastest ships in the north and the best boat builder in generations. Every person of fighting age living in Rovngalad is a warrior worth at least two of Ingmar’s dogs. And I have a few secret weapons. The first I have is Torvald, the mightiest warrior in the north. He wants me to be king as badly as I do, and I can use his selfishness. Then, because I have Torvald, I have Jarn. And finally, I have Uthald. There isn’t a man in the north that isn’t afraid of my sea monster. He’s the only reason Rovngalad hasn’t been razed. I’ve sworn oaths before gods I don’t believe in. I’ve sworn oaths to my people, to my family, and now to you, Wulfric. I’ll be king again someday, and I will cast Ingmar down! I swear it on my blade, on my life, hell, I’d even swear it on that ring around your neck if you thought it would do any good!”
Halvard threw his tankard down and leaned in. “Listen to me, Wulfric. This is my land, but I only hold it in trust for my people. This hall we sit in is mine in name, but I don’t fool myself. It’s really Ragnhildr’s. I own only three things in this world.” He counted off on his fingers. “The first is Steinarr, the second is Uthald and third,” he pointed at Wulfric, “is you. Uthald and Steinarr have faith in me. I know it the same way that you know Arceus speaks to you. So tell me, Brother Wulfric, do you believe in me? Do you have the same faith in me that you put in your god?”
Wulfric knew it was blasphemy. He knew that the oaths he had taken years ago explicitly said that his loyalty belonged to Arceus alone, and that Arceus was to take precedence over any king, lord, or cause. And yet, Arceus slumbered in his hall high above far away Sinnoh, and here in front of him was a man that Wulfric could feel was destined to change the world the same way the great saints of the Arcean faith had. Wulfric knew that it was the greatest sin a monk of Arceus could commit. And Wulfric found that he did not care. “I do. I believe in you, Halvard. I will follow where you lead.”
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Post by girl-like-substance on Mar 18, 2018 9:53:17 GMT
This is an interesting point in the story. Because it's where things start to change for Wulfric, and that's really cool to see, but at the same time I've never quite been sure what the impetus for that change is, exactly. Halvard gives him a pretty speech, and proves his convictions at least in part by working the fields – but it's just one speech, and it doesn't feel like that's enough to overcome (a) the imbalance of power between jarl and thrall and (b) Wulfric's prior loyalties to his duties as a monk. Possibly it's just that we don't see enough of Wulfric's internal life up to this point to know that he's been coming around to Halvard's point of view; like, the moment when he declares that he's throwing his lot in with Halvard is the first time we get a good solid look at his thoughts about Halvard, and that means that it comes off kinda abruptly. It might work better if, over the course of this and the last chapter, we saw more of Wulfric's thoughts, and were shown how he began to soften towards Halvard in preparation for this bigger and more public shift in his sympathies.
That said, I do like Halvard's speech; over the last couple of chapters, Wulfric's been learning a lot about what northmen are like when they're not raiding as vikings, about their own systems of faith and farming, and this insight into the broader politics of their realm is an excellent way of underlining all that and going hey, look, there really is a culture here. And once you've established that, I know there's a bunch of very cool stuff to come, so I'm definitely looking forward to that.
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Post by Firebrand on Mar 24, 2018 15:01:12 GMT
Chapter 4
The wheel of the year turned. Wulfric plowed the fields all through the spring and tended to them in the summer. His muscles grew stronger, and Halvard’s grasp of the Kalosian language grew with each passing day. To practice, the two men would converse late into the evening, switching between languages as Halvard dictated. Ragnhildr and Torvald begrudgingly accepted Wulfric into the daily routine of their home, though many of the other northmen, Skaldi the most vocal among them, still treated Wulfric with wary distrust. The northern priest’s disgust with Wulfric’s southern religion was writ plain on his face, and he never passed up an opportunity to spit on Wulfric as he walked by.
At least once with every turn of the moon, Torvald would take Jarn and vanish for over a week. Sometimes he took other men with him, but more often than not, he left alone. No one in the village spoke of this. The one time Wulfric judged Halvard inebriated enough to address the question, Halvard had simply waved him off, saying Torvald was doing his part for Rovngalad before quizzing Wulfric on Kalosian military strategy, something Halvard had a keen interest in but that Wulfric only had a passing knowledge of.
When the time came to bring the harvest in, the village hummed with a frantic energy. Wulfric labored alongside Halvard’s family in their fields from first light until sunset to reap all that they had sown and store it in the large stone granaries and barns on a raised mound in the village center. Once their own field was clear, they immediately set to work helping other families who did not have as many hands.
After one of their nightly language lessons, Wulfric asked Halvard what the rush was. “I know you’ve said the winter comes earlier here in the north, but surely it will be weeks yet before we lose the harvest to frost.”
The northman shook his head. “It’s not the winter or the Blue Spirit we’re afraid of. It’s the Storm Bringer.”
“Zapdos?”
Halvard nodded. “Aye, that’s your name for him. For years now, the Storm Bringer roosted in the Sea Spirit’s Den, not far from where we took you. You know this?” When Wulfric said that he did, Halvard pressed his lips together. “We aren’t sure why, but he seems content to leave the south alone. It’s just us that he terrorizes. We’ve made offerings and sacrifices, said all the prayers we know, performed every rite that’s been handed down, but nothing seems to work. In late fall, the Storm Bringer rampages up and down the coast. If we don’t harvest the crops in time, the storm ruins them.”
Several days later, the sky darkened and thunder rumbled in the distance. The people of Rovngalad hastened to bring their Mareep herds into the stone barns, where they would be hidden and could not start any fires in the village in their panic. Halvard and his family huddled around their hearth. Torvald calmly slid his knife across a long spar of wood, carving intricate designs into the shaft. Skerast drifted around his head, and Branna preened on a carved perch nearby. Sigrund, Ragnhildr’s Noivern, took up much of the rear of the hall, fidgeting and wincing with each clap of thunder. Halvard picked burrs out of Steinarr’s mane, but Wulfric could see him cringing each time lightning split the sky. For his part, the monk curled up in his assigned corner and held Dismas close to his chest, listening to the howling wind and lashing rain rage just outside the longhouse.
A heavy pounding came at the solid oak doors of the hall. Torvald rose and opened them, and Skaldi staggered towards Halvard's fire, his Ampharos in tow. The northern priest pushed his wet hair out of his eyes. “Halvard, I am going to make an offering to the god.” Halvard looked up and titled his head to the side, saying nothing. Skaldi narrowed his eyes. “I have Tyri to protect me from the lightning, and it can’t do anything but help! Perhaps the Storm Bringer will leave us in peace this year.”
“What will you be offering?” Ragnhildr asked.
“Two Mareep,” Skaldi replied. “Ivarr and Ulfi have offered one each. But perhaps the god requires a greater sacrifice.” He glanced over at Wulfric and smiled.
Halvard rose. “We are not killing my thrall, especially in an empty gesture like this. Kill the sheep if you think it will do us any good, but leave Wulfric out of it.”
Skaldi muttered something under his breath before turning on his heel and stalking out of the longhouse. The priest took the two Mareep out to a hill some distance from the village, squinting against the rain. The Mareep began to panic as they got further from the village, and no amount of bleating from Tyri could calm them. Once Skaldi judged they had moved far enough away, he drew out his knife and quickly butchered the two sheep. He sang out a prayer to the Storm Bringer, praising his great might and beseeching the god to show mercy on the village. The blood of the two Mareep seeped into the muddy earth as Skaldi and his Ampharos returned to their hut in village below.
Later that night, as the heart of the storm drew closer, the cacophony of the thunder grew deafening. In between flashes of lightning, a sound like metal grating against stone split the air, drowning out even the thunderclaps. The villagers huddled closer to their fires, and none dared to look outside. When the storm moved away the next morning, the Mareep carcasses were gone, and a large swathe of the nearby forest was levelled, many of the trees scorched by lightning, and deep gouges carved into the earth.
Skaldi proclaimed that the sacrifice had spared the village a similar fate.
Several days after the storm, just as the villagers were beginning to clear the last of the debris left in Zapdos’s wake, Halvard woke Wulfric with a grin. “We’ll be doing something a little different today. Come with me to the docks.” Outside, Torvald was checking over a collection of spears, murmuring something to Svein. Ragnhildr stood off to the side with her arms folded. When she saw Halvard emerge, she strode over to him.
“I still say he is too young for this.”
“Torvald and I went on our first hunts when we were younger than Svein is! It’s past time!” Halvard clapped a hand down on Wulfric’s back. “Besides, we need every hand we can get. I’m even bringing Wulfric along!”
Ragnhildr’s nostrils flared. “If anything happens to my son, Halvard, I will send you to the Bringer of Death with your entrails in your hands.” She turned on her heel and stalked off to the longships riding at anchor.
Wulfric tugged on Halvard’s sleeve. “Hunt? What are we hunting?”
The northman took a spear from the rack and hefted it in one hand, checking the balance. “Wailmer! They migrate past Rovngalad every year. We hunt a few to use their meat and oil to help us get through the winter, and we need everyone who can pull an oar to help. Come.”
He led Wulfric down to the dock where three of the longships were prepared to sail. Svein and Torvald followed behind them, and Halvard directed Wulfric to his place. Ulfi, Rovngalad's boat builder and one of the warriors in Halvard’s band, took his place beside him. The warrior grinned through his thick red beard. “Try and keep up, priest.”
Svein and Torvald took their place on the bench directly across from them, Svein sitting ramrod straight and trembling with nervous energy. Wulfric clicked his tongue at Dismas and glanced over at Svein. The Chatot turned his head in confusion for a second. “Sit over there,” Wulfric hissed. Finally, Dismas seemed to catch his meaning and fluttered over to sit on Svein’s shoulder. The boy reached up and stroked the bird’s feathers and smiled over at Wulfric. The monk turned his eyes down, but couldn’t resist quirking his lips up in a smile as well.
In her boat, Ragnhildr watched the exchange with expressionless eyes as she checked the straps on Sigrund’s saddle.
Halvard strode down the middle of the longboat. “All right!” he called. “Let’s go!”
At the stern of each boat, a man began to beat out a steady rhythm on a hide drum. The rowers matched their strokes to the tempo and they slid through the water toward the mouth of the fjord. Ivarr’s Beartic and Aesgir’s Sharpedo swam alongside the boats. Halvard clambered up a rope to the top of the longship’s mast and whistled. The water at the mouth of the fjord frothed as Uthald burst from the depths of the trench that ran its length, his sinuous body undulating beneath the surface. When the boats drew closer, Halvard walked along the narrow spar that held the sail and dove headfirst over the side of the ship, kicking through the water to the Gyarados’s flank. Uthald lowered himself so that Halvard could climb atop his head and grasp one of the three spines there.
When the three ships reached the open water, Ragnhildr shot off into the sky on Sigrund’s back, circling the surrounding sea in a wide arc. After several minutes, she circled back. “I’ve found them,” she called down. “Follow me!”
Wulfric saw the splashes the Wailmer made as they breached before he saw the pokemon themselves. The drums began to beat faster as the ships drew close. Sigrund swooped down and shrieked at the pod, the sound sending the Wailmer into a panicked frenzy. The Noivern made continued passes, splitting the pod with each successive scream. Halvard and Uthald dove before coming up on the other side, hemming the Wailmer in. Ulfi smiled at Wulfric. “Get ready, priest. This is where the fun starts.” The other two boats cut off three Wailmer from the rest of the pod. When they tried to dive down to escape their pursuers, the Beartic and Sharpedo quickly dove deeper and forced the Wailmer back to the surface.
The Wailmer began to panic, and Torvald leapt to his feet, grabbing a spear from the rack. He hurled it into the flank of one of the Wailmer, bloodying the water. Ulfi and several other northmen picked up their own spears and began to attack the panicked water aligned. Ragnhildr and Sigrund swooped over the longships, using sonic blasts to keep the rest of the pod at a distance. Torvald barked orders to warriors on the other two ships, directing them where to cast their spears. The Wailmer struggled and tried to break through the triangle the boats had formed, but they were already weakening. Svein cheered as one of the Wailmer let out a long, low moan and turned up on its side. It still breathed, but it had stopped fighting. Sharpedo and Beartic turned their focus on the remaining two.
Halvard and Uthald swam around the pod, the jarl scanning the sea for something. The sea began to seethe as a massive creature beneath the waves rose to the surface. “Arceus above,” Wulfric gasped. In Coumarina, he had sometimes seen Wailord breaching far out at sea. He had heard from sailors and fishermen that they were massive creatures, but nothing had prepared him for this. The Wailord rose from the depths, its massive bulk cresting the waves. Halvard signaled to Ragnhildr, and an instant later Sigrund released a sustained pulse of sound. The Wailord began to fall away from the longships, and Wulfric let out a breath he didn’t know he was holding.
Halvard shouted something, and Uthald put on a burst of speed, circling back towards the longships in a long arc. As the Gyarados passed by, Torvald lobbed a spear towards his brother. Halvard caught it out of the air as Uthald changed direction again, this time swimming straight at the Wailord. Uthald drew close and lunged forward, sinking his fangs in the Wailord’s flank. The leviathan groaned and drew away, but Uthald struck again and again, the water around the beast turning red. With a long, low groan, the Wailord descended beneath the waves, its fins working furiously to get it away from the Gyarados.
Halvard barked a command to Uthald and shifted the spear to the crook of his arm while he tied his waist to the longest of the three spars that crowned the serpent’s skull. Uthald roared before plunging into the depths after the Wailord, Halvard clutching the spine in his right hand and holding the spear close with his left. Wulfric and the northmen waited in breathless anticipation, staring at the water where Halvard had disappeared.
The northmen had begun to secure the wounded and dying Wailmer to the ships to be towed back to Rovngalad, but Torvald barked an order to bring them all to attention. “Leave them!” he shouted. “Back to your oars! Halvard’s coming!”
A massive shape was rising from the depths, and the northmen frantically worked their oars to get out of the way. The Wailord burst to the surface again, bleeding from several new wounds. Uthald had wrapped himself around the back of the Wailord, where it was less broad. Halvard still clung to the spike on the Gyarados’s head, but his hair was plastered to his face with a mix of salt water and blood. The spear he had dove with was now buried halfway up its length in the Wailord’s flank, and every time he twisted it a fresh gout of blood poured forth. The northmen cheered as the Wailord groaned in obvious pain.
Uthald contorted, sliding back into the water, but instead of delivering the final blow, the Gyarados surged up and bit down at the highest part of the Wailord’s back that he could reach. Halvard leapt from Uthald’s crest and drew his sword, driving it into the whale’s back. He proceeded to walk towards the Wailord’s blowhole, drawing a long, gaping wound as he did so. When he was nearly there, the Wailord gave a final moan before closing its eyes and ceasing its struggle. Wulfric clutched his iron ring and said a prayer for the repose of its soul.
Halvard wrenched his bloody sword from the Wailord’s back and held it triumphantly above his head, and all the northmen cheered. Torvald grinned up at his brother before turning on his heel and barking more orders to the rowers. They pulled up alongside the Wailord and began driving hooks into the dead pokemon’s flanks, securing it with lines to tow back to Rovngalad. Uthald circled around them to keep scavengers away from their prize.
The northmen laughed and joked as they returned to their benches and began rowing back to the fjords of Rovngalad. Svein looked over at Wulfric. “We’ve never taken down a Wailord before! My uncle said that he and Uthald could do it, but Mother always thought he was just being stupid.”
Ulfi laughed. “Next time we go to the ting meet, we’ll have to tell everyone all about it!”
“No one will believe us!” Torvald replied. “We’ll have to bring some of the bones!”
When the boats finally cut their way up the inlet that led to Rovngalad, Wulfric nearly collapsed off his bench in sheer exhaustion. The adrenaline that had propelled him through the Wailmer hunt had long since faded, and even months of working the fields had not prepared his muscles for nearly nine straight hours of rowing. The boats docked and Ulfi laughed while Wulfric struggled to his feet and tried to disembark. After letting the monk struggle for a moment, he picked Wulfric up and deposited him none to gently on the shore.
Those who had not joined the hunt, mostly the old, the young, the infirm, and a few of the weaker thralls, immediately set out on small fishing boats to carve the meat and blubber from the warriors’ catches, along with siphoning off the oil. The smell made Wulfric retch, and he bent double as his stomach threatened to expel its contents, only for him to realize there was nothing to send back up.
Halvard jumped down from Uthald’s crown and waded through the shallows, brandishing his sword aloft for the children of Rovngalad to marvel at. He beamed and laughed, but a shadow eclipsed the setting sun, and Sigrund crashed to the earth, landing in a flurry of wings and wind. The Noivern collapsed the moment her feet touched the ground, exhausted from the extended flight. Ragnhildr leapt from her back and laid a hand on the dragon’s flank, pressing her forehead to Sigrund’s snout and breathing slowly, deeply. Sigrund’s frantic breaths slowed to match Ragnhildr’s, and she slipped into unconsciousness. Once the Noivern was seen to, the woman whirled on Halvard.
She stalked towards him, and Halvard’s grin vanished immediately. Ragnhildr punched her brother across the mouth, sending him sprawling to the ground. The villagers around them gasped in shock and horror, but no one moved to interfere. While Halvard climbed to his feet, Ragnhildr spat in his face. “You idiot,” she snarled, punching him again as soon as he stood up, sending him sprawling once more. “How could you be so reckless? Would you deprive your people of their jarl? You could have killed everyone on those boats!”
Halvard got to his feet again, holding up a hand to forestall any further blows. “I did what I had to so I could feed my people through the winter and have enough to trade at the thing meet. Besides,” he lowered his voice, “Even were I to die, Torvald could take my place.”
Ragnhildr leaned in close. It was only because Wulfric and Dismas had crept closer that they could hear what was said at all. “You know damn well he couldn’t do what you can,” she hissed. “If you die before you can lead us against the Usurper, I will pray to the Bringer of Death to cast you out of the Glowing Halls and into the Abyss.”
Halvard narrowed his eyes. “You wouldn’t.”
Ragnhildr tensed to strike him a third time, but held herself back. “You put us all in enough danger just by being alive, Halvard. But it would be worse for all of us if you were dead.” She walked off and the villagers went back to carving up the hunt’s spoils, but Halvard seemed stricken. After a few moments, he shook his head and made his way up the village’s central path, back towards his longhouse. Wulfric forced himself to his feet and trudged after the jarl, but when Halvard reached his fields, he whistled for Steinarr and swung up onto the Gogoat’s back. The two of them cantered off into the forest on the far side of the field, and Wulfric knew he had no chance of following now.
He fell to his knees and fumbled for the iron ring around his neck. “Pray with me, Dismas.” His Chatot fluttered to the ground next to him and looked up at him expectantly. Wulfric took a shaky breath. “Oh great Arceus, Your humble servants come to you in need of Your grace.”
“Praise be to the Lord Most High,” Dismas said, giving the proper response. He had often accompanied Wulfric to the daily prayers.
“Oh Lord Arceus, come and heal my troubled heart, deliver me from the darkness and grant me clarity. In Your name we pray.”
“Hail to you, oh Lord of Light.”
“Craft me into Your instrument so that I may be a light in this darkness, and with your benevolent power deliver me from the torment I find my spirit in. Fill me with Your light and direct my mind and heart into the grace of Your love.”
“We bow to Your great name, All Seeing Light.”
“Have mercy on my soul, trapped in this purgatory, and look with mercy on this forsaken and troubled man. Admit me into Your thousand-armed embrace and show me the way to guide Jarl Halvard so that we may become the tools with which Your mission on this earth is fulfilled.”
“For this, we pray.”
Wulfric and Dismas remained there, nearly motionless, until Wulfric’s muscles began to stiffen and then pain him. He remained with his forehead pressed to the cold, hard earth, waiting to feel the light and warmth of his faith fill him, but it did not come, and he found no solace.
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Post by girl-like-substance on Mar 29, 2018 20:52:25 GMT
Ah, the whaling chapter! (Wailing chapter? No, wait, that's something else.) This is the first point in the fic where, when I first read it, I stopped and went hang on, there's something really special going on here. Like, there hasn't been that much action so far – and then comes this. So spectacular and so ridiculous that you can't help but get caught up in the energy of it. I mean, we're talking a dude jumping onto a moving wailord and dragging a sword along its spine like a tailor trying to undo a crooked seam for restitching; it's so over the top, so absurd, so terrible a use for a relatively fragile and high-status weapon, that it could easily fall flat, but like I said, the energy of this scene is so huge and contagious that in the moment you're just like yeah! that's awesome! and honestly, any time a prose story can make you do that is a time to be treasured.
Wulfric's little prayer for the wailord is also interesting; if I remember rightly, Catholic belief has traditionally held that animals either don't have souls or don't have immortal souls, and I'm wondering if you've modified it in this Arceus-focused adaptation because this is the pokémon universe, where there's such a strong tradition of companionship between human and pokémon that someone without a partner is a real oddity. In a world like that, I suspect that the idea that their companions won't be joining them in the next life just wouldn't fly with most people, especially since in your interpretation many pokémon seem to be somewhere in between animals as we know them and humans. Or possibly it's just that Wulfric's lapsing into heresy in the heat of the moment. That would also make sense as an expectation, I guess.
Anyway! This is honestly just a really great chapter, and I kinda only have good things to say about it. I did notice though that Ulfi calls the meet the ting, while Halvard calls it the thing, both of which are viable transliterations of the, well, thing in question, but I think you've been going with thing so far, so I assume Ulfi is the one that's the typo.
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Post by Firebrand on Apr 6, 2018 22:11:20 GMT
Chapter 5
The drums beat out a steady pulse, almost like a heartbeat, while a piper droned on with a strangely-shaped wooden flute. The northerners, wrapped in furs against the late autumn chill, walked in silent procession down the hills of Rovngalad towards the harbor. Wulfric and the other thralls followed some distance behind, outside the circle of light cast by the torches. Even though Halvard’s family was on the far edge of the crowd, leading the procession, Wulfric could still make them out. Halvard and his siblings seemed to tower above the ordinary villagers, dwarf them by the sheer virtue of their presence. Steinarr, Jarn and Geirr walked beside them, the Houndoom’s horns and Aggron’s plates gleaming in the torchlight.
When they reached the pier, the northmen stopped and formed a rough semi-circle around Halvard. The jarl raised his face to the sky and stood silently for a moment before spreading his arms wide. “Today, people of Rovngalad, we gather to celebrate our harvest, and to honor our sons who have grown so strong!” Several people cheered, and a handful of boys were pushed to the front of the crowd, Svein among them. Dismas squawked and alighted from Wulfric shoulder to fly above the gathering for a better view.
Halvard locked eyes with each of the boys in turn. “I’ve watched all of you grow up into men your fathers can be proud of. It is through the strength of your backs that we brought in the harvest to spare it from the Storm Bringer’s wrath. It was the strength of your arms that propelled our longships through the sea. You hunt for us, you fish for us, you honor the village. And as you have honored Rovngalad, now Rovngalad honors you!”
The boys lined up before Halvard, and he gave each one of them an iron bangle that fit over their wrist. He spoke to them quietly, in words Wulfric could not hear, and the boys responded. When Halvard had told Wulfric about this ceremony after their language lesson several days prior, he had explained that the boys would swear loyalty to him as jarl, pledging the strength of their arms to fight for him and to protect his lands. It was customary that after swearing their oath, the boys would each receive a kiss from the jarl’s wife, but as Halvard was unmarried and uninterested in marrying, this role would be fulfilled by the Ragnhildr, as the highest ranking woman in Halvard’s family. Then, each boy would be handed a small bowl full of mead, a spiced and honeyed drink, that they were to drink in one long pull.
Wulfric smiled when he saw Ragnhildr give Svein a quick hug as well, and Torvald tousled the boy’s hair before handing him the bowl. A few of the other boys had coughed after drinking their mead, but Svein fought down the urge even though it was plain he wanted to. This made Torvald smile wider, and the warmth in his eyes when he looked at Svein was almost enough to banish the predatory, aquiline cast from his features.
Once each boy had taken an arm ring and sworn their oath, their parents came forward to present them with the first pokemon that could be truly their own. For Svein, it was one of Geirr’s pups, a Houndour sired on another Houndoom in the village a few months before. Wulfric also saw Ulfi the boat builder give his son Odmund a Timburr. A good choice, now that Odmund would be helping his father at the docks, and would need a partner able to both protect him in battle and support him in his work. Other boys received pokemon like Lillipup, Skiddo, and Espurr, pokemon to help them work the fields and bring in the Mareep herds.
Halvard smiled in a way that Wulfric could only describe as beatific, spreading his arms in a magnanimous gesture. “And now,” the jarl boomed. “We feast!”
Thralls appeared at the fringes of the northmen gathering, bearing long wooden tables and platters laden with food. The northmen parted around them as the revelry commenced. Wulfric was not needed to serve, and so he retreated to a dark byway of Rovngalad and knelt down to pray.
“Oh Great Arceus, Lord Most High, your humble servant beseeches You to give Your blessing to Svein this day. Though he is not of Your flock, he is a strong lad, and true of heart. Perhaps one day he may yet honor You in his heart. For this I pray.”
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Halvard stormed up the main thoroughfare several days later, Wulfric and Svein, laden with firewood, had to hurry to keep up. Talvar, Svein’s Houndour pup, panted along at the boy’s heels. “Every cursed year!” the jarl snapped. “Every year I have to go and bow to that damned usurper!”
Torvald had no difficulty matching his brother’s stride. “And every year, you throw a tantrum. You know it is our duty.”
“I know full well what my duty is!” Halvard shot back. “And I plan to do it! I just don’t have to like it!”
“Then stop acting like a petulant child,” Torvald said with a sigh. “At least this year we have the Wailord hunt to brag about.”
“Oh, of course, the Wailord hunt.” Halvard turned and spat. “That’s what I think about bragging about the damn Wailord. The Wailord doesn’t matter, because I still have to kiss Ingmar’s boots!”
Torvald seized Halvard’s arm and lowered his voice to a hiss. “You know he would slaughter everyone here if you didn’t.”
“I’m so sick of being the Fool of Rovngalad. How much longer do you—”
“Soon.” Torvald allowed a ghost of a smile to play across his lips. “By this time next year, you’ll be drinking your mead out of Ingmar’s skull or we’ll all be feasting in the cold halls of the Bringer of Death.” He turned and glowered at Wulfric. “This doesn’t concern you, priest. Keep moving.”
After their language lesson that night, Halvard and Wulfric lounged by the hearth, the northman drinking his customary horn of strong ale. Dismas was perched on Halvard’s knee, and the jarl was absentmindedly stroking the Chatot’s feathers with one finger. “I wonder if Dismas could shout as loudly as Sigrund,” Halvard mused. “It would take some practice.”
“Dismas isn’t much for fighting,” Wulfric replied.
“Have you ever tried?”
“Not really.”
“Then how would you know, eh?”
Wulfric decided it was easier to concede the point. “May I ask you a question?” When Halvard shrugged, Wulfric sat up straighter. “What were you and Torvald talking about earlier? You have to go see the man who killed your father? I don’t understand.”
Halvard threw back the rest of his ale, and instantly Valdis was at his side with a fresh cup. The northman tried to smile at his sister’s Kirlia, but it didn’t reach his eyes. For a long moment, Halvard just stared into the fire in the hearth. Finally, he sighed. “Ingmar, whether I like it or not, is king of these lands. All the jarls in the north must go to his hall once a year for the thing and pay him tribute. If I don’t, my life and my lands are forfeit. For most of the jarls, it’s simply an inconvenient duty to tend to after the harvest’s brought in, a chance to drink with men from other villages and trade gossip, maybe plan a southern raid or two. But for me…” He took a drink and wiped the froth from his mustache. “Ingmar knows the shame he cast on me when he killed my father and uncle, and he loves to rub my face in it. Every time the jarls gather, he shames me again. I’d love to just stick a knife in him and be done with it.”
“So why haven’t you?”
“If there was just me to think about, I would have. But Rovngalad needs me. If I were to kill Ingmar under his own roof, as his guest, the other jarls would be honor-bound to make war against me.” Halvard shook his head. “The only consolation is that Ingmar is bound by the same rules I am. So long as I’m at the thing, he can’t kill me either, and once I’m home, he wouldn’t dare go up against me when I know the land better than he does. He’s a bastard, but he’s not stupid.” Halvard fell silent again for a spell. “You ought to come with me.”
Wulfric was stunned. “What? Why?”
“Because I said so. I’m the jarl, aren't I?” Halvard smiled ruefully. “Mostly, I think I ought to bring you because it would annoy Torvald and Skaldi. That’s reason enough. But I want to bring you because you’re the only one who sees me as Jarl Halvard, not the Fool of Rovngalad.” The northman threw back his ale, set his cup aside, and threw one last log on the fire. “It’s late. You should go to sleep.”
And so three days later, Wulfric found himself once again curled up in the belly of a longship, clutching a damp cloak around his shoulders as the northmen cut through the northern sea. On this voyage, Halvard had told him, the ships would not likely leave sight of the coastline as they travelled up the northern straits to Yeavenguut, Ingmar’s seat of power. Svein and the other boys who had gotten their arm rings were all on Halvard’s boat, and so Wulfric’s usual seat next to Ulfi was taken by Odmund. When Wulfric was to take his first turn at the oars, Torvald patted the bench beside him. “You’re with me today, priest.”
The warrior rowed in silence for a long while, the muscles in his neck and arms flexing and straining. Though Wulfric was panting and his arms had begun to ache, Torvald’s breath came at a measured pace, and Wulfric was reasonably sure that the water dampening Torvald’s brow was merely spray from the ocean, and not the sweat that was even now freezing on the faces of the other men aboard.
“I want you to be very careful,” Torvald said, taking Wulfric by surprise. The warrior kept his gaze fixed straight ahead, where Branna roosted on the prow. “I’ve seen the way you look at things, Wulfric. Where most men see only the river, you see the currents moving underneath.” The oar rose and fell several more times before Torvald spoke again. “Though my brother hates the title that Ingmar fashioned for him, it’s not without a grain of truth. Halvard thinks he’s invincible, but we both know that’s not true. I try to keep an eye on him, but I can’t be everywhere at once.” Another stroke of the oar. “Will you help me in this?”
“Of course,” Wulfric said. “That’s why Halvard brought me along.”
“Then perhaps my brother isn’t as foolish as he appears.”
Wulfric hid a smile and feared he was about to overstep himself. “He also did it because he thought it would irritate you.”
Torvald rolled his eyes. “Never mind then.”
That evening, as the sun set on the western horizon, turning the waves gold and orange, the northmen sailed into Yeavenguut. Like Rovngalad, Yeavenguut was deep within a fjord, but unlike Halvard’s humble collection of fisherman’s huts and fields, Yeavenguut was an imposing stone fortress with a modestly sized town bustling within an outer palisade. The mouth of the fjord was guarded by two stone towers, and even from a distance, Wulfric could see the archers standing atop them. As the longships sailed into the gap between them, Halvard wordlessly stood up and jumped onto the ship’s railing before diving into the ocean. Wulfric watched the small splashes the jarl made as he stroked beneath the water’s surface until he reached Uthald, taking his place atop the Gyarados’s spiked crown. Uthald surged forward to lead the ships up to the docks.
A small man with a balding pate and another man in a hooded red robe hustled forward to meet Halvard as the jarl strode up the wooden planks. The balding man inclined his head in something that barely passed as a bow and clasped his hands in front of him. “Jarl Halvard, King Ingmar is waiting for you in the hall. I am to accompany you.” A Klefki bobbed behind the man’s head, its iron and bronze keys clanging.
Halvard gave the man a look that spoke of supreme distaste, and for a moment Wulfric thought he would shove him off the docks. But the moment passed, and Halvard simply nodded. “I know the way,” was all he said. Halvard snapped his fingers and Steinarr, who had been resting placidly in the stern of Halvard’s longship, got slowly to his feet, careful not to upset the boat. Ulfi and his son affixed a ramp that allowed the Gogoat to descend into the shallow waters, and once Steinarr drew level with Halvard, the jarl swung up into his place on his back. Halvard glanced over his shoulder at Uthald. “You behave yourself until I get back.” Then he tapped his heels lightly against Steinarr’s flanks and cantered off through the thronging main street of Yeavenguut, scattering the crowd before him.
Torvald jumped over the ship’s railing and landed nimbly on the dock. He shouldered his pack as Branna alighted on his shoulders. “Trygi,” he said, nodding to the steward.
The balding man nodded back. “Torvald. A pleasure to see you again.” His words lacked any kind of inflection, his eyes remaining as dull as chips of stone.
As Torvald brushed by, he shoved Trygi off the dock and into the water. “Would that I could say the same.” Trygi spluttered and tried to get himself right side up while Halvard’s men all roared with laughter. Trygi’s Klefki made to rush at Torvald, but Branna spread her wings and shrieked and the Klefki demurred. “We’ll set up camp in the usual spot, boys,” Torvald called over his shoulder. “Get those ships unloaded!”
The northmen quickly and efficiently unloaded their own gear and the things they had brought to trade at Yeavenguut from the ships and moored them. As they all went to follow Torvald, Wulfric felt a hand clamp down on his arm. The figure in the scarlet robe, silent throughout all the proceedings, looked him up and down from heavily lidded eyes. “You aren’t one of ours,” they rasped, in a voice that Wulfric could not determine was masculine or feminine. The figure’s lips were completely black, though whether it was some kind of cosmetic or their natural state, Wulfric was not sure. Something rustled underneath the robe, and a Sabeleye poked out its head, fixing Wulfric with its unblinking stare.
“Get your filthy hands off him!” Wulfric felt himself be yanked back and the scarlet figure released their grip. Skaldi leaned in close to the figure’s face and hissed. “Wulfric is Jarl Halvard’s!” the northern priest spat. “You don’t get to touch him!”
Skaldi led Wulfric away, muttering to himself under his breath. “Thank you,” Wulfric finally said.
Skaldi glanced at him. “I didn’t do it for you, priest. Agmundr corrupts everything he touches, and you’re Halvard’s property.” Skaldi shrugged. “I don’t much like him.”
Svein and Odmund caught up with them then, chattering excitedly as they took in the sights and smells of Yeavenguut. Wulfric tried to pick out strands of the conversations, but the multitude of dialects and accents was too much for his grasp of the northmen’s language. The exited the fortress town by means of another gate, and went some distance into a stand of trees outside the walls. Torvald had already started a fire and was cooking some of the salted meat they had brought with them. Ulfi took Odmund while Svein and Talvar hurried over to Torvald. The warrior mussed his nephew’s hair and inclined his head to Skaldi. The priest nodded back and began setting up his own bedroll. “There will be a feast tonight,” Torvald said to Wulfric. “Normally, any thralls not belonging to the household would be barred, but you’ll be coming along with us. I’m sure plenty in Ingmar’s court will be amused by a southerner who speaks our language as well as you do. But I need you to stay alert, like we spoke about before.”
“I understand.”
“And bring your Chatot too. I’m sure they’ll like to see him. If you need me, if Halvard is in danger, send the bird with a message. I’ll come to you as quickly as I can.” Torvald reached up to where Skerast was hovering behind his head and ran a finger along the flat of one of the blades. “If you don’t stay alert, this place will kill you.”
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Post by girl-like-substance on Apr 12, 2018 18:55:24 GMT
This is a nice quiet chapter, after our excursion (and all that absurd ultraviolence) on the high seas, but there's something to be said about these interludes in the action, too. Wulfric is the kind of narrator who's interested in watching things, and that means he recedes into the background quite easily while we watch the customs and culture of these people playing out: the oath-swearing ceremony, the journey to the thing, the further hints of the broader plot to unseat the Usurper. Plus a fun tantrum from Halvard, because sometimes the guy really is the Fool of Rovngalad, I guess.
I do like the oath-swearing ceremony a lot, by the way. It's one of those things that makes Wulfric's adaptation to the northmen way of life seem less strange – because he came from a relatively isolated life, and this is very much a community. Like, a monastery is a community too, of course, but not quite in the same way as this, with people from varying walks of life all united by the fact that they're trying to not starve to death this year. You had Wulfric begin alone in his cell, and now here he is, watching the formal recognition of children as adults with a feeling of pride at their accomplishment: that's a long way to have travelled, in lots of different ways, and it would be strange if it didn't change him.
One potential typo I picked up on:
I'm not sure that “the” ought to be there; last I checked, that was a name rather than a title. Although I have to admit, the Ragnhildr would be a pretty sweet title.
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Post by Firebrand on Apr 21, 2018 15:01:20 GMT
Chapter 6
After Halvard’s various stories about the cruelty of the Usurper, Wulfric had not been sure what to expect of the man. He realized after the fact that he had constructed a mental picture of him on the model of the pagan lords that had persecuted the first Arcean missionaries that crossed into the southern lands, bent and pale men with minds poisoned by the heathen priests that whispered in their ear. He had certainly not expected the dark bearded giant of a man who sat on the throne dais of Yeavenguut. Ingmar had a booming laugh and rumbling voice that seemed to make the boards of his hall shake. He traded good-natured insults with many of the other jarls and warriors crowded around the long wooden tables, but there was a shrewd calculation behind his eyes, and every time he happened to glance at Halvard or Torvald, his gaze hardened.
A ceremony much like the one Wulfric had seen in Rovngalad took place before the feat began. The boys all lined up before Ingmar and swore an oath of fealty to him as their king, before receiving a kiss from his much younger wife. They were then all given a simple earthenware cup full of mead that they were to drink and then throw to their feet to shatter it. When the rite was completed, the feast began.
Svein, Odmund and the other boys from Rovngalad returned quickly to their fathers and uncles, and the men of Rovngalad quickly closed ranks. They commandeered a table at the far side of the hall, as far from Ingmar and his retinue as possible. Wulfric heard Ingmar laughing intermittently throughout the feast as he stood behind Halvard’s shoulder. The king scratched his Zangoose behind its notched ear as an Aegislash drifted around his head. The red-robed priest stood utterly still off to one side of the throne dais, and Trygi the steward was constantly rushing about the hall to fetch the king something or other, or to carry a message.
Trygi cleared his throat as he approached Halvard’s table. Wulfric had the distinct sense the steward was looking down his nose at them. “Jarl Halvard, King Ingmar requests you join him. Bring your southerner.”
Torvald stood up, and Trygi stumbled back with a little yelp. The warrior brushed past the castellan with a grunt. “Just going to take a piss,” he muttered, but Wulfric caught the look he threw Halvard.
Halvard threw back the contents of his drinking horn before sighing and rising to his feet. The jarl steered Wulfric forward, and Wulfric saw that Ulfi and Ivarr moved to the far side of the hall, where they could rush the dais if they needed to. Halvard held Wulfric back when they reached the cleared floor before the high table. The jarl bowed to the king, keeping his face carefully blank. Ingmar grinned down at him. “So the Fool’s come back again. What do you think of what I’ve done with your uncle’s hall?”
Wulfric blanched. He had not expected Ingmar to be so bald-faced about Halvard’s station. But Halvard merely shrugged. “A little dark for my tastes, but nice enough. I prefer a larger hearth and a few more torches, myself.”
“Oh?” Ingmar’s eyebrow went up. “Agmundr tells me you have yourself a pet southerner too.” He beckoned to Wulfric. “Come here, thrall. Let me get a look at you.” Wulfric shuffled forward and bowed. Ingmar looked him up and down. “What does he do?”
“He speaks our language like a native son of Rovngalad.”
“Anyone can grunt and swear. Nine hells, I’d bet even your Gogoat could speak like a native son of Rovngalad,” Ingmar replied, to general laughter. Out of the corner of his eye, Wulfric saw Torvald leaning against the large doorframe of the hall, his eyes narrowed. One of Skerast’s tassels wrapped around his wrist.
“Wulfric, say something to the king,” Halvard said softly.
“Your majesty, it is an honor to stand in your great hall. I am so fortunate that Jarl Halvard has given me this opportunity.” On Wulfric’s shoulder, Dismas bobbed up and down in a facsimile of a bow and repeated what Wulfric had said.
Ingmar leaned forward on his throne. “Interesting trick. Say something more.”
“Your castle is most impressive, your majesty. Even the great castle of Lumen to the south pales in comparison.” A blatant lie, of course. The single time Wulfric had made a pilgrimage to Lumen, the citadel had awed him with its scope, easily five times the size of Yeavenguut. But Ingmar did not need to know that. “I am,” he searched for the proper word, not one the northerners used often, “humbled to come before you and stand in your august presence.”
“Big words for a little man.” Ingmar tossed back his goblet of wine. “Jarl Halvard, he speaks better than you. How much would you sell him for?”
Wulfric felt his throat constrict as a smile played across Halvard’s face. “For him, I would have your crown, King Ingmar,” Halvard said.
“Does the slave mean that much to you?”
“Perhaps it is your crown that means so little to me.”
The two men regarded each other for a long moment, and it seemed to Wulfric that the entire hall held its breath. Finally, Ingmar scoffed and waved his hand, a clear gesture of dismissal. Torvald flicked his fingers and Skerast uncurled its tassel from his hand. Halvard took Wulfric’s elbow and started to lead him away, but Ingmar held up a finger. Torvald froze in the doorway, his hand reaching toward Skerast again. “Jarl Halvard, you and your southerner come and walk with me when this is all over.” Halvard nodded up at the king and returned to his table. The men of Rovngalad were far more subdued for the rest of the feast, muttering amongst each other and fingering their weapons. A few other veteran warriors came and spoke briefly to Halvard, exchanging little more than pleasantries so as to avoid the notice and ire of King Ingmar.
When the ale and mead finally ran dry and the northmen began to disperse, Torvald sat down next to Halvard. “Are you actually going to go?” the warrior asked.
Halvard shrugged. “I don’t see why not. I’ll have my sword, and I’ll have Wulfric.”
Torvald scoffed. “Because the priest can save you if Ingmar tries to kill you. Let me come with you, brother.”
“You may be the finest warrior in the north, but I’m not so far behind you. I can look after myself, little brother.” It was said just sternly enough for Torvald to fall silent. Skaldi opened his mouth to say something, but Halvard shook his head. “Both of you, bring the men back to the campsite. If I haven’t returned by midnight,” Halvard shrugged, “do what you have to do.”
Wulfric followed Halvard down to the water’s edge, where Ingmar waited with his red-robed priest and another man. The king stared out across the water to where Uthald drifted in the deepest part of the fjord. “A magnificent creature,” Ingmar said when he heard Halvard’s footsteps. “I’ve always wondered how a stupid fool like you managed to tame a shipbreaker like that.”
“Did you just bring me out here to trade insults, you old bastard?”
“I brought you here to talk, away from the prying ears in my hall.”
Halvard glanced at Agmundr and scoffed. “Right. Is this the part where I admire all that you’ve built over my father and uncle’s graves? Or are we going to skip to the part where you try and put a knife in my back?”
“Nothing so underhanded as that. I’m not the savage you think I am, Jarl Halvard.”
“Is that so?”
“Whether you believe me or not, I did what I had to do. I united the north.”
“My great grandfather united the north, and my uncle was doing just fine at keeping it united until you killed him.”
“Harald and Sigurd were getting too old. The far-flung jarls were getting restless. How long before they broke away and carved out their own kingdoms? I put your uncle and father down and kept the north untied under my banner.”
“If that’s what you want to believe, so be it.”
Ingmar sighed. “It is the truth, Jarl Halvard.”
“Let’s say it is. Why tell me now? I swore your oath. I’m back in the fold for another year.”
“I know you are plotting to kill me, Halvard.”
Wulfric sucked in a breath, waiting for Agmundr or the third man to draw a knife, to fall on Halvard, to leave the jarl in a puddle of his blood on the sand. Uthald was too far away to help, if he even knew Halvard was here. But Halvard betrayed no emotion. “So you’re not quite as stupid as you look.”
“You admit to it?”
“No sense in lying, if you already know.”
“The other jarls won’t help you if you go to war against me.”
“I know plenty who won’t help you either.” Halvard turned his head and spat. “The warriors of Rovngalad always knew we would have to fight whatever Yeavenguut threw at us alone.”
“You’ll throw the lives of your subjects away for your vain dream?”
“They swore an oath to do it. Each of my warriors—”
“Is worth three or four or five of mine, I’ve heard it before. I know you have the fastest ships, the strongest pokemon, the finest warriors. But Rovngalad is small, and you are underequipped. You cannot beat me. Just give it up, Halvard. I will let you go back to Rovngalad to live out the rest of your days quietly. It’s a generous offer. Prove to me you’re not a fool.”
“No.”
Ingmar pointed out over the water to the two towers that stood at the mouth of the fjord. “I have a southerner too.” He inclined his head to the third man, the one who had remained quietly in the shadows. “He doesn’t speak our tongue as well as your priest, but he speaks enough now. He is a builder, and thanks to him, I have made Yeavenguut impregnable.”
“You built two piles of rock on your fjord. How could my army ever hope to face that?”
“You laugh, but only because you don’t see. With those towers, I can string chains beneath the waves. I can keep your ships out, or trap them in the fjord. Perhaps your Gyarados could leap them, but for all its ferocity, could it really stand against the full might of my army alone?”
Halvard’s eyes went wide, and Agmundr laughed behind Ingmar. The king smirked. “Now you see.”
Wulfric edged around behind Halvard’s back. “You are from the south?” he whispered to the quiet man. “They captured you too?”
The man, several years older than Wulfric, with a ragged beard and sunken eyes, nodded. “I never thought I’d hear someone speak Kalosian again.”
“I’m Brother Wulfric, from the monastery at Coumarina.”
“I’m called Donatus Builder. They took me from Geosenge Village.”
Wulfric glanced over at Ingmar. “Why do you serve him? He’s wicked and cruel.”
“All the northerners are wicked and cruel,” Donatus replied. “I serve him the same reason you serve your jarl. You keep them happy, you keep your life. King Ingmar wanted towers, so I built him towers.”
“You could escape with us, come back to Rovngalad. There would be a place for you there.”
“I’d be trading one master for another. Jarl Halvard won’t be so different from King Ingmar. I’ll stay with the demon I know.”
Wulfric shook his head. “I’m sorry, Donatus Builder.”
The builder shrugged. “We just got captured by the wrong people. It’s nothing personal, Brother Wulfric.” He sighed. “Say a prayer for me, would you? Let Arceus know that I’m just doing what I need to do to get by. Do you think He’ll understand?”
“His love is all-encompassing and His wisdom infinite. I’m sure He will.”
Donatus nodded. “Thank you, Brother Wulfric.”
“I won’t turn tail and go home,” Halvard was saying. “Perhaps you could crush us all with your little finger, but I don’t care a damn about that. You killed my father and my uncle. You stole my throne, and you cast me out into exile, then treat the very thing that shames me like some generous boon.” Halvard snarled and bared his teeth. “The only way this story ends is with a bloody sword and one of our heads in the dirt.”
Ingmar shook his head. “Just remember that I tried to give you one last chance. I won’t offer it again.”
Halvard and Wulfric returned to the Rovngalad camp. Halvard brooded in silence, and Wulfric knew better than to try to draw him out of it when he was this sober. The men had built a small fire, but no one tended to it as they all prepared their bedrolls. Halvard sent Wulfric over to sleep by Torvald and Svein while the jarl slumped down against Steinarr some distance away. Torvald raised an eyebrow as he groomed Branna’s feathers. Wulfric glanced over at where Svein played with Talvar and inched closer to Torvald. “They didn’t kill each other,” Wulfric whispered. “But they certainly wanted to.”
“Well, that’s something.” Skerast drifted by Torvald’s head, its blades glittering from the polish Torvald had recently applied.
“Ingmar kidnapped a southerner like me, a builder. He’s the one who built the towers at the mouth of the fjord.” He explained what Ingmar had told them about the chains that he could raise, and Torvald’s scowl grew deeper.
“That sounds unpleasant.” He shooed Branna off his knee, and the Talonflame alighted on a tree branch above the clearing. “Nothing we can’t work around, but still rather inconvenient.” Torvald fell back on his bedroll. “Well, nothing you need to concern yourself with, little priest.”
One by one, the men drifted off to sleep, and the fire died to mere embers. In the middle of the night, Wulfric was woken to Dismas scratching at him. The monk nearly sat up, but saw a shadow move before the faint fire pit. Keeping his eyes to small slits, he saw that a company of armed men was moving through the camp, swords drawn. Wulfric felt his throat constrict as one of the men drew close to Halvard’s sleeping form. He reached over and grasped Torvald’s wrist, trying to shake the warrior awake. Torvald brushed his hand away, and Wulfric saw that he was awake and watching the men with his eerie predatory smile.
Wulfric’s heart was racing. Torvald was going to let the assassins kill his brother and usurp Halvard’s title. Halvard’s dream of regaining his throne and establishing trading ties with the south would die with him. Wulfric knew he had been sent to Halvard’s side for a reason, and he had to do what he could to protect him. “Halvard!” he shouted. “Halvard, wake up!”
As he drew the dagger from Torvald’s discarded sword belt and sprang to his feet, Dismas jumped into the air and unleashed a booming squawk. The sound made all of the assassins pause for just long enough for Wulfric to leap across the fire pit and onto the back of Halvard’s assailant. He plunged the dagger into the assassin’s throat and felt the man’s blood pump out onto his hands.
Halvard was on his feet, sword already in hand. “Men of Rovngalad!” he boomed over Dismas’s shrieking. “Men of Rovngalad, stand and fight!”
And with that, the clearing erupted into chaos.
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Post by Firebrand on May 5, 2018 0:42:03 GMT
Chapter 7
Halvard’s sword flashed as he raised it and drove it into the chest of the man who only seconds before had tried to kill him. Wulfric slipped from the man’s back as Halvard kicked him to the ground. All around the clearing, other warriors of Rovngalad were jumping up from sleep and seizing their swords and spears. Torvald barked a command, and Branna flew from the tree she had been roosting in, fire blossoming along her wings and illuminating the pandemonium below. Halvard checked to see if Wulfric was unharmed before kicking a spear to him. “Protect my nephew.” And with that, he was gone, running into the fray.
Wulfric raced to Svein and Talvar’s side. The boy had his sword in hand, crudely lashing out at any of the masked warriors who drew close, though none got within striking range. The first one to try was immediately set upon by Talvar. A Banette emerged shrieking from the trees and tackled Talvar to the ground, freeing the man the Houndour had pinned. An Ariados skittered towards them, but Wulfric jabbed at it with his spear, driving the insect away. Branna, Dismas, and the other Rovngalad air aligned were battling fiercely against a flock of Murkrow and a Haunter.
A warrior with two Bisharp charged at Torvald, but Torvald held his ground. Skerast had wrapped around his arms, and Torvald held one blade loosely in each hand. Wulfric had been told Torvald was the finest warrior in the north ever since he had been kidnapped, but he had never seen Torvald truly fight. He now saw that the title was not merely empty boasting. With a roar, Torvald engaged his attacker, whirling with Skerast in a complicated pattern of blows. He seemed to be surrounded by a shifting curtain of steel, hitting everywhere at once. Steel rang against steel as he parried both of the Bisharp and sent one sprawling with a quick riposte. One of Skerast’s blades began to glow, and he ripped clear through the spine of the second. Then, without losing any momentum, he turned on his heel and hacked off the man’s head with a heavy blow that appeared nonchalant. His face was spattered with blood, but Torvald paid it no mind, simply stalking through the chaos to find another foe.
Halvard was mounted on Steinarr’s back, hacking away with sword and axe. The Gogoat charged around the edge of the clearing, tossing foes with his horns. The men of Rovngalad knew to stay within the perimeter Halvard had set to avoid being caught beneath Steinarr’s thundering hooves. A Machoke bellowed as it jumped in Halvard’s path, seizing Steinarr’s horns. Halvard brought up his axe and lopped one of the hands off, changing the bellow into a strangled roar of pain and surprise. Steinarr disengaged with a toss of his head, and Skaldi screamed as he brought his axe down again and again on the war aligned’s back, not stopping until the massive Machoke lay still in a spreading puddle of blood.
Wulfric kept Svein close, using the reach of his spear to try and drive attackers away. After the initial attack, the men of Rovngalad had turned it into a rout and were driving most of their assailants back. Most of the masked assassins were now trying to retreat, and those that weren’t had more pressing concerns than a scrawny monk and a boy. The battle-maddened pokemon of both sides crashed around, sparing little thought for friend or foe. Wulfric seized Svein by the collar and dragged him away as Ivarr’s Beartic hurled down a foe’s Pangoro right where they had been standing. The ice aligned fell on the prone dark aligned again and clamped his heavy jaws down on the Pangoro’s throat.
“Thanks,” Svein said, more than a little shaken. He batted away a swooping Fletchinder with his small round shield. The air aligned spiraled off, flying lopsided.
When all of the mysterious assailants had retreated or been killed, the energy of the warriors evaporated. Halvard stumbled over to where Svein and Wulfric stood in mute shock. Dismas fluttered down, and Wulfric tossed his spear aside to take the Chatot into his arms. Halvard knelt before Svein and took the boy’s face in his callused and bloody hands. “Are you all right? You aren’t hurt?” When Svein assured him that he was fine, Halvard clasped him in a brief embrace and turned to Wulfric. “You saved my life.”
“It is my duty to serve you.”
“Nonetheless,” Halvard said. “You showed true courage, acting as you did. I don’t know how many of my men would have done the same. I won’t forget this.”
Wulfric did not get the chance to reply. A keening wail split the night air, and the three of them turned to see Ulfi on his knees, clutching something to his chest. When Halvard crouched next to him, Ulfi held out his arms. “Look what they did. Look what they did to my boy.” Someone had cut Odmund’s throat, a gaping red line beneath his chin. A bruise on the side of his face suggested he had been bludgeoned with the blunt end of an axe, and a red stain had spread on his tunic from another wound on his chest. Svein let out a strangled cry and Wulfric buried the boy’s face in his chest, trying to spare him the sight. Halvard put a hand on Ulfi’s shoulder in mute sympathy.
Aside from Odmund, there were two other Rovngalad casualties. They were older men, veteran fighters with little to speak of in terms of family. They had fallen bravely, and while their passing was mourned, they had died the way they wished. But Odmund had just been a boy, with a whole lifetime ahead of him. Ulfi would not leave the corpse, and wept bitterly. Ivarr sat with him and helped Skaldi recite the prayers to send Odmund’s soul to the cold halls of the Bringer of Death.
When the rites were completed, Halvard returned to Ulfi’s side and touched a finger to the ring on Odmund’s arm. He whispered something into Ulfi’s ear, and the boat builder nodded. “Odmund would have been honored,” Ulfi managed to say.
Halvard slipped the ring from the dead boy’s arm and went to Wulfric’s side. He held out the bloodied ring. “Take it.”
“What?”
“It’s yours now. Take it.”
“But that would mean—”
“It means you’re free. It means you’re a man of Rovngalad. I don’t need a thrall. I need a good man like you to stand by me.” He shook the ring insistently. “Take it, Wulfric.” Wulfric slid the bangle onto his wrist, and Halvard jerked his head towards Yeavenguut. “Now come with me.”
They were joined by Torvald at the edge of the clearing, and the jarl nodded brusquely to his bloodied brother. The two of them fell into step beside each other, and Wulfric had to hasten his steps to keep up. “So what’s our next move?” Torvald growled, adjusting his grip on Skerast’s hilts.
Halvard clicked his tongue at Steinarr and ran a hand through the grass aligned’s bushy mane. “That’s on the Usurper now. Do you have what I told you to bring?” Torvald mutely held up a dark sack, and Halvard pressed his lips into a grim smile.
They came upon the closed gates of Yeavenguut, and Halvard pounded on the thick slabs of wood and iron. A long moment passed with no response, and the jarl’s hand was turning raw from the repeated knocking. Finally, the door creaked open slightly, and a sleepy-looking porter peeked around. Torvald shoved the door open, knocking the man on his rear. “Get the king,” Halvard snapped. “Tell him that I and my men were just attacked.”
“Jarl Halvard, King Ingmar is sleeping now and—”
The porter broke off when Torvald leveled one of his blades at his throat. “The king. Now.” The poor man nodded and hurried off into the city proper.
When he was out of sight, Halvard sighed and pressed his forehead against Steinarr’s. “I’m so tired, my friend. Why won’t the gods just let me rest?” Steinarr rumbled low in his throat and licked Halvard’s chin.
The porter returned with Ingmar, the priest in red robes, and an honor guard. Ingmar tried unsuccessfully to suppress a yawn and rubbed the sleep from his eyes. “Jarl Halvard, why are you terrorizing my porter at this time of night?”
“A better question is why your men were terrorizing our camp!” Torvald snapped.
“What are you talking about?” Ingmar shot back. “Why are you covered in blood?”
“We’ve been sending your treacherous warriors back to the Cold Halls where they belong,” Torvald said. “And may they rot in the deepest, darkest pits the Bringer of Death can find.”
“I assure you I have no idea what you’re talking about.”
Torvald upended the sack he carried in his left hand, and a ball rolled out of it, stopping at Ingmar’s feet. The red priest picked it up and showed it to the king, careful to hold it so as not to stain his robes. When the priest raised it up to one of the torches, Wulfric saw that it was the severed head of Trygi and nearly vomited. Ingmar studied the head of his retainer dispassionately and shrugged. “Trygi acted on his own accord. I had no knowledge of any raid he planned against you. Had you left him alive, I would have had him tortured, but you spared me the trouble.”
The look that passed between Halvard and Torvald made it clear that they thought Ingmar was lying through his teeth, but lacking any solid proof, they could do no more. Ingmar knew it too, and he allowed a smirk to crack his carefully blank visage. “Jarl Halvard, you ought to take your southern thrall back to camp. He looks quite ill.”
“My southerner is no thrall,” Halvard said. He reached out and seized Wulfric’s arm, raising it to the torchlight so that all could see the ring there. “He is a man of Rovngalad.”
Ingmar made no move to mask his distaste. “You must truly be desperate to try and swell your ranks with southern priests.”
“I lost three fine warriors tonight,” Halvard said. “One of them was a boy who swore an oath of loyalty to you just hours ago. Trygi died with his blood on his hands.”
“What northman doesn’t have blood on his hands? Between the two of us and your brother, we have more than most. What does a little more matter one way or the other?”
Halvard narrowed his eyes. “My men will be leaving on the morning tide. We swore our oaths to you, and I have no more patience for your mummer’s show of a festival. You can try to stop us if you choose, and we can see if those southern towers of yours really can stop the men of Rovngalad.”
“It would seem to me, Jarl Halvard, that one of your men has not sworn an oath to me.” He glanced down at Wulfric’s arm ring and smiled.
Halvard placed a protective hand on Wulfric’s shoulder. “The time for that rite has come and gone. Wulfric is my man for the next year, and he will swear to you at your next feast, as is customary.”
Ingmar glanced at Agmundr, and the red priest spread his hands. “He is not wrong.”
Ingmar huffed out a breath. “So be it. Leave this place, Halvard Sigurdsson.”
“With pleasure.” Halvard mounted up on Steinarr’s back and rode through the gate. Torvald paused just long enough to spit at Ingmar’s feet before turning on his heel and gesturing for Wulfric to follow him. Together they disappeared into the shadows of the forest.
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The rigging creaked as the longships tacked towards the mouth of Rovngalad’s fjord. Uthald kept pace with the lead longship, the sunlight glittering on his sapphire-blue and golden scales. The sea wind blew Wulfric’s hair back from his face, and on his shoulder Dismas ruffled his feathers. The monk idly toyed with the ring on his arm, still unused to the weight of the bangle. He watched Halvard slowly rise from his place atop Uthald’s crowned head and settle his stance as they passed the spars of land that marked the entrance to the fjord.
The rowers guided the longships to the wharf, where the women, children and infirm of Rovngalad waited to meet them. Skaldi jumped from his boat as soon as they reached the shallows, holding aloft the severed heads of three of the night assailants. His Breloom leapt after him, and together they splashed onto the shore.
Torvald stepped lightly onto the dock and swept Runa up in a hug, carrying her off into the village after a brief nod to Ragnhildr. Svein raced to his mother and embraced her, babbling excitedly about the chaos of the nighttime attack. Ragnhildr mussed her son’s hair and sent him after his uncle, promising to listen to his full accounting later. Wulfric hung back to help Ulfi lift Odmund’s body, now wrapped in a shroud, from the belly of the boat. Odmund’s Timburr limped along next to the boat builder, looking just as shocked and confused as the boy’s father.
Odmund absently patted Wulfric’s shoulder, muttered “Thanks” and continued on his way towards his house on the shoreline. Wulfric looked for Halvard and finally saw him making his way up towards one of the game paths that lined the hills around the village. Halvard generally walked those trails when he wanted solitude to think, but Wulfric wondered if he ought to go after him. When he tried to move off the dock, Ragnhildr stopped him.
“Torvald sent word about what happened home with Branna,” she said.
“Yes.”
“So I know what my brother has done for you.” She glanced down at his arm.
“I… yes. I suppose I’m one of you now.”
Ragnhildr’s lips twitched up in something approaching a smile. “Yes, I suppose you are. It is not undeserved.” She wrapped her arms around his torso and pulled him close. “You saved my brother’s life and protected my son. I cannot thank you enough.” She abruptly pulled away. “You are more than welcome to remain in our hall, until such a time you wish to move into one of your own.”
“Ragnhildr, thank you. That is…”
“The least the children of Sigurd can do to show our gratitude. Now follow me if you want your dinner before it gets cold.”
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Post by girl-like-substance on May 6, 2018 9:30:39 GMT
It's time for politics! That's always one of my favourite parts of a historical setting, if done well, and if it involves stabbing a dude with a sword then that's an added bonus. I like that Ingmar has an aegislash, which is a pokémon that the pokédex implies has a history of being the sole preserve of kings – like, it makes sense that a guy who's aware that people consider him a usurper (the Usurper, even) would surround himself with the badges of kingship like that. It's a subtle reminder that Ingmar himself recognises the potential instability of his own position – which gets picked up on later, with the big chain in the harbour. He's a good antagonist, I think; it's tempting, on the strength of Halvard's initial description, to dismiss him as a power-hungry brute, but he's a shrewd tactician who probably really does believe in the argument he offers for his assumption of the throne. In the conversation between him and Halvard, it's Halvard who comes across as the unreasonable one, with his refusal to engage in any sort of dialogue – while Ingmar himself is open to finding a diplomatic solution, although of course his idea of a diplomatic solution is Halvard abandoning his plan or else getting stabbed in the night, so let's not give him too much credit; he's as violent and underhanded as anyone else here. Anyway, he's a really cool guy to pit against Halvard.
Obviously there is also one of those patented Firebrand fight scenes, but I think there's only so many times I can say that those are brilliant, so in this case it can speak for itself. More interesting is that this part marks the point where Wulfric enters into the community of the northmen in full; slavery has long been conceptualised as social death, after all, and in order to properly become part of the Rovngalad crew Wulfric was always going to have to be able to become the social equal of the other members. I feel like I'm noticing a lot more about the structure of this story on a second reading. Nicely done, as usual!
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Post by Firebrand on May 19, 2018 0:14:21 GMT
Chapter 8
Wulfric grunted as Halvard threw his entire body weight behind his sword blow, and the monk-turned-northman staggered back a few paces. Halvard hissed out a breath and pointed the tip of his blade at Wulfric’s feet. “Sloppy. Again.” Wulfric charged, and Halvard parried effortlessly, sidestepping the blow and slapping Wulfric with the flat of his blade. “Again. Every man of Rovngalad stands in the shield wall, and every man counts on his brothers in arms. If one man flags, the shield wall breaks. We can’t get back the years you lost in that southern monastery, but I can make sure you don’t get the rest of us killed.” This time when Wulfric attacked, Halvard slowed his counter to show him how it worked.
Since arriving back from the disastrous affair at Yeavenguut nearly a month ago, Halvard had brought Wulfric into the daily training with the rest of the warriors. The farm work Wulfric had endured for most of the previous year had hardened his muscles, but dragging a plow and swinging a sword were quite different, and he was crawling to bed sore once again. Svein and the other boys were in a similar circumstance, and it embarrassed Wulfric that the only opponent he could regularly match was Svein. The boy was over a decade his junior and more than a head shorter, but what he lacked in muscle mass and reach he made up for in a lifetime of learning weapons fundamentals from his uncles. However, the previous week Wulfric had managed to best Skaldi, and he still felt a glow of pride whenever he thought back to it. The northern priest had overreached and Wulfric had slipped inside his guard, knocking him to the ground and disarming him. Skaldi had been livid, of course, but Halvard had seemed suitably impressed.
Occasionally Ulfi would take Wulfric off Halvard’s hands and help him with his axework, and sometimes invited him to help out in the boathouse when the weather prevented them from spending much time in the fields. Ulfi was a stern teacher, but his style was far more patient than Halvard or Torvald’s, and Wulfric knew he was trying to fill the void in his heart that Odmund had left. Although he had little enough interest in building boats, he indulged Ulfi and paid careful attention whenever the man lectured him on how to sand along the grain and fit the ribs.
While Wulfric sat massaging his sore muscles by the fire, Torvald sat down across from him. The warrior had just returned from one of his strange trips out into the mountains with Jarn. Torvald leaned back with a groan and smirked. “Halvard’s running you hard, isn’t he?”
Wulfric smirked. “Nothing I can’t handle.”
“Big talk from such a small man.”
“I’m no Torvald the Red, but I’m getting there.”
Torvald laughed. “Well, you certainly boast like a northman now!” He poured himself a horn of ale and took a draught. “Wulfric, would you turn Dismas over to me tomorrow? There are some things I would like to teach him.”
“Dismas isn’t really a fighter.”
“On the battlefield, your pokemon are often the only things standing between you and the Cold Halls. Perhaps Dismas won’t fly at the lead with Branna and Sigrund, but you’ll want him to watch your back.”
Wulfric turned to his Chatot. “Well, what do you say? Do you want to learn how to fight?”
Dismas cocked his head from side to side and warbled for a moment. Then he bobbed up and down. “Fight! Die! Blood!”
Wulfric glanced over at Torvald. “He’s all yours, I suppose.”
And so it went. When Wulfric reported to the training yards for his daily beatings, Torvald took Dismas off with Branna and Skerast. When the Chatot was returned to Wulfric in the evenings, Dismas was covered in scratches, his feathers were rumpled and in disarray, but Wulfric could not deny that Dismas was carrying himself with far more swagger. When Wulfric asked what Torvald’s methods were, the warrior shrugged. “We’re just sparring. Dismas isn’t as fast or strong as Branna, but he’s quick and he’s clever. He can turn and loop faster because he’s small.” He rumpled Wulfric’s hair. “Kind of like you, little priest.”
One day while taking a short respite from training, Halvard shooed Svein from the bench he shared with Wulfric. The boy shrugged and went off to wrestle with Talvar. Halvard watched his nephew for a moment before turning Wulfric. “When we first met, you were drawing. I remember that.”
“Yes…”
“Can you draw me something?”
“I suppose, had I the proper tools.”
“I need a map.”
“Halvard, I have seen the sea charts you keep. I’m sure I could copy them if you needed it transcribed, but I doubt I could compare to—”
“I don’t need a sea chart, I need a map. Of your kingdom.”
Wulfric felt his throat constrict. “You mean, of the interior?”
Halvard nodded. “We know the coastline, more or less. A few raids have gone a short ways up the rivers, but not very far. But your kingdom has iron, and some of the finest swords and armor I’ve ever seen.”
“You plan to raid Kalos? Inland Kalos?” Wulfric shook his head. “You’re mad. The king’s knights have their estates in the interior. We would never get out alive.”
Halvard scoffed. “You think Kalosian knights can match the fighting men of Rovngalad?”
“Maybe you would win against a few knights. But there are many knights in Kalos, and only so many men of Rovngalad.”
“Just draw me a map, Wulfric. I have ink and parchment. We can talk more when it’s done.”
It took him several nights to be satisfied with his product, and much of it was guesswork. He knew that the brothers who had specialized in cartography at the monastery would have scorned his amateurish efforts at rendering the Kalosian coastline, but it was better than nothing. The rivers were a simpler task, as he knew roughly where those courses ran. He also made notations as to where there was open country, mountains, and the inland desert, though he doubted Halvard would have any interest in the badlands.
At Torvald’s suggestion, he also marked potential arms stockpiles and the best way to reach them. After considering the various options, Wulfric ultimately deemed that the best place to strike was the citadel at Camphorae, some distance southwest of the capital of Lumen. The longships could row up the Sennouire river from where it emptied into the sea south of Geosenge Village and follow it up the lowlands to just outside of Camphorae. Though the river would undoubtedly be defended at key points along its length, there were long stretches where it was uninhabited and the closest settlements were leagues from the banks. It would also give the raiders a chance to practice defending their boats from defenders on the shore, as they would certainly be forced to do when they mounted their offensive against Yeavenguut.
When Wulfric presented his plans to Halvard, the jarl studied them for several minutes in silence. “This is our best option?”
Wulfric nodded. “There are better stocked garrisons in the eastern mountains, but we would have to travel overland in Kalosian territory. We would surely be discovered and killed. Camphorae is by no means a vulnerable target, but it is far more feasible to attack there than it would be to try and reach San Dent-du-Mille or, Arceus forbid, Anistelle City.”
“How many knights can we expect?”
“I do not know for certain, but there will be at least a full legion of common soldiers at the garrison. Duke Louis de Verron keeps his court at Camphorae, and his personal guard would be formidable.”
“What is a ‘duke’?”
“A noble. He’s the king’s cousin. So he has many knights at his command.”
Halvard glanced over at Torvald. “How evenly matched were our men against the knights at Coumarina?”
Torvald shrugged. “There weren’t many when we took the garrison. Ivarr and I could handle them. Skidsegg and Thorund couldn’t.” Wulfric had never before heard the last two names, and could only assume that they had died in the raid where he had been captured. Torvald continued, “I’ve been training the others to be ready. The Kalosians' formations and tactics are predictable, but their armor is much better than ours.”
Wulfric cleared his throat. “If I may?” He tapped his map, where he had marked major Kalosian fortifications and citadels. “The southern nobles are always squabbling about something or other, so their troops are constantly seeing combat. Knights are hardened veterans and exceptionally skilled. But your warfare is very different from theirs. When Kalosian lords fight, they march their troops to their rival’s city and start a siege. Battles tend to be rather structured affairs, with formal writs of challenge. They aren’t used to defending against an opponent that comes out of nowhere, strikes fast and retreats with their spoils. If we can keep the element of surprise, Duke Verron in all likelihood won’t be able to respond quickly enough. You could take the weapons and armor from the garrison and be three leagues downriver before his knights have even mobilized.”
“The men won’t like running from a fight,” Torvald said.
“The men will have plenty of chances to die in glorious battle when I take Ingmar’s head,” Halvard replied. He turned back to Wulfric. “What do you know about the coffers of Camphorae?”
“They are considerably fuller than the ones of Coumarina. More than that, I can’t say.”
Halvard smirked and clapped Wulfric on the shoulder. “That’s all I need to hear. Torvald, do you think the men would be satisfied missing out on their share of glory if they got their share of gold instead?”
“I’m sure it would quiet most of them.”
“Of course it would.” The jarl stood up. “Inform the warriors that we will sail when the moon turns.”
“So soon?” Torvald cried. “Halvard, that’s just days away!”
“And why wait? The fields are planted. My warriors are getting restless, and we haven’t had a real raid since returning from Coumarina last year.”
“It will be as you say,” Torvald said. He glanced over at Wulfric. “But this time, we’re not bringing home any strays.”
“That will be for Wulfric to decide,” Halvard replied with a laugh. “He’ll be leading the raid.”
“He’ll what?” Torvald snapped.
“I’ll what?” Wulfric yelped.
Halvard shrugged. “Why not? You know the country better than any here. You know these Kalosians, know their strange foreign ways. You can leave the fighting to us, but it will be your responsibility to guide us to Camphorae.”
Wulfric swallowed the lump in his throat and looked to Torvald for help. The warrior sighed in resignation. “He’s the jarl. Once he’s made up his mind, there’s nothing I can do.”
Skaldi, however, was not nearly so accommodating. “I’ll go to the deepest pit in the Cold Halls before I follow some southern priest!” Skaldi spat when Halvard told his assembled his warriors the plans for the spring raid. “You can give him an arm ring if you wish, but that won’t make him one of us! He’ll just get us all killed!”
Several other warriors took up Skaldi’s tune, and soon the rumbles of discontent were spreading. Ulfi stood up and walked to Wulfric’s side, putting one of his heavy, scarred hands on the monk’s shoulder. “I accept Jarl Halvard’s choice,” the boat builder rumbled. “We need his knowledge if this raid is to succeed. If you stand behind the jarl’s dream to take back his throne, then you’ll stand behind Wulfric.” He pressed his lips in thin smile. “Or are you all just too cowardly to sail south?”
“Coward?” Ivarr roared. “You call me a coward, you old bastard?”
“Are you afraid to follow Wulfric, our brother in arms, to the south?”
Ivarr hesitated. “Damn it, of course not!”
Several of Skaldi’s naysayers started to come around, and Ulfi leaned down to speak in Wulfric’s ear. “I put my honor on the line for you. Don’t prove me wrong.”
“I won’t. I swear it.”
And so a fortnight later, Wulfric found himself on the docks of Rovngalad once again, going over his crude map with Ragnhildr, Halvard, and Torvald. Ragnhildr pursed her lips as she studied the smudged ink. “We are sure to be detected as we move inland.”
Torvald shrugged. “We just kill anyone who sees us.”
Wulfric did his best to hide his discomfort. For all that the northmen had adopted him as one of their kind, he was still at heart a Kalosian, and the thought of putting his innocent countrymen to death to further Halvard’s aims sat poorly with him. But he did not let his discomfort show, and took his place in Halvard’s boat beside Ulfi. Ivarr and Torvald cast their longboats off from the docks first, and Ragnhildr followed after them. Halvard and Skaldi directed their ships to bring up the rear. As they rowed towards the mouth of the harbor, Uthald drew up alongside the longship. Halvard reached out over the water and brushed his hand against Uthald’s scales. “Not this time, my friend. Stay here and protect the village.”
Uthald moaned deep in his throat and pulled away, drawing himself up out of the water to watch the ships pass through the mouth of the fjord. Halvard turned and waved as they turned south, and soon even the top of Uthald’s crest vanished behind the coastal hills.
They sailed for five days, curving out to sea to stay out of sight of the settlements on the coast and from any fishermen plying the abundant coastal waters. When Halvard and Ragnhildr judged them far enough south, they turned east and it was not long before they came across the mouth of the Sennouire. They did not linger in the delta long, for Geosenge Village was only a league up the coast. The sails were struck and stowed in the bellies of the ships as the northmen rowed their way up the river, stopping for the night only when they were certain they were far from any Kalosian village.
They camped on shore that night, and Wulfric huddled close to the fire. All around him, warriors inspected their weapons, polishing their swords and sharpening their axes. The low rumble of muttered conversations filled the night air. Halvard sank down next to Wulfric and spread the map across his knees. “Show me where we are.” Wulfric gave the jarl his best approximation, and Halvard nodded slowly. “How far should we go tomorrow?”
Wulfric thought for a moment, and estimated that if they pushed, they could reach Camphorae in three days. “Going back down the river will be easier, of course,” he said. “We won’t be fighting the current, and your longships are faster than any Kalosian river boat I’ve seen. Provided we manage to surprise Camphorae and take what we need quickly, we should be able to slip completely through their fingers.”
Halvard tugged at his beard. “If it comes to a fight, stay close to me. I will keep you safe.”
“Thank you.”
“I know this is hard for you.”
Wulfric reached for the small iron ring around his neck. “I know that I’m one of you now. But for all that, these people we’re raiding are still my countrymen. I don’t like killing anyone, but I especially don’t want to kill a man with whom I ought to have no quarrel. I’m bringing death to them and… by Arceus, that’s as good as murdering them myself.”
“You may hate me for making me do this to you. That’s… fair.” Halvard sighed. “But I need the men to trust and respect you. When I kill Ingmar, I will open trade with the south. But the men need to see that the southerners can be trusted, and the only way to do that is to fight and bleed beside one. Better yet, if they’re led by one in Rovngalad’s most ambitious raid in years, it will be less of a bitter draught when we start trading for what we could have just taken.” Halvard shook his head. “Leadership is a heavy burden, Wulfric. Being jarl is bad enough, and when I’m king it will be worse. If I thought Torvald could do it, I’d turn things over to him in a heartbeat.”
“About Torvald…” Wulfric took a deep breath to steady himself. “Halvard, on the night we were attacked in Yeavenguut, Torvald woke up too. He could have stopped things before I did, but he tried to stop me. He would have let you die.”
Halvard was silent for a moment. When he finally did speak, it was with resigned acceptance. “I can’t say I’m surprised. If I were in his position, I might have done the same thing.” The jarl shrugged. “He probably thought that once I was out of the way, he could settle things with Ingmar and rule Rovngalad in peace.”
Wulfric stared into the flames. “Halvard, do you truly believe you’ll win?”
“Of course I do,” the jarl replied. “I can’t fail. Too much is riding on me.”
“Even though the odds are so long?”
Halvard scoffed. “Odds? A man like me doesn’t need to consider things like odds. I make my own luck.”
Wulfric managed to smile and fingered the ring of Arceus he wore beneath his shirt. “I wish I could have the same faith in myself that you do.”
“You don’t need to believe in yourself,” Halvard said. “I believe in you, Wulfric. So just believe in me, and I’ll carry us through. Guide us up the river, and I’ll take everything from there. I swear it.” Halvard lay back on his bedroll and smirked. “Wulfric, I promised you that we would change the world, and a man of Rovngalad never goes back on his word. But I can’t do this without you.”
“I’ll stand with you. I promise.”
Halvard smiled. “It’s not going to be easy. But life without difficulty is a life without valor.”
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Post by Firebrand on Jun 1, 2018 23:47:46 GMT
Chapter 9
Dismas fluffed his feathers as he sat atop the mast of the longship, surveying the rolling Kalosian countryside spread out beneath him like an imperious lord. As Halvard picked his way between the rowers, he thumped the mast with his fist, making the Chatot squawk in indignation. The jarl laughed and continued on to Wulfric’s bench. He knelt beside the monk and unrolled Wulfric’s map. “It seems like the river splits into three tributaries up ahead. Which route should we take?”
Wulfric glanced over the map and thought for a moment. “As I’ve said, I don’t know much about this part of the kingdom, but I think we ought to follow the northbound route. I know there are rapids and a series of waterfalls to the south , which means we would have to carry the longships overland.” He had seen the northerners do that on several occasions already, allowing them to bypass stretches of the river that would prove perilous. However, the longships were rather heavy, and they lost valuable time doing it. “We might have to pass by a settlement or two, but that’s preferable to braving the rapids.”
Halvard nodded and signaled for Ragnhildr’s ship to draw even with his own. He spoke quietly with his sister for a few moments before Ragnhildr leapt onto Sigrund’s back and shot off into the sky to scout ahead. The longships continued up the river, but when they reached a long bend, Halvard instructed them to wait for Ragnhildr’s return before pressing on.
The sun continued its arc across the sky, and eventually Torvald and a few of the other warriors grew tired of sitting idly. They navigated their boat to a shallow point in the riverbed and secured it before wading to the bank for a bout of sparring. The Kalosian floodplain rolled around them, and occasionally swarms of Vivillon fluttered by to see what these strangers were doing in their territory, only to be chased off by Branna and Dismas.
A dark shape finally materialized in front of the sun, and Sigrund dropped out of the sky to alight on the riverbank, her powerful hind legs flexing to absorb the impact of her landing. Then with a quick flutter of her wings, she hopped across the narrow expanse of river to settle on the wide platform in the stern of Ragnhildr’s boat. Ragnhildr dismounted and walked briskly to the railing, motioning Halvard’s ship to draw alongside.
The warrior woman folded her arms. “Wulfric’s hunch was right. The northern passage is the easiest, but there is a fishing village a ways up the river. We won’t be able to pass by undetected, and if we’re seen, they’ll be sure to send word of our approach.”
Halvard looked up at the sky. “Not long until nightfall now. We’ll come on them in the darkness.”
“And then what?” Wulfric asked.
Halvard smirked, as though it was obvious. “We make sure there is no way for them to send word on ahead.”
The oars of the longships were wrapped in rags to dampen the sound they made as they dipped into the water and the blades of swords and axes were darkened with ash to dull their shine. Ragnhildr and the other women prepared torches while Torvald walked the warriors through their paces. From what Wulfric could gather, the raid on the unsuspecting village would be brief and brutal. Unlike the attack on Coumarina when he had been captured, there would be no lingering to count up treasure. If the northmen found something worth seizing, they would take it, but it was doubtful a village like this had any worthwhile prizes. They would land and rampage through the village, torching whatever they could. Anyone who resisted or tried to fight would be cut down.
It would be bloody, it would be efficient, and it made Wulfric a little sick to think about it.
The moon was just beginning to wane that night, though it was obscured by clouds. The longships silently made their way up the river, stopping just outside the village. Groups of warriors disembarked and waded to shore with their pokemon partners and waited for the signal. Halvard swung up into his usual place on Steinarr’s back, and the Gogoat braced his legs.
Outside the village, Branna shot into the air, her wings cloaked in fire. She plunged at the wood and straw buildings, setting several roofs ablaze in her first pass. Halvard roared out a battle cry as Steinarr’s legs bunched and he sailed through the air to land on the village’s dock. The longship rocked back and forth as the northmen remaining on board fought to stabilize it, though it was not likely to capsize. Ulfi had constructed Halvard’s longship with a wider draft specifically to accommodate the weight change when Steinarr boarded and disembarked for this very reason.
Though Halvard had been eager to see Wulfric prove himself in battle, when the monk had volunteered to remain with the crew to stabilize the longship, the jarl had conceded that Wulfric would likely only get in the way on a raid like this. So Wulfric watched from the river as the men and women of Rovngalad rampaged through the fishing hamlet. The still night air was filled with the roar of flames and raucous laughter of the attacking warriors, and was soon joined by screams for mercy and entreaties to Arceus.
Wulfric fumbled for the four-pronged ring he wore around his neck and tried to mutter a prayer, but the words caught in his throat. He saw Ulfi silhouetted against the flames, an axe in one hand and a shield in the other. The boat builder roared in unison with his Druddigon Hjodtr as one of the villagers attacked with a Dragalge. The poison-aligned’s whip-like appendages wrapped around Hjodtr’s arms and dragged the dragon towards the river. Ulfi roared again and swung his axe in a backhand motion, cracking the villager’s skull with the blunt end before attempting to hack at the Dragalge’s tentacles. Hjodtr opened his maw wide and blasted the poison-aligned with a pulse of indigo light, and together warrior and pokemon beat their foes into submission.
Skaldi raced through the small houses with a blazing torch, his Breloom and Ampharos bounding along before him. The pokemon dispatched any foe in his way while the northern priest set alight everything in his path. Torvald danced through the flames, Skerast glinting in his hands. Ragnhildr had freed the town’s Gogoat herd and was using Geirr and Sigrund to drive them through the wreckage of the town to sow further panic. And above it all rode Halvard, sword raised high as he and Steinarr charged through the flames with no regard for their own safety.
Next to Wulfric, Aesgir shouted encouragement to his two Sharpedo as they fell upon villagers who tried to flee to the river. Somewhere in the chaos, Ivarr’s Beartic bellowed. The shrieks of the villagers were growing louder and more desperate as their homes were reduced to ash, and their bodies were beginning to pile up on the riverbank. The smell of charred flesh became overpowering, and Wulfric leaned over the side of the longship to vomit up the contents of his stomach.
Finally, Halvard blew out three long blasts on a hollowed out horn, the signal to retreat. Like the tide rushing out, the northerners raced away from the burning village and splashed through the shallows to their ships. Steinarr galloped down the burning dock and launched himself into Halvard’s longship while Wulfric and the rest of the crew kept the ship steady. As they rowed off into the darkness, Wulfric glanced over his shoulder and saw the stars obscured by the thick acrid smoke of the burning village.
Around him, the northmen laughed and joked at the success of the raid, several of them showing off treasures they had managed to purloin in the chaos. As the ships continued down the river, the burning village turned into little more than a distant red smear on the horizon. Wulfric felt ill as he pulled on his oar, knowing that the destruction was all his fault. The only wrong these people had done was to live in a village their ancestors had built in a bend in the river. Had Wulfric never bought the northmen here, they would still be safe in their beds, instead of watching their lives go up in smoke, or worse, dying in the streets.
“Isn’t it wonderful?” Skaldi said with a laugh as he sat on the bench across from Wulfric. “The screams, the fire, the blood?”
“It’s horrific.”
“Having second thoughts, priest?”
Wulfric gripped his oar tighter. “I’ll do what Halvard needs me to do. I swore an oath. If that means more of… this, then so be it.” Skaldi shrugged. “If you say so.”
He refused to let Skaldi get to him. Though the deaths he would be responsible for on this raid would weigh heavily on his conscience, it was ultimately a necessary step to reclaim Halvard’s throne and open relations between the north and south to make a better world. He was never one for moral calculus, and trying to justify killing for the greater good did little to salve his conscience, but it did settle his stomach, and Wulfric feared that was the best he was going to be able to do for the time being. He muttered a prayer to Arceus, hoping the Lord of All would understand, or at the very least be compassionate enough to let Wulfric try to argue his case when it came time to return to the Halls of Origin.
Two days later, a lookout spotted a thin finger of smoke curling up into the sky some distance from the river. A brief consultation between Wulfric, Halvard and his siblings established that it was unlikely to be a village, given its location. “I would think it’s just travelers,” Wulfric said. “Possibly soldiers on patrol? We ought to be near the border of Camphorae.”
Torvald folded his arms across his chest and stared off into the distance. “Whoever they are, we can’t risk them bringing word that we’re here. We’ll have to deal with them.”
And so Wulfric found himself hastening to keep up with Steinarr as the Gogoat bounded across the Kalosian countryside, Torvald, Skaldi and several other northmen racing along beside him. Torvald’s lips were pulled back in his odd not-quite-grin that he always donned before a fight, and Skaldi’s eyes were tiny pinpricks of black on his green iris. Branna and Dismas were tiny dots in the wide vault of the sky, easily keeping pace with the warriors below.
It was all Wulfric could do not to trip over his spear and keep his slightly too large helmet from falling over his eyes, so it was a welcome relief when he saw Steinarr cantering back towards them over a rise. Halvard swung off the Gogoat’s back and waited for them to catch up. “They’re just over the rise. Wulfric, tell me what you think of them.”
Wulfric followed Halvard up the hill and crouched in the long grass. About twenty men lounged around a fire, a few of them armored and several more sitting within easy reach of weapons. “Those two wagons there look like they belong to traders or merchants. Most of the armed men are likely mercenaries hired to protect the caravan. But see those four men in armor there?” He pointed, and Halvard nodded. “Those are knights. It’s likely they met the other group on the road and decided to all travel together if they’re going in the same direction.”
“The knights could be troublesome,” Halvard admitted. “But we can surprise them. All right.” They slunk back to where the other northmen were waiting. Halvard turned to Torvald. “You’ll come at them head-on with most of the men and draw their focus. I’ll flank them from the west with Steinarr and a few others, and Skaldi, sweep down from the east to pick off any who try to flee.” As the northmen sorted themselves into their respective attack groups, Halvard steered Wulfric into Skaldi’s force. “You’ll be safest here,” he told the monk. “Skaldi will strike last, and at best you’ll only have to terrify a few traders.” Wulfric begrudgingly agreed.
He and the rest of Skaldi’s force curved out away from the trader’s camp before circling back to wait for their signal to attack. While they waited, Wulfric saw Skaldi inhale some kind of spores from his Breloom’s mushroom cap, and the northern priest almost immediately grew more agitated. A few other northmen partook of the strange sacrament, but Wulfric made sure to hang well back. Finally, the shouts of the Kalosian mercenaries began.
Torvald ran down the hillside at the head of his force, Skerast flashing in his hands. The first of the mercenaries raced up to him and had his head lopped off his shoulders for his trouble. Ivarr and his Beartic crashed by Torvald and fell upon the enemy warriors as Branna dropped out of the sky to claw out the eyes of a man who tried to attack Torvald from behind. Torvald spun on his heel and drove one of Skerast’s blades into the man’s unarmored torso even as he opened a gash across another man’s stomach with the other blade. Though he could not hear it from so far off, Wulfric knew that Torvald’s Doublade was likely humming with pleasure at all the blood it was drinking.
As the knights began to advance on Torvald’s men, Halvard and his force appeared from the west, crashing into the flank of the hastily thrown together mercenary formation. Halvard did not let Steinarr lose any momentum, trampling two of the men as the Gogoat continued further into the camp. The largest knight in the company, a man taller and broader than even Torvald, planted his feet before Steinarr’s charge and waited for the Gogoat to run him down. The instant before he did, a Pyroar jumped from the grass and tackled Steinarr to the ground. Halvard jumped from his saddle and rolled to his feet as Steinarr tried to kick the fire type away. With a snarl, Halvard drew his sword and axe and charged at the knight, but he parried the jarl’s sword easily and caught Halvard’s axe on his shield.
Seeing this, Skaldi hissed. “Now! Go now!” His small contingent of warriors sprinted down, whooping and hollering. Dismas drifted lower in the air, letting Wulfric know he was there. Wulfric signaled that the Chatot should go to Halvard’s aid, and the little bird flapped furiously to reach the jarl in time. An enemy Talonflame screamed and moved to intercept him, only to be attacked by Branna. Halvard chanced to look up just as Dismas reached him, and he clapped his hands over his ears. The Kalosian knight took the opportunity to strike, but before his blade could fall, Dismas unleashed a horrifying cry that sent the knight reeling. Halvard grinned, kicked the man in the chest and knocked him to the ground. He placed his sword in the small gap between helmet and armor and drove the point in. The knight struggled for a second, but soon succumbed.
After seeing his partner fall, the knight’s Pyroar fought on with a renewed vigor, but between them, Halvard and Steinarr made quick work of it. For his part, Wulfric waited on the edge of camp, doing his best to look intimidating in his oversize armor and herd fleeing travelers back towards the other northmen. He was seized by panic when he felt someone grab the back of his collar and drag him towards the fray. The realization that it was Skaldi who had grabbed him did little to lessen Wulfric’s fear. The northern priest shoved Wulfric towards three cowering unarmed men and gestured with his axe. “Kill them. Any one of them.”
“Skaldi, I-I can’t, I…”
“Do it!” Wulfric clutched his spear and shook his head. Skaldi growled in disgust. “Oh, so you can kill northmen, but not your own kind?”
“I’ve never killed a northman!”
“You drove a knife through a man’s throat at Yeavenguut!” Skaldi snapped. Wulfric knew it was pointless to argue that it was Halvard who had impaled his would-be assassin, and that Wulfric had acted out of desperation. For that matter, had the man already been dead when Halvard had driven his sword through the man’s guts? There had been so much blood pumping out onto Wulfric’s hands. Maybe he had killed a man. Skaldi had continued ranting. “We’re just savages to you, no better than mad beasts. You’d kill us the same way you’d put down a Mightyena menacing your flocks. May the gods curse you, Wulfric—”
“Wulfric?” one of the cowering men said, picking up Skaldi’s last word. “Wulfric, is that you?”
“Shepherd Aelffred?” Wulfric gasped as the chaplain of the Coumarina monastery tried to stand.
“Wulfric, what are you doing here with these… these pagans? When they took you, we all thought you died, sacrificed in some barbaric ritual.”
“No,” Wulfric said in Kalosian. “They took me, but they let me live. They think I’m one of them now.”
“One of them?” the Shepherd was incredulous. “One of these savages? Wulfric, you shame our order and your vows!”
“I did what I had to survive, Shepherd Aelffred.”
“I suppose it will be on our Lord to judge you, not me.”
Skaldi appeared at Wulfric’s side and pointed to Aelffred. “I’ve changed my mind. You don’t get to pick anymore. Kill him.” He spat in the dirt. “And speak properly, none of the southern garbage you’ve fed the jarl.”
“I won’t, Skaldi.”
“If you don’t, I’ll kill the other two.”
Wulfric fixed his face in what he hoped was an intimidating glare. “You would just kill them anyway. I will not kill an innocent, unarmed man.”
Skaldi shrugged and tossed his axe underhand to Shepherd Aelffred. “Now he’s not unarmed.”
Aelffred picked up the axe and looked at Wulfric. “What is he saying?”
“He wants me to kill you. He gave you the axe because I told him I wouldn’t kill you because you’re unarmed.”
“You’re better than this, Wulfric.”
“That’s what I keep trying to tell myself.”
Skaldi stomped his foot, clearly running out of patience. “Pathetic,” he snarled, wrenching Wulfric’s spear from his hands and driving it through Aelffred’s abdomen. He recovered his axe and smashed in the heads of the other two men. Skaldi glared at Wulfric with the same intensity Wulfric had tried to match and pointed at Aelffred with his bloody axe. “Get your spear.”
Wulfric was forced to recover his spear from Aelffred’s corpse, but to his credit, he managed to stagger out of Skaldi’s sight before vomiting up the contents of his stomach.
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girl-like-substance
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Post by girl-like-substance on Jun 4, 2018 18:21:54 GMT
And here's where Wulfric's initiation into this community really gets going. He was formally inducted it before, but being brought into a party of vikings is how he cements that place. That's Halvard's plan, of course, because he needs the northmen to get used to the idea of working with southerners ahead of his plan to open trade with Kalos in future (side note: I'm pretty sure the various societies we group under the name of their word for “someone who goes abroad” traded as much as they raided, so I guess the level of resistance that Halvard seems to think he'd encounter among his people strikes me as slightly odd; I wonder if it's perhaps because Kalos is a soft, close target and therefore easier to take from than to trade with; wait actually that seems pretty plausible, I guess I've just answered my own question; this is way too long an aside at this point and my semicolon usage has become questionable at best). But it's also the logical next step. Raiding is really important to the people of Rovngalad, and as Wulfric begins to take his place among them, it's natural that he'd end up in the shield wall one day.
Except it isn't so simple, because the target this time is his homeland. That's sort of the weakest part of this arc, honestly – especially in that first “Wulfric feels the deaths of his countrymen keenly but understands it is ultimately necessary for the execution of Halvard's plan” passage, which feels a little detached and clinical from both Wulfric and the action at hand. Part of that's the language, part of that's the way it sits as a little insular block of analysis, alongside the violence as opposed to interwoven with it; either way, it comes across as something you're getting out of the way so you can get on with the action. Where that kind of thing works much better is with the confrontation with Skaldi over the killing of Aelffred later on: that dramatises his inner turmoil much better, by placing it very firmly in the context of the action, and what his new allegiance demands he do to earn his place among the northmen. That's much more satisfying, and gives a strong sense of how Wulfric is caught between these two competing sets of ties.
Finally, I found a few typos and stuff this time around; here they are:
That repetition there doesn't really work, especially since it pits defenders against defenders, which is a weird way of thinking about battles.
This is something that might be falling out of fashion, so you could argue it either way (and it's also super pedantic so you could just ignore it and nobody would notice or care), but technically noun phrases used as modifiers need to be hyphenated, so it would be a “hollowed-out horn”.
One, I think it's Skaldi's pupils that are pinpricks against his irises, and two, unless he has one giant eye with two pupils in it, that should probably be “irises”.
Given the naming conventions of this fic, I think you might mean “fire aligned” here.
Excellent work, as always! I'd kinda forgotten about the Kalos raiding arc, but now that I've started rereading it I remember that it has an amazing climax, so I'm looking forward to experiencing that all over again.
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Post by Firebrand on Jun 16, 2018 2:37:33 GMT
Chapter 10
Wulfric stood alone on the worn road, staring across the fields at the walls of Camphorae. A line of travelers and pilgrims filed through the town’s gate after a cursory inspection by the town guards. He swallowed the lump in his throat and forced his feet forward. When he reached the gate, the guard looked him up and down, taking in his dusty monk’s habit. “The cathedral is just off the main street, brother,” the man said before waving him through.
Wulfric let out a breath he didn’t know he was holding after he passed through the portico and into the quiet cobbled streets of the small town. Instead of heading for the Arcean cathedral, despite how much he wanted to pray, he made himself walk down to where a tributary of the river flowed through a wide grate into the city. The shadows were lengthening as night set in, making the fortress north of the town grow more imposing. Wulfric slipped into the tunnel at the riverbank and down towards the opening on the other side. Torvald, Skaldi and Ivarr crouched on a small stone lip next to the water while Wulfric struggled with the rusted iron padlock that would allow the grate to swing inwards.
“Wait a moment,” Torvald hissed before clicking his tongue at Dismas. The Chatot fluttered down from Wulfric’s shoulder as Torvald muttered a handful of commands. “You’ll want to stand back,” the warrior advised Wulfric. Dismas’s wings began to glow as he channeled his inner power, making his muscles and feathers stiff and rigid as steel. With a squawk, he beat at the lock until it fell from the grate with a clatter.
Ivarr shoved the barrier open, its hinges protesting with a long, drawn-out shriek. His Beartic lumbered in after him, the massive white beast’s shoulders stooped to fit in the cramped darkness of the tunnel. “Let’s hurry and get the fun started, eh?” Ivarr chuckled, clapping one hand on Wulfric’s shoulder as he crept by.
Skaldi splashed through the shallow water, his Breloom and Ampharos bounding after him. “I’ll set a few fires,” he called back to Torvald. “That should buy you some time.”
Torvald waited until Ivarr and Skaldi had disappeared into Camphorae to set about their assigned tasks before turning to Wulfric. “I’ll admit, I’m impressed that worked.”
Wulfric shrugged. “Most towns on a river like this have a way to let the water flow through, and they get used to smuggle things in and out. I doubted Camphorae would be any different.”
Torvald smirked. “It’s better than Halvard’s plan.” The jarl had thought to conceal several warriors in the bed of a wagon pulled by Steinarr and driven by Wulfric so that they could infiltrate the walls of Camphorae and open the gates for the larger assault when night fell. He had hit a snag when Wulfric pointed out that wagons were very likely to be searched by the guards, and their ruse would undoubtedly be discovered. However, barring an alternative, Halvard was willing to forge ahead. Wulfric had managed to dissuade him from this course by proposing a different solution that would put fewer men at risk but ultimately achieve the same goal.
A Kalosian army would be unlikely to try and infiltrate a city from the river tunnels, because it would be terribly difficult to bring in a substantial force and deny them the use of any of the large pokemon that were staples in Kalosian warfare. As such, the tunnel was likely to be unguarded as it posed no defensive risk to an inland city under the king’s protection. And so, Wulfric had infiltrated the city and was preparing to throw its gates wide open for the northmen.
Torvald and Wulfric waited by the riverbank until they saw thick plumes of smoke rising from across the city. On the high street above them, they heard the rapid footfalls of town guardsmen as they raced to fight the fires before they could spread. Torvald flexed his fingers and Skerast wrapped around his arms. Wulfric palmed a dagger he had worn beneath his robes, figuring that even on the slight chance he was searched at the gate, it would not be far-fetched for a lone traveler, even a monk, to be armed.
Torvald raced to the guardhouse, Wulfric close on his heels. The northman crashed through the door to the small room at the base of the tower before Wulfric could catch up. The monk heard a strangled cry and two heavy thumps. When he peered around the doorframe, he saw Torvald standing before an overturned table with two corpses bleeding out on the floor. The city gates had been shut at sunset, and the locks were sturdy constructions of wood and metal. Torvald gestured at the heavy doors. “Figure out how to get those open before someone notices we’re here.”
After a moment’s examination, Wulfric instructed Torvald on how to throw the bolts back while he operated the levers that guided the mechanisms. Together, they pushed the left door open wide enough to admit a man, allowing in a stream of northmen waiting in the shadows beneath the outer wall. By now, the city guards had taken notice, but their shouts of alarm came too late. The northmen silenced them with arrows and blades as they spread out into the city.
When Ulfi and his Druddigon squeezed through the gates, he and Hjodtr helped Torvald push the doors wider, allowing Halvard and Steinarr to ride through. Ragnhildr and Svein ran alongside the Gogoat with Geirr and Talvar, the two fire aligned giddy with excitement. Halvard nodded to his warriors and grinned. “To the castle!” The northmen cheered as they took off up the high street.
By now Skaldi’s fires had spread, despite the best efforts of the town guards. Wulfric figured they had to be a suitably terrifying sight for the guards stationed outside of Duke Verron’s fortress, a shadowy horde appearing suddenly from the flames. Halvard raised his axe high while his handpicked band of warriors formed a shield wall in front of him. “Charge!”
The northmen screamed as they raced at the castle gates. Verron’s knights ran to meet them, their armor glinting in the firelight. They crashed into the Shieldwall, and the warriors of Rovngalad began to push them back after the initial charge broke on their shields. The northmen parted to allow Torvald through, Skerast’s two blades glowing with white light. Steinarr soared over their heads, landing just before the portico of Verron’s castle. Several members of Verron’s guard were trying to lower the heavy metal grate to bar the northmen from entering, but Ulfi saw their strategy. He and Hjodtr ran underneath the falling metal curtain and braced themselves, supporting the crushing weight of the steel with their muscular forearms. “Hurry up!” the boat builder shouted. “I can’t hold this forever!”
Torvald and Aesgir ran inside and efficiently butchered the men lowering the gate before raising it back up. Ulfi massaged his arms and grimaced as Ragnhildr and Halvard coordinated the rout of Verron’s knights back towards the burning town. They were pursued by a detachment of northmen, leaving the main gate of the castle undefended but for the corpses of the slain. Wulfric tried to steady himself and waved Halvard over. “If this castle is anything like the one at Coumarina, what we’re looking for should be in the armory, and that should be near the guard station.”
The jarl nodded and led his remaining warriors inside. Other guards within the castle itself ran out to meet them, but the northmen dispatched them with casual ease. Due to the nature of their attack, many of the knights were unarmored and, despite their skill with the blade, tunics and nightshirts did little to deter the northmen’s swords and axes. When they finally broke down the door to the armory, Halvard directed his men to take anything they could fit into the sacks they carried. Wulfric watched as the northmen snatched helmets, gauntlets, breastplates and swords in a frantic haste, their sacks clanking with the weight of the metal.
Torvald glanced at his brother. “I’m sure if we looked, we could find enough gold to make our ships ride low in the water.”
Halvard brusquely shook his head. “There’s no time for that. We need to leave.”
The northmen came up from the castle catacombs only to find the doors to the outside had been shut and the two sentries they had left to guard their retreat had been cut down. A broad-shouldered man in gilt-edged armor sat mounted on the back of a Rapidash in the middle of a company of knights. “You’ll go no further, pagan savages.”
Halvard stepped forward and swept into a low bow that still managed to come off as sarcastic. “Duke Verron, I presume?” he asked in accented Kalosian. “I am sorry we had to meet like this. In my own homeland, I am something of a duke as well.”
The duke’s scowl deepened, and Wulfric had to fight down the urge to step backwards. Verron stroked his beard. “A savage who speaks a civilized tongue, but a savage no less.” He gestured at the sacks Halvard’s men carried. “You have something that belongs to me.”
Halvard shrugged. “Ah, but you had something that I needed. I found these lying in your armory unused. Surely I can put them to better use than gathering dust. Your men all seem to be armored already. Surely you can part with these?” When Verron’s face darkened still further, Halvard winked. “Why don’t we have a wager? If I win, we leave with our spoils. If I lose, we surrender the armor back to you.”
“What would the wager be?”
“In your land, knights ride at each other and try to unseat the other one. They… they…” Halvard snapped his fingers at Wulfric. “What do they do?”
“They tilt.”
“They tilt. Yes. We will have a tilt.”
Verron’s face split into a sinister grin. “Yes, we shall have a tilt.” Wulfric swallowed the lump in his throat. Duke Verron had never been unhorsed, and his skill as a rider was known all throughout Kalos. Wulfric had told Halvard this, but the northman seemed blithely unconcerned as he swung up on Steinarr’s back and drew his sword and axe. Verron tapped his heels against his Rapidash’s flanks and trotted forward. His men parted before him and stood at attention.
At Verron’s word, he and Halvard galloped at each other, their mounts’ hooves clattering on the stone floor of the great hall. Just before they collided, Halvard jerked Steinarr away, and they raced off to the left. “Coward!” Verron bellowed. “You filthy coward!” The duke turned just in time to see Halvard raise his axe and throw it. The weapon spun through the air and buried itself in the thinner armor of the duke’s back, making Verron lurch and fall from his horse. Steinarr continued his charge, slamming his horns into the doors to the castle and throwing them open.
Torvald roared as he rushed the line of Verron’s men at arms, Skerast’s glowing blades ripping through the mail of the first unfortunate man. The other northmen in Halvard’s company followed, throwing the Kalosian ranks into chaos. When they emerged from the castle, Wulfric saw the town to the south was entirely engulfed in flames. “Hurry!” Halvard called. “If we don’t move now, we won’t be able to get through!”
Ragnhildr stuck two fingers in her mouth and whistled. Sigrund dropped from the sky and several warriors pressed their sacks of armor on the Noivern. She took as many as she could carry in her claws and lifted off with several powerful beats of her wings, straining under the weight of the iron. “It will take her a while to get those back to the ships,” Ragnhildr told her brothers. “We’re on our own for now.”
Halvard nodded and led his men back towards the town gates. As they ran by the burning cathedral, Wulfric saw Skaldi standing on the stairs, his arms bedecked in the holy golden bangles that had once adorned the back of the altar. The northern priest laughed uproariously as the flames made the beams of the church creak and groan. “Get away from there!” Torvald bellowed as the first of the supports crashed down. Skaldi kept laughing as he raced after them, and Wulfric saw that the priest was covered head to toe in blood. He forced himself not think of what had happened to the Shepherds and monks who had no doubt sought shelter in the sacristy.
Branna screamed as she flew on ahead, swooping and diving through the leaping flames. A small contingent of surviving city guards stood in a semi-circle around the city gate with a troop of Pawniard and Bisharp. The northmen formed up a shield wall to engage them when a loud bellow rang out over the roar of the flames. Ivarr and his Beartic crashed into the guards from their flank, scattering their ranks. Halvard sounded the charge, and the shield wall advanced in the confusion, splitting to allow Hjodtr and Geirr through to box in the Pawniard troops. A flock of Murkrow were released from the top of the guard tower, no doubt to inform the neighboring lords that the northmen had invaded.
“Branna!” Torvald shouted. “Stop them!”
“You too, Dismas!” Wulfric added.
The two birds soared off into the night, their wings glowing as they stiffened their muscles for aerial combat. Dismas released a concussive burst of sound that disoriented the flock while Branna soared upwards only to stoop again, picking off the stunned dark aligned one by one.
Wulfric would have loved the opportunity to watch Dismas display his newfound combat prowess, but a Bisharp had managed to approach the shield wall and was currently battering Wulfric’s shield. The monk braced himself and shoved back, knocking the steel aligned off-balance. He brought up the edge of his shield and brought it down hard on the Bisharp’s head, and the steel aligned collapsed. The shield wall pressed forward, and the Kalosian defenders gave way, allowing the northmen to get through to the gate. Once they had reformed the shield wall in the arch of the gate, the captain of the Kalosian guards shouted something. With a rattle of chains, the heavy iron portcullis above the gate began to lower to trap the northmen within the city wall. Reinforcements spilled out from the burning streets, hemming in the warriors of Rovngalad.
As the iron grate crashed down, Ulfi and Hjodtr positioned themselves to try and catch it as they had the one in Verron’s castle. “No!” Wulfric cried. “This one will be much heavier. Get clear!” Hjodtr moved much faster than his trainer, tackling the old boat builder out of the way, and they both tumbled outside of the gates just as the metal portcullis finished its descent.
“Get clear!” Halvard shouted to Ulfi. “Go back to the boats and be ready to sail off! If they come for you before we do, just leave without us!”
“Jarl Halvard…”
“That’s an order, Ulfi! If they come for you, we’ll all be dead!”
Ulfi nodded and together he and Hjodtr vanished into the darkness outside of the city. Torvald glanced at his brother. “We don’t have a lot of options here. Even if we could fight our way down to the river gate, there’s no way we could all get out.”
Halvard gritted his teeth. “And trying to fight our way through might result in more losses.” He swore and shook his head. “I don’t know what to do. I’m all out of clever plans.” He turned and locked eyes with Wulfric. “Please. I need your help.”
Wulfric’s mind worked furiously. There was no way they could hold off the Kalosian soldiers and break through the portcullis. Their backs were literally to the wall, and it seemed as though Halvard’s much-vaunted luck had run out. Wulfric couldn’t shake the feeling that this was his fault, that with a clearer plan of retreat he could have avoided this, could have gotten all the northmen out safely. But he could see no way out of this.
“Northern savages!” Duke Verron boomed from the middle of the high street. The duke was supported by two of his men, and obviously in pain, though he had obviously only taken the minimal treatment for the wound in his back. “When you’re all dead, I’ll hang you from the walls of Camphorae to show the world what happens when pagans invade my land! Onward!”
His soldiers and knights advanced on the narrow gateway arch, and Wulfric shrank back against the metal grate. “Shield wall!” Ragnhildr shouted. “Form up and brace yourselves!” The northmen hurriedly got into formation, overlapping the edges of their shields and shifting their weight to best repel the attackers. A few muttered things to their neighbors, hushed goodbyes and well wishes, promises to meet again in the Cold Halls. Wulfric placed a hand over his chest where his iron ring sat and whispered a brief prayer for a mercifully quick death.
“Kill them!” Verron shouted. “Kill them all!”
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girl-like-substance
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Post by girl-like-substance on Jun 24, 2018 15:39:43 GMT
Ah, this bit! I remember parts of this, especially everyone being up against a wall with no obvious means of escape. I don't remember how they get away, though, so I'm looking forward to seeing how that one works out.
One thing I really like about this chapter is how effectively the northmen make use of Wulfric and his knowledge here. Like, their knowledge of the formalised codes that govern combat in Kalos must come from him – and it's abusing that which grants them victory. I'm not quite sure when we are in history for these two codes to clash (I kinda thought it was like, eighth or ninth century, which seems a bit early for knights in full plate with well-developed chivalric codes), but I have to say, it's super fun to see the northmen's victory-at-all-costs way of thinking deployed against Kalois* ideas about formal warfare. Halvard's use of what Wulfric taught him to make Verron accept him into what Verron thinks of as civilised codes of conduct – before breaking the rules to put an axe in his back and effect his escape – is really elegant.
Also, and this is completely unconnected to that, but it's really interesting to compare pokémon here and in Hawlucha Man; their superpowers seem really toned down in this fic. Like, a single shield bash – with the edge of the shield rather than the boss, and from a warrior who probably isn't as strong as the others in the line – is enough to fell a bisharp here. I feel like hitting a steel animal on the head with what is probably a wooden shield wouldn't necessarily get that kind of effect even in the real world. So there's an interesting variance in levels of toughness; I suspect that the real criterion here for how tough a pokémon turns out to be is how big a part they play in the story.
Anyway. Cliffhanger! As I said, I don't remember how this one resolves itself, so I'm definitely excited for next time.
*I'm aware the canon adjective for Kalos is “Kalosian”, but I cannot in good conscience pass up an opportunity to invent some pseudo-Frenchisms.
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Post by Firebrand on Jun 30, 2018 1:10:03 GMT
Chapter 11
Wulfric’s only consolation was that his death was likely to be mercifully quick. He might have forsaken his place in Arceus’s embrace, but at least he wouldn’t have to be terrified and in pain any longer. The northmen in front of him stood resolute in their shield wall. They had trained their whole life for this moment, to accept and embrace their deaths. Their pokemon stood behind them, disciplined and barely fidgeting. When one of the Kalosian Rhyhorn charged the line, Ivarr’s Beartic jumped over the ranks of northmen and hurled the rock aligned back at their enemies.
“Don’t give up,” Torvald said to the men and women in the shield wall. He didn’t raise his voice as Halvard might have done. He didn’t have to. “Don’t relent, not until they crush the last breath from your chest. Not until every last drop of blood you have is spilled.” The warriors around him nodded, their faces hardening as they steeled their resolve.
Sigrund screamed by overhead as she returned from her charge to carry back the sacks of armor to the river. The Kalosian archers fired a volley of arrows at the Noivern to drive her back. She shrieked as she winged higher into the upper air, and the northmen retreated a few paces to escape the force of her concussive blasts. Wulfric found himself pressed even closer against the iron grating that trapped them. The iron bars were cold against his flesh, and he remembered how earlier that day Dismas had managed to use his wings to cut through the padlock on the river gate. Of course the Chatot was not remotely strong enough to try and cut through the heavy iron portcullis, but it did give Wulfric an idea. Now that Sigrund had returned, he might just be able to make it work.
Wulfric shoved his way over to Ragnhildr and told her his plan. The warrior woman stuck two fingers in her mouth and whistled a command to her dragon. Sigrund dove again, but this time before the archers could fire on her, she let loose with a long roar. The dragon’s voice carried a physical force, driving the Kalosians back and holding them in place. “Torvald!” Wulfric shouted over the noise. “Have Branna unleash all the heat and flame she can on the edges of the grate!” Torvald did not waste time questioning Wulfric, and hollered for his Talonflame to do as the monk instructed. Ragnhildr and Svein ordered Geirr and Talvar to do the same, and soon the metal that joined the portcullis to the gateway arch glowed a dull red.
Wulfric reached out and grabbed the two closest warriors, Ivarr and a shield maiden he was fairly sure was named Helga. “Get your pokemon to attack the center of the gate, and hurry! Sigrund can’t hold long.” Ivarr barked the command to his Beartic, and Helga instructed her Bisharp to attack with everything it had. The portcullis began to groan as the metal strained under the force it was under. Skaldi ordered his Breloom to join the assault, and the grass aligned began to strike where Beartic could not reach.
Under Wulfric’s direction, the fire aligned continued their attack on the outer edge of the portcullis, though Wulfric could see that their time was growing short. Sigrund was beginning to tire, and they could only keep up their desperate attack on the gate so long as the Noivern was able to cover them. Halvard seemed to notice this as well, because he ordered the other pokemon to stand down. He swung up onto Steinarr’s back and murmured something to the Gogoat. The grass aligned bleated and lowered his horned head. With a snort, Steinarr charged at the weakened portcullis, and tore the grate from its supports with a scream of wrenching metal. The northmen gave a ragged cheer as Halvard swung his mount back around.
“Retreat!” he bellowed. “Run for your lives! Get to the river!” He tapped his heels against Steinarr’s flanks, and they galloped over the Kalosian plain. Wulfric let himself get caught up in the flood of warriors stampeding out of the gate. Dismas fluttered near his head as Sigrund and Branna soared overhead. Ragnhildr sprinted by him, dragging Svein by one hand. “Torvald!” she screamed over her shoulder.
Her brother stood just outside the gate, Skerast wrapped around his wrists and forearms. When the first of the Kalosians ran out after them, Torvald cut them down as they passed, but even he could not hold forever. “Torvald, get clear!” Wulfric shouted, but the warrior obviously could not hear him. He glanced up at Dismas. “I need your help, my friend.” He took a deep breath and shouted “Torvald, run! We still need you!”
Dismas opened his beak wide and boomed, in a passable facsimile of Wulfric’s voice amplified several times, “Torvald, run! We still need you!” Torvald seemed to wake from a deep trance as he drove one of his blades through the torso of a final Kalosian before turning to run after the rest of the northmen.
Skaldi and several of the retreating warriors were setting fire to the fields as they ran by, covering their retreat with a long curtain of fire. The Kalosians ran through the flames, beating out the fires that smoldered on their armor. Their valor did them credit, but it did not stop the arrows of Skaldi’s men from cutting them down. When a great dark shadow appeared on the far side of the flames, the northern priest looked positively gleeful. He nocked an arrow in his bow and waited as Duke Verron flew through the fiery curtain on his Rapidash. Skaldi let fly, and the arrow flew straight and true, puncturing the duke’s throat in the gap between helmet and breastplate. Skaldi watched as the duke toppled from his horse and grasped at his throat before turning and running back to the ships.
The northmen hastened down the river to where they had left their longships and boarded as quickly as possible. The few warriors they had left behind to cover their retreat sat at their oars, ready to shove off as soon as soon as Halvard gave the word. When Ulfi saw Torvald, Ragnhildr and Wulfric, the boat builder nearly collapsed with relief. “By the gods, how did you manage to get of there alive?”
Ragnhildr jumped into her longship. “A little quick thinking from Wulfric.”
Torvald nodded. “We never would have made it this far without him.”
Ulfi pulled the monk into a brief embrace. “I knew I wasn’t wrong to put my faith in you,” he said before taking his place at the oar. Wulfric sat down beside him and squared his shoulders. Though he was exhausted and sore, he knew that they needed to put as much distance between themselves and Camphorae as possible. Though Dismas and Branna had managed to intercept the Murkrow earlier, other messages would be sent out, and soon there would be patrols looking for them up and down the river. Though the current was now in their favor, the rivers in the Kalosian interior drifted along lazily and that alone was not likely to help them escape.
“Ready!” Torvald called from the rear of the ship. “Heave to! Row!”
The five longships cast off and began their journey back down river. Halvard picked his way down the center aisle of the longship and tapped the warrior across from Wulfric on the shoulder. When the man looked up, Halvard gestured at his oar further down the boat. The man stood carefully and went to take Halvard’s place. The jarl sat down with a groan and took a minute to settle into the rhythm of pulling the oar. When he had the tempo down, he glanced over at Wulfric. “Well, that wasn’t a complete disaster. At least we got the armor, and most of us made it out alive.”
“It might make trading with the Kalosians a little more complicated down the line.”
“That’s a field to cross when it’s time to till it.” The jarl sighed. “How long do you think we have until they start trying to kill us again?”
Wulfric pondered for a moment. “The Camphorae soldiers are as bloodied and exhausted as we are. I think it won’t be hard to get ahead of them. But they have allies up and down the river. All it takes are a few air aligned to spread the message before everyone from here to Geosenge Village knows about us.” The monk nodded to himself. “I don’t think we need to worry much about pursuit. Your longships are faster than Kalosian river barges, but I suppose there’s always the threat of an ambush. No, I think what we need to worry most about are archers on the shore and any blockades they manage to set up in the river itself.”
“I’ll have Aesgir send the Sharpedo ahead of us. They might be able to stop any blockades early on. Anything they can’t manage, Ivarr can set Dagmar on.”
And so it went. Aesgir ordered Gunnar and Gunnhild downriver, and the Sharpedo tore off in rapid excitement, their dorsal fins kicking up large wakes as they sliced through the water. Dagmar drifted along with one clawed hand resting on the rail of the longship. The Beartic had been so exhausted after the fight at Camphorae’s gates that he had been unable to drag himself aboard the longship, and now drifted lazily along in the warm waters of the river while he gathered his strength again.
Wulfric sympathized with the great white beast. All he wanted to do was curl up on his cot beside Halvard’s hearth and sleep for a week. Every inch of him ached, and it was only going to get worse as the northmen fought to keep abreast of the Kalosians. He and Halvard had often discussed that the flight back down the river was certain to be the most dangerous part of the raid, and Wulfric needed to keep alert. After breaching the gates at Camphorae, the northmen now looked at him as far more than just a mouthpiece for Halvard’s orders. He had planned the raid before the attack on Camphorae, but he was truly in command now.
The first attack came the day after their raid. Two troops of archers sprang up from the riverbanks and began to fire on the northmen. Wulfric saw two warriors fall before they could get their shields raised. Half of the northmen formed a variation on the shield wall, keeping their shields high to form a curtain of wood and metal above their heads as the other half continued to row. Sigrund, Branna and the other air aligned took the sky to harry the archers to cover the retreat. Dismas started to fly off as well, but Wulfric called him back. For all of the Chatot’s newfound power and the scrappiness that came with it, he was still in a different class entirely from the northern pokemon that had been bred and trained their whole lives to fight.
When that assault failed, the Kalosians tried again further downriver. A hastily erected blockade stopped the longships, and despite Gunnar and Gunnhild’s best efforts the Sharpedo had been unable to break it down. While Kalosian soldiers on the riverbank tried to pick them off, Dagmar dropped into the water and swam beneath the river to where the blockade stood. He climbed atop the wooden structure and began to batter it with his heavy fists while Sigrund drew the archers’ fire. When the barricade collapsed, the Kalosians moved to the second part of their plan, turning a winch to raise a chain across the river and barring the longships from passing through. Without waiting for any orders from Ivarr, Dagmar seized the chain and pulled, wrenching the anchor from the ground and dragging it into the river. The Beartic roared as he swung the broken chain above his head, and the Kalosian archers hastily retreated.
Ivarr jumped up onto the prow of his longship and cheered as Dagmar calmed down and swam back to the boat. The warrior shouted jeers to the fleeing Kalosians as the longships continued on their way.
The northmen now slept in short shifts to ensure that there were always enough hands pulling the oars. When Halvard and Wulfric finished their shift in the small hours of the night, they hunkered down in the sides of the longship. The jarl had been pensive ever since watching Dagmar break the chain, and when Wulfric asked him what he was thinking, Halvard took a moment before responding. “What the Kalosians tried to do to us here is what Ingmar built at the end of his fjord, yes?”
“More or less, I suppose, but—”
“But you don’t think we can get through his chain the same way?”
Wulfric nodded. “King Ingmar’s chain will be much stronger than this one, and far better anchored. Dagmar may be strong, but I doubt he’s strong enough to bring down an entire stone tower on his own.”
Halvard sighed. “Of course it can never be that simple.”
“Not to be presumptuous, but perhaps we ought to figure out how to get out of this before we start planning the next creative way to get ourselves killed?”
After breaking through the slapdash blockade, the Kalosians had given the northmen a few days of peace. Wulfric had begun to suspect that the Kalosians had simply decided it was not worth the time or effort to continue pursuing them and had cut their losses. Though the northmen were still making haste towards the sea, their flight had lost some of the desperation they had following their escape from Camphorae. However, as they skirted past Geosenge Village and came into sight of the open sea, the northerners saw why the Kalosians had left them alone.
Drifting in the ocean was a flotilla of Kalosian naval barges, hemming in the northern longships as they exited the river delta. The northerners instinctively took up their weapons and braced for battle, but Wulfric commanded them to wait. He pointed out over the water to where soldiers and their pokemon massed on the decks of the barges. “They outnumber us at least five to one. There’s no way we can get out of this if we attack them directly. But we don’t need to. They need to hunt down every last one of us, but we just need to escape. Look at those barges. Ulfi, do they look like they can keep pace with our ships?”
The boat builder shook his head. “Probably can’t sail worth a damn either.”
“Exactly. Kalosian ships are good for moving lots of things from one place to the other. They don’t necessarily do it fast, and they don’t have to be very nimble to do it. But you northerners live on the sea. You know boats better than anyone. Certainly, the Kalosians will kill us if they catch us. But they actually have to catch us first.”
“But they have more ships that we do,” Ivarr said. “What’s to stop them from just tightening the net? Then we wouldn’t be able to get clear.”
“Right. We’ll need to disrupt them, create some kind of distraction.” Wulfric pointed at two boats to the northwest. “Aesgir, I need you to have Gunnar and Gunnhild attack the hulls of those barges there. Torvald and Ivarr, we need Branna and Dagmar to attack the barge directly west of us. We’ll make them think we’re trying to get out to sea.” He turned to Ragnhildr. “I need you to go up with Sigrund to attack the barges from the air. She’s been our best asset in disrupting the Kalosians so far, and she’s strong enough to handle any air aligned the Kalosians use to stop you. Fly in a wide arc, starting in the west and moving north. Once you reach that barge there,” Wulfric said, pointing at the one directly north of them, “hit it with everything you have. That’s the one we need to get rid of to break through.” Ragnhildr nodded, and Wulfric continued. “The rest of us need to row with everything we have. We’ll go directly north. The waters there are littered with boulders that will make navigation difficult for their larger boats. The longships should be able to pass through.
Once we’re sure that they aren’t pursuing us any longer, tack west and out into the open ocean. From there, sail back northeast to Rovngalad. If your longship gets separated from the others, don’t wait or try to find your way back. Just sail home. Any objections?”
When no one spoke up, Halvard ordered his warriors into position. Gunnar and Gunnhild shot off through the shallows to harry their targets while Dagmar surged off through the lapping waves to the west. Branna circled over the Beartic’s head and let him strike the hull first before diving at the rigging, her feathers cloaked in flames. The soldiers on the deck quickly turned their attention from Dagmar to the spreading blaze, though with each fire they put out, Branna’s next dive would set several more.
The barge the Sharpedo had been sent to attack lurched dangerously to one side as one of the water aligned managed to breach the hull. Aesgir cheered as the barge began to tip, pitching the soldiers into the sea. Many were weighted down by heavy armor and sank like stones, while those who could swim hurried to neighboring barges. While most of the latter made it, others fell victim to Gunnar and Gunnhild’s gnashing jaws.
The Kalosian ships began to move in on the northmen’s boats, just as Ivarr had predicted. But just before they hemmed in the northerners, Sigrund dropped out of the sky and unleashed a deafening roar. The sound rattled the teeth in Wulfric’s skull, and he doubted that the soldiers on the Kalosian barges fared much better. Sigrund directed her blast in an arc around the formation, the wall of sound splintering timbers and making the ears of several soldiers bleed. When she brought her wrath to bear on the northernmost ship, she unleashed her full power, using the sound of her roar to breach the hull and split the mast.
“Now!” Wulfric screamed, and the northmen began to row frantically. A few of the Kalosians on the sinking barge tried to stop their ships with flaming arrows, but Halvard had dispatched several of the women and young men to stand ready with shields to catch them. The longships between the damaged barges and headed towards the rocky shoals to the north. The rowers on the Kalosian barges worked to pursue them, and Wulfric directed the longships to scatter.
Torvald nodded to his brother from the deck of his own ship before tacking west, slipping out of sight behind a rocky spar. Halvard directed his crew north into the shoals. Several Kalosian boats attempted to follow them, but their wider decks made it nearly impossible for them to navigate the treacherous waters. The northerners worked their oars as Halvard called the cadence, and soon they had weaved their way through the rocks and out into the open ocean. Using the sun as their guide, the longship tacked westward into deeper waters for several hours before turning back north for home.
The journey back was largely uneventful, and in time they rendezvoused with the other four longships. Two of them had been badly scratched in the shoals, but the damage was not enough to compromise the hull. As they made their way back to Rovngalad, they kept the Kalosian coastline in view, but only barely. A watcher on the shore would not have been able to see them, and they took care to avoid well-known fishing lanes.
Finally, after days of travel, the northmen passed the first of the fjords that marked the entrance to the northlands. Weary but eager to return home, the warriors found the strength to reach Rovngalad after only two more days. However, as they approached the mouth of the fjord, Ulfi scowled. “Something doesn’t seem right.”
Trails of smoke drifted up over the hills around the village, though they were darker and more acrid than the normal cooking fires could account for. No Mareep roamed the hills, though they should have been out to pasture. The longships passed through the mouth of the fjord, and the northerners were left in mute shock as they sailed towards what was left of the village.
Rovngalad was in ruins, burned to the ground.
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