Ren
still stanning zero 10 years later
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Post by Ren on May 18, 2018 23:49:57 GMT
Drew this to go with the little fic I wrote to commemorate PMP's 10th birthday. I'd been wanting to design Alola Forms for these two for a while, and I was glad I finally gave myself the chance, haha! I also wanted to include little throwbacks to early art I'd done for PMP-- Zero carrying Mitsumi's bag, for example, and the Gracidea flower on her hat. (The capitalized One in the title is, of course, a reference to the Pokemon movie theme of the same name, because I'm perpetually stuck in 2008)
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girl-like-substance
the seal will bite you if you give him half a chance
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Pronouns: xe/xem
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Post by girl-like-substance on May 19, 2018 7:41:13 GMT
It's always cool to see how other people envision characters in fiction -- especially how the author envisions them, because there are always a bunch of interesting differences between their mental image and mine. Obviously Zero is a canon character -- from, in fact, the only one of the Pokémon movies I've seen, though I can't remember why it was I saw it -- so I knew my picture of him would be pretty similar to yours, but Mitsumi is pretty far from what I imagined.
Anyway, as for the art itself, I really have to give you props for managing to draw Zero's hair without it looking like a mutant pineapple; that's no mean feat. I quite like the almost scratchy line you've chosen, too; it really emphasises the varied line weight, which obviously adds a little fluidity and motion to the image -- particularly with Zero, whose pose is quite stiff compared to Mitsumi's. I'm not sure what the line on Zero's right wrist is, though -- it kind of looks like something that was meant to be erased but wasn't.
But! This is a cool picture, and a timely reminder for me to catch up on Reverse Horizons so I can leave you a proper review at some point. Nice work!
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Ren
still stanning zero 10 years later
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Post by Ren on May 20, 2018 5:05:28 GMT
Thank you for the kind comment! I actually never bothered describing Mitsumi in great detail in the story because she was meant to take on the avatar of the protagonist in Pokemon Platinum (so I guess you could say she both is and isn't a canon character, haha!). This time around I got to have a little fun with an original design. And as for Zero's hair--I've been trying to get it right for 10 years, haha!! (but i think I've finally found a satisfying way to draw it)
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Post by illustriousrocket on May 21, 2018 4:20:38 GMT
I was actually thinking about suggesting you post this before I knew you did, lol. It's a great piece - Oyster broke it down in such detail that I agree with, so all I can add is that the colors mix fantastically well.
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Post by Cavespider_17 on Aug 20, 2019 0:38:01 GMT
The characters on this drawing are really well done. The shading is amazing and they are very expressive characters. The attention to detail is incredible, and the background is really beautiful, it really brings home the feeling of Summer. I am not too sure what PMP is though, which is a fault on my behalf (however a little tag or non-abbreviated note would be really helpful). Overall this is an amazing drawing, I look forward to looking at the other pieces.
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