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Post by Manic on Apr 24, 2019 1:20:21 GMT
Update #6: Revelation
June 23rd - 24th, 2012
Well, here we are. Oreburgh in all its glory. Its smelly, messy, grimy glory. *grimace* Fyuuuu. :/ Yeah, I'm not a huge fan either. Let's just stop off here. I hope that you don't mind, Manic... Hmmm? Just stand back, try not to panic.... Look out, baby! She's gonna go off!
...as my power swells titanic! *gawks* Merciful heavens, woman! Wait, I thought Crobat evolved based on happiness! Under your masterful wing / Never will I know defeat! / Know now this important thing: / You've helped make my life complete! Fuh...wow! That's not all, Manic! Something's moving in your backpack!
Oh! Uhm, hi, Michael! Hi, mommy! *snicker* Er...Roxy, help me out here. What do I do? Baby, you tell that boy you ain't his momma, it's gonna break his heart! Just play along for now. If you say so. Michael, we're going to have you sit in the back and hold an Exp Share for a while until you're caught up, okay? Okay! Love you, mommy! Do you need some maternity leave, Manic? Don't give up your day job, Nero.
(Later that night...)
Franklin, I hope you don't mind...I need someone who can listen, and you seem pretty good at it. *tilts head* Don't worry, we've already cleared out this route. It's safe for you and me to go it alone as long as we don't go below. *nod* I've been trying hard to keep my head up around the others, but...I don't know how long I can keep this up. They already know something is wrong, but is it even right to tell them? *waits* Worse, am I being selfish? Just because my time is limited, that doesn't mean theirs has to be. Poor D...er, The Dave could've lived a long, happy life if I hadn't come along. *shakes head* You don't think so? Hmmm. Maybe you're right. I could tell he was anxious to get in on the action. Hell, that's what killed him, in a way. Furthermore, I think I see now why nobody ever gets to the Elite Four anymore. These guys cheat with both hands! *nod!* They've got to be stopped, and it's been so long since anyone has even attempted the league challenge that if it's going to happen, I guess it's up to me.
I'm delighted to hear that you've finally come to your senses. Whoah! You...you can talk? I guess evolution did the trick. No, Manic. I could always speak, but we never had a private moment. Wait, so you were just waiting for us to be alone? Yes. There is much you must yet know. I have been watching you from afar since long before you rescued me in Eterna Forest. Come again? Forces are aligned against you, Manic. I am aware of your condition. Know this: your illness was forced upon you unnaturally. You're saying someone did this to me? Why?! There are always those that seek vengeful souls to twist and manipulate for their own vile ends. You do not - could not - know of such things, but they are all too real. If I'm going to die in a month, isn't this basically murder? Yes. Remember, though: death does not preclude life. You're saying I can die and somehow still live? Chase your dream. Claim your rightful heritage and follow your chosen path. You already have what you need most. How could I possibly already have what I need most? I was not certain at first, but you have removed all doubt. Following your friend into unknown territory, striking out on your own despite a debilitating illness. Instinctively placing yourself between Looker and your allies, openly challenging those obviously larger and stronger than yourself. Your lion-hearted nature asserts itself wherever you go, Manic the Courageous, and it will see you through the dark times to come. Um...thanks...I think? I don't feel particularly courageous, though. The truly brave seldom do. Let us return to the others for now. Well, okay, I guess.
...but not before we kick a little butt. Now you're talkin'.
Aw, hey, c'mon, don't talk like that. It's true, though! I just beat the second gym. Me too, actually. Really? Well...I've seen about thirty pokemon, how about you? Er, yeah! Same here, right about. Son, I know you ain't lyin' to that girl! Mommy's fibbing? Fyuuu, fyuuuuu. Lies are kind once in a while. / Please stop being so judgmental. / Being kind is just his style. / For her, it's developmental! Mommy's fibbing...to be nice? Yes, Michael. Something like that. Hooray! Whoah, what's this?
You're kinda cool, mom. Child, you just about scared me to death! Sorry about that. Now, come on. It just means he's happy. And if he's happy, I'm happy! Awww, that's adorable! I'm jealous. Oh, wow, right! You haven't met everyone. Let's see, I know you've met Nero and Roxy and Zelda, but this is June, here's Franklin, and this little guy is Michael. Wow, you've got a great team going! Where are you keeping The Dave? I...Dawn, listen... What's wrong? I'm afflicted with Nuzlocke. Gardenia pulled some kind of trick on me during our match. She...she murdered him. In cold blood. Sweet Arceus... I know, but that's why I have to keep going. Stopping now would be a slap in the face to The Dave and all he stood for. I understand. Manic, I want you to take these.
Holy...are you sure? You're going to need all the help you can get. I've heard of Nuzlocke, of course, but I've never known someone afflicted by it. Stay safe, and grind extra-hard. I will. For now, a quick Repel, and I'm off toward Hearthome. Very nice, my friend. She's a fine specimen. What? Baby, I know you ain't that dumb. That girl likes you! Sure, and I like her too. Oooh, you are still just a kid.
Creepy. Creepy. Fyuuuu... Moooooom, I wanna leave! Agreed. C'mon, let's just get through it, the mountain is supposed to be narrow here.
EXTRA creepy. What kind of freak waits in the dark for somebody to walk by? *frowns* Here's some wisdom I'll impart: / Maybe we should all be leaving? / I vote that we now depart / Lest some of us wind up grieving! Agreed. Wholeheartedly. I'm out!
Whew. Hey, I have an idea: let's NOT go back in there until it's absolutely necessary. Fyuuuu, fyuuuu! *nod* *nod* Nothing else to say, Franklin? Manic! You know that Franklin doesn't talk. What? Sure he does. We spent all night talking just recently. Baby, you feelin' all right? Roxy's here. No, seriously. He totally does talk. C'mon, Franklin, say something. *shrug* C'mon, quit messing around!
Seriously, man? Leaving me hanging? I'll remember that. Of that, I have no doubt. See? There! He spoke right there? I heard nothing. Manic, perhaps we should rest when we reach Hearthome. Oh, you are a little douche. *smirk* Uh, mom? Battle, remember? Right, sorry.
An attack that only works while I'm being beaten. I think I'll pass. Man, we need to get you some TMs in the worst way. I have no objections to this idea whatsoever. Fyuuuu! Hey, thanks, June. Check it out, mom! That's great, Michael! That could...prove really...useful...ZZzzzz... Shit. Fyuuuu, fyuuuu! D:< Sorry, sorry. I meant 'darn'. Well, come on! Sleepin' Beauty here ain't walkin' on his own for a few, let's get him inside.
Zzzznnnh...huh...wha? Be still, little one. No harm will befall you. What just happened? Er...right! Anyway, see you there? Sorry, mom. I think Yawn worked a little too well. No harm, no foul...oh, hey, we're in Hearthome! And very glad that you're awake. Perhaps a weight loss program would be worth considering. Ha ha, you're hilarious. No, 'hilarious' is the fact that you think I'm joking.
Mom?! What are you doing here? I knew you'd have to come this way, so I wanted to check up on you. How are your pokemon? Not bad, actually! Nero's evolved, and here's Roxy, and Zelda, and June, and Franklin, and Michael. Oh sweetie, I'm so proud! Even with your condition, there's just no stopping you, is there? What's she goin' on about? Nuzlocke ain't that bad. There isn't, but there's already been a loss. Oh, honey, I knew it might happen, but I'm so sorry. Gardenia murdered him, mom. In cold blood. It was deliberate; she modified her pokeballs somehow. Manic, dear, listen closely to me. Over here, where no one else is standing...now, it's known that the gym leaders cheat. If you're going to be any match for them, you must train hard. Harder than you should have to! You're...not surprised? You're not going to tell me to come home? *chuckle* It wouldn't be any more effective than I'm sure it would be with Spaz. Go, honey. Be well, and show them what a real trainer can do!
Huh? Mes apologies, I could not help but overhear. You are ze Manic, yes? Er, yeah. Je suis Fantina. I am ze gym leader of this town, non? Oh. Well...I guess I'll face you there, then. Oui. Mais, alors, there shall be no cheating. Zis is not my way. Whew. Well, that's a relief. See you there! Au revoir! Well, that was comforting. Fyuuu fyuu, fyuuuu! Ha-ha, yeah. She's gonna cheat with both hands, both arms, and probably recruit help. What? Seriously, did you pick up on that horrible accent? French Weeaboo over there is going to pull every dirty trick in the book, and probably write a few new ones. Glad I ain't the only one who noticed. Come on, team. We've got training to do.
I can't wait till I learn a damaging move. Just don't get too impatient. That tends to have dire results. *smiles* Manic. This is becoming embarrassing. Isn't there something that can be done for me? In fact, I believe there is.
A grass type attack? Your only grass type attack. And with that, you have four distinct attack elements: water, flying, steel, and grass. This was the same attack that... Yes, it is. Attacks are tools, Nero, and we're going to prove that they can be used for good causes too. Excuse my saying so, Manic, but you are a tool, and I'm going to prove that I don't need this! ...hey, everyone? Mind if Nero and I head off alone for a bit? What's this? Roxy, Zelda, you're in charge. Look after the others, will you? Let's go have a look around. / Pick your feet up off the floor! / We can cover lots of ground / if we focus and explore! What she said. C'mon, y'all, let's give the boys their alone time.
What is the meaning of separating from the others, Manic? I have something I need to tell you. Something I've been hiding. I am aware of this, yes. I think everyone is. Quite correct. Even Michael has noticed, and he's still quite young.
I need you to promise to keep this between us. Manic, whatever issues you may have, we are your friends. Yes, and that's precisely why I don't want the others to know. It'll burden them unnecessarily. Franklin already knows, but somehow, he knew before I told him. This sounds terribly serious, Manic. Shall we sit? No...let's talk as we walk. Oh, hey, sweet, new TM.
I told you that I'm afflicted with Nuzlocke. Yes, I've been told that this is more common of late. Another TM, Manic. I see it. What I haven't told you is what kind of Nuzlocke I'm afflicted with. Well, I can rule out Sololocke or Reverselocke or Typelocke. That's true. My Nuzlocke strain is very rare. Not to be morbid, but I find the prospect fascinating. What strain do you have?
Cool! Cash on demand. According to the doctors, my Nuzlocke itself is actually fairly normal, but it's a mutated strain. Hmmm. Isn't that how the alternative Nuzlockes came about? Yes, over time. The thing is, mine behaves - for the most part - identically to the standard strain. Then you have the standard Nuzlocke affliction. I knew this well in advance. For most functions of the ailment, yes. Mine, however, is taking a toll on my body.
What manner of toll? I was diagnosed with Degenerative Necrotic Nuzlocke on June 18th, Nero. That sounds highly unpleasant. What are the ramifications? I was given one month to live. ...WHAT. Like I said. At some time around July 18th, I will die. As time goes on, I will get weaker and weaker. It'll be harder for me to get around. How...how do we treat this? What is the cure? Is that the reason for your quest? I'm sorry, Nero. There is no cure. I am going to die within the next few weeks. That's madness! You are not going to die, do you hear me?! Nero... No! That is ludicrous! I don't care what the doctors say, they're charlatans and cowards. There is a cure, and we will find it! Nero, please. Enough! I will tolerate no further discussion of the matter! I thank you for coming to me with this, but we will find a means to defeat this disease, and that is final! I don't...ah, forget it. Thanks, man. Think nothing of it. A good leader must take care of his subjects. For now, though...
...I suggest we focus on the matter at hand.
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Post by Firebrand on Apr 24, 2019 13:36:05 GMT
So this is a big update, and not just because of the length. A lot of evolutions, and a lot of ground covered, plus a healthy dose of plot stuff.
Looks like Franklin is our multiverse-aware character this go around, and I noticed that his font is also big and bold like Penelope's was. I'm not sure if that's coincidental or if the characters who know about the backstage goings-on all have that quirk. Either way, now we know that this incarnation's epithet is Manic the Courageous. Did Infernal Red and Derpy Emerald Manics have their own epithets? I don't remember anything to that effect, and those runs might be early enough that you hadn't really fleshed out that plot device yet; I suppose they would probably be added in retroactively.
And the cat's out of the bag regarding Manic's condition, at least to Nero. But it'll probably spread to the rest of the team soon. Zelda at least seems pretty astute, and Roxy's not slow on the update, so at the very least I see those two getting clued into the reality of the situation sooner or later.
It looks like the league are the bad guys again this time around, though Cynthia seemed more self-important than malicious in Eterna City. I'll admit that the leaders cheating seemed to come out of nowhere with Gardenia, especially since Roark just seemed to have a few screws loose. It makes sense, and I'm rolling with it now, but I don't think it had been really brought up previously aside from maybe a quick reference when Manic was setting out that nobody really challenges the e4 anymore, but not really why nobody does. It's established now, and once it was introduced it made sense given the setting, but it feels like it could have been foreshadowed a little more explicitly, especially if leaders cheating is something that's a foregone conclusion in-setting.
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Post by crimsondoom on Apr 24, 2019 14:32:23 GMT
Either way, now we know that this incarnation's epithet is Manic the Courageous. Did Infernal Red and Derpy Emerald Manics have their own epithets? I don't remember anything to that effect, and those runs might be early enough that you hadn't really fleshed out that plot device yet; I suppose they would probably be added in retroactively. Derpy Emerald was revealed to be Manic the Innocent. I think the term was first used when Penelope joined the team?
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Post by Firebrand on Apr 24, 2019 15:09:49 GMT
Derpy Emerald was revealed to be Manic the Innocent. I think the term was first used when Penelope joined the team? That was the Pony crossover Manic. Unless they're the same one, but I didn't get that impression. I thought the Derpy Emerald Manic was as distinct from the pony one as the Infernal Red one was from both.
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Post by crimsondoom on Apr 24, 2019 15:46:53 GMT
Derpy Emerald was revealed to be Manic the Innocent. I think the term was first used when Penelope joined the team? That was the Pony crossover Manic. Unless they're the same one, but I didn't get that impression. I thought the Derpy Emerald Manic was as distinct from the pony one as the Infernal Red one was from both. ...you're right, I'm a moron. I read Emerald and jumped to entirely the wrong conclusion. Sorry about that!
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Post by Manic on Apr 25, 2019 8:34:05 GMT
Firebrand - I see where you're coming from, but you'll find that I tend to go for characters providing exposition via plot as it becomes relevant, rather than doing a big exposition dump at the beginning of a run. It's a stylistic choice.
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Post by Manic on Apr 25, 2019 9:52:00 GMT
Update #7: Foul Fortune - vs. Fantina
June 25th - 26th
We need to train more before we're ready for Fantina, everyone. *nods* Sure, mom. What's on the menu? For starters, you're not. Neither is June. You don't have any damaging attacks, and June will get beaten to a pulp by all the ghost types. Symmetrical weaknesses are scarcely a combat advantage, I agree. My aces in this fight will be Franklin, Zelda, and Orville. Roxanne, I want you on backup. You got it, baby! All right, let's get started, we're burning daylight.
This traded for slicing wing? / This would hit awfully light. / Don't think I will learn this thing / When there's more to do with flight! That's a big tickle, man. No way I'm using the flailing limbs bit. If I wanted a nap, I'd go take one! Roxy ain't fallin' asleep on the job, no sir!
Hey now, here's an attack I can get behind. Better that than getting in front of it. Moooooom, enough with the corny jokes! Okay, okay, that was pretty bad. The good news is, I think we're just about ready to take on Fantina. I think we may be slightly overleveled, in fact. The Dave. ...point taken. Let's go crush her.
Oh, hey, thanks. Y'know, you've been kinda helpful. What's your story? I keep hoping to see these corrupt monsters fall, one by one. So far, so good! You have a problem with them too, huh? I was the best. I was unstoppable; I got all the way to the Elite Four, even! Formidable! But then...that miserable witch... More specific, please. There's only one woman in the Elite Four, Manic. Really? Will is a guy, Manic. What, seriously?! Looking like that?! I know, I know. Anyway, to clarify, Karen confronted me...and she showed no mercy. Slaughtered my entire team. Didn't just knock them out, either...slit their throats, let them bleed out. *shudder* Merciful Arceus... I was declared to have been negligent. Karen lied under oath, swore that I let them die. I've been banned from having pokemon, but they can't stop me from standing here and helping. I know how you feel. Gardenia killed one of my friends, too. Go get them. Go to the top and knock them off their perch. They have to be stopped before they overrun every region!
Wait, we're on camera? Mais oui, ze people, they must see you lose! What? Why? What possible purpose could that serve? Come closer, I will explain pour vous! Okay, what's the story? Awright, lissen up, jerkass. People see you lose, they ain't gonna wanna fight, get it? Nice an' easy. Now step back and take yer beatin' like a trainer. The hell?! Oui, c'est vrai! And now, we battle, non? You're not gonna believe this, guys... Baby, that girl ain't near as quiet as she thinks! I thought she might have been French / Didn't know she was a phony! / Let's beat down this little wench / And show folks that she's baloney! Sounds good to me!
Je regrette, mon ami...this will be your curtain call! Oh, lord. Just stop the horrible accent already!
All these battles, all these fights / You would think that I would learn / Sure, I turned out this one's lights / But he gave me such a burn! It's okay! You did your job. Swap out! Orville, you're up! It's cool, daddy-o, I'm cookin'! Wow. You really are! Mon dieu! You are truly powerful! I will have to use, how you say, my best pokemon! Oh, give it a rest. Franklin, you're up. A tactical error! Votre lapin, it can not hit with normal or fighting attacks!
Think so, huh? *grins* Merde.
What's wrong, run out of French 101? Sister, you more phony than a three-dollar bill! Fraudulent behavior never brought anyone to a good end. I am, how you say...le tired of this. Je...ah, hell with it. If I were a fraud all day / I think I'd also be tired. / As for us, we'll be okay / But lady, I think you're fired! Zelda's right, Fantina. You just lost on national television. About fuckin' time, too. I hate this crap. I ain't French, I'm from Jersey! Somebody get this frou frou crap offa me, I'm goin' home.
Especially the gym leaders and E4. We're paid real nice to stomp hopefuls flat. Yeah, how's that working out for you? Ah, piss off. I'm outies! That poor woman. Sugar, you wanna run that by ol' Roxy again? Imagine having to look like that and talk like that for a living. Anytime anyone could see you. *shudder* No wonder she quit. C'mon, let's move on.
Or maybe we can find a nice roadblock to glare at. Okay, now I'm quite annoyed. / Roxy, I'll be you, okay? / How nice that they're self-employed. / Fools best get up out my way! I don't think they heard you. *sigh* I suppose we head east, then. Sure. What's the worst that could happen?
Manic, could you lean down here for a moment? Sure, what's up? *THWACK!* OW! My face...okay...yeah. I deserved that.
(And then we crushed Spaz. Again.)
Uh, gee, y'think? What? It was a great strategy, I thought! It just didn't work out! Uh, I think something's wrong with this guy. Spaz. That's like saying that the key to winning every battle is not losing. ...oh, sweet Arceus... Wha...no. Spaz, no! I've reached the point where I think it says more about you than it does about him, when he surprises you with these. The hell were you thinkin'? That...is...BRILLIANT! The key to winning is not losing! If you don't lose, you'll always win! You're a genius! I'm gonna go try it out right now! Bye! Why me?
Oh, hey, it's nice and scenic out here. This is pretty nice, yeah! Maybe we can move here when you get older! There's no point in being spiteful, / tell the boy you'll settle down! / This place will be more delightful / Once you have that so-called 'crown'! Uh...sure! Sure, we'll see about doing that. *pointed glare* What's your problem? I think he's just tired or something. Let's get to the next town. Solaceon, I think.
Pit stop!
Why won't this end?! Manic! You're here! And your strategy STINKS! Spaz! Listen to me! That was not intended to be a strategy! It wasn't? No! I was using it to prove a point! You shouldn't give me strategies that aren't strategies! No wonder I lost! Hmph, some friend! I'm leaving! I...you're...gahhhh...NNNNNGH... Ooooh, baby, we best get you outta here before they lock you up! Trainin' time! Let's just swap flyboy here out for June first.
Fyuuuu! Okay, those could both be pretty handy. Have you had the opportunity to regain your composure? ...sort of? Perhaps a good night's sleep will help. We can set out again in the morning. Yeah. That's a good idea. Maybe we won't run into Sp-sp-spaz again. Mom, why's your face twitching? No reason. Bed. Bed is good.
All right, blubberbutt. Everyone else is asleep. Let's you an' me talk. Hmph. What is it you'd like to know? I saw your face when Michael talked about settlin' down. You looked like somebody just took the last helping of chicken-fried steak. What's goin' on? Nothing is going on. Go to sleep, woman. We have a long trek tomorrow. Boy, don't you "nothing's goin' on" me! Roxy's momma didn't raise no fool! I made a promise to Manic that I would not discuss the matter with anyone, not even you. You best start talkin', or I'mma slap the stupid outta your beak! Well then, you had best get started, hadn't you?! Come here! Whoah! Th' hell's wrong with you? Listen very, very closely to me, you vile harlot. Manic took me into his confidence on a very personal and painful matter, and I pledged to maintain secrecy until such time as he chooses to break it. He is deserving of that much, at the very least. To wit, if you insist on slapping me around until I tell you what he told me? Then you had better get started, as you have an exceedingly long task ahead of you! ...you're serious, ain'tcha? Entirely serious, I assure you. I'll be damned. Didn't think you had it in you. I apologize for the 'vile harlot' comment, but know this, Roxanne: when you think you have my full measure, that is when you should be afraid, for that is when you may be sure that a surprise is waiting for you. That's Roxy to you. So noted. Goodnight.
Okay, let's see who we can get for Route 209...hey, you two okay? Quite. Roxanne and I simply had a discussion last night. Roxy, baby. Ahem. Yes. Roxy. What were you talking about? Fyuuuuuuu? o.O Don't y'all worry none. You just focus on our catch! *peers* Don't worry, Franklin. I did not divulge Manic's condition. That is for the best. F...wha...?!
A Ralts! Yes! Gardevoirs are amazing! Zelda, confuse her! If it should come down to fighting, / Rest assure that she's no match. / Wait, it looks like she's alighting! / Manic, hurry, make the catch!
FFFFFFFFUUUUUUUU...!!! That was it for this route, huh? *nod* That seems bad. That...was quite bad. Quite bad indeed. No Ralts, no catch for this route...ugh. What a mess.
Maybe we'll have better luck in here. We need to pay our respects anyway.
OH COME ON! Manic! Reduce the volume of your voice this instant! I'm sorry! I just...aaaauuuuugh! That's two really valuable teammates in a row! *bows head* No...no, Franklin. I know it's not your fault. A Quick Attack...wow. Would've wound up being a glass cannon anyway, I guess.
Can't see shit, cap'n. Fyuuuuuu! >.> Yeah, I'm not feeling this either. What about that fog clearing thing that man was talking about?
Hey, right! Good idea, Michael! Thanks! Indeed, an excellent suggestion. I approve wholeheartedly. That's cool, I guess. Interesting... Yours was really decent praise, / But it means more from another. / Who guides him with every phrase? / Manic, a.k.a. his "mother"!
The Ralts, I miss. The Gastly, I miss. The...Unown thing? That, I catch. Aw, don't take it so hard, baby! You still got Roxy! Yeah. You're right. This just hasn't been my day, is all. Fyuuuuuuu. <3 Awww, heh heh. Thanks, June. Think I needed that hug...urk... !!! *cough*hack*wheeeeeeeze*choke* Aw, hell! Somebody get him some water! Oh dear. I'm afraid this isn't going to be pleasant, but open wide! *GGLLGHGHGG* Ghhhk...gah...s-sorry...whew... Thank the fates that you're all right! / I see luck has been forgiving! / You gave us an awful fright. / Glad you're still among the living! I'm fine...I'm fine. Sorry to worry you. Just means we should get out of here. The cave air must be stagnant.
Whew. Now, let's get out. It's okay, mom. You can lean on me a little, if you want. Heh. Thanks, Michael. I could use a bit of help. Boy, you only a kid. How come you act like you been smokin' longer than you been alive? Just a bit under the weather, I guess. It's all right, I'll be fine. Maybe we'll finally have some good luck on Route 210. The way your luck has been, I imagine you're due for some good fortune.
YES. Absolutely yes! It's about damn time! *smiles* Okay. Michael, Zelda, tag-team her. Keep her confused. Michael, put her to sleep when she's low on health. I got it! Aaaaand...come on, come on...*click* YES! Okay, I think that's everything for this area. Next stop, Veilstone!
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Post by Manic on Apr 25, 2019 10:42:14 GMT
I'm going to take this opportunity to copy-paste an important post that followed this update back in 2012.
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUU... I don't understand how, but my screenshots for about half of this post have gone missing. I've hunted everywhere for them, on every system I own, and it's just like they never existed in the first place. My save file, on the other hand, is AFTER I've made my progress. It's like somebody reached into a book I'm writing and tore out several pages, then said "Just keep going". I'll try to recap when I'm ready to post, sometime tonight. [EDIT: Fuck it, I'm gonna write it into the story somehow. Just you watch.]
So, yeah. Sudden jarring jump ahead!
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Post by crimsondoom on Apr 25, 2019 15:30:32 GMT
Oh, hey, thanks. Y'know, you've been kinda helpful. What's your story? I keep hoping to see these corrupt monsters fall, one by one. So far, so good! You have a problem with them too, huh? I was the best. I was unstoppable; I got all the way to the Elite Four, even! Formidable! But then...that miserable witch... More specific, please. There's only one woman in the Elite Four, Manic. Really? Will is a guy, Manic. What, seriously?! Looking like that?! I know, I know. Anyway, to clarify, Karen confronted me...and she showed no mercy. Slaughtered my entire team. Didn't just knock them out, either...slit their throats, let them bleed out. *shudder* Merciful Arceus... I was declared to have been negligent. Karen lied under oath, swore that I let them die. I've been banned from having pokemon, but they can't stop me from standing here and helping. I know how you feel. Gardenia killed one of my friends, too. Go get them. Go to the top and knock them off their perch. They have to be stopped before they overrun every region!
Something I keep forgetting to ask: is this meant to imply that the Johto League is equally corrupt here? If so, why is this guy here in Sinnoh rather than in Johto?
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Post by Manic on Apr 26, 2019 8:15:33 GMT
Doesn't seem like Manic asked, does it? Wonder if that'll come into play later...
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Post by Manic on Apr 26, 2019 13:53:55 GMT
Update #8: Fugue - vs. Maylene
June 27th - 28th
Huh...whuh? Fyuuuu, fyuuuu! <3 He's awake! Y'all hush! Manic, it's good to have you back with us. Are you feeling all right? I...guess? What happened? Wait...Lucille, is that you? Yeah...you don't remember? Manic, what is the last thing you recall? We'd only just caught Lucille. Fyuuuuu... The fights in the milk stop? Lucille taking a fifth-round Rollout to save us all? I'm sorry, it's like no time has passed at all! Wait...how much time has passed?! We were just so terrified / That you'd gone to meet your fate! / You passed out June 27 / But it's now June 28! I slept for a DAY?! Nothing could awaken you! Fortunately, we are just outside Veilstone City. Let's go in.
Oh! Hey there, Dawn. So, are you or aren't you? Well, sure, I guess. My team seems...ready? I'm not worried about us, Manic. If you pass out in mid-fight, you will forfeit the match! I'm telling you, I feel fine. Well, sure. Why wouldn't you? Oh, they're all worri...huh? What's up? Do you hear that? *cringe*
...what. I must be dreaming. F-f-fyuuuu?! o.O What in the name of...?! It's coming right for us! Everybody get back!
You're a grown man. Si! You're wearing a luchador outfit. And singing your theme song. Again, si! In public. On purpose. Are you going somewhere with this, senor? Manic, baby, this guy's awful big! Okay, anyone else massively creeped out right now? Yeah. I'm going inside to face Maylene. Ha-ha! Muy bueno! I'm off, then! I'll see you in Pastoria City, if you have any pokemon left!
Also, uh, that was Crasher Wake. Yeah, I know. The guy could've crushed you with his pinky finger! Meh. Every guy has one weak spot. Hit it, and they're out. *smile* Well, at least Franklin seems to approve. Anyway, I'm going to keep moving on. Good luck! Okay, team. Let's just have a look...at...
Whoah. I told you he wouldn't like it. Quite the opposite, but...wow! You did all this on your own? Fyuuuuu! ^.^ Sure, we fought without you knowing, / We're now hot where we were cold. / We've all done a lot of growing! / (Plus, your nap was getting old!) We've also done some reconnaissance work. Maylene has a Lucario. Not even worried. We've got something better. Let's head in!
(one really annoying puzzle later)
Wow, you're outright civil. It's the least I could do before I pound your face in. I'm sorry, come again? You know? Pound your face in? Pulverize you? Beat you to a pulp? No, I got that, but I'm here for a pokemon battle. Oh, I know. But when we're done and you're out of pokemon, I'm supposed to get rid of you. Supposed to why? Who says? Hmmm. You know, if you survive the next five minutes, I might tell you.
Not that you have a prayer. Manic. Do you trust me? What? Do. You. Trust. Me? Well, sure! Then send me out! You got it, Lucille! You got us this far (evidently), so if you want in, you're in!
For crying out loud, be careful! It's fine, I'm fine! I'm just...I'm not going to let anyone hurt you, okay? I, um...okay! Step back for a minute, though, let Zelda handle this one. You're hurt.
I could laugh until I'm crying! / You're so weak that I could spit! / First, I feared I would be dying... / I took not a single hit! Wow. I mean, seriously, wow! You've all gotten really strong! Pokemon don't always need you around to get tough, y'know! Anyway, here comes my ace! Bend over and try to relax, this is going to hurt like hell!
FYUUUUUU! Think so? How...what...?! It's simple. My team is good for more than just training. Two fighting attacks, one ground attack? Nope. All we had to do was weather your Metal Claws, and Stockpile sure helps with that.
A deal's a deal. What do you wanna know? Who's setting you after me? And by 'you', I mean the gym leaders. Isn't it obvious? We're all under Cynthia's employ. Wait, Cynthia? The one who gave me the egg? Yeah, Champion Cynthia. We all keep Sinnoh nice and tidy, get it? What does she want with me, though? Believe it or not? She's scared. She's got a good thing going here, and she thinks you might be able to bust it up. We're all under orders to kill your pokemon whenever possible, and if we get through them, to finish you off. But...that's insane! That's business. Look, it's really simple. Gardenia weeds out the hopefuls. Fantina runs the PR machine. I'm the muscle. I won't spoil the rest, but since I'm betting you saw Crasher Wake leave, I'll tell you that he keeps the populace dumb and happy with his antics. ...he does? No accounting for taste. Anyway, take the badge and TM and get lost. If I get seen with you around here talking to me, I'm dead. One last question. What about Roark? You know, he's the only one of us who doesn't have blood on his hands. Doesn't know a thing. Cynthia sort of considers him below her notice. I'll keep it in mind. Thanks, Maylene. Don't thank me. I would have killed you. Still might, if the occasion arises. Leave now. I have to go too; if Cynthia catches me here, she'll hurt my Lucario.
This just ain't our day. I dunno, we just polished Maylene off without losing anybody. He does have a point. Maylene is apparently renowned for her tenacity. Fy...fyuuuu... So, you're going to help, right? Of course, but I need to stop by the center first.
June... Fyuuuu... You're getting hurt worse and worse, and all that HP can't keep up. Fyuuu, fyuuuuu. You're dear to me, and I don't want to box you, but if I don't, you'll get hurt. Maybe worse. Fyuuuuu. -.- I want you to stay here, okay? I don't want you to get hurt, and...you'll make everyone in the box happy. I know you will. You always made me happy. F-fyuuuu... T.T C'mere, give me a hug. I'm really, really proud of you, June. You're tough as nails, and I'm lucky to have had you fighting with me. And it's not goodbye, its just for now. Manic, we must go. I know this is painful, but it is for the best. She'll live a longer, happier life here, and we can see her often. I know. That doesn't make it hurt less, though. It isn't supposed to.
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Post by Manic on Apr 26, 2019 13:58:07 GMT
And so, June makes it to the retired list. Seriously, she was taking 100+ damage on some hits; those stats just aren't meant for the long haul. HP is not a substitute for defense.
On the other hand, that's four out of eight gyms down! And a very calm Maylene. Almost like she's done this before...
Handled the lost time as best I could. There's no easy way to write around something like that.
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Post by crimsondoom on Apr 26, 2019 15:14:55 GMT
Doesn't seem like Manic asked, does it? Wonder if that'll come into play later... *blinks* Wait, that's plot-relevant? Dang it, now I gotta rack my brains to figure out what I missed the first five times I read your stuff...
Also, "Gardenia weeds out the hopefuls"? Did Maylene do that on purpose?
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Post by Firebrand on Apr 26, 2019 16:12:21 GMT
Bye June! Looks like Orville is taking her place? If he catches up with the rest of the team, he'll be a Staraptor in no time. I'm a bit unclear as to how Lucille evolved, though. Even without the trade evolution, there's still the issue of getting a metal coat, which I always thought was more of a late-game item. But Scizor is a powerhouse, so I'm sure she'll get some good utility in the fights ahead.
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Post by Manic on Apr 28, 2019 21:20:43 GMT
Update #9: Swelling the Ranks
June 29th - 30th
Sure thing. You want to take one of them, or should I take them both? Take them...Manic, don't overextend yourself, okay? No, really, it's no trouble. These guys stink out loud. I must concur with your assessment, Manic. These ruffians have no skill. Well, if they're that weak, let me try one! Sure, I don't mind sharing.
(and then beatdown ensued)
Okay, whoah, whoah. STOP. Huh? I'd like you to meet Zelda. I have seen your rotten works, / And though I extend a greeting, / I still think you're all just jerks. / Pleased to meet me? Pleasure's fleeting. Whoah. Crobat! I met her when she was a Zubat, and she's an absolute boss. So I don't want to hear you morons talking smack about the Zubat line, you hear? Uh, right! So, uh, we'll...we'll just leave now, okay? And don'tcha come back no more, no more, no more, no more!
Well, I think I'll head south from here toward Pastoria. Turns out Crasher Wake is in on all this. All what? Oh, right. You weren't there. Turns out Cynthia has all of Sinnoh in her back pocket. Maylene is - okay, was - sort of an enforcer for her. Fantina, Gardenia, even Crasher Wake are involved in keeping people subjugated. Do you have any idea how crazy that sounds? Hey, it's true! I was there when she admitted it! That chick is bad news, man. I know exactly how crazy that sounds. It sounds even crazier that she's-
You know, you're not very good at this. Huh? Seriously, think about it. Have you ever seen this guy when Team Galactic wasn't around? Wait, you think he's... Either he is, or he's grossly incompetent. Either way, he's a liability. I'm going into that warehouse. Well, okay. I guess I'll try to find you later!
Hell yeah! *grins* Exceptional! This should greatly facilitate our voyage. Ain't nothin' wrong with a free ride!
...and it looks like this is as far as we go. This must be why, even beat, / Those goons just kept right on talking! / We gave them a sound defeat, / While inside, the doors were locking! A stall tactic? You think? Recall, Manic: while the grunts are precisely that, the commanders appear to be at least marginally intelligent. They may simply have been following orders. Okay, this is my first time meeting these Galactic jerks, and I already hate them! Take it easy, sugar. We're gonna stomp these suckers! Not at this rate.
You think I'm not good enough, huh. I guess I shouldn't be surprised... What? No, that's not it at all. The thing is...look at our team. We've got some serious coverage problems. I was trying not to say anything about it, but you do have a valid point. We have a serious issue with electricity, and when I evolve, I'll only worsen our problems with fighting types. I dig, man, I dig. So, what's up? There are some areas we skipped. Let's go back and see what we can find.
Manic. Yeah? Don't get ol' Roxy wrong, baby...I feel you, an' smacking Gardenia's head against the fence was awful rewarding. It really was, wasn't it? Mmm-hmmm. But why the hell are we going into this dump? You heard the boy, Roxy. We need to shore up our ranks. An empire can't exist without a proper army. *nod* I don't know what army he's talking about, but I want to help! There's no need to be scared, Roxy. Zelda's got our backs. Roxy ain't scared! Just ain't much of a fan of nasty ol' buildings. C'mon, let's go in.
Okay, more than slightly creeped out now. *shiver* Baby, if Franklin ain't feelin' it, I'm out! I must concur. There is something unnatural about this place. I'll...just turn it off. Wait, Lucille, don't touch it!
Free...I'm FREE! Oh shit, I'm being pulled in! Come to me, boy. I need a vessel! I'm going into the set! / It's not Manic's time to go! / His ticket is not punched yet, / Time to cancel this old show! Thanks, Zelda! Now, keep this thing confused, and...bingo! *click* Wow! That was pretty cool! Are you okay, you aren't hurt, are you? What? No, no, I'm fine.
Manic, I appreciate your efforts, but you can't mean to welcome that...thing...onto our team, surely. Why not? 'Cause it's a damn spook, that's why! An' don't bring up June, she didn't want you as a 'vessel'! And when we started out, Nero was an insufferable dick, and you had attitude problems, and you couldn't stand each other. Now you're nice and close. I beg your pardon? We've simply come to an understanding. Exactly. Maybe Scarecrow can, too. That thing isn't earthbound, man. It won't be cool with us! You know, if I'd prejudged all of you the way you're prejudging Scarecrow's potential...anyway, it's not a definite. We still have other places to visit. Can't get outta here soon enough for me. Where to next?
Underside of the cycling road. I hear there's a hidden cave in here somewhere. So, then, we're here teammate-hunting? / Hang on, then, and let me speak! / Let's not go 'round partner-punting / Let's confuse them, make them weak! Zelda, if that's your way of saying you want point, you're on. *sigh* What's wrong with you? *shakes head* Franklin doesn't really talk, Lucille. Thought you were sayin' he did? Yeah, my mistake, sorry about that.
Hmmm. Not bad! Gives us some coverage we badly need. *squirm* Don't flip, man. It's cool. I think he's worried it might blow its top. If it makes any moves in that direction, I'll douse it immediately. Yeah, or I'll stand in front of it! Don't worry, I won't let anything hurt you guys. While you all were swapping words, / I flew off to go and scout. / With the help of local birds, / I have found a secret route! Really? Damn, you're a boss, Zelda! Let's have a look.
Hmmm. Now, this is somewhat less welcome. Having just found Dexter, I'm afraid that Walt simply doesn't pass muster. Yeah, we don't need two of 'em. Still, I guess...I mean, something could happen to Dexter, so Walt might be backup? Er, I guess, if you think so. *shakes head* Anybody else notice Franklin doesn't seem too surprised? Ah, Franklin has really strong intuition, that's all. We making another stop? I'm beat. Just back to Veilstone. I think we need to start out for Pastoria.
Wow, this route is long. And those fences...what's the deal with those? I must admit, their purpose puzzles me as well. Does anyone else have any insights? Looks damn stupid to me. Maybe they were supposed to be...hurdles? No one could jump over them, though. Sorry! *shrug* Maybe they're for making sure / That your energy's depleted? / I can't tell what they are for. / They just seem to be unneeded! Well, there's tall grass on the other end. Let's head that way. After all, it isn't a maze, it's just irritating.
Rrrrr...strangers! Hey! Hey hey hey! Hey! Easy now, big guy. We're not here to hurt you. Hey hey hey! Hey hey! Hmmm. Here...I have a bit of food left over, if you'd like some. Manic, have you lost your mind?! Look at him, Nero. He's rail-thin. Poor guy probably hasn't eaten in days. Here you go, eat up. Frrrriend! You're a friend now! I'm Rex! Can I come with you, friend? Heh heh...sure, that works. Boy an' his dog, huh? That's an old story, but Roxy gets it. Just k-keep him away from me, okay? Rrrex likes you a lot! EEK! Getawaygetawaygetaway! It's okay, Rex. We'll come see you later, once we reach a PC. C'mon, everyone. Let's keep moving.
No way, I wanna shoot low. I'm guessing that means you're watching your HP, huh? Yeah, I gotta ease off hitting myself, y'know? You have a point, your defense is a bit of a liability. Okay, we'll find something else. On the other hand, this is precisely the sort of tool I need to keep up to fighting trim. Veeeery nice! C'mon, let's keep moving. Don't get too full of yourself, blubberbutt. Blubberbutt?! *snicker* Simply delightful. Now she's doing it.
Okay, so, to sum up...the pokemon in this lake won't come out. Right. And it won't come out if it senses people. Right. And you want to see it. Right! So you people are staying right next to the lake. Right! You know what? You just keep right on doing that. I'll just walk over this way.
Oh, hey, a new friend! Which one do I talk to? My name is Princess, and I'm over here! You're talkin' to her butt, stupid. *snicker* Ugh. Please pay no mind to that vulgar thing. You're no prize yourself, Necky. One before and one behind, / Each one seems to have a brain! / Here's why I'm wracking my mind: / Which one is less of a pain? I am, clearly. Hah! Dream on. Madame, I regret to inform you that we must temporarily house you within the PC. We will be along shortly to discuss matters further. Thank heavens, a pokemon with some decorum. Thank you, kind sir. Great, another stick-up-the-butt. Hey, look! There's a hotel up ahead. I could use a nap.
All of the fucks I don't give. (EDITOR'S NOTE: I work in a hotel. People do this all the damn time.)
Wait. What? What's the matter? According to my Poketch, we just entered a new route. In the middle of a hotel? o.O
Ohhhh. That would explain it, yes. There's an illumination for ya. I admit, that's something new. / The waterfront is within reach! / Listen, everyone, who knew? / It turns out that life's a beach! Did you just pun at us? Hah! It was bound to happen sooner or later. Well done, Zelda. Uh, yeah. Let's just head for Pastoria, mmm?
Well, here we are. Now to get the sand out of my shoes. At least you have shoes! Got it made in the shade up in the clouds. Why didn't you let me know? I could've carried some of you. *shakeshakeshake* Let's keep it in mind. Franklin doesn't seem to mind, and Orville and Zelda can fly. That mostly leaves Roxy and- -and blubberbutt! LUCILLE. My name is Nero, pay no mind to the crude nicknames imposed by the pot over there. Oh, hell no. I know you didn't just call me fat! I'm not saying you're fat, but if you ever lay down, someone will plant a flag in your buttocks and claim a new region! Oh HELL NO! I'm *snrk*...I'm sorry, I didn't *snrrrrrk* mean to get you...mad at...BWAHAHAHAHA!!! And precisely what are you laughing at?!
Oh. The hell you doin'? Taking the piss out of your little spat. It is adorable, though. *grin* Heh, looks like Franklin agrees. Baby, that's a fight, not a spat! You gotta be romantic with somebody 'fore you can have a spat! *nod* Franklin, have you gone mad? There's no chance I'd have anything to do with someone as vulgar as her. Ain't no way I'd ever hook up with that stuffed shirt! If you say so. For now, let's hit the pokece-huh? C'mon, I wanna fight just a little more. Huh? Well, I guess you're close to leveling, yeah...
Oh, hey, slick! Why didn't you tell me you were this close to evolution? Woulda been bogus, man. Now, I got one more thing to ask. Well, sure, what's up? First, you gotta teach Zelda to use Fly. That's one bodacious attack! You know, I'm just going to assume that means 'good'. Hey, Zelda, heads up! Thanks to this generous gift, / I can catch all kinds of air! / If you wind up cast adrift, / I'll get you from here to there! Okay, now what?
Box me, bro. It's been gnarly hanging out with you, but it'll suck if I get KO'ed. Wait, whoah, what? You just evolved! That's what I'm saying. Check my stats, dude! That defense is gonna get me wrecked! But you're part of the team! So was June, dude. 'Sides, somebody's gotta keep her company. Fyuuuu! See how happy she is? You need better coverage too, and less of a weakness to electricity. C'mon, man, don't make this harder than it is. Well...okay, if you're sure...but anytime you want back in, either of you, just give the word. Party on! I'll keep it in mind. Of course, that brings the question...
...who comes in?
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Post by crimsondoom on Apr 29, 2019 5:54:20 GMT
<abbr data-timestamp="1556486443000" class="o-timestamp time" title="Apr 28, 2019 15:20:43 GMT -6">Apr 28, 2019 15:20:43 GMT -6</abbr> Manic said:
Rrrrr...strangers! Hey! Hey hey hey! Hey! Easy now, big guy. We're not here to hurt you. Hey hey hey! Hey hey! Hmmm. Here...I have a bit of food left over, if you'd like some. Manic, have you lost your mind?! Look at him, Nero. He's rail-thin. Poor guy probably hasn't eaten in days. Here you go, eat up. Frrrriend! You're a friend now! I'm Rex! Can I come with you, friend? Heh heh...sure, that works. Boy an' his dog, huh? That's an old story, but Roxy gets it. Just k-keep him away from me, okay? [bgcolor=#ee4a2d]Rrrex likes you a lot![/bgcolor] EEK! Getawaygetawaygetaway! It's okay, Rex. We'll come see you later, once we reach a PC. C'mon, everyone. Let's keep moving.
Yay, it's Rex! Though his formatting seems to have gotten borked up.
And yeah, I gotta admit, both team-wise and narratively, Orville doesn't seem to have much to offer the team. Though maybe I'm just saying that because I know the development of everyone else, and Orville's got cut off here. Huh. I wonder how many character arcs you never told because you wound up having to bench a team member?
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Post by Manic on Apr 29, 2019 15:07:37 GMT
Formatting has been fixed. At least it was easy to tell what ir should've looked like. As for character arcs that might have been, it's rare I want to go down that path; that way lies madness. Firebrand The Thief TM is available in Eternal City. Some wild pokemon have a 5% chance of holding a Metal Coat. Specifically, Bronzor appears in Mt. Coronet. From there, it's just a matter of patience.
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Post by Manic on Apr 30, 2019 8:18:48 GMT
Update #10: Courting Disaster - vs. Crasher Wake
July 1st - 2nd
Welcome to the team, Rex! Oh boy, oh boy! Rex will be your best Houndoom ever! Heh, Rex will be my only Houndoom ever. Just...just keep him away from me, okay? He walks on that side of you, I walk on this side. Surely you don't fear him, Lucille. He's just a Houndour, after all. Baby, she's a Scizor, he's a fire type. Ain't hard to figure out. Hmm, you do have a point. My apologies, Lucille. Don't worry, Rex seems to like you well enough. R-right...thanks.
Oh, hey, that's right! We didn't get a catch from this route. Now, let's see what we can...oh, come on... This thing simply gives no play! / Come with us or take a fall! / Just cooperate, okay? / STAY INSIDE THE FUCKING BALL! Good lord, what is it with this thing?! Rrrrrr...hey! You do what Master says! Uh, Manic? Come on, come on...dammit! MANIC. What? You just threw literally every pokeball you own at this thing. Let it go. *sigh* Fine. Franklin, would you end this charade? *nod*
Maybe this way will be a little more fruitful. Couldn't be much less fruitful. I mean, it wasn't your fault or anything. Manic, there seems to be an opportunity for planting berries down in that area. Would you care to take advantage of it? Sounds like a good idea. A few Leppa, that Sitrus I picked up...say, a Chesto for good measure...
*blink* Er...Manic? Mmmyes? Baby, th' hell you doin'? Er...watering the berries? Yeah! Master is smart! Watering berries makes them grow! Manic, it's raining. Watering is really swell, / Unless there's plenty of rain. / Seems like you're feeling unwell. / Are there issues with your brain? It's soothing. Just give me this, okay?
Besides, I want to hit the north side of this route before the south side. Pokemon mansion, remember? Oh, hey! Neat! Manic, can I help you catch whatever you find here? Well, sure, I don't see why not. *sigh* Franklin, c'mon. You're too strong for this. Remember the Gastly incident? Manic. Perhaps you should listen to him? You worry too much. It'll be fine!
Fuck! I'm sorry, I'm sorry! I didn't mean to! It's fine. It's my fault. I thought that being not-very-effective would make enough of a difference. Oh, I'm ruining everything... Sugar, don't be so hard on yourself. You know Manic don't feel that way! *whimper* Pretty bug lady is sad... It's okay, really. Anyone can make a mistake. You can help me catch the next one, okay? Okay...
FUCK! Oh Arceus, I'm sorry! I'm sorry, I'm sorry! That...that was a first-round Fury Cutter! *stare* Damn, girl! That was a 20-power attack and you laid that girl out! I didn't mean to, honest! It was my weakest attack! Lucille. Come here. Listen to me. I'm a horrible teammate. No, you're not. You keep acting like I'm going to box you, or leave you, or something. I'm not, okay? You're really strong and really nice and really great to have around, you're just not well-suited to ca...to caaaaah... Manic? Oh mercy! He ain't breathin'! C'mere! *thump* *COUGH*hack*WHEEZE* Th-thanks...well-suited...to catching... Manic... *whine* Master is sick...Master! I'm scared... N-not now, Nero. I'll be okay, Rex. Let's just focus on some training for now.
*grimace* Rrrr...only good attacks! I'll only learn good attacks! Then Master will be well! Baby, do I even have any good attacks left? What're you talking about? Of course you do! We're just hitting a dry spell, is all. Manic. At some point, we need to speak confidentially. Some point soon. Okay, okay. Let's just get past Crasher Wake first, then we'll talk.
Master! Look at me, Master! I'm bigger and stronger now! Hey! Hey, nice! Good look for you, Rex! Bigger now, and stronger, too! / You are looking quite impressive! / Here's a new trick you can do: / Come on, Rex, and get aggressive! Manic. Nero, I promise, we'll talk later. Not that! I want you to take a closer look at Rex. Why, what-
... Is something wrong, Master? No, no! Not at all. You're a good boy, Rex. *pointed stare* We're just going to go get you some vitamins, okay? Vitamins? H-he's even bigger now... Yeah, you know.
Vitamins. Damn, boy! That's almost half your cash! Roxy. Hmmm? No amount of money is too much to keep my team healthy and alive. Understand? Well, yeah, I mean...I didn't mean it like that, baby. I'm sure she was simply being conscientious, Manic. We support your decision. Mostly. C'mon, let's go train for a bit. Everyone had better get up to speed! These fights should be easy.
(and we did indeed train on Route 214...until this happened.)
Wha...NO! Everybody behind me! Now! Lucille, don't be a hero! YIPE! *hides* I'm not going to let this thing hurt any of you...nnnnngh...!
...Lucille? Wait, was that it? Was it a dud? No way, we all heard that kaboom! *grin* Here are three things that I know: / That wound's scarcely needing patched! / We all heard that damn thing blow, / But Lucille is barely scratched! Sweet Arceus, Lucille! You're amazing! Well, I'm just happy to be able to help. *blush* I guess we should go start getting ready for the gym, huh? First, one quick stop...
Yay! Rex can be even more useful to Master! Great... Pretty bug lady? *gulp* Y-yes? Rex won't ever bite you. Ever ever ever. Super promise. Don't be scared, okay? Can't ask for more than that. I'll t-try. I'm sorry. Yay! Pretty bug lady isn't scared! Let's go to the gym! Now that is simply adorable.
Manic! There you are! Oh lord, brace for impact! What are you doing? Getting ready for you to collide with me! What? Why? Because you always, always do! Who is this kid? Friend of Master? Ah, right. Neither of you has had the...'pleasure'...of meeting Spaz yet. Imagine Rex, except about half as smart and a tenth as devoted. *nod* It's not quite that he's unkind. / His spirit is really free. / It's just that he's lost his mind! / Poster child for ADD! Oh, hey! I just got a great idea! Is this going to involve an explosion? I bet it's going to involve an explosion.
Spaz, no. No, Spaz! I'm going into the gym! Too late! Our eyes met! You have to face me now! Why are you doing this?! Um, 'cause we're trainers! Duh! Have you still not figured out how this works? Yes, but why before my gym fight? I like riding bikes. Don't you? You...I...gahhhhh! Team, would you be so kind?
AAIGH! ROXY! Get away from her or I'll tear you in half, you feathered menace! Baby, you gotta switch Roxy out NOW... Zelda, enter battle immediately! I'll tend to Roxanne! Manic, get her a healing item now! I'm on it!
Nothing's changed, you're grass and ground, / And I'm still poison and flying. / And I still smack you around! / Come on now, it's no use crying! RRRRR! You hurt the nice Bibarel lady! Rex will bite you and bite you more! Did he just take down a water type? Sure looks that way. And take that! Now, get out of my sight before I become even more irate!
That's it? No "I'm sorry I almost murdered your teammate"? No "Sorry for interrupting your gym battle"?
Why am I even surprised? Rrrrr! Not friend! Not friend at all! Shhh, it's all right, Roxy's fine. This was fun! We should do it again sometime! You know, you're right. We really should. What?! Gotta go! I'm gonna sing the doom song! Doom doom doomdoom doom, doom doom de-doom DOOOOOM... Were you serious about wanting to face him again? Yes. We're going to get stronger. A lot stronger. And next time? We're going to curb-stomp him. That's what I'm talkin' about! For now, let's go get healed, then deal with Crasher Wake.
I just want to ask you something before we begin. Of course, nino. What is it? Why are you helping Cynthia control this region? Sorry, I don't understand the question! Maylene told me all about the plan, Wake. How Roark is the only one who isn't in on it, Fantina as PR, you as entertainment, etc. Amigo, I don't know what you're talking about. It's true that I am entertainment, and that is why I am the gym leader! I embody the crashing waves, the dazzling allure of the ocean, and the fury of the raging rapids! Let it go, man. Your head has been filled with lies, I tell you. I fight for valor and honor, not just for the spectacle of the fans! Then why the cameras? So that the people can see how a real luchador battles, of course! *arches brow* Hmmm. All right, let's see how you do.
Dammit, boy! You best start bein' more careful! Manic, I swear to you... Okay, okay! I get it! I just thought Rollout would kill in less than four hits. Did you notice something about his fighting style? Huh? Not really, why? Hmmm. Maybe it's nothing. Let's just keep fighting.
Down in a single strike! Impressive! There! There it is again. There what is, Lucille? If you have some insights, please, share them! Did you see the dirty tricks he pulled? I missed them! Rex is sorry, Master! Honey, Roxy didn't see any...hey, wait a minute... Exactly! He's not fighting dirty at all. I think he's for real! Wait, then you think... Let me in to face his last pokemon. I have to know for sure!
Good lord, that thing is tough! That Brine is too strong! *wince* Normally, I like to battle, / Fighting gives me quite a thrill! / But forget this Ice Fang prattle! / That would be a one-hit kill! Damn, that thing hits hard! Manic, none of us can get out of crit threat range! We can't strike back without risking death! Floatzel is my strongest pokemon, amigo! Do you forfeit? No way! I know we can do this! Stay the course, everyone! Lucille, take this X Sp Def! Okay, but it can crit through...AAAAAAGHH! Manic, she has a whopping 2 HP left! Heal her immediately! Mommy, I don't want to go to the hive today, I don't feel good... I'm on it! That was too damn close! You keep playin' like that, somebody ain't gonna make it! You're right. Let's end this! Lucille, Slash!
Crasher Wake...I think you need to know what's going on in Sinnoh. Even now, you still disbelieve me? Listen. Maylene lost to me too, and she told me very clearly that Cynthia is using the gym leaders to stay in power in Sinnoh. She even took off running once I beat her, because she knew Cynthia would be coming for her to punish her! Hmph. I see I will need to make a trip to Veilstone and visit her in her gym! Look, there isn't a gym anymore, okay? Que? I was there just recently to get some vitamins for Rex. The place...got razed. There isn't even a building there anymore. Impossible! That can't be true. Cynthia would never do such a thing! Look, I think you're being used. You fought honorably, no one is denying that. I think that maybe she's just taking advantage of you. ...I ask that you leave now, Manic. I have much to consider.
Oh, what the fresh hell? If he challenges us to another battle, we'll be in no condition to face him! I don't think we have to worry about that. Look at his pokemon, they're still banged up from our last fight. So you met him? Isn't he great! I'm his apprentice, you know! Like hell you are. I totally am! He knows my father, and I got my dad to do me a favor! I will be...El Guacamole! *pffftchch* Suits him, don't it? Give me strength... *snicker* Your pokemon are laughing at El Guacamole! El Guacamole will teach you a lesson! Look, uh, Spaz. Do you know what guacamole is? Of course I do! It's-
Crasher Wake? Master! Sorry, I heard the disturbance and came out to see what was happening. Yeah, look, sorry about that. I'm guessing you've met Spaz? Master, his pokemon were insulting the honor of the Lunchadors! If you team up with me, El Guacamole will be unstoppable, and we can teach these nintendos a lesson! *sigh* Is this yours? ARCEUS, no. Look, kid. Why are you here?
Oh, not these guys again. Wow, these morons like their beatings! / You'd think they'd finally learn. / Let's give our usual greetings, / Maybe Rex can make them burn! Aren't these the same guys from Veilstone? And Eterna. And every damn where else. Very well, let me go get the authorities.
Wait, what?! Spaz, yes? I need you to think as hard as you possibly can. Are you certain of this?! Yeah, he said something about using energy they'd gathered. Weird, huh? Wake, I caught them gathering energy at the Valley Windworks! This is serious! Aw, hell! Shit's gon' hit the fan now! Galactic? Bad men, Rex! Very bad men! They want to hurt people!
I'm on my way! I'm with you, Wake! Lucille, Nero, Roxanne, keep people away from the site! Zelda, go airborne, see if you can pinpoint his location! Rex, Franklin, you two stay at my side if I need backup! Manic, I have a healing station, my pokemon are ready! Yours are wounded! There's no time to argue about this, let's move! Your valor is inspiring! Let us go, then! What about me? What am I supposed to do?! Secure the entrance to Route 212! Ensure that he does not pass! Don't worry! No one will get by El Guacamole! Slick. Gracias.
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Post by ghostwriter85 on Apr 30, 2019 18:16:19 GMT
It goes to show how well you write your characters that I can't help but read through your runs again. I just can't help myself. Ah, the curse of the voracious reader.
It's kind of a funny coincidence that my favorite runs of yours are the Platinum runs. Courageous certainly has some cojones to him, as we have seen and will see later.
Also, since you seem to have some concern about your runs being out there, I am nerd enough that I copy/pasted most of your runs (no offense, one wasn't to my taste), and saved them. If you (or anyone else) wants a copy, hit me up.
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Post by Manic on May 1, 2019 6:51:25 GMT
Update #11: Candle in the Darkness
July 3rd - 4th
No matter how hard I may try to forget... Did I not tell you to guard Route 212? Yeah, but that's boring! This is where all the action is! You might as well give up, Crasher Wake. You're lucky he stood still long enough to finish his sentences. We are wasting precious time! How do you 'waste' time? Is there only a limited amount of it? What happens when there's none left?
WITH MY FINAL BREATH, I CURSE SPAZ!
Oh. Not dead. *shiver* That was awesome! Manic! Are you all right?! The hell was that?!
What did he say? He...insulted...my mask! My honor! Easy, champ, easy. Rrrrr...the bad man is trying to run! Hey! Hey hey hey! For the destruction wrought in the marshlands, this man must be brought to justice!
I can't believe I'm about to say this. Spaz, I have to go after that guy. You STAY HERE. You hear me? Stay! Of course! You know you can count on me! When have I ever let you down? Oh, he did not just say that with a straight face! Isn't it dangerous to leave him here alone? As near as I can tell, no one could possibly be safer than Spaz. Far be it from me to ask, / But have you gone quite insane? / You know he won't do this task! / He would need to have a brain! They say Arceus protects fools and children. Spaz should be fucking invincible. Now let's move!
You're not...you're not...getting away... Manic, be careful, you look pale! Now, I know you ain't ran that far! The hell is wrong with you? I'm f-fine...I just...come on, he's right there...and he's tired too!
Lucille...could you... Yeah, sure! You just take it easy, okay? *concerned look* You always seemed very fit, / Now you just don't seem quite right. / You calm down and have a sit, / Let us finish off this fight!
(And they did. Swiftly and painlessly.)
You. Hello, Manic. I trust you've been well? You seem out of breath. Yes, I've been a little under the weather, but I'll be fine. Will you, now? ...yes, I will. Don't worry, Cynthia. I'll keep on keepin' on. Wait. Is this the same Cynthia... It is. Don't let your guard down. This woman is vicious in the extreme.
Have you heard about what happened to the Veilstone Gym? Pity about that. Yes, and I've heard that you might know about it, too. You don't say. What have you heard, exactly? Oooh, he's got that look again. Be cool, Manic! Exactly? Let me tell you exactly what I've heard. I've heard that you have this region in a stranglehold because of your gym leaders. I've heard that you manipulate the minds and hearts of its residents. Yes, this much is true. Go on. *blink* I heard that you're the one who razed the Veilstone Gym. I heard that you're looking for Maylene to dole out 'punishment', and that you've been playing Crasher Wake for a fool. None of this is news to me. You're beginning to bore me. Her cowardice is abhorrent, appalling, disgusting! ...I heard that you put out a hit on The Dave. My Kadabra. Now, that much is not true. That's a relief. I put out a hit on all of your pokemon. That useless slut Gardenia was only able to kill one of them.
Baby, if that woman sees you talkin' to Spaz...! Spaz, I want you to listen to me harder than you ever have before. Whoah, super-serious Manic all of a sudden! I want you to go home. This is much more dangerous than you know. Return to Floaroma. All right? What? You mean Twinleaf, right? You said home, right? Arceus, give me strength... You shouldn't try to be deceptive, Manic. You're not very good at it. Yes...Spaz, is it? You should go home to Twinleaf Town. Good luck with that. Hmmm? Okay! I'm off to Celestic! I said Twinleaf, boy. Twin. Leaf. Okay, you go to Twinleaf, I'll go to Celestic! We can cover twice the ground! Bye! What just happened? You met Spaz. Enjoy that migraine. For now, I'm moving on. I'm coming to find you at the League, Cynthia.
You know, Manic...you would enjoy being Champion. It gets you access to all sorts of things. What are you talking about? Be careful. She seems really menacing all of a sudden. Legal documents, off-limits areas...medical records, even. And? What about it? Do you think you can defeat me in two weeks, with your body shutting down?
Master, what's the lady talking about? Shuttin' down? Your pokemon...oh, that's wonderful! Your starter knows, and the Lopunny there too, but you haven't said a word to the others. Shut up, Cynthia. What's she talking about? No conclusions here for jumping. / No insane logical leaps. / Even though she's done some stumping, / Still she's giving me the creeps! It's time for you to be honest with your pokemon, I think. Or shall I tell them myself? Shut UP, Cynthia!
Very well, then. Listen closely: your trainer is dying. When he began his journey, he had one month to live. And now, he's down to two weeks. He's going to get worse and worse until he finally dies right in front of you. Be silent, you cowardly whore! We will find a cure for Manic's condition and that is final! Nero...you knew about this? I am sorry, Roxy. I was sworn to secrecy when Manic told me. That's...that's Roxanne to you. Roxy... I said, that's Roxanne! An' you, what the hell you think you're doin'?! I'll give all I have to give, / If you'll only please stop dying. / Please, you've shown me how to live! / I can't see, I c-can't stop crying... M-master, you can't be sick! Get better, Master!
You're wrong, Cynthia. I have the records right here, Manic. Don't bother denying it. I'm not denying it. Yes, I am afflicted with Degenerative Necrotic Nuzlocke. Yes, I have about two weeks to live. Then how exactly am I wrong?
You're wrong because you said I'm dying. But I'm not dying. I'm living! I'm traveling, making new friends, achieving new goals! I've beaten five of your gym leaders, and I'm coming for the rest! You tell me that I'm dying, but YOU'RE the one who's dying, Cynthia! Cowering behind your thugs and your hits and your control, desperately afraid to take a chance on the world! I've lived more in the past two weeks than you have in the past twenty years! You're a bully, and like all bullies, you're a coward!
You're right to be afraid of me, Cynthia. You should be afraid. You should be terrified. I'm coming for you, and if it's the last thing I do, I will end you. Get. Out. Of. My Way.
You too. Is it...is it really true? It is. That's why I fainted and lost my memory of you as a Scyther. That's why I can't run like I used to. Why the hell didn't you tell us?! I didn't want you to worry! And...I knew it would hurt you. But you told lardass over there! He did. When we went for the walk in the park. He needed someone to tell, Rox...anne. Somehow, Franklin already knew even before Manic told him. Why the hell couldn't you tell me? I been with you almost as long as him! Rex understands. *arches brow* Knowing Master is sick makes you all sad. Master didn't want you to be sad. Then why- Because he needed to share, / Or else descend into madness. / So, although it was unfair, / Only one would share his sadness. Let's...let's talk while we walk, people.
Now that the secret is out, should we tell Orville while we have him present for Defog? I don't think it'd be right. If you don't tell him, Roxy will! Listen. Would he benefit at all from knowing? It would hurt him; would it generate any kind of positive outcome? He deserves to know the truth. He deserves to live a happy life, Roxy. Telling him won't help him in any way. Don't be selfish. Your pain doesn't need to be his as well. ... All right. I won't say a word.
Sweet, dude! Hey, uh...Manic? You look thrashed, man. What's up? I think it's all the fog. Thanks for the help! No prob. Want me to beat up some dorks too? No, it's okay. I think we've got it from here. Sweet, I'll hang back and chill. This'll be radical!
Oh, look. Another double battle. Manic, be cautious. Something about these two seems nefarious.
Sweet mercy! I think we may be in trouble! Sorry, trainer. We're under standing orders to obliterate anyone who travels this path. Orders? You think... There can be no doubt about it! Roxanne, behind me! Manic, do you think that Rex and Lucille can handle this? Dude, I don't want any part of this. These guys are bad! *whimper* That's a bad sign if I've ever seen one.! Rex won't let the bad people hurt you! Rex knows Thunder Fang! Zac, focus on the Houndoom. Two on one! Rex will Thunder Fang your Gyarados into oblivion first! You think so? Gyarados, Aqua Tail!
...Rex? One down, five to go.
Rex, no...how... I think we've lost Manic for the time being. Lucille, focus your assault on the Gyarados. Franklin, we need you here for your elemental neutrality. Use Return on that wretched serpent! I...am going...to KILL YOU! Maintain your focus, Lucille! Rage is a weapon for your enemies. Cover for Franklin while I heal him. You don't know how to use a potion! You don't even have hands! Then I had better figure it out immediately, hadn't I?! Lucille, strike low! Franklin, when it leaps out of the way, that's your chance! *nod*
Hmph. Well, at least we got one of them. C-come here. Both of you. I want to talk to you. Sure, what's on EEEEYYAAAAAIGH! Sweet Arceus, he just pushed her off the cliff! We gotta stop him! Lucille, Franklin, restrain him! Roxanne, guide her protege down and leave him there to find his mentor! *hug* M-master... He's alive! Let go of me! You heard him, release him! Master...Rex is sorry...wasn't a good boy... No, Rex. You were the best Houndoom I've ever seen. I was the one who failed you, not the other way around. Go and...stop the bad people...Master. No more...hurting. Rex loves you... ... ... ...He's...gone. I know how you feel, Manic. I'm sorry.
As a Piplup, I was an arrogant upstart. As a Prinplup, I longed for the privilege of leadership. Only now do I truly understand: leadership is not a privilege, it is a responsibility and a burden, an expression of love. Baby, you look... Rockin'! Regal. *nod* I wish I could be happier for you, Nero. I share your pain, Manic. Rex was a great fighter and a better friend. He will be keenly missed. I believe...that my evolution honors him. From the deepest darkness, a ray of light. You're right, of course. We have to press on. It's so hard, though... It's supposed to be hard. Were it not, it would mean that we never cared to begin with.
Rex. You deserved better, my friend. Sugar, I think we've all come to an agreement. Huh? I never knew The Dave, but isn't this the second time Cynthia has indirectly murdered one of your friends? Manic, know I share your anguish, / Knowing now that Rex is gone. / But we dare not sit and languish, / We must bring forth a new dawn! I couldn't have said it better myself, Zelda. Cynthia - and, to a lesser extent, Team Galactic - owes us a great debt. I mean to collect on that debt. *clenches hands into fists* The time has come. What? You are finally ready for my assistance, trainer. I pledged to come to your aid when you needed me. You need me now.
Are you sure you want to join us? After all- It is because of your fallen companions that I know you need me. Do not look at me for what I am. Look at me for what I will be. That sounds strangely familiar. This li'l guy? Look, Roxy ain't tryin' to tell you your business... Franklin? *blink* I've learned to trust your intuition. Do you think we should bring Diell into the team? *nod* You're in. You've met most of the rest of the team, this is Lucille. Nice to meet you! An honor. Before we go any further, we need to upgrade our weaponry. A solid plan. What do you have in mind?
How about this Shadow Ball TM, and HOLYCRAP. Lordamercy, that's two hundred thousand bucks! And worth every last one. Um, I don't even have a fraction of that. A monastic life makes for little in the way of material wealth. *shrug* It's all right. I already have a plan. Remember that snotty rich kid outside the Pokemon Mansion? Yes, what of him? Remember that Vs. Seeker we got? And that Amulet Coin we found? Wait. Are you thinkin' what I think you're thinkin'? We're about to get a new best friend.
Exemplary! The Ice Beam, of course, not the other thing. You know, I heard this thing is a HM in another region. Whirlpool, not Ice Beam. Might be part of one's collection, / Not one I'd care to complete! / For your moves to reach perfection, / Here's one you'd need to delete! If I ever get that desperate for a jacuzzi, I'll just go find one. C'mon, baby. Let's get to steppin'. Sure, and I know just where we should go. If nothing else, Crasher Wake might want help surveying the damages.
...huh. And not a single fuck was given. Yeah, I guess we dawdled long enough. C'mon, let's go see what's up in Celestic, see if Spaz managed to get himself blown up.
OKAY THE BLOWN UP THING WAS A JOKE. *grimace* What's up with these jackasses and their bombs?! You know? Yes. I think I do dare to oppose Team Galactic. You idiots already exploded one bomb, and one is enough!
(And then we crushed him. It wasn't even very hard.)
Huh. Things finally seem to be going our way again. Even the harshest storm must end. Yeah, what he said. I mean, things have to go right sometimes! There's an echo in this cave, / And it's making my ears bleed! / Please, won't you all just behave? / I'm just here trying to read! Sorry! Everyone be a little quieter, okay? 'Sall good. Who's gonna find us here?
At this point, I don't know why I'm even surprised.
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