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Post by Deleted on Apr 15, 2019 16:32:20 GMT
NOTE: I have no plans to continue this version of the fic. I'm not pleased with the quality of it or the direction it was going. Also, it has a terrible title. If I could, I'd delete it -- alas, Proboards doesn't allow it. So for now I'll be keeping it up and occasionally responding to any further reviews (but I can't make any promises on that.) Expect a rewritten version with the same characters, probably doing wildly different things, soon hopefully. Thank you all very much for your feedback on this thread; it means a lot to me. <3Summary: In Sinnoh, a shy young man just wants to go on an adventure to meet new Pokémon and take on the gyms, while hopefully staying out of other people's way. Of course, this is not what he gets. Instead, as he travels, he must grow as a trainer while dealing with his very first social circle, ghosts from his childhood, multiple criminal groups, multiple cases of emotional baggage, multiple grandiose conspiracies that involve powerful beings and jeopardise the future of his region, a crippling lack of self-esteem... and a poor sleep schedule. Chapter Index:Chapter Twenty-Four: A Pillow of Winds (2)Author's Notes: thank you so much for choosing to read this fic -- any feedback and/or concrit is welcomed and strongly encouraged! I started work on it in late 2017, when I was starting as a writer in general, and most of the early chapters have been untouched since. I will likely strongly edit (if not rewrite) them to improve their quality and make the writing style more consistent with everything after the first handful of chapters. In the meantime, though, they are here, and I'm confident they're of a high enough quality to be posted here. I have eighteen chapters for the fic under my belt so far, and I will try and update this thread every few days with a chapter until I am up to date. Without further ado...
CHAPTER ONE: Welcome to the Machine, Part One
October 9th, 2007, 07:00 "Good morning, and thank you all for joining us today! This is Jubilife TV News: the news that comes directly to you. I'm your host, Pete Goodman, and if you're watching this, I'm so glad you've tuned in to us today. How are you feeling? Feel free to call in at any time and tell us what's on your mind, and we'll try our hardest to give you a listen! Today's date is October 9th, the time is seven o'clock exactly, and according to our wonderful weather team's ever-reliable Castform Weather Forecast, expect a cloudy day with spots of sunshine throughout. To kickstart the news, then, our top story for today: GERECHT have promised a full investigation of the area surrounding the meteor that landed in the Battle Zone two days ago..."A new day was dawning in the city of Jubilife. The sun ascended above the cluster of towering buildings, climbing above the thick clouds to peer upon the world below, gazing upon the melodious splendor of the city. A symphony of footsteps, speech and noise echoed throughout the city as people and Pokémon alike went about their days in peace and harmony. As usual, the clowns of the Pokétch company performed their riddles, gifting their wares to starry-eyed young trainers as they prepared to head off on their journeys. Likewise, the Pokémart in town prepared to open its doors for the day, as did the trainer school, each offering their services to the people of the region. The city's TV station began its daily morning broadcasts, telling the people of Sinnoh the news for the day, providing them entertainment. All in all, it was an average day for most of the people of Jubilife City. Among them was a young man who was coming to his senses after a night of little sleep. Groggily opening his eyes to a world of haze and blur, he raised a sore arm from beneath his torso, drawing debris from his eyes as his index finger and thumb rubbed across his dry, heavy eyelids. The skin atop his thumb gave quite an unpleasant sensation as it came over his short thumbnail, aching as it dug into his bitten, worn down nail - he'd made it a point to try and get out of doing that. Slowly rising into a sitting position in his bed, he yawned and looked around. Light crept in through his curtains, black and punctuated with Pokéball decals. It peered through, shining onto a navy blue t-shirt and jeans sprawled across the floor. From his bed, he could just about hear the familiar buzz of his parents' television in the next room. Slowly stretching as his mouth went agape to let out another yawn, he stopped midway as his baggy, brown eyes widened. Something dawned on him. Today was the day. The day he was due to begin his adventure and become an official Pokémon trainer. License, Pokédex, badge case, neat hat, the whole nine yards. A gasp left his mouth as, in an instant, a wide, open-mouthed beam sprung to each cheek. He practically flung himself out of bed in his haste to get ready for his journey, a bundle of flailing limbs as he leapt across his room. He'd packed last night, but it didn't hurt to be sure everything was there. Back up clothes? Check. Food and water for the next week? Check. Wallet? Check. Sleeping bag? This was going to be a hell of a heavy backpack, but regardless, check. The bracelet? ...Where was the bracelet? Crap. His hand fumbled across the nooks and crannies of his bag. It was a miracle the bag was holding itself together, not tearing at the seams; yet he didn't seem to have the most important thing. That bracelet had been with him since he was a child, and he'd be damned if he wouldn't give it back to its owner, or at least, what it even was. As long as he could find it. His hand grasped around until he made contact with it, as he pulled it out. Yeah, this was it. He double-checked the text on the outside of it. 'Evelyn,' it read, in faded red letters. He couldn't help but wonder who, or what, this Evelyn was. What was it written in, too? It seemed like a pencil crayon or something. Nevertheless, there it was, safe and sound, and he thought he knew where he'd find the original owner. He tucked it into a side compartment, ensuring it wouldn't get lost. Regardless, though, everything seemed to be in order. He glanced at his clock. Half past nine. Oh, crap, I'm gonna be late!Panicking, he flung himself into the bathroom with all the speed and grace of a Deerling on ice. "Connor…? What are you doing up and about so early? The professor's office doesn't open until ten," came a fatigued, feminine groan from his parents' room as the shower started running. Early?! What're you on about? I have half an hour to shower, dress myself and run to the next town, you mad woman! thought Connor to himself, his heart pounding as his mind went into overdrive. His mother was never in bed this late, too - something was definitely up. Had everyone overslept? Impossible. Short of a Hypno somehow breaking into the house, there was no way his mother would be in bed past half eight. Unless she had the day off. No, that wouldn't happen - he cast his mind back to last night when she explicitly stated she wished that this was the case. Come to think of it, Pete Goodman's news report always began at seven in the morning, without fail. That realization was quickly followed up by another one - he'd forgotten to put batteries in his clock last night. He dropped his shoulders and gave a relieved "phew," mimicking a sweatdrop. "Connor?" came the voice again. What was he going to say? That he forgot to put batteries in his clock? Nah, that was why they bought batteries in the first place - what was the point in buying them if they weren't going to be used? Besides, he'd come off as lazy. But what else could he say? His mother was waiting for a response - think, Connor, think!"Heh, well… it never hurts to be ready on time, does it?" he called back, unable to suppress neither an awkward grin and raised an eyebrow from sprouting upon his face, nor the air of uncertainty, of faux-confidence in his voice. There was a pause, before Connor let out a soft sigh, flaring his nostrils. ...Really? What is wrong with you?Nevertheless, he stepped into the warm shower. He quite liked showers. The water was relaxing as it went down his back, he was rarely disturbed and it was always a plus, he thought, to have his thoughts to himself. Thoughts about the day ahead, about his Pokémon. About the journey that lay ahead of him. As much fun as it was going to be, there were certain things he was going to miss about being at home - the showers, for one. With all the nights he'd be spending outside, camping and whatnot, he wouldn't be able to have these showers as often. He'd have to rely on hotels for things like this, and even then, there was no telling how often he'd come across them… well, there was, but in Connor's hype for an adventure, he'd forgotten to check. Typical, he thought, but not the end of the world. He'd relegated himself to crossing that bridge when he got there. Besides, showers were not at all why he'd chosen to head out on this adventure. Far from it. No, it was the freedom to leave home, to see the world, to meet new Pokémon and become closer to his own, become stronger as a trainer, as a person. As for making new friends, well… he always had his Pokémon. He wasn't really too keen on other people, truth be told. Never really got around to making friends when he was younger. Usually stayed indoors. There was that one asshole who just wouldn't leave him alone, always ripped into him when he had the chance. What was his problem? Still, it'd been a while since they'd last met. With any luck, they wouldn't meet again. He poured out some shampoo and prepared to wash his messy, dark brown hair as it fell over his eyes like limp noodles. Even if they did meet, though, he finally had a Pokémon to protect himself. His first Pokémon. Finally, he was going to have someone he could speak to in the knowledge they would listen, someone he could travel with and grow alongside, a friend he knew wouldn't judge him. So what if it was something like a Kricketot or a Starly? That was of no concern to him. No Pokémon was perfect, after all; everyone had their own strengths and weaknesses. Connor's first priority was ensuring he had a friend that could fight for him, and he'd always believed in one thing: true strength was having a cause to fight for. Only after that did the ability to win and lose come into it. But Connor wasn't strong, and he knew it. As far as causes went, "wanting to be stronger" was hardly anything special. Millions of people had set off on journeys for that same reason, to varying degrees of success. What did he have that they didn't? Was he just destined for mediocrity, or worse, failure? Connor looked down, downcast, his wet hair flopping over his head. In the grand scheme of things, he was nothing; to the rest of humanity, he was nothing but a scared teenager who liked Pokémon. What could he possibly do to change that, if he couldn't even bother to get used to other people? This whole adventure was doomed from the start, and nothing he could do would ever change the fact he was merely… mediocre. Then there was the matter of the bracelet, too. What if he couldn't give it back to its owner? What if he lost it on the way? What if they'd completely forgotten about it, anyway, and keeping hold of it for so long was completely futile? Honestly, outside of sentimentality, he couldn't think of any purpose it could serve. Maybe it wasn't worth finding the owner; a long, menial venture into mediocrity and uselessness. No. That wasn't going to happen, thought Connor, defiantly tucking the hair over his eyes back. It wasn't going to be an easy journey, that was for sure, but he sure as hell wasn't going to let himself fail. So what if he wasn't a people person? The sole measurement of how good a trainer was was his skill with Pokémon, and he didn't spend all that time as a child locked in his bedroom reading about Pokémon for nothing. Just as long as he could build a bond with his Pokémon, win some battles, that was all that mattered. That was all he had to do. That, and give the bracelet back. How hard could it be? It was the least he could do. After all, if his hunch was correct, they saved his life, all those years ago. With a defiant smile, he shut off the shower, threw his clothes on, and marched downstairs to get himself some breakfast.
"So, yer finally becoming a trainer, eh, son?" The voice greeting him was his dad's. It was gruff, yet warm, with a hint of concern. A hint of concern that seemed to fly completely over Connor's head, as he merely nodded with a smile. His father looked straight down at him with contemplative green eyes, before sighing. Connor knew what was coming next, and couldn't help but roll his eyes in anticipation. "Are ye sure yer ready? Look, I get that you really like Pokémon and all, but, if I'm bein' honest, I don't really know if yer ready just yet. The real world can be a tough place and all, and I get that yer growing up and all that, but… ye do know that ye are gonna have to swallow yer pride and meet new people, right? 'Sides, Pokémon are way different to look after than ye think. Some of 'em are more powerful than ye could ever believe, and ye might end up gettin' yerself hurt badly… or worse. Battles are hard work, too, Connor, and we don't want ye injurin' yersel-" Connor's look gradually became more withering as his father's lecture went on. This certainly wasn't the first time he'd heard this whole spiel, and, truth be told, he really wished his parents would just stop worrying. His father was not oblivious to these hints, and stopped in his tracks, moving to put a hand on his son's shoulder. Connor recoiled back in response, shooting his father a glare. His dad considered this, giving him a concerned look and a firm half-smile as he retracted his hand. "...Son, if yer absolutely set on it, then, then I mean who am I stop ya, heh heh... but… but I really do think ye should reconsider." Connor glanced away as he went a soft shade of red. "I mean… I appreciate the concern and all, but, uhm…" he began in a murmur, before sighing and taking a deep breath as he looked his dad in the eyes, a determined flicker in them. "I'm sixteen, Pops; I promise you, I can handle it. Really. What's the worst that's going to happen? I might get a few bruises here and there, but, y'know, that's just part of the experience. Besides, I've been avoiding other people for as long as I can remember. It won't be that hard to keep it up out there." "Mhm. So ye've no problem with fighting others? For yer gym badges, and whatnot," replied his father, monotonously. This had been a concern of Connor's. In all honesty, gym battles were not an aspect of the trainer experience he was looking forward to. The mental aspect of it all seemed quite… troubling; after all, he was never good at sussing people out, nor was he any use at mind games. But it could grow on him over time, he thought with a hint of optimism; perhaps it was something he'd get used to? Hopefully, it was something he'd get used to. Reflecting upon this, he felt a nervous chuckle bubble within him, about to escape his lips. But he couldn't let himself show this. No, as he prepared his response, he knew his father had to be convinced he was confident. "Well, we'll just have to cross that bridge when we get there, won't we?" Connor chuckled, nervously. Why are you the way that you are? thought the trainer. "...Right, right. If y'insist, son," replied his dad, quite apprehensively, before being met with a third, feminine voice heading down the stairs. "Good lord, Michael, I ever tell ya that you worry too much? He'll be fine, relax," replied the voice incredulously. It was Connor's mother, looking at her husband with a raised eyebrow and light-hearted grin. "Now, go and get the thing from the kitchen." The thing? Connor tilted his head, giving his mother a questioning response. Nevertheless, his father sighed and stepped back, his hands raised. "Sorry, dearie. I'll go fetch it fer 'im now. Just... Connor, be safe out there, please. Mmkay?" he sighed before heading into the kitchen, as his wife began to speak to their son, smile still intact. "So, Connor, since you're becoming a trainer and setting off on your own today, your father and I decided that it would be appropriate for us to give you a little gift before you head off. But, just to be sure, you will be sure to call us and let us know how you're doing, will you? I don't want to-" "Mom," groaned Connor, rolling his eyes as a small, embarrassed grin escaped his lips. "...Right, right, you're not a child anymore, sorry. I just don't want to have to put up with your big lug of a father's worrying all the time. Anyway, you know how when you were little, you used to head into the mines all the time with him to look at all the Pokémon there? You always used to say your favorites were Steel-types, because of how strong they were, and how you could use them to defend just about anything, or something like that, didn't you?" "...Yeah," he replied, intrigued. "Well, your father found something you might like down there a couple of days ago, and we thought it would make a good first Pokémon. You're familiar with the Pokémon Aron, aren't you?" continued his mother, smiling throughout. "Aye," nodded Connor, still intrigued. There was a pause in the air for a brief few seconds as Connor attempted to figure out what his mother was hinting at before he finally realized where she was going with this. He gasped as his eyes widened, flickering with delight. The cogs of his mind whirred as he jogged his memory. Aron, a Steel- and Rock-type Pokémon. Small. Heavy. Very physical-based; very decent defensively. He recalled they ate a lot of metal? But what type of metal was alright? Iron was probably a safe bet. Aluminium too, maybe. Either way, Pokémarts stocked aluminium foil all the time, and he could definitely find iron in pretty much any store. Evolved into Lairon and Aggron. Both specialised defensively. How were they behaviour-wise, though? His brain was being thoroughly wracked as he continued to jog his memory. Aron was pretty docile. Good for children. Have to make sure they have a constant food supply, though. Can be ravenous when hungry. Lairon, fairly headstrong and rushes into things a lot, but still a great companion. Some aggression issues, though - no worry. As long as he had a good bond with it as an Aron, it should have been fine. Aggron was a daunting prospect - no, that wasn't the right sort of mindset, thought Connor. Quite an aggressive and territorial Pokémon; maybe not going to be very social, try to keep it out of the path of other people, it might view them as a threat. Reminded him of someone, he chuckled. But he had a lot of time to prepare for that. He'd have to have a lot of battles, patience and training before he'd have an Aggron on his hands. Battles. Type effectiveness. Steel/Rock. Keep out of the way of Fighting-types. Great counter to Flying-types, normal-types; good for Starly- "...and if you can't call us, then at least try to write - ...Connor? Are you listening to me?" enquired his mother, pointedly. "Hm? Oh, sure," answered Connor as he turned his focus back to the conversation at hand, nodding quickly. His mother's look wilted into one of doubt, a peer of suspicion, as a silence festered between the two. Connor couldn't help but feel a sense of unease, as the air of awkwardness grew between the two. That was a terrible lie, Connor, and you know it - and she knows it! What if she goes through the whole lecture again… wait, Connor, can you even hear yourself?! She's your mother! It's not as if she's gonna kill you - by Arceus, why are you like this? This sort of thing won't fly in the real world, Connor; you've got to stop doing this..."Uh huh," replied his mother, pausing for a second to choose her next words before exhaling. "Connor, I get you're sick to death of hearing this, but please: just look after yourself, alright?" "For the hundredth time, Mom, I'll be fine. Please, just trust me," offered Connor flatly. At that moment, his father re-entered the room, a Pokéball in hand. "Awright, son, here ye go," he replied, handing it to him. "I'm assumin' yer mother's told ye what's it is?" "Yup," answered Connor, excitedly placing it on a holder at the center of his belt. "And ye promise ye know what-" "Yes." "Right, right. In any case… I guess the only thing for us to say is stay safe and have fun out there, son. Don't forget yer folks at home when yer up there, competing in the Pokémon League, awright? We love ye," boomed his father, an encouraging beam spreading from cheek to cheek. "Love you too, Mom, Pops," chimed Connor as he strolled out the door, turning to face and wave at his parents one last time before he ventured on out into the outside world, away from home, on his own. His parents waved back in response, beaming as if to encourage him, tell him that they believed in him. After a couple of seconds, he turned back around and shut the door, walking away from his childhood home. He was finally free. An adventurer, soon to be an official trainer, with a Pokémon to his name. It was time for him to spread his wings and make a name for himself. His first destination? To Sandgem Town and the Professor's lab, right away! "I give it a week before he comes back." "Probably. Wouldn't hurt to 'ave some faith in the boy, though."
As it turned eight o'clock, Connor was marching down Route 202, a large nugget of iron from a Pokémon Center in one of his pockets. The fires of euphoria still burning bright within him. It had become apparent that both of the jackets he'd chosen to head out with were too big for him. It was baggy and flowing down his back, red and white on each side of a large Pokéball. Too short to be considered a long coat, but too large to be considered his size. For now, though, it would do. As long as it did a good job of keeping him warm in winter - besides, if it was ruined, he always had a spare in his backpack. It would also make a nice blanket for Aron to keep warm in, sleep in if, for some reason, he couldn't go into his Pokéball. Speaking of which, I should probably introduce myself to the little dude, make sure he's doing alright and all. I wonder if it is a he, actually? I'll check if they've been fed, too; it wouldn't hurt to leave a good first impression on 'em. What're they like, too? Should be fairly docile, but if not, that's fine, too - just means a little extra hard work and they'll fight a lot harder, is all.The pulse of his heart crept faster and faster, as Connor took a deep breath in and out. Clenching his teeth in a determined grin, there was something of a fire in his eyes as he grabbed a hold of the Pokéball. "Alright, bud," he began, aiming the ball at the ground as his thumb hovered over the button. "Let's see what you're all about, eh?" With a click, the button opened, and a light blue light streamed out onto the floor, sparkling as it materialized. Connor's determined grin melted into a warm, welcoming smile as he knelt upon one knee, looking closer at the Steel-type. The Pokémon before him was a tiny thing, not even reaching Connor's knees as it gazed back at him with large, pale blue eyes. Its small, grey stubs slowly trudged towards its new trainer, letting out a high-pitched grunt as it looked back at him, pupils dilating. He's male, and he's hungry. Right, noted Connor, reaching into his pocket and leaving the newly-purchased metal a couple of inches in front of the guy - at this stage, trying to get him to eat from his hand was not the best idea, not until he had a better idea what this particular Pokémon was actually like.. "There you are, little guy," he muttered softly, taking a step back and observing. Apprehensively, the Aron stumbled forward - alright, quite shy. He glanced at Connor. Slowly, he took a bite of the iron, keeping his eyes on Connor throughout. Connor deduced sudden movements would not be a good idea. He waited until the Pokémon finished taking a bite, and took another bite, eventually devouring the whole thing, giving Connor time to analyze and consider his next move. As he finished the meal, the Aron's gaze softened up, growing less suspicious and more friendly. All positive signs so far. Good. Slowly, he offered an outstretched palm to the Pokémon, gesturing for him to take a step nearer. The Pokémon paused for a moment, as Connor watched. He offered the same warm grin throughout, making sure not to bare teeth - he wouldn't want the Pokémon to think he was a predator, after all. Carefully, Aron trundled forward. Carefully, Connor reached to stroke the Pokémon's head with the back of his hand. Aron didn't recoil. Cool. Good first impression so far. He rubbed the back of his fingers on the Pokémon's face softly - it felt cold, almost robotic. As was to be expected for a steel-type. Aron let out a contented squeal in response, nuzzling Connor's hand. Connor's grin grew across his face, as he let out an overjoyed chuckle. All was good so far. It seemed to Connor as if they'd be the best of friends in no time, and with a bit of training, they'd be blazing through gyms in no time. Indeed, in that moment, it felt as if that nothing would be able to stop the two - nothing whatsoever! "Hah! I see you've gotten yourself a Pokémon now, have you, dickweed?" Except that. Connor froze, half in horror, half in anger. His smile evaporated in the blink of an eye. That voice… it was familiar. Too familiar. He'd recognize that sneer, that sense of superiority, anywhere; even now, without even looking, he could just sense that crap-eating grin. Oh, Arceus, no. Not him. You couldn't be content with letting him terrorize just my childhood, could you? Please, don't let him become a regular part of this adventure. Any other human on the planet, and I'd just about be willing to accept it… anyone but him.Anyone but Hawley.
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Post by girl-like-substance on Apr 16, 2019 22:37:36 GMT
Welcome to the forums! It's nice to finally see your fic after hearing about it. :> And it's an interesting kinda start, huh? Like on the one hand, this is the most straightforward opening there is. Connor's going to start his trainer journey today, but he's woken up late and has to rush: we've seen it a million times before. But then there are all these hints that we're meant to recognise this; first it turns out that he didn't wake up late after all, so the momentum is suddenly arrested, and then Connor explicitly compares himself to millions of other people going on journeys to get stronger. In-universe, the comparison is with other people on their trainer journeys – but it also feels like a more meta point, the fic situating itself quite self-consciously within the context of trainer fics in general. What, it asks, does set Connor apart? And we kinda have to admit that we don't know. This is a story that restages Connor's anxiety in its own relationship to genre, and hey, I have no idea what you're going to do with that, but it's a pretty cool thing to start with!
Getting back to the meat of the story, though, Connor seems like someone we could follow on adventures pretty easily; he's nervous, he nerds out about his aron the second he realises he exists, and he puts off answering or even thinking about the difficult questions facing him to some undisclosed point in his future that you just know he doesn't ever intend to actually reach. It's pretty endearing, and I'm left with a sense that it's going to be satisfying to see him grow as he gets into his journey proper and is forced to deal with the things he's putting off.
Sometimes, though, I think your prose gets a bit overwrought. I've always maintained that there's room for a bunch of different writing styles in the world, from Regency excess to pared-down modern minimalism, so like I'm not suggesting that it's bad out of hand, but there are definitely times when the weight of a sentence makes it difficult to read. Like here:
There's so much going on here, almost every noun with a modifier attached and every single little thing that happens described in detail; it just gets in the way of what you're trying to say, which is that Connor woke up bleary-eyed and rubbed his eyes. Sometimes this way of writing even leads you to say things that aren't right, like here:
The double negative ('unable … neither') that comes about here from you arranging the sentence this way ends up making it not make sense – he's unable to suppress either the grin or the eyebrow, not neither of them.
But I don't want to spend too much time on this point, because you've made it clear this is a couple of years old, and I'm sure you've changed and grown as a writer since then. I'll finish off instead with a few small things I noted down as I read through:
I can't quite figure out how to interpret the last part of this sentence. I assume you mean something like 'or at least, find out who its owner was'? But that's not what you've got written there, so I'm not sure.
The parts of this sentence (as I partly described earlier) don't quite match up; that should be something like 'unable to suppress either an awkward grin or a raised eyebrow'.
It takes Connor a curiously long time to arrive at this conclusion; if he'd just received his first pokémon, why would he leave home, go to the store for supplies, and hit the trail before thinking to open the ball and have a look at him? You could argue he's so steeped in theory as opposed to actual practice that he gets more excited about the idea of an aron than the actual aron himself, I suppose, but I feel like he'd be excited enough to at least want to see the aron right away, even if it took a while for it to properly click that he was real and not just the idea he'd got excited about earlier.
'Light blue light' is a bit of an awkward phrasing; two 'lights' so close to each other is kinda jarring.
This is super minor, but I'm sorta confused about this. Who buys a jacket without trying it on? Even if you got it online, you'd try it on when it arrived and send it back if it didn't fit. You certainly wouldn't wait to try it on until you'd left home on a long journey, as Connor seems to have done here.
Anyway! This has got long already, and I still haven't even mentioned my curiosity about Evelyn's mysterious bracelet. Maybe that's because I'm a person called Evelyn who wears a bracelet, idk, but either way, I'm intrigued to find out what this thing is and why Connor has it! Before we get anywhere on that front, though, it seems like the particular kind of real life that Connor's so afraid of is about to show its face. Guess we'll see what happens next with Hawley, but my money says it doesn't go great for Connor. D:
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Post by Deleted on Apr 17, 2019 12:42:53 GMT
Thank you so much for the review, and all the feedback! You definitely have a point about the weight of the prose, especially with this chapter. Honestly that's probably the main reason this ended up being 4,500-ish words; still my shortest chapter, but all things considered probably my least eventful; even so, I didn't notice the clunkier phrasing you pointed out, or the sentences that don't make much sense, when I uploaded this. What you made out from some of the iffier lines, such as the owner line, is pretty much what I was going for, but I'll be sure to go back, read it more carefully, and make amendments so that the chapter reads easier; thank you so much for pointing it out! I'm glad that you think Connor is an endearing character, and that you've taken such an interest in the start of his journey; my only hope is that you enjoy how these themes actually end up being explored in future chapters (particularly with what you touched on at the end of your review). There is a lot of story that's still to get through before all of this is explored in depth, but I hope you're not disappointed with the chapters immediately following this. As for the jacket thing... admittedly, I think I got a bit carried away with my metaphors and didn't stop to think about the logic, in all honesty. It would be on brand for Connor to get it online, realise it's too big for him, and then get all anxious about it and end up not returning it, though. He definitely spends too much time in his head for his own good. Thanks once again for the review!
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Post by Firebrand on Apr 18, 2019 19:42:47 GMT
I've always thought that the opening bit to a journey fic is probably the hardest, since you as the writer have to make it interesting enough to hook your reader, while at the same time contending with the mainstay tropes that make up the journeyfic genre that anyone who's read more than, like, two fics in this fandom will be familiar with to the point where it becomes old hat. So it's a tough tightrope to walk, considering you have to be engaging and interesting to people who have seen it all before, while still grounding things in familiar conventions to help set the stage. And you have to do all of this before you can really dig into the meat of what makes your fic in particular unique and noteworthy.
So like Oyster mentioned, this chapter serves as a good introduction to your protagonist, who we're going to be following for all of this. You set him as an older teenager, who's obsessively studied pokemon for years, so we can assume he's not going to make any kind of silly rookie mistakes, like sending a fire type against a water type, or wonder why he can't hit a ghost with a normal type move. The way he rattles off information to himself and goes all walking encyclopedia reminds me a bit of Midoriya from My Hero Academia, and I don't know if you pulled a little inspiration from there. Either way, it's kind of endearing, and it shows how in his own head Connor is. And of course, his social anxiety and general introversion (I mean, the guy is more nervous about talking with a gym leader than actually battling) gives him a big hurdle to overcome on his journey, especially since this franchise is all about connection to your team and the friends you make along the way. So basically, we have a trainer starting out who's a little older than the canonical 10-11, which means they're going to be a little more competent and less childish than otherwise, but it also gives them the sort of problems that crop up in later adolescence, and it gives this fic room to breathe as a real coming-of-age story. Connor's got some maturity, but he's got a ways to go before he really matures.
I also agree that at times the prose feels a bit too much. It's not so much your actual verbiage or voice, it's just that you're trying to cram so much into a sentence, especially when it comes to describing the human characters. You try to squeeze in hair color, eye color, etc. in such a short span but I don't think that's necessary, especially when you take the time to describe Connor's parents while in the midst of another scene that's way more interesting than a physical description. I assume the parents probably aren't going to be major characters anyway, since this is a journeyfic, so devoting page space to fleshing them out seems extraneous if they're only going to pass through the story briefly.
Take all of this with a grain of salt, of course. I'm of the school of thought that when it comes to describing characters, the less work you do, the better. I really don't get into physical features unless it's a defining characteristic (i.e. a character with a distinctive scar, or a particularly vibrant hair color/style, or a noteworthy body type). Your reader will fill in the details on most human characters, and it's safe to assume your audience is familiar with the basic appearance of most pokemon that you should be able to describe them in broad strokes. Actually, the introduction of the Aron was a well-done example of that, so hopefully further pokemon introduction skews more towards that. Mostly I bring this up because the prose is very adjective- and descriptor-heavy, and it seems to be getting in the way of the actual plot at several points throughout the chapter.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 27, 2019 12:19:11 GMT
Author's Note: once again, thank both of you so much for the feedback! I'm glad that you are enjoying the earlier stuff, and I appreciate your (honestly, correct) comments on the prose. Apologies for the delay with uploading this chapter; a lot of it was down to editing my draft and deciding whether or not to upload that version or the original. I decided to go with the original, because as imperfect and unpolished as my older stuff is, it's still the oldest material that exists of this story, and I would feel bad tearing them up and replacing them with something else (at least while this fic is still in progress; I don't want to get mired in editing until the whole thing is done, lol). I hope you understand, and I'm afraid this means there'll be more of the same for the next couple of chapters (though these ones are a bit more polished in my opinion), but at least you'll get to see how my writing has developed naturally, I suppose? (Besides, I have kept your wonderful feedback to heart when writing more recent material; your extensive commentary meant a lot). So, without further ado...
CHAPTER TWO: Welcome to the Machine, Part Two October 9th, 2007, 08:00 Hawley stood over Connor, his spiked crimson hair casting a shadow over his eyes, solid amber in hue as they looked daggers at the trainer on the ground before him. His mouth formed a self-assured smirk, the right side of his mouth arched up. His skin was clear, unstained by stress or hardship, his eyebrows neatly trimmed. His teeth were flawlessly white as they peered through his soft, unchapped lips. His arms were carelessly crossed and his shoulders were relaxed as he stood tall and straight, his lean frame casting a long shadow in the rising autumn sunlight. A shadow that surrounded Connor, suffocating him in its authority and sheer commanding presence. More than a little unnerved, he slowly came to his feet, repositioning himself to cover Aron as he stood to look up at Hawley in the face. Despite his best efforts, he couldn't help but feel deterred by the stare Hawley was giving him. The height difference between the two was only four inches, but even in the out and open, the new trainer felt as if he were only two feet tall, gazing up at a world-eating monster before him as its glimmering jewels for eyes stared back. His mere presence was enough to send shivers running down Connor's body, the hairs on his body standing on end. "H-Hawley," greeted Connor, gulping as he forlornly gazed at the floor, backing away from the pair's game of ocular chicken. The tension in the air grew thick, smothering him as a brief silence ensued. "Hawley what? Answer my question, ingrate!" demanded his rival in explosive response, his arms crossed, his voice unwavering as his grin shifted into an enraged frown. "R-right, right, Pokémon, yeah… yeah, that's Aron. Just got him today," replied Connor quietly, squirming to avoid his rival's leer. He cast his mind back to his childhood, back when he was eight or nine, when he used to hang out near Lake Verity. All he wanted was to see the Pokémon out in the wild, get a view of nature, have a place to relax. But not if Hawley and his friends had anything to say about it. They'd berate him, terrorize him with Pokémon, call him names, push him in the water when he was caught unaware. He recalled why they stopped, of course - that mystery Pokémon attacked them. Knocked them right out without ever revealing itself. The Pokémon he'd been dying to find out about, striving for years to meet; perhaps one day, if he was lucky, he'd even become its trainer. But that was beside the point - more importantly, Hawley definitely hadn't forgotten that, either. He'd gone out of his way whenever he had the chance to make Connor's life a living hell, it seemed, and it looked as if today was no different. Connor felt a coldness on the back of his leg, and turned around, looking down to see Aron hiding in his shadow, avoiding the opposing trainer. The Steel-type's soft blue eyes gazed back up at his trainer, and as their gazes met, Connor felt two things. One was a warmth, a certain fondness in the Pokémon's eyes as he regarded his trainer. The other was something of a plea - he noticed his Pokémon's pupils contract, stubby legs quivering. Aron was scared. Scared of the intruder of this peace standing before him. He didn't want to face him - and, truthfully, neither did Connor. As far back as he could remember, Hawley had always been the bane of Connor's existence. At every opportunity, he'd treated him like dirt, crushed his spirit for no discernible reason, stomped on him and kicked him when he was down. Anything Connor could do, Hawley could do ten times better - they both knew it, and his adversary wasn't afraid to let him know this. "Hmph." Hawley peered around Connor's leg to get a look at his opponent's Pokémon, scrutinizing Aron with an unimpressed frown on his face. The Pokémon met his gaze and quickly backed down, retreating back into the shadow of his trainer, much to Hawley's amusement as he looked back at Connor with a smirk. "You're calling that a Pokémon? I'm not sure whether I should laugh or cry, to be perfectly honest with you. But of course, why do I - why should I - expect any better from trash like you?" Connor gritted his teeth and began to fidget with his fingers, clenching his right hand into a fist as his Pokémon glanced back up at him, beginning to tremble all over now. "Well, m-maybe he's not the strongest right now, b-but-" "Buh, buh, b-but w-what, d-dickweed? By Arceus, you'd think you had a stutter!" called out his rival in mocking response, the sound of harsh, cackling laughter poorly masked in the second half of the sentence. Connor's fist clenched tighter, knuckles beginning to whiten as he took a deep breath in, pausing to consider his words before he spoke, standing up straighter and looking up at Hawley, staring him in the eyes. "But a Pokémon's fighting ability isn't everything, y'know. Me and Aron, we'll get stronger, trainer and Pokémon alike; and maybe I'll catch some other Pokémon on the way, too! Whatever happens, mark my words - I will become stronger than you! Just you wait until I kick your ass someday - and then we'll see who's smiling." Hawley listened attentively to this, giving a flat and unimpressed look as Connor went along, without breaking his stare. Except for that last part. The ridiculousness of what he was hearing was too much to not react to, as he recoiled in shock, blinking in sheer disbelief. Connor, defeating him? Connor? Defeating him? It was an insult, a slight on his honor, that such an outlandish thought had even crossed his rival's mind. Quite frankly, such insolence could not go unpunished - it would seem, Hawley realized as a smirk began to blossom, that this worthless pile of human refuse needed to be cut down a level or two. Indeed, Connor's balloon of new-found confidence quickly deflated as Hawley approached him. Like a popped balloon, he stood down, sweat beginning to run across his head as his rival, a wry grin on his face, stepped towards him, before beginning with a chuckle. "Oh, you'll kick my ass, will you? Hah! At least you seem to have grown a pair of balls, I'll commend you for that. Yet I don't think I've heard anything so… so naive, so moronic, so stupid in my life. Do you want a repeat of the lake incidents? Do you need me to beat you again? When will you get it through your thick skull that you are nothing to me? Wh- what has it been, now; eight years, and you still haven't realized that you are completely and utterly beneath me. How can I put this in Pokémon terms, so that maybe for once you'll understand - people like you are like a... like a Magikarp, helplessly struggling along the waters of life, swimming along and going on with your pathetic excuse of a life with no means for growth. You are, and forever will be, trapped in permanent stagnation, doomed to nothing more than painful mediocrity. I, on the other hand, am a glorious Pidgeot, gliding along in the skies of glory and ascending to heights you could not even comprehend if you tried - and I've yet to even begin to peak. Naturally, like a predator and his prey, it would seem the two of us are bound to meet, and naturally, I outperform you in every way you can imagine, and I always will. You're destined to be beneath me forever, and nothing you can ever do will ever change that. So when I tell you to grovel at my feet, it would be much easier for you to stop splashing at my feet, and it saves me the effort of beating you dead, and therefore, when I tell you to grovel, you will fucking grovel! Am I perfectly clear?!" Connor was silent in response to this relentless tirade, finding himself leaning back, struggling to avoid falling over his diminutive companion as he began to wave his arms about to remain sturdy. With one eye, he glanced back down at the Pokémon. Despite the clear threat imposed by Hawley, Aron was standing tall. He was no longer quivering. He seemed ready to battle. It had seemed that he'd been roused by Connor's speech about growing stronger together and his seeming defiance to bow down to him. Truth be told, he was caught off-guard by his newfound ability to go against Hawley, to defy him and to not feel threatened by his constant rants. Could it be, he thought, that he was more confident because he knew he had a Pokémon on his side? But that was unreasonable - it had only been an hour since they'd first met… yet, try as he might, he couldn't think of anything else it could have been. As cliché as it sounded, Connor reckoned that it was having someone who relied on him, a newly-met friend, that was giving him this sense of confidence. No matter how hard he was made to squirm, no matter how much Hawley loomed over him, he wouldn't back down. After all, he seriously doubted his rival could say the same about having someone to care about, that self-centered asshole? "Alright. If you're not going to show me any respect, then I suppose I'll have to kick you and your pile of rocks' asses," Hawley declared, no remorse in his voice as he fumbled in his pocket, grabbing a Pokéball of his own as he turned and took a few paces back. He swiveled around on one leg before standing tall, legs wide and shoulders relaxed, staring him in the eyes. Authority emanated from him, the brutality and swagger in his body language giving the impression of complete and impenetrable superiority over his foe. "Wh- wait, no-" "Oh, it's too late to back down now, you worthless sack of shit. Croagunk, go!" Putting an arm out as he hurled the ball overarm, Hawley sent out his first Pokémon. The Pokéball hit the ground with a soft thud, bouncing once before opening to release a flow of brilliant blue light. The light materialized into a frog-like Pokémon, standing about a foot taller than Aron and staring down at him, passive and unaffected. Its red sacs were like bubbles of gum as they inflated and deflated, its mouth an indifferent smile as it prepared to attack. This was bad. This was very bad. Panic began to set in, slowly eroding Connor's spirit, as he took a step back, sending Aron forth. Alright, Connor, focus - Croagunk. Bands high up - female; quieter than males - perhaps less aggressive? Poison-type, fighting-type - Aron resists poison-type moves completely, but fighting-type? Entirely different story. Equally proficient in physical and special attacks. Mostly only naturally learns physical moves at the early stages of life, but… but… dammit! Think! Was there a-"Mud-Slap!" called out Hawley, a brutal enthusiasm accompanying his voice. With a nod and a guttural croak, Croagunk took a couple of lumbering steps towards Aron before effortlessly shooting her hands into the Earth with deceptive speed. "Gah- uh, counter that with a Headbutt, Aron!" blurted out Connor, uncertainty in his voice as he hoped Aron knew what Headbutt was. Indeed, Connor's hunch proved correct; the Pokémon let out a quiet yet determined 'ar!' as he charged at Croagunk, eyelids narrowed, pupils determined, legs carrying him forward with all the speed and urgency they could handle. Croagunk didn't seem fazed by this in the slightest. But this didn't deter him. Hawley had threatened him, threatened his trainer, the human who seemed determined to protect him. So what if they'd only met a very short time ago? He could tell that his goals were noble, that he had his best interests at heart, that he was going to protect him and look after him - and besides, with the speed at which he ordered that attack, he clearly had everything planned out. Now less than a foot away from the Croagunk, Aron reared his head back and leaped at the Poison-type before him. Before he had the chance to made contact, his opponent swiftly removed her hands from the ground, scooping up an armful of debris and hurling it at Aron. A wave of mud and earth smashed into his head and body, as he let out a pained screech, scoops of dirt getting into his eyes. The attack threw him off balance and sent him hurtling backward in the air. It was only mud, and yet it felt like something was prying Aron apart as large particles of dirt got in between the steel and rock of his torso. "And beat it whilst it's down! Wake-Up Slap!" he continued in a triumphant roar, with more than a hint of ruthlessness and harshness present in his voice. "SKREEEE!" called out Croagunk as she surged forward, hurling her left arm back as she lunged towards the airborne Steel-type. With the speed of a bullet, she brought that arm forward, the backside of her left hand smashing into Aron's torso and sending him flying further backward, utterly helpless and unable to harden himself in time for the attack. The poor thing was barely able to move after it slammed into the ground with a heavy crash, heaving to flip itself over and hide his badly bruised torso, purple from the Croagunk's attacks. No, no, no! Of course Croagunk learns how to use Mud-Slap when young! Dammit, I should know this! Wake-Up Slap, too - inherited moves! Dammit! There's no way you'll be able to keep up with him if I keep making these brain-dead mistakes - it's taken him two attacks, and Aron's already on the verge of passing out! You utter moron! You absolute cretin! You're a poor excuse for a trainer!"What was that about kicking my ass earlier, eh?" called out Hawley, smugness oozing from every pore as he gazed menacingly at his adversary, his Croagunk slowly marching towards her wounded enemy, an air of calmness surrounding her as she prepared to finish him off. Connor wasn't willing to give up, though. He was still willing to fight, and it seemed as though the same was true for his partner. A rebellious smile lit up his face for a split second as he had a thought - Aron, too, was capable of Mud-Slap in the early stages of his life - and whilst it was super-effective on Steel-types and Rock-types, it was also super-effective on Poison-types, too. His eyes shot to Aron, fixing on his Pokémon. "Aron, we can still win this! Mud-Slap, as fast as you can!" A pained, less enthusiastic nod was Aron's reply as he grunted under his breath, urgently digging his legs into the ground as he launched uprooted soil and dirt at Croagunk's skin, burning like acid as it sunk into her poisonous sacs. This caused her to writhe in pain, clutching at her face and letting out an audible screech of discomfort. Her relaxed look at the Aron turned into one of fury, as her brow furrowed and her expression became a vengeful squint. Hawley became visibly annoyed as a result of this attack, his voice going hoarse with rage as he ordered his next attack. "How dare you even think that such worthless scum as yourself can even try and defeat my beautiful Pokémon?! Croagunk, show them what we do to garbage like your opponent!" Roaring with anger, Croagunk took a moment to compose herself as she launched from one leg at Aron, flattening her hands and crossing her arms whilst she propelled through the air. With the fury of a storm, she chopped at Aron, her hands hitting like bricks on her foe's head. The force of the impact was enough to annihilate Aron's defenses, crashing against the steel of his head. The impact was enough to shatter a massive amount of capillaries, and in an instant, it felt as if a hammer was pounding against both his torso and his head, agony pulsating around his entire body, much to Connor's visible shock and despair. "Hah! Beat me?! You couldn't even beat a drum, you worthless piece of trash! What makes trash like you think you could possibly stand up to someone as powerful as me? The weak must fear the strong, Connor, my boy! That's just the way the world works!" Connor shot his head down to the ground, shame and disgust enveloping him. With a defeated sigh, he picked up his Pokéball and clicked the button on it. There was no use in persisting - it was clear Hawley would crush him if he tried to fight back, and there was no knowing what he'd do to Aron. He couldn't let his Pokémon get hurt badly so early in his journey - what sort of trainer would gamble their Pokémon's well-being for the chance to settle an old rivalry? The guilt of letting Aron down, the weight of defeat pulled him down like chains on the ground, but for now, he just had to swallow his dignity and take this loss. "Aron… return. We'll work on it, partner." The heavily bruised Pokémon was enveloped in light as he returned to the safety of his ball, Connor tucking it away from the world and into his pocket as Hawley let out a dry chuckle, doing the same with his Pokémon. "Excellent work, Croagunk," he muttered, not taking his eyes off his defeated foe, as the ball opened, the Poison-type returning to it. "That'll show 'em who's boss." With both Pokémon off the field, he marched towards Connor, sharply grabbing at his collar with both hands and lifting him up despite his sharp recoil. The air was ripped from his lungs as he was dragged up to face his aggressor at eye level, not daring to fight back as he felt the sanctity of his soul penetrated by that horrible glare of dominance, those pupils dilated like a frenzied shark, and that self-assured smirk. "So, am I clear now?" "Grk- y, yes," choked Connor, an air of complete desolation falling over him. "Yes what?" replied Hawley, stern and unblinking, his tone harsh like that of a drill sergeant's. "Y-yes, Hawley." " Will you try and beat me? Will you try and kick my ass?" "No, Hawley." "And propose you were that much of a damned idiot to do so - would you succeed?" "...No, Hawley." With that, he practically flung his opponent back onto the ground, leaving him in a pile of crumpled limbs and broken dreams on the soiled grass below as he marched off. "Good. Now, stay out of my way, trash. Know your place in future," he called back, running his hair back with his hands as he began to whistle a venomous tune.
About an hour had passed, and yet the self-loathing persisted. Connor's triumphant, proud stride towards Sandgem had quickly shifted into a defeated, slow trudge; the adventure he had set out to enjoy had turned into a shameful chore, the feeling of defeat weighing a tonne as his feet shuffled down Route 202. Of course, he couldn't throw his toys in the pram and give up after two hours of being a trainer - even by his standards, that was beyond laughable. It was what Hawley would want, too; any failure of his would please that cocky asswipe. As much as it sucked, Connor knew he had to - as his father would say - "build a bridge and get over it." But that didn't make it suck any less. If anything, the comfort of knowing he had a way out would have been a mood lightener in this situation. At least that way, Aron wouldn't have a trainer who let it get hurt badly in some ill-fated attempt to settle a score, a trainer that was so utterly hopeless when it came to people, a trainer who even thought about giving up after losing one battle. But Connor wasn't about to surrender just yet. No, he'd prove his parents wrong, prove Hawley wrong, prove the world wrong, and he'd be the trainer he dreamt he could be, the one Aron deserved. So what if that asshole was a trainer too? With enough hard work, determination, and practice, any obstacle could be overcome - sure, that was easier said than done, but nothing was impossible. He knew that these were empty platitudes, of course, but right now, they were all he had. All he could do now was lift himself up, move on and keep repeating them in the outlandish hope that perhaps one day, they were more than just words. As he trundled along his path, riddled with far too much guilt to check on Aron, he was focused on clenching his teeth; his breathing was deep, each breath in slow and each breath out heavy. Anything to help cope with this awful feeling, so long as it wasn't crying. Tears were a sign of weakness, and whatever he did, no matter how hard things got, crying was absolutely not an option. What would Hawley do if he saw his sixteen-year-old rival blubbering like a baby? He had to suck it up and keep going. Move on, Connor. Just move on.He continued to trudge along down the road, despondent as he trudged over a ledge as he continued in much the same line of thought. As he approached Sandgem, he decided it would be more appropriate to head to the Pokémon Center first - after all, he had to be sure Aron was alright. What was more, it gave him a chance to smooth things over with his Pokémon before he headed out to the professor's lab, in case the battle against Croagunk had left a bad taste in the poor guy's mouth; to add to both of those, what sort of impression would it make on the professor if he turned up with a badly bruised Pokémon asking for a certificate? These thoughts still whirred through his mind, wracking his brain as his shoes made their first steps onto the grass of the seaside town. The freshness of the beach air, whilst coming from a route over, did a pretty good job of lifting the crestfallen trainer's spirits. Whilst there was, admittedly, sparse amounts of sand for the self-proclaimed "Town of Sand," the scenery was still rather quaint; the air complimented this perfectly, clearing his mind as he took a few deep breaths in and out. It felt as though the great burden weighing him down had gone. Of course, it would have been irresponsible to take in the sights for too long - where was the sense in this lingering around when Aron was in the state that he was? No, the Pokémon Center had to come first, followed by a trip to the Professor's lab, then he could relax. A sense of solemn duty overwhelmed him as he marched towards the Center, his hand firmly on his Pokéball as the door whirred open. "Hi, welcome to the Sandgem Pokémon Center!" chimed the nurse as this young man approached her, beaming widely and raising a waving hand. "How may we help you today, young man?" What if she sees the state he's in and refuses me service? What if she thinks I beat him? I can't disprove her - and what if she refuses me service because I don't have a license? What if she confiscates him? This is bad - but I can't run out now! What if she thinks I'm some sort of terrorist?! Oh, you've REALLY gotten yourself into a sticky situation now!He tried desperately to mask the dread he was feeling, a lump in his throat growing as the nurse loomed over him from the other end of the room. Agh! Snap out of it, Connor, you're overthinking this! All I have to do is take a deep breath, compose yourself, calmly let her know that my Pokémon needs healing, go get your license, come back and I'll be alright.With that, a fake smile spread across his face. Maybe, just maybe, that'd do it? "Um… young man, are you alright?" enquired the deeply concerned nurse, getting a closer look at Connor as he shuffled closer. "You're sweating. Is there something I can help you with?" Why.His mind went into a frenzy and it showed, much to the increasing disquiet of the worried nurse. Silence as Connor approached the nurse's desk, and silence when he stopped moving, turning towards the nurse. It was as if the word "panic" was etched on his face as he strained to think of a way to phrase his problem, failing with each attempt. The nurse could only tilt her head, struggling to guess what was wrong, as silence still saturated the air. "Are you a new trainer?" finally asked the nurse, warmly smiling at him in an attempt to get to the bottom of the problem. "Oh, uh, yeah, I am," stuttered Connor in reply. "How- how could you tell?" A kind chuckle. "We get them all the time, often just after they face their first loss. They usually come in with expressions just like that, but I've got to admit, you might just be the most nervous one I've ever seen. Please don't fret so much, though. I'll do everything I can to help you. Would you mind telling me your problem, then?" "I… I got my Aron hurt, because there was this one trainer, who I've known since I was a kid - right - and he made me fight him, because I think he hates me, and I didn't want to, but I did, and he had a Croagunk, and, uh, it got really mad that I-" "Slow down. Take a deep breath," reassured the nurse, gesturing for him to stop. "You got your Aron hurt because someone made you fight him?" Connor nodded. "And you couldn't say no?" "I guess not? He probably would've killed me if I tried, knowing him, I suppose. I didn't trust him to not attack me with his Pokémon, b-but… I shouldn't have brought mine into it," he said, with a little more confidence than before. "I see. What's your name, young man?" Not good! What if she thinks you're lying? What if she thinks you hurt Aron?!As she waited for a response, the nurse's eyes widened and she awkwardly spurted something out. "Oh - don't worry, I'm not going to get you in trouble or anything! I'm asking so I know who to call when I'm done healing your Pokémon, that's all." "Oh, haha... uh, my name's Connor, ma'am," he sheepishly laughed. "Okay, Connor, could you please pass me your Pokéball so I can heal Aron?" "Huh? Oh, of course, yeah." Connor, having had a hand on the ball the whole time, still somehow fumbled the ball as he pulled it out from his belt in one swift movement. It slipped from a sweaty palm and over the nurse's desk, much to his horror. "Oh, nurse, I'm sor-" "Don't worry about it, honestly!" chuckled the nurse. "Your Pokémon is still in the ball. Now, would you mind waiting in the Center whilst we heal your Aron? It should only take a couple of minutes - after all, I doubt a first battle can do that much damage to a Pokémon, so I wouldn't worry too much." He nodded, giving a thumbs up as he retreated to a seat, spending the next several minutes contemplating the journey that lay ahead of him. It had dawned on him that having roughly the same social skills as a chair was far from the best of plans. Perhaps working on that was a bigger priority than training he first thought. Sure, sticking to what he was good at wasn't a bad idea, either (although using the word "good" to describe his skills was probably a stretch considering the beatdown he had just received), but something had to give - if the first hours of his adventure had been anything to go by, meeting other people was an inevitability, and an inevitability he feared more than most Pokémon. I mean, being afraid of a Pokémon Center nurse? Come on, Connor! You had no problems getting friendly with a creature made of steel and rock that can eat through steel - what gives?!It only took ten minutes for the waiting to finish, but it felt like much longer before the nurse called out to Connor, gesturing him over to the desk. "So, uh… is he okay?" asked Connor, his voice flavored with concern. "I really had no idea he'd get hurt so bad, and I know I'm repeating myself, bu-" "Oh, relax, relax, he's fine. Out of curiosity, though… how long was that battle you had with that other trainer and their Croagunk?" inquired the nurse as she handed the Pokéball back. Her lack of a smile worried Connor. "They landed three attacks before I called Aron back. Why? What happened? He is alright, isn't he?" he responded, starting to panic. "I have to say, that's quite a lot of damage for three turns. And you recalled Aron before the fight could go on, did you?" "I did - look, please just-" "It's a good thing that you did, then, otherwise your little buddy might've been out of commission for a while. But please, stop fretting, he's absolutely fine! How long have you been traveling with Aron, Connor?" "About two hours, but the fight happened in the first hour." "Wait, really? That's… that's genuinely impressive that you already feel so strongly about your Pokémon, then," chirped the nurse, warmly smiling. "I'm also warranting a guess that the Croagunk and its trainer had significantly more than an hour of training. So please don't beat yourself up about it, guy. This seems a lot more like bad luck on your end." "I… I mean, I'm flattered you think that, but… I shouldn't have let myself get involved in the first place," Connor sighed, abject as his head hung low. "Like, obviously I care about my Pokémon, but a good trainer wouldn't have let himself get involved. I messed up badly." "Well, nobody can become a good trainer after an hour, Connor - and you did a good job, recalling him before serious damage could have been done. Being a Pokémon trainer is a learning curve, and anyone can do it if they're determined enough. Besides, you said yourself that you don't think you had a choice to get involved, so why blame yourself? My advice to you would be to stop being so hard on yourself, young man. Losing is hardly the end of the world." He carefully considered these words. Whilst the nurse was right, it still didn't justify putting his Pokémon in danger like he did - however, that was beside the point. He had promised himself that he'd move on, and so far, he was doing a pretty poor job of that. With a half-smile, he looked at the nurse and nodded, faint determination visible on his face. "Alright. Yeah. I'll bear that in mind. Thanks." "Anytime!" On that note, he took a seat at one of the tables in the Center. One of the perks of starting on a Tuesday was that most people were at work or school; as such, Pokémon Centers would often be quite empty, as they were now. Indeed, aside from the people that worked there, the only other person in the Center was a trainer with an… interesting fashion sense, who seemed to be trying to gain the trust of his Gible (and failing). Connor couldn't help but wonder what someone with a Gible was doing in Sandgem - or any Dragon-type, for that matter. Not wishing to intrude, he pulled out the Pokéball and released Aron onto the table. "Hey, Aron," he uttered quietly, radiating a soft smile - one that he couldn't help feel that came off as brittle and weak, and caused Aron to flinch slightly, shoot a somewhat uncomfortable glance to the side. His trainer inhaled through his nose, pausing briefly to thinking of a plan of action. The first time he and Aron had met had ended in Aron getting hurt - so it wasn't out of the question to assume Aron associated him with getting hurt. The solution was obvious, then; he had to prove that he was not, in fact, a threat, and had his best interests at heart. Connor carefully lay out an open palm in front of the Steel-type, looking him straight in the eyes as he tried to strengthen his smile. "Look," he began slowly, his tone as though he was talking to a small child. "I'm sorry, bud. I didn't mean to get you hurt so bad. It was stupid on my part, and I'm truly sorry. It won't happen again, I promise. You might not be the strongest now, but with a little hard work and training, you can become way stronger than that Croagunk." As he finished his monologue, the emotion in his voice became more and more evident, the determination in it raw and clear. "I believe in you, little guy, and in future, I'll try to keep you out of stuff like that, and we'll work on getting me smarter and getting you toughened up so that we can kick mean old Hawley's butt together, because one day, there'll be nothing we won't be able to do! Does that sound alright to you, Aron?!" Aron considered this. Of course, being a Pokémon and lacking any telepathic skills, he understood very little of what his trainer was saying, but the overall message he got was a positive one. His words were warm, his body language friendly, and his delivery full of emotion… Aron couldn't mistake it. It was clear to him that Connor meant no harm; rather, he was just a little green; for now, he was definitely worth placing his trust in. The Steel-type chirped an excited 'ar!' as he approached the outstretched palm, placing a little stub of his own on it. Connor laughed in relief, reaching into his pocket to pull out another piece of iron. As he did so, he noticed the Gible's trainer was giving him a half-bemused, half-impressed look. Nervously, he raised a hand as if to apologize, before putting the iron on the table before his Pokémon. This was going to be hard work, Connor thought, but he might just make it yet.
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Surviving exam weeks... I'm the Professor...
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Post by JoJoBaoh on Apr 29, 2019 19:48:12 GMT
Hello there!
I finished reading your fic and want to say two little things, don't worry, it's nothing bad.
1.- I feel that the paragraphs are too long, to much text in one paragraph can be decieving for some people, I'm not saying this not for me, but to other people I encountered that suffer for this, you can change it or not, is up to you.
2.- I'm in my cellphone so I'm new to find and quote things right, but I saw words followed by the same word, as the other user stated, "light blue light..." thingy can be changed to:
Light blue beam/ A ray of light blue/ Sky blue light.
This can be useful to find synonymous.
After that I can dig out the story itself.
First, I love me some journey fics because usually there are OCs and I like to find what they can do according the progress of your story. Usually there are bad but then gain the confidence to keep going.
Connor is a mix, from time to time his thoughts are WAY to dramatic that can be annoying sometimes (I.e. the Pokémon Center scene) but that's on me.
But... I relate to him with Hawly (or Howdy as I like to call him) because i suffered fron bullying and I stopped him with violence (I'm against violence but that case was the only choice) so having him a scared boy who wants to be stronger got on my feels, I can't wait when he'll defeat him.
So for now, everything is all good. Keep going!
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the seal will bite you if you give him half a chance
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Post by girl-like-substance on Apr 29, 2019 22:14:25 GMT
Man, even the narration acknowledges that Hawley is completely OTT, huh. Like that introduction makes it very clear what we're getting ourselves into right at the start, with the bombast with which it introduces him – but even then, I'm not sure I was totally prepared for the actual fact of it. This guy isn't just a pantomime villain, he's like … actually a cartoon character who's somehow made the jump off the screen and into Connor's life, huh. There were a few places where I really questioned how credible he is as a character – especially when he delivered like a whole paragraph of invective without pause, replete with overdone metaphors and a weird self-positioning that made him seem like he saw himself as some kinda older authority figure (who calls someone their own age 'my boy'?) – but then again … if I was asked who of everyone in the world was most likely to be Like That, then I'd have to say a big-headed teenage boy would probably be on the list. I'm sure I've known teen assholes who are like Hawley, though of course not quite to the same degree. Some of it is probably due to exaggeration by Connor, I suppose? Like when he says Hawley would have killed him, that's clearly not actually literally true, after all.
Anyway, he's certainly amusing, if not always totally plausible as like, a person, but perhaps there's more to him than meets the eye? Someone who's trying this hard has got to have some kind of motivation; sure, he could just be trying to feel bigger than Connor, but like, the kid's so spectacularly weird that I feel like there has to be something more than that behind all this. I guess I'll look forward to finding out what!
It is, however, a little repetitive – especially in the two consecutive paragraphs that end with a description of how Hawley's always been the bane of Connor's existence, which seem to be doing double duty. But I wasn't going to repeat previous criticisms, since I've made them already and you've said that you're going to be focusing on new content rather than editing older chapters (which is totally fair and reasonable!), so I'll move on from the style critique to something different: I'm not so sure about the way you drop in and out of other people's POVs. We live really deep in Connor's head for most of this fic, following the winding of his anxious thoughts as they pace round the edge of his skull, and it's really pretty jarring to just drop into Hawley or the aron's head for fifty words and then immediately go right back to the depths of Connor's again. To make it work, I think you'd either need to double down on having multiple POVs, and spend time consistently in each, or keep us firmly in Connor's – because honestly, he's an empathetic, observant kid; everything that we see through the aron or Hawley's eyes is something that I'm pretty sure he could've seen (even if he wasn't always confident that he'd identified it correctly) in their body language or faces or whatever, and you don't need to rely on the crutch of alternative POVs to get it across to us.
I do like how you set things up so that you think Connor's going to lose, and then he does. Decisively. That's pretty good. I think it's pretty much impossible to set a thing like that up so the outcome is a surprise – you expect people to turn around situations like this, and you also expect them to not turn them around and just fail, and you also wouldn't be startled if they just sort of slugged it out to a draw – so the key thing has to be making the outcome feel both deserved and satisfactory, and that's what you do here with this one, I think!
I'm also a big fan of the calm, friendly, and above all reassuring characterisation of the Pokémon Centre staff. These are people who've dedicated their lives to helping kids do something really weird and hard and potentially very rewarding, and that's the vibe I get from the nurse. And okay, I enjoy that interpretation so I'm biased, but you do it well, and it's a pleasure.
Anyway! Some tiny nitpicks and also blow-by-blow reactions to round things off:
That should be 'he' and 'himself', not 'it' and 'itself', to be consistent with your usual usage. Also, while I appreciate the way this low-level battle reads a lot like two animals smashing haphazardly and rather viscerally into each other, which, let's face it, is what battles between novices are, I'm kinda wondering how these bruises are visible on the aron's armour, which is presumably made of metal and therefore not something that can bruise.
Not a criticism, this just made me smile. :V
I have less tan no idea what that is, but I kinda wish I could do it myself.
The expression is 'to throw one's toys out of the pram', not into it.
These two consecutive 'as he did X' clauses tacked onto one another read really weirdly.
Some things are universal, it seems: trainers do just have a tendency to dress weirdly. :P
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Post by Deleted on May 19, 2019 19:34:01 GMT
Author's notes: thank you all so much for your wonderful feedback, and I am so sorry for the long delay in updating this; I have been busy as of recent. I will hopefully be a bit more on the ball with these next updates. I hope you enjoy this new (well, old, but technically new?) chapter.
CHAPTER THREE: Welcome to the Machine, Part Three 09:30 - October 9th, 2007Life, as Connor's uncle had always said, is like the seas. Sometimes it's calm and easy, other times rough and full of danger, but with a bit of luck, wisdom, and persistence, anyone can get through it.That statement rang true in Connor's head at that very moment. So what if the last two and a half hours had been an almost complete trainwreck, he thought as the seaside winds filled his lungs? It didn't matter too much as long as he still had Aron onside, and if that rocky introduction hadn't sent their relationship off course, it would probably be smooth sailing from here on out. If he could keep his head up after that, if he could stay out of the way of dangers like Hawley, and if he just kept going, then everything would be fine. If being the key word, of course. The professor's lab, decayed by time and weather, still stood tall as it loomed over Connor. It was clear that the building had seen many trainers over the years, and it wasn't a stretch to say that several generations of professors had looked over it, too. Of course, Connor had seen it quite a few times in books and photos, even up close once or twice, but the feeling that swept over him was entirely different now. This was where his journey would officially begin, where he could leave his past as an insignificant youth behind him. His loneliness, his school years, his boredom were relics of a different time as he lay a hand on the cold door handle. From this moment on, the world was Connor's oyster. The future lay ahead of him, and he was free to do what he wished with it. At least, that was the plan. The door swung open to reveal a more modern, yet quite busy interior. Easily the most useless piece of trivia Connor had found on his bored forays on the web were the dimensions of the first floor of the lab was 42' by 48' - just long enough to fit a Wailord in - and yet it seemed a lot smaller than that. Men and women in lab coats surrounded him, and in turn, they were surrounded by computers, bookcases and Pokémon alike. Oh, the Pokémon. The moment he stepped into the lab, Connor recognised no less than nine different species in the lab, ranging from Turtwig and Starly to Luxray and Drapion, and each of them seemed to be in great shape, too. A smile lit up Connor's face as he saw this, looking around like a child in a chocolate factory. If the whole trainer thing backfired, his backup plan was to study and become a professor of his own; considering how wonderful, how magnificent this place where people and Pokémon worked together was, however, made him feel as though he might have picked the wrong career choice. "Impressive, isn't it, eh?" Connor's head darted up to his side, navigating up a vast lab coat and black t-shirt to see a well-made man of about thirty-five grinning widely down at him, extending out a hand much larger than his own as his emerald eyes shined at the trainer through a clean pair of glasses. The man, his short black hair glimmering in the light of the lab, was powerful and booming in his speech; he stood almost a foot taller than Connor, and yet somehow it felt like it was more - the guy was built like a Terrakion and had a voice to match, too. Connor couldn't help but feel as if he was in the presence of a comic book hero. "Professor Murphy, at your service," said the man, continuing to hold out his hand. "Oh… uh, no thanks, sir," mumbled Connor, darting his eyes back and forth at the outstretched hand. "Ah, I see! No worries! And you are…?" "Connor, sir." Murphy paused for a moment, giving Connor almost enough time to go on one of his paranoid tangents before he gave an earth-shattering laugh. "There's no need for all this 'sir' business, young man! Are you from around these parts?" "Jubilife, si- er, Murphy." "Oh, wonderful! We get a lot of trainers from Jubilife coming up here, and a lot of them seem to be about your age, you know. I reckon we've had no less than ten in the past week! Say, would you happen to know a Steven Peters?" "...No." "Florence Martin?" "Nope." The professor began rubbing his chin with his colossal hands, his "Uh… who else have we had… Torvald Henriksen?" Connor shook his head. "Hawley Wilkins?" Connor grimaced, sucking in through his teeth. "I wouldn't exactly say we're close. But aside from him, I, uh… I'm not really familiar with anyone else, aye." "Oh… Oh, right, I see. So you're not really a people's person then?" "That's the gist of it, I suppose." Murphy considered this for a moment, before his smile returned. "No matter! Introverted Pokémon masters are hardly rare. You must be more of a Pokémon guy, then, mustn't you?" Connor's eyes lit up as he nodded frantically, much to Murphy's delight. "Haha! That's what I like to hear! You've got the most important part of being a trainer down, then," he said as he glanced around, surveying the area for an empty workspace or table. None. "Hm… say, would you be willing to come along to somewhere less crowded? That way, we can get the paperwork and what-have-you out of the way in peace." "I guess?" "Excellent! Follow me!" With that, the professor strode out of the room and up some stairs, with Connor following close behind. Each footstep the man made was a loud thud, punctuating the tune he was humming; more specifically, Connor noted, the tune of the Sinnoh League anthem. It wasn't exactly going to give Meloetta a run for her money, of course, but it did get Connor thinking. It'd been a while since he'd watched the League, but he did vaguely recall a Murphy getting quite far in last year's edition of the tournament. Was this the same guy? This year's tournament was set to be from December 9th until the 23rd… was he preparing to compete again? "So, Connor, was it? Out of curiosity, what would you say your favourite species of Pokémon is?" asked the professor, interrupting this train of thought. "Favourite?" replied Connor, wracking his brain to respond. This was a question he asked himself a lot, yet for someone who'd spent so much time reading into Pokémon, it kind of frustrated him that he didn't really have a definite answer. Ever since he was a kid, his favourite would change depending on his interests. Connor decided to just go with his favourite at that moment. "...I would probably have to say Bisharp? I dunno. Steel-types are pretty cool, and there was that one goofy old show about that guy who dressed up like one and went around kicking the crap out of bad guys, wasn't there? That was fun." "Ah, from the Unova region! Exotic! Good choice, young man, if I do say so myself. And Masked Ranger is a classic!" Connor couldn't help but let out a slight chuckle at Murphy's enthusiasm. "Do you already have a Pokémon of your own, Connor?" asked the professor. "Yeah. An Aron. I only got him a couple of hours ago, but he's a pretty swell little dude," said Connor in response. "I can't wait to see how he is in battle!" "That's the spirit! Aron's a fine choice for a starter, too; it's good for beginners, it can hold its own in battle and evolves into something very impressive. There's a new technique that I'm hearing of that's spreading to Sinnoh as of recent. Mega Evolution or something; it's originally from Kalos, I believe? I know only a few Pokémon are capable of doing it, but I think Aggron's one of 'em." Connor had to stop himself from telling the professor about the battle he had recently had, in which Aron could not, in fact, hold its own. This Mega Evolution thing didn't ring any bells, though; he'd have to do some reading on it if he could. Was it permanent? Was it difficult to pull off? Were there any special requirements for using it? Connor guessed that using it would come with some sort of physical strain. but nevertheless, it was definitely something he'd need to look into. Either way, he had to admit, the term 'Mega Evolution' alone sounded just cool enough for him to want to give it a try. "Sounds neat!" he said, grinning. "Aye, it does," noted Murphy, "but I've heard it's very difficult to pull off. You'd need a Key Stone, for starters, and I really have no idea how you'd get one in Sinnoh - and believe me, I've tried. You also need the Mega Stone for Aggron, and you'd have the same problem there. The third thing you need is a very strong bond with your Pokémon. That'll probably come over time, of course, but it'll still end up taking a long time." "Oh. That's less neat," responded Connor, his grin fading as faint disappointment lingered in his voice. Silence filled the corridor, punctuated only by the pair's footsteps. The professor took note of Connor's response, as he quickly sought to correct his error - after all, what sort of professor would knock a kid down like that so soon into their journey? It was part of his job to make these kids believe they could do anything, and if that meant excessive optimism, then so be it! "Oh, but that isn't to say it isn't impossible, of course! By the time you'll have an Aggron on your hands, I reckon we'll know enough about it to help you out with it. And I'd hazard a guess and say you'll probably have fully evolved your little friend around the time you get your sixth, maybe seventh badge?" said the professor, his smile wide as ever. Connor considered this for a moment. According to his plan, his sixth and seventh gyms would be Canalave and Snowpoint respectively, and considering the strength of Canalave's gym, it would make sense for him to get Aggron at around that point, provided he kept Aggron as the strongest member of his party. "I'll tell you what, I'll make you a deal!" said Murphy. "If you come back here with six badges and an Aggron, I'll do everything in my power to get you the equipment you'd need to start practicing Mega Evolution. That sound fair?" "I… I mean, doesn't that sound dangerous? I appreciate it and all, but Mega Evolution sounds like it could have some pretty bad consequences if used irresponsibly. Also, should I know more about this before I get into it?" nervously replied Connor, trying his hardest to suppress a wince. Really?! thought the kid to himself. The professor merely gave him a bemused look. "...I can sorta see what you mean when you say you're not a people person, eh?" He gave a loud, hearty chuckle, almost like a gentle roar, before continuing. "Don't worry so much about it! I mean, I am obliged to mention Mega Evolution can exhaust you and your Pokémon if used too irresponsibly, but… it's basically nothing, anyway, haha! Besides, that's what practice is for, eh?" he asked in a jovial tone. "I… I mean, sure?" replied a confused Connor. "Besides, even if you and Aron don't click well enough to pull off Mega Evolution, you can still try your hand with other Pokémon - that's the beauty of being a trainer! As a matter of fact, there are two pieces of advice, Connor, that I give to every new trainer who comes to me. Wanna hear 'em?" asked the professor, giving a warm, encouraging smile. Connor nodded. Was he really like this with every trainer - so upbeat, so encouraging, so hopeful? The guy clearly knew what he was talking about; besides, if his hunch was correct, this guy had come quite close to becoming Champion of the Sinnoh League not long ago. Advice from him certainly wouldn't be a hindrance. "Rule number one: in this world, nobody out there, person or Pokémon, is born truly evil. As naive as it sounds, nobody is made bad; rather, the rest of the world may have made them that way. They may have good intentions but have gotten lost along the way. They may have grown cold, perhaps bitter, to the world, but there will still be good deep down within them. Heck, you may even just be misunderstanding them. My point is, be good to everyone. If you can do that, goodness will spread, and you'll make the world a better place in your own way." This was a sentiment Connor strongly agreed with when he thought about it. It made sense - nobody views themselves as the villain, after all. He doubted even someone as rotten as Hawley deliberately chose to be bad. Besides, sinking down to that level would make Connor no different from him. "And rule number two: as bad as things may seem, you must never give up on what you want to do, or what you believe in. If you fail once, it doesn't matter, so long as you pick yourself up and try again. Defeat doesn't come in a single failure or two, it comes in giving up and throwing your tools down. You mustn't let the world get you down, because that's how people go rotten and bad. If you don't let anything get in your way, then what can possibly stop you?" These words truly resonated with Connor who stood beside the professor. Something sounded different between Murphy's philosophy and the trainer's own mantra to keep his spirit afloat. Before he could think about this more, however, the professor stopped next to a door. "But you didn't come here for lectures about how the world works, didya, son? No, you came here to get yourself a license and a Pokédex! After all, you can't go on an adventure without those, can you?" A grin of glee flashed across Connor's face as Murphy swung the door open. If one was to judge only by the look on his face at that moment, they'd probably come to the conclusion that he had just barged into the living room on Christmas morning and was greeted by gifts smattered underneath a massive Christmas tree. That was, of course, not the case, but the sight of some paperwork stacked on a desk and Pokédexes on a shelf had a similar effect. Sure, the hats he'd seen in movies and on TV were missing - "we really weren't expecting such high demand for the hats," remarked a more than slightly bemused Murphy - and Connor would have been lying if he'd said that he wasn't a little bummed to be missing out on his obligatory cool hat, but that was beside the point! This was it! He was finally officially about to become a trainer! From this point on, he was free to make new friends, meet all different types Pokémon, take on the gyms of Sinnoh and become the best in the land! Connor felt ecstatic - at that moment, he was convinced there was nothing that would have made him felt any better. Aside from having one of those hats, of course, but you can't have everything. Murphy had to duck his head under the door frame as he walked into the room - standing tall at a towering six foot five, he'd smacked his head into it more times than he was proud to admit - with the eager novice behind him following him in. The professor's tree trunk-like legs pounded on the wooden floor with each step, before he pulled out a chair from the desk at the heart of the room. Connor was quite amazed at the sight of the professor's colossus of a frame being able to fit on the chair, his shoulders hunching as his massive arms, built like hammers, landed on the desk, his forearms almost as tall as the unkempt stack of paper next to him, on his took a seat on a more modern, bigger and decidedly more comfortable-looking, big black chair across from the professor. "You don't mind if I ask you something, do you, Professor?" enquired Connor, curious. "By all means, go ahead! And please, call me Murphy, I insist!" graciously replied the professor. "Why don't you use this chair instead of that old one you're sitting on? It seems like it'd be a lot easier on your back." "Well, because this room is for your start as a trainer, and the entire process is all about you - that's why you should have the best chair in the house, of course!" "...Are you sure you don't want this?" asked a flattered Connor, still concerned about the professor's level of comfort. "No, no, it's fine, really! You can keep it!" chimed the professor, his optimism still very much present. "Okay, thanks, but like... why don't you have two chairs like this?" wondered an audibly concerned Connor. "Why would I need one? My main priority for the lab isn't my back, it's getting kids like you kitted out to be a trainer! Speaking of, shall we move onto that? I appreciate your concern, but you worrying about my back isn't going to get you your license papers signed, is it?" responded the professor, chuckling wryly at his last comment. "Oh, right, yeah." The professor pulled out a top sheet of paper from the neater pile of paper, on his right. "Now, first things first, what's your surname, Connor?" inquired the professor, clicking a pen Connor was amazed he didn't crush with his massive palm. "Murdoch." "Mhm. Connor Murdoch, alright," noted the professor, scrawling down this information. "And your date of birth is?" "January 26th, 1991." "So you're sixteen?" "Correct." "Gotcha. And you're from Jubilife, already have an Aron... do you have a name for your Aron?" Connor hadn't actually given this any thought, in actuality. A nickname would be a good idea, of course - it would have been boring to merely call him Aron, and Connor didn't feel right doing that. It also had a practical use, too; what if he got lost in an area with several Aron, and had to call a name? He quickly wracked his brain, before settling on something. "Yeah, I'm calling him Ronnie," he decided. Ronnie. It was snappy, and he'd heard about a musician with that name. Of course, he'd had to run it by his Pokémon first, but he was optimistic - Aron was a pretty happy camper, after all; he doubted the Steel-type would have many problems with that name. "Good choice. Now, what are your parents' names?" "Dad's called Michael, Mom's called Lindsey." "And they both have the same surname?" "Yep." "Right. And I trust that you got their written consent to head out, right?" "Well, they were reluctant, but gimme a sec," replied Connor, reaching into his bag and digging around, searching until he pulled out a slightly crumpled piece of paper and handed it over to the professor, who scanned it for a number of seconds before nodding. "Cool, but you do know that an emergency contact number isn't necessary if you're 16 or over, right?" replied the professor, giving a bemused smile. "Hah... well, you know, they insisted. Parents, am I right?" chuckled Connor, his eyes darting to the side as he went a soft, flustered red. An emergency contact number? What was he, eight? Did they really have that little faith in him? "Fair enough, I suppose! Now, Connor, for the next part of the process, I'm going to ask you some questions - about Pokémon care and general trainer information. After all, we can't just let any random guy go around with a potentially dangerous creature if they have no idea what they're doing, can we? I'm sure you'll be fine, though," informed Murphy, his constant smile shifting into one of encouragement. Connor wasn't actually aware there was a test. His eyes widened a bit in shock, but he came to terms with it fairly quickly, nodding as he jogged his memory for things he'd read about the subjects at hand. "That makes sense, I guess," he responded, giving a somewhat self-assured grin. "Hit me with 'em." "Alright. So question one: what are some of the functions that Pokémon Centers serve for trainers?" "Healing Pokémon, boarding for Pokémon whilst trainers are away, selling equipment for trainers or Pokémon food, giving information to trainers, um... PC storage-" "That'll do, that'll do," Murphy chuckled as he scrawled down some notes on his paper. "Question two: in a battle, an attack on your Pokémon draws blood and you notice your Pokémon's attacks are becoming weaker and weaker. What do you do?" "Withdraw it and put the battle on hold to patch up the Pokémon. Always keep potions of some sort and bandages on hand to treat these wounds, and head to a Pokémon Center whenever possible." "Alright. Question three: you're dragged into a battle in self-defense against, say, a dangerous criminal. You notice you have an opening to attack that criminal directly, avoiding the Pokémon. Do you capitalize on that opening?" "Not under any circumstances. The criminal will likely have quite a strong bond with their Pokémon, and, if I go straight for the criminal, it leaves me open to an attack by a Pokémon trying to protect its own trainer." "Okay. Question four: in the unlikely event you find yourself within the territory of a mythical or legendary Pokémon, what should you do?" "Retrace my steps and exit the area, being sure not to attract the attention of the Pokémon. Engaging in combat is suicidal." "And the fifth and last question: your starter Pokémon is an Aron - what do you know about caring for it?" "Hmm... well, Aron primarily eat metals, and it's a good idea to feed it a variety of different types - iron being the staple of the diet, supplemented by, say, aluminium and copper. They need about half a liter of water and should be free to roam outside of a Pokéball for at least two hours per day. Keep them away from Fighting- or Ground-type attacks as much as possible, and try to discourage behaviours like headbutting or nuzzling, because it could lead to me getting hurt when it evolves into Lairon and Aggron." "That concludes the test," stated the professor as he clicked his pen and put it down, "and I'm glad to say you passed with flying colours - you're officially ready to become a trainer!" Connor was visibly delighted at this development, as his eyes lit up and he smiled. "Oh, neat!" "I must say, your knowledge is impressive, young man! If your skills on the field are half as good as that, you'll get through the gyms in no time," noted Murphy as he rose from his chair. "Well, gee, thanks, haha! Let's just hope that they are, eh?" replied Connor, growing even more flustered as his slightly yellowed grin spread from cheek to cheek. "Aye," replied Murphy with a chuckle, amused by his response. Words really were not this kid's strong point, were they? But that didn't concern the professor in the slightest. So what if he wasn't the most socially competent? The kid definitely knew his stuff, that was for sure, and he was obviously passionate about being a trainer. In Murphy's book, that was already a fantastic start. Giving him the chance to do this was a no-brainer. After all, what was the worst that was going to happen? He scanned the Pokédexes on the shelf before him, before turning back to Connor. "What's your favorite color, by the way?" "Red." Murphy gently picked up one of the red Pokédexes. "I believe that this is yours now, then, eh?" remarked the professor as he carefully held the device in his massive hand, walking back over to the desk and standing over it as he handed the Pokédex to Connor. "I'm assuming you already know how it works?" "Funnily enough, I don't!" responded Connor, delighted at the impression he seemed to have made on the professor. However, it was at that moment the professor's smile faded ever so slightly, prompting a thought to cross his mind and the look of joy on his face to turn into one of mild panic. "...I will still be able to take it with me though, won't I?" "Oh, of course, don't worry about that!" urged the professor, having taken a moment to think about the functions of the 'dex before handing it to Connor. "It just means I'll have to explain to you how it works, is all!" "Ahhh, right," said Connor, relieved as he wiped some metaphorical sweat from his brow. He graciously accepted the device from the professor and flipped it over to glance at the back, scanning the glossy red finish and clear black camera lens on the back. "When you encounter a Pokémon, you can scan it with the camera you can see on the back. The 'dex will tell you the species of the Pokémon, give you a rough estimation of how strong it is relative to its species - for example, a newly born Pokémon will have a power level of one, whereas a Pokémon at the absolute peak of its powers will have one of 100. Certain species will evolve at roughly the same levels - but I'm assuming you know how to manually stop evolution, right?" "Yeah, you just give the Pokémon an Everstone or touch it, right?" "Aye. The level system's a pretty iffy system, and not really one that I'm a fan of, personally, but hey, it works," began the professor. Connor considered this for a moment. He wondered what level his Aron was. "Once you've scanned the Pokémon, you should be able to access information about that species that'll have been written by professors - like me, for example - or other, qualified trainers. It's a pretty nifty piece of equipment for all factors of Pokémon care. Anyway, the most famous feature it's used for is listing the types of Pokémon you've encountered and indexing them according to species number. I believe the section of the 'dex with the Pokémon that were originally from Sinnoh starts at #387, with Turtwig...? Yeah, that sounds about right. You can also find a list of all the Pokémon that can be found in the region if you just press the book icon at the bottom of the screen... and I think that's everything you need to know! It may sound like a lot for now, but trust me, it'll become second nature over time - and you'll also discover some other features in time, too. Pretty handy, eh?" "Yeah, absolutely!" marveled Connor, open-mouthed and googly-eyed in amazement. His eyes had lit up as the professor went through all of this. Such a high-tech piece of kit, such a handy source of information for Pokémon trainers, and he finally had one of his own! Oh, he'd dreamt about this day for so long, and he could still scarcely believe it was finally here! "Hah, it's good to see you're so excited about this! You know, I don't think I've seen anyone get so happy about becoming a trainer in months! Anyway, you're free to leave now. If you have any other questions, I'd be glad to hear them, and if your Pokédex gets damaged, come back to me and I'll gladly try and get you sorted with a new one," informed the professor. "Actually, I do have one question," asked Connor. "Shoot!" "Out of curiosity - like, I absolutely do not plan on doing this at any point, nor do I particularly want this to happen to me, trust me - do you happen to know - and once again I wanna reiterate I don't have a death wish - if there's a protocol for what to do with a legendary or a mythical Pokémon if you see one in the wild? Asking for a friend, of course." An awkward grin spread across his face, despite his best efforts, as he went slightly red. This was a lie, of course - spotting a legendary in the wild would be an absolute treat, and, in fairness, it wouldn't be irrational to assume that most people had thought about it at least once. But at the same time, what if it did happen to him? It would be pretty damn neat, for one, and there was always the possibility that it wasn't hostile. "You aren't planning on meeting one, are you?" asked a somewhat concerned Murphy, catching onto this rather poorly masked lie. "I mean, no - where would I even find one? This is all just hypothetical of course, but like, what if, y'know?" rebuked Connor. "Hah! You have a pretty admirable attitude, I must say! Well, for what it's worth, Connor, I'll offer you one piece of information: whilst it's absolutely not advised to approach one - like, ever, maybe unless you're the Champion of the League or something - there are some stories of trainers who have met such Pokémon and lived to tell the tale. There're even legends that some have managed to befriend these Pokémon and fight alongside them - although personally, I think that's just a myth, myself." "Oh, really? Neat! Thanks for the info!" "No problem, but I'm obliged to add, as a professor, that if you see a legendary, or a mythical in the wild, you're supposed to run away. They are dangerous, after all," added Murphy, running through his warning in a monotone voice. "Anything else?" "Nope, I'm good. Thanks a lot, si- er, prof- uh, Murphy!" chirped Connor, peeling himself from the comfort of the leather chair and coming to his feet. "Anytime, young man! Don't hesitate to come to me if you need anything, remember what I said about the 'dex, and most importantly - good luck on your journey! Now, have fun out there!" said Murphy, the wooden chair screeching across the ground as it was thrust back by the professor standing up and pushing it back. Connor, tucking his Pokédex in his pocket, strolled out of the room and left the lab with a spring in his step.
As Connor exited the lab, stepping foot onto the ground of Sandgem, his lungs filled up with the salty seaside breeze once again. Try as he might, he couldn't take his mind off this feeling of freedom he was experiencing. What was his first order of business, he wondered? Getting started with preparing for the Oreburgh Gym was far from a bad idea - if his memory served him correctly, that was a gym renowned for being pretty difficult for newcomers. His dad also worked with the gym leader in the mines, mind, and his accounts seemed to back that up. Yeah, he decided, that was what he was gonna do. He hadn't gone on this adventure to just goof about, after all - there was work to be done! Besides, for all he knew, Hawley was probably a step ahead of him, curbstomping some poor Kricketot that got in his way or something, and he'd be damned if he let that bastard beat him to the gyms. However, as he approached Route 202 in order to start training, he was met with quite the sight. The oddly-dressed trainer from the Pokémon Center, with his Gible, had gotten into an altercation of some sort, he noticed, and it seemed to be getting quite heated. He went to hide in the trees in order to get a better view without disturbing either of the parties, in order to see what was going on. "You really think that I, the great Reyes Vasquez, am gonna let you get away with this?" coolly remarked the trainer of the Gible, his words sharp as a knife. His body draped in a brilliant blue longcoat as he tightened the long, red headband carefully wrapped around his long, glossy black hair and olive-skinned forehead. Connor deduced from his thick accent that he probably wasn't from around these parts, but he couldn't quite tell where from. His Gible stood just above knee height, a scowl etched on its face as it bared teeth, snarling at his opponent with a growl - well, it sounded more like a small car engine running, but it was a growl nonetheless. The newbie trainer found this quite adorable. "The great...? Look, kid, I dunno who ya think you are, or where ya came from, but things work differently in Sinnoh. When a stranger tells ya to hand over ya Pokémon, ya hand over ya Pokémon. It's da polite thing tah do, after all - I'm just makin' a polite request is all. I've got da moral high ground here, after all. 'Sides, that whole 'the great' spiel don't scare me, ya know - just hand it over or things might hafta get a little more violent, as in, 'I might hafta beat your ass,' ya understand?" replied the other guy, clearly undeterred by this Reyes fellow's declaration. This man was dressed in a darker outfit, with gloves, black sweater and trousers and an ill-fitting mask that just about covered the area around his eyes and nose. A hold-up? In this part of the world? Not at all what Connor had hoped to see so soon into his adventure. He decided the best course of action here was to stay quiet and not get himself or Ronnie hurt, and hope the situation defused itself peacefully with the would-be thief running away. As heinous as this villain seemed to be, trying to get involved with a Pokémon as green as his Aron wouldn't do anyone any good. " Polite request? this is what you consider polite in Sinnoh, then I must say, your culture is very strange," dismissed Reyes casually, before exploding into a louder, more emotional tone. "But that is irrelevant! What you're doing is cruel and wrong, and if you think you can go around stealing people's Pokémon, you are sorely mistaken about where the moral high ground is! Now, you have five seconds to scram, before me and my... uh, Gabble? Before we kick your ass!" declared the trainer, hesitating on the pronunciation of his Pokémon's name. "Gible," corrected Connor casually. "Thanks! Five," called out Reyes with a smile, still keeping his focus on the thief. The thief, however, did not have the same idea, as his head whipped towards the bushes at such a speed, it was a miracle he didn't get whiplash. Crap.Connor's eyes widened and face whitened in horror as he realized his mistake, smacking his hands against his mouth. "Oi! Show yaself, nitwit! I wantcha to come out widcha hands up," called out the attempted thief, "or I'll do ya face in, capiche?" The trainer gulped. He felt his hands clench the insides of his pockets as he slowly rose to his feet, raising his hands. He noticed the thief scanning him carefully - but why? Was he looking to take his Pokémon, too, or just seeing if he was a threat? Connor's head was a mess of thoughts as he tried to figure out what the deal with the man was. "Right, wasn't so hard, was that, Sonny Jim, eh? Now, I was just sayin' to dis fella here, I'm… how can a guy say this… in need of some Pokémon, so tah speak. And I was also sayin', that da charitable thing tah do in this situation would be tah hand 'em over, y'know? So, wouldya be willin' tah help a guy out? Wouldya be so kind as tah gimme ya Pokémon, please, sir?" asked the thief, cutely. "Wh… well… I, uh… I only just got him a couple of hours ago, for one. And would you even know how to look after him, anyways? I'm sorry, but I'll have to say no, sir." "Hah. You wanna go about it like dat, then, eh?" "Go about it like… what, exactly?" "Oh, a wise guy, are ya? I don't take too kindly to guys like you, stompin' on the rights of little guys like me. I'll ask again before I gotta get a little rough. Wouldya please hand over ya Pokémon?" Connor was growing visibly uncomfortable, beginning to sweat as his arms grew tired. "I, uh… I wouldn't like any trouble, mister, but I don't know if you'd, how can I say this… I'm not sure you'd qualified to look after him. Now, please leave me alone." "Don't tell me what tah do, wise guy! And keep those arms up!" "...One. Gible," ordered Reyes coolly after a few seconds had passed. "Gib!" grunted the Dragon-type, digging a leg into the ground and preparing to launch itself at the thief. "Huh-" Gible, having seemingly morphed into a blue blur, smashed into the thief's leg with the force of a cannonball. Connor winced, just about managing to withhold a cuss as a loud and rather unpleasant cracking noise rushed through the air. The impact of the Take Down attack knocked the thief off his feet and caused him to let out a yelp of agony. He was reduced to a quivering heap of limbs and black, every muscle in his face working at full capacity to prevent him from either screaming or bursting into tears. "Good boy!" offered Reyes with a wide smile, as Gible rushed over to him with a squeal of glee. The Pokémon's trainer, standing roughly seven inches taller than Connor, shifted into a squatting position to wrap his arms around the Dragon-type before springing to his feet, standing tall with a content Gible in his clutch. "Is he alright?!" asked Connor in almost a shriek, still recoiling from the sight of the injured thief. "Oh, him? Calf might be a bit ruined, fibula might be a bit broken, but eh. Guy was a Pokémon thief. Had it coming. Thanks for the diverting," offered Reyes, still smiling. "Uh... thanks?" responded Connor, unsure what to make of the situation. Reyes' reasoning for such a brutal attack checked out, and whilst he thought breaking the poor guy's leg was perhaps a tad too far, he had to be stopped. "Hey, you're the guy from the Pokémon Center, correct?" "Aye." "Nice to meet you. I'm-" "The great Reyes Vasquez?" "Hah! Yup, that would be me. And you are?" "My name's Connor, and, uh… feeling's mutual, I guess?" "Nicely met, Connor. Say, you would not mind doing a bit of... how can I put it, walking and talking? I'm new to the region - from Hoenn - and I dunno the way around, see." "Um... well, uh... I mean, I don't see a problem with that?" sheepishly made out Connor in response, feeling bad about the prospect of letting the guy down. "Excellent! Many thanks!" beamed Reyes, looking down at Connor with glee. "Yeah, don't mention it," replied Connor, giving a more nervous smile in response. "So… should I lead the way?" "Go ahead!" More author's notes: I do have a question for you all: there are a series of author's notes that kind of contribute to the lore, in the form of more in-depth dex entries, trainer profiles, and town profiles. The reason I haven't been posting them up on this forum is because I eventually stopped doing them on every chapter at about chapter 8 or 9, and I haven't done them since. I plan on reworking and rewriting them, but would you be interested in having them posted alongside the chapters here or not?
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Post by girl-like-substance on May 22, 2019 22:50:15 GMT
Connor's journey continues! And this time we're meeting the resident professor. I don't know whether 2007 is like, pre- or post-canon events of DPPt in this interpretation, so I can't say if he's a successor or a predecessor to Rowan, but he certainly has much stronger people skills. Rowan is one of the most characterful of the professors in-game, but like, he's characterful because he's a crotchety old man given to pontification and theatrical asides that prop up his sense of self-importance, so I have to admit I've never thought he would be very good at starting people off on their journeys. Murphy, however, is! Despite his lack of a tree name, which is presumably a difficulty when it comes to getting funding, he's definitely good at this part of his job: he's warm, encouraging and just a tad too loud. His is a strong and forceful personality, but one that takes care not to drown out those around him; he asks Connor all the right questions and does his best to set him up for future success.
I think it's very clear that he does this without jumping POVs to his own, by the way; you give a strong enough account of who Murphy is that there's no need to resort to jolting us out of our immersion in Connor's story like that. In general, though, I have fewer stylistic complaints than previously – your assessment of this chapter as being where things start to get a bit less florid and more composed is right on the money, I think.
The one thing I do have a bit more of an issue with is the great big infodump that comes with the gifting of the pokédex. Like there's nothing wrong with all this interesting lore, but I'm not sure having it all tossed at the reader in one lump like that is the best way to introduce it; Murphy could have given Connor a quick introduction, and then the rest of it could have been brought in bit by bit as and when it became relevant to the story. I think it grates a little more than it otherwise would because he's just finished getting set up, and as a reader you're kinda waiting for Connor to get out there and get on with things, you know?
Anyway, I also very much liked the opening here, with its strong seafaring metaphor going all the way through, but I did think that 'trainwreck' sorta derailed the metaphor (… pun not intended, but now wholeheartedly embraced) partway through before it resumed. Jumping from opening to ending (that's … not a great segue, but okay), I wholeheartedly approve of the fact that Connor's making friends! Also that it's literally just his own nerdery that leads him to break cover, lol. Poor kid just couldn't help himself, huh?
As per usual, I'll round things off with some typos and nitpicks and stuff:
That should be 'laid', not 'lay'.
The phrase is 'people person', rather than 'people's person'.
This is a bit tautologous – you've just repeated the clause about why he did it twice.
I feel like there's a 'was' missing between 'body' and 'draped' here. As a side note, this is one of the more overwrought sentences in the chapter – there's a lot of information compressed into one sentence here, and it makes it a bit tough to chew, so to speak!
It reads like a word is missing here after 'black'.
Also, on the matter of the author's notes – it's up to you! It'd be neat to see them, I guess, but there's no need to worry about it if it's going to be more work than you feel it's worth, haha.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 21, 2019 19:11:49 GMT
I am so late to updating and I apologise wholeheartedly, so I'll try to make up for this by posting two (or maybe more) chapters to this tonight. First, though, I have some reviews I've not yet replied to!
First off, JoJoBaoh: I missed your review the first time around (and also don't know if you're on the discord? :0c) and I apologise wholeheartedly -- but thank you so much for sharing your thoughts! I'm glad you could relate to some elements of Connor's personality, even if he's a bit too dramatic at times (which is a valid complaint; you're not wrong, he is too dramatic for his own good), and I'm pleased you thought it was good overall in spite of some of the formatting/grammatical flaws!
As for eldestoyster, thank you very much for your review, which was as thorough as ever! You have some very astute observations about Murphy and how he compares to Rowan, and the overall style of the fic -- I hope you enjoy how that changes over the next few chapters! Perhaps it's his unfortunate lack of a tree name that's stopping him from finally getting a better chair? Though he certainly doesn't lack theatrical skills, I personally think; that may surface in future updates. Your comments about the exposition are also valid (and I have to admit I feel the same), and it's something I've been taking care with in recent chapters. That metaphor is something I'm planning on working into the fic a bit more prominently in future, because I think it'd be janky if it was a one time thing, but perhaps trainwreck wasn't the appropriate word... and yes, Connor is making friends! Friends that will feature quite prominently as his adventure continues. As will his nerdery, for better or worse.
Thank you all so much for the reviews! I'll post the next few chapters shortly!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 21, 2019 19:30:18 GMT
Author's note: this is the first of at least two chapters I will be posting tonight. I'll try and post as many as I can over the coming days to try and get this version of the story up to speed in the next month or two. Also, this chapter is named after the song "The Seeker" by The Who.
CHAPTER FOUR: They Call Me The Seeker, Part One October 9th, 2007, 10:42 "So, where did you learn to deal with Pokémon like in the Center?" Connor turned to face his newfound companion with a soft grin in response to this question. He wasn't sure what Reyes considered so impressive, if he was being honest; his speech at the Center was simply him getting stuff off his chest, and the way he handled Ronnie was just what he felt was natural. Besides, this guy had a Dragon-type in his arms - and a Dragon-type that seemed perfectly happy with him at that. Those were a lot harder to get the respect of than, say, his Aron. He was intrigued. "I read about Pokémon behaviour a lot in my spare time, but I hadn't really put it into action before then. Why'd you ask?" Reyes seemed a tad bemused at this. "I see. How long have you been training for?" "About three hours." Reyes blinked in surprise, as if he wasn't sure he'd heard that right. "Three hours?!" he shrieked incredulously, and perhaps with a hint of exaggeration. "You were an Aron yourself in a past life, surely? We have plenty of them at home, and I don't think I've seen one so good towards a person in… well, ever, really." Connor considered this. "Perhaps I just got lucky with him?" he shrugged. The two had been walking along Route 202 for about ten minutes, mostly in an awkward silence before this. The euphoria Connor was feeling about becoming a trainer was still present, a fuzzy warmth of some sort still lingering within him, and whilst the reality was beginning to set in, he still had a spring in his step. Reyes, meanwhile, had been spending the walk to that point whistling and minding his own business, his Gible quiet and generally pleased with the state of things. The sight of this reminded him that his own Pokémon was still in his ball, and he decided that it'd probably be a good idea to actually let him out - it'd be good to get some fresh air, and Connor still needed to test whether Ronnie was actually an okay name or not. "Yo, hey, would you mind if I get him out of his ball? I wanna run some stuff by him, and try and see how he is around other people." "No problemo, friendo!" was Reyes' upbeat reply, a sparkling beam of a smile spread from ear to ear. He grabbed the ball at the front of his belt and gently pressed down the button on its front, releasing a stream of blue light onto the ground below. The Aron that materialised from the light was greeted with the sight of his diminutive trainer squatting down until he was only a couple of feet taller than the Steel-type. "Hey, buddy!" gently began Connor, his opened hand facing the Pokémon as if to ask if a pet was okay. The Aron let out a content "ar!", waiting for his trainer to rub his face, to which he obliged with a chuckle. "Would you like a name, little guy? I don't know about you, but it'd be a bit dull if I didn't give you a nickname, y'know?" The Aron let out a soft, questioning grunt as he tilted his head, eyes fully open and returning Connor's gaze. "How does Ronnie sound?" There was a brief pause, as it seemed almost as though Aron was mulling it over as his trainer watched closely. To the onlooking - and quite visibly impressed - Reyes, this pause seemed to last for about a minute before Aron let out a content chirp, lifting his head up and giving a pleased look to Connor. "That's what I like to hear! Ronnie it is," rejoiced Connor, rewarding his Pokémon with a head rub before continuing. "Now, do you mind if we bring a friend along with us for a bit?" Ronnie gave Connor a questioning look, before he was gestured to face Reyes, who was standing a couple of feet away. The sight of this young man, quite notably taller than his trainer and bearing his teeth in a wide grin, caused the Steel-type to hesitate somewhat, giving quite a disapproving, frightened glance at Connor. "This is Reyes," began Connor reassuringly, pointing his open palm at his colleague with a soft grin. "He'll be traveling with us for the rest of the day or so, because he's new to this place and we're gonna show him around. You don't mind that, do you, little guy?" Ronnie seemed unsure, glancing up at Reyes with a tentative expression. He waved at the Steel-type, his emerald eyes glimmering and a somewhat disconcerting smile etched on his face, seemingly immovable. The Aron took another look back at Connor. There was just something about his trainer that the Steel-type couldn't put his finger on - and not just because he didn't have a finger to speak of. No, he wasn't sure what, but something about him just seemed to make trusting him easy. Was it his gentle hazel eyes? His warm smile? His soft face? No, that wasn't it. Was it the way he spoke, the compassion in his voice? Or was it the way that the trainer just seemed to be able to read him like a book? Whatever it was, thought Ronnie, it gave him a feeling of security, of safety, of a warmth that he wasn't really familiar with. Sure, he had gotten into quite a nasty fight with that damned Croagunk earlier, but to the Steel-type, it felt as though he had someone who cared about him, someone who truly had his best interests at heart. From what he'd seen growing up in the caves of Oreburgh, this was a trait he hadn't seen in humans before - not least to this extent. He wasn't sure why it was that he felt this way, but why question it? He trusted the human, and that was that. "You... are sure that he won't try to attack me or anything, no?" asked Reyes, getting increasingly nervous as he felt sweat begin to run down his brow. The Steel-type let out a content grunt, nodding his head slowly at Reyes before giving a fond look at his trainer. "Nice one, little guy!" chirped Connor, giving Ronnie another strong head rub in thanks before turning to Reyes. "Yeah, you should be good, but, uh... I wouldn't approach him until he's more familiar with you, if I were you. Just to be safe." Reyes gave a relieved sigh and thumbs up at the Aron, trying his best to make a better impression than his first, before giving another look of disbelief with a raised eyebrow at Connor. "And you've been a trainer for how long?" "Kahaha... it's just what reading does to you, I s'ppose," replied a flustered Connor. "Gib!" chimed the Dragon-type in Reyes' arms, giving an eager wave to greet its new Pokémon friend. The Steel-type waved one of its stumps back, before the group decided to continue walking down the route. "So, Connor, would you be from around these parts? I've heard Jubilife is pretty damn big," asked Reyes, curiosity tinging his voice. "Aye, Jubilife," replied Connor, his attention fixed on the path and looking around for any nearby wild Pokémon. "You said you were from Hoenn?" "Correct. More specifically, my home is about a mile away from Ever Grande City. You ever heard of it?" "Isn't that where they hold the League?" "Ah, it is! Do you know much about the Hoenn League?" Connor rubbed his chin as he jogged his memory before he answered. "...Not particularly, no. I've heard it's decently strong, and there are some very solid Steel- and Dragon-type specialists in the Elite Four, but other than that, nah. Not really my specialty." "So it's true that even you guys over here know Antonio! Him and his Salamence are... I guess you could call them national heroes? Is that the word? Eh. If you ask me, he should be Champion. He's probably a lot stronger than the one we got now, but the head of the League has something personal against him. You should watch him in battle! He's really a thing to behold," gushed Reyes, his eyes sparkling. "Interesting. Thanks for the tip," remarked Connor. "No problem," said Reyes, before continuing under his breath. "Man, what I wouldn't give to be as good as that guy." "Anyone else in the Hoenn League you reckon I should give a watch?" "Not really. Antonio really is your guy to go to. Everyone knows it!" Connor got the feeling that Reyes quite liked this Antonio fellow. "Oh! But if you want to know more about Aggron, I suppose you cannot go much wrong with Thomas. He's our resident Steel-type master, and you can probably find some of his clips online." "Ah, gotcha. Thanks again." "Don't mention it, my friend!" The pair continued to walk onwards down the path, uninterrupted until Connor spotted a Starly perched in a nearby tree from the corner of his eye. This prompted him to whip out his Pokédex, aiming it at the Flying-type. As the gadget's camera focused on the Pokémon and scanned it, so, too, did Connor; he made a mental note of himself of some features of the Pokémon. The 'dex mentioned that the average height of one of these creatures was almost exactly one foot, but the newbie trainer hazarded a guess that this was about two inches smaller than that - it looked a bit uncomfortable up in that tree, too. Perhaps it still had pin feathers growing in? It seemed like a youngster to the Connor. The dex's readings seemed to support this hypothesis: the Pokémon was a mere level 2 on the scale - considerably weaker than Ronnie's 10 or this Gible's 15. His next move was to consider a way to safely get the Pokémon down for a closer look. It seemed unlikely that- "Oi!" Connor shot his head to the side, seeing that Reyes had continued for a bit without him. It occurred to him that he'd been completely distracted for about a minute, almost drawing an "eek!" out of him as he sprinted towards his new companion in a panic. "Sorry! Got a bit distracted. Trying to get a good start on my Pokédex, is all," said a slightly embarrassed Connor, putting his hands up to apologise. "Don't worry about it!" replied Reyes. "What Pokémon do you have around these parts, anyway? Are they like Hoenn's?" "I don't think so. That Pokémon you saw me scan in the tree was a Starly, and on this route you'll also find a lot of Bidoof and maybe some Shinx or Kricketot, I believe. I don't think you have any of those much in Hoenn, do you?" "I haven't heard of any of those," remarked Reyes with what could almost be described as a dry chuckle. "We just have Zigzagoon and Wurmple on our Route 102." "That brings up something else I've been wondering, actually, if you wouldn't mind answering?" "I don't mind, no - ask away!" "Where did you get that Gible? Does he have a name?" "Oh, this little guy? This is Garra. I got him as a gift from my family before I set off for here." "...When was that?" "I think it's been two, maybe three weeks? I've just been in Hearthome until recent. Wanna see something?" asked Reyes, preparing to roll up one of his sleeves whilst still firmly holding his Pokémon. "Sure, go ahead," said Connor with a small, curious grin on his face. He was quite amazed at how he'd gotten Garra to behave so well in such a short amount of time. What was his secret? Could he speak the language of Pokémon? Was he actually a telepath who had been hiding it this whole time? Or was he just naturally that good? Reyes pulled up his sleeve to reveal an array of bite marks, each with varying amounts of freshness and power put into them, as he let out a slightly worried chuckle. "I have no idea why he hasn't bitten me in the past few days, honestly. Is it normal if he doesn't do that?" "Um... right," began a bemused Connor. So that was his secret - he had not, in fact, managed to get Garra to behave. That made sense, but it did raise some questions about Reyes' understanding of Pokémon training. "I think it's pretty normal for a younger Gible to bite its trainer a lot - don't quote me on that - and I believe it happens a lot with rescues, too, but this many? Have you been taming him?" "I've been trying, that's for sure. Success? Eh... not so much. But you're saying this isn't normal?" "Well, I mean, it might be," replied Connor, hesitant. "I really don't know enough about Garra to judge. Have you had experience with Dragon-types before?" "Yep. You know Bagon?" "Uh-huh." "I've got one travelling along with me." "...Is that one any better towards you?" "Not really, no." Connor seemed shocked. Another thing Dragon-types were renowned for was being quite unforgiving towards trainers who were unfortunate enough to not bond with them - this was even true of those like Gible and Bagon - and yet, here stood a man who had two of them, neither of which he'd managed to decently tame, with an arm that had become a victim of several attempts to apparently eat it, as confident and upbeat as he'd seen any trainer. This begged the question of "why," but he decided against that, fearing that it might upset this new companion; there was also the possibility that, perhaps, he was missing some details. Instead, he thought his next response through carefully. "Um... Reyes?" "What is it, dude?" "If you don't mind me asking, what made you pick Dragon-types?" hesitated Connor. "Well, they are the strongest type usually, aren't they? It's nothing that I, the great Reyes Vasquez, cannot handle - if becoming a great dragon master requires a baptism of fire, then I'll gladly learn to cope with the burns." Connor was stopped in his tracks by Reyes' rather ballsy remark, almost from nothing. This attitude was an impressive one, an attitude that the young man sort of wished he shared himself. Of course, it was also quite an irresponsible one - not least in this context, considering the state of Reyes' arm - but there was definitely wisdom in those words. He nodded his head after mulling this over for a brief moment, before continuing on down the route. Around ten minutes later, the pair arrived in Jubilife City. Admittedly, Connor hadn't really planned on stopping back so soon, but that was an inevitability considering the size of the city - outside of maybe Hearthome, it was the jewel of the Sinnoh region, and where at least four different routes led to. Reyes, however, seemed much more excited to be here, his eyes lit up as if by stars as he looked around at the towering buildings around him. "Have you ever been here before, Connor?" enquired Reyes, captivated at the sights around him. "Hm? Oh, yeah. I live here." "You do? Nice! What was it like?" "About as interesting as living in any big city would be, I guess. Nothing particularly bad about it, but after a while, the novelty wears off. Jubilife TV's a pretty neat place to go, though." "Oh, I see. Whereabouts is your home?" "Eh, I'll show you it if we walk past it, but it's towards the southwest of the city." "And your folks? What are they like?" "Well, they're not bad, but... I dunno, they're just my folks, I guess, if you get what I mean." "Mmm." "So," continued Connor as he turned around to face Reyes, "you got any plans? What brings you to Sinnoh?" "Wellll... it's just nice to go on an adventure, isn't it, haha?" replied a sheepish Reyes. "Cool, cool," said Connor, interested. "You got family here or something?" "Nah. Just good to travel the world, do you get me?" "Yeah, I get you. You got somewhere to stay?" "I have a tent and a sleeping bag. That's all I need, I suppose. Just that, my Pokémon and the wilderness. The big, empty wilderness, haha," replied Reyes, his laugh somewhat hollow. "Well, you can't go too wrong with your Pokémon, can you?", asked an optimistic Connor in response. "I suppose not," shrugged Reyes. "Say, where are you headed?" "Me? Oh, I'm just gonna train a bit in this area, I suppose. I wanna take on the Oreburgh gym in the next couple of weeks, hopefully see the Pokémon around these parts, y'know? How 'bout you?" "I guess I will probably do the same, then." "Really? Your Pokémon could probably take on the gym as they are now and give 'em a good fight, maybe even win," remarked Connor, tilting his head slightly. "If you say so, but at the same time... I'd like to know more about them and get them to behave a bit better before I take on the gyms. How familiar are you with... how do you say it, Gible behaviour?" "Well, I've read about them; I think I know a bit about what they can be like. Why do you ask?" "Would you mind if I message you on the 'dex if I have any questions?" "Oh! Me? Really?" "Sure! Why not, hehe?" "Are you sure there's nobody else? I'm not really too familiar with actually looking after them hands-on, to be honest..." "Well, you do seem to know your stuff..." "I do?" responded a slightly reddened Connor, a small, crumpled smile having grown on his face. "Yeah! You've clearly done your reading, and I won't lie, but it's really damn neato how you are with your Aron. You wouldn't mind, would you?" "Um... well, I mean, I wouldn't, but... me? Are you absolutely certain?" beamed Connor, his expression a mix of glee and disbelief. "Yes, you. Are you sure you don't mind?" pointedly asked a more deadpan Reyes. "S... sure! Do you know how you get email up on this thing?" "Yeah, give it here," requested Reyes with a grin, to which Connor obliged. He then proceeded to fiddle with the controls for a bit, before continuing. "Yeah, it's the mail icon on the home screen," he offered, "and you can find your email address if you press the four bars on the top left. I shall just send myself an email so I know your address... and voila. Here you go!" "Cool. Thank you!" "No problem!" chirped Reyes. "Where are you going now?" "Well, it's about half twelve now, so I'll probably just head down to Route 203 - that's the one to the east, 204's to the north - and do some training for a couple of hours, have a look around, get to know Ronnie a bit more," replied Connor, being met by a "ron!" from the Steel-type travelling alongside him. "Sounds neat! I am going to go head north in the meanwhile and try bonding with my Pokémon. I'll try and email you when I can, dude; thanks for showing me around a bit!" said Reyes, heading off with a smile and a wave. "Don't mention it! See you around, Reyes!" chirped Connor in response, before heading off on his own way, turning to Aron and smiling as he did. "See, that wasn't so bad, was it?" Despite the fact that the two had travelled together for a brief while purely because Connor was too afraid to say "no" to this random stranger, he had to admit, he was quite fond of Reyes. He was a pretty fun dude to hang around with, and he had some interesting tidbits about Hoenn; not only that, the way he went about things intrigued him. If his Pokémon grew to trust him a bit more over time, then with a bit of training, he figured that Reyes would certainly become a force to be reckoned with in battle - and he also imagined it certainly wouldn't be boring to watch. Connor couldn't really recall the last time a person made such a strong first impression on him. Whilst travelling alone on this adventure was still the ideal option, he reasoned that if he wanted to travel with anyone, it would probably be someone like Reyes.
After about an hour of walking, Connor found himself strolling down Route 203. His first plan of action was to avoid the beaten down path most people this way headed down - he didn't think he was ready for a fight with another trainer after such a short amount of time, not least so soon after the fight with Hawley. No, he'd need to practice away from other people, on wild Pokémon. If he remembered his map correctly, there was a large stretch of grass in between two groups of trees just north of a fence not far into the route. He headed to find this stretch of grass and find some Pokémon of a similar level to Ronnie, who was content as he chowed down on some more iron his trainer had from Jubilife. Indeed, after another ten minutes of walking, he found this stretch of grass. "Alright, bud, you good?" asked Connor, turning to the Steel-type with a soft smile. "Ar!" replied Aron, giving a nod with a determined look in his eyes. "That's the spirit, little guy! Let's go!" Connor took his first step into the tall grass with a crinkle, being as quiet as possible by practically tiptoeing so as to not to alert any nearby trainers. Indeed, the vast stretch of grass before him seemed to be empty of any other humans - given how most trainers in this area were still at the Trainer's School, which wouldn't end until about half-past three, he reckoned he'd be good for another couple of hours or so before people started coming and would try to fight him. Good enough to get some practice in, reasoned Connor. As he made it further into the grass, he scanned the trees for Starly. There were plenty surrounding him - he'd have to try not disturb them, lest they all swarmed on him at once. Of course, in these parts, it was pretty much an inevitability that he'd end up coming into combat with one of them. After all, Starly were not renowned for being peaceful in the wild; rather, Connor recalled that they tended to hang around in large flocks, preparing to attack anyone they felt threatened the flock. Whilst he had no intentions to enter combat other than to defend himself against a flock, the prospect of combat was something Connor was perfectly fine with - Ronnie, a Steel- and Rock-type, had a double resistance to both Normal- and Flying-moves, which Starly tended to specialise in; moreover, but Bidoof, another Normal-type prevalent here, had a similar situation, as did Kricketot (albeit only a single resistance to Bug-types). Therefore, he reckoned that with about a week of having Aron training on these Pokémon, the Steel-type going up by about five or six levels was pretty likely. More steps. Connor felt the eyes of a fair few Starly glaring right at him - he figured that the vast majority of them had the Keen Eye ability. He took care with his next moves. There was still the matter of what him needing more Pokémon for the Oreburgh Gym, though. A Rock-type gym. A gym that most of the Pokémon on this route would have a bad time against. So he had a backup plan: the trade station in Jubilife. If he was lucky, someone would be looking for a Starly or a Shinx and offering a Fighting-type - best-case scenario. Of course, Starly and Shinx weren't exactly something most other trainers would marvel at, and something felt a bit morally off about having to go through with catching Pokémon for the sole purpose of giving them away. Hence why it was a last-ditch plan. More steps. Connor heard some angry cooing directed at him from the trees around him. He glanced down at Ronnie next to him, trying his best to protect his trainer and letting out a soft growl, ready for battle. Adorable as Connor found the tiny pile of rocks trying to intimidate the Starly out of a fight, he knew that it wouldn't have too much of a practical use, and the Starly apparently agreed, aggressively cooing. This was it. Connor was about to battle his first wild Pokémon. "You ready, Ronnie?" he enquired under his breath, turning to face his Aron as he gave the Steel-type an encouraging look. "Aron!" stealthily chirped the Pokémon in response, giving a nod. Any opportunity to prove his worth to his trainer was one Ronnie was absolutely willing to take, and besides, the Steel-type figured that it would perhaps warrant a good petting or two as a reward. Connor took another step. "SKREEEEEEEEE!" A Starly roared as it dove out of the tree, a heat-seeking missile as it locked onto him and prepared to fight. Connor launched himself a step backward, as the Aron propelled itself into the air with a leap, shrugging off the impact of the Starly's dive and subsequent flurry of wing flailing as it let out a triumphant "ar-rooon!" for a battle cry. "Nice work! Now, Ronnie, if you're familiar with the Metal Claw move, try it on the Starly!" he called out as this exchange went down. With an affirmative nod, the Steel-type gritted its teeth as it rose one of its stumps. The limb seemed to sharpen as it glimmered a brilliant, sparkling silver, before slashing at the Starly's belly. The attack connected, prompting the Pokémon to screech. "Excellent! Nice going, buddy!" The Starly was displeased with this, to say the least; whilst the cut didn't draw blood, it left a nasty scratch on the Flying-type's skin and did a good job of plucking off a good chunk o its feathers at the area of impact. In response, it thrust its head back, its beak clenched shut as it prepared to go for a Wing Attack at the Aron's head. Whilst this attack also connected with a light thudding noise, it was much less successful than the Metal Claw, achieving little outside of annoying Ronnie. "Nice job taking the attack! Wait for Starly to attack you again, and then more of the same!" called out Connor, giving a thumbs up in encouragement. He realised that Aron was still pretty young and inexperienced to battling; as such, it probably didn't know moves that were particularly effective against Starly, nor did it serve much of a purpose to concoct a proper battle plan with Aron's limited moveset, but hey, Connor reasoned; if it worked, why complain? Ronnie once again sharpened one of its stumps as Starly propelled its wing backward, before once again slicing at the Flying-type as it went for another Wing Attack. The Starling Pokémon did not have enough time to dodge. This attack had a similar effect as the last Metal Claw, and it became evident that after about three rounds of combat, Ronnie was in a far better position than this Starly - another attack would finish it for certain. Out of curiosity, Connor pulled out his Pokédex to scan this particular Flying-type. This revealed that the Pokémon was level 9 and knew Tackle, Wing Attack, Fury Attack and Quick Attack with the Keen Eye ability - alright, Connor thought, so they do mostly have Keen Eye. More importantly than that, though, he figured most Pokémon in this area would have a similar moveset, and of these moves, Wing Attack was probably the most effective, giving the novice the impression that the Starly he was currently against would yet again use the move. Complacency was not something Connor was particularly keen on, of course, but he figured he probably wouldn't have too many issues here. "Alright, Ronn-" began Connor, before looking towards the action to see Starly collapsed on the ground, defeated and unconscious with Ronnie looking back at him for more orders. It occurred to him that perhaps he spent a bit too much time distracted by his own thoughts. "...Ar?" "...Never mind. Good job, buddy!" He fell into a squat, gesturing Ronnie over for another head rub, much to the Steel-type's delight. "You good for more?" he asked, glancing all over Ronnie's body to check for any bruises - there were none to speak of as the Aron gave an affirmative grunt. With that, Connor ventured further into the grass.
"Say, ya know where Jimmy's been today?" came a squeaky voice in an alley in the north of Jubilife City, around the corner from Jubilife TV. "He was s'pposed tah be on Route 202 duty, but tah be honest witcha, I dunno why he ain't reported back tah us, yet," replied another voice, rough as a Graveler. It was about three o'clock in the afternoon, and these two voices belonged to a duo gathered around a fire in a can awaiting the return of their third member, as they had been for the past half an hour or so. The more high-pitched voice was that of a man in his early thirties, short and hunched over with beady eyes and a nose bright pink in coloration; the rougher one belonged to a much taller, older and well-built man, built like a ton of bricks with a five o'clock shadow grown across the valleys of his chin. "Ah, well, Jimmy can prolly handle himself. Nothin' tah worry about. 'Sides, it means more marks for da rest of us, don't it?" added the first voice again, a wry smirk on the man's face. "Heh heh, I guess yer right. Da boss oughtta be lit. Up. With joy when 'e sees the haul we can get, just da two of us," chuckled the older man. "And dere's no use in restin' on our laurels, ain't dat right, Jerry?" "Keheh... yeah, ya got that right, Paulie." "Speakin' o' which... ya see those guys over dere?" remarked the older fellow, pointing to two figures in the distance - one in a purple outfit, the other apparently in a tuxedo of some sort. "Reckon 'ey'll make some prime dough, if ya get what I mean? Seem tah be dah rich snooty types, too; prolly won't be much of a fight tah get dah Pokémon." "Ay, I like your thinkin', Paulie! Shall I go for da guy in a tux?" chimed the smaller fellow, ecstatic. "Nah. I gottem. Bigger prize. Try goin' for da guy in da purple," rebuked Paulie. "...Aight. Meetcha back here?" sighed a disappointed Jerry. "Keh. Ya know it, kid." With that, the two headed in separate directions. Alright, Jerry, nothin' out of the ordinary for this one, thought the smaller man as he approached the purple suited man, following him from a distance. Jus' another mark, one of dem haughty-taughty types. Jus' trail 'im 'til he's in a quiet area, get 'em in an alley, and get good ol' Bibby to give 'em what for! Yeah, he'll nevah see it comin'!A bright smile lit up Jerry's face as he continued to trail the man in the suit, following him around a corner. ...an' then we can sell 'em for good money on dah market! An' when I see Lindsey again… hoo boy, we're gonna be eatin' good tonight, darlin'! Just da two a' us. Gonna take you out fer a nice meal, baby, and treatcha with that money!He continued to follow the man in the purple suit around the streets of Jubilife, his smile fading into a frown as he focused on the man's purple suit. ...Somethin' seems real shitty about dat, y'know. What if the guy's 'mon really love 'im, though? Surely dat ain't right, dat I gotta take what ain't mine, break da bond dat guy might got wid' his friend, and sell it tah some other random bozo like me who prolly won't treat 'em right, prolly sell 'em to someone else for good dollar, just so I can treat my baby right? ...But dat's just da way life is on dis planet, sometimes, y'know. Gotta keep soldierin' on so I can make it on up in da world, an' hopefully do what I can tah stop people like me from livin' like dis.His face grew into an uncertain smile as he continued down the street, waiting for the man to get to a quieter place out of the view of others. Yeah, dat's da dream. An' maybe then, I can treat Lindsey tah more dinners, more nights out. No more listenin' tah Paulie, neither. I'll be able tah leave dat life behind me. 'Sides, what if dis bozo don't even treat his 'mon right, neither? What if I can get 'em to a nicer home to some nice rich old lady in Hearthome, who can give me top dollar for 'em? Then I'm not da bad guy 'ere anymore, is what! Yeah! We can do a good deed tahday, can't we, Bibby?It was then that Jerry noticed the tall man in the purple suit turn and head into an alley. He cleared his throat, before getting a Pokéball out from his pocket and opening it just outside the alley to reveal a Bibarel. The large beaver looked up with a toothy grin, one that Jerry had always found quite endearing. "Awright, Bibby," began the small, hunched over man. "We got anudda' mark. Rich guy. Purple suit. Whole nine yards. Gonna take 'is Pokémon, give 'em to some nice old lady, give 'em a nicer life. Whadda ya say, chum? Wanna back me up on dis one? Do a guy a solid?" he enquired, holding out an open hand. "Bib!" chimed Bibby, similarly quietly, nodding as he hi-fived his master he had spent the last fifteen years with, wearing the same toothy grin. "Heheh, yeah! Dat's what I like to hear, bud! Now, let's geddus some dough!" replied an ecstatic Jerry, keeping his voice hushed so as to not alert the man in the purple suit, before returning Bibby to his ball, not particularly keen on the idea of getting his Pokémon hurt without knowing what he was up against nor wishing to alarm his prospective victim into alerting the authorities. With that, he stepped into the alleyway to face the man, the sound of his footsteps filling the air. "May I help you?" asked the man in the purple suit, turning his head to face Jerry. "Ay, yo!" replied the small man, giving a friendly smile before taking a few steps towards the man. "Nice weather today, wouldn't ya say?" "Mmm," noted the man, his black trousers whooshing as he turned his entire body to the thief. "Good weather to go out for a walk, isn't it?" "Hehe, yeah, yeah... ya doin' good?" "Yes, things are well on my end. I'm just walking to clear my head. Taking a break from work that needs to be done." "Heh, yea, dat's da way." "Tell me... you are?" "Oh, ya can call me Jerry." "Jerry, right... tell me, Jerry, what's your line of work?" asked the man, his gaze piercing the small man. "Me? Eheheh... well, dat's the ting, ya see. I'm actually unemployed at da moment. Ya know how it is, jobs in this economy, right? It's actually been pretty rough for me since town hall laid me off, 'n' ya seem like someone who's quite well off, if ya get what I'm sayin'? A kind fella who'd be willin' to give a helpin' hand to da little guy, ya know? What say ya'd be willin' to help a guy out?" replied Jerry, giving a pleading smile as he held his hands together in a begging motion. "Oh, that is rather unfortunate, yes," responded the man with the purple jacket, a concerned look on his face as he reached into his pocket, pulling out a wallet. "How much do you need to help you get by?" "Well, uh... what's ya name, mister?" "...I'd prefer not to say." "Oh, yeah, yeah, fair enough, no worries. Mister, ya see... I won't be needin' any of ya money. What I will be needin', is... how can I put this..." "My Pokémon?" replied the man pointedly. He put his wallet back in his pocket with a soft sigh, before removing his suit jacket. "Yeah, yeah! Ya understand, right? Would ya be willin' to hand 'em over, do dis da easy way?" "That won't be happening, thief." "...Who are ya callin' a thief, mister?" asked Jerry, his tone accusatory and hostile as he reached into his pocket, pulling out Bibby's ball. "Well, you see, Jerry - that is your name, just so I'm sure?" began the man, taking a Pokéball stored in one of the pockets sewn onto the back of the jacket as he looked daggers at the man. "Dat's besides da point-" "You'll tell me your name if you place any value in your wellbeing," retorted the purple-jacketed man, his voice hard and blunt as metal, his words sharp as a knife and his response fast as a bullet as he opened the Pokéball, a flash of light materializing into a glowering pair of eyes in the darkness of the alley behind him. "...Aight, yeah, that's me. I'm Jerry," replied "Alright, Jerry," began the man, the bottom half of his face masking a glare sharp enough to rend steel in half, "I'm going to be completely honest with you here, I think what you're doing right now is a complete abomination; it spits in the eyes of Lady Justice. Have you no humanity? No soul? What you're doing here makes you no better than those parasites at city hall who - supposedly - fired you. Preying on anyone you deem an easy target, ruining lives of people and Pokémon for your own selfish gain and exploiting the natural good of man with your heinous bullying." As his tirade continued, the sound of footsteps rang through the air, accompanying his rant as he slowly approached Jerry, the eyes behind him following from a distance. "You need to be stopped at once, and I'm going to be the one to do that. However, if I were to kill you without warning, wipe you off the face of the planet like the piece of dirt you're being right now - which I assure you, I very much have the means to do so - that would make me worse than you. Which is why I'm offering you a choice. You can agree to stop your filthy actions right now, swear on your life that you won't attempt to steal innocent people's Pokémon ever again, vow to do what is right in the eyes of Arceus and I can help you get out of the poverty you may be in... or you can continue this futile endeavour and see where it leads you. The pair stood before Jerry, both looking straight into him with scowling eyes. "Your choice?" "I- I, uh..." Silence permeated the air. Jerry was caught completely off-guard by this. Just who the hell was this guy? He had some balls giving a high and mighty speech like that to him - and his delivery, too; his voice, deceptively husky for a man so thinly built, was unwavering and commanding, each word hitting like a battering ram. Had the guy made all that up as he went along? He'd have told the guy to piss off if he could have, but there was just something about him, the silent fury in his eyes, the mask of calm on his face, his words like knives, that utterly terrified him. And those eyes behind him, too - an order of magnitude or two above anything else he'd ever seen (perhaps barring the man before him). Those brilliant purple irises were a light in the black of the shadows of the alley as the black look emanating from them tore into the windows of his very soul. Those eyes were the only thing he could see of the beast, and they were all it took to send shivers coursing down his spine. He quaked in his boots, his kneecaps violently moving to and fro, as he tried to think of anything except those eyes. Was this even a Pokémon? Was it even of this planet? Was it some sort of demon? Jerry had liked to think of himself as a pretty fearless guy, but this... he had no doubt whatever this was could have killed him. He decided against summoning Bibby, for fear of his life and the Bibarel's, as he instead produced a nervous smile. This offer didn't seem too bad compared with the threat of losing his life - at least this way, he had a way out of Paulie's gang. He gulped before speaking. "S... sure, guy... no problems here... just sign me up, y'know, eheheh...?" The intense look in the man's eyes faded somewhat, as the corners of his mouth folded into an ever so slight smile. "A wise choice. Now, follow me." "Y... yeah... ya got it, boss..."
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Post by Deleted on Jul 21, 2019 23:37:16 GMT
Author's Note: this is the second (and probably last, because it is late) chapter I'll be posting for the day. Don't worry, there's only one more chapter for October 9th! When writing this chapter and the last, I was definitely still getting to grips with writing fics with two main characters, so there might be a bit of jankiness due to that, but I'd like to think that overall it's a bit easier on the eyes than chapters 1-3. I hope you enjoy! CHAPTER FIVE: They Call Me The Seeker, Part Two
October 9th, 16:23 Earlier in the day, Connor had the idea of raising his Pokémon's level by six in a week. He'd decided this could be achieved by employing multiple hour-long sessions of intense 'grinding,' as he called it, against wild Pokémon after wild Pokémon, broken up by fifteen minute long breaks for resting and healing. Connor and his Aron had just finished the third of these sessions - of four planned - and the novice trainer felt it had been productive, with the pair having defeated (if Connor was counting correctly) eight Starly, five Bidoof, three Kricketot and two Shinx, of which he had just defeated one of the latter. This was good enough to raise the Aron's level by one, and put him about a sixth of the way to level twelve. He felt now would be a good time to check on his Pokémon, and so with a warm smile, he looked down at his Pokémon and asked, "Ronnie, buddy, you alright?" Ronnie was, in fact, not alright. Instead, Connor found himself standing over an exhausted Ronnie drawing heavy laboured breaths as he strained to look up at Connor. He'd previously thought his unfortunate encounter with Hawley and Croagunk to be the most painful thing he'd experience all day. Of course, he didn't consider it as humiliating - far from it actually, as the Aron was quite ecstatic over the day's results; defeating eighteen Pokémon in such a short space of time, regardless of the fact they were a level or two below him at best, was a feat the Steel-type was very pleased with. Unlike the Croagunk incident, though, there wasn't really much he could to show his gratitude. Or much he could do in general at that minute. Probably not for the next day or so, either. Ronnie strained to look up at Connor, giving a drained nod with a flicker of pride present in his eyes before he collapsed to the ground, barely conscious. Oh crap.A look of panic began to set in on Connor's face as he quickly dropped to his knees to check if the Pokémon was badly hurt. Connor's eyes darted to and fro across Ronnie's body. He didn't find any wounds. So he checked again. He didn't find anything. So he checked again. Still nothing. Connor concluded he wasn't looking hard enough. He could feel his heart begin to pound away as dread began to set in. This was his fault. His hand shot onto the front of his belt. He'd gotten Ronnie unable to fight twice in a day. He opened the Pokéball. The Aron disappeared in a stream of light. It'd be a miracle if Ronnie didn't hate his guts by now. He realised his breathing had swiftly developed into heavy panting, his mouth biting away at his nails to calm himself down. Calm yourself, Connor! demanded his inner monologue. Take a deep breath in and out.He opened his mouth to let in a big gulp of air, letting it out again before taking slower breaths through his nose to slow down his thumping heartbeat. As he came back to his senses, he realised that perhaps this wasn't as bad as he was making it out to be. Perhaps Ronnie hadn't picked up a nasty wound - if Connor couldn't see one after checking three times, he reasoned, there was likely nothing there - and perhaps he just needed a rest after all that training. He'd just been pushed a bit too hard, was all; it was an error on Connor's part, for sure, but Pokémon training was a learning curve, and mistakes like this were inevitable. For now, though, he needed to devise a plan of action - this was exactly what he did as he walked back to Jubilife. First of all, he'd head over to Jubilife's Pokémon Center and check with a nurse whether he needed medical attention or a bit of rest. If it was the former, he'd leave Ronnie in the nurse's care; if the latter he'd take Ronnie with him, call it a day and set up camp outside town. After that, he'd have to re-evaluate his training plan. Truth be told, he had no idea what in Arceus' name he was thinking when he came up with it - eighteen or more Pokémon per day five days a week was utter insanity, unsustainable if he had more than one Pokémon, and Connor had to admit, he'd gotten extremely lucky with the type advantage Ronnie had over this route's Pokémon - if he'd tried this in a route with, say, Ground-types, he'd have a very injured Aron on his hands; after all, three or four decent Ground-type moves would probably do as much damage as many Normal-type moves. Thirdly, he'd need to set back his plans to take on Oreburgh's gym by a few weeks - taking on the gym after a month, six weeks at the latest, seemed a lot more feasible. The idea of taking on a gym two weeks into his journey was, in hindsight, not a good one, and whilst breezing through the gyms in a couple of months was a very enjoyable fantasy, that was all it was - a fantasy. If there was one thing Connor took away from this, it was that pacing himself was necessary. Opelucid, as they always said, wasn't built in a day, and as a sixteen-year-old out of school, Connor was hardly strapped for time. Completing the gym challenge in a year or so was hardly something to be ashamed of. …Just as long as it took Hawley a little longer. Before Connor had any more chance to reflect on the events of the training, however, he felt his Pokédex vibrate in his pocket. There were two possibilities here, thought Connor; Reyes had something cool to show him, or spam mail. He hoped it was the former. Pulling out the device to check, Connor realised he was at least half correct - the email was indeed from his acquaintance. Come rapidly! Urgent! read the message's heading. Connor figured there was a fifty-fifty chance of Reyes having encountered an actual emergency, or him having something really cool to show him. Intrigued, he opened it and read on. Not much time to explain, meet two streets west of Jubilife TV quick. Met someone who had Pokémon stolen. Could be like guy we saw earlier. Need help to look for it + possibly calm down if found. Get here as soon as you read this!Connor sighed, a tad disappointed with this. An actual emergency it was, then - and so soon after he'd completely knackered Ronnie, too? He appreciated that being a trainer was certainly not dull so far, but if every day had been like his first, he'd be dead from stress by the end of the year. Nevertheless, if a Pokémon was in danger, what sort of trainer - what sort of person - would he be if he didn't help? He adjusted his belt to ensure his Pokéball was strapped on and fiddled around with his backpack's straps until he was sure it was firmly on. As soon as that was done, he rushed back off to Jubilife to investigate.
"Young man, are you one hundred percent sure you want to do this?" asked the middle-aged gentleman, sat across a table from Reyes and Garra, his Gible, in Jubilife's Pokémon Center. He had a look of worry in his eyes, one of uncertainty and doubt. "I do appreciate the offer, trust me, but I'm not sure if I need you or your little partner there getting hurt by a criminal on my conscience. Besides, I really don't think this is something the authorities can't handle." "You must be new to these parts, then, eh?" chimed the young nurse on-duty without looking up from grooming her Chansey. "And why do you say that?" "No disrespect to the blokes, but the plod in Jubilife couldn't find their way out of an open window, let alone a stolen Pokémon. If this mug thinks he can handle himself, then let him have a fair go. If he gets himself hurt, boohoo; if he doesn't, good on 'im!" Reyes flashed up in a grin in response to this, as he stood up in triumph, his chest puffed out and his fists on his hips. "I can assure you, that won't be happening. If you think I, the great Reyes Vasquez, am gonna let some crook break into this man's house and eat his groceries, you are sorely mistaken!" he declared in conceit, getting him strange looks from everyone in the moderately busy Center barring the gentleman and the nurse, who strained with all her might to stifle a laugh. Even Garra tilted his head, confused. "Groceries…?" mumbled the gentleman, visibly perplexed. "I know what it's like to have someone try and take from me, sir; just this morning, someone tried to steal my boy from me. I don't know if the authorities can allow this to fly or how it works over here, but back home, I can assure you; we do not take such hi-nanigans lightly!" he continued, apparently unaware of the sea of bemusement surrounding him. "Hi-nanigans? What is that, a mix of hijinks and shenanigans?" humoured the nurse, now engrossed in this conversation. "Irrelevant!" shot back Reyes in reply. "Lemme just say, that guy was mad like a Gogoat if he thought he could take from me, and he was lucky to get away with a broken leg, wasn't he, buddy?" This was met with a proud squeal from the round Dragon-type, astonishment from almost everyone else and a wry chuckle from the nurse. "Well, aren't ya just a right mental fella?" she muttered under her breath as she turned back around and went back to brushing her Chansey's hair. "Broken - look, just… at the very least - please sit down - do you happen to know when this friend of yours is coming?" enquired the concerned gentleman opposite Reyes. "Hm," said Reyes, reluctantly obliging to the man's request to be seated, "well, I think he got my email, but there's no response yet… but fear not! He should be here, right about… now!" Despite his animated gesturing of his arm at the door, nothing. "Now!" Nothing. "...Now?" Nothing. "Hmph." "If he isn't coming, then shall we-" It was at this moment that the doors whirred open to reveal an out of breath Connor. "Ach, dammit," groaned an embarrassed Reyes under his breath. Connor took deep breaths in and out as he approached the nurse's desk with his head sunken. "G'day, welcome to Jubilife Pokémon Center! What can I help ya with today, fella?" asked the nurse, a welcoming smile spread from cheek to cheek, supported in this expression by curious sapphire eyes, "H… hello… uh… I… can you… how do I… Pokémon… overdid training, uh…" began Connor in response, too flustered to make eye contact with the nurse and both too embarrassed and out of breath to formulate a coherent sentence. "...Did you train your Pokémon a bit too hard?" "...Yes…" "Do you want me to heal 'em?" "...Yes." "Then why didn't ya just say so, you dingus?" chuckled the nurse, taking the Pokéball that Connor handed to her and giving it to Chansey. "I'm assuming you're new to this?" "...Uh… doing this for... nine and a half hours, yeah." "What did ya do for your training?" "Went out to… uh… Route 203, y'know, and just… went grinding a bunch of Pokémon for a couple hours." "How big is a bunch?" "Um…" "Six?" "Well…" "Eight?" Connor fell silent. "Ten?" No reply. " Higher than ten?" asked an incredulous nurse. "...Eighteen," mumbled Connor, red as a rose as he looked up at the ceiling. "Eigh- geez, that's fuckin' mental, you absolute ripper. Nice one!" offered an impressed nurse. "But… no offence here, what were ya thinkin', mate? I hate to go so hard on somebody who's just a beginner, but you do know that you're outta your damn mind if you think either you or your… what Pokém-" "Aron," interjected an increasingly flustered Connor. "Aron, can keep that up, right?" "Y-yeah, I'm sorry, I just don't- I just thought that, uh, it'd be good to toughen him up? It won't happen again, I swear-" "Woah, woah, don't sweat it, mate!" chuckled the nurse. She reckoned Connor was about a year younger than her herself, and still didn't know much about actually adventuring in real life instead of just on paper. "It's good you're making these mistakes so early; that way, ya just know not to make 'em again, don't cha? Training's quite the learning curve, and everyone does dumb shit when they're starting off. It's just when people do dumb shit when they really should know better that boils my piss - and if I can stop dumb shit from happening, then I wouldn't be doing my job if I didn't, y'know? Just make sure you do a bit better next time, mmkay?" "Right, yeah, yeah, my bad, my bad," replied Connor, still avoiding the gaze of the nurse as Chansey returned, nudging the nurse to go to the back of the clinic with her. The two returned about two or three minutes later, with the Pokéball in her hand, much to Connor's relief. "Yeah, ya weren't bluffin', were ya? Little guy's conked out right now; he's probably gonna be out of commission for the next two or three days as he recovers," began the nurse before she reached into a drawer and pulled out some tablets. "He might have a bit of muscle pain as he recovers, so give 'im these to ease it off. Arnica - two pills every two hours for 12 hours, then four times a day afterward for about a week until he gets better. Sound good?" "Ah, thanks… should I pay for that?" "Nah, don't stress it, mate." "Really?" "Aye. No worries," replied the nurse with a smile. "Thanks!" replied a delighted Connor, turning around to head back out before remembering the other reason he'd gone to the Center and swiftly returning to the desk. "Oh, by the way, there wouldn't, ah… wouldn't happen to be anyone called Reyes here, would there?" "Rey-" began the nurse, before lightly biting her bottom lip to think for a moment, a half dumbfounded, half accepting look sprouted across her face. This kid, who had only an Aron who was absolutely out-of-it and the ability to barely hold a conversation with a nurse to his name, was apparently about to help go and take down a supposedly dangerous criminal alongside a guy who was a tad too proud of breaking someone's leg. As much as she was intrigued to see what happens, it was her duty as a nurse to, as she had so eloquently and repeatedly described it earlier, "stop dumb shit from happening." "Oi, bogan," the nurse called out to Reyes as she waved him over, "c'mere." He obliged, standing up and approaching the nurse and Connor, the latter of whom he turned to with a slightly chagrined look upon arriving at the desk. "Thank you for coming, but… could you not have come just a few seconds earlier, friendo?" "Oh, did you need me for something? Sorry, I was-" began Connor in response, before he was interjected by the nurse. "Bloody oath, mate, it's probably better you didn't come earlier; no worries about it. 'Sides, more important matters at hand; Reyes, was it? I'm gonna be dead serious with you 'ere, taking this little fella out to hunt a hardened criminal… it's not really the best idea. His Aron's stuffed, the poor guy; gonna need to rest for the next day or so. Also - no offence… what's your name?" "Connor." "Connor, right - no offence, but the little bugger's not exactly a Masked Ranger, is he? He's, what, five foot five and has one Pokémon on 'im; not really the type to kick arse and take names, if you don't mind me saying. I'm gonna make a recommendation; if you're adamant on taking him along with you to go after a criminal, props to ya, but you'll only get him hurt for now. Perhaps give it a couple of days, maybe?" Reyes was unmoved in response, instead giving a "hmph" before giving the nurse a determined look in the eye. "You may have a point when you say his Aron needs a rest, but I don't plan on letting someone helping out a Pokémon of their own free will get hurt. Besides, give Connor some credit; he may be small, but I can assure you, size does not matter when every inch of one's body is filled with justice!" "...Sure," flatly replied the nurse, giving Reyes an unimpressed look. "Several questions, but I'm just gonna hit you with two for now; one, do you seriously think you can take on a thief in a battle by yourself, and two, why are you even taking him along?" "Then I shall give you two answers, nurse: first of all, I'm not taking on a thief in battle by myself, am I? I'll be taking them on with a Gible, a Bagon, and my friend by my side, as a matter of fact. And secondly, he's going to be plenty of help with calming down Pokémon this man has stolen; after all, you haven't seen him handling Pokémon, have you? It sure is something to behold. Now, Connor, you don't mind this if we let your friend stay out of the firing line, do you?" "...Not really? Oh, uh, his name's Ronnie, though," offered Connor in response. "Of course, yes, Ronnie. Well, nurse?" beamed a confident Reyes. "You really are a bit of a dag, ain'tcha?" replied the nurse, prompting the two trainers to give her an unsure look. "If you have two Pokémon that can handle themselves, and this bloke's not gonna get involved in the scuffle, then… fuck, like I said, you'll be better off goin' after them than the boys in blue. The fella over there who got robbed, though; he didn't happen to say what the guy looked like, did he?" "Big, round, grimy black… tuxedo, is it? Black hat. Called Paulie, I think." "You know, a buncha people have come in here sayin' they've been robbed by blokes with similar descriptions over the past month or so, only with different names - a bit troubling because that's how everyone in these parts seems to dress, but hey ho. They tend to happen in alleys around the north side of Jubilife, usually not particularly far from the TV station. If you wanna give anywhere a look, I'd reckon you couldn't go much wrong there." "Wait, if the police have names, descriptions and know where the robberies are… why haven't they arrested them yet?" wondered a curious Connor, out loud but keeping his voice quiet to not cause a scene. "Like I keep sayin', they're just not good at their jobs," sighed the nurse, flatly. "You from 'round these parts?" "Yeah, I graduated from the trainer school around here not too long ago," replied Connor. "Really? Same 'ere, but I don't think I've seen you around. Graduated in July, right?" "Aye." "And your name's Connor… yeah, I honestly don't recall seeing you, particularly. You flunk all the time or something?" "No, I just… I guess there's not much remarkable about me, honestly." "...Huh. Well, anyway, the name's Florence. Florence Martin." Reyes loudly cleared his throat, prompting the two to turn around. As they did so, Florence's eyes scoured his outfit up and down - his brilliant blue longcoat, intricately stitched with gold buttons and deep pockets; his red headband seemed to have a great deal of care put into it, too, as well as his long and glimmering hair. It seemed that a great deal of care had been put into his appearance - which meant that, more importantly, a great deal of money had been put into his appearance. Slowly, a mischievous grin unfurled across her face. "You know, the fellas who tend to get robbed often look the rich type," Florence offered, giving a not-so-subtle wink to the two. Connor turned around, looking Reyes up and down before seeming to have a lightbulb moment. This prompted Connor to look Reyes up and down, thinking for a moment before seeming to have a lightbulb moment, much to Reyes' confusion. "...Why are you looking at me, guys?" asked a confused Reyes.
Not long after getting a bite to eat from the Center's convenience store, the pair - with Garra firmly tucked into Reyes' arms - were in the middle of aimlessly walking around the northwestern area of Jubilife, with Reyes visibly displeased at this development. "You know," he lamented with a disgruntled frown, looking down at his shorter companion, "I don't think it's fair that I get picked to be the bait for a group of criminals just because I want to wear cool clothes. Surely we could have just done some sniffing around for clues and then burst into their headquarters and kicked all of their asses, no?" "I mean… maybe, but wouldn't that get us both hurt?" replied Connor. "I'll have you know I'm already plenty hurt you think my sweet clothes mean you can use me as thief bait, kick all of their asses, no "I mean, as fun as that sounds, it's not really the safest idea, is it?" countered Connor with a smile of jovial mockery. "I'm sorry I can't be of more help, but after everything that's happened to us today, I really don't think me or Ronnie are in the best shape to do any form of fighting, let alone the ass-kicking type." "Oh, don't get me wrong, that is fair, but I decide that I would like to wear some cool - nay, the coolest - clothes and suddenly I'm thief bait? There are few things a man should value above justice, but keeping my fabulous fashion intact is one of them." "Fabulous fashion...?" asked a quizzical Connor, prompting Reyes to stop in his tracks and shoot him a rather hurt look. "My friend, are you insinuating that I don't look absolutely fantastic right now?" fired back Reyes, tightening his bandana in offence. "Woah, woah, now, I didn't say that, Reyes; I'm just saying, that's just… not really what I expected you to say, you know. I'm sorry it came off like that." "It's fine, but what did you expect me to say?" "Just not that, I suppose." Ah, shit.Paulie's large figure leaned against a wall, nails digging into brick in impatience. Now Jerry's gone, too. Boss is gonna flip his lid when he finds out.The robber had spent the last thirty minutes or so waiting in the alley for the return of his colleague - after Jimmy had seemed to vanish from the face of the planet earlier, he was hoping for Jerry to come back with news of a successful robbery. This hadn't happened, and instead he found himself alone and a Pokémon short of his target of five, which was what his higher-ups demanded for the day - much more than that and he risked getting careless, the chance of rushing and making a rookie error growing and growing. It was nearing six o'clock, and he was due to report back to the boss half an hour after that. Was half an hour enough time to scout out a good target, sweeten them up, lure them into a secluded area, get their Pokémon and head back to base? Pah. Amateurs needed half an hour. A pro like him could do it in twenty minutes, no problem. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw a figure in brilliant blue walk by him, with a Pokémon he'd never seen before in hand. Make dat fifteen.
The conversation had ground to a halt, much to Garra's displeasure. The Gible, who was relishing the attention he got in the form of strange and intrigued looks from passers-by and Jubilife locals who had never seen such a Pokémon in person, quickly grew bored of the silence, and let his displeasure be known in the form of a high-pitched "Gib!" "Say, Reyes," began Connor as his taller companion began rubbing his Pokémon's belly after rolling up his sleeves, "do you have Gible in Hoenn?" "Oh, no," answered Reyes confidently. "Garra here, he's the first one I ever met." The Gible's trainer was a tad distracted from this conversation, looking around the crowd around him. He was keeping an eye on if anybody seemed to be following the pair that matched the description of the thief from earlier. This proved difficult, however, when he was holding such a rare Pokémon in his arms. Reyes figured that it would be challenging to deduce if anybody was looking at him and following him with intent to steal Garra instead of merely looking in awe at the Pokémon. This was a conundrum, however; the Dragon-type hated his ball, and putting him back in there to make looking for any thieves easier would probably lead to him getting a couple of nasty bites on his legs or arms.
Paulie kept a close eye on his chosen victim, his head a periscope as it peered from the rest of the busy crowd, managing to keep a focus on his prey and following his every move. Judging by his outfit, it wasn't a stretch for the burglar to assume that his mark fancied himself to be a tough guy; in addition, if he was walking with his Pokémon out in the open for all to see, he was either brave or an idiot - Paulie hazarded a guess that it was the former. The robber figured that it would probably be a struggle to get this guy down into an alley and expected that he'd have to fight for the Pokémon. No worries - after all, nobody crossed Paulie and got away with it. But his other point was still a worry: how would he get the guy into a position where he could make off with his Pokémon? Well, for one, he'd have to wait for the dense crowd to die down before he made his move. Even then, using force wasn't an option when the guy had his Pokémon out in the open and ready for a fight. He'd have to either butter him up with words - perhaps by feigning injury or pretending to need help - or trick him into following him. Not quite sure how to accomplish the latter, he decided to use persuasion. But that'd require getting through the crowd and ahead of his mark without him noticing. As he cut to the side of the crowd and sped up walking pace, though, he noticed that his subject was walking alongside a second, much smaller person. A person who had a Pokéball on his belt, but nothing out to help him. This gave him a third idea - what if he turned his attention to this guy instead? Yes, that'd work out excellently - if he managed to get his Pokémon out first and lure him into a quiet place, away from onlookers, he had two routes to go down: he could use him as a hostage to get both of the trainers' Pokémon, or he could go the safer route and just steal the smaller fellow's Pokémon. Judging by the density of the crowd, he even reasoned that he could have simply cut into the crowd, grabbed the smaller trainer's Pokéball and made a run with it; however, this ran the risk of alerting the other trainer - and indeed, others in the crowd - and getting himself hurt as a result. Instead, he decided to play it as safe as he could. With a smirk, he continued to pace ahead of the two, focusing his attention on the road ahead.
"...You had much experience around Dragon-types?" enquired Connor. "Yeah, some back in Hoenn; dad had a Flygon." Reyes weighed up his options. The way he saw it, putting Garra back in his ball, whilst it'd get fewer people to look at him solely for his Pokémon and weed out anyone who would try and steal from him because of his outfit (if they were stupid enough to try it, anyway), it probably wasn't worth the risk of the Pokémon getting cross at him over. After all, if the thieves before had targeted people based on how rich they seemed rather than just their outfit, then having Gible out made him a more prominent target. "He had one? Aw, why the past tense?" "Hm? Oh, no no no, he still has the old guy," replied Reyes, not wanting to seem distant whilst keeping an eye out. "He may be getting on in age, but oh man, can he fight! Arceus himself wouldn't be able to take the old boy to the afterlife, I don't think." There were a few people Reyes spotted that he didn't quite trust, but none of them seemed to fit the description put forward to them by the man in the Center. Nevertheless, Reyes' utmost priority was remaining vigilant, and whenever he had chance he made sure to scan the crowd to look for anyone who seemed particularly suspicious. This proved difficult when he realised, however, that the thief's outfit wasn't particularly rare in this part of town - rather, it seemed to be the clothing of every generic businessman in this neck of the woods. "He seems like a pretty good boy," remarked Connor. "Flygon are cool, man. I'd trust that old fella with my life - going off what you've just described, anyway." "Oh, I feel absolutely the same," chuckled Reyes, darting his attention to his newfound smaller friend with a smile before continuing to look around. Nothing specifically shady from any of the grimy suit wearers in the crowd - one of them did seem to be in more of a rush than most, but was there anything so suspicious about a businessman being very eager to get home? Reyes figured that there wasn't. Dammit! Why couldn't we get tasked with looking for an idiot?!
From the corner of his eyes, Paulie glanced back at the pair. They didn't seem to notice him - this was excellent news to the thief, who, if his memory was serving him correctly, was nearing one of his favourite hold-up spots. At the rate the pair was walking, he could have the smaller one in there in two minutes, get the Pokémon, and then make his way over a fence and rush back to the boss. All of the signs were good - everything was coming up Paulie, and he loved it! Stifling a grin so as to not look odd, he took one last look at the pair before his pace increased even further, stopping just short of turning his fast walk into a full-blown jog. Once he felt he was out of the pair's sight, he placed a hand in his pocket, gripping onto one of the Pokéballs in there and waited until he was closer to the alley. Being prepared for the robbery minutes in advance was absolutely vital to ensure that everything ran smoothly, after all - time was ticking away, and he absolutely didn't have much of it left before the boss got pissed.
Reyes noticed that the businessman who had been walking particularly quickly had sped up even further and disappeared from his view. This was enough to arouse concern - what could he possibly have going on at home that required walking so fast? It wasn't his position to speculate about people's private lives, but something was off. He sped up in response, hoping to catch up to the potential burglar - much to the delight of Garra, waving his arms and letting out an excited squeal as his trainer practically burst through the crowd, earning himself a few angry remarks from people he barged past. "Reyes?" asked Connor, struggling to keep up as he began to run as fast as his legs could carry him whilst slaloming through passers-by, apologising to anyone he came into contact with. "Hm? Oh, sorry," replied Reyes, a bashful smile on his face as he slowed down just a little bit. "I think I might have our guy, but he's made a run for it - wanna come with?" "Of course I am, but could you warn me next time you run of, please?" "Right, my apologies." With that, the two continued onwards, moving at a pace that was just brisk enough to satisfy Reyes.
Paulie stepped out of the light of the sunset and into the shadows of the alley, two buildings of numerous stories covering him in the shroud of darkness. Just how he wanted it - those poor bastards would never know what hit 'em. Unfortunately, there wasn't time to reflect on the alley like some sort of gothic author; rather, he had to prepare himself to pounce on his prey. His hand shot out of his pocket, opening the Pokéball firmly gripped by it to reveal a purple and white furred creature, it's puffy tail sticking up and disgusting stench wrapping around it. "Alright, Stunky," began the burglar, squatting down so his devious gaze met the Poison-type's beady stare, "ya know the drill. Make like ya've been attacked or summin', and when I stomp my foot, do ya best hurt noise. That'll draw 'em in, and I'm gonna get behind 'em so dat they ain't leavin' - when I snap my fingers, you hit 'em widda Poison Gas, and I'll take it from dere. Ya got it?" "Stunk!" chirped the Poison-type in reply, nodding its head vigorously. "Excellent. Good boy. We're gonna be on some good dough tonight, ya know - and I couldn't do it widdout ya," offered the burglar, rubbing the back of the Pokémon with his knuckles and being met with the sound of delighted lips smacking together under the Poison-type's massive cheeks. "Now get in position." With that, the Poison-type slumped over the floor, closing its eyes until they were barely open and slowing down its breathing until it sounded hoarse and strained, as Paulie pulled out some crimson food dye and poured it over the Pokémon before turning to watch the crowd, waiting for the pair to walk past.
Connor and Reyes' search had proven fruitless. Despite the pair's rushing, the man Reyes had spotted was completely out of sight, and Connor was starting to fall behind his new friend, having much shorter legs and being caught off guard by agility. Doubling over to catch his breath, his attention was caught by a pained screech from very close by. Anxious, he darted his head to the side to see a man looking down at what appeared to be an injured Stunky, squatting over the Pokémon and repeatedly calling its name. The man seemed to fit the description of the thief, but considering the sea of similarly-dressed businessmen, wasn't convinced that he'd found his target. He weighed up his options, taking a few steps closer to get out of the way of the crowd - he couldn't just ask the man if he was a thief, not least when he was so clearly distressed. But at the same time, he couldn't be sure if it was merely a ruse, and if the man was just faking it. If he asked the guy if he was a thief, and it turned out he was, then Connor reckoned he'd probably get all shocked that he'd been foiled - or something along those lines, anyway. But there was also the risk of asking an innocent, distressed guy in dire need of help for his Stunky if he was a thief, and getting him even more upset. Connor just couldn't be sure, and decided it wasn't worth the risk. He came to this conclusion just as the man noticed him, looking up and meeting the trainer's stare with a pleading look. "You! Kid! You know anything about Stunky? You gotta help him, man - I found him like this, all injured and whatnot - and I ain't no nurse, but I think he'll die if we don't help him out!" called out the man, waving him forward. A horrified Connor obliged to this request, rushing forward to get a closer view of the injured poison-type - Reyes was out of view at this point, and Connor figured that he would understand why he didn't catch up if he explained that he had to help out a hurt Pokémon. Ya fuckin' dummy, thought Paulie to himself, hiding a wry smile of triumph and pouring all of his efforts into keeping up his facade. "Is he okay?!" blurted out Connor before swiftly realising that Stunky was quite obviously not okay and rushing to correct himself. "Uh - I mean, uh, what can I do to help?!" Paulie rose to his feet, standing about nine inches taller than Connor and looking roughly twenty years his senior as he took a step out of the way, taking two steps backward. "I dunno where his wound is, but I dunno if he'll spray if I touch him or what, and I dunno how to calm him down - I've called the Pokémon Center and I think they're gonna be on their way soon, but like, I think we gotta stop the bleedin' until they get here, y'know?" he continued, his voice quite obviously nervous. "Right, uh, I get what you mean, yeah," replied Connor. This was a valid point, he thought - avoiding being sprayed was certainly a wise move, as was keeping it calm until help arrived. Still, judging by the breaths the Pokémon was taking, he figured that if he just moved slowly, cautiously and made his intentions known, he'd be fine. Gingerly, he took a few steps closer to the Poison-type, looking down at him - his movements were strained and breathing was difficult; indeed, it seemed as though he was clearly hurt. Paulie, meanwhile, relaxed his face as he stood what he reckoned was a good distance back from Connor, blocking the alley off to prevent him from leaving. "Hey," softly called out Connor, causing the Poison-type to raise its head just enough to look up at him. "Are you okay, buddy?" Interestingly enough, he didn't seem to be in the mood to attack or spray, which was odd - wild Stunky were renowned for being quite difficult to approach due to their potent spray and rather feisty nature. Judging by how it didn't seem to be interested in attacking the other man in the alley, either, the Pokémon had to be used to people - was it a trainer's? Had he been stolen? What was more, upon closer inspection, the Pokémon quite clearly wasn't bleeding - rather, that was just food dye. It soon came to his attention that the other man wasn't standing near him anymore. Confused, he turned around to look at Paulie. "He's not bleeding, but... uh, I think he belongs to a trainer? I don't know how you'd go about finding them, though," he called out. "Won't be necessary. I'm its trainer - you can call me Glenn," called out Paulie, calling out the first fake name that came to mind. "He is...? Oh, I'm Connor, by the way," responded Connor, hesitant. "No, you ain't. You'll be handing over your Pokémon if you value your health." Connor froze like a Deerling in headlights. People trying to steal his Pokémon twice on his first day? Where was Reyes? He was surely nearby, right? This wasn't good, this wasn't good - why was all this happening to him in such quick succession?! What had he done to deserve this? This wasn't good, this wasn't good, this wasn't good - he needed to think of a way out, and fast! "Meowth got your tongue, eh? Can't be doin' with none of that. Stunky!" called out Paulie, snapping his fingers. "Ky!" Before Connor knew it, he was overwhelmed by a noxious gas, as he fell to the floor, retching and clutching his stomach, his innards burning with each cough and his vision obscured by an impenetrable veil of tears. As he looked up, he saw the figure of the man he knew as Glenn approach him through the purple haze. Was this it? Was he losing Ronnie after one day? Things had been a rollercoaster, sure, but was the ride ending so soon? Connor raised a hand to stop him as he approached, each footstep growing nearer and nearer as the hiss of the Stunky beside him rang in his ears. "You there!" came a voice from the end of the alley, piercing the troubled thoughts whirring around Connor's head as if it were a light in the black. Connor didn't recognise this voice, but the only thing he could do was bank his hopes that they were there to rescue him.
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Post by girl-like-substance on Jul 22, 2019 22:03:12 GMT
'The Seeker', huh. I’ve always had an issue with the lyric ‘searching low and high’; it feels like a really lazy inversion, just for the sake of the rhyme. Nobody searches low first! :V
Anyway! There’s two whole chapters here, so I should turn my critical eye on them instead and get started properly. And a lot happens this time around, too: more of the gap between what Connor’s read and what he understands; a frankly staggering pokémon theft scheme (five a day? Per operative? This seems like a wildly extravagant scale that verges on the unworkable); and changed names (Antonio, Thomas) that make it clear once again that we’re either after or before the timeline of DPPt, without confirming either.
I kind of love that Reyes travelled here from Hoenn, knowing nothing about what he’d find here – he isn’t even sure that Sinnish pokémon are different to the ones he’s familiar with from Hoenn – and immediately decides he needs to go up against a professional theft ring of fearsome efficiency. Like jfc, my guy, you are lucky you ran into Bookworm McNerves over there, you are impressively ditzy.
Speaking of Connor, I’m enjoying the continued contrast between idea and execution: a grind is an abstract strategy that doesn’t account for the actuality of a living creature. (Although quite how Connor failed to notice Ronnie getting tired before he got to the point of physical collapse, I have no idea.) And like, it kinda throws into sharp relief the strange tension between the gamey elements (levels) and their more naturalistic fictional presentation that characterises pokémon training in this fic. Not quite sure how I feel about that overall yet, but I’m willing to stick around and see how it develops!
Like you said, there’s still some jank here, but it’s definitely picking up; a lot of the critique I might make has been covered in earlier reviews, and you’re certainly aware of that, so I can leave most of it aside. Some of your minor characters do seem a little cartoonish when compared to the main cast; it’s maybe less noticeable with Jerry because he’s got a section of his own, but like, I really noticed what felt like a generic mismatch when Florence was talking to Connor – like she’s such a comic portrait of a person that she sits next to him really weirdly, given that he seems like a more nuanced figure.
That said, it is totally reasonable that she’d give him such terrible advice. She’s a kid too, after all (which like, shouldn’t she have had some more extensive training, as a Pokémon Centre nurse? I feel like that’s the kind of thing you go to school for). I also very much like how fond Bibby clearly is of Jerry; I love when fic acknowledges that very often, the bad guys’ pokémon probably love them as purely and honestly as the good guys’ pokémon love their own partners.
Finally, here are some typos and things to finish off:
That comma after the dialogue shouldn’t be there.
‘Crinkle’ doesn’t seem like the right word here; it’s like, something I’d more usually associate with the movement of a sheet of plastic or paper than a sound effect, as I think it’s being used here.
Missing an F from the end of ‘of’.
This sentence is missing its end.
This sentence seems really unfinished – it doesn’t have an end, obviously, but it also doesn’t hold together at all. Not quite sure you intended with this one.
That’s all from me! Looking forward to seeing how Connor’s extremely eventful first day as a trainer pans out from here. He really is cramming it all in today, isn’t he? :P
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2019 19:51:56 GMT
you're entirely correct and I hate how funny this is. god-tier review for this alone
Whoposting aside, thank you so much for the thorough review! I should probably clarify my intentions with how this world actually pertains to the timeline of the canon, first off; this is an alternate timeline in which there is no Team Galactic. There are a few canon elements that have been replaced, mostly because I wanted to explore different possibilities with the world of Sinnoh (so far, this has led to a bit of a mix and match world), and Team Galactic are one of them. That being said, I can't really rule out any cameos, as of the time of writing this; who knows if Cyrus'll show up as a cameo at some point? (hint: not me lol)
In any case, Reyes is indeed ditzy to the extreme. From what I've seen in feedback on other websites, he's become the fan favourite because of this; rest assured that there will be hi-nanigans aplenty in his future. I'm also glad you're enjoying Connor's experience with the learning curve of being a trainer (though in hindsight, I was going for his inexperience being the key reason in which he fails to pick up on Ronnie being so tired, which certainly could have been handled better, and were I to redo that chapter I'd take a different approach), and I do agree the concept of levels is a strange and gamey thing. I curse my past self for including them in this fic, but I hope to explore that tension a bit further in future. Your critique of the inconsistency in tone between some characters and others is also valid, though rereading it my stances on the characters was the other way round (Jerry's section, and to a greater extent Paulie's in chapter five and six, always make me wince a bit). My approach to writing these characters has changed over time and I've tried to make them less cartoonish in later chapters, though I hope that transition isn't too sudden.
Once again, thank you so much for your review; it was as thorough, constructive, and as helpful as ever! I shall keep note of the aforementioned typos and whatnot you've pointed out should I head back for edits, and I hope you enjoy the conclusion to Connor's very wild first day!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2019 16:32:23 GMT
Author's Notes: hoping to get three chapters uploaded today! Partially because I wanna get to through these early chapters as quickly as possible and get the Oreburgh arc completely up and posted in the next couple of weeks or so. This is the first one, in which the longest first day of all time comes to a close. I hope you enjoy! :>
CHAPTER SIX: They Call Me The Seeker, Part Three
October 9th, 2007, 17:47 As Stunky's gas permeated through the air, Connor's jaw clenched itself shut as he pinched his nostrils, the bitten skin around his right thumb- and index fingernails going red under the Herculean strain they seemed to be under. The unrelenting assault on his senses had been going on for about half a minute by this point, and all the might his five-foot-five body could muster went into fighting off the urge to thrash in convulsions, to retch up his guts; despite the valiant efforts of his firmly closed eyelids, it felt as though acid was welling up in front of his eyes. As soon as he realised what was going on, he buried his head in the left arm of his jacket - he'd be damned if he let a single tear stream down his face because of some second-rate thief. While water streamed out of his eyes and formed puddles of shame on his jacket, his body began to quake whilst his throat burnt away in fierce hellfire, more intense than a Charizard could even dream of. Yet despite all this, the trainer held out hope. For whilst four of his primary senses were under the most vicious attack, Connor's hearing had yet to fail him, and he could make out what was, quite undeniably, the sound of another voice from the end of the valley - specifically, the sound of another voice crying out the phrase "You there!" Connor wasn't sure whether this was directed at him or the man he knew as "Glenn," to whom he attributed the feeling of somebody standing uncomfortably close to him, quite probably about to try and take Ronnie from him. This was besides the point, however; the welcome sound of nearing footsteps from the direction of the call punctuated the uneasy silence of the alley. Whilst Connor was unable to look up, he prayed that the footsteps reached him before the large man at his side had the chance to take his Pokémon; indeed, the feeling of the Aron's ball trembling on his belt was enough to fill his body with feelings of the worst kind. The poor little guy was probably terrified by what was going on - he was safe from the Poison Gas, sure, but Connor was almost certain he could sense from the Pokéball's movements, and perhaps the atmosphere of his current situation, that something was deeply wrong - and the quivering was probably hell on his already exhausted joints, too - and he needed to have the nurse's medication put on, too; something he reckoned Paulie neither knew nor cared to know about. Connor had lost count of the times he'd been in a sticky situation that day, but this was certainly one of them, and it posed the risk of ending his adventure so soon - more importantly, it risked Aron's health, something that caused the trainer's stomach to fill with pangs of guilt. So deep, was he, in this train of thought, that he almost forgot entirely forgot about the footsteps approaching him. He would've warned the owner of these footsteps not to get too close to the gas were it not for the fact that such a move would open the floodgates for a storm of vomit. This didn't seem to be a problem, however, as the sound of feet stopped a good ten meters away from him. He felt, too, that Paulie was no longer looming over him. Indeed, this assumption was correct - whilst Paulie would have liked to taken Aron that moment, it appeared as though a rather unwelcome visitor had appeared. Paulie took a moment to size the man up as he neared, putting him at no less than six foot and three inches tall, and the thief warranted a guess that he definitely did fitness training, judging by the rather athletic frame covered in a slightly crumpled white shirt, red tie and dark trousers - Paulie noted the absence of a belt for his Pokémon from his outfit. His face was rather intriguing to the thief; his skin seemed rather clear, complexion rather pale and nose short, with bags under the bold green eyes that glared, unimpressed, at him, his nostrils flared; his silently furious expression was masked by an unaffected mouth. Paulie's attention, though, was drawn to the approaching man's snow white hair. Whilst it wasn't a complete mess, it wasn't very neat, either; locks of it fell behind his ears and across his forehead in what Paulie thought best to describe as an overgrown Caesar cut. It may have seemed frivolous to spend such time analyzing a man's appearance as he approached, seemingly prepared to fight, but Paulie certainly didn't think that way; no, only an amateur would do something without reason. From his brief scan, he figured that walking towards him was a man who didn't care much for Pokémon battles, nor for his own appearance - probably more of a business-oriented person, and one who probably took quite a logical approach to things. To be more precise, he was one of those haughty-taughty rich types - his favourite type of customer. Paulie smirked. Did he really think that he was some sort of tough guy? What was he gonna do, throw money at him and tell him to get gone? The man who was now standing still before him, just out of the reach of the gas, may have been a hurdle, but hurdles were made to be jumped over - and this one wasn't a particularly large one. "Ya got a problem?" asked Paulie, staring the man in the eyes with a confident smirk. "'Cos if ya do, I'd be more than happy to help ya solve it." The man was unmoved, crossing his arms as he put forward his steely rebuke to the staredown. "My issue is that you appear to have poisoned a helpless young man with a toxic gas - a potent one, at that - and were on the verge of taking his Pokémon. I certainly hope that this wasn't the case, and I was merely seeing things, but you understand that, as of three weeks ago, my vision is perfectly fine," he firmly stated, his voice deep and unwavering. "Heh… well, perhaps ya should see a new doctor, guy." "Perhaps. Or perhaps you should leave this fellow alone, and leave." "Oh ho ho, threatenin' me? Just as I predicted, then; ya do got a problem," said Paulie in a mocking tone, taking a couple of steps through the gas and closer to the man. "Whatcha gonna do about it?" "Before I answer that," replied the man blankly, "you wouldn't mind if I asked you something, first?" Paulie contemplated this for a moment, before hitting the man with a look that dripped with smugness. "Hah, I've got the time to humour ya before I kick yer ass. Shoot, bozo," he shot back with faux friendliness. "You're perfectly fine with standing in poisonous gas. You specialise in Poison-type Pokémon, do you not?" "Hmph. No shit, genius. Now, are ya-" "And furthermore, you wouldn't happen to have worked in pest control in the past, would you?" "...Eh?" responded Paulie, intrigued. "Well, I ask because your body has obviously grown resistant to the sort of poison that Stunky or Skuntank produce. Given that you didn't even flinch as you walked into the gas, you've obviously been exposed to it outside of Pokémon training; I'm also assuming - on account of your voice - that the conditions you've worked with them in were unfavourable, to the point where it left you with some permanent damage to your respiratory system. What other professions would have one work in such conditions - such as an unfiltered vent or a dank basement - enough to for the body to become used to it, I wonder?" "...Hm. Correct, but what does this have to do with me takin' some Pokémon, guy?" Connor, who had used this to wriggle himself just far enough to get into a position where breathing was no longer a serious risk, had a similar question - what did this man have planned with all these questions? Was he a detective of some sort? He tried opening his eyes to view what was going down, but the buildup of water in his eyes made his vision extremely blurry, something that prompted him to blink rapidly to clear up. "Tell me, until how long ago did you work in pest control?" "'Bout five months ago, but that don't answer my question." "Interesting. That's also roughly when this string of robberies started, isn't it, Paulie?" This caught both the attention of Connor and the ire of Paulie, with the latter's expression morphing into one of both shock and anger, eyebrows arched and eyes squinted as he spoke in a growling tone. "You been followin' me, bozo? You some sort of cop or somethin'? How'd ya know my name, pig?!" The man's face was almost completely deadpan, visibly apathetic towards the thief's accusatory remarks - with the exception of a flicker of disgust and a flaring of his nostrils. "Not exactly. If I were a policeman in Jubilife, do you really believe I would have found you? No, my job is to serve the people in any way I can." "Oh, knock it off with yer holier-than-thou Tauros shit! Yer a glorified - what'ssaword - vigilante, is what you are!" shot back Paulie, his tone increasingly hostile before breaking into a chuckle. "You ain't any better than I am!" "Good point," rebuked the man dryly, "except one of us is an unrepentant Pokémon thief who attacks defenseless children, and one of us is trying to stop that from happening. I'll operate outside the law if I need to, so long as it keeps the innocent safe from people like you." Whilst this conversation went on, Connor found the time to sit up out of reach from the gas, taking deep breaths in and out as he wiped his eyes and occasionally gagging as vomit came up his throat. Gathering his composure as he waited for Reyes to return, he was a little intrigued by his apparent saviour. To him, the man seemed quite a scary figure; there was just something a little intimidating about his no-nonsense demeanour, and his seemingly laser-focused line of questioning was quite unnerving to see in action. In addition, whilst he was, admittedly, quite disappointed that he didn't catch onto Paulie's ruse, Connor couldn't help but wonder how this man knew the thief's real name. "People like me? I'm only doin' what a man's gotta do to survive on this bitch of a planet. You wanna help people? Go run for office or somethin'! Society's the real problem here." "I'll give you credit on one thing - to convince yourself that stealing Pokémon from defenseless teenagers using poisonous gas is necessary because of the state requires some fantastic mental gymnastics." "I ain't got time for this! You're gonna tell me who you are and how ya got my name this instant, and then you're get yer ass outta here before I kick it out for ya!" "...Hm. I suppose I owe you that much." The man pulled out a Pokéball from the back of his jacket and opened it, with what Connor believed to be an Alakazam coming out. As he scanned the yellow, vulpine creature with his Pokédex to confirm this, he couldn't help but notice that the Psychic-type shared one characteristic with its trainer - its authoritative demeanour, accentuated by the unwavering look it gave with its tiny black pupils. "My name is Julius Verstand, and I work as vice president for GERECHT. As for how I found you, I must attribute some of it to luck. I'd been hearing stories of a thief with Poison-type Pokémon around these parts since they started - it's practically all they talk about down at the Center - but about a month after these robberies began, our offices had a bit of a pest problem. The employee who was sent to deal with it, I recall striking up a conversation with them - they were quite frustrated about not being able to reach the Zubat, and they mentioned your name, as a matter of fact. You were fired from stealing from your boss the month before, and I figured that perhaps this was a lead. Months of investigation and speaking to victims in my spare time later, it would seem that I was correct - although it is rather unfortunate that I wasn't able to get here before you attacked this young man. I suppose that means there's more wood in the cross to which I shall nail you, then?" "Nail me to a cross?! I don't think so, pal! Stunky!" declared Paulie, gesturing towards Julius as he darted his head to his companion, who gave back an affirmative "Stunk!" before beginning his attack. The thief watched on as his Poison-type companion's stubby little legs carried it in a valiant charge, rushing towards the opposing Alakazam as he let out a battle cry in the form of a bubbling hiss, fangs bared. The ten meter gap between the two Pokémon began closing as the ball of purple fuzz continued to accelerate, much to the delight of Paulie, whose face was illuminated by a confident grin. Neither this Julius bozo nor his Alakazam were even reacting to this - were they scared out of their wits? Whatever it was, it was good news for Paulie; he reckoned Alakazam would turn in a pretty penny on the market. The Poison-type, as it reached the three meter mark from its opponent, changed up its stride for a couple of paces before launching itself from its hind legs, beady eyes lit up with fervour as it prepared to latch down its fangs onto the Alakazam's head in a Bite attack. An Alakazam as well as this kid's Pokémon?! Oh, this'd show the boss! Paulie watched on in glee as an ecstatic grin lit up his face, preparing to witness Stunky's attack - one he recalled was super effective against Psychic-types, too! The thief had hit the jackpot on this one! "Signal Beam," ordered Julius, completely blank. Almost without even moving, the Alakazam merely grunted as a brilliant green beam of energy shot out from its spoons, striking the Stunky with enough force to render it unconscious as it flew into a wall at the end of the alley. A confused "What?!" was all Paulie could muster in response, before a call rang through the alley. "OI! Bastard!" Connor turned around to see the figure of Reyes, with his navy blue longcoat flowing in the breeze. He didn't seem to be a particularly happy camper, to put things lightly - his voice was hoarse with rage, eyebrows arched in fury as a fire burnt bright in his brilliant green eyes, almost twitching in the ferocity of their squint as locked onto the thief. The arm he wasn't using to hold his (very displeased) Gible was outstretched and unmoving, an accusatory index finger aimed straight at the thief before him. Paulie's confident demeanour had quickly evaporated, his ecstasy now very much agony. One question was on his mind as he fumbled for his Pokéball - what the hell had just happened? Within the space of about three minutes, he'd gone from having a surefire ticket to getting a good pay, to now being faced by two angry trainers - one of whom was capable of wiping out his Pokémon in a single hit, and the other he recognised as his original target with a Pokémon he'd never seen before (and wasn't too keen on meeting, judging by the razor teeth it was baring) - and the threat of losing his place in the gang, his respect with the boss, and the great ladder of his career advancement within the mob being pulled out from under him looming large. He hated to admit it, but he was cornered as a Rattata. Unless… He peeked behind him, his pupils moving up and down like a ping pong ball as he sized up the fence behind him. "Don't even think about running, you dumbass!" demanded Reyes in response, his arm now at his side as he moved ever closer to Paulie, an air of authority surrounding him. Julius, without saying a word, seemed to echo this sentiment in his wordless stare. Paulie's heart raced as he weighed up his options. He either faced surrendering himself to the two and likely end up not getting beaten in exchange for information, or he had the chance to run away, get some other idiot's Pokémon and go back to the boss safe and sound - with the slight risk of being caught. As Reyes neared, his fists clenched and body shaking with anger, he made up his mind. With a hasty pirouette, the thief swivelled around, recalling Stunky as he rushed over to the fence, managing to jump just high enough to put his hands atop it. "Dammit!" cursed Reyes, quickly switching his focus to Julius and barking out orders with his finger pointed at the fence. "You go after him, and I'll make sure the kid's alright!" Julius was caught a little off-guard by this outburst, flinching ever so slightly before nodding. "I'm on it," he duly declared before giving chase, his Alakazam assisting him by amplifying his jump with levitation so that he floated over the fence before following. After the pair made their exit, Reyes could do nothing but stare at the fence, taking a few deep breaths as he slowly relaxed himself, the tension slowly leaving his body. He fell silent for a moment as he unclenched his fists and dropped his shoulders, his expression softening into one of shame and anger. It was his fault that he'd lost Connor in the crowd, and the results were clear - the poor guy was on the floor after a gas attack, eyes watering and throat burning as he stopped himself from convulsing, trying not to puke his guts out. This was in spite of a promise he'd made to Florence at the Pokémon Center, and to Connor, too, and not only had he broken his promise, he'd let his new friend down. "Connor, are you okay?" he softly spoke, breaking the silence as he turned his head to partly face Connor. "Hm?" grunted the injured trainer through coughs, his voice croaky. Reyes turned his entire body around to face Connor, feigning a warm smile to mask his worry. "How are you keeping?" "Oh, uh… I-" began Connor in response, keeping down some bile before he continued, not wanting to worry one of his saviours. "I've been better, but… I think it could be worse. Just got a bit of a bad throat and watery eyes, is all." Reyes nodded in response, before letting out a deep sigh, walking towards Connor as he spoke before sitting against the alley wall next to him. "Listen, I… I'm sorry, really. This was entirely my fault. It shouldn't have even happened, and you shouldn't even be in this whole mess, but I messed up, and I got distracted, and I didn't realise you were gone until it was much too late. If you are even a little mad at me, I completely understand, and all I can do is make sure you're okay, and promise to do what I can to make sure this doesn't happen again." "Woah, hey," urged Connor in response, "don't worry a… about it. I'm not mad, honestly; it's really not your fault. I shouldn't've gone down this alley in the fiirst place." He briefly paused to clear his throat of phlegm in the hopes of stopping the cough from interrupting his speaking further, before continuing with a friendly chuckle. "B-besides, at least you came back!" "I dunno… I guess I just should've done better, is all, Connor. That bastard shouldn't have even been able to escape, to be honest. But nevertheless, your, what's the word… your forgiving, it's appreciated, friendo." "No worries!. Be- besides, I think someone's trying to cheer you up," pointed out Connor with a smile, glancing at Garra, who was currently making soft grunting noises and nuzzling into the armpit of Reyes' jacket, his eyes closed and content. "Huh? Oh… oh, hey, Garra, boy!" exclaimed Reyes as he noticed the Dragon-type, gently stroking his scaly back with one of his hands as a warmth lit up his face. "You aren't going to bite me again, are you?" Connor watched on. There was something he couldn't help but find a little adorable about the Dragon-type, one who'd left so many marks on Reyes' arm, trying to cheer him up - and it seemed to be succeeding. "Y'know, Reyes, he definitely seems to care about you, and that's a very good start for Dragon-types. The bites will probably stop over time, you just need to properly get used to each other and strengthen that bond." "I see," affirmed Reyes, nodding content as he continued to pet his Pokémon. "As cliché as that may be, you may be right. My main worry is trying to do this with more Pokémon, though - Bagon is not exactly a friendly Pokémon; most dragon types aren't." "Well, this is still day 1 for me, so… take it with a pinch of salt, but I'd suggest pacing yourself with your team. Only expand your team once you've bonded with all of your Pokémon." "Hm… that doesn't sound so bad of an idea." "Well, it's easier said than done. That's why so few people get past the Elite Four and become eligible for the League, isn't it?" "Of course, of course," noted Reyes, noticing that Garra had apparently dozed off under all the scritches. "...So, shall we head back to the Center?" "That sounds good," replied Connor, clearing his throat once more as he found his way back to his feet, politely rejecting Reyes' offer to help him up in the form of an outstretched hand. His vision was still a little blurred as he wiped his eyes some more, and his voice was still a little croaky from his burning throat, but he was definitely feeling a little better.
"Ah, you're back, I see," noted Florence dryly as the doors to Jubilife's Pokémon Center opened with a mechanical creak. "How'd it go?" Connor offered a hesitant thumbs up, an awkward grin plastered on his face in a (poor) effort to mask his discomfort as the pair moved closer to the desk. "...Takin' that to mean 'we fucked up,' then?" "Actually," replied Reyes, a little proud, "I will have you know we only fucked up slightly!" "Ah, strewth! Nice job!" said the nurse, sarcasm dripping from her voice. "You gonna elaborate?" "I, uh…" began Connor, glancing down in slight embarrassment as he tried to avoid Florence's gaze. "I found the guy, but… I might have goofed slightly, and I might have gotten a little… uh… gassed by his Stunky." "Ah, shit. You good now, though?" enquired the nurse. "Sorta?" croaked Connor, uncertain. "Ya sure? Your voice sounds a bit fucked, mate. Ya can go fetch some water, if ya want." "Oh, don't worry ab-" began the trainer, before coughing into his jacket's arm. "Don't worry about me. It was… kinda my own fault, anyways." "...Well, if you insist. How 'bout the crook? Did ya get him?" "Funny story, actually! My good friend here managed to distract him for just long enough for backup to arrive, and he's been dealt with! ...I think," chimed Reyes, proud as he pointed to Connor - this statement was confirmed by affirmative chirps and grunts from Garra. "I mean… I wouldn't say 'inhaling poisonous gas' is a great diversion, but… hey, if it works, it works! Good on ya, little fella!" Florence, pointing a finger gun at Connor with a congratulatory smile before turning back to Reyes. "...Whaddaya mean by 'I think,' though?" "You see, there was another guy in the alley too when I got there, and we managed to corner the crook, but he ran off - so I got the other guy to chase after him! Problem solved," replied Reyes, giving a hearty thumbs up. "You sent some random dude after a dangerous criminal?" asked the concerned nurse, her voice becoming notably more serious. "In his defence, though, he did have an Alakazam… and he took out one of the thief's Pokémon, too," muttered Connor, to support Reyes. "Oh, yeah, what he said - the guy floated over the fence to catch 'im!" "Oh, right - in that case, nice goin'!" said Florence, visibly impressed. "Just… try not to get gassed next time, mmkay?" Connor weakly chuckled in response. "Will do." "So, anyway, you fellas got anywhere to stay tonight? If not, we can gladly letcha stay in one of our rooms," proposed Florence. "Well, now that you mention it, that sounds a whole bunch better than camping out in the wild. You with me, Connor?" Connor considered this for a minute, before nodding in agreement. "Alright! We'll take you up on that!" Florence pulled out a pair of keys in response, handing them to the boys. "In that case, your number's on the key; we lock up at 10:30, and we're gonna need 'em back by noon tomorrow unless you're stayin' then as well." "Neato! Thanks, nurse!" replied Reyes, smiling graciously before heading over to one of the free seats in Center, his companion following suit. "Ooh, before I forget…" After taking his seat, Connor took out Ronnie's Pokéball, releasing him before him on the table as he took out the joint relief medicine from his bag with his other hand. "Hey, bud, how're you holding up?" he softly spoke, petting the Steel-type's forehead. The Aron strained itself a little to nuzzle Connor's hand in reply, his movement severely limited by muscle pain - something Connor was quick to pick up on. "Aww, I know, Ronnie, I'm sorry. Do you mind if I rub a little something where it hurts?" "Ar…" Connor applied the lotion to his hand, offering his palm to the Steel-type and gently applying it to his neck and limb joints. The medicine was cold, but Ronnie couldn't help but feel slightly relieved as it was applied - there was something a little soothing about the way Connor almost massaged it on, prompting him to let out a few contented coos. "Seriously," remarked Reyes, "that's very impressive for someone who's been a trainer for less than a day, Connor." "Yeah, but what isn't impressive is my battling. Obviously being so close to him after a day is impressive - and it's partly because he's a very good boy," replied Connor, turning to his pleased companion as he spoke that last part, "but it'd be nice if I had any idea how not to get him hurt after a battle, y'know?" "Mmm. Actually, that does bring me onto something, my friend." "Hm?" "Well, I was thinking, we'd make a good team, y'know? You're a pretty clever guy when it comes to Pokémon, and you definitely know how to handle 'em - while I, on the other hand, can help you out when it comes to fighting and stuff. And I know it doesn't seem like it, but without your contribution, that damned Paulie would have got away - so what I'm suggesting is, we travel and do the gym challenge together. It'll be fun! What do you say?" Connor was visibly caught a little off guard by this, his eyes widening a little. It'd been less than a day since he decided that he wasn't too keen on the "people" aspect of his adventure, and yet already somebody had offered to travel with him. He wasn't too sure how to respond, in all honesty - normally he would have fumbled out a sheepish "no thanks," or just slipped away, but… Reyes was different. He couldn't put his finger on it, but there was something about him that made Connor trust him. He clearly wasn't a bad guy, for one; in 24 hours he'd broken one thief's leg and sicked a trainer on another. What was more, he hadn't (intentionally) abandoned him in the alley, and, despite his self-admitted awful people skills, he got the impression that Reyes probably wouldn't end up stabbing him in the back at any point. The more he weighed it up, the more he realised that this probably wasn't a bad idea - he could've thought of worse people to share company with, and he'd probably get some battle experience from it, too. "Well, uh… I mean… I don't see why not? I'm not really much of a people person though, to be honest, so you might be a little disappointed if you're looking for good company," nervously chuckled Connor, turning a shade of red. "Oh, don't worry about it! I'm sure you can't be that bad, if you're as interested in anything as you are in Pokémon. Besides, like I said, it'll be interesting learning about them from you." "Really? Uh, thanks!" made out a delighted Connor, a little grin sprouting across his face. "In that case, I don't think there'll be any problems, then… you do have equipment for camping outside, don't you?" "I could easily pick some up. But are all the routes in Sinnoh this small? Could we not just stay in Pokémon Centers, or hotels?" "Mmm… no. It takes several hours to cross route 203, after all, and that's one of the smallest routes in Sinnoh. Most of them take a couple of days; it takes a good two weeks to get to Snowpoint from the nearest city on foot, and there's the matter of the Coronet mountain range, too, so I imagine we'll be doing the camping thing a lot." "Interesting. I'll try and pick some up tomorrow, then," "In that case, I'd be happy to come along!" "Excellent!" While Reyes was beaming about this development, the doors of the Pokémon Center whirred open, and in walked the man from the alley. As he looked around before eventually laying eyes on the pair and approaching them, Connor couldn't tell if it was the fluorescent lighting of the Center compared to the gloomy alley, but he thought something was slightly different about his shirt - were his eyes deceiving him, or was his shirt a little whiter than it was before? "I see you've noticed the change of shirt," said Julius, prompting Reyes to turn towards him as he took a seat in between the two trainers. "Hmm? Oh, I- I'm sorry, I didn't mean to stare," sheepishly replied Connor. "Oh, don't worry about it. I spilt something on the one I was wearing on the way here, and had to go change it, in case you were wondering." "Hey, Julius," chirped Reyes. "How are you? Aside from the coffee thing, I mean." "Not bad. I just thought I'd come in to let you know that that Paulie fellow's been dealt with." "Ah, cool! Thanks!" "Don't mention it. In any case, how are the both of you doing? You, uh - what's your name?" enquired Julius, looking at the smaller of the two trainers. "Connor." "Connor, right - I recall you were in quite a bad state after that whole ordeal. Are you feeling any better now?" "Sort of, yeah" he replied, his voice still slightly croaky. "I see. That's good to hear. As for you, young man -" "Reyes." "Reyes, I must say, your bravery was quite commendable when it came to helping out your friend." "Thanks!" "It's quite alright. If anything, I should be the one thanking you; your assistance was greatly appreciated in making sure the situations regarding the thief and your friend were solved." Julius' attention turned to the Aron on the table, the Steel-type giving him a welcoming look. "Is this your Pokémon?" he asked Connor. "O-oh, uh, yeah - I only just got him today. He's called Ronnie, and he's had a very busy day, haven't you, boy?" replied the trainer, petting the Steel-type's back. "Ron," grunted Ronnie, a little weary. Julius gently patted the Pokémon's head, a weak smile spreading across his face. "I see. And do you have any other Pokémon?" "No." "So, this is your first day?" "Yep." "Hm. Well, if you play your cards right, the rest of it will hopefully be an improvement over being gassed, won't it?" "I suppose so," replied Connor, pondering this statement somewhat. An awkward silence spread through the air. "Now that I think about it, actually, I met another trainer who was starting out today in town, too. I don't suppose you'd happen to know him, would you? Spiky red hair, a little on the tall side, quite intense… his name began with a H, but I can't quite remember it." "...Hawley?" "Ah, that was it. You know him?" "Yes." "He was at the Pokémart looking for supplies, and I believe someone was trying to take his wallet while he was distracted. It was quite the scene - him and his Croagunk beat the man to the floor, just in front of the cashiers. He got kicked out, of course, but it was quite interesting to watch. Spoke to him about it afterwards - he asked to see my Pokémon. Quite a fiery temper on that boy, but he certainly knows his stuff." "Sounds like him," remarked a reluctant Connor. "You seem quite different from him, I must say. Are you friends?" "Not really, no." "I see... between you and me, he seems like he has a lot of potential, but he perhaps needs to mellow out a bit. It'd be a shame to see such skill go to waste, or fall into the wrong hands." "Mm," mumbled Connor, his attention turning back to the Steel-type on the table. The silence returned. "I take it you're a trainer yourself, Julius?" asked Reyes, curious. "I didn't get to see any of the action, but that Pokémon of yours seemed real strong." "Oh, Alakazam? I've known him for a long time - he's been with me for as long as I can remember. Very strong Pokémon, very smart… really, an invaluable partner. As for training… I did the gym challenge and the Elite Four when I was about your age, about… fifteen years ago, I believe? The League wasn't my cup of tea, though; I haven't competitively battled in years. More important things got in the way." "The Elite Four, eh? Not bad! Have you ever been called up to fight the Champion?" "I've never applied. As I said, more important things got in the way - I'd prefer to be known through my work via that instead of through battling." "That's fair, I suppose." Silence once more. "...Well, I should probably be leaving," declared Julius as he got up. "It was good to meet you two - you seem like good young men. Perhaps we'll meet again, but if we don't, I wish you both the best on your adventures." "Oh, thanks!" "You too, Julius!" With that, he offered his hand to each of the trainers - Connor kindly refused, whereas Reyes accepted his handshake, noting his rather firm grip - before leaving. "He seems nice," remarked Connor. "Aye, he does," affirmed Reyes, nodding for a moment. "...So, anyway, Connor, how's your journey been so far? Aside from the whole thief thing, of course." Connor reflected on it for a moment. Sure, the day had had it's bad points - a one-sided encounter against his childhood nemesis, Ronnie fighting himself into exhaustion and getting poisoned by a thief were not experiences he was quite keen to repeat, and he was convinced they would have made a rotten day for any trainer, let alone a complete newbie. But at the same time, some great things had happened that day, too. He'd gotten his trainer's gear, he'd already made good progress with his starter Pokémon and a new friend, and between Julius and Murphy, he'd met some other very decent people, too. All in all, it was a very solid start. "Pretty good, but man, I'm exhausted. You wouldn't mind if I went to our room now, would you?" "Oh, sure! In fact, I'll probably do the same in 30," replied Reyes, handing him his key, "but a word of warning: I don't know much about the movies in Sinnoh, so you're in charge of that. You'd better pick something good, OK?" "I'll try," laughed Connor with a half-smile, as he got up and grabbed Ronnie's ball before crouching down to face the Steel-type, gently rubbing his head. "You ready to get some rest, little guy? It's been a long day, and you gotta rest up to get better." "Ar!" cried out Ronnie in affirmative, giving a single firm nod. "Good to hear! I'll see you in the morning!" With that, the Aron returned to his ball, and Connor retired to his room for the night, giving a solitary wave to Reyes.
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CHAPTER SEVEN: They Call Me The Seeker, Part Four
October 10th, 2007, 09:33 Connor's first night away from home was quite a pleasant one, as things turned out. After a fairly decent dinner from the Center's room service, he managed to locate some old copies of Masked Ranger episodes to watch with Reyes as the pair settled down on separate bunks. It came as quite a surprise to the Sinnohan that his new friend had never heard of it - the show only managed to develop a cult following in Hoenn, due in no small part to the decidedly cheesy dubbing - but nevertheless, a very good time was had by all, with Reyes quickly becoming enamoured by action and over-the-top dialogue. The show was bright enough to keep even his Pokémon entertained, with Garra staying up to make excited grunts and squeaks towards the array of colours on screen before eventually dozing off at about ten; Reyes followed suit around an hour later, with his alarm set for half past seven in the morning. "Connor," began a mildly concerned Reyes over a glass of water about two hours after waking up, "are you sure you aren't tired? What time did you even go to sleep last night?" "One in the morning," replied Connor, a little groggy as he held back a yawn, the two chestnut forelocks that usually stood like antennae now drooping over his face. "Geez! That isn't healthy! You need to get eight hours every night, man! Do you do that a lot?" "Go to bed late? Mmm… I guess… I'm just not good at sleep schedules. Most of the time it's not too big a deal, but I'm not really a morning person, haha... but I'm good, though, anyways! How are you?" "Wh- I mean, I'm fine, but don't worry about me, Connor! You've got to get more rest next time!" "Oh, trust me, I'm used to it by now," said Connor, giving a smile to reassure his partner before continuing. "Besides, you never know when you'll get attacked by a nightmare demon." "...a- are nightmare demons common in Sinnoh?" enquired Reyes, his companion's phrasing raising a few doubts. "Hm? Well, not common, no, but… y'know." "I do?" "I, uh… that was a joke, but there's at least one," offered Connor in a sheepish fashion. "Ah, well, that's not very many - and that means it's no excuse to miss out on your eight hours!" Reyes' somewhat jovial finger-wagging was cut short by an unrecognisable mess of light brown and frizzy hair, wearing an off-white top and torn jeans, approaching the two trainers at the table in the Center and taking a seat in between them, prompting Connor to fall silent, beginning to nibble at one of his thumbnails, trying to avoid staring for fear of coming off rude. "...Hello?" asked a confused Reyes, awkwardly offering a grin. "Mm? Ah," the figure grunted, swatting it out of her face to reveal a familiar pair of sapphire eyes. "Oh, Florence, hey!" "G'day," mumbled the off-duty nurse, holding her cup of coffee in a vice-like grip as she blankly took a sip from it. Quietness filled the air as the conversation found itself at an impasse, before Reyes took the initiative to speak. "...So, how are you?" "Fuckin' tired, mate. You?" "I am good! Connor, here, showed me this show last night about this guy who dresses up as a Bisharp and beat bad guys up. Have you ever seen it?" "Nah. Too busy studying medicine and treating Pokémon to watch blokes in cosplay have a scrap." "I recommend it, but... may I also recommend getting more sleep? I was just saying; it's important and it keeps stress at bay." "I'll sleep when I'm dead, thanks very much." Florence took another sip from her coffee as she continued to look onwards. Silence filled the air as both of the trainers at the table only offered perplexed looks. "Um… is… is everything alright?" asked a hesitant Connor, careful so as to not invoke the nurse's wrath. "No," grumbled Florence in reply, firmness present in her voice. "O-oh. Do, uh… do you wanna tell us the problem?" "No." "Right, s-sorry," stammered Connor, wincing a little. Weary, the nurse paused for a moment before the top half of her torso seemed to deflate, shoulders dropping back and a sigh escaping her lungs. "It's no worries, little fella, it's just… work is a bitch, y'know?" "I, uh… I don't, no," said Connor, swiftly coming to regret his complete sincerity after earning himself a displeased look. It was at this point that Reyes offered a welcome reprieve by re-entering the conversation himself. "Look, you can tell us what's wrong, and we won't judge you for it - right, Connor?" he began, to which Connor offered a quick nod. "Besides, it isn't healthy to bottle up your feelings. You've got to let them out." "Do I look healthy to you?" shot back Florence. "...Yes?" "Wrong answer. But since you two won't stop askin'... I'm still an apprentice here, you see - I'm about the same age as you two, and that's apparently not old enough to be working as a proper, full-blown nurse 'ere. Which is fair enough - I mean, no offence, Reyes, but you're older than me and I wouldn't trust ya to save a Word document, let alone a life - but according to the boss, I gotta get a year or two out in the field with trainers before I can do proper dinkum surgery, because apparently I'm "inexperienced" and "don't know enough about Pokémon to be a full-time nurse" and "not well-equipped enough to handle trainers" - and in my defence, I'm a damn nurse! Do you know how many dipsticks come in here because they tried to make toast with the toaster plugged into an Electivire, or who decided to put Charmander in the bathtub?" "Mmm, that sounds… challenging, to say the least," replied Reyes, brushing off the thinly-veiled insult. "Do you have anyone to travel with?" "Nah, 'course not." "Then I have a proposition! How would you feel about traveling with us?" the trainer declared with gusto in his voice, confidence radiating from his body like a lighthouse. "No." "Well, then it's settl- wait, you said no?" "Aye. Don't get me wrong, you seem like nice blokes, but you're… how can I put this without bein' a dingus… you sorta managed to make your Pokémon's entire body hurt and then went out and got gassed the other day, Connor. I'm sure you'll be a good trainer one day, but… I'd sorta prefer something safer for now, y'know?" "...Oh," said Connor, trying his best to hide his disappointment (and failing quite miserably). "Hey!" butted in a more assertive Reyes. "Leave him out of this! He knows what he's doing, trust me! If anything, I'm the one to blame for that whole ordeal - but Connor here's a good boy!" "I'm sure he is, but if you're in charge here, and you still got the fella gassed, that just makes you look like a damn idiot, y'know?" "Hmph. Is there anything I can do to change your mind, then?" "...You really are a persistent bugger, aren't you?" "Correct!" Florence thought about this for a moment, her baggy eyes deep in thought, before a grin twisted itself across her tired face. "Alright, then I'll make you boys a little wager. It's the 10th today, isn't it?" "Yep!" "If either one of you fellas can beat the Oreburgh Gym and show me the Coal Badge by the 25th, I'll come along." Connor raised a finger, on the verge of objecting before a smiling Reyes made his boast. "Pah! I'll have it to you by the 20th!" "That's nice, but I explicitly said the 25th. If you come to me with all of your Pokémon knocked out, I will kill you." "In any case, you have a deal! What happens if we don't get the badge by then?" "Jack-shit, that's what," grunted Florence. "Come on, you can do better than that!" replied Reyes, smirking. "Don't push your luck, mate." "Or what?" This response worried Connor, who at this point had resigned himself to holding his head in his hands, his hazel eyes staring in disbelief at his new companion. He was on the verge of breaking point and would have long since told him to stop for fear of his Pokémon's safety, were it not for the fact that it may have come off a little rude to someone who only meant well. Nevertheless, he was not a fan of where this conversation was headed. "...Alright," said the nurse as she turned her attention back to her coffee, "I'd think of something, but my coffee's going cold. Now, if you pick up any minor scrapes and you need a doc, I'll still be here, and that goes for needing a room; otherwise, good luck with that gym thing. Now, lemme have my coffee in peace, if you boys wouldn't mind." Connor felt himself exhale in relief as Reyes stood up. "Well, I suppose we'll be leaving then. Connor, are you coming with?" he asked, to which his companion nodded and followed suit, his rucksack on his back, with the duo making their exit.
The noon sun shone down through the thick foliage of Route 203 and onto the two trainers, with the silhouette of many a Starly soaring through the air. After applying lotion to the still-aching Ronnie for the second time that day, Connor reckoned that the Aron, who was currently curled up and resting in a patch of grass next to him, would probably be fit to battle in two or three days. This was far from ideal, to be out of commission for so long and so soon after starting, but at the very least, it allowed him to watch and study Reyes' fights. For one, Connor noticed that he took the approach of alternating between his Pokémon in between fights instead of spending long stretches of time with a specific one. This allowed him to meet Reyes' Bagon, who had been so eloquently named "Baggo' - "Listen, I'm not very good at names, okay?" insisted his trainer - and get an idea of what the species was like. For one, Baggo seemed a lot more aggressive and hyperactive than Garra, making up for the level deficit (a mere level ten, one level behind Ronnie and five behind Garra) and less impressive attacking skills with sheer fervour and hunger to fight. He didn't seem to take too kindly to Connor, either, which led him to believe it would perhaps be best to spectate from afar. As for Reyes' fighting style, Connor noticed a surprising amount of strategy went into his moves for such a low level of combat - from what he could deduce, both of his Pokémon were physical attackers, and so both prioritised getting into close range. Baggo was the faster of the two, and utilised this speed to harass opponents into inescapable nooks and crannies, beating them down from there with Bites and Rage attacks; conversely, Garra had more bulk, leading to a calmer and more defensive style that favoured moves such as Sandstorm and Take Down. All of this made Connor think about whether or not he needed to expand his team. There didn't seem to be any downsides, but just to be safe... "Reyes?" he asked, shortly after Reyes and Baggo had just defeated a particularly stubborn Starly. "Yes, Connor?" "How is it having two Pokémon?" Reyes thought about this for a moment before replying. "What do you mean?" "Well, I was thinkin'... when Ronnie's not fit to fight, I'll sorta need someone to fall back on, won't I? But, like… I don't know if I'm ready for it just yet. I'm not sure; I think I've gotta make sure I'm, y'know, 100% with Ronnie first and I can look after him properly first, before I catch someone else. Right?" "Oh, don't worry about it, bud! Of all people, you've got the skill to train two Pokémon at the same time. I mean… I don't know nothing about Pokémon, and yet I'm training two Dragon-types at the same time and I still have my arms on!" said Reyes triumphantly, before remembering the bite marks he'd picked up from Garra. " ...Well, barely, but that's irrelevant!" "...Mmm," replied Connor, a little unsure about the quality of this advice as he tilted his head slightly before turning his attention back to Ronnie, scratching the back of the cooing Steel-type's head. "Well, uh… thank you, anyway!" "No problemo, friendo!" It was at this moment that Connor happened to notice a familiar crimson-haired asshole walking down the route, the sound of each thudding step on the ground slowly filling him with dread as he drew nearer and nearer. "Connor? Are you alright?" asked Reyes, noticing the sudden shift in his expression. "Is something the matter?" "I'd… um, it's, uh, i- it's nothing, Reyes," came the reply, with Connor's voice going quieter, trying not to look as Hawley approached. Concerned, Reyes couldn't help but have a look at the problem. The sight that greeted him was that of a trainer clad in a pea green jacket and black t-shirt who looked far too pleased with himself, a swagger in his step that didn't really help him look intimidating as it did weird. "Oh, you're scared of that guy? Psssh, come on, he's no biggie," he replied, jovial in his tone as he made sure he was out of earshot. "I'm sure he won't notice you, and if he does… you don't worry about it." "Mmm, I wouldn't say 'scared,'" squeaked a Connor who was, in fact, quite noticeably scared, "I just… I don't really, how can I, uh… I just don't want to get involved, that's all." "Connor, it'll be fine, trust me. If it comes to it, I'll handle it, buddy." The pair fell silent as Hawley came nearer and nearer, not seeming to pay them any heed as the mostly unaffected look on his face remained constant. A sigh of relief almost escaped Connor's lungs as he began to gnaw on one of his jittery fingernails, when the crimson haired child turned around and lit up in glee, a smirk etched upon his face. "Wasn't I clear enough the first time, dickweed?" he growled, smelling blood and lurching towards Connor as he reached into his belt. "H-hey, Hawley," said Connor. "Silence! Don't make me kick your ass again!" bellowed Hawley, stabbing a finger into his adversary's jaw. "Now, let me repeat myself: don't try and surpass me, you little shit! Do you understand me?!" "Ah, I see Mr. Perfectly Normal Human has arrived," remarked Reyes, shooting him an unimpressed glance. "...Hm?" "Connor, come on, you're really scared of this weirdo? He's as edgy as a damn spoon!" Hawley raised an eyebrow at Reyes, considering his options. Connor did seem adequately terrified, and he did have his sole Pokémon out injured - which presented a dilemma to him: whilst it would have been an effective method of showing his rival that he was boss, that he meant business... something felt a little off about it. It would have been unfair to attack someone who was completely unable to defend themselves. What was more, someone had dared to get snarky with him? Such insolence, such disrespect - this would not stand! Nobody mocked the Wilkins family and got away with it unscathed! No, as much as he would have liked to beat some sense into his rival before him, he had more pressing concerns. Connor felt himself exhale, relaxing his very stiff body and wiping the sweat off his brow as Hawley removed his finger from his jaw and turned to face Reyes, shooting said finger at him with a deadpan look. "And who may you be?" "I'll have you know you're speaking to the great Reyes Vasquez, of the Hoenn region." "Hah, save your posturing-" " Mmmmsave your posturing," replied Reyes in a mocking tone, gesturing a mouth opening and shutting as he looked straight at Hawley. "Don't interrupt me." " Mmmmmdon't interrupt ME." "Are you mocking me?!" " MMMMMMMMare you mocking me?!"Hawley gritted his teeth in anger, clenching his fist as he scowled at the grinning Reyes - who would have been lying if he had said he hadn't found this incredibly amusing. So angered was he at this, as a matter of fact, that he had taken a few steps away from a Connor who was trying incredibly hard not to laugh for fear of a foot to the crotch. "Now, listen here, bucko-" " Now listen here, bucko." "I-" " I-" "If you really think such immature tricks are going to anger me-" "I'm right?" "Hah! I can assure you I'm not mad-" "You are, though-" "Stop doing that-" "No, you stop." Connor only watched in amazement as the two bickered. It was blatantly obvious Reyes was trying to be as petty and immature as possible to get Hawley riled up, and, quite hilariously, it was working - perhaps he was wrong to think Hawley was as tough and menacing as he did if he went as red as his hair over having someone repeat him. It was completely ridiculous to watch, sure, but there was something deeply satisfying about watching him squirm over something so absurd. This feeling was not shared by Hawley, who felt himself growl through jaws clenched so hard his teeth could have snapped at any moment. He tried desperately to mask his shaking arm as he opened the Pokéball in his hand, his Croagunk forming a few feet to the right of Reyes. "If you insist on being a child, then Tomyris here and I will beat you like one!" "Oof, you hit children? That's pretty bad, man," tutted Reyes. "You get what I meant!" "You just said you'd beat me like a child…?" "...Shut up!" yelled Hawley, his voice breaking into an enraged falsetto. "Tomyris, fill him with poison!" "Baggo, go!" The newly-nicknamed Croagunk rushed at Reyes with spiked, deep purple middle fingers just as his Bagon emerged from the light, rushing at Tomyris to halt her charge with a gaping mouth. Connor, having parked himself back on the ground to check on Ronnie - who was, thankfully, still resting - focused his attention on the developing battle, absent-mindedly rubbing his Steel-type partner's head. Fortunately for Hawley, meanwhile, Tomyris just about managed to outspeed Baggo, propelling herself towards the Bagon with an outstretched and poison-tipped hand. Unfortunately for Hawley, the mighty jaws of the Dragon-type did not have to move much to counter this, clamping down on the Poison Sting attack with a bite of his own and trapping the Croagunk's arm in his mouth. The tremendous impact of the bite prompted Tomyris to recoil and screech in agony as Baggo made his second move - a fire briefly ignited in the lungs of the Dragon-type, travelling up his throat and into his mouth and exposing Tomyris to burning embers. It took all of Tomyris' might to yank her arm from his mouth, every nerve in the limb in screeching pain as she fell to the ground for a moment, visibly bitter. "Wh-what?!" exclaimed Hawley in an ambivalence of rage and shock. "How did you - agh, dammit! Tomyris, hit 'em back!" "CROA!" Baggo was rattled by Tomyris' sudden and splitting cry just long enough for the Croagunk to land a good hit on his chest, the sharp pangs around his ribs forcing him to grab at his chest in pain. Nevertheless, the wounded Dragon-type's rebuttal swiftly came in the form of a leer that oozed fury, and one that unnerved his opponent into dropping her defences a little. "Trying to spook my Pokémon with underhanded tactics, are we?" spat a furious Hawley, accusatory in his tone as Tomyris proceeded to goad Baggo on in a taunting manner. "Fight like a man!" "I, uh, I don't mean to butt in," called out a hesitant Connor, "but isn't your Croagunk female?" "Silence, fuckface!" Connor's interruption had bought Reyes just enough time to pick up on the fact that Tomyris was directly between Baggo and a tree stump - one that was about as tall as the Croagunk's back, which gave him an idea. His smile exuding conviction, he leant back against the tree behind him and spoke. "Well, I'm not sure you want to do that, but if you insist. Baggo, Dragon Rush!" The couple of seconds that Baggo, who was now charged and glowing a bright blue, spent preparing to spring himself forwards was not enough for Tomyris to dodge out of the way, and with all the might that his body could offer, his powerful neck muscles propelled his head directly into the Croagunk's stomach whilst imbued with draconic energy. The force of the impact was enough to send the Poison-type flying into the stump, smashing her back off it and rendering her unconscious in an instant. "Guh-" "You see… Hawley, wasn't it?" said Reyes, quite clearly pleased with himself. "Baggo here's quite a feisty boy, with a bit of Hydreigon in him, too. I would suggest perhaps not getting ahead of yourself next time, mmkay, friendo?" Hawley flared his nostrils at him before chuckling at his opponent. "Hmm… well, you're clearly leagues ahead of your idiot friend, there, I'll give you that. But that doesn't make you better than me!" Reyes took a glance towards Baggo, who was clearly not in the best shape despite his victory - as a matter of fact, it seemed as though the Croagunk's first attack had poisoned him, and his head was beginning to droop a little. "I think it does... but at the very least, can I switch my Pokémon before we keep doing this? The guy's exhausted." "If you wish, but I don't see what difference it'll make when I kick-" "Cool, thank you. Garra!" replied Reyes, as Baggo was swiftly replaced by his bluer and rounder colleague, who let out a battle cry as he looked at Hawley with beady black eyes. "Clausewitz!" declared Hawley in rebuttal, opening another Pokéball picked from his belt to reveal a fuzzy Shinx, staring down his Dragon-type adversary with a fierce glare. This development… it startled Connor a little. He'd already been lagging behind his rival quite significantly since yesterday, and now he already had a second Pokémon? He needed to up his game fast if he was to keep up, let alone get ahead of him. "Interesting. Connor, correct me if I am wrong, but isn't that an Electric-type?" "And aren't they, you know, not very good against Ground-types?" Connor nodded once again. "Oof," said Reyes as he winced a little at the grumbling Hawley, "bad move. Garra, create a sandstorm!" "Tackle him!" Letting out a guttural hiss, Clausewitz ran at his foe as Garra began digging into the ground, throwing up vast amounts of earth with enough force for the wind to create a miniature storm of mud. The Electric-type, being worn down somewhat by the pelting of mud, smacked his head into Garra's jaw, leaving him irritated but not particularly hurt - however, it did leave Reyes with a grin on his face as he prepared his next move. "Use the hole in the ground to create a Sand Tomb!" With that, Garra barged into the Shinx opposing him, knocking him into the hole in the ground with a thud. A pained squeal came from the bottom of the hole, accompanied by the sound of electric crackling, before the Gible dug its stubby arms into the earth. Quickly, he pelted great balls of mud down the hole, each one hitting Clausewitz and sending him back to the bottom of the hole with pained grunts. "Dammit, Clausewitz! You can do this!" called out a frustrated Hawley as he rushed towards the hole, his jacket being stained brown from the mud storm pelting him. By the time he'd managed to claw his way out of the hole, though, the onslaught had left him covered in mud and almost completely exhausted - and as he twisted his body back to face Garra, the storm of mud pelting him, it was clear that the battle was not one Clausewitz was fit to participate in any longer. Letting out a frustrated groan, he aimed his Pokéball's recall mechanism at the battered Electric-type, arcs of electricity seemingly uncontrollably shooting out of him. Connor could only watch on in amazement as an apparently completely subdued Reyes, leaning against a tree and out of reach of the mud storm, gestured Garra back over. "Calling it quits, are you?" he called out, his Dragon-type partner standing at his feet. Hawley looked at him for a moment, the corners of his mouth curved downwards in an exasperated frown, before he sighed in defeat. Much to Reyes' thinly veiled delight, he returned Clausewitz to his ball. "Alright, Connor, I think we're about done here," said Reyes, deciding against holding a now very muddy Garra for the time being. "Shall we go?" "...Wait," muttered Hawley, giving his opponent a subdued smile as he approached. "Hm?" "Listen, that was a good battle, and I think we might've gotten off on the wrong foot earlier." Reyes was caught a little off-guard by this sudden compliment, beaming a little. "Oh, thank you, but-" "I can assure you, you can do much better than hanging out with that dweeb. What say you ditch him, and I'll give you a more… competent companion, shall we say?" interjected Hawley, holding out a hand. The look on Reyes' face shifted into one of brief contemplation, before he spoke again. "I can't do that, unfortunately, but I can offer you some advice?" "Hm. That's a shame, but… go on." A silence filled the air for a brief moment before Reyes' fist slammed straight into Hawley's nose with all the torque his arm could muster, making a cracking noise as he turned away. "GAH!" screamed Hawley, melting onto the ground in a fetal puddle as he put his hand over his bleeding nose, his deep voice transforming into a mumbling whimper. "What the fuck?!" "Pick on someone your own size, trash. Connor, we're leaving." Connor could only watch in an astonished mix of horror and awe as Hawley found his way back onto his feet, humiliated and crying as blood ran from his slightly misshapen nose down his hand as he stumbled away, giving only a furious look back at the pair. He couldn't help but feel a little guilty for being partly responsible for this - sure, he had been a bit of an ass, but his ego had been so emphatically shattered right in front of him, and the person he'd viewed as a formidable threat was now little more than a whimpering mess. "Connor?" "Hm? Oh, right." He managed to tear away his eyes away from Hawley and began to walk away, returning Ronnie to his ball for the time being.
The rest of the pair's training was, for the most part, uneventful, and Reyes eventually decided to call it a day and return to the Pokémon Center. Connor, meanwhile, had been keeping tabs on Ronnie for most of the day; the Aron had spent a lot of this time resting, which was very good to see - Connor estimated that late the next day would be a good time to start easing him back into battling. However, as the pair walked back - with Reyes making sure to keep a steady pace after the events of the previous day - Connor thought about some things that had been bothering him, deciding that perhaps it'd be best to get them off his chest. "Hey, Reyes?" "What is it, friendo?" "...Were we a bit too harsh on Hawley earlier? I, uh, I know he was being a bit of an ass, but…" "What? No, screw that guy! Why were you taking it, anyway? You can do better than taking crap from him." Connor's demeanour turned more hesitant as he thought of a response. "It's… a pretty long story, but the gist of it is that… I just didn't want any trouble, y'know? And I dunno, I just feel a little bad we upset him like that." "That's an admirable attitude, Connor, but the world can be a harsh place; sometimes you need to stand up to people like that. If someone's trying to hurt me and they're not listening to reason, then what can I do except hurt them back, y'know?" "I suppose you're right… I just wish there was a way we could solve things by… like, beating him in a battle, without having to break his nose." Reyes considered this for a moment before turning to face Connor in reply. "Hey, if it's any consolation, it wasn't 'we' - you didn't play any part in getting him so upset, I promise. I'm sorry that I didn't run it by you first." "Oh, n-no, don't apologise - well, uh, not to me, anyway. I just hope we don't have to do that again, is all." "So do I, but… sometimes, you don't have much of a choice. Besides, you are a Pokémon trainer now - you're not going to be best friends with everyone in this world and, unless you're a doormat, making rivals, or enemies, is inevitable in this profession. Fighting sort of has to be one of your strong points, especially when you don't have Pokémon on hand." "I… guess that makes sense. Thanks, Reyes," replied Connor, smiling softly at his companion. "No problemo, friend! Besides, I've a question of my own for you: have you thought of what you'd like for a second Pokémon?" "Hmm… you know, I'm not actually sure yet." Connor had been thinking about this, and indeed, he hadn't come to a decision. Every Pokémon around these parts had merits and disadvantages, and, truth be told, it felt a little off to turn away a new member of his party because of their species. "Well," offered Reyes, "if it's any help, I'm sure whatever you pick will fit right into your team!" "I hope so."
"Well, it's not a particularly bad break," said the nurse as she rooted around her desk, "but I'm still going to have to prescribe you with ibuprofen for the next three weeks or so. Take three doses of two tablets a day until you run out. Whilst you're still healing, try to avoid any strenuous exercise for the next two weeks - so take it easy on the training, okay?" "But-" "No buts. You're blessed to look so much like your father, and you'll thank me when your nose isn't permanently bent." Hawley grumbled in frustration. Letting up on the training was far from ideal - any time not spent training was time that both of those shitbags had on him. Time that he wasn't spending trying to become the best. Time that he spent being weak, being stagnant. Time that was wasted. And what would Dad say if he knew his son was slacking? He couldn't afford a moment's rest if he wanted to challenge the League any time soon, to get some damn respect - respect he considered he was damn deserving of. "Oh, and I'd leave that tape on until the swelling's gone down. As for your Pokémon, they've all been rested and recovered, but I would perhaps let your Croagunk… what's her name, again?" "Tomyris." "Tomyris - I'd give her tomorrow off. Whatever happened there, it really took the wind out of her sails." "...I see," replied a noticeably concerned Hawley, taking back his two Pokéballs. "Is there anything else you need?" "No." "Well, you know where to find us! Have a good evening!" Hawley nodded before turning to walk out of the Centre and into the evening sunlight that engulfed Jubilife - a place that he very much did not want to be at that moment. Were it not for his humiliating defeat earlier, he would have already gotten to Oreburgh and been on his way to challenging the gym. Instead, he was still stuck about six or seven hours down the road and in the same place as his two rivals - and those damn Pokétch clowns, too. It seemed like a shitty business model as a whole, honestly - give away free stuff and paying people to humiliate themselves? Who would fund that? Besides, he'd much rather have paid full price for a watch than have to put up with that nonsense. It was with a weary sigh that he trundled through the streets of Jubilife, before finding the nearest bench and sinking into it, his thoughts beginning to bounce around in his brain. I can't afford to let up now. I can't afford to slow down, not while Connor's out there with that Reyes. You're better than him, Hawley, and you damn well know it - no Wilkins would ever fall beneath such trash, or they're not fit to wear the name!His look had morphed into a frown, his fist clenching. No, I need to kick it up a notch, work harder than ever. I can't get complacent now - I have to earn my strength, or I'm unfit to call myself a Wilkins. Without strength, you don't get respect - and I have to work for respect, just like my father… and I will, even if it kills me! With hard work and raw strength, I'll rise to the top!He gritted his teeth and arched his eyebrows, glaring at nothing in particular with burning fury. I'll show them! I'll show those two chucklefucks, those damn gym leaders, the Elite Four, I'll show 'em all! Nobody makes a mockery of the son of the Sinnoh League Champion and gets away with it!
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Author's Note: I don't own Pokémon, nor do I own the Pink Floyd song "Breathe (In the Air)," to which this chapter owes its name. CHAPTER EIGHT: Breathe in the Air, Part One
10:13 - October 11th, 2007 - 14 days until October 25th
After a mostly uneventful morning, Connor and Reyes departed Jubilife and set off on route to the city of Oreburgh. Due to her erratic sleep schedule, the pair had missed Florence that morning, and decided to get breakfast before leaving, without waiting for her - due in no small part to Connor's reluctance to disturb the nurse as he had done yesterday. This meant that she couldn't check on Ronnie's progress and, as such, he wasn't as sure as he'd have liked to be on if the Aron's health; however, he seemed to be both well enough and rearing to fight, and so Connor decided that easing him back into fighting was probably the best idea. "Connor, my man, you worry too much," opined Reyes as the two walked down Route 203. "You did get enough sleep last night, didn't you?" "Mm? Oh, yeah," said Connor, yawning. "...What time did you go to sleep?" "Same time as you." "Which was…?" "...Ten?" replied an unsure Connor after a pause, wearing a particularly terrible poker face. "You stayed up until one again, didn't you?" Reyes' tone was accusatory and his expression a concerned one as he spoke, and after mere seconds of pause, Connor crumbled, no longer keep up his ruse. "I'm sorry! I was gonna, but you know I just don't sleep very well, and, uh-" "Woah, woah," interjected Reyes, letting out a mildly concerned chuckle as he did so and holding up his hand to halt his friend. "It's fine, friend! I don't mean to tell you what you can and can't do, I'm just saying, it might be better for you, especially if you're having bad dreams. Besides, you can't really function too good on five or six hours of sleep." Connor seemed a little forlorn as he spoke, blushing a little. "Right, yeah. Sorry." "Don't worry about it! Stop apologising for everything, friend." Reyes' tone was noticeably more urgent, this chuckle sounding more like one of exasperation. "S-sorry," replied the younger trainer, quickly realising what he had just done and biting his lower lip out of embarrassment, head hung low and eyes affixed to the ground. So flustered was he by the faux pas that he was unable to bring himself to correct it, instead choosing to remain silent. A hush festered in the air as Reyes tended to the Gible in his arms, giving his companion the opportunity to stew over the events of the previous night. It was quite an odd night, as for the most part, it had been no different to the night before - the two had watched a few more episodes of Masked Rider (a show that Reyes seemed to be growing greatly invested in) and tried to get their Pokémon better acquainted with each other, which proved to be a decidedly more intricate game with Baggo than with Garra (as a matter of fact, him and Ronnie had enjoyed a swimming start to their friendship)... it was just that after that, things went awry.
Connor wasn't quite sure if what had happened was a dream or not. He was no stranger to uneasy dreams, having experienced them a fair bit throughout his childhood - something that his parents had always put down to his easily stressed nature. "Don't worry so much," and "you need to stop being so scared of everything," they'd say - they were probably right, considering the effect that the ups and downs of the past two days had had on him. Still, this didn't make the events of the night any easier to recall. It must have been about four in the morning when Connor found himself conscious, suddenly drenched in sweat and unable to move. The first thing he did was try to reach for Ronnie's Pokéball to check on the Steel-type to make sure that he was okay. This is when things began to get a little strange. Despite his best efforts, nothing would give. It felt as though every muscle in his body had locked up. Connor could not even move his fingers an inch, no matter how hard he tried. Calling out Reyes' name was not possible either, as it felt his jaw had been screwed shut - every effort to make a sound was futile, and the only noise to be heard was the sound of weighted breaths leaving his lungs. With the claws of sleep paralysis now firmly wrapped around him, things would only get worse. The next stage of this… this experience, for lack of a better word, saw three figures, completely eldritch in appearance, emerge from the blackness that surrounded him. The one to his left was the smallest and, in spite of its jaundice and empty crescent eyes, its wide yet indifferent grin or its skin as dark and blue as the midnight sea, the one Connor found himself least afraid of. Its long, slender body still loomed over him in silence regardless, thin arms holding onto his bedside and unfeeling face sneering at him. The next apparition came into being shortly afterwards, this time to the boy's right. It was the largest of the trio, and the widest, cutting a deeply unpleasant figure over him. The monster wore black and white striped skin, featureless outside of bloodshot white eyes, pupils the size of spots with eyelids peeled back in glee; a toothy, crazed grin etched onto its face. Atop its head were two spikes, a coal-coloured halo of some sort surrounded it. It took rattling, heavy breaths, throwing its entire body into each exhalation. Deep purple wisps began to emanate around him as he leaned ever closer to a helpless Connor, absolutely reeking as he came nearer and nearer. He could do nothing except look on in dread as sweat bled from every pore, before the figure spoke in guttural tones. "Heh heh… I'll get ya, you dumb kid. You and ya damn Aron. Wotsisname - Ronnie, ain't it? Heh. That's a stupid name from a stupid trainer. And it only took you a day to put 'im out of commission. It only took you a day for some snot-nosed kid to beat his ass. Poor Pokémon probably hates ya guts, wants ya to keel over and die so it can be free - I wouldn't blame it, neither. Couldn't imagine getting stuck with such a shitty trainer. You don't amount to nothin', boy, and ya won't ever amount to nothing in this world - look what this world did to me, dammit! You ain't no match for it, and if ya think it won't chew you up and spit you out like other deadbeat trash trainers, you're sorely mistaken, so just give 'is Pokéball to me, and go home. Capiche?" Connor took these words to heart. Whatever this manifestation was, it was right - first the Croagunk debacle, then getting Ronnie so beat up he was unable to fight for two days, all within his first hours of training? He was unfit to look after any Pokémon. It probably would have been for the best to let him go if things kept up like this - as a matter of fact, Connor thought, letting him go in the morning would have been the kindest thing to do. But… his Pokémon needed him, and it would have been selfish to just abandon him - and he sure as hell wasn't going to prove Hawley right just yet! No, he was going to be the trainer that Ronnie needed, the one he deserved! But at the same time… what if he was hurting Ronnie? What if his Pokémon didn't want to be with him? What was the best thing to do- "You're seriously thinkin' about it? Please!" The being was more assertive, harsher as it spoke again. "It's the kindest thing to do. Just hand 'im over, and I'll take better care of 'im than you ever could." Whilst he was already quite shaken, beginning to feel as though he was beginning to suffocate as the pressure of one thousand convulsions and one million screams built up within him, neither of these deeply unwelcome visitors horrified him as much as the third. This one stood at the foot of his bed, further away from him than the others. He couldn't entirely make out where the darkness ended and this figure began, and at first, the only way he knew it was there was through the two thin yellow eyes that pierced the blackness, both on the same side of his face and squinted so hard that Connor swore they were about to burst from its head. They lay above an open mouth lined with white, sharp fangs. Pointed sanguine spikes lined its body, from head to whatever lay out of Connor's view. Darting his eyes to the foot of his bed, he that the ghastly presence seemed to be rooted to the ground there. This did not stop it from moving towards him. The opposite, in fact. It twisted and writhed its slender body through the blank space that surrounded Connor with a growling, splitting laugh that seemed to come from the very core of its being as it did so. "You can't get away from me, you worm," began the beast in a voice that was completely beyond description. "You think you are any match for me? You fool. You aren't even a speck - you are nothing, and you will never be anything more - not even to that friend of yours. Your parents were right, Connor. You should have stayed at home. But now? You have no hope, nobody in this cold, unfeeling world who cares about you… and now, I can eat you alive. And there's nothing you can do to stop me. There's nothing anyone can - or will - do to stop me." The boy could feel its cold, lifeless breath on his face as it looked him in the eyes with a smile that screamed murder. It was as though it were some sort of two-dimensional serpent from another world as its form stood above Connor from head to toe, both of its awful little beady eyes stabbing into the fabric of his very being. There was absolutely nothing he could do to help himself, and instead could only struggle in vain to escape the suffocating glares of the beasts before him. For a moment, he could only hear every single thud from his heart. Time seemed to stand still. The beasts before him arched their backs up. They were ready to eat. With a hiss, they pounced at Connor, and a scream erupted within his lungs- " -AAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!" Daylight. "Connor! You alright?!" replied the voice from the bunk above him in an instant, accompanied by scrambling on the mattress and the creaking of bed springs. He found himself upright and quaking with every breath, drenched in sweat as his heart pounded like a jackhammer. He darted his head to the clock hung on the wall opposite him. Five minutes past seven. Wh… what just happened?He noticed Reyes' dark brown hair and dangling red headband in the peripheral of his vision, and turned his head to see his companion giving him a really rather worried (albeit upside down) look. "Are you alright? Did you have a bad dream or something?" Aside from his breathing, he was silent, trying to calm himself down before he replied. It took a few seconds before his breathing came to a steady nadir, the distressed heaving of his chest dwindling into more subdued breaths. Eventually, he was finally composed enough to reply in a coherent fashion. "...Yeah. I'm fine. I think." It was just a dream, Connor. Just a dream.He kept telling himself both of these things - that he was fine, that it was just a dream. No matter how many times he kept repeating them, though, he just couldn't convince himself that either of those things were wholly true.
Connor was too embarrassed to tell Reyes exactly what happened last night - besides, he figured that he'd just be met with something along the lines of "you just need to have more confidence," something that was not exactly news to him - and instead just tried not to think about it. When Connor checked on Ronnie that morning, he seemed happy to see him, and he certainly didn't seem to reject his trainer's affection (in fact, the Aron was quite insistent on a good head rub). Perhaps it was just him being too worried about things, as per usual. Besides, his priority for the day wasn't lingering on the events of the previous night. Instead, he'd set himself two objectives: getting to Oreburgh, and catching a second Pokémon. As such, with Ronnie plodding alongside him, he kept an eye on his surroundings as he went along, wading through tall grass. Now, the Oreburgh Gym's a Rock-type gym, but Ronnie's a Steel-type, so I think I'll probably be good with type matchups - and having a Flying-type on my team might pay off in the long run, because I can use them for transport, so getting a Starly might be a good bet. At the same time, though… if I were to catch a Bidoof, they evolve into Bibarel, and Bibarel's supposed to be really good for utility because they can cut trees down, they can surf, they can get through rock-"Connor, watch out!" "Wh-" Reyes' call snapped Connor back to reality just long enough for him to dodge out of the way of a swooping Starly, the Flying-type narrowly missing both him and his Aron and instead crashing into the ground. "Oh, sorr- er... I mean, a Pokémon!" exclaimed the trainer, feeling proud of his save. Off the bat, he noticed that the Starly was a male, judging by the enlarged top of the white mask on its head. It was a little smaller than Starly usually were, too - most pressingly, though, some of the feathers on its right wing seemed to be burnt away a little. White, bone-like structures slightly protruded from blackened feathers. The burns weren't terrible, but their mere presence was still a worry. This proved tricky for Connor, as the Starly clearly needed help - he was young and, judging by his wing injury and him swooping headfirst into the ground, couldn't fly right. However, as the Pokémon postured up to Ronnie, Connor recognised that he also wasn't going to be caught without a fight, as one was inevitable whether against him or Ronnie, and he didn't fancy getting his fingers pecked away at by an angry bird, and a bird that risked injuring its wing further if it lashed out while he tried to hold it. The best option was to try and weaken it a little until it could be caught. "Hey, Reyes?" asked Connor, turning to his friend, who stopped in his tracks and faced him. "Would you mind waiting behind for a minute? I'm gonna need to catch this little guy and take him in to the Center in Oreburgh." "Sure! Go ahead!" said a smiling Reyes in response, carefully looking for a clean tree to lean his longcoat-wearing self against. "Thank you!" Connor turned back to the unfolding scene before him. The Starly was posturing even more aggressively towards Ronnie, puffing himself up and spreading his wings as far as he could (in the case of his right wing, this was not very far) in an effort to make himself seem as big as he could. The fact that he hadn't attacked the Aron yet gave Connor a good reason to believe that he wasn't the Flying-type's priority. Ronnie, meanwhile, had narrowed his eyes and begun to let out a low-pitched growl, standing his ground and refusing to let his opponent pass. This Pokémon was a rather feisty one, it seemed, but him didn't seem as interested in attacking Ronnie as it did him; the prospect of the Pokémon having problems with people was an inconvenient one, sure, but this was still a Pokémon that was in need of help - and what sort of person, Connor thought, would I be if I didn't provide that help?In his final seconds of thought before the start of the battle, he realised he had two concerns: one, that his goal was not to knock the Starly out as much as it was to subdue it so that it could be captured without much resistance; two, under no circumstances could he attack its right wing. First of all, the Starly likely had the speed advantage here - as such, attacking first wasn't the safest bet when he could just dodge out of the way. "Alright, Ronnie! First of all, you're gonna wanna Harden!" Crying an affirmative, the Aron exerted its effort into strengthening its metallic outer coat, prompting the Starly to try and peck at his head. Beak barely impacted head in a move that was almost entirely futile due to Ronnie's physical defences and Steel/Rock-typing. Connor noticed that the Starly's talons were dug into the ground, giving him an idea. "Next of all, give him your toughest Headbutt - but keep your head at his chest!" Ronnie nodded once again, preparing himself for a moment before propelling his thick skull at Starly's crest. The Flying-type let out a startled and decently pained cry as its head snapped backwards, resting on his foe's thick, metallic and unmoving head in anger. Lacking the power to budge Ronnie's head an inch, he resorted to slapping him with his good wing, which mostly unscathed him. All was good so far for Connor - he had both Ronnie and the Starly right where he wanted, and if he acted fast enough, the injured Pokémon would have no means of escape. "Now, while your head's still there, Tackle him - and keep going until you're against a tree!" Slowly but surely, Ronnie made his advance, driving his head harder and harder into Starly's midsection and moving straight ahead in determined silence. The Starly began to unleash a flurry of panicked pecking and flapping as he realised he could do very little to stop this - he talons created marks on the ground as they were dragged along, and removing them was no easy feat; even if he managed to, he couldn't fly away with his wing in the shape it was. Slowing or stopping Ronnie was getting less and less likely as the tree came nearer and nearer, too, as the already mostly ineffective pecks and flaps were rendered useless further by Ronnie's hardened state. Connor didn't get much enjoyment out of this as he did relief. He was thankful that he didn't have to put the Starly in as much discomfort as he'd first thought, and he reckoned that with another well-placed Headbutt from Ronnie once he was cornered, the Starly wouldn't be able to put up much in the way of resistance to a ball. Not only that, but it went some way to assuring Connor that the "dream" of the previous night was just that - a dream. His Pokémon seemed perfectly happy following his command, and was willing to put up with a few pecks and wing slaps here and there for him… of course, there was always the chance that that was Ronnie being territorial and acting out of self-defence - snap out of it, Connor, and let yourself have this!The Starly was already quite exhausted by the time Ronnie's march finished with a shunt into the uneven bark of a tree trunk, the breath forced from his lungs. That didn't mean he was ready to go down just yet, though - far from it. Sure, he may have had a disadvantage in experience, moveset, current position, ability to attack, ability to defend, health, strategy, and amount of intact limbs, but to a ticked off bird, that didn't matter in the slightest. As Ronnie reared himself backwards to prepare for a headbutt, it laid its focus on the Aron's trainer. The human. All he needed was a good, clear shot at his face, a few jabs of the beak, and that was that over with. But he didn't have much of a window. Ronnie's head was coming closer and closer. This was his chance to get away! The steely head of his foe rammed towards him... ...as he prepared to take flight… ...closer and closer… ...he launched himself into the air… ...and he was off… ...until his burnt wing gave in in an instant, and he crashed into the grass, unmoving. Before he even had time to properly register his failure, Connor decided that keeping this fight up any longer would have just been cruel. With an overarm throw, he hurled a Pokéball at the defeated Flying-type as the Starly lay on the ground, the capturing device bouncing once before emitting a beam of light that engulfed it. It wobbled once, as Connor watched on, anxious. It wobbled again, with Ronnie plodding towards it cautiously. It wobbled for a third time, Reyes paying close attention to it. Click.Connor shouldn't have been as overjoyed as he was, he felt; considering it was an injured and underlevelled Starly, it was hardly an earth-shattering victory. Furthermore, it seemed to hate his guts - there was always the possibility that it just hated humans in general - he was a little worried that he wouldn't be able to look after it adequately, or that its injuries were worse than they first seemed, and he'd end up having to give the Pokémon to a rescue at a Center. But at the same time… he'd caught his first Pokémon, all on his own. He'd proven to himself that he could do it - he was on his way to being the trainer he hoped he could be, and he wasn't about to let a poorly wing get in the way of giving this Starly a good home. Sheer joy coursed through every inch of his body as his face lit up like a firework, his legs running as fast as they could carry him as he rushed to pick up his capture and fell into a knee slide through the grass, pumping his arm in glee. Ronnie plodded on towards him in anticipation of a head rub, and was caught completely off guard when a cheering Connor wrapped his arms around the Steel-type, hugging him as tightly as he could. "Great job, Ronnie! I couldn't have done it without you, buddy!" exclaimed the boy, petting his little metal companion in delight. He completely forgot for a moment that Ronnie weighed upwards of one hundred and thirty pounds, and his ill-judged attempt to lift him up completely failed, but he couldn't have cared less at that moment. Reyes came to his feet and approached the pair, finding the sight of the Aron nuzzling his trainer's chest impossible to not crack a smile at. "Nice going, you two! Connor, have you thought of a name for your new friend?" Connor turned to Reyes, beaming like a madman. In all honesty, he had been too preoccupied to think of a name, but that had been at the bottom of his list of priorities. He had to divert his attention from squeezing the cold steely mass in his arms as tightly as he could for a moment as the cogs of his brain whirred, thinking up a good moniker for his new (possibly temporary) companion. "...Byrne, I think," he replied, recalling the Starly's injury. "I'll call him Byrne." "Not a bad choice," said Reyes, "not bad at all. Do you want to get yourself, uh... what's the word - acquainted? Or shall we keep going?" Connor thought about this, smiling at Ronnie's adoring, wide as the moon eyes as he glanced past them, looking down at the quaking ball on his belt before responding. "I would, but he's not really a happy camper at the moment, I don't think. I'll wait until he's not as keen to take my fingers off," he said with a chuckle. "Fair enough. I'm ready when you are, then." Using his free hand to properly slot Byrne's Pokéball back into his holder, he gave Ronnie a final rub of the head before getting back to his feet, looking at his little metal partner with a nod and a smile. Ronnie returned the gesture, and with that, Connor and Reyes continued onto Oreburgh, Pokémon in tow.
It hadn't been an easy day for Hawley. He should have been in the mines at Oreburgh by now, or at the very least outside of Jubilife. Yet here he was, stuck in Jubilife. Tomyris, his leading Pokémon, was still recovering from yesterday, and he had had to cut his attempt at crossing Route 203 when Clausewitz got too injured to fight any further - Hawley had no potions on hand at that moment, and had to retreat back to Jubilife's Pokémon Center. The nurse - who, thankfully, was a different one from yesterday, and as such didn't give him an earful about the whole "no training" thing - patched up those injuries, but Hawley was in no mood to head out again. Not with a splitting headache. Besides, it had just gone four in the afternoon, and it would have been past midnight by the time he got to Oreburgh. As he walked along the streets of Jubilife to clear his mind a little, he saw something in the window of an electronics shop and stopped to survey it. He had no interest in some second-rate romcom; rather, his focus was on his own face. His sleep the previous night was shortened by disappointment over that day's events, and it showed in his angered expression and baggy eyes. These were not, as the soulless actor on the screen said as part of some garish joke, "come to bed" eyes as much as they were "I will kill you with an axe" eyes. Whilst Hawley didn't consider this a particularly eloquent turn of phrase, it was a good reflection of his current mood. To him, the day had been squandered; it was a write-off, a failure. He wasn't quite sure it could have gotten any worse as he continued on down the streets. What he hadn't considered was the possibility of someone reaching into his pocket and making off with Tomyris' Pokéball, which is exactly what happened. "Motherf- HEY!" he screamed, letting Clausewitz loose as the thief sprinted off. He and his Shinx snarled as the pair bolted down the street, the sound of Hawley's heavy boots echoing through the sparse street with the vigour of a herd of stampeding Tauros. Just who did this piece of scum, this worthless pile of refuse, think he was, running off with Tomyris - his Pokémon, and his friend - like that? And did he expect to get out of this in one piece? It would be a cold day in hell before that happened, and Hawley was going to make sure of it! Most passers-by merely walked on, trying not to let this chaos distract them from going about their day; some shot bewildered looks at the scene as they walked on. Some had to dodge out of the way of either the thief or the five-foot-ten juggernaut and his little blue companion that charged after him, with an unlucky few being barged out of the path of the red-haired wrecking ball by force. The ballyhoo was inescapable, though, as the chase continued down the long and narrow streets of Jubilife, with Hawley slowly gaining ground on the thief with each sharp turn. One place that was yet to be sucked into the commotion was the Grind House Tearoom, a café that hosted one very tired man with bleach white hair by the name of Julius. He had been up until the early hours of the morning with work issues, and with the way his day was going now, it seemed this would be happening again. As such, he had taken this time, the only real break from work he was to enjoy that day, to get some coffee; black with no cream, just the way he liked it. It was a pleasant way to relax after the events of the previous days, with work being strenuous as ever and him getting involved with that thief situation with those two boys. "Stop running, you turd! Or I'll ram this boot so far up your ass you'll taste leather!" Of course, this all changed with the sight of a man clad in black fumbling a Pokéball into his pocket, a screaming young man in a dark green jacket storming down the street in pursuit. This young man, in particular, was one Julius recognised from a Pokémart a couple of days ago, putting someone in quite the painful situation for something similar to this, which led him to believe that he could clearly handle himself; nevertheless, it seemed as though he was having some trouble catching up with this fellow, this criminal who had wronged him. With a sigh, he took another sip of his coffee before dragging himself to his feet, placing the cup in the bin (the plastic recycling one, of course) before taking off in pursuit. Around the corner, meanwhile, Hawley's vision began to blur a little as a metaphorical hammer banged against his head, his broken nose causing him a great deal of distress. He was beginning to lose sight of the thief as he turned the street corner, and with him, Tomyris - who, despite knowing for only a very short time, was someone he was proud to consider his closest companion, and with whom he'd already been through some good times and some bad times. Losing her absolutely wasn't an option - who would he have to vent to in his loneliest hours? Who would he show to his father as his star Pokémon, his pride and joy, when he took on the League some months down the line? Who would he have to terrorise Connor with? In a last-ditch effort, as his legs began to slow down, he called out to Clausewitz in a burst of rage. "We're not… letting him... get away!" he declared, through deep breaths in and out. "Thunderbolt him! Aim for his pocket!" "Shaaa!" came the reply from his companion. So caught up was Hawley in this exchange, though, that he failed to notice the loud clang of a can of garbage against the floor a few seconds prior, and while his anger was enough to keep him running, it wasn't enough to help him spot either the overturned can or its spilt contents. As a result, his shin banged against the metal can, tripping him over and sending him tumbling to the ground with a pained yelp. A violent arc of electricity shot out of Clausewitz's tail in the meantime with a zap, but it fell short of its target, and the thief was on the verge of escaping. The thief's tone was a triumphant one as he kept running. "Kahah! Serves ya right, asshole! Nobody fights back against the Jubilife mob and gets away with- oof!" Unfortunately for him, though, he failed to spot the lamppost in front of him. The force of the impact was enough to force him to pause and rub his head in anguish, bringing him to a halt just long enough for Clausewitz to catch up to him and get a better shot with a second, more successful Thunderbolt. The electricity coursed through him, his nerves ringing in agony as his nervous system went berserk, each of his muscles contracting and spasming on and off, as his body thrashed on the floor in shouts of agony. Hawley's expression shifted from one of disgust and self-contempt into one of delight, his eyes still stinging as they lit up with glee when he sprung to his feet and launched himself at the incapacitated thief and his stolen Pokéball, not even bothering to wipe the grime picked up from the fall off his clothes as he made a swoop for the ball. "Stop, thie-" He turned around to see a man in a shirt and tie at the other end of the empty street, his tired face visibly quite surprised as his posture eased. He let his pointing arm down to his side and approached the scene, showing his palms to communicate that he wasn't a threat. "I've got him!" hollered back Hawley. "Back off!" The reply was tinged with a modest little laugh. "It's quite alright, I don't mean any harm." Squinting in suspicion, Hawley grabbed his Pokéball before standing back up. Clausewitz fluffed himself up to make his presence known to this intruder as he and his trainer cautiously approached to meet him. The two faced each other from a shorter distance, as Julius spoke. "You were the one from the Pokémart a few days ago, weren't you?" "Eh?" replied Hawley, stopping when he was a couple of feet away. "A couple of days ago, in the Pokémart. Someone tried to steal something from you, and you knocked them out. That was you, wasn't it? Or am I just-" "No, that was me. What about it?" Hawley was interrogative in tone as he replied, his nostrils flared and eyebrow raised as though someone had just threatened to shoot him. "I see. What's your name, young man?" "Don't call me young man, asshole!" demanded Hawley in a shout, shooting a finger towards the man. Julius was quite taken aback by his sudden outburst, and could only reply with an "Oh, my apologies." "Anyway, why should I tell you? If anything, you should tell me who you are first." He put on his warmest smile and rather gingerly offered his hand to Hawley. "My name is Julius," he said, "and I ask because you seem like quite a promising y- er, trainer. You've been doing this for how long?" Julius' slip up flew under Hawley's radar, masked by the compliment - a compliment at which he couldn't help but crack a smile at. Finally, it seemed, he was getting some respect. "A few days. Started this week. Why?" was his response, as was accepting Julius' offer of a handshake (which, he noted, was surprisingly limp). "I see. Care to walk and talk?" Hawley decided he didn't really have anywhere better to be, and given his judgement on his ability, figured that this guy probably knew what he was talking about. Still, just in case he was a creep of some sort, it didn't hurt to be too careful. "Sure, I guess. Clausewitz, follow us." His companion chirped in affirmation, and so the trio began to walk. "Your nose - that's a recent development, I assume?" asked Julius, reminding Hawley of the bandage on it. "Was it there a few days ago?" "No, it wasn't," he replied, looking at the ground as he walked. "I see. Care to tell me what happened?" Hawley had to restrain himself from asking, in strongly worded terms, if he suddenly had a therapist now before he could respond. "I got into a fight." "Did you start it?" "N- well, I didn't escalate it, but yeah. It was just a Pokémon battle at first, though. I had to do it to 'em." Julius gave him a dubious look. "Did you, though?" "Of course! They made eye contact with me, and this kid - oh, I've known him for a while; he had it coming, let me tell you." Julius recalled his conversation with Connor a couple of days ago, and figured that "this kid" was probably him. He seemed like a nice enough boy, and not someone who would resort to physical violence - let alone win at it - which prompted him to press the matter further. "Why did it escalate, then?" "Look, you wouldn't get - ach, just drop it, okay?!" snapped Hawley. "I mean, you must have done something to upset him to make him resort to attacking you." "It was his friend that punched me, if you must know," coldly retorted the boy, "but I really don't see why you can't drop this." "If you must know," said Julius, "it's because, as I said, you seem like a very promising young trainer. Someone with a lot of potential - I mean, both times I've come across you, you've managed to put down some sort of unreputable character by yourself. I've no doubt you and your Pokémon, that Shinx and the one you've just reclaimed, could go on to do great things someday." Hawley felt a sense of pride rush over him as he replied. "Thank you, but I don't see-" "The key word there is 'could.' Before you move onto these great things, you need to work on your attitude first. You can have all the raw talent in the world - and in your case, it seems you do - but it won't amount to much if you misuse it. Why do you think you got your nose broken?" "Simple, his Pokémon were stronger than mine-" "No, it was because you attacked someone when you had no need to. Whatever your reasoning was for it, it was clearly flawed if it led you into a situation you could not win. Once again, I've no doubt you can become one of the best, but you can't go around attacking people and not expect to be punished for it - you need to sort your mindset out and put that talent into something better, or you'll fall behind people who've spent less of their energy on hate and violence without reason, and more on helping those around them - and, as a result, helping themselves." "Oh, don't preach to-" "I understand this may sound like preaching, but think of, say, the parable of the gods of time and space. As incredibly powerful as Giratina was - with its two forms, some would argue more so than Dialga and Palkia - you only need to look at how it used its powers to see why it was banished to another realm, whereas its colleagues, who used those powers for a net positive, are revered as the rulers of time and space over all of us." Considering this for a moment, Hawley vaguely nodded in understanding. As completely uninterested in religion as he was, he did see his point. "Of course, as much as I believe in the gods, I still think organized religion is a bit of a sham. But it's still a valid message - even having all the power in the world means nought if one doesn't accomplish much for the good of the world, don't you think?" "...Aye." Julius glanced down at the rather worn watch on his wrist. "I should probably be going, now, because I need to get back to work. But please, do consider what I said - it would be a real shame to see such talent going to waste. I'm not saying that you go and become a monk or anything like that; rather, I'm just proposing that you be a little kinder to your fellow man, and try to stay out of fights if they help nobody in the long run." Hawley contemplated what the man said, before looking back at him. "I think I get you…?" "If you want to contact me, you can always find me at the GERECHT building, alright?" replied Julius as he walked away with a smile and a wave. As he went off on his own, Hawley thought about the conversation he had just had. Of course, he still believed he was right to attack Connor - he still had to show that kid who was boss, after all; besides, after that whole ordeal all those years ago, he still had it coming. A Wilkins never forgets, he thought. He wasn't about to let that Reyes figure off the hook easily, either. He was no better than Hawley, hitting him when he was unable to defend himself properly like that - at least he knew when to stop. However, at the same time, what Julius said, about those who use their talents to help others being remembered as the good, weighed on his mind. After all, as the saying went, "good always triumphs over evil" - a statement from which Hawley inferred that good was always stronger than evil, and as such if he wasn't winning, he was on the side of evil. It began to click for him - if he helped the community and perhaps forged his own circle of friend, then the community would help him in return, and both he and his friends would support each other in rising up the food chain. If he was to do his old man proud, rise to the top and carry on the pride of the Wilkins name, perhaps it wouldn't have hurt to have people who he could support, and who he could, in turn, challenge him and help him improve. But who? This train of thought whirred on in Hawley's head as he took a seat on a nearby bench, releasing Tomyris from her Pokéball and carefully looking her over, trying to hide his anxiety on the matter. Something about her usually passive stare worried him - she seemed a little shaken, her eyebrows arched and smile noticeably forced. "Are you alright?" he asked, unable to properly mask the concern in his voice. "You still a little upset about the whole ordeal, eh?" Met with high-pitched croaks, he gently rubbed the top of his companion's head and mumbled reassurances at her as he cast his mind back to his youth. One person stood out to him - the one who had that Pokémon, who was a couple of years older than him and was always down to show that damn Connor who was boss. Ah, yes, him - Kurt, his name was. The two hadn't spoken in a while, but Hawley recalled that they were on good terms. A little quieter and more reserved in his actions that he was, but just as capable. As a matter of fact, considering the gap in experience he was probably more capable than Hawley was - not a bad place to learn from. And that Pokémon of his… Larvantrum? Larvitar? Something along those lines - whatever it was, it was probably quite the beast these days. Rock-type, too, if he recalled - perhaps with his and Tomyris' help, he could get some practice against fighting-types and, in time, overcome the type disadvantage. If, Hawley thought, he needed to be good in order to be truly strong, and he had to be good by helping those around him, then with the way his journey had gone so far it was no wonder he was so easily thrashed by Reyes. But that was soon to change, of course, when Hawley got his ass in gear and started doing something for the community as a whole to show that he was strong - and that started with being a positive influence on some friends. That'd surely get the ball rolling that sent him to the top, after all.
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CHAPTER NINE: Breathe in the Air, Part Two
18:55 - 11th October, 2007 - 14 days until October 25th Dear Professor...Connor's attention was firmly fixed upon the dimly lit LED of his Pokédex as it shone in his face, illuminating it in the dark of Oreburgh Gate. Connor had never liked caves, in all honesty; something his mining dad would always bemoan. Sure, he could deal with the dark, no problem. It was when said dark was vast, completely empty and rolling in all directions like an endless ocean, full of unseen monsters and unknown terrors that it became a problem. He knew it was a dumb thing to be afraid of, and having Ronnie plodding alongside him was some help. It still did little to quell the fear of not knowing what lay around the corner. In reality, most of the time, the only thing that was around said corner was an angry Zubat or two; something that had happened a fair few times on their short expedition through the cave. An annoyance, sure, but nothing that the pair and their Pokémon couldn't handle. He decided that the introduction he had so far wouldn't work. It was too formal, and after all, he would insist on being called Murphy. It had to be changed. Dear Murphy,I am writing to you to inform you…No, that didn't seem quite right, either. Too stuffy. I'm just letting you know…That didn't work, either - Connor felt such a tone didn't match the content of his email. Just wanted to tell you that…"Connor? Hello? Is there anybody ho-ooooome?" Connor jerked in shock as Reyes' voice brought him back to reality, a panicked "Gah!" leaving his mouth as he looked up - a sound that was loud enough to prompt an astonished yelp from Ronnie, and in turn made Connor rush to cover his mouth with his free hand. The sounds reverberated off the rocky walls of the apparently barren cave, unanswered echoes lingering in the dank air for a couple of beats. Once the hush settled, the boy huffed and puffed for a moment as he corrected his stance, making doubly-sure his Pokédex wasn't harmed before replying in a strained whisper. "You spooked me!" "Ah, I didn't mean to startle you, friend. My bad," was Reyes' reply, his voice subdued and closer to a whisper than usual. A hangdog look adorned Connor's face as he responded, feeling as though he had caused offence to his companion. "Oh, it's fine, uh - p-please don't worry about it," he said. "Are you still having trouble with that message?" Glancing back at the screen and checking if he had accidentally edited anything (he hadn't), Connor looked over the greeting and half of a line he had so far. "Yeah." "Hmm. What is it you're not finding so good?" "I just… I'm not sure how to start this, is all." Reyes considered this for a moment, resting his finger and thumb on his chin as he hummed deep in thought. "Well, how do you want to start it?" "I don't know..." the boy sighed, tapping his fingers on the edges of the Pokédex like the beat of a drum to ease his nerves. "I… would it be stupid to start it all formal?" Reyes moved a hand towards Connor's shoulder to try and calm him; the boy recoiled in response, however, and he quickly recalled his friend's stance on being touched. An uncomfortable quiet lingered for a moment before Reyes cleared his throat and continued. "I... don't think it would be stupid to start it in any way, really, friend. Who're you writing it to?" "The professor." "Professors tend to be pretty uptight dudes, I suppose, so I say make it formal. If you're telling him about Byrne, then don't poke around the eyes, go straight ahead and tell him!" "Poke around the eyes…?" "Oh, you know." Connor didn't, but nevertheless thought he got the gist of what was being said (well, that and he would have felt guilty for questioning such an expression). He'd try and be upfront to Murphy about Byrne, then - before he could keep on writing, though, a sliver of sunset from the far end of the tunnel illuminated his face. Figuring that now was probably a good time to take a break, he slid the screen of the Pokédex back over its keyboard with a click and placed it back in his jacket pocket, carefully zipping it up. "Rrrr…" It took Connor a glance in the direction of the noise to figure that this growling, like that of a quiet motorcycle engine, came from an arched up Ronnie, who seemed to be a little more on edge than usual. Noticing that he seemed to be scouting the area with narrowed eyes, he guessed that it was probably safe to get closer to his little metal companion to figure out the issue. Meanwhile, Reyes and Baggo, who had been kind enough to only attack his trainer's ankles twice that day, were put on alert. It took a moment for Connor to pick up on the sound of heavy boots from behind and his heart almost stopped, the panic button having well and truly been pressed. Surely, not him again…? "Oi!" The gravelly voice boomed around the tunnel, reverberating off every wall and filling the air, broadcasting itself to what felt like everyone in a 500-foot radius. At the very least, Connor noted, it wasn't Hawley's voice - he just hoped that it wasn't calling out to him. "You! With the Aron!" Cripes.The tunnel was lit in a fading orange hue just enough for the features of the man approaching them to be visible. Easily as tall as Reyes, he was a rugged man, wide in frame, over his smile he wore a brown beard of thick foliage, debris from a hastily eaten bowl of cereal tangled in it. Connor felt as though the most intense spotlight conceivable shone on him at that very moment, and it showed as a choke built up in his throat. "Wh- uh, m-me?" Perplexed at the boy's reaction and a little mortified, the hiker's tiny eyes opened in surprise as he let out an affable laugh. "Yes, you! Don't worry, I don't mean any harm - just wonderin' if ye'd be down for a wee battle, is all!" The atmosphere had definitely thawed a little, with Ronnie's grumbling now considerably more muted and marine eyes much less hostile. Reyes, meanwhile, decided to compensate for his colleague's timid response with a beaming mouth, diverting his attention from Baggo - who looked as though he was about to attack the hiker himself any moment now - as much as was safe to do so in order to wave at the hiker, moving a little closer to him. "Hey, compadre! My friend here's not really a people person, just to let you know, and he's got somewhere he's needing to be - I can battle if you'd like, but-" "Ah, do ye, pal? If that's the case, I shan't keep you if you don't want, but I'm just a wee bit curious about that Aron. Ya don't really see many of 'em in Sinnoh, and to be honest I've always had a soft spot for the buggers, really." Flattered as he was, the situation didn't seem one hundred percent safe to Connor. After all, would someone he hadn't even met before really take such a sharp interest in him with no ulterior motive? Sure, battling fellow trainers one hadn't met before was a vital part of the trainer experience, and Ronnie was a pretty neat Pokémon, but was there something Connor wasn't picking up on that made either him or his Pokémon particularly interesting? Or perhaps he was just being dumb and getting himself worried over nothing - as per usual, he thought. "Kind of you, but we really should be going somewhere. We've an injured Pokémon to save, after all," replied Reyes. The hiker grew more desperate. "Well, it'll only be right quick, I swear, and I need a bit of experience for that gym; I'm sure we both do, eh, lad? I'll even throw in an HM I don't need - eh, Rock Smash, I think it is?" As much as he hated it, Connor's mind could not drag itself away from the possibility that this guy was some sort of creep who was going to steal his Pokémon or beat him up, or something along those lines. It just didn't seem reasonable to him that this stranger was only interested in seeing his Pokémon. Ever the optimist, aren't you, Connor?"Well, I don't think it is fair that I don't let my friend decide for himself. Connor, what do you say?" Reyes' question pushed Connor's panic button. He dreaded that things apparently just couldn't go off without a hitch - and whilst saying no would have been impolite, he feared the possibility of this man running off with Ronnie, or killing him, or just generally being some sort of creep. He filled his lungs and took a long breath out. Relax and get a hold of yourself!Weighing it up, he realised - Rock Smash was a move that would likely come in very handy against Roark. Was he really willing to let that go, just because this man was potentially a creep? That'd be moronic - there was nothing to be afraid of, after all; not with Reyes right behind him, and much less likely to let him get abducted this time. "Alright, I can do that. Bring it on!" He stood up straight and wore a new-found mask of confidence as he replied, suddenly feeling invincible. Nothing he, or anyone else, could think, say, or do could break that spirit! But what if he does and you get killed?Except from that. As every single muscle in his face dropped and his determined smile morphed into a panicked gasp, he thought about taking his affirmation back. But it was too late for that, though; the hiker was already reaching into one of his pockets to dig out a Pokéball. Connor feared the worst as he looked towards Reyes with the look of someone facing a firing squad. Just what had he gotten himself into? What sort of terrible, horrible, no good, very bad fate awaited him? "Right, Rocky! Let's go!" said the hiker as his Pokéball bounced off the rocky ground. It released what Connor recognised as a Geodude - a floating, jagged rock with thin arms and a ticked off look upon its face, posturing with all the intimidating presence of a deflating beach ball. Possibly one with angry eyes doodled on it. Oh.Connor felt almost underwhelmed, as a wave of relief washed over him - in all honesty, when he properly thought about it, he almost felt a little silly for getting himself so worked up. "Uh… Ronnie, start with a Metal Claw!" "Rocky, go at 'em with a Tackle!" Almost. As he watched the pair charge at each other, he mulled this over. On paper, it seemed easy enough. Geodude - a Rock and Ground-type, he recalled, who didn't really learn many Ground moves at lower levels; physically, quite tough - however, so was Ronnie, who was more agile and had access to Metal Claw, a super effective move. None of this loosened the knot that wrung in his stomach, though, as the sound of heavy plodding filled the air and the pair drew nearer and nearer to each other. Nearer and nearer. Nearer and nearer. Connor conceded that "charge" may not have been the best term to describe whatever was going on. Rocky was a Geodude, after all, and not a Starly; as such, neither party had the pace to make up the distance between them with much haste. The sound of heavy plodding filled the air as the two inched ever nearer. "Is everything so slow in Sinnoh?" called out a perplexed Reyes. Finally, after a good fifteen seconds, the two were in striking range. Connor found himself with his thumbnail in between his teeth, nibbling away in sheer anxiety - what if this hiker had some sort of trick up his sleeve? Oh, what if this was another Hawley situation? Had he gone and gotten Ronnie roughed up again? With a soft clang, Rocky bumped his head into Ronnie's metallic outer shell. It was as though an underpaid postman had knocked on him, he was so unfazed, and now it was his turn to reply. He raised one sharpened, stubby front leg and brought it down upon Rocky with all his torque, leaving a nasty bruise. "Geeeraaaaaaah!" The attack drew an anguished screech from Rocky, and the plucky little rock was reduced to a quivering heap of rubble in an instant, his guard completely shattered. In spite of this, and the stunned gasp forced its way out of the hiker's mouth, Connor still found himself being eaten away at. "Quick, Ronnie, another Metal Claw!" There was absolutely no way, he thought, that it was really going to be so easy. Surely there was something he had missed, some hair-brained mistake he had made, and he was merely being lulled into a false sense of security? He watched on, barely able to stop his nails going into his mouth as an icy shroud of dread descended upon him. As such, it was a great shock to him when Ronnie's second attack descended upon the Geodude without interruption, the harsh screeching of metal cutting into Rocky's jagged epidermis going through Connor as his defences were torn through. He was left sprawling on the ground, unmoving, unconscious and with a nasty cut above one eye. Silence fell upon the palpable scene for a few moments. Silence that was broken by the sound of Reyes clapping and cheering, a fist raised in the air. "Alright! Nice going, Connor!" He'd done it. He'd won his first trainer battle. Free from dread's frosty grip, he couldn't stop a jaunty grin creeping from ear to ear despite his best efforts. Fireworks went off in his eyes as he approached Ronnie with urgency in his movement and a spring in his step; in turn, his Pokémon let out a pleased chirp and dawdled towards him, rubbing against his leg in glee. Connor replied to this by dropping to his knees and wrapping his arms against Ronnie for the second time that day. "Good job, boy!" he said, his voice squeaky with joy. "I'm proud of you!" "Rrrrrrr!" As he hugged Ronnie, he got to thinking that he was perhaps being too cautious, too anxious about everything. Thinking about it, it was silly to have gotten so worried about things. Silly to have put such little faith in himself, and silly to do the same for Ronnie. Perhaps, he thought, he was better than he gave himself credit for - as a matter of fact, the more he thought, the more he considered it absurd that he thought a battle against a Pokémon who was both at a typing and level disadvantage to his was unwinnable. Your parents were right, he'd been told last night, you should have just stayed at home. You have no hope. You aren't fit to be a trainer. The world's just going to chew you up and spit you out.Those were just voices in his head. Mean, stupid voices in his head. Voices that were wrong. He was good enough, and if he ever dared tell himself otherwise again, he'd… he'd… he'd kick his own butt! "Good work, laddie!" Looking up at the huge frame of the hiker, he saw a wide smile shine at him behind that tangled mess of a beard and a clean silver disc from an outstretched hand shimmer at him. Three hundred and fifty Pokédollars, by his count, were also in that hand. "Ye've earned it!" Regaining his composure after seeing the sight of such a large hand so close to him, he released Ronnie from his grasp and got back to his feet. While he would have appreciated this guy respecting his personal space, it would have been inappropriate to point that out now - besides, he was sincerely grateful for the gift, and held his hands out for it. "Oh, eh… you can just take it… ah… theeere you are," said the hiker as he fumbled the disc into Connor's hands with a decided lack of elegance. "That there is a move called Rock Smash, laddie - the law says you're not permitted to use it outside of battles until ye've got one gym badge… I think that's to do with needing to prove you're responsible enough with Pokémon to not damage the environment? I dunno, the government's weird - but anyway, you can smash rocks with it out of battle. Pretty nifty Fighting-type move, too. You know how HMs work, right?" "...Erm-" "Basically, you just plug 'em into a DVD player or something, wrangle your Pokémon over and show it to 'em and take it from there. Like a workout tape, or something! Same with TMs, but they don't really have much of a league-recognised use out of battle - I don't really get the huge difference, honestly. But I'm just a hiker, what do I know, eh?" Connor knew how they worked, of course, but thought it rude to interrupt the hiker. "T… thanks." "'S alright! Now, don't you kids have a Pokémon Center to get to?" "That's right, we do!" beamed Reyes from the side. "Now, Baggo, let's- wait, where's Baggo?" Indeed, the little blue ball of pure, scaly rage was nowhere to be seen or heard, and the hiker could only watch on in confusion as Reyes gestured Connor over to help look for him. "Baggo! Where are you? Please don't be killing some poor Zubat, or daddy's gonna be upset!" "Daddy?" asked Connor, face screwing up as he tried to mask incredulousness like he had just bit into a lemon. "Quiet, you!" sniped back Reyes. Connor couldn't muster up a reply, and the duo continued to look high and low. It took them about five seconds to find him, due in no small part to the cacophony of wings slapping and Zubat screeching not far away from them - following the cave walls to the right revealed the cause of this was, indeed, the Bagon, and at least seven of the little winged beasts, purple as poison and with O-shaped fanged mouths. Reyes quickly went tense, hoping that Connor didn't notice his frightful shuddering. "Alright, Connor, here's what we're doing," he whispered as quietly as he could. "I put him back in his Pokéball and hope they don't try and kill us." Connor nodded with a gulp. Like a gunslinger from those Unovian westerns, Reyes drew the Pokéball, mashed on the button, and Baggo disappeared in a flash. Seven blind, gaping faces fixed their gazes upon the pair, wings eagerly slapping against skin against a backdrop of nothingness. "I don't think they liked that, Reyes." "I think you're right." The two were off in a flash, a whirlwind of flapping violet wings giving chase.
"Sir, please calm down-" "Calm down? Calm down?! Me and my buddies are workin' our damn asses off in that damn mine, another one of my pals got laid off, and this is the third time this damn week we've had a Pokémon get injured down there, and you're telling me to calm down?!" In contrast to Jubilife, Oreburgh's Pokémon Center was quite a sorry sight. The passage of many years in the mining city had taken their toll, time slowly gnawing away at the building. Thin patches of dust clung onto the building, a layer of grime caking the windows; the once brilliant orange beacon of hope that was its roof decayed by the sands of time. Regardless, it still stood at almost twice the height of the (decidedly much better for wear) house beside it. As Connor and Reyes noted through heavy panting when they entered the building, its interior was not much better off, either; particularly not today. Not when a horde of angry miners, trainers and other such folk sprawled the building's length, feet tapping in impatience along the line. The situation, thought Connor as his face contorted under sheer disgust, was far from ideal. "Ah, dammit," grumbled Reyes under his breath, "why can't things be simple?" At the front of the serpentine queue, meanwhile, tensions did not seem to be cooling despite the nurse's best efforts. "Sir, I assure you, I am trying the best I can, but please understand, trying to cope with all this has been difficult for the Center, too. We can take him in to look at for now, but I'm afraid any proper treatment would probably have to wait until tomorrow." "Tomorrow? We'll need him at the mines tomorrow! The poor guy could have ruined his ar, and you're telling me that - I dunno, some asshole's Chatot with a cold is more important?!" "We, ah, we don't have any bunged up Chatot at the moment, sir. I'm sorry - if you would allow us to keep him overnight, we can monitor him overnight and treat him in the morning, but we do have too many other Pokémon that legitimately need help to offer immediate assistance." The miner's face was pink as a particularly miffed slice of ham as he conceded defeat, slamming his Pokéball onto the desk and storming off. "Fine! Whatever! Roark's gonna bust a vein one of these days, and it sure won't be at me, lady!" After the miner's seemingly unending tirade finally ended, the nurse took a moment to compose herself before calling up the next in line. Shuffling along, Connor's eyes drifted towards the sterile whites of the Center's wall. In places the wallpaper seemed to be peeling a little, unveiling the aged plaster that lay behind it. The sprawling map of the region creased where it would have been folded, the safety pins keeping it on its board only barely hanging on, and Connor couldn't help but feel the proportions were a little off - it had taken him about an hour to get from Jubilife to Sandgem and ten times that to get to Oreburgh, which certainly wasn't reflected in both routes apparently being of equal length. The clock on the wall was a little off, too; by his count it was seven minutes late. His attention was drawn to the people waiting around him, whether in the queue or on uncomfortable chairs and grimy benches, all of which seemed to have been eaten away at to some degree. The atmosphere in the building, Connor felt, was not a happy one. While the nurse seemed to be trying her best, the weary expressions worn around him didn't really fill him with hope. To his left, among the dense crowd, he saw a man who looked as though he was running on about three minutes of sleep trying to reassure a visibly distressed Bidoof, rubbing its head whilst trying to keep his one up. To his right, he noticed the miner with a slumped posture and crossed arms, the tapping of his boots audible even through the hullabaloo around him. His focus fell upon Ronnie alongside him, who seemed to be huddling closer to him and distancing himself from the disorienting wall of sights and sounds all around him. He felt an anxious shiver on his left leg, and bent over to soothe his Pokémon's worries with a pat of the head and a soft "There, there." "...Next?" Connor was caught off-guard. He had barely even realised that the queue had whittled down, and now he was next. Looking at the clock, the realisation that almost ten minutes had passed hit him - once again ( unsurprisingly, he thought), it seemed he had gotten lost in his thoughts. "Ah, hello!" began Reyes, who had decided against letting either of his Pokémon out into the sea of chit-chat around him. "Sorry to bother you, but my friend and I - well, actually, just my friend - we came across an injured bird earlier today." "I see. What bird was this, exactly? A Starly?" "I think so?" Reyes turned to Connor for confirmation, who hesitantly nodded. "And what was wrong with it? Do you have it on you?" "Uh… a, uh, burnt wing - which was there when we found it, I promise - and it really doesn't seem to… how can I put this… er…" "He's a spicy little lad," chimed Reyes. "Y-yeah." "And when did you find him?" The nurse leaned in as she spoke, something which threw Connor off a little. A shiver ran down his spine as he slowly turned to the clock, thinking back. "Nine hours ago," he gulped before pausing, the gears of his mind churning out the best excuse he could think of for such a delay. "B-but we were already on our way here, and we had to get here today, a-and… I'm sorry-" "Oh, gosh, please don't get so worked up over it. It's quite alright, I swear!" Reyes rubbed his chin as he thought about the next course of action. "Didn't I hear you say that you were full at the minute?" A vaguely crestfallen look fell upon the nurse's face as she responded. "Yes, I would assume you did. Are you kids new in town?" "Yeah, we're here to kick the gym's badge and get our butts!" declared a fiery Reyes, fist clenched and eyes full of determination. "Other way round," hastily interjected Connor. "That too!" "Oh, um… about that; the gym is sort of off-limits at the moment." It took a moment for this to sink in for Reyes, but sure enough it took even less time for him to deflate. "...It is?" A heavy breath escaped the nurse's nostrils as she nodded. "You see, the mines here have been under new ownership for a few weeks now, and things have been… contentious, to say the least, with regards to working conditions. We've had more and more injuries as of recent, too; the guy you saw earlier, for example, came in with a Machop. Poor thing's arm got caught in a faulty conveyor belt, apparently - they've needed replacing for a while, and there was talk of them doing it before. Now, though, I believe it's been put on hold. Roark's not taking any challengers until the situation's resolved, and there's talk about the miner's going on strike, I believe." "But… my dad's a miner," said Connor, "and, um… I don't think he's ever said anything about this to me." The nurse could only offer a shrug of her shoulders and an apologetic look. "Well, that's what I know, anyway. Now, about that Starly - you boys are staying here overnight, I'm assuming?" "Aye," replied Reyes. "Alright, in that case… your room is the eighth one down the hall. We'll be sure to update you in the morning." "Cool! Thank you!" With that, the pair took their keys and headed off. Dear Murphy,It's me, Connor. You might not remember me, but I was at your lab two days ago to get my trainer's license. Thank you for that, and this Pokédex! I hope you are doing well! I'm very pleased to tell you that me and Ronnie are good. As a matter of fact, I'm writing to tell you…As he felt Ronnie's cold and rather heavy head upon his lap, eyes shut and peacefully resting, Connor was pleased with what he had written so far. Sure, it was only a single paragraph, but at the very least he'd settled on a tone he felt satisfied with. He thought he had, anyway. Perhaps it was a little incoherent, actually, the more he thought about it - what if he didn't remember him? He did tell him who Ronnie was, right? Was he coming off as too chummy - or was it showing, that he really wasn't sure on his tone? "Connor, my guy, how is that email coming along?" came Reyes' voice from the upper bunk, his voice inquisitive as his red headband dangled down and green eyes peered expectantly at him. "I, uh… well, I think? Maybe? I dunno, it's just starting it that's tough." The look became more judgmental, the voice desperate. "Man, just pour it out - if it looks good, it looks good; if it doesn't, you can always fix it. It's not going to write itself if you keep stressing over it. I tell you, you've got to take it easy sometimes, friend. Just make sure that you take it!" As was evidenced by his face scrunching in thought and the corners of his mouth curving down, he really had no idea what Reyes meant with his last statement. That being said, perhaps he had a point. Perhaps he just needed to crack himself open and let the words flow out… or something. Connor had never been good at metaphor. "What I wanna know is when that pizza's coming, anyway," bemoaned his colleague once more in an exasperated tone. It had been about twenty minutes since the pair had gotten settled and ordered from the first pizza place in town that they'd found - Gianluigi's, it was called. Apparently, it was supposed to be pretty good; Reyes wasn't too sure what Sinnoh's definition of "pretty good" was, but it had better have been worth the wait. An incensed Garra grumbled next to Reyes, his little eyes narrowed and mouth in a frown. "You're damn right, buddy!" declared his trainer in reply, as Connor tuned out and went back to his letter. I'm writing to you to tell you that I caught another Pokémon today. He's a Starly with a burnt wing, and I don't think he's too happy to be around people. I named him Byrne. I've handed him in to the Pokémon Center for the night, though, as I feel as though it would be best for them to evaluate him.He was promptly snapped back to reality by the sound of heavy thudding on the door. "Ooh, that'll be the food!" declared Reyes, a ray of sunshine seeming to materialise within him as his face lit up with a beam. "Connor, do you mind getting it?" "I can't. Ronnie's asleep on my legs." "Well, surely you can move him?" Connor paused before responding, looking down at what was essentially a mass of steel and rock on him. "Um… no offence, but he weighs one hundred and thirty pounds, Reyes." Another set of four thuds on the door, almost ripping the door off its hinges. "Ach, alright, alright! I'll get it," conceded a defeated Reyes as he launched himself off the top bunk and opened the door. "Hi, how ar- …" Reyes wasn't quite sure what he expected a pizza delivery person to look like here in Sinnoh. Perhaps because of cartoons, he was expecting a pubescent, squeaky teen with a poorly shaved moustache to be on the other side of the door. Or at the very least, probably just an average Joe, really. What he certainly had not anticipated was this person being a) a woman at least two years his senior, b) at the very least three inches taller than him (and at six foot two, he was no dwarf himself), and c) built like a brick shithouse in every sense of the word. Her colossal muscles, from the looks of things chiseled from granite, seemed to block the entire corridor. Her biceps were wide as boulders, and her shoulders broad as a mountain. Reyes was frankly amazed that there were uniforms that fit her, in all honesty; hazarding a guess, she was at least two hundred and twenty pounds. The gaze of the titan that towered over him lay in the shadow of the brim of her grass green cap, her short blonde hair tied back into a ponytail. Her dark blue eyes seemed as though they were up in the clouds as she looked at Reyes with an unmoving expression, before speaking in a flat tone. "Pizza time." "Oh, here you go," replied Reyes as he clawed out some slightly crumpled notes from his pocket. "There should be enough there." She effortlessly held both boxes in one massive splayed hand as she looked over the notes, and as she did, Reyes noticed a name tag that was no longer blocked by said boxes - "Hello!" it read, "my name is: Lucia," the name written neatly in marker. "Thanks. Have a good night." With that, she forced the boxes into Reyes' arms with enough force to send him back a step or two before easing the door shut. A few seconds passed before Reyes carefully lay the smaller box on Connor's bunk, so as to not disturb Ronnie. "Just cheese and tomato, right, friend?" "Yeah." "Cool." With that, he promptly made his return to the upper bunk, holding his box out of the reach of his ravenous Gible - or, as evidenced by the sound of teeth gnashing through cardboard and into some pizza, attempting to keep it out of reach. At the very least, he considered himself lucky that Baggo had tired himself out in his relentless pursuit of Zubat and stayed in his Pokéball that night. Connor, meanwhile, pulled out and bit into a slice before continuing with his letter. He wasn't a pizza connoisseur by any means, but at the very least, he enjoyed this one greatly - the cheese, in particular, was just right, smooth and yet also a little tangy as it melted in his mouth. He very carefully wiped his right hand to remove any grease on it before going back to soothing his sleeping Pokémon while continuing his email. I have to wait until morning to check back on him, as Oreburgh's Pokémon Center seems to be in a rough place. Something's going on in the mines, apparently, and everyone's upset about it. We (oh, I forgot to mention, I've found a travelling partner - his name is Reyes, he's from Hoenn and he came with some dragon type Pokémon) are in town to take on the gym, but Roark's on strike. Hopefully, it'll all be over and done with in a week or two, though.Before concluding, Connor had a think about if there was anything about Pokémon he could get out of a Pokémon professor, perhaps the person best suited to do so in the entire region. He recalled talking a bit about legendaries in his previous meeting with Murphy - perhaps that was a good route to pursue? By the way, out of curiosity, do you have any further reading you'd suggest on the legendary Pokémon of Sinnoh? I think I told you that I find it an interesting topic, and I suppose it also makes for good conversation - I figured that maybe we could find out more about each other's regions?That worked. I hope to speak to you soon!Yours sincerely,Connor
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Author's Notes: this chapter and the next take their name from the Pink Floyd song, "The Thin Ice." Does it fit the events of these chapters much, musically or lyrically? Not particularly, it's a filler track from The Wall, but hey ho, the title sounded neat at the time and kinda reflects the tone of the chapters.
CHAPTER TEN: The Thin Ice, Part One
06:32 - October 12th, 2007 - 13 days until October 25th Bathing in fluorescent light as he strutted up the stairs of Sandgem Town's Pokémon laboratory and into his office, lit only by the first hints of sunrise, Professor Murphy took his poorly-sized seat with a bowl of cereal in hand and opened up his laptop. It was a weary old thing, with its dingy plastic hinges and cheap black frame. Desperately in need of a clean, it was, he felt as he pried it open. Or a replacement. Whichever was cheaper. As he took off the crescent-moon necklace that hung from his neck to place it on the back of his chair, crackling filled the air; flickering blue arcs shot danced around the computer as it came to life. The professor, his mouth full of cereal, only gave an impressed nod as he swallowed. "And good morning to you, too, Rotom!" " Hi - ZZZT - James! How are you doing?"An electric orange colour filled the dusty LED as two eyes blinked to life. The smile that lit up the screen made its home firmly to the left of the uncanny valley, as a voice crackled through the old laptop's speakers. "I'm quite alright, myself," replied the professor, carefully leaning back on his rickety wooden chair. "How are you?" " I - ZZZT - am good! If I am reading this correctly, you have - fifty-three - new emails. Would you like me to - ZZZT - check them for spam?""Please." " Okay!"The face on the screen went blank for what felt like minutes. It made sure to blink from time to time and kept smiling as emails upon emails were carefully scoured - dodgy newsletters, privacy policy updates, and even one rather dubious medication sales pitch, all of which went in the spam bin. By the time life poured back into Rotom's eyes, the vast majority of them had been dumped. "You have - one - new email. Would you like me to - ZZZT - read it to you?"A grin lit up Murphy's face as he nodded, giving his laptop a pleased look. "Oh, of course! Who's it from?" "Apparently, it's from one... Connor Murdoch.""Excellent! Let's see how he's doing. Rotom, if you would?" A window full of text popped up on the screen, partially covering the face on the desktop. "Ahem..."So, as Rotom read out the message, Murphy sat intently listening. His eyes followed Rotom's shrill voice as it rattled through the email - behind them, his brain strung a reply together, continuing to do so even after the laptop went quiet. Once the reading was finished, he nodded, a gleeful little smile perking up on his face. "Thank you, Rotom!" Rotom was visibly pleased by this, eyes closing and smile widening in joy. "ZZZT - my pleasure!"Eventually, he hunched over towards the keyboard, and began thudding in his reply: Dear Connor,Thank you very much for the email! Of course I remember you; you made quite the impression, young man - you were certainly very knowledgeable about Pokémon, and a bright little guy such as yourself deserves to be a trainer. It is good to hear that you and Ronnie are doing well, and I'm very pleased that you have made a new friend! That being said, the news about Roark and the situation in Oreburgh is a concern. If things go south, try and stay safe; I would imagine that it will blow over eventually, and any conflict will be dealt with by people more thoroughly trained than yourself. I shall try and monitor the situation on the news and let you know if I have any advice as it develops.I am doing very well myself! It has been a busy few days, as is normal for this time of year. It's always good to see an uptake in bright young trainers (such as yourself). I am also training for the upcoming League this December - things are going well so far, and hopefully they'll stay that way for when the tournament arrives!As for reading on legendaries, the Pokedex and the Canalave library are both very good resources for that sort of thing. If you want any particular recommendations, though, I suggest the following [and I shall try and cover as many legends as I can]:Genesis: The Birth of Space and Time, by Beatrix Verstand, is a very broad (and fairly deep) analysis of the stories of Palkia, Dialga and Giratina and their effect on Sinnoh's society;Pixies by the Lakes, by Magdalena Hedegaard, is an excellent read regarding Uxie, Mesprit and Azelf - specifically their impact on ancient Sinnohan rulers;Dream On, Sinnoh!, by yours truly :-), is quite the study on how the age-old myths about Cresselia and Darkrai affect popular culture today, in particular movies, andGeothermic Power is Not Feasible, Actually (and Taming Heatran for That Purpose is a Horrible Idea), by John P. Akinyemi, explores the debate on just how reliable using the magma beast of Stark Mountain to power our homes would be. Akinyemi's answer is spoiled in the infamously long title, of course, but it is still a very good write-up on the discussion (and, indeed, on the Pokémon itself.)I'm signing off for now, but I hope things are well, and I hope you enjoy my recommendations!Yours truly,James Murphy, PhDProfessor of Pokémon at Sandgem Laboratory
"Anyway, Connor: that's the story of how Kyogre and Groundon, the beasts of land and sea, were actually lovers!" A dubious Connor clamped down on his lower lip, his only slightly dubious gaze shifting to the side. "Um, R-Reyes, I, uh… I thought it was, ah - I thought it was pronounced Groudon?" "...You are correct," came his friend's reply after a brief pause, his cheesy half-grin at Connor and his similarly skeptical Aron masking an ocean of torrential shame up to his eyeballs. It was two in the afternoon, and the pair had spent what felt like the past year slouched on opposite sides of a PokémonCenter's glass table. They had spent that time discussing fables, legends and mythical tales from their homelands. None of them were entirely accurate; most of Connor's information had come from a recollection of the sources Murphy had given him (in the email he had read first thing in the morning, and was both eternally grateful for and too daunted to reply to) that he had skimmed over, whereas most of Reyes' was from hazy childhood memories of books and tales from his family… and, admittedly, a good chunk of it was off the top of his head, for the sake of entertainment. This didn't stop it from being a fun little way to pass the time. Even if one of them lacked the confidence to tell a story without stumbling through it, and the other was far too liberal with artistic license. It had also passed enough time, too, as almost on cue, the voice of the nurse on duty rang through the Center. "Anyone waiting for the Starly with a burnt wing?" "I think that's us." Connor turned to Ronnie, giving him a firm pat on the back. A high pitched grunt of acknowledgment came from deep within his little metal companion and the pair came to their feet, strolling over to the nurse's desk. They were greeted with a half-sincere smile, the nurse's (admittedly, only slightly) scarred hand tapping under the desk. "Okay," she began, air fleeing her nostrils, "to begin with: we've bandaged his wing for the time being. It's not a large bandage, although he probably won't be flying for a week. It's still a fairly recent injury, and although that wing may always be a bit funny, for the time being he seems to be making a good recovery from, which is… mostly good news." Upon hearing this, Connor found himself wearing an optimistic expression - one that was short-lived, his grin soon evaporating. "Mostly?" "See, the thing is… and I feel a little bad saying this, considering this is a Pokémon that has clearly undergone abuse from humans… um..." "Uh… if you don't mind me asking, does he have, like - behavioural problems, of some sort?" said Connor, trying to help the nurse. "He's a right little shit, pardon my Kalosian." The nurse revealed the back of her hand to the boys - a large scar spread its middle, its length index to ring finger, before speaking in an incredulous wheeze. "I'm lucky I didn't need stitches!" Reyes furrowed an eyebrow, surveying the damage. "Ehhh, I've had worse," he grumbled with a dismissive hand wave, his other arm wrapped around Garra. "He's only a little bird, is he not? I hardly think he'll kill us - and besides, I'll have you know, my friend here? Very good at dealing with this sort of thing." "With all due respect, sir, I'm a nurse," replied the nurse, rolling her eyes. "Dealing with this sort of thing is literally my job." "Well, I…" Reyes began to speak, before noticing Connor go as pink as a Jigglypuff in the peripheral of his vision, his mouth an uneasy zigzag. "...Oh, ah - that's fair enough. Forgive me." Connor, without turning away from the nurse, nodded in thanks before continuing. "So… um, please could you show me where he is?" "Oh, I have his Pokéball in the back - I'm not sure letting him out in a wide open space is the best course of action. Wanna come in?" The pair nodded, as did their Pokémon, and followed the nurse as she stuck her key in the faded white back door, twisting it and shunting it as it opened with a wail. Even though it was, to that point, the least broken place they'd seen in Oreburgh, the room was still not up to scratch for a Pokémon Center. It was a cramped little room, longer than it was wide, lit by flickering yellow light, light that reflected off the admittedly meticulously polished stainless steel surfaces and shone upon the plain blue flooring. Both the chair and the table clung near the walls of the place, and both were probably sufficient for someone of Reyes' size and not much more - he certainly couldn't imagine the pizza delivery woman from last night on either of them. Also clung to the wall was a set of shelves, one of which had a row of Pokéballs on it. This was the one the nurse was at eye level with, as she gave it a look across, before asking a question Connor did not expect to instill such fear in the air. "Yours will be the one with… Byrne written on it, I presume?" "It, uh… it should be, yeah." Wobbly knees crept up on him as the group approached the table. Jitters crawled up his spine, crawled into his limbs. His stomach wrung itself and his hands began to jitter. Steel rubbed against his jeans as Ronnie arched up to his shin. Oceans of terror raged in the pits of his being, and a mask of sweat clung to his face. The silliness of comparing an injured Starly's Pokéball to Pandora's box was not on Connor's mind at that moment. What if Byrne attacked him, or attacked Ronnie, and had to be taken away? The nurse could only offer a look concerned and confused in equal measure. "Uh… are you okay, young man?" "Connor? Is everything okay, friend?" came Reyes' voice from beside him, decidedly more worried than usual. "Yeah, I'm - I'm fine, uh - do you mind if we just get this over with?" Unsure what to make of the situation, the nurse obliged. "I'm gonna take a step back and keep an eye on how this goes, if that's okay with both of you," she declared, only slightly out of a masked morbid curiosity. "I would suggest not getting too close to him, as he is a little bitey, and if you want him back in the ball, let me know - but I figure you may want to take this time to decide what to do with him." With a click of the button on the ball in her hand, out came Byrne, the ball of rage and feathers himself, in a glorious and furious cacophony of screeching and squawking. His cries ripped through the air with the might of a jumbo jet, loud enough to shatter eardrums and shrill enough to destroy windows. It was peculiar to see such a frail little thing, barely able to lift himself up for only a few seconds at a time, create such a scene. His eyes held themselves shut, and his beak snapped away at any rogue fingers or hands bold enough to enter his domain - as Reyes learned quite quickly, when he reached a hand out towards the beast and met with a clamping down on the pinky finger hard enough to draw blood. To his side, Connor felt Ronnie huddle up ever closer to him, soft whimpering noises coming out of his little metal companion (noises that were drowned out by both Byrne's screeching and Reyes cursing over and over under his breath) and worried blue eyes staring up at him. One hand on the Pokéball on his belt, he crouched down and began to rub his knuckles against the Aron's forehead, muttering reassurances before he was calm enough to be withdrawn safely. "Connor, was it? Do you want me to put him back in his ball now?" called out the nurse across the squawking as she applied a band-aid to Reyes' mortally wounded little finger. By this point, Garra had grown reckless in the clutches of his trainer's other arm, wriggling about and almost biting down a few times for a shot at Byrne - who was, thankfully, starting to tire out after about a minute of pure thrashing rage. "Actually, I think I'll be alright." In the hubbub of the situation, then, it surprised Connor when he found himself blurting commands out. "Reyes, I don't mean to, ah, boss you around or anything, but you wouldn't be able to put Garra back in his ball and possibly take a step back, would you?" This was met with a look that Connor had not anticipated being so warm. "Oh, of course," was Reyes' response as he obliged. Now, nothing stood between him and Byrne. Nobody was at risk but himself. So he figured there was only one thing he could really do in this situation, and that was what he did best. Weight escaped his shoulders as he inched ever so slightly closer to the ball of rage before him. The Starly's movements had slowed into little more than aggressive flops by this point, although his beak was still snapping at anything nearby. Which was why Connor kept his palms quite high above the table when showing them to the angry little bird, determined to extend an olive branch. "Hey, hey, hey, hey," he spoke softly, getting an eye roll and amused look from the nurse behind him. A look that was quickly wiped off her face when Byrne seemed to stop thrashing, quieten down, and give Connor a willing look in the eyes. This was an outcome that the trainer had not been particularly expecting, if he was perfectly honest. As such, he did find himself stumbling a bit with what to actually do with Byrne's attention, now that he had it… The dingy little room fell silent for a few moments as the boy scrambled to come up with a coherent way to go about things before he finally made his first move: quite noticeably turning his attention towards Byrne's injured wing, steering his head towards it and gesturing lightly at it. He was met with a sharp hiss in reply. Making a mental note to not under any circumstances go near the wing, he returned his palms to their earlier position as slowly as he could. The Starly's reaction had put him on edge, and it took a moment for his breathing to return to normal after that little fright. With that done, he cleared his throat, gave the Starly a warm smile (making sure not to bare his teeth - he didn't want Byrne to view him as a predator), and began to coo in his soft, slow and steady voice. "Hey. It's okay if you're upset. I understand. But I don't want to hurt you, I want to help you. So please don't lash out, alright?" Byrne seemed to understand the gist of what Connor was saying. Giving him an attentive look and a tilted head, it was noticeable that his temper was cooling off. Of course, he clearly didn't trust his prospective trainer fully just yet, and so, for now, proving his trustworthiness through touch was still off the table. Still, this was a promising start. The trainer decided to gradually lean in just ever so closer, slower than windmill blades as he did so. Byrne didn't seem to react too negatively to that, either - good sign. Connor's volume went down by a fair few decibels, his tone becoming even more amicable, as he continued to speak in what was now closer to a whisper. "Listen, listen, listen, hey, hey, hey, it's going to be alright. I promise. I'm not going to hurt you. It's going to be alright." Byrne took a vigilant step forwards - it was going better than Connor had expected by this point, that was for certain. Truth be told, actually, he felt ever so slightly tempted to turn around and take a look at the nurse's reaction, were it not for the fact that turning away his attention from Byrne probably wouldn't have gone down well. That and he would have felt bad being so cocky about it. Now that the Starly was closer, Connor decided that now was a good time to see how he reacted to hands. The risk of being bitten at the forefront of his mind, he steeled his nerves regardless, biting the bullet and gently, gently moving his right hand closer to Byrne. Going with his left hand, he felt, was a bad idea, as the bad wing was opposite it - and that was an area that he knew better than to go near. He slowly rotated it until the Starly had a sideways view of his hand - leading with a wide open palm would likely have spooked him, and leading with the back of the hand probably wouldn't have worked either. Byrne met this by taking a couple of steps backward, still apprehensive but growing more visibly comfortable with Connor's presence. The boy, meanwhile, was still adamant in not making any sudden movements to throw him off-guard. The most essential thing here, he felt, was doing things not on his terms, but on Byrne's, and so far this was a philosophy that paid off very well. Once the hand was eye level with Byrne, he stopped moving it. His breathing slowed once more, now at a pace to rival that of a hibernating Ursaring, in an effort to steady that arm - after all, if the Pokémon knew that he was at all frightened, his chances of gaining his trust would have taken a hit for the time being. Next, he took a note of Byrne's body language at that point - he wasn't puffing his feathers out, and his widely-pupilled eyes were beginning to dilate. Things were still going positively - things were still going good. Alright, good.It was dawned on him that neither Reyes nor the nurse had said anything yet - something he was very much grateful for (a silent environment allowed him to focus), but something that he also felt was pressuring him a bit by this point. If he made a mistake by now, it would spell absolute humiliation - he doubted he would have heard the end of it from either of them, probably. All it took was one slip and he'd end up with a bleeding hand, shot confidence, shattered trust with his newest Pokémon... He took another deep breath to calm his nerves. Failure wasn't a necessity by any means - it had all gone well so far, why did it need to stop now? No, he decided that he needed to take his greatest leap yet. Gingerly, as though he were in a bomb disposal uniform staring straight at a mess of wires and a ticking clock, he hovered his hand closer and closer to the crown on Byrne's head. He didn't feel as though there was any other natural conclusion to this session with the Starly, and depending on how the Flying-type took it, it was possible he'd have a new member of his team very soon. Slowly, slowly, slowly, he jittered his hand closer to the bird - knowing that Reyes and the nurse were both watching in bated breath, that all eyes were on him - he inched ever nearer to Byrne, barely even being able to look at where he was going, fully expecting a sharp beak jabbing into his fingers... A beak that never came. Air escaped his nostrils as he felt his knuckles touch the Starly's feathery forehead. Taking a look, it seemed Byrne was content with this - not too pleased about it, certainly, and Connor reckoned that if birds could frown they'd look a spitting image to the grumpy, defeated Starly before him. But it was a start. Slowly rubbing the feathers, he swung his jaw open, relieved gasps of air escaping his mouth. With his spare arm, he wiped his baggy sleeve against the sweat that drenched his brow, his expression morphing into a delighted smile. He turned around to see the nurse, a very much pleasantly surprised look on her face, and Reyes, who looked as if he was about to burst. "Nice going, Connor!" he yelled, unable to resist an exaggerated fist pump as his voice filled the room. "Thank-" It was at this moment that Connor felt a sharp pinch cut into the skin on the side of his hand. His eyes widened in horror, his teeth slammed shut, his face puffed up like a balloon as he turned to see Byrne, still very much displeased, taking a nibble out of him. Oh, bother.Despite his best efforts, he couldn't hold back an agonised scream.
It was about half past ten in the morning the next day when Reyes and Connor found themselves leaving the Center the next morning. The pair both had one thing in common - band-aided hands from Byrne's attacks the previous day. In spite of how Connor's interactions with him had ended, ultimately the nurse was still very impressed with the progress he'd made and deemed him fit to take Byrne out on his adventure. "You made it way longer without getting bitten than I did, young man," she'd said, "and I've no doubt that you know what you're doing. Just exercise a little more care around this one in future, and I'm sure in due time you'll grow to become good partners." The prior night's viewing - more episodes of Masked Rider, of course - had given the duo the motivation to check out what Oreburgh was most famous for: its mine. The same mine in which Connor's father worked, no less. The same mine that Roark worked on, and where the gym was located. The same mine that they had been told was going through tough times when they first rolled into town. As the pair made their exit from the Center, Connor urgently double-checked his belt, as was becoming a habit for him by now. He hadn't forgotten Ronnie's ball, thankfully, but he was briefly surprised by the presence of a second Pokéball - before remembering, Byrne was his now. It was a strange feeling, having an extra ball on that belt, but it certainly wasn't one that Connor objected to, either. Once he was outdoors he grabbed Ronnie's and released the Aron, as did Reyes with Baggo. He had decided he was going to wait until later to get further acquainted with Byrne. With both Pokémon out and comfortable, the pair headed off for Oreburgh's mine. They arrived at the opening to the mine about an hour or so later. As the crowning jewel of the city, the pair expected it to be massive in scale - an expectation compounded upon by having to travel down what felt like a hundred stairs to actually get into the place. Yet upon actually entering the place, even Connor, who had been here a few times (albeit with his last visit coming about eight years ago), was left a little disappointed. They were greeted with apparently a million more stairs to go down, with the ceiling of the cavern at most nine feet tall. It wasn't particularly wide, either - the pair and their Pokémon found that all four of them in the corridor was a squeeze. Arm room was very much a commodity here. Moreover, the mine's generally claustrophobic feeling was not at all helped by the damp air, air that would have been severely undersold if it was described as merely suffocating. Before they headed down the stairs, they noticed that from behind a stream of old metal barrels came a gruff voice, and they turned around to see a man holler out to them. "Are you tourists?" "I suppose we are! We're not particularly from around these parts, haha - we are allowed down here, though, right?" The man's leathery face grew dubious. "You are, but why here? What brings you down to the mine? Surely you've heard about how things are?" Reyes' cool facade remained, not wishing to say anything about the state of the mine. "Oh, my friend here's father works down at the mine, and we thought we'd just pay a visit - also, Roark works here, does he not? We're both taking on the gyms, and-" In spite of Connor's objection to Reyes' first claim, the man figured it was of no harm to let them pass. "He does, yes, but he's not really taking too kindly to visitors right now. None of us really are. I'm not going to stop you, but... be careful, okay?" "W-will do!" was the younger one's reply as the pair continued. Venturing further into the depths of the cavernous beast, neither of the two could help but notice that the lighting was far from ideal. The gas lamps on the walls were old and flickering, their glass cases fogged by the passage of time. A worried look formed on Reyes' face as he shifted his eyes over to his comrade. "Connor? You did say your dad works here, right?" "Y-yeah," was his reply, "he does. Why do you ask?" "Is he... is he okay?" This was a question that perplexed Connor, and it showed on his face. "Yeah, um... I think so? He's not, like, dying or anything..." "That's, what's the word - it's reassuring," said Reyes, very much not reassured. As the pair's footsteps rang out through the empty stairway, descending down seemingly infinite stairs, it came to Connor's attention that the wooden borders around the walls were quite old. Rot had clearly begun to set in, and he was slightly amazed nothing had collapsed on either of them so far. His attention drifted to Ronnie. His little metal friend was also not at ease, trembling and sticking close to his trainer, the flickering and faded lamplight giving his metal coat a nice hue. Looking to Reyes and Baggo, he noticed that, thankfully, Baggo seemed to be under control - although Reyes' power in that was probably up for debate. Eventually, after what felt like decades of drudging down that cramped little corridor, the pair eventually arrived in the first big level of the mine. It was still slightly better lit than the corridor, but that was not a difficult task. Gas lamps illuminated the walls once more, their task helped by streams of light coming from miner helmets across the room. The pair were greeted with the sight of a great black obelisk of mining refuse that lay straight in the center of the room. Fortunately, this room was considerably taller than the tiny corridor they'd just been down by about five times, Connor reckoned - and the great pile seemed to be stacked up to the very top of that. It also didn't seem particularly stable - stability was not what one would look for a spoil heap, of course, but at the same time he couldn't help but feel it posed a safety hazard. A miner grabbed Connor's eye shortly after this, almost by accident. This was a man of about fifty, his tabby grey hair thin and wiry, his skin pale and sunken eyes glazed in cynicism; his mouth was grit shut as his back cracked with each movement. It was evident to even him that he was struggling to work. His teeth ground against each other with the force to make sparks fly every time he leaned over, and at regular intervals, he found himself wincing as he stood to the straightest of his abilities and massaged his injured back. Tears stung his eyes as he did so, and misery was scrawled on his face as he got back to work nevertheless. The third thing that caught the pair's attention was a rickety old wood and steel cart track that seemed to circle around the heap, some pathways leading into alternate rooms. The aforementioned cart was at the centre of the fourth thing they noticed: a Machoke was apparently pushing a cart full of waste with all its might, much to its discontent. Its jackhammer arms, purple and bulging, strained under the load, something Connor guessed wasn't supposed to be happening. Indeed, shortly behind this scene was a jammed lever that probably had something to do with controlling the cart. Lever may not have been the appropriate word for it - it was a great rod of rusted metal the size of a man, its outer layer having been chipped away at. Someone in a grimy miner's uniform marched over to the lever in a solemn fashion, in an attempt to yank it out like a mythical warrior facing a sword entombed in stone. It took this man's greatest efforts to shove the lever back into position, metal screaming and sparks coming from the lever's holster as it screeched into place. Once it did, the cart trundled back to life, its wheels spinning slowly and chassis weighed down from the weight of the coal as it moved at a snail's pace. After that, the Machoke, sore from head to aching toe from the excruciating labour, trundled over to the side of the room, slumping against the wall and heavily panting as they took a well-earned rest. This surprised Connor, who had always thought that Machoke were supposed to be Herculean beasts, freakish in strength, and this one's appearance seemed to back that assumption up. Unless this was a newly evolved one that had been working for ungodly amounts of time on end, there was surely no way this one should have been so tired. At the side of the great heap of mound stood a man, shoveling some of the black stuff at his side into the pile, that Connor recognised as his father. He didn't wish to distract him from his work, and decided against rushing over to him to say hello - he surely wouldn't have taken that too well, not least with everything else going on in the mine. Instead, he decided to stay to the side of the room, figuring that it probably wasn't safe to approach the pile without safety equipment on. It was then that he realised having Ronnie out in this area wasn't safe either - nor was having Baggo out, either. Glancing down at his companion, he noticed that he seemed to be eyeing up the heap of coal, and was promptly sent back into his ball with a soft whimper. Reyes followed suit once he noticed Baggo seemed to be squaring up against the Machoke from beside him. Connor's attention still lingered on his dad, though - surely it wasn't safe to be so close to the pile? Sure, there were two or three others doing the same, but that didn't mean it felt right to Connor. The smaller heap beside him seemed to be almost gone, which was reassuring at the very least. Of course, he then realised it was rude to stare, and promptly ceased, going back to his own affairs. Reyes took note of this, and decided that avoiding Connor's dad was probably for the best. Come to think of it, there weren't particularly many people who seemed as though they were keen on being disturbed. The atmosphere of the place was a gloomy and somber one, lifeless as the monstrous lot at the centre of the room, with everyone hard at work. This train of thought was about to be disturbed, however. Connor's father had finished shoveling waste for the time being, and as he stretched his weary back and looked around, he noticed his son wandering around the place from the corner of his eye with a friend. A look dubious and surprised in equal measure grew across his face - he wasn't entirely sure what he was doing down here, or whether it was even safe to be doing so. However, he hadn't seen him in days, and he still wanted to know how the adventure was going. Due in part because he had sort of expected Connor to have given up by now, sure, but also because he was his son, and that's what dads were supposed to do. As was embarrassing Connor in front of his friend. After taking a quick peek around, he put down his shovel and crept off towards Connor. "So, Connor," began Reyes, "um... do you want to try to find Roark, or do you want to leave it until later?" "I mean, erm - I think everyone's at work right now, and I don't wanna disturb anyone, so... I guess-" A familiar grumbling voice ambushed Connor. "'ello, son!" His eyes widened in shock. Each and every muscle went stiff. The very core of his being seemed to snap-freeze, as he cranked his head around to face his old man with a hesitant look. "A-ah - um, h-hey Dad," he mumbled, bluffing out an artificial smile. The skin on his father's face, and moreso on his palms, had been stained black, and his fatigue showed through his baggy eyes - and, Connor doubted he was in the best mood, he was sparse with his words. Reyes, however, was not. "Ah!" He abstained from a sooty handshake, instead standing at ease and giving him a wide grin. "You must be Connor's father, mustn't you?" "Er... I am, aye," came the optimistically uncertain reply. "And you are?" "Why, it is I, the great Reyes Vasquez!" This was met with a withering look from Connor's dad. "...Right. Well, mate, ye can call me Michael," he declared, with a nod that felt slightly dismissive as the group began walking to a less populated area of the crowded and busy mine. "So, Connor, er - what've ye been up to? How's yer little friend? And I see ye've got another one too, I think, on yer belt!" Connor, who was further away from his dad at this point than Reyes was, was quiet as he searched for a reply, his lips sealed and eyes darting to the side. "Y-yeah, I caught him the other day." "Oh, I see! Nice one, laddie!" declared Connor's father, his usually booming voice tinged with restraint. "What is it?" "Starly. His name is Byrne." "Byrne, eh?" He paused for a few moments, mulling this over as he rubbed his chin before erupting into a chuckle. "That's a good'un! But if you don't mind me asking, ah - that band-aid on your hand; is that from Byrne?" This was a stumbling block for Connor, whose eyes began to scour every possible angle as he strained to come up with a convincing enough response. It would have made his father worry, ask questions that weren't necessary but rather intrusive, if he'd said yes - so instead he opted to come up with something else. A litany of "ums" and "ahs" escaped his mouth, and yet, after a while, he caught onto the fact that nothing was coming out. "Actually, no," said Reyes, just in the nick of time, "it was a paper cut. You know how it is, with... y'know, the thing." This earnt him a confused look from Michael. "What thing?" "The... ah, como se dice - paperwork, and forms, you know? Isn't that right, Connor?" Disaster averted. "Y-yeah, at the, eh, the Centre," he stumbled out, withholding the urge to wipe the sweat off his brow in relief. "Oh, I see - aye, that's unfortunate. Still, nothin' too bad, right? And how's yer Aron gettin' along - can you look after the both of 'em?" Connor's father seemed to buy this response, and there was a hint of genuine relief in his reply. When he was met with only a nod, he decided to press for more information. "What's his name?" Connor still hadn't made eye contact with his father for more than a couple of seconds at this point, as his attention seemed to lay more on the mine. "Ronnie." "Nice, nice," was the reply, before silence's hold on the room grew overwhelming. For a solid few seconds, nobody offered anything to the conversation. Instead, the focus was on trying to find something, anything, to say. Eventually, Connor, taking a deep breath and swallowing his fears, decided to pipe up. "So, uh, Dad, I hope you don't mind me asking this, but... um... I-I heard things are pretty rough here. What's the deal with Roark? And, uh, y'know" - his voice went hush so as to not catch anyone's attention - "the guy with the bad back." The silence continued for a few seconds, as Michael formulated a reply, a rather sorrowful look in his eyes. "Well, son, we're under new ownership - as of pretty recently, actually, and it's been a bit hectic since then. See, Roark in particular was a bit skeeved about these new owners because he's not happy with the place becoming a tourist attraction - always viewed his responsibilities in the mine and as Gym Leader separately-" "Out of curiosity," interjected Reyes, "is this Roark guy just a miner, or does he hold other jobs?" "Well, officially he doesn't, but with all the extra work he does he may as well do. The guy prides himself as a leader of the workers for the workers and all that jazz. He's already going on hiatus as gym leader until the situation gets resolved, but I don't know if it'll be enough. New owners were a little… er, deceitful, if you get what I mean. They said they weren't gonna go too hard on it, but I mean, there's already been discussion of moving the gym into the mine instead of as its own building - I think it's bein' negotiated now or something, actually. We've also had to work longer hours, too - I've worked 8 in the morning till 6:30 at night down 'ere a fair bit recently. And the plans to renovate have been shelved until the money's a bit tighter, too - and lemme tell ye, we need those renovations; we've had equipment break down all over the shop recently. The fella ye were talkin' about, with the bad back? Poor Tom, he's tried to get off work because of that back - thinks it might be arthritis, but they just won't let him - they need the manpower, or something. He's not 'appy with it at all - doesn't wanna break his back down 'ere, y'know?" Connor looked astonished by all this information. Of course, he'd known his dad didn't speak to him a lot because of work - but as of recent, he didn't really have the choice, it seemed. The talk of going on strike, as much as it would have made life harder for the rest of the town, didn't sound too unreasonable either. "That… sounds, uh, pretty rough. I'm sorry." "It's awright, son." "That's rough, but allow me to play devil's advocate here - say you walked out, what would the townsfolk do for power and what have you?" "Well," replied Michael, "that is a good point - and it's the reason we've not walked out already. But it's just one of those things, isn't it? We don't wanna get overworked, everyone else doesn't wanna lose power - it's up to the bosses to find a balance," "Hmph. That does make sense-" "HEY!" A man in the same desert beige uniform as the rest of the workers, with a cordovan mullet and wire-framed glasses, hollered this out in the middle of Reyes' sentence - Connor identified this as Roark. He was visibly displeased. "If the rest of us have to work," he declared, "you're no exception! Get back here!" Nodding, Connor's father went back to his post, turning back to his son and his friend. "Sorry, I gotta go - uh, see ye around! Have fun with the whole training thing!" With that, Reyes turned to Connor, shrugging. "So, I suppose that's the mine - wanna get back to the room now, or do some training?" "Y-yeah, that… sounds good." The two trudged back out of the weary old mine, with Connor taking one fleeting look at his father. Like everybody else here, he seemed downtrodden.
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CHAPTER ELEVEN: The Thin Ice, Part Two
13:24 - October 14th, 2007 - 11 days until October 25th While it was impossible to explore much without a bike, the vast Route 207 made for an ideal place for Connor and Reyes to train their Pokémon. Fellow trainers were quite scarce in the first leg of the route, as the rocky terrain of the place meant most travellers of the route were explorers and cycling enthusiasts. This, of course, meant that the pair could train mostly undisturbed, and there was plenty of tall grass to do it in. From time to time they'd bump into the odd trainer and one of them (almost always Reyes) would stop to have a bit of a chat, but for the most part the day had been spent so far fighting wild Pokémon. Connor was careful to not exert Ronnie too hard, his memories of his first day as a trainer still fresh in the memory, and had decided beforehand to limit his haul for this session to ten Pokémon at the very most. This number was a fairly random pick, with Connor hesitant to avoid an unproductive session whilst also wanting to avoid another burnout. Besides, it was unlikely he was actually going to reach that number - the presence of species like Machop and Kricketot meant that there was ample room for Byrne to train and flourish, too. On paper, anyway. The extent to which this was actually the case was about to be tested, as Connor found himself standing - from a safe distance, of course - over a puffed up Byrne, who in turn faced a Machop determined to stand its ground, with its back a straight line, a defiant look in its eye and its fists laying on its hips. Ronnie had been withdrawn after his second battle of the day, and Reyes was off somewhere unleashing Baggo on a poor, innocent Geodude. Connor's own body language was much less confident, mind; it dawned on him he was fidgeting with his hands. His biggest issue was that, by his Pokédex's count, the Machop had two levels on Byrne. Lack of discipline was very much a likelihood, one that worried him - Byrne probably wasn't going to follow instructions well at all here. In turn, he was possibly going to make things much harder than they had to be - there was a chance he was going to at least get hurt, and the odds of him getting knocked out were very much there. What did he know about Machop? A Fighting-type; Byrne, both Normal- and Flying-type - the emphasis lay on Normal-type here; he was still vulnerable to Fighting moves. Also famously a physically strong Pokémon - while Byrne knew Peck and Wing Attack, his advantage was lessened here. Although Byrne held the speed advantage, getting close was an inevitability, one that played into Machop's hands - and god forbid it went for the bad wing, too. He noticed that the tensions were about to come to a boiling point, with Byrne breaking into a hiss and Machop a growl, and decided to make the first move. "Ah- alright, Byrne, erm… rush at his... right side and do a Wing Attack with your left wing!" His voice was shakier than he was pleased to admit. There was a pause before the Machop let out a cry of war and charged at Byrne, fists swinging. Byrne let out a shriek in retaliation, extending his wings to the fullest of his ability - and Connor whimpered as he realised the Starly was completely wide open. Whilst he landed a few quite powerful (if imprecise) wing slaps, bruising the Machop's cheek and rocking his head about, he also took an emphatic uppercut to the chest. This knocked him off his rhythm completely and did some hefty damage. "Byrne! Peck to his head! P-please!" called out Connor, a sludge of panic and impulse in his voice. Just as Machop prepared another crushing blow, Byrne thrust his head back and unleashed a furious chain of pecks at the creature's stomach. This was an improvisation on his part, and while it seemed to be working - each blow provoked winces from the Machop, and some even left significant marks on the creature's gray skin - Connor was uncertain about it. He still figured a blow to the head would have worked better - and it would have got him in the air, too, considering the height difference - but if it worked, he supposed, then it worked. Eventually, the Machop gathered its bearings, with a look of disgust on its frowning face. Sheer rage filled its red eyes as it flung back its toned arm, and Connor panicked. "Dodge! Now!" Byrne did no such thing. He was, instead, content to keep going at its stomach, with Connor's plea going in one ear and out the other. As such, the powerful Karate Chop to the head completely caught him off guard. It drew a pained, shrill screech from his opened beak, his eyes slammed shut in the agony. When they opened, his vision was blurry, and a ringing sound hammered at his ear. This was disastrous. Connor buried his head in his hands - he figured that he really should have known better. Cries of what were you thinking?! and of course he's going to ignore you! and Why did you rush him into the team, you moron?! rang in his head, as a well of shame built up in his gut. He managed to pull himself out of it just to holler a shaky, cracking command to "Use your wings!" - he wasn't even sure what he made of that, let alone what Byrne would. As Byrne stumbled backwards, he heard Connor's concerned voice cut through the haze and turned to see his anguished face, messy hair and slender forelocks hanging in shame as his eyes screamed an apology. He turned back to the Machop, who was preparing to launch a powerful jab to the face, and while he hadn't been listening to the specifics of Connor's instructions as much as the emotion - he figured he knew better, as he was the one doing the fighting and not some idiot human - a newfound sense of determination to win for whatever reason sprouted in him. Quick as a Unovian gunslinger, he went for Machop's thigh with all the might he could muster at that moment with his left wing, just as the fist neared his face. It landed with a decisive thud. The Machop buckled under the stress on its leg for just long enough. It was with a bittersweet feeling that Connor heaved his head out of his hands and looked at the scene to see Byrne land a forceful jab the weakened Machop, seeing it clutch its stomach in pain before falling to the ground and writhing in pain. This was certainly a victory, even if it was quite a pyrrhic one - Byrne had suffered his share of thunderous blows from the fight, and judging by his blank expression and stumbling gait, he probably wasn't fit to fight on. But he'd won. What also surprised Connor was that Byrne was stumbling over to him. Of course, he was Byrne's trainer, and this was probably to be expected - except Connor hadn't expected it. He wasn't actually sure what he'd expected from the plucky little bird. Byrne stood by his side nevertheless, giving him a furrowed look. It was still an apprehensive one, but it was a look nonetheless, and a matter-of-fact smile bloomed on the trainer's face. Just as he scrambled for Byrne's Pokéball, though, an ear-splitting, blood-curdling scream from nearby almost made his heart stop. It was the sound of someone being murdered in the most violent way imaginable, like a thousand knives to the jugular. Connor and Byrne both shot a terrified look in the direction of the noise as it trailed off. Something was terribly wrong, and they were both unsure whether or not to investigate or flee for their lives. Connor's blood snap-froze. Dread filled him. Sweat drenched him. He wasn't keen on dying either by any means, but what if somebody desperately needed his help? As much as he felt like emailing his last goodbyes to Reyes or Murphy and accepting his fate, he took a deep breath and decided to play hero. A sense of duty filled him, as he looked to the source of the noise with a reluctant gulp… only to find out the source of the noise. It wasn't someone being murdered. Rather, it was a very panicked looking Reyes, panting and horror scrawled on his face, with a Kricketot clung to his coat. "Um…?" "Connor!" he hollered, terrified as he gestured to the little brown bug. "What the hell is this?! How do I get it off?!" It was very hard for Connor to mask his amusement at this, stifling a giggle with all his might. "Um… th-that's… that's a Kricketot, Reyes - have you not seen one before? I - they're harmless, I promise." "They're gross, is what they are! Ay, ay, ay - please, Connor, get it off!" was the genuinely panicked reply. Byrne shared Connor's perplexed look as he was returned to his ball. The trainer gingerly approached the Bug-type, its round body clung to the flowing blue coat and bright little eyes sparkling back at him. It responded with an innocent hum of contentment when Connor reached out a hand to touch it, and did not mind being handled at all when he grabbed it and stood up with it. "Well, hey, you," Connor mumbled softly towards the little brown creature as he held it in his arms, much to Reyes' shock. He was met with a high-pitched chirp as he took a few steps away, marching on through the tall grass before setting it free. Once that was done, he returned to Reyes, who gave him a silent look half amazed and half disgusted. "...You know, Reyes, uh… Kricketot are basically harmless-" "Connor?" "Yeah?" "Never speak a word of this. To anyone." Connor nodded, desperately trying to mask his bewildered smile. "Good," was Reyes' reply, a surrendering grin just managing to creep its way onto his face. "Now, shall we get back to training?" With that, Connor took out Ronnie's ball once more, as did Reyes with Garra, and the two went further into the grass together with their Pokémon.
Multiple days behind schedule, Hawley arrived in Oreburgh with a venomous scowl and a chip on his shoulder. His mood was already severely dampened by the events of the past couple of days - having to abstain from battling had been worsened significantly by the hiker he had met in the cave, and he was dreading his stay in the city with every single fiber of his being. What was there for him in a dusty shantytown like this, full of insufferable tools, doomed to a life of hard labour in the caves? For one, he decided, his first order of business was to pay a visit to his old friend Kurt. His best efforts to locate him in Jubilife had led him to conclude that he now made his home in Oreburgh, and he figured that he needed to play a bit of catch-up. If that snot-nosed little turd was to have a traveling partner, then he owed it to himself to get his own, too - one that wasn't so savage and violent, mind. After that, he had decided he was going to investigate the museum, and study the history of the region, a subject of great interest to him. He had no other plans after that other than to train relentlessly until this Roark, the fellow who called himself gym leader. had been defeated, and then leave the town immediately for somewhere better. From his first impression of the city, that left his options very much open. "Alright, Tomyris," he declared as he began to walk, his voice hushed and grumbling, "follow me. We're meeting an old friend of mine, who I think you should get along with quite well. It's unlikely, but if anybody challenges either of us to a fight, ignore them - you're above them, and you must save your energy to fight those who need to be fought. Am I clear?" An affirmative ribbit met him in reply. "That's what I like to hear. Off we go, then." His heavy boots of lead thudded against the sidewalk as he marched through town, hands latched onto the innards of his pockets and back faultlessly straight - "weak posture," his father had always said, "is a symptom of a weak human." Hawley couldn't help but pick up on the fact that nobody seemed to want to bother him or his Pokémon, mind; he took this as a sign that none of these passers-by dared to do so - good. Beside him, Tomyris mirrored his stance, and he couldn't help but feel a hint of pride at the sight. As he walked, he brought out a crumpled piece of paper that lay in his jacket's pockets and unfurled it. 33 Ironside Way, Apt. 205, it read. This was where he could find Kurt if he was correct. Beneath it lay directions from the east entrance to the town; at thirty more minutes of walking, it was far from ideal. Moreover, he had taken care to keep his Pokéballs concealed much more adequately than he had in Jubilife, not wishing for a repeat of that fiasco - judging by the state of the people around him, that was probably a wise choice. This reminded him to make a mental note of paying a visit to Julius next time he was in that area. However, in spite of his dedication to keeping to himself, he couldn't help but overhear two people walking not far behind him have a discussion. His attention began to shift to that talk as he kept walking. The first speaker he picked up on had a strong accent - Hawley hazarded a guess he was Oreburgh, born and bred. "Aye, mate; did I tell ye 'bout the new bloke across the hall from me?" "No, I don't think you did," was the reply; he reckoned this fellow was probably visiting from elsewhere in the region. "What's he like?" "'ere, he moves in across the hall from me the other week. Long, curly, black hair. bit of a goatee; proper fancy ol' black jumper and pants, posh accent, all that jazz. I says 'ello to him, y'know - being a good neighbour and all that; doesn't really say anything back, just a smile an' a wave. So I say to 'em, 'what brings you 'ere, pal?' He says it's a nice change of pace-" "Nice change of pace?" spoke his companion, bewildered by this assertion. "From where?" "See, that's what I says - and he says 'well, I'm studying to be a lawyer!' A lawyer - in Oreburgh?! I ask 'im if he's sure he's in the right place, and he gives me this look, like I'm speaking a foreign language or something and he just buggers off into his room!" Although Hawley stopped paying attention to the conversation at that point, he took a guess that the subject of this conversation was none other than Kurt - a guess that was confirmed not long afterwards, as he heard the Oreburgh native go down the same street as him, leading to the same apartment building he was headed to. While there were no shattered windows or ongoing fires, it still wasn't a particularly pleasant sight; at about five stories tall, it was difficult to miss, yet its exterior was made of rather unsavoury shades of brown and black. A lot of the windows were in desperate need of cleaning, too - really, the whole thing just wasn't nice to look at. Making sure Tomyris was still by his side, and checking his pockets to make sure Clausewitz's ball was still present, he reached the door of the building and hammered in the address number - 205 - and dialing. There was a crackling noise, before a deep, and deeply uninterested, voice came through the intercom. "Who is it?""Kurt, you miserable bastard, it's me!" was his exuberant reply. " Who Is 'me?'"This time, he toned down his enthusiasm, a tad embarrassed. "Me, y'know - it's Hawley." " Ah." The voice was notably less lifeless, a hint of surprise present through the crackling intercom. "In that case, come in."There was a mechanical buzz as the entrance to the building unlocked, and Hawley swung the door open. He was greeted by a dimly-lit and faded checkered-floor corridor, and only mustered up one disgusted look before heading upstairs. Going up the stairs, he was greeted with a similar sight. Not paying it much heed, he counted the doors on the odd-numbered side - 201, 203, 205. Room 205's door was cleaner than the other, grimier doors - Hawley considered himself lucky he didn't have to put his hands anywhere near those other, grimier doors. "Oi, you 'ere to see the new bloke?" Hawley recognised the voice as the man from behind him, and turned around to see a heavy-set man of tall build looking at him. "Yeah," he replied before turning back to the door. "Ooh, d'you know 'em from somewhere?" This was a silly question that Hawley didn't pay much heed to as he instead opened the door. Walking in, he was hit by the strong aroma of air freshener - as a matter of fact, he was almost overwhelmed by it. It was a pleasant smell - albeit an artificial one - a sentiment that was not shared by his Croagunk. As a matter of fact, she seemed to loathe it, her sacs filling up in disgust and eternal grin morphing into a frown. The curtains were neatly done, with the sunlight of the early-to-mid afternoon illuminating the room. Air came in through the open window, although with the effect of Great effort had been evidently been poured into making the place presentable, and it paid off quite nicely, Hawley felt. "Good afternoon," came a voice that he recognised from, and he and Tomyris turned around to see Kurt. It had been several years since the pair had last spoke in person, and while Kurt was almost exactly as the man had described, he still couldn't help but feel a little shocked at how time had acted on him. For one, Kurt had always been the taller of the two from what he recalled, yet now Hawley had a good couple of inches on him. Secondly, his Larvitar was exactly as he recalled it. This was a shock to him - he recalled Kurt always spoke of becoming a great trainer one day, he and his Larvitar. At the very least, he'd expected it to evolve after all these years - if they even did evolve, anyway. "Ah, hello, old chum," was his reply, a grin emblazoned from cheek to cheek as he held out a hand. For everything the past few days had thrown at him, it felt good to genuinely smile for once - not out of spite or cunning, but rather out of actual happiness. "How're you doing these days?" Kurt seemed less excited about this. His look was not one of enthusiasm or glee; rather, it was almost a frown - a bemused frown. "I'm well." He refused Hawley's handshake, opting to look him in the eyes with the precision of a particularly stern cyborg. "How did you get my address?" This caught Hawley off-guard, as he withdrew his hand and began to wilt. "Hm?" "I'm going to be honest with you here, Hawley," said Kurt as he crossed his arms tighter, leaning against his wall. "As much as I appreciate your concern, I don't particularly appreciate people turning up to my house without me giving them my address. This isn't a personal thing, by any means; rather, my security is at risk if every Tom, Dick and Harry has my address." "Oh, uh, yeah. I knocked on the door to your parents' house and they said you'd moved out, but they told me that this was your address - I do hope you don't mind that?" Kurt looked up at the guest in his home, going to great lengths to keep his poker face intact. While it was rather jarring for someone to have put such effort in finding him, this was quite clearly harmless - after all, he recalled his parents taking quite a liking to Hawley back in the day, and so it only made sense they'd tell him about his new location. Not only that, but it seemed as though he had thrown Hawley off by reacting the way he did. He had begun to sweat and was clearly at least partially uncomfortable. He was also trying to hide it, but as Kurt knew quite well, Hawley was not the best at hiding things. As such, he took it upon himself to lighten up the situation, cracking a smile of his own. "That's quite alright!" he declared, sticking out his own hand this time - an offer that was taken up. With the mood much less standoffish, the pair began to walk through the apartment, eventually taking sitting across from each other on the black leather sofa. Their Pokémon took their places beside them, with Tomyris looking blankly, looking nonchalantly at its counterpart; in turn, the Larvitar leered back at her with narrow red pupils. Whatever the Pokémon equivalent of resting bitch face was, this creature certainly suffered from it. "So," began Hawley, leaning in, "I noticed your Pokémon - er... Larvitar, was it? Hasn't changed much since last time - have you given up on training, then?" "Yes, he's still the same old Franco - still a Larvitar. And I've not completely given it up, no; rather, it's just taken a back seat as it's not really my main priority right now, with studying and becoming a lawyer and all that. It's a bit unfortunate, really; I did enjoy it quite a bit, but my career is much more important than chasing some pipe dream." Kurt seemed wistful as he spoke, his attention drifting off to the window for a fleeting moment before returning to the topic at hand. "I see you have a Pokémon of your own now, though - are you becoming a trainer?" Hawley's face lit up when asked about this, as he lay his hand on the back of his Croagunk's head, giving her a pat on the head. "Ah! Yes, I am - this is Tomyris; she's a Croagunk. I have another Pokémon too; a Shinx - his name is Clausewitz." He was met with a pleased croak, which was reflected in Tomyris' expression. "Interesting. Not a bad choice - I'm assuming you're taking on Roark as your first gym leader, then? Is that why you're in town?" "Yep. Well, that and I appear to have a bit of an ongoing rivalry with Connor - oh, erm, you remember him, right?" Kurt's face shrivelled up as he thought about this for a moment, chewing his lips before bursting into a dubious laugh in reply. "Oh, him? He can control a Pokémon? Hmph - colour me surprised." "Hah! Me too - and he's not particularly good at fighting," was Hawley's reply before he gestured at his nose, "although he apparently has a friend who is, now. The bastard." "Hmph - one little boy who's too scared to do anything by himself, so he calls on others to do his dirty work; another white knight who decides it's his duty to help those who don't help themselves. You know, the two worst sorts of people. Just get rid of them, and Sinnoh would be a much better place, I tell you." Kurt paused for a moment before letting out a soft sigh, a sigh that morphed into a sardonic chuckle. "Ah... still, remember when we used to torture him? Give him the old what for? I do miss that - those were the days, as they say." "They were, aye," said Hawley in reminiscent response. "That's actually sort of a reason why I came to see you, actually. See, we work better as a team than we do as individuals, and you do seem to miss being a trainer - so, you know, if you do want to join me, I could use a sidekick, you know? We could work together, give people like them the kick up the arse that they need, and just change the world for the better bit by bit. Who knows, I could even become Champion like my old man one day, and maybe those bits won't be so small, eh?" "'Use a sidekick' - you haven't changed a bit, it seems." Kurt let out a light sneer, before looking down at Franco - who was, in turn, giving him an expectant look of his own. He took a look at Tomyris, who seemed genuinely happy to be traveling with Hawley; a bright smile adorned her face as she looked at her trainer. "See, if I could, I would," he began, a tinge of uncertainty present in his baritonal voice. "But I cannot - I have a future ahead of me, and a solid one at that. One where I could actually make a name for myself and become independent, become responsible. More importantly, one where I can serve Sinnoh and protect her, save her from those who wish to harm her - I am sorry, but for now, that's where my heart lies, If that changes in the foreseeable future, however, then I'll be sure to let you know, but for now it isn't an option." Hawley took a moment to soak this in, nodding in acknowledgment. "That is fair - I won't pretend that that isn't a disappointment, but I do understand." A silence festered in the air, one that both Kurt and Hawley felt rather uncomfortable sitting in. Only Tomyris' croaking could be heard, alongside the rhythmic tapping of Kurt's fingers on the couch before he spoke once more. "So are you staying in town for long, then?" "No, I'm leaving as soon as I beat Roark. I don't care much at all for this place - erm, no offence, of course." "Hmph, none taken," was the reply. "Although I'm assuming you haven't heard about what's been going on recently? He's having a bit of a whinge because the new mine owners want him and his ilk to quit slacking - you know, like they're the ones who own the place. Not taking any challengers at the moment until it's resolved." Hawley rolled his eyes, drenched in exasperation. "Oh, come on, really? That's ridiculous - it's not like the gym challengers are hurting him." "I know, right? The whole thing's insane; it's a mine, what do you expect? Bunch of wet wipes, I tell you." Whilst this wasn't a situation Hawley knew a whole lot about, he was inclined to agree with Kurt on this one, for the sole purpose that refusing all challengers because of something unrelated to his Gym was a stupid move in his opinion. Not only that, it kept him in this dusty shantytown for much longer than he was happy with. "Still, though," continued an undeterred Kurt, "there's actually a fair bit to do here. The museum, for one, is actually a fair bit more interesting than you'd imagine - especially their exhibition of ancient history. I'd suggest giving it a visit, myself." "I'll keep that in mind. In any case, I'll get out of your hair now," grumbled Hawley as he pulled out his piece of paper from earlier, tearing off a piece and scribbling on it. "If you need me for anything, here's my Pokétch number." "Oh, okay - in that case, I suppose I'll see you around, then. I wish you the best of luck with the whole gym thing, and I apologise sincerely that I cannot join you." Hawley let out a single laugh under his breath as he stood up, walking to the door with Tomyris in tow. "It's fine, I understand - and good luck with the whole lawyering thing, haha. See you around!" With that. he made his exit, and Kurt gave a glance at Franco, who met him with eye contact in response. The Larvitar's leer, conveyed by beady red pupils, still carried a hint of envy and was met with a defeated sigh. "You know, I suppose taking on just the one gym wouldn't hurt. Put Roark in his place and all that, eh?"
Oreburgh's museum was quite the change of pace for Connor and Reyes, compared to its mines. It was much quieter (due in part to the museum's strict "only guide Pokémon allowed" policy), for one, and breathable too; Connor didn't feel as though the air trapped him in a chokehold. Its outside was not a particularly inviting one, as was par for the course in Oreburgh, but inside it was much more evident that great care had been put into its upkeep. The rundown, dust-eaten exterior of the building belied the painstakingly crafted replica of a Bastiodon skeleton that stood, imperious, in the center of the grand main hall, or the carefully maintained paintings of yesteryear hung on the beautiful cream walls, or the meticulous glass cases that enclosed fossils safe from time's decay. Overall, the place's calm feeling was befitting of its intention, as a place of learning. Of the aforementioned artifacts, Connor's attention was currently fixed on the paintings. In particular, these were medieval paintings dated usually around 1500, by artists whose names he recalled from history and art textbooks he'd read, such as Bartolo Barbachollo or Lorenza di Gallio. The latter's painting was most intriguing to him; it was a painting of the fabled Spear Pillar Mt. Coronet. It depicted what Connor had no doubt was an old man, a clean indigo cloak draped across his back. Before him, a stairway rose to the heavens. atop which stood the magnificent white body of Arceus, flawless green eyes meeting this intruder's gaze with an impenetrable glare. It left Connor stricken with awe, as though the piece had been touched by the very same powers it depicted. "Yeah, that piece is a good one, isn't it?" This completely unfamiliar voice ambushed Connor. Freezing up on the spot, he cranked his head around with his deep sense of unease reflected on his face, and he could only muster up a sharp nod before turning back around. "Erm... cool," was the rather uncertain reply, before the owner of said voice went off on his way, leaving Connor only slightly wanting a bottomless pit to open up in the ground and swallow him up forever, absolving him from the cold coat of shame clinging to him. A coat that he had brought upon himself. Meanwhile, Reyes was more focused on the fossil section across the floor. Fossils from each and every corner of the world were on display here, of many shapes and sizes. Sinnoh's representatives in this eclectic spectacle, for example, came in the form of a large skull with a prominent forehead, jagged jaw hung open and small eye sockets empty, and what looked like a large shield with oddly-shaped holes present in it. Looking at them, he couldn't help but feel that these were of much more interest to him than Hoenn's fossils, a great set of claws and a big root - on the flip side, he knew for certain that these came from ancient Pokémon. Whilst the skull was definitely of similar origin, the shield made him very dubious. A familiar, and rather unwelcome, sound cut off this train of thought - the distinctive sound of boots stomping into the hall. He turned around to see the red-haired goblin he distinctly recognised from a few days earlier, displeased as ever and with a bandaged nose. The sight of his face, all scrunched up as though he'd bitten into a Nomel Berry, made him wonder: was he ever happy? He assumed not - after all, the way he acted around Connor made him suspect that even the slightest ray of sunshine touching his cold, dead heart probably would have killed him. Hawley definitely noticed him looking back at him, too, and Reyes would have been lying if he'd said the sight of him wilting under his gaze, disgust carved into his face, wasn't greatly enjoyable. He watched on, barely masking his amusement, as Hawley stomped past Connor. While it was clear the urge to lay into him filled every inch of his body, he instead trudged on in defeat. Reyes was almost certain this was because he was in a public space, mind, and undoubtedly would have been booted out in quite humiliating fashion faster than one could say "fossilisation," but this was a victory nevertheless. As for Hawley, these suspicions were partially correct. Sure, he was absolutely livid at the site of two of his least favourite people in the entire world. But acting on these feelings was a fantasy he had to forgo for a number of reasons. This was a 2v1, both members of this dastardly, dickheaded duo had trained much harder than him over the past few days, and there was a third person on the floor who seemed as though he could have gotten involved. While with a bit more prep time and a touch of luck, he came away from any potential fight taking Connor down at the very least, there was also the matter of security guards getting involved - and he dreaded to think of the sums he'd have to pay, how utterly furious his father would have been, if he damaged any of the exhibits. He would've made a clown of himself - and no clown was fit to wear the Wilkins name. With regret he swallowed this bitter pill and moved on to look at the paintings, happening to stop just next to his loathed rival. The one that interested him most was that of a muscular brown-haired fellow; behind him, a strange orange figure wearing a scorching red aura. The second being caught his eye - it seemed to be a Pokémon, sure, but it wasn't like any he'd ever seen. It was tall and wiry. Its chest was a dull black, its head a three-pointed trident. Its face was almost entirely blank - there was no mouth, no nose, only two white eyes burning with the intensity of a thousand suns. Hawley quite liked the look of this creature. It certainly wasn't to be trifled with. All the while, Connor pinned his trembling gaze to the painting before him. He'd long since stopped analysing it. However, he couldn't move to another exhibit. Rather, he remained locked in place still as a statue, imprisoned. The prospect of making eye contact with Hawley terrified him - from this close, in fact, he could probably smell his fear. Fear that he was quite lucky had not been capitalised on. Moreover, the person who had asked him about the painting was still in the room, and he dreaded making an even greater fool of himself. His eyes remained locked on the painting until it was time to leave.
Roark was sick. Sicker than he'd been for quite some time. It was a sharp, stabbing sickness, a most unpleasant sickness, that had laid its seeds at the pit of his stomach. A stomach that was tying itself in knots, wringing any joy out of itself as he sat in the miner's quarters. His leathery palms had been tainted black from work that day - palms smothered by sweat, sweat that covered him from head to toe. Mining was something he'd always relished; it was not just a piece of him, it was his whole being, his passion. A passion that had been utterly snuffed out as of recent. His beloved Cranidos had clearly cottoned onto something being wrong, too - the poor thing had been a lot more protective of him recent, it felt. His sickness was not a virus of any sort. Nor was it a bacterial infection. It wasn't even caused by a gas leak. This was a sickness entirely wrought by stress. A piece of equipment had malfunctioned that day at work. Specifically, it was a hose that leaked hydraulic fluid. This hydraulic fluid ended up hitting a Machoke with the force of a speeding bullet. Roark felt sick that he couldn't even muster up much of a reaction anymore; what was once a terrible disaster had grown to be something he was used to, like a tumour on the back. What sort of terrible, terrible leader had he become, he asked himself? Unable to even muster up an ounce of shock, or outrage, or anger, at a wholly avoidable injury. It was at that moment that he heard a fumbling on the door. Figuring being down was no benefit to anybody, exasperation left his lungs along with the air as he sat up straight. He bent over to pacify the rocky grey reptilian that nuzzled his leg, giving him a pat as if to say "there, there." He heard a crack and a pained grunt through laboured breaths. In hobbled Tom as Roark glanced at the scene. "Hey, boss," mumbled the man as he went to take off his uniform. Even with his ailment, Tom was among the last to leave, and had even been commended on this by the new owners. "A model employee," they declared, "and one you could all take a leaf out of." It wasn't like he had a choice, of course; even with a doctor's note advising him that taking time off was a necessity, he had been declared fit to work by the council's social security office. As the new owners were quite strict with their paid sick days - days that Tom had already spent a fair few of off - he was faced with taking time off or being able to feed his family. "Tom," was Roark's matter-of-fact grunt of a reply. "Still being forced to work?" "Aye." "When're you supposed to be getting the doctor's results back? I'm all for you working hard, but by the gods, you need time off with that back of yours." Tom sighed. "Should be the next few days. But please, Roark, don't worry about an old coot like me - heh, I swear, I've been through worse. It's probably nothing too serious, anyways." He was met with a dubious grunt from Roark. While this would have been bad enough with anybody else, Tom was a close family friend. Admittedly, it didn't feel right to have a favourite - it went against the very spirit of being the miners' representative, he felt - but his closeness to Tom for as long as he could remember meant that it was unavoidable. Roark's self-loathing was interrupted by his de facto favourite tumbling to the ground with a thud, and his head whipped around. "Geez, Tom, you good?!" he said, scrambling over to him and offering a hand. "Agh… yeah, nothing to worry about." Tom accepted this offer and was promptly pulled up, clawing onto the wall for stability. "What happened?!" "It just happens sometimes, doesn't it?" It didn't, of course, and Roark was now visibly quite aggrieved. " Tom." "Look, I just…" sighed Tom. "If you must know, my legs went a tad numb, okay? I assure you, it's nothing that'll stop me from mining, and you can damn well expect me here tomorrow." Roark could have sworn he felt a vein burst as he exploded in reply. "Dammit Tom, take time off! Spend some time with your family, or something - fit people don't just lose sensation in half of their damn body! I swear, I'll do everything in my power to make sure nothing happens!" "Roark," was Tom's decidedly cooler reply as he ran a hand through his mop of white straw hair. "My family are the ones I'm doing this for. I won't be taking time off - if I have to come into work in a body bag, I'll come in in a body bag, and you bet your hiney my corpse'll be shovelling coal if that's what it takes to feed them. And please don't get yourself fired for me, boy; you're just an employee. You don't hold the cards here. I don't wanna have to explain why you lost your job and got stripped of your Gym duties to Byron, either." Quiet befell the air as soon as Tom finished speaking, as Roark trudged back to his chair, defeated, "If you insist." A whine escaped his Cranidos' throat, as he knelt down to comfort him. As much as his colleagues were important to him, it was also a matter of great pride to him that he held the position he did within the League - being such a vital part of the development of many a Pokémon master meant a lot to him. Yet he was still merely an employee, and unruly employees got the sack. Moreover, it would have been a source of great scandal within the League if he lost his mining job - especially with a rich bastard like Arthur in the role of Champion. "See you tomorrow, Roark," said Tom, having changed into his normal attire. "And please don't worry about me. I can make my way home fine, I swear." "Uh… right, yeah, see you." The door slam shut, and Roark returned to feeling like a dead Ducklett. He was alone (with the exception of his Pokémon) and, from the very pit of his stomach, sick.
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