Foul Play

Grimsley is way too happy to be recognised, haha. Which is good! He’s getting his spark back; he actually cares about being seen as an elite four member again. It’s good to see him reviving a little, especially as that extra bit of pride makes him bounce off Selene all the better, since she herself is so prideful.

Actually, she’s a lot more than that, if I’m honest. She’s a little terror of a kid, and I absolutely adore that – like she’s really good at pokémon training, and she knows it, and she expects everyone to recognise it immediately and treat her accordingly. She’s such a protagonist kind of character, right down to seeing through Grimsley’s trick (and leading with a rare dusk lycanroc, the show-off), that it’s pretty amusing to see her here as just a side character in Grimsley’s own story.

She’s tough, too. But only halfway through her journey, and it shows; she’s got strength, and a decent head for strategy, but she’s not quite elite four material yet. She does very well considering the gap in experience; taking that gamble on Grimsley not recognising unfamiliar Alolan pokémon and their moves was a calculated risk that paid off nicely, even if it wasn’t quite enough to clinch the victory. You can really see her potential – and her drive, too. Even if we didn’t already know she’d go far, we’d be able to tell it just from this battle alone.

Speaking of that battle, we’re finally here! At that one moment where the whole thing began, when Grimsley makes his baffling appearance in SM! It’s cool to finally arrive, and for him to deliver his deadpan line in a completely different context, where it feels like he’s kinda drawing on some Nanu energy. I had a feeling he was going to find a reason to break his rules and go along with Selene. Sending a kid to Po Town alone didn’t seem like something he’d be willing to do, for all his grousing. I’m very much looking forward to seeing how that’ll work out!

Also, I’m a big fan of how we’ve had three battles so far where the pokémon have basically just ended up swordfighting. :V The bisharp duel, the fight vs Ryuki, and now this one. I gotta say, more fics should have like, just a ton of blades clashing dramatically against each other!

Finally: congrats on the anniversary! I’ve really enjoyed watching this fic develop. It’s grown into something special. <3 And with Selene here to make things even more interesting, I am, like I said, very much looking forward to the Po Town arc!

I think that should be ‘asked’, rather than ‘told’.

That ‘When’ should be ‘While’, and ‘overturn’ doesn’t need the ‘-ing’ on the end.

There should be a ‘back’ after ‘himself’ there.

That should be ‘in’, rather than ‘on’.

Well, I’ve been waiting for this encounter for a while now, and here it is! Selene sure is a handful, huh. She and Gladion actually have quite a bit in common in this interpretation – more than they’d each like to admit, I’d bet. Selene’s brashness and overwhelming confidence in her own prowess are mirrored in the way Gladion stages his emotions publicly and makes sure that everyone knows about his fervent desire to gain enough strength to stand alone and unbeaten. And they’re a lot more than Grimsley really wants to deal with, too; I like the constant sense of I wish these kids had like, 30% less energy that comes through the whole expedition. He seems to spend a lot of it being dragged this way and that by Selene, like a long-suffering charioteer who’s just given up and decided to let the horses do their own thing.

It’s cute that Selene’s natural excess is curbed when she starts talking to Lillie, though. :> I like Grimsley’s oblivious little observation that they’re close friends already. Grimsley, my guy, you don’t even know the half of it. :V I also really like the expansion of Selene’s backstory, with her mother having a concrete reason for uprooting the pair of them to Alola; I get the sense that there’s a story here, that there’s a reason she chose this university in this place so very far from home. It’ll be interesting to see if there’s anything else there under the surface. And I can’t leave this topic without saying how much I like the integration of the Hau’oli trainer school from the SM early game into Selene’s story, as well.

We’re kind of more doing the set-up for the assault on Po Town than the actual event this time around, but I don’t mind taking a little more time to gather everyone together and build up the tension a bit! There are some interesting parallels here – Grimsley and Nanu, two men who have a lot more in common than they’d like to admit, are teaming up, and Selene and Gladion, two kids who have a lot more in common than they’d like to admit, are also teaming up, and everything’s looking set for a lot of drama next time around! I’ll definitely be looking forward to it. :>

Got some typos and other minor things to end with, as usual:

There should be an ‘about’ after ‘bragging’.

There should be a ‘for’ after ‘approved’.

That should either be ‘Becky and I could use all the help we can get’ or ‘Becky and I could use the help’, I think. Or maybe it could be ‘Becky and I could use all your help’? It depends what exactly you want to go for.

That doesn’t quite hang together. ‘A growl of agreement’, maybe? ‘An agreeable growl’? Something like that.

This phrasing makes it seem like his being in the league was a one-time event, but what I think you mean is that it happened shortly after he joined the League, so maybe it’s worth rephrasing a bit?

Missing ‘would’ after ‘I’.

Missing ‘about’ before ‘how’.

That should be ‘Does’, rather than ‘Is’.

‘Onto’ shouldn’t be here.

I’m not quite sure what this sentence means, sorry.

Missing ‘who’ or ‘which’ before ‘also’.

‘Bona fide’ is two words.

That should be ‘on’, rather than ‘at’.

That should be ‘decided’, rather than ‘decides’.

And that about does it from me this time! Nice work, as ever; I’m looking forward to the push into Po Town!

Jester turning into Nanu and grinning is a very cute touch! And then he like, thrusts his claws in someone’s face and Gladion threatens to have him tear his face off. Trust Gladion to go the extra mile, huh. So melodramatic! Nice that Nanu and Grimsley find some common ground in immediately stepping in and saying hey, what the hell, kid, you can’t do that, too. :> Gladion’s mum might be the pokémon equivalent of Cruelle De Ville and his dad might’ve run off to plant magic beans on a desert island that may or may not be in its own pocket dimension, but at least he has these two keeping him on the straight and narrow. :P

After all the set-up, this chapter’s full of action! We’ve got more battles – against grunts, mostly, so our heroes stomp all over them. But they’re still interesting, largely because of the grunts themselves. You really do a stellar job of capturing the ‘disaffected young disaster’ thing that makes Skull so distinctive! I can’t remember if I’ve mentioned it before, but it definitely comes through very strongly in this chapter – particularly with Jazzy and Deedee, who are kind of amazing with how they don’t even pretend to be focusing on the battle, rearranging their date plans as they go and walking away hand in hand like the whole thing didn’t even really happen. Plus the two grunts arguing over their shirts! They’re much too good to not show up as a cameo, haha. :>

Also, I love that Nanu’s been here multiple times and so far the worst that’s happened is that they’ve teased him about being old enough to be their grandfather. I’ve got no follow-up there, I just think that’s great and wanted to call attention to it.

Anyway, Guzma definitely needs some safe computing tips. I bet Plumeria told him not to use his partner pokémon’s name as a password; that seems like the kind of thing she’d know about. But, y’know, I guess Guzma isn’t the type to listen. Still, it means Nanu’s investigation is proceeding nicely – and that Selene has connected the dots and learned that Lusamine’s backing the Skulls a lot earlier than she does in-game. And we’ve got a big showdown coming up next, too! I love that ending line. It’s very Nanu, and consequently very understated, but without losing the drama of the situation.

To finish off, I have a few minor typos and things:

Missing an ‘up’ there – either after ‘held’, or ‘hands’.

Something’s missing from this sentence – are the buildings shaped like pokémon and poké balls? Because if so, it’s the word ‘shaped’ that needs adding.

Missing an S off the end of ‘lampposts’.

I feel like that should be ‘made of’ or something, rather than ‘in’.

The words are a little out of order here – that should be ‘The latter reminded Grimsley off the several Trubbish’.

Missing an M from ‘Grimsley’ here.

That should be ‘slam’, rather than ‘slammed’.

That should either be ‘Null is’, or ‘Null’s not’.

That should be ‘on’, rather than ‘at’.

That should be ‘formed’, rather than ‘form’.

That should be ‘ram’, rather than ‘rammed’.

That should be ‘in’, rather than ‘on’.

That should be ‘by’, rather than ‘from’ – the tapus are taking the title away, not having it taken from them.

Missing an S off the end of ‘hurts’.

‘Had’ shouldn’t be there.

That’s all! I’m really looking forward to seeing how this confrontation goes down. With Selene, Gladion, Nanu and Grimsley all together, they definitely have strength on their side, but this isn’t going to be an easy one. Nice work! I’ll be back for more next time. :>

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Chapter Seventeen
Nasty Plot (Part Two)

Being in Shady House reminded Grimsley of his old mansion in Castelia City. His family’s mansion had marble flooring, pristine white walls, and many rooms with butlers ready to serve. The backyard was a lush garden filled with roses and small ponds. After his father had died, the mansion was sold and his mother moved to Mistralton City to live a quieter life. Grimsley frowned at seeing this mansion in such a bad state.

"Did you know who the previous owner of this mansion was?" Grimsley asked as he and Gladion took the stairs. His nose wrinkled at the lingering smell of alcohol and cigarettes.

"Not sure. I heard Team Skull took over Po Town and forced the last owner out."

Grimsley nodded in acknowledgment, and then he thought about Nebby. A large chandelier blocked the right side of the path, so they took the left side.

"You mentioned to Selene that Nebby is very important, and shouldn't be in Team Skull's hands. How come?"

"Nebby has the ability to create wormholes. They're supposed to be rare occurrences here. Recently though, the wormholes keep coming."

"So you're saying Nebby has been causing those wormholes?" Grimsley asked, raising a brow.

"I don't know. Either them or an Ultra Beast. You know what those are, right?"

"I've heard of them in passing." Grimsley then asked, "Do you have any idea why Lillie has Nebby?"

"She probably ran away with them because of our mother."

When he and Gladion made it to the second floor, they stopped. Grimsley gave him a baffled stare.

"Your mother?" He recalled Lusamine's press conference and mused how she and Gladion looked similar. Upon that realization, he said, "Then you're Lusamine Jubert's son?"

An odd noise left Gladion's throat. He shifted his gaze away from him and squeezed his right wrist.

"What makes you think the two are the same person?” he said in a growling voice.

Startled by his tone, Grimsley blinked and cleared his throat. “I mean, it isn’t hard to see the resemblance with you two.”

“There could be anyone with hair and eye color like ours!” Gladion snapped.

Grimsley lowered his head, frowning. “Geez, you don’t have to be so dramatic.”

Facing back at him, Gladion sighed and his shoulders slumped. “Let’s just drop the topic for now and focus on finding Selene and Kahuna Nanu.”

Grimsley's frown deepened. It should be expected Gladion wouldn’t reveal that immediately to him.

Before he could respond, someone's voice and footsteps caused him and Gladion to look forward. Guzma and his group had stepped back inside from the balcony. Grimsley and Gladion moved to the corner of the wall.

"That stupid bird ruined my sunglasses," Guzma said. "I blew so much money for these!"

"Don't worry, Big G!" Lorenzo said, slamming his fist on his palm. “I'll knock that Honchkrow out for you!"

"I still can't shake that feeling I've seen that Honchkrow before," Felicia asked, pursing her lips.

A beat, and then Guzma's face hardened. "That's the old man's Pokémon. He's creating a distraction."

"Huh? Why's that?" Dennis asked, tilting his head.

"Probably to help that girl get that Yungoos. C'mon, guys!" Guzma gestured his arm for them to follow him, and they headed to his room.

"We should help Officer Nanu and Selene," Gladion said, and Grimsley nodded.

They moved forward to the other side of the floor. Once they almost reached Guzma's room, the door still open, they stopped when they heard a conversation going on.

"I'm not here for you, bumhead!" Selene said sharply, followed by a Yungoos's hiss.

"No bone to pick with me, huh? Then it's for Yungoos, I guess. And you brought this washed up cop with you to help."

Grimsley and Gladion exchanged worried glances. While one of the grunts yelled for recognizing Nanu's Honchkrow, they stepped closer towards the door. Gladion stayed behind Grimsley, and they continued to eavesdrop on the conversation.

“You were snooping around my laptop, too. For what purpose?”

“I know your connection with Aether, and why you have your guys get Cosmog.”

Grimsley's forehead knitted into a furrowed brow. He stared over his shoulder at Gladion and asked, "Aether's working with Team Skull?"

"This is the first time I've heard any of this," Gladion said, wearing a similar expression. "Now I even have more questions for him."

Grimsley wasn't sure how to respond to that. He pointed his finger to the door.

"On the count of three." With each count, Grimsley flashed his fingers up. "One, two... three!"

He and Gladion dashed into the room. They were greeted by the sight of Guzma and his grunts surrounding Nanu, Selene, and her Pokémon: Meli and the sea lion Pokémon Grimsley had seen on television. The girl held the Yungoos against her chest. Everyone turned their attention to them.

"Gladion! Guzma!" Selene exclaimed, both out of relief and nervousness.

Nanu reacted with a slight twitch on his face. "You guys are late to the party."

"You got some explaining to do, Guzma!" Gladion said, pointing at him.

Guzma glared, then flashed him a grin. "Hi there, Glady boy. Don't tell me you're helping that girl, too?"

"I'm helping her so that I can talk to you."

"You think going against Team Skull will grab the boss's attention?" Lorenzo asked.

Guzma pressed his lips and folded his arms against his chest. "Actually, I shouldn't be surprised. My peeps told me how much you've been slacking on your duties lately." After he finished, Guzma directed his stare at Grimsley. "And who are you, kimono wearing dude?"

Grimsley narrowed his eyes, and he tugged on his scarf. Before he could respond, Selene did it for him.

"He's Grimsley from Unova's Elite Four. His Pokémon are very strong, so you better watch out!" she said. Meli barked in agreement.

"She's right on both accounts," Grimsley said in a coy voice. "Grimsley Thomas, one of Unova's Elite Four. I'm the real deal."

"Hold up, Elite Four?" Felicia asked in shock. "Jeez, no wonder he was able to beat us so badly."

Guzma raised a suspicious brow and snorted. "So you're from one of those Pokémon Leagues? I bet you heard about the one that's about to make its debut in Alola."

"I have, yes. I even gave some tips to Professor Kukui on how to run his Pokémon League."

Guzma glared at Grimsley. "That's so noble of you to help Kukui out." He grinned, and his fist slammed on his chest. "However, Alola needs no Pokémon League because I'm the strongest trainer on these islands!"

Selene laughed. "Oh, please! You said that when we first met, and I beat you!"

Guzma's eyes twitched, and he jerked his head in Selene's direction. "Trying to be a smartass, huh? That does it, I'm gonna destroy all of you!"

He pulled two pokéballs out and released his Pokémon. One was a Masquerain, fluttering around like a butterfly. Another Pokémon was one Grimsley never seen before-- a large arthropod creature with a hunched posture and armor plating. They raised their head and made clicking noises with their mandibles.

"Run!" Gladion yelled.

Everyone made a dash out of the room. Selene held Yungoos while her Pokémon followed her behind, Poppers riding on Meli's back. Both of Guzma's Pokémon unleashed jet streams of water and sharp gusts of wind at them, often missing and hitting the walls and ceiling. Grimsley glanced over his shoulder to see Guzma and his grunts trailing behind, so he and the others picked up their pace.

"Hey, let us help too!" Lorenzo said. He, Dennis, and Felicia released their Pokémon: Spinarak, Haunter, and Raticate respectively. Their Pokémon released a series of spiderwebs, frost-laced beams, and crimson-colored balls at the group.

“Great idea going through that man’s laptop,” Grimsley said sarcastically, and that earned a glare from Nanu.

“Not now! Just keep running!”

The four hurried down the stairs, avoiding the onslaught of attacks being thrown at them. Selene's Pokémon fought back with high-pressured water jets and sharp rocks but had to keep up with the humans. They soon made it to the floor and kept running, almost to the front door exit.

"Goliath, Spitball, block that door!" Guzma ordered from up the stairs, pointing at the door.

Goliath jumped down and blocked the door while Spitball dived down and fluttered next to the large arthropod. There was another door, but the grunts’ Pokémon blocked that too. That made everyone stop and back away.

“Hmph, don’t think you guys will get away easily.” Guzma’s face was split into a wide grin. Behind him, his grunts wore similar expressions. “Get them!”

“Looks like we’re having ourselves a Battle Royale.” Nanu pulled out a pokéball and released his Pokémon. An Absol appeared and he tossed his head up and howled. Grimsley lifted his forehead with great interest. He wondered if there would be a chance for Roulette and Nanu’s Absol to meet. Gladion also released his Pokémon, Null.

“I’ll take on Guzma while you guys handle the rest,” Selene said, still holding the Yungoos. Her Pokémon nodded in agreement and turned to Guzma’s Pokémon with determined looks.

All three grunts gave orders to their Pokémon. Spinarak fired off glowing barbs from his mouth, Haunter glowed yellow and released a blast of lightning, and Raticate opened his jaws wide and charged.

Grimsley, Nanu, and Gladion also gave out commands, and everyone’s Pokémon clashed. Raz countered Spinarak’s Poison Sting with Shadow Ball. The orb directly hitting him directly; the Spinarak squealed in pain. Null howled when Felicia’s Raticate sunk his teeth into their leg, but then they lifted a glowing claw, swiped the big rat’s face, and left a claw mark there. Nanu’s Absol crouched down and the horn on his forehead shined a dark color. He cut through the blast of lighting, splitting it and leaving sparks of electricity in the air.

Felicia narrowed her eyes and her lips twitched. “Freeze that kid’s Pokémon!”

“Iron Head, go!” Gladion said with the swipe of his arm.

Raticate inhaled and released a beam of cold energy straight at Null. The strange creature recoiled and some pieces of ice got stuck on their skin. Null dashed and rammed Raticate into the ground.

The Haunter was drawing close to Raz, so Grimsley had her stay on guard. Dark vapors formed around Raz’s leg, and she reached and swiped at the ghost with her extended claw. Haunter grimaced and backed away. In that instant, Lorenzo had Spinarak fire tiny missiles at Raz. Raz flinched a little at the stings, but otherwise still stood strong.

Grimsley’s lips curled into a small smile. “All right Raz, now go for--”

“Psycho Cut!”

Absol rushed forward, his horn glowing a soft pink. He slashed Spinarak, sending the small bug slamming into a wall. Spinarak collapsed upon impact.

“I was just about to finish it,” Grimsley said, furrowing his brow at him. This was the second time he had done that.

Nanu shrugged. “You still need to pick up the pace.”

Grimsley forced himself to not roll his eyes. Guzma and Selene’s booming voices filled the room, and he turned to see their Pokémon making their moves. Spitball screeched an ear-piercing cry and made Poppers wince, only for the sea lion to soak him with high-pressure water. Goliath and Meli collided head-on and pushed each other. After a short struggle, Meli pinned Goliath down and climbed on top of him. The two stared at each other, and then Goliath faded into red light. Guzma glared down at the pokéball on his belt.

“Stupid Emergency Exit,” Guzma grumbled. “Tassel, you’re up!”

He pulled out another pokeball and released a Pinsir. The stag beetle Pokémon moved his pincers and made clicking noises. A small yellow and orange orb was tied onto one of the pincers.

Grimsley did a double-take. Wait, was that a MegaStone?

Before he could think further on that, Raz’s screams brought his attention back to the chaotic battle. She and Raticate bounced off dark blobs and frost-laced beams at each other. Null and Absol were busy with Haunter, the ghost shooting beams of dark energy at them while the two unleashed their ghostly and green-lit claws at him.

“Poison Jab at Helmet-Head there!” Dennis said, pointing at Null.

Haunter cackled, his hand glowing purple. He jabbed Null’s throat, causing them to fall back. Null winced and could barely open one eye now, their legs shaking. A purple bruise blossomed where Haunter had hit.

“Null!” Gladion called out urgently. Despite not looking well, his Pokémon let out a reassuring bark.

Grimsley pressed his lips and pointed at the Haunter. “Get that Haunter mid-air!”

With an excited meow, Raz jumped up and sank her teeth into Haunter’s body. Haunter cried out in pain, struggling to let go of her grip. She flipped Haunter over mid-air and threw him into the ground like a hammer. Unable to get up. Haunter groaned and stayed still. Dennis’s face fell, and he reluctantly recalled his Pokémon.

“Yo, it down to you and our boss now,” Dennis said.

“I know.” Felicia gritted her teeth and clenched her fist. “Flame Wheel at everyone!”

Grimsley’s face tensed with Gladion and Nanu having similar expressions. Raticate’s body burst into flames, and he rolled at a blazing pace. A trail of burnt marks was left on the carpet. Raz and Null jumped out of the way. Absol attempted to move too, but Raticate struck him on his side and he fell. He picked himself up, grimacing at the small burns visible on his fur. Raticate resumed rolling around.

“Stop that Raticate before it gets you, Null!” Gladion said.

“You do the same, Raz!” Grimsley followed.

Just as Raticate reached Raz, she smacked the dark-furred rat with her glowing tail like a baseball. Raticate picked himself up but was unable to recover when Null rammed him straight into a pile of furniture.

Barely standing, Null’s legs shook and they let out deep pants. The purple bruise on their throat turned darker. Eventually, Null collapsed and fell on the floor.

“No!” Gladion rushed to Null’s side. He dropped to his knees and stroked their fur. Grimsley, Raz, and Absol looked on in stunned silence. Nanu’s brow furrowed.

When Raticate was knocked out, Felicia returned him and glared at Grimsley, Nanu, and Gladion. “Not only we were beaten by those old dudes again, but also with that punk!”

Nanu grunted and narrowed his eyes. “Goes to show that you shouldn’t underestimate them.”

All three grunts exchanged frustrated glances at each other.

“Whatever man, we did our part.” Lorenzo whipped his head at Guzma’s direction. “Yo Guzma, we’re gonna bounce now!” He, Felicia, and Dennis dashed off in the direction of the other exit.

“Wait, what?” Guzma asked, glaring at his grunts. The second his gaze tore off from the battle, Meli fired off sharp rocks at Spitball’s wings and face. The Masquerain squealed in pain and fell down. Guzma’s eyes flew wide, and he gritted his teeth. “Son of a…”

“You should’ve paid attention!” The grin on Selene’s face disappeared when she noticed Gladion and Null. “Gladion! Null!”

Selene and her Pokémon rushed to Gladion and Null’s side. She kneeled down and pulled an antidote bottle from her bag, spraying it on them. Null made whining noises from the sting. Patting their cheek, Selene gave out shushing noises and reassuring Null that everything was going to be fine.

Guzma stared at Selene taking care of Null for a moment. He faced Grimsley and Nanu, flashing them a grin.

“While that girl is busy playing nurse, I’ll destroy you two!” He pulled out Goliath’s pokeball and the water bug was released once more. Both Goliath and Tassel gave menacing stares. “Goliath, Sucker Punch that Absol! Tassel, cut up the kitty real good!”

Both of Guzma’s Pokémon dashed forward, Goliath raising his right claw and Tassel’s pincers glowing light green. The two men grimaced, but then they called out their commands.

“You do the same, boy!”

“Dodge, and then Shadow Ball, Raz!”

When Absol and Goliath’s claws collided, they kept pushing each other. They exchanged several blows at one another, each one harder than the last. Soon they backed away, glaring at one another with long pants.

Before Tassel’s pinchers could reach Raz, she moved away and spat her crimson orb straight onto his back. That made Tassel flinch and almost lost his footing, only to then spin around and scream.

“All right big boy, Razor Shell at both of them!” Guzma said, pointing at Goliath and then Nanu and Grimsley’s Pokémon. “And you Tassel, provide backup!”

Torrential waters formed on Goliath’s claws, and he rushed at his opponents. Both Raz and Absol were able to dodge his swipes, making it harder for Goliath to divide his attention to both. After she jumped away from another swipe, Raz’s tail glowed and she smacked Goliath’s face. Goliath backed away a few steps and shook himself, but still standing.

While Absol was distracted with Goliath, Tassel grabbed Absol’s horn with his pincers and squeezed him tight. Absol cried out in protest, struggling to get out of his grip, and the Pinsir slammed him down like a wrestler. The Disaster Pokémon picked himself quickly and a ghostly claw formed on one of his paws. He sliced Tassel’s face and left a large claw mark on them, making Tassel screech and cover his face.

Guzma’s eyes grew wide, and he grunted. “I have to admit, not too shabby you two. However, I’m done playing around. Let’s show them your true power, Tassel!”

He lifted his golden watch, a Keystone attached to it. Grimsley’s stomach jumped.

Guzma touched the Keystone and both he and Tassel were bathed in golden light. Grimsley and Nanu shielded their faces from the brightness, and when the light faded Tassel’s appearance changed.

A pair of yellow wings with orange blades sprouted out of Tassel’s back. The spikes on his pincers grew, and his eyes were the same color as his wings. Tassel flapped his wings, lifting himself in the air. Guzma crossed his arms, a wide grin stretching across his face.

Grimsley winched, having flashbacks to his battle with Ryuki. He glanced to see he didn’t have his Keystone with him; he had put it away in his bag, along with the Absolite, before he left Malie City. A part of him wanted to slap himself for doing that.

Gladion, Null, Selene, and her Pokémon all looked up at Tassel in amazement.

Nanu stared up at the Mega Pinsir as if he already expected Guzma to have it. “Better watch out. When they fight, Mega Pinsir can get nasty.” He pointed at Tassel and told Absol to block any move Tassel makes.

Grimsley nodded and grunted in agreement. He stared at Goliath, commanding Raz to strike with her claws.

Raz’s ghostly claws clashed with Goliath’s water-covered ones. Liquid and vapor mixed together and created puffs of smoke. Their assaults bounced off each other like small explosions.

While Raz and Goliath were in conflict, Absol kept blocking Tassel’s glowing pincers with his horn. Tassel found an opening and struck Absol’s neck. Absol cried in pain and fell on the floor. Seconds passed before he picked himself up, his legs shaking. Buzzing with excitement, Tassel flapped his wings harder and spun around like a whirlpool.

Grimsley bit his lips and his fingers twitched. Type disadvantage aside, it seemed Guzma’s Pokémon won’t be easy to take down.

After she was done with Null, Selene’s eyes grew wide, and a determined expression crossed her face. She handed the Yungoos to Gladion, stood up, and thrust her arm at Tassel.

“Meli! Poppers! Help out!”

Both of her Pokémon barked and sprang into action. Poppers fired off a jet of high-pressure water while Meli jumped out and released several large rocks. Tassel dodged the Water Gun and some of the rocks, but then a few large ones hit his face and one shot inside his mouth. The Mega Pinsir wheezed and almost choked but managed to spit out the rock. Meli fired off more rocks at Tassel and one of them struck his wing. That caused Tassel to be unbalanced in the air and he crashed into the floor. Tassel got himself up quickly, and he and Guzma glared at Meli.

“Done watching over that boy’s freakshow, huh?” Guzma let out a sharp whistle. “Get her Pokémon, you two!”

His Pokémon obliged. Goliath rushed at Meli in a blink of an eye and swiped her with one of his claws, making her hit the floor. Tassel approached Poppers and about to use his pinchers at him, but missed when Poppers moved aside. The Mega Pinsir took this opportunity to strike Meli just as she barely got herself up. Tassel grabbed Meli’s throat and pinned her down. Once he let go, Meli stayed on the floor and unable to get up.

Knew Meli couldn’t hold on any longer, Selene sighed in defeat and returned her Pokémon.

“You did great, Meli,” she whispered to Meli’s pokéball with a sad smile. She glared at Guzma and his Pokémon.

Grimsley was taken aback by both of Guzma’s Pokémon’s strengths. Nanu’s expression from when Tassel had Mega Evolved hadn’t changed, but it was likely he had a lot on his mind.

“I’ll deal with the Golispod while you two take care of the Mega Pinsir,” Nanu said. Grimsley and Selene nodded at each other in agreement.

After Guzma yelled out his orders, torrential waters covered Goliath’s body and Tassel’s pincers glowed green. Absol formed a large claw, and he and Goliath went back and forth with their blows.

Raz spat out Shadow Balls at Tassel while Poppers sang and let out a beam of purple hearts. Tassel flew in rapid speed, avoiding their attacks.

Raz had battled against Mega Evolved Pokémon before. On occasion, it was against contenders who brought them to the Unova Pokémon League. Most of the time though it was during practice battles with Roulette whenever she was in that form. Raz learned to push back her strength, and she was doing the same with Tassel whenever he approached her with his pincers.

Nanu and Selene’s Pokémon weren’t half bad either. Absol held himself well against a Pokémon with tough defenses, and Poppers while more passive than Raz still kept up the pace. Alolan trainers were truly amazing, Grimsley mused.

“Stone Edge at the Brionee and Liepard!”

Tassel screeched in excitement and slammed himself on the floor. Tall stone pillars popped up, moving toward Grimsley and Selene’s Pokémon. Raz and Poppers scrambled to get out of the way, but the stones caught up to them first. After being dropped on the ground, they slowly picked themselves up. Both had deep cuts on their bodies, Poppers more so than Raz.

“Selene! Grimsley!” Gladion yelled from the sidelines. He stood up with wide eyes, the Yungoos he was holding also frightened.

“Are your guys’ Pokémon all right?” Nanu asked, face hardened with concern.

“I think so, but Guzma’s tougher than the last time I went against him,” Selene said with narrowed eyes.

Upon paying closer attention, Grimsley noticed a part of Tassel’s wing had been clipped off and parts of his shell-skin damaged. Selene did battle with him while he and Nanu were busy with the Team Skull grunts. Tassel was indeed strong, and he was reminded of his fight with Mimikins.

“Foul Play at that Mega Pinsir!”

Guzma grimaced at that command. “Grab that cat and slam her on the floor!”

Opening his pincers wide, Pinsir swopped down towards Raz. The second he was near her, she moved aside and grabbed the edge of his right wing with her jaws, turning him around and throwing him on the floor. When Tassel didn’t get up, she meowed and lifted her head high.

Guzma took deeps, his chest rising and falling. Syncing his energy with Mega Pinsir had taken its toll. He returned Tassel back in his pokéball.

“Don’t celebrate just yet,” he said in a raspy voice and grunted. “I still have my boy Goliath here.” He pointed at Goliath, raising his claws and moving his mouth in a menacing manner. The other Pokémon were exhausted, too.

Selene gazed down at the Z-Ring on her wrist, and she pulled out a blue Z-Crystal from her bag. When she hesitated using it, Nanu held his hand up.

“Wait, your Brionne isn’t fit enough to do a Z-Move,” he said in a low voice. He faced Grimsley. “Grimsley, have you been practicing the pose for your Z-Crystal?”

Grimsley flinched and raised a confused brow. “Yes, I have. Acerola taught me it some days back.”

“Good enough for me.” Nanu pulled out another Z-Ring. It was a similar design to his, but the strap was red instead of black. “Catch!”

Nanu threw the Z-Ring, and Grimsley caught it with one hand. He wrapped it around his wrist, which was tight and cold against his skin.

“Are you ready, Raz?” Grimsley asked, pulling out the Ghostium-Z.

Raz threw her head back and meowed, which was more than satisfactory response. Grimsley put the crystal inside the Z-Ring, and the Ghostinum-Z sparkled in bright light.

Nanu also put a Z-Crystal inside his Z-Ring, which did the same. He looked over his shoulder at Selene.

“You should step aside, kid. This might get messy.”

Selene gasped in surprise, and then she picked Poppers up and moved to Gladion’s side.

Guzma snorted, folding his arms against his chest. “Yo Goliath, wait until they finish their Z-moves,” he said. Goliath made some clicking noises and stood on guard.

Nanu faced back at Grimsley. “On the count to three we’ll use Never-Ending Nightmare together, got it?”

Grimsley hummed in agreement. Nanu started the countdown: three, two, one...

He and Nanu kneeled down and swayed their bodies in a floating motion. They ended their pose with them stretching their arms forward, Grimsley feeling cold energy curling around him.

Absol and Raz dropped down in their best scary poses, and a golden aura surrounded them and their trainers. Like when Acerola had used that Z-Move, the air turned cold and purple flames burst out from both Pokémon.

During his training in Malie Gardens, Grimsley had practiced the pose for Never Ending Nightmare with Roulette and Raz. His Pokémon couldn’t do it fully due to them being on four legs, so they followed up with sharp stances. Kukui and Acerola had told him the pose and the move’s typing was only part of the equation, and that the most important rule was the strong connection between Pokémon and trainer. Grimsley was certain he had no trouble with his Pokémon’s bonds.

“Sucker Punch both of them!” Guzma yelled out.

Goliath dashed and, in a blur, was already in front of Raz. Before she could finish the Z-Move, Goliath punched her on the chin and she dropped on the floor. He did the same thing to Absol, and Nanu’s Pokémon also fell.

The light on Grimsley’s and Nanu’s Z-Crystals faded. They gave each other stunned looks. Grimsley thought it was clever Guzma had used Sucker Punch to his advantage.

At the sidelines, Selene and Gladion gasped. Grimsley spotted the girl looking down at her Z-Ring before facing back to the battle.

Raz and Absol got up, but they took deep breaths and their posture unsteady. Goliath looked just as exhausted, his shoulders and arms slacking.

Guzma burst into laughter, holding onto his stomach. “You guys think Z-Moves will work? Ha, think again! Now Goliath, finish those--”

He stopped when a burst of bright light covered the room. Selene commanded, “Hydro Vortex!” in a booming voice, and a violent whirlpool sucked Goliath in like a tornado. After being thrown into a pile of boxes, Goliath rose up and screamed with arms raised up high.

“What the?” Guzma jerked his head and glared at Selene. He snorted. “Of course you had to play a hero there.”

She let out a deep breath, her shoulders rising and falling. Her Pokémon was tired as well, and he collapsed.

“Poppers!” Selene rushed to Popper’s side and picked him up. He looked at her with weary eyes and gave a low bark. She hugged him, nuzzling his face.

Grimsley had seen Selene used a Z-Move when they battled yesterday, but seeing another one in action still made his stomach jump. He glanced at Nanu, his face having an indifferent expression.

“I’ll finish this,” Nanu told him and he looked at Absol’s direction. “We’re gonna try our Z-move again!”

Absol barked in acknowledgment and prepared his stance. Raz backed away to give him space, going to Grimsley’s side. Nanu executed the pose for the Ghostinum-Z again, and bright light bathed both of them. Purple flames covered Absol’s body, a rush of cold air passing by. Dark liquid pooled the floor like a tarpit.

“Counter with Liquidation!”

Goliath was barely standing now, but nonetheless he obliged. A burst of massive water surrounded him, and he hurried off. The black liquid didn’t slow him down one bit. Several tendrils sprouted out and attempted to grab him, but he swiped away each one. He and Absol collided, and an explosion occurred.

Puffs of smoke rolled in, causing everyone to cough when they inhaled it. As soon as the air cleared, both Goliath and Absol lay on the floor.

Grimsley sighed in relief, glad that Pokémon was finally defeated. Raz rubbed onto his leg, and he lowered himself to scratch her chin.

“Guzma, what is wrong with you!” Guzma yelled to himself after he returned Goliath. He pulled his hair and stomped on the floor.

Nanu returned Absol, gazing down at the pokeball in his palm. “Good work there, boy.”

“Same goes for you, Raz.” Grimsley returned her also.

Gladion put the Yungoos down, who shrunk back and took a step forward. He glared at Guzma.

“Did you know anything about Cosmog? And was it you that sent your guys to get them?”

Guzma seemed to regard him a moment. A wide grin crossed his face.

“Yes on both accounts. In fact, I’m sure Plumeria and her boys made a second attempt at Aether House already.”

Gladion’s voice cracked and his right eye twitched. His palm almost reached a pokéball, but then Selene grabbed his wrist and gave him a stern look.

“Don’t. It’s not worth it.”

Gladion blinked and his lips were pressed together in a slight grimace. He groaned in defeat and let go of Selene’s grip. Grimsley found himself agreeing with Selene there.

“Anyways, that’s all you’ll get from me. My gang and I are leaving Po Town soon. If you want to know what’s the deal with Cosmog, go ask Mother Dearest.”

Guzma opened the front door and left the mansion. Grimsley fixed his suspicious stare on him until he was no more.

“You know what Guzma meant by that, Officer Nanu?” Gladion asked with a confused look on his face.

“Your mother has been paying big bucks to have him and his crew return Cosmog to her,” Nanu said, and Gladion’s eyes grew wide.

“Wait, really?” Gladion grabbed his shaking wrist, trying to steady it.

“Why were you on Guzma’s laptop in the first place?” Grimsley asked. He recalled Guzma screaming at Nanu and Selene for sneaking into his personal space before he and Gladion barged in.

“A friend of mine wanted me to look up if there were any connections between Aether and Team Skull. I didn’t like what I found.”

"We have to check to see if everyone in Aether House is all right,” Selene said.

Nanu grunted in agreement. “We can do that in the police station. Your guys’ Pokémon can be healed there too. Let’s go outside.”

Everyone stepped out of the Shady House. There were no Team Skull grunts around, so Grimsley assumed all of them had fled.

When the group reached already halfway through the town, they noticed Nanu’s Honchkrow perched on a tree. Nanu whistled, which caused the bird to fly back to him. He said thanks for distracting Guzma and returned him inside his pokeball. At that moment, a loud shriek erupted the skies and Grimsley gazed up to see Hau and Acerola riding on a pair of Xatu.

“Uncle Nanu!” Once the Xatu landed, Acerola hopped off and approached the group. The Yungoos rushed to her, giving her a happy cry. She picked him up. “Thank goodness you guys are alright.”

“Is something the matter?” Nanu asked with concern.

“Big time,” Hau said, also getting off from his Xatu. “While you guys were away, Lillie disappeared.”

Everyone didn’t react to the news well. Grimsley swallowed hard and pressed his lips. Nanu’s eyes narrowed, staring into the distance. Selene gasped in shock. Gladion’s expression tightened.

“How?” Selene asked.

A deep frown crossed Acerola’s face. “Plumeria came back not long after you and Grimsley left. Lillie turned herself in so that no one else got hurt.”

“And you let that happen?” Gladion asked, his voice on edge.

Hau lowered his head and his shoulders slumped. "I'm supposed to be a trainer! But when it came down to it, Lillie had to protect me... Lillie, who's not even a trainer to begin with!"

Gladion raised a brow, and he seemed to consider Hau’s words for a moment.

Selene rubbed a fist against her chest. She faced Grimsley.

“You were right that this was a trap. If I hadn’t left in the first place, none of this would’ve happened.”

Grimsley frowned and pressed his lips. “What’s important now is what you plan to do next. I assume it’s getting back your friend.”

“That’s how you guys are gonna make up to me. I have an idea where Team Skull’s taking her.”

“Wait, really?” Hau asked, eyes growing wide. “Where?”

“Aether Paradise. That’s where Lillie and I came from.”

A horrified look crossed Nanu’s face. “No, you kids aren’t going there! You guys don’t know what you’re in for.”

Frowning, Grimsley believed they were charging into trouble far worse than Team Skull. It was better that they stay put.

“I agree with Nanu here. You already dealt one card when facing Team Skull. If I were you I would stop there.”

“But our friend is in trouble!” Selene said. “You’re telling us we should back out?”

“I also have to agree with Uncle Nanu,” Acerola said, her tone uncharacteristically serious. “You guys are amazing trainers, but I think this is better left to the adults.”

Selene and Hau’s faces fell. Gladion grunted and narrowed his eyes at Nanu.

“Remember when you told me I should do my second trial on this island, Officer Nanu?” Gladion asked.

“Yeah I did, what about it?”

“Well, a few days ago I went and did the trial in Mount Hokulani and I now I have two Z-Crystals.”

He approached Nanu and pulled out two Z-Crystals, the Ghostium-Z and a yellow one. Grimsley mused the second one must be the Electricium-Z Sophocles and Molayne had told him about.

“Oh yeah, I gave you the Ghostium-Z some weeks ago!” Acerola said, beaming.

“Wait, you’re taking the Island Challenge too?” Hau asked.

“I am, but got distracted with being an errand boy for Team Skull.” He faced back at Nanu. “If I can get your Z-Ring and Z-Crystal, then I’m more than prepared to face Aether.”

“Hey, I want a Grand Trial with you, too!” Selene said with raised fists. “If we win, then you have to let us go!”

A smirk curled on Grimsley’s lips. “So you guys are making a bet with him. I would like to see that.”

“Same here!” Hau said. “I want to see how Kahuna Nanu battles before I do my Grand Trial with him.”

Raising a brow at Hau, Nanu asked, “And what about you, Hala’s kid? You want a Grand Trial too?”

Hau jumped, looking flustered. “Oh, I’m not ready yet. I wanna help Selene and Gladion get Lillie back, though.”

Nanu stared at the children. After a moment, he sighed and ran his fingers through his hair.

“You guys just don’t know when to quit, huh? All right, you guys can do your Grand Trials tomorrow morning. Only if you win will I not stop you going to Aether.”

“All right!” Selene said, pumping her fist in the air. Gladion folded his arms against his chest and his nostrils flared.

“I would love to stay, but I have to take Yungoos back to the Aether House now. Also, tomorrow Sophocles is coming over for our Trial Captain meeting,” Acerola said. The Yungoos she held in her arms gave a soft growl.

“You two have a safe trip back!” Hau said.

“Thanks, we will! And good luck with your Grand Trial, Selene and Gladion!”

Acerola waved goodbye to them, and then she and Yungoos hopped onto one of the Xatu. They took off along with the other Xatu. Grimsley gazed up and let out a soft sigh.

“We should all call it a night,” he said.

“For once we agree on something,” Nanu said. “You all can stay in the police station for the night. Just be careful with stepping on the Meowth’s toys and food.”

Nanu headed toward that direction, everyone else following behind. While walking, Grimsley looked down at his Z-Ring and frowned.

He didn’t successfully execute a Z-Move because of Guzma making the first move. When Nanu did it on the second attempt and defeated Guzma in a draw, he was astonished at him more than ever before. He needed to properly do Never-Ending Nightmare to have Nanu take him seriously.


Author's Notes:
Guzma has a Mega Pinsir when you go against him in the Battle Tree in Moon and Ultra Moon. How he gets it will be discussed next chapter

As always, thanks to bobandbill for betaing. Next chapter, Grand Trial battle with Nanu! November is gonna be busy for me, but I'll try to have Chapter 18 within a few weeks. Catch ya next time!

Spitball as a name for a pretty flittering thing is kind of amazing. :D I mean yeah, it has logical origins, seeing as masquerain evolves from a water-type. But now that said water-type has evolved, that name has the same energy as, say, a tyranitar named Tiny. I love it.

Also it feels like a very Guzma-ish thing to call something, so points for that, too. :D



I always forget that you can teach raticate ice moves. Maybe I ought to use raticate in-game more often.



Dangit Nanu, quit sniping kills. :p



It was pretty clever, yeah.



I wonder what it's like to ride on a xatu. On the one hand, they seem shaped a bit awkwardly for that. On the other, they could probably use telekinesis to hold you steady, so it might actually be a pretty safe way to fly compared to some of the other flying pokémon out there.

Definitely better than flying via zubat, at least. :B



He's not kidding. My cats used to have some of those little plastic balls with the bells inside, and the loud CRACK those toys make when you step on them is startling as frick, especially when you're half-consciously shuffling your way to the bathroom in the middle of the night.


Guzma sure was relentless! It was pretty impressive, how long he was able to keep the fight going. Again, he really is fairly competent.

All right folks, so gonna have replies in this post and the next chapter in another post in a moment!

Sike Saner: Heh I thought of the nickname Spitball on the spot, glad to hear you liked it!

I was checking Raticate's moves, and yeah you can through TMs. They can learn Icy Wind through US/UM Move tutors too!



He can't help it, lmao.

Heh. I know Xatu aren't Ride Pokemon in-game, but I thought they're big enough to do so. And maybe!

Yes Guzma can be relentless there. I talked a bit more about him in my reply to girl-like-substance's review!

girl-like-substance:

Funny enough, in the original draft of Chapte One, I mentioned Grimsley actually living in the Unova Pokemon League headquarters, with apartments and training grounds for the Elite Four. I took that part away when I had feedback Grimsley's call towards his mother didn't add much to the story. RIP that worldbuilding.

Gosh, I always seem to have characters suddenly blurt out personal information huh, hahaha. But yeah, Gladion seems to be the person to keep things to himself. I already posted the rewritten version of that scene on Discord and then fixed it here.

LOL yeah probably would've been more clever for Gladion and Grimsley to send out their Pokemon at least. As you pointed out, everyone running away is funnier. = P

Glad to hear to say the big fight overall went nicely! I did a detailed outline of how I want the action to go and took a few drafts of that before I settled with this one.

Also glad you mentioned Guzma there. A lot of the inspiration came from the anime where he's protrayed as a trainer who is quite good but reckless. His battles in the Pokemon League arc are hard to watch but still great characterization for him.

Cavespider:
Hey, glad to see you're checking this out again lol. I remember you reading the first two or three chapters at another forum site that's not here anymore. I'll reply to the first four chapters you reviewed on, but I hope you'll continue to read more!

First off I apologized if the "xxx" scene breaks are bothering you. Main reason I did that was for the FFnet version and didn't want to change scene breaks for other sites I was posting on. I don't think I'll fix those anytime soon due to me already long deep into the story, but I'll keep in mind on alternatives for future scene breaks.

Ch 1:



Kinda confused what you meant by attached to his parents specifically. Like how he looks like compare to his parents? I originally did that in the first draft, but then moved that description in the second chapter haha. Don't know about describing his hair moving would add much, though how his arms moved might make more sense. I most likely won't bother changing that atm due to wanting to move forward with my other chapters.

Ch 2:



I admit the description of the shops wasn't my favorite. I tried my best to make it as realistic as possible but kinda hard to do when the game had the mall over have a few shops lol.

Glad to hear you thought the personalities are organized so far!

Ch 3:



There have been several instances that Malie City gets compared to Kanto and Johto. The city's tagline, the buildings, and the tower in the Malie Gardens. One other reader mentioned I could do a bit more worldbuilding though and perhaps I'll do that someday, but not for a long while.

Yeah I had a lot of more character introduced this chapters haha. The original ones I think I could do better though.

Ch 4:



I mostly just want Nanu and Grimlsey to interact truthfully haha. In all seriousness, for the Hania Desert trip it was due to Nanu losing to Grimsley's coin toss. As the story goes further the two will get to know one another better.



Haha yeah Colress. At first I was indifferent to him, but then as he appeared in more scenes and I started to appreciate him more heh.

Oof, I misspelled Acerola's name a few times there? Maybe in the near distant future, I'll check on that.



My original intent for that ending was giving Grimsley a main goal for his trip in Alola, which was having a battle with Nanu. There is a follow up scene after that, but that's in Nanu's POV and I moved that in the next chapter.

I appreciate you checking out the first few chapters so far! Hopefully you'll continue to check out more!

So that's where that came from...








I am now imagining an alolan persian with wet fur. Said cat looks significantly smaller and deeply annoyed. :p



Oh man. If it is true, I wonder what kind of impact the results might have on him. I wonder if he truly knows what he might be in for...



Looks like Nanu had his own doubts as to whether or not Grimsley ought to be facing these sorts of things. Maybe he's right to dissuade the guy. And while Grimsley seems to be okay with letting the matter go for now, I can't help but wonder if something else might force him to engage it anyway...

All right, time for new chapter!

Chapter Nineteen
Dark Pulse

It had been a while since Grimsley was on a boat. He and Nanu rented one from the boat shop next to Route 16’s shores, and were heading towards Poni Island. Through the windows, he gazed at the ocean glimmering in the late afternoon sun and the various water Pokémon jumping out. Blackjack was released into the water and swimming in pace with the boat, so Grimsley kept an eye on him.

His thoughts wandered towards Nanu’s Grand Trial earlier. He had seen Gladion and Selene battle before, so he already expected them to be great. While Nanu was far from friendly, Grimsley didn’t expect him to be capable of such harsh words to them. He wondered if the Kahuna would do the same to him once they have their battle.

Grimsley was genuinely amazed at seeing Black Hole Eclipse in action. A powerful black hole that could even suck in a raging whirlpool. Nanu and Selene’s Z-Moves clashing together was the highlight of the match.

Despite having two Z-Crystals now, he still hadn’t mastered any Z-Moves yet. Nanu claimed he knew someone in Poni Island who could help him with that, so he hoped that would be the case.

Letting out a soft sigh, he leaned back in his seat and looked at Nanu. He had been driving the boat for a few hours now with a bored expression on his face.

“So how much longer until we get to Poni Island?” he asked.

“Probably sometime after nightfall. We’ll sleep in the Pokémon Center and then in the morning we’ll find my friends.”

“You mentioned someone there can help me with Z-Moves. Can you tell me more about them?”

“Her name is Mina, and she’s a trial captain like Acerola. She trains Fairy-type Pokémon but knows several Z-Moves, including the one for the Buginium-Z. She’s also an artist, loves to draw and paint.”

Mina: Grimsley heard that name before. It was when he, Nanu, Acerola, and Becky stopped by the abandoned Thrifty Market. He glanced at the window, Blackjack still keeping up with the boat.

“She sounds fascinating. I recall Acerola saying she did her trial before.”

“Yeah, she did. Mina has her head in the clouds at times, but she’s a good kid.” Nanu’s face changed to a more serious expression. “Before we land Poni Island, some words of advice. To you, Alola is a place to sightsee and unwind. Alola is more than that, though. There are people here who are hurting and the dangers are real.”

Confused at first, Grimsley’s head flinched back slightly and his eyebrows squished together. Sure, he came to Alola for a vacation, but that didn’t mean he was ignorant of the people living here. Right? He frowned, unsure of himself.

Nanu’s words of Alola kept repeating inside his head like a broken record throughout the rest of the boat ride.

xxx

By the time they arrived at their destination, it was nightfall with a full moon and stars in view. Nanu left his boat by the port where the other boats were, and he and Grimsley headed to the Pokémon Center.

Seafolk Village was a small settlement in Poni Island where the seafolk resided. Several houseboats stylized after different Pokémon were clustered together around the dock, with floating platforms connecting the homes together. The outside vendors that sold the jewelry and vegetables were closed for the night, but when those opened the villagers and visitors often checked them out. Uphill was the Pokémon Center and the farms where the other half of the population settled.

Ever since Kahuna Sofu had passed away a few years ago, Nanu would oversee the Poni trials. Far less trainers taking the island challenge made all the way through here than the Ula’Ula trials. He couldn’t blame them, though. Poni Island had canyons, caves, and tougher Pokémon that weren’t suited for inexperienced trainers. Usually trainers from this island would begin their island challenge in either Melemele or Akala Island first. Watching over two islands took a toll on Nanu, so he hoped Tapu Fini would choose a new Kahuna soon.

He left the past buried deep in the pit of his stomach for now.

The Pokémon Center was on top of a hillcliff above Seafolk Village. The building has two floors and its architecture similar to the other Pokémon Centers. There was a large courtyard where visitors could sit on the benches and gazed below the village and ocean.

He and Grimsley found the Pokémon Center and stepped inside. As expected, the lobby was clean and organized. There were only a few people inside, two of them watching the television and another one feeding their Pokémon some food. Nanu went up to the reception desk where Nurse Joy was, who greeted him with a warm smile.

“Kahuna Nanu! It’s been a while!”

“Well I got kahuna duties back in Ula’ula, and someone needed to watch over those Team Skull kids.”

“Ah huh,” Nurse Joy said, nodding in understanding. “So you’re here to do a Grand Trial?”

“Personal business, actually.” Nanu pointed at Grimsley and he said, “I would like two rooms for us here.”

“Of course. Your trainer licenses, please.”

The men handed Nurse Joy their licenses, and she grinned at them. “Oh my, a kahuna and an Elite Four member here!” After a few minutes of putting the information into the computer, she gave their licenses back and cardkeys.

“Here you go! Your rooms are 345 and 346.”

“Thanks, appreciate it,” Nanu said. He faced Grimsley. “Our rooms are upstairs, come on.”

Nanu gestured Grimsley for him to follow, and they headed towards the stairs. Before they reached there, a woman’s voice made them stop.

“Old man Nanu, is that you?”

Mina was in front of them, giving Nanu a small smile. She carried a sketchbook with her, and her shirt and face was still splattered in paint. He offered her a weak wave.

“Hello, Mina. Still doing your art, I see.”

Mina hummed and nodded. “I’ve done sketches of the Oricorio here today. They really know how to show off their dance moves!”

“Right.” Nanu cleared his throat. “Good thing you’re here as I actually wanted to see you.”

“Oh?” Mina tilted her head. “You have some new trial goers for me?”

“Not exactly. I have someone here who could use your help on using Z-Moves.” He turned to Grimsley and had his elbow poked his shoulder. Grimsley flinched for a second and approached Mina.

“I’m Grimsley of the Unova Elite Four. It’s a pleasure to meet you, Mina.” He and Mina shook hands.

“The Elite Four?” Mina let out a whistle. “Wow, that’s impressive. We don’t have those here, but I heard Alola gonna have their own Pokémon League very soon.”

“Indeed. I already had a sneak peak of the Elite Four thanks to Professor Kukui.”

“That’s also awesome! Anyways, Nanu said you need help with Z-Moves?”

“Yes. I have two Z-Crystals and would like to use Z-Moves for both.”

Grimsley pulled out the Ghostium-Z and Buginium-Z Crystals from the sleeves of his kimono and showed them to her. Mina gazed down at them on his palm and nodded.

“A Ghostium-Z and Buginium-Z? Nice. You know the poses for either of those?”

“I know the one for the Ghostium-Z, but I’m unable to execute the Z-Move properly.”

Mina regarded him for a moment, and she hummed.

“Sure, I can help. I’m usually out at Poni Beach, so meet me there tomorrow and I’ll see what I can do.”

“Poni Beach, tomorrow. Got it.”

Nanu stayed silent while Grimsley and Mina were talking, crossing his arms against his chest. He wondered how Looker and Anabel were doing. Should he ask her? It was a long shot, but better than nothing. He faced Mina.

“There’s something else I want to ask you. Have you seen a dark-haired man in a long coat and a purple-haired woman in a black suit?”

Mina threw him a confused stare, and she shook her head. “Nope, haven’t seen either of them. Friends of yours?”

“You can say that. They’re supposed to be staying here for a while.”

“I see, I see. Well, if I do see them I’ll let you know.”

“That would be great, thank you.”

“No problem! I have to get back home now, but it’s great seeing you two!” Mina waved one goodbye hand to them and left the Pokémon Center.

“Hopefully we’ll see your Interpol friends here,” Grimsley said. “Should we head to our rooms, then?”

Nanu grunted in agreement, having the same sentiment in wanting to see Anabel and Looker soon. They headed upstairs and retired for the night.

xxx

Nanu and Grimsley woke up late the next morning. After they ate breakfast, Grimsley watched the television in the lounge while Nanu used the videophone to call Acerola at the Aether House. He first told her that he would be away in Poni Island for a few days on a personal errand, and then went over how the Grand Trial with Selene and Gladion had gone.

“So Selene and Gladion completed their Ula’ula trial? I’m so happy for them!”

“They were a little soft at first, but after giving them some words of encouragement they pulled through.”

Acerola pouted and had her hands on her sides. “Oh, really? I’ve seen your Grand Trials and you’re more blunt than Kahunas Hala or Olivia!”

Nanu flinched and a “tch” sound left his throat. He narrowed his eyes at her.

“You got me there, kid,” he said, and Acerola giggled.

“Either way, wished I was there to see it! So they’re at Aether Paradise now, then?”

“They went along with their friend, Hau. I still think the rescue should be better left to the adults, but what can you do?” Nanu then asked, “Since I’m going to be in Poni Island for a bit, can you check on the Meowth until I get back?”

“Sure!” Acerola said, beaming. “I always love playing with them and rubbing their bellies!”

With a snort, Nanu shook his head. Every time Acerola visited the police station, she would play with the Meowth. Most of them liked her back, so it was better that way than them bothering him.

“Of course you do.” He shifted his gaze away from the screen for a second. “If you need anything, you know how to reach me.”

“Okay! You and Grimsley have fun in Poni Island!” Acerola said, flashing him a grin.

Once they hung up, the screen on Acerola’s side turned black. Nanu sighed and got up to where Grimsley was. He joined with him on the couch.

“You let Acerola know we’re in Poni Island?” Grimsley asked, and Nanu nodded.

“Told her we’ll be here for a few days or so. She’ll also be watching over the Meowth while I’m gone.”

Right now the television broadcasted the news. After the reporter finished warning about high surfs in Akala Beach, the next segment was on the upcoming Alola Pokémon League.

“Alola’s first Pokémon League is right on track on making its grand debut in spring next year. Construction of the stadium on top of Mount Lanakila is continuing without much delays. While the majority of the populace are excited, there are some that worry the Pokémon League will replace the island challenge and its traditions. We talked with Professor Leilani Kukui and two of the trainers he had chosen for the Elite Four, Kahili Hano and Molayne Velvet.”

The television screen switched to Professor Kukui, Kahili, and Molayne outside the Hokulani Observatory.

“When Professor Kukui first came to me on this ambitious undertaking, this is an opportunity I couldn’t pass up,” Kahili said, smiling at the camera. Molayne wore a similar expression. “I can’t wait to serve as one of Alola’s top trainers.”

“He assured us that the island challenge will still be here,” Molayne said. “Think of the Elite Four as an extension to our trial captains and kahunas. Miss Hano and I will help the islands with resources, check up on the trials, and oversee the final trial before the trainer takes on the Pokémon League.”

“I met with Kahili and Molayne over a week ago,” Grimsley said. Nanu glanced to see a small smile on his lips. “I think they’ll make fine Elite Four trainers.”

Back to the television, Kukui’s face was shown. He flashed the camera his widest grin.

“For our grand debut it’ll work a bit differently from other Leagues. It’ll be an all out tournament with the Elite Four, Kahunas, Trial Captains, and nominated trainers from Alola!” He paused. “I’ve always valued our old traditions here in Alola, but it’s time to make a Champion for the whole world to see! That’s why we’re having our own Pokémon League and Elite Four, yeah!”

Nanu watched the segment with an indifferent expression. He had no qualms for the Pokémon League being established here, he just didn’t want to be a part of the Elite Four.

“I didn’t know why some people were against a Pokémon League being here,” Grimsley said, sounding disappointed.

“Quite a few folks in Ula’ula Island held protests near where the construction site was,” Nanu said and shrugged. “I may not care for Kukui’s pet project, but I see no harm in him setting up one here.”

“Me neither.” Grimsley leaned back on the couch with his arm over his head. “Have any idea where on this island your Interpol friends are?”

“Most of Poni Island is barren land compared to other islands. We’ll start in this village first and then work from--”

“Kahuna Nanu, there you are!” Mina called out his name, interrupting him. He looked over his shoulder to see her grinning at him. “I found them!”

“Find who?” Nanu asked, furrowing his brow.

“Your friends that you told me about last night! The dark-haired dude with a long coat and the purple-haired lady in black, right?”

Nanu’s stomach jumped when he heard that. Guess he and Grimsley didn’t need to search for them. Grimsley tipped his head to the side.

“Yes, that’s them. Where did you find them?”

“I saw them inside the village’s restaurant while taking a morning walk. They’re outside where the benches are.”

“That easy, huh? Thanks for letting me know, kid.” Nanu gave Mina an appreciative smile, and he turned to Grimsley. “Let’s go.” They got up from the couch and left the Pokémon Center.

Outside, the sun grew brighter and a gentle breeze filled with ocean salt picked up. Nanu and Grimsley headed to where the benches were, and they stopped a short distance.

Anabel and Looker sat on the benches, their hands on their laps. They greeted Nanu with warm smiles.

“Good morning, Officer Nanu,” Anabel said. “Mr. Looker and I were surprised when Mina told us you’re here.”

“This was a last minute trip, to tell the truth. Grimsley and I came here to talk to you guys.” After Nanu said that, Grimsley nodded.

Both agents looked at Grimsley with lowered heads, and then Looker flashed him a grin. They got up and approached him.

“It’s been a while, huh Mr. Grimsley Thomas? If your memory is hazy, I’m Agent Looker.” He extended his hand to him, and they shook hands.

“I actually remember you. You were the agent that spoke with me and everyone else after Team Plasma’s takeover of the Pokémon League.”

“And I’m Agent Anabel, Looker’s superior,” Anabel said, also shaking hands with him.

“Grimsley wants to know more about your guys’ scientist and the Ultra Recon Squad,” Nanu said. He crossed his arms.

“You mean Dr. Colress Antimony?” Anabel asked.

“Yes, him,” Grimsley said. His eyes narrowed. “Is it true that he struck a deal with Interpol?”

Looker’s expression changed to a frown. “He did. He has done a variety of research with our organization already.”

An odd noise left Grimsley’s throat, and he grimaced. Staring at him, Nanu already expected him to not take that news well.

“When we visited Officer Nanu over a week ago, he told us that you knew him but you two had a fall out,” Anabel said to him. Next to her, Looker pulled out a small notebook and flipped through some pages.

“We knew each other, yes. Close, even. Long story short, we broke off contact when I found out he was in Team Plasma.”

With an understanding hum, Looker wrote down what Grimsley had said. “When did you find out about Colress’s connection to Team Plasma?”

“I would say over a year after Team Plasma took over the Pokémon League. I didn’t contact the authorities back then because I was too upset and wasn’t thinking straight.”

After Looker finished writing more of Grimsley’s words down, he gave him a sympathetic look.

“Is there anything else concerning Dr. Antimony you want to know or share with us?” Anabel asked.

“I was at the Lake of the Moone a few nights ago. Colress was with the Ultra Recon Squad and they summoned Lunala, one of Alola’s legendary Pokémon. He’s building a machine to subdue a Pokémon from the Ultra Recon Squad’s planet.”

Anabel and Looker gasped, and their mouths fell open. They turned to Nanu, who flicked his eyes at them.

“He told that story too when he came to my place. After the stuff I’ve been through in Interpol, I believe him.”

His colleagues regarded him for a moment, and they looked back at Grimsley

“We shall look into Dr. Antimony’s whereabouts further,” Looker said. “I believe that is all we need from you, Mr. Thomas.”

Grimsley grunted and lifted his chin. “There’s one more thing I want to ask. Have either of you seen Colress recently?”

“The last time we saw him was a while ago in Tapu Village at Ula’ula Island,” Anabel said.

A disappointed expression crossed Grimsley’s face. Nanu stared at him with slouched shoulders, believing this should be good enough for him.

“The three of us have other matters to discuss. You should probably go find Mina.”

Grimsley’s eyes fluttered, and he pressed his lips in a fine line. After some consideration, he bobbed his head.

“All right, I’ll leave you three alone then,” he said and did just that.

Nanu watched him walking away, his scarf fluttering against the breeze. He faced back to Anabel and Looker.

“Charlotte came to see me last week. She wanted me to find a connection between Team Skull and Aether.” When he said that, his friends jerked their heads back.

“Found anything noteworthy?” Looker asked.

“I did. Aether’s president has been in contact with Team Skull’s boss, Guzma. She’s offering him money for him to find a Pokémon.”

“She must want him to find Cosmog,” Anabel said. “Charlotte had told us how it was capable of creating wormholes. One of the president’s children ran away with it.”

“Yeah, that one. Team Skull got their hands on the girl and Cosmog and took them to Aether Paradise. Right now a bunch of kids went to save them.”

Anabel’s face fell. “Hold up, you’re telling me you just let some children go on a dangerous rescue mission?”

“I did initially stopped them, but they beat me in my Grand Trial fair and square. At least Charlotte is there in case anything goes wrong.”

Anabel gave him a suspicious glare. She sighed and shook her head.

“I still have my doubts, but you mentioning her puts my mind at ease somewhat.”

Looker chuckled and grinned. “I’ve recruited children to help out against shady organizations. It all worked out in the end!”

Nanu’s forehead and brow shot up. The corner of his lips twitched.

“Did you guys see Aether’s broadcast on the news last week?” he asked.

“We did,” Anabel said. “Headquarters ordered several agents including us to track down the Ultra Beasts more aggressively.”

Nanu’s stomach dropped. He turned to Looker, who had a deep frown on his face.

“That’s what I fear,” Nanu said as he sat down on the bench. He had his elbows on his lap and his hands on his face. “Found any leads while here?”

“The people here mention they noticed Pokémon feeling uneasy,” Looker said. “No Ultra Beast sightings, however.”

A short silence stretched between them. Anabel flinched when her bluetooth flashed.

“Oh, I’m getting a call right now.” Anabel pushed the button on her bluetooth and she spoke. “Agent Anabel speaking. Charlotte?” When Nanu heard her name, his heart raced. “Yes, we’re still in Poni Island. Yes, Nanu had mentioned that. Are the children safe at least? That’s good to hear. We can meet up at the Pokémon Center. All right, see you tomorrow.” She faced back at Nanu and Looker. “It’s Charlotte. She, Selene, and Lillie will be coming over to Poni Island tomorrow.”

“Did she mentioned anything what happened at Aether?” Nanu asked.

“She says she’ll explain everything once she gets here.”

Rubbing a brow, Nanu sighed and lowered his head. His gaze flicked over at Looker, a deep frown on his face. If Charlotte was coming over, then it couldn’t be good news. He considered if he should let Grimsley join them.

“Grimsley is half aware of the connection between Team Skull and Aether. Are you guys fine with him joining us tomorrow?”

His friends gave contemplative looks at one another. Anabel spoke first.

“Well he is an Elite Four member, and he did give us important information regarding Colress and the Ultra Recon Squad. I don’t see a problem with that.”

“Nor do I,” Looker said.

“Okay then, I’ll ask him if he would like to join us.”

xxx

Grimsley didn't have a hard time finding Poni Beach since it was near Seafolk Village. Some of the hot sand got inside his shoes, and his nose wrinkled at the scent of salt water. The beach was almost as barren as one next to the Aether House, saved for a few exceptions.

There was a stand for surfboards, and next to it was a wooden billboard with names and scores pinned on it. Several Mantine stayed by the shore, splashing and playing with each other. A few people were surfing on the waves, but on Mantine instead of the surfboards. The surfers on them pulled off crazy spins and high jumps.

Huh, so that's supposed to be Mantine Surfing, he mused. Perhaps he would try it out before leaving Alola.

While taking in the scenery, he spotted Mina doing a painting of one of the Mantine surfers. Both surfer and Mantine twirled in the air like a whirlpool. The different shades of blue and white used for the waves and sky were mixed well. It was almost like a perfect snapshot.

“That’s a lovely painting you have there,” Grimsley complimented. That caused Mina to stop and smile.

“Oh, thanks! Yeah, sometimes I draw the surfers and Pokémon here. I get so inspired by them, you know?” She then asked, “So how did your talk with Kahuna Nanu’s friends go?”

When Anabel and Looker confirmed that Colress was working with them, Grimsley’s stomach had churned. Mina was probably aware of them being Interpol agents, so she would understand that what they discussed was private.

“I talked to them over some personal matters and got most of my answers. That’s all I’m going to say.”

Mina hummed and bobbed her head. She seemed to follow, so that was good.

“Since you liked my painting, you wanna see more of my work?” she asked.

Grimsley responded that it was fine, and Mina handed him her sketchbook. There were drawings of landscapes, people, and Pokémon. One of the sketches was of Nanu with a bored expression, and another of a cheerful Acerola.

“I must say I’m impressed. These reminds me of an artist I knew back in Unova, Burgh Cortez.”

“Wait, did you say Burgh Cortez?” Mina grinned. “I love his stuff!”

Grimsley blinked at her. “You’re familiar with his work?”

“Ah huh! I visited his art exhibition in Castelia City and even talked with him! It’s cute how excited he gets over bug Pokémon.”

“That sounds like Burgh all right,” Grimsley said with a snort, and he handed Mina her sketchbook back. Burgh couldn’t stop talking about his Pokémon and that got repetitive after a while.

“Anyways!” Mina clapped her hands. “You’re here for some Z-Move training, right?”

“That’s what I was initially here for, yes.”

“Okay, okay. And it was the Ghost-type Z-Move you’re having trouble with?”

“Also correct.”

“Gotcha. Why don’t you bring out one of your Pokémon and try that Z-Move out?”

With a grunt, Grimsley pulled out his pokéball and released Raz. The feline stretched under the sun and dug her claws into the sand.

“Oh wow, a Liepard!” Mina said, sounding impressed. “We don’t have them here in Aola.”

Grimsley smiled a little at that compliment. He moved a few steps closer to Raz.

“We’re going to attempt the Z-Move Never Ending Nightmare again,” he said. Raz straightened herself and growled. He frowned. “I know, we weren’t successful the first few times. This young lady here is going to help us, though.”

Raz turned to Mina and regarded her for a moment. She let out a soft cry and bobbed her head.

“Good. All right, let’s get ready.”

He took several steps back while Raz turned away from him and waited. Grimsley held out his arms and did the pose for the Ghostinium-Z. A golden light surrounded them both, only for it to disappear several seconds later. Raz faced him, giving him a disappointed growl.

“Did Kahuna Nanu say anything as to why the Z-Move isn’t working for you?” Mina asked.

“He said that it’s perhaps my Pokémon aren’t strong enough for Z-Moves yet.” He kneeled down and scratched Raz’s chin, who rubbed into his palm in return. “Raz and I just need a little more of a push, I guess.”

“A little more of a push, huh?” Smiling, Mina folded her arms against her chest. “Maybe a Pokémon battle might help with that!”

An amused grin pulled on Grimsley’s lips. “Are you asking a battle against an Elite Four?”

“Sure, though not an intense one or anything like that. We’ll do a few turns each, and then both of us will try out our Z-Moves.”

“So, just enough to make Raz use Never Ending Nightmare.”

“Exactly.”

While considering Mina’s suggestion, Grimsley was reminded of the quick battle Professor Kukui and Acerola did to show him and the children Chavo’s Z-Move. A battle with Mina might be the push Raz needed.

“Then I, Grimsley of the Unova Elite Four, accept your challenge,” he said, smiling a little.

Mina did a small fist bump in the air. “Right on! Let me introduce you to Sally first.”

She grabbed a pokéball from her belt. A bright light formed, and a small bee-like creature appeared. They flapped their wings rapidly and the scarf around their neck fluttered with the breeze. Grimsley recognized that Pokémon.

“I’ve seen several of those back in Ula’ula Meadows, but don’t know what they’re called.”

“Sally’s a Ribombee,” Mina said as her Pokémon landed on her finger. She rubbed their chin. “She can sense the emotions of Pokémon and humans well.”

“How so?” Grimsley asked, genuinely interested.

“Why don’t I show you?” Mina gave a single nod to her Ribombee, and she flew off.

Raz cried in surprise when Sally landed on her head and screeched. She flapped her wings, and glitter scattered in the air. Grimsley gave a blank stare while Mina smiled.

“Sally says that your Liepard hopes she’ll pull off the Z-Move this time,” she said, and Sally flew back to her side.

Grimsley’s eyes grew wide, and he smiled. “I’m impressed you’re able to understand your Pokémon that way.”

“Sally and I have been together for a long time, so it’s easy for us to understand each other. Shall we get started, then?”

Grimsley grunted in agreement, and they and their Pokémon got into position. The two trainers gave their commands.

“Let’s start things off with Pollen Puff, Sally!”

“Counter with Shadow Ball!”

A purple ball of pollen formed in between Sally’s arms, and she threw it at Raz. Raz fired off a crimson orb from her mouth, and the two attacks collided in a small explosion. They exchanged Shadow Balls and Pollen Puffs at each other several more times until Grimsley and Mina gave out new commands.

“Go for Dazzling Gleam now!”

“Strike your opponent with your claws!”

Sally surrounded herself in a rainbow colored sphere and swooped down, the light getting brighter the more she descended. Dark vapors formed on Raz’s paw, and it was shaped into a large claw. They launched at each other, and another explosion occurred. After the smoke disappeared, they backed away and stared at each other.

“I think we’re all warmed up now,” Mina said. She raised her arm up, showing Grimsley her Z-Ring. “Time to get our Z on!”

With a sharp nod, Grimsley readied his pose for Never Ending Nightmare. He made his movements similar to a floating ghost, and ended it with his arms stretched out. He and Raz were covered in a golden aura, only this time Grimsley felt it growing stronger and stronger. A rush of cold air passed by.

He didn’t pay attention to Mina’s pose due to focusing on his own, but her Z-Ring glowed brighter than the sun.

Raz let out a large cry, purple flames bursting out from where she was. Black liquid oozed out into the sands, and several tendrils popped up.

Sally spat out a thread of silk, only for the tendrils to burn them. The tendrils then grabbed the Ribombee and she was engulfed in flames. Once the flames dispersed, Sally squeaked and dropped into Mina’s hands.

“Sally!” Mina called out her name in panic. When Sally made another squeak, she sighed in relief. “Great work out there,” she said and returned her to the pokéball.

Both Grimsley and Raz dragged out deep breaths. Already he was exhausted as much as when using Mega Evolution. His Pokémon collapsed on the ground and gazed up at him, as if asking, “Did I do it?” He chuckled and patted her head.

He and his Pokémon were finally able to do a Z-Move.

“You were marvelous,” he said in a soft voice. Raz lifted her head and licked his face.

“Congrats on doing that Z-Move,” Mina said as she approached them.

“I should thank you for helping us with that.” He helped Raz picked herself up, and then shook Mina’s hand. “That Z-Move Sally did earlier, what was it?”

“That’s Savage Spin-Out. Since you also have a Buginium-Z, it made sense for me to use that. Does any of your Pokémon know a Bug-type move?”

“My Bisharp. She knows X-Scissor.”

Mina hummed in acknowledgment. “If you like, I can teach you and your Bisharp that Z-Move.”

“That would be very much appreciated,” Grimsley said without thinking. He gazed down at Raz, who growled in agreement.

He knew how to use one Z-Move now. Another Z-Move wouldn’t hurt.

Author's Notes:

Here's the start of the Poni Island arc! The majority of the chapters in this arc will be a bit shorter for better pacing. While Grimsley will have some spotlight, Nanu will get the bulk of character development here.

I mentioned Seafolk Village's Pokemon Center being uphill instead of within the village itself. I'm going more with the anime's version of Poni Island from here out.

As always, thanks to bobandbill for betaing. I hope to have the next chapter ready either end of this month or in March. See you then!

I really like the opening scene here. You’ve been developing these two threads, one where Alola is essentially a fun stage show played out for Grimsley’s entertainment and one where it’s a real place where people live and work and try to hold out against dangerous forces, and finally they cross over, with Nanu making Grimsley question the concept of touristhood and what it means that Unovans go to Alola for their holidays to relax. It’s like that line in A Small Place that’s always stuck with me, about tourists being one of the ugliest things you can be, and how ordinary people turn into them when transplanted to (in that case) Antigua.

And like, that’s not just in the opening, is it? There’s also that part later on where it becomes clear that people in Alola have mixed feelings about Kukui’s project to found a league here. Nanu says he doesn’t see any harm in it – and Grimsley says he doesn’t either, as if the opinions of a wealthy Unovan tourist are at all relevant to this debate. Nanu doesn’t say anything that time, but I guess I wouldn’t necessarily expect him to, either. I bet he was thinking about Grimsley’s attitude to Alola for a long time before he said anything about it; he’s not really the kind of guy who wears his heart on his sleeve, or indeed says much when a few words will do.

Anyway, that aside, it’s … also just occurred to me, based on the description Nanu gives of Looker, that the guy hasn’t taken off his heavy trenchcoat even here in Alola. Like Looker, c’mon, you’re as bad as Cynthia and her fur coat, seriously. Relatedly, in that it’s a sort of amusing side thought, I really like how Nanu clearly loves Meowth, like enough to fill the entire police station with them, but also doesn’t actually ever want to spend time playing with them. Leave that to Acerola and all. I guess he just sort of enjoys having them around!

Actually, back on Looker for a moment, I love the line about having recruited children before and it having worked out fine. That’s … yeah, that’s not anything to be proud of, Looker. You did it like three or four times already. Stop it with the whole sending pre-teens up against criminal organisations thing! Which means – things are really picking up speed now, aren’t they? Selene and Lillie are en route to Poni, which means we’re entering the last act of USUM’s story, and the whole movement towards the other worlds is really gathering steam. I sense a team-up between Nanu and Grimsley in the offing.

Especially since Grimsley is now in control of Z-moves, at long last. Interesting choice of battle to teach him how to do it. Light and shadow, fairy and dark. A proper contrast, it seems. Maybe that’s exactly what was needed to push him and Raz over the line!

That’s all from me this time. As always, I’m looking forward to your next chapter! :>